The White Devil of the Moon Chapter 8

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#26
zeebee1 said:
Saturn's ultimate technique is useless if she doesn't want to use it. Planetary devastation spells aren't that effective if you only want to stop one person.
She has other techniques then dropping the glaive. Death Reborn Revolution and Silence Glaive Surprise and her super canon attack with Pluto are not anything to laugh about either.

As I also mentioned one consistent thing senshi have is both universes is the ability to adjust their ranges for their attacks.
 

ragnarok1337

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#27
We still have one little problem everyone's STILL failing to address. By the time they meet Nanoha will probably have learned some, if not all of SM's powers. She's a freaking MACHINE. Granted, the machine suffers catastrophic failure once, but once she recovers she could still learn SM's techniques in no time flat. And improve upon them.

Besides, it looks like this story is going the route of the anime (powerlevels), not the manga.

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"Die, Sailor Moon!" *destroys the earth*

"Nooo! My planet! Live!" *restores earth*

"You can't defeat me that easily!" *destroys earth again*

"You won't harm my friends!" *restores earth again*

"Die!"

"Live!"

"Die"

"Live"




--Repeat ad infinitum.
 

BloodRevan

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#28
ragnarok1337 said:
"Die, Sailor Moon!" *destroys the earth*

"Nooo! My planet! Live!" *restores earth*

"You can't defeat me that easily!" *destroys earth again*

"You won't harm my friends!" *restores earth again*

"Die!"

"Live!"

"Die"

"Live"




--Repeat ad infinitum.
I could see anime Usagi doing that... maybe, but Nanoha and manga Usagi would wtfpwn them THEN raise dead.
 

zeebee1

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#29
Well, the story is basically over once they find out where the enemy lives. Nanoha has the backing of an intergalactic military. If the only people in the enemies base are enemies then the options are much simpler.
 

BF110C4

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#30
zeebee1 said:
Well, the story is basically over once they find out where the enemy lives. Nanoha has the backing of an intergalactic military. If the only people in the enemies base are enemies then the options are much simpler.
That is only if they have time to bring the full might of their military assets to bear. If the good guys believe there is an inminent danger of Beryl summoning Metalia, or iniciating a escape plan they will need to rush it without proper preparations. Plus there is the problem with using an orbital strike where an unknown but powerful weapon of mass destruction is located might not be a good idea, in case it detonates, or wakes up, or just irradiates the planet.
 
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#31
Being anywhere near Metallia is a bad end. She absorbs any attack her way and drives everyone near her into a murder-suicide mode by existing if she's fully awake. Metallia's weakness is also practically suicide to find. Her gem was practically invisible until she became frighteningly huge and basically unbeatable.

She's supposed to be just the same in the anime. She nearly blotted out the sun in the anime the moment she got even a little bit stronger and there was dark energy spreading everywhere in the planet. She was just stuck using a the power and body of a dying!Beryl to break free at the last moment when she confronted Usagi in the anime.

You Do Not Fuck around with Metallia.
 

ragnarok1337

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#32
SeiyaxUsagi said:
Being anywhere near Metallia is a bad end. She absorbs any attack her way and drives everyone near her into a murder-suicide mode by existing if she's fully awake. Metallia's weakness is also practically suicide to find. Her gem was practically invisible until she became frighteningly huge and basically unbeatable.

She's supposed to be just the same in the anime. She nearly blotted out the sun in the anime the moment she got even a little bit stronger and there was dark energy spreading everywhere in the planet. She was just stuck using a the power and body of a dying!Beryl to break free at the last moment when she confronted Usagi in the anime.

You Do Not Fuck around with Metallia.
Spirit Bomb! Oh wait, that's her Starlight Breaker on a larger scale. NVM.
 

BloodRevan

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#33
My predictions for the future of this fic. (or at least the next chapter)

Luna puts her newest bright idea into action, locating the Moon Palace ruins and convincing Nanoha to go along on the expedition, I actually approve of this idea. But like every other plot she's had in this fic, nothing goes as she expects. Silly Luna, Lelouch you are not.

