I know that Luna and the Senshi are supposed to be under quite a bit of stress (though it would really help if you showed that in the story) but they still seem as if they're being forced into the stupid badguy role in the way that they're being written here. They are so far closer to being mocking parodies then anything similar to their canon counterparts in this so far.
You basically seem to want to get to the TSAB vs Senshi NOW, instead of building things up and it really screws up the characters to me on both sides.
...No offense meant by the criticism just that you seem to really be rushing things forward and that seems to be turning the story into another fanon!Senshi bash fic. Which is a shame given given that your other SM crossover was quite decent.
You basically seem to want to get to the TSAB vs Senshi NOW, instead of building things up and it really screws up the characters to me on both sides.
...No offense meant by the criticism just that you seem to really be rushing things forward and that seems to be turning the story into another fanon!Senshi bash fic. Which is a shame given given that your other SM crossover was quite decent.