Sure, Nanoha awakens to Serenity's memories, and as a nice little sidebonus, this little adventure results in Nanoha's complete recovery and the magical girl upgrade no sane villain wanted her to have! Only way this could get any worse for the Dark Kingdom is if she follows up by going out and conquering herself a Netherworld! Now, unfortunately for Luna's day job, while Nanoha is not opposed to restoring the Moon Kingdom as soon as the crisis is over, she enjoys her job, has a good life, and doesn't have the time or inclination to rule over a people who've been dead since before Pangaea split. So just as Luna feared, once the people are restored, they shall have to adapt to becoming Administered World #whatthefuckever! I sorta like this idea, I've yet to see a fic where Usagi/Serenity choses to resurrect the Moon Kingdom.

And now for the other side. Zoicite, as you may recall, had been ordered by Her Highness, the multiverse's greatest sore loser, to hunt down Precia and return with the Jewel Seeds... So she can use them to awaken Metallia and kill everyone... again! Seriously woman, if you're that hard up for a date, check the internet. Dating sites are full of people like you. Crazy people that can't get any otherwise.

Anyway, he's wandering around looking under every trashcan, when who does he spot but a little blonde loli who's so cute she had to be cloned. She's walking home in the company of her new best friend, a dark haired cyber-loli better known on this forum as the Death Star in a Miniskirt. They're on their way to Alicia's house for another short tutoring session in math, magic, the Japanese alphabets, and who knows, maybe a little biology... I can dream, can't I?

It takes him a moment to identify her as Precia's Loli in a Jar, but he does, then he follows them home... Yeah, I don't see him making it out of this clusterfuck alive, either...

Hmm, girly looking dude in gay uniform stalking two little girls, and not even trying to be subtle about it? Even in Japan, someone's calling the cops.

After following them to their place, Zoicite scopes it out a few minutes, then kicks in the front door. Depending on circumstances, Precia is able to force him to retreat, or she hold's him off until the stress and fear from the situation induce a transformation in the sleeping Soldier of Ruin. Another possibility is that otherwise the shock of seeing her best friend's kind, dotting mother getting attacked and injuried, and the rage that accompanes this, induces the transformation. Either way, this gets the attention of every mage in the solar system.

If Zoicite's luck is A or S, he's dead before the Bureau get there. If it's B or less, he manages to avoid getting cut into tiny pieces long enough for Fate and a newly cleared for duty Nanoha, among others, to arrive. I told you I couldn't see him getting away alive. Well, ok, I can see one way, limbless and in full body cast.

Following this period of justifiable, and completely understandable in my mind, excessive force, Alicia gets to met the, technically, younger sister she always wanted. Lesbian-loli incesturbation commences... or would that be Lesbian-toddler incesturbation? Since Alicia was five when she died?
 

bissek

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#34
Most of your guesses aren't going to come true. For example, Alicia and Hotaru having 'biology' lessons is rather unlikely. Even ignoring the obscene squick factor of a maybe 12 year old girl sleeping with a six year old girl, Hotaru is rather body-conscious about the fact that a sizable portion of her anatomy is artificial.

Zoicite tracking down Precia through Alicia is viable, however.
 
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#35
Hotaru is rather body-conscious about the fact that a sizable portion of her anatomy is artificial.
Why? Is this mangaverse. She is only a cyborg in the manga.
 

bissek

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#36
Her artificial parts have been mentioned in this story already.
 

BloodRevan

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#37
bissek said:
Most of your guesses aren't going to come true. For example, Alicia and Hotaru having 'biology' lessons is rather unlikely. Even ignoring the obscene squick factor of a maybe 12 year old girl sleeping with a six year old girl, Hotaru is rather body-conscious about the fact that a sizable portion of her anatomy is artificial.

Zoicite tracking down Precia through Alicia is viable, however.
What about the restoration of the Moon Kingdom? As I said, I've never seen a fic that does it.

The perv in me couldn't help but notice that unlike the Biology lessons, there was no suspiciously specific denial of my purposed Fate/Alicia incesturbation... I'll make of that what I will. Give Ali ten years (or an Adult Form) and it'd be super hot. <a href='http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/550384/2girls-alicia_testarossa-blonde_hair-fate_testaros' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>Seriously.</a>

I do have a request though, if possible, I'd like Zoicite to lose at least two limbs before he dies... One to the Glaive, and one to Bardiche.

SeiyaxUsagi said:
Why? Is this mangaverse. She is only a cyborg in the manga.
Story said:
Ever since the lab accident that killed her mother, a sizable portion of her body had been replaced with cybernetic parts that sustained her after the grievous injuries she had suffered in the same accident. She had to wear long skirts, high-collared long-sleeved shirts and gloves to keep people from noticing that she was almost as much machine as she was human.
Never read a chapter just once, I always say, but rarely type. You miss things.

You also seem to be under the continued impression that it is required that the story use only Manga-canon or Anime-canon, as if one is the only choice. They're not, he's using both to write this. Never let canon get in the way of a good story, it limits you.

Also, in Chapter 6 when you replied to my post you mentioned that in canon, the Earth and Moon were the only two bodies in the Solar System capable of supporting life. I was unaware of this, and thank you for telling me.

However, according to Yuuno's dialog in Chapter 6:

Yuuno said:
The absolute last record reports finding every single planet, station, moon and asteroid in the Moon Kingdom being completely depopulated, with the population Unadministered Planet #97 having been blasted back to barbarism.
In this story the Empire/Alliance/Queendom/whatever spanned the entire Solar System. Space stations, the other planets, the moons of those planets, all had life. Since I know Metallia can only be held accountable for the Earth and Moon, I expected and suggested that Saturn was the reason the rest of the ENTIRE solar system was lifeless. I never really got an answer from bissek. Though I do admit that I had assumed she was responsible for such in canon, because I was, as I said, unware that the Earth and Moon were the only bodies capable of supporting life in canon.

Hmm, the wording in this post might be a little more hostile than I'm usually comfortable with when posting, and for that I apologize.
 
#38
you are correct bloodrevan and so is bissik in a way.
the assault was on the moon and decimated the place then serenity retaliated finishing the job.
In cannon

Then the outer senshi got together at the ruins of the capital to figure out what happens next. Their talismans you know space sword,mirror etc resonated awaking ru-chan who without further orders to the contrary from the royal house initiated a doomsday scenario cleansed the solar system of all forces.

Sorta like the ultimate fku to anyone who conquers my kingdom won't have it long which is why i think the Pluto then setsuna was very new to her post then.should have known better than to appear in person with the garnet orb. which led to ru-chan awaking. Silver Millennium Saturn is one scary Woman
 

MWkillkenny84

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#39
Umh, just a question: in my head it has appeared an image of Hotaru in a Numbers-like bodysuit. Yes, I've see Number!Hotaru in my unstable mind...
Will we ever see Hotaru and Alicia inside the Numbers' ranks, in this new continuity?
 

bissek

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#40
The story is going to end before it reaches the StrikerS time period, so no.
 

Tsukino_kage

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#41
bissek said:
The story is going to end before it reaches the StrikerS time period, so no.
:headbanger: :blue:

We don't even see how Jail and the Brains will react to this?
 

staplesdex2

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#42
Somehow I predict that by the end of this story Nanoha would wish on the Silver Crystal so that she would change reality to not make her be the Princess and instead somehow, but I don't know how, restore things to cannon making Usagi the Moon Princess again.
 

bissek

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#43
staplesdex2 said:
Somehow I predict that by the end of this story Nanoha would wish on the Silver Crystal so that she would change reality to not make her be the Princess and instead somehow, but I don't know how, restore things to cannon making Usagi the Moon Princess again.
No, but that is a nice idea for an omake for the final chapter.

We don't even see how Jail and the Brains will react to this?
The events of the story are not intended to span three years. Maybe if I can think up of enough events to make a sequel worth writing, but don't hold your breath on that.
 
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