The White Devil of the Moon Chapter 9
- Thread starter bissek
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Not awakening her full powers yet? Her power not intended to heal that kind of sickness? Precia's evilness infecting her (however she treats Alicia, she crossed that line LONG ago)?
Take your pick. By the way, bissek? If you're reading this, then I REALLY want Precia to get what's coming to her. She had no justification for what she did to Fate. Freudian Excuse doesn't even BEGIN to cover it.
You know what the best karmic justice would be, bissek? Have Alicia, after she finds out what her mother did, be disgusted with her mother and abandon her.
Take your pick. By the way, bissek? If you're reading this, then I REALLY want Precia to get what's coming to her. She had no justification for what she did to Fate. Freudian Excuse doesn't even BEGIN to cover it.
You know what the best karmic justice would be, bissek? Have Alicia, after she finds out what her mother did, be disgusted with her mother and abandon her.
Training Training And More Training. So she can handle that power on that level And Studying Cellular Biology to the level necessary would take years to do.
The TSAB would love to have a mage of her power lvl in their ranks and as one of her dreams for the future is to be a nurse easily shifted to doctor she would welcome training from them if available.
The TSAB would love to have a mage of her power lvl in their ranks and as one of her dreams for the future is to be a nurse easily shifted to doctor she would welcome training from them if available.
Dark Knight Gafgar said:
nick012000 said:
You know, thinking about this chapter has made me wonder how this Nanoha would react to Ero-Sennin's Usagi.á 
I doubt Nanoha would respond terribly positively to Naru or Usagi's advances, though, if she interprets them as being the same sort of responsability-abandonment her past life committed.
Although we are all deriding Luna for treating Nanoha as the princess and refusing to believe otherwise, we are forgetting about Mamoru Chiba, AKA Tuxedo Kamen.
He has the same issues that Luna does about Nanoha and her former life. Perhaps even worse from a certain point of view. In fact, he keeps referring to her as "Serenity." Even though Luna calls her "Princess," she at least acknowledges that while Nanoha should take back the Moon Kingdom (in her eyes), the current incarnation is a whole different person. Mamoru on the other hand keeps referring to Nanoha as Serenity, seeing her as the same person as he knew in his former life. Even though, with this date as an example, he has just been shown that Nanoha is TOTALLY different than Serenity.
I'm actually kind of hard-pressed to see who, between Luna and Mamoru, is worse in their beliefs about Nanoha.
He has the same issues that Luna does about Nanoha and her former life. Perhaps even worse from a certain point of view. In fact, he keeps referring to her as "Serenity." Even though Luna calls her "Princess," she at least acknowledges that while Nanoha should take back the Moon Kingdom (in her eyes), the current incarnation is a whole different person. Mamoru on the other hand keeps referring to Nanoha as Serenity, seeing her as the same person as he knew in his former life. Even though, with this date as an example, he has just been shown that Nanoha is TOTALLY different than Serenity.
I'm actually kind of hard-pressed to see who, between Luna and Mamoru, is worse in their beliefs about Nanoha.
Rose Man at least strikes me as vaguely desperate - Luna wants to revive a long-dead kingdom likely out of an equal mix of loyalty to Queen Serenity and a desire to regain her former prestige and status. Mamoru, on the other hand, has suddenly just found that the literal girl of his dreams - not to mention his former beloved fiancee - is nothing like he remembers, they no longer connect on any meaningful level, and she doesn't really give a damn about whatever relationship they might have had in their past lives. Sucks to be him right now.
Of course, if he doesn't either find a way to re-connect or learn to let go of the past he might wind up going a little crazy, though hopefully that's not what the author is planning because "estranged lover gets violent FUR DIE DRAMAS" has been done to death in fanfic.
Of course, if he doesn't either find a way to re-connect or learn to let go of the past he might wind up going a little crazy, though hopefully that's not what the author is planning because "estranged lover gets violent FUR DIE DRAMAS" has been done to death in fanfic.
Bissek, listen to me. Listen to me good. You ready? *takes deep breath*
*Drops on knees* Please. PLEASE don't go the angst route. Like DKG said, the whole "estranged lover gets violent FUR DIE DRAMAS" been done to death. Maybe have a bit of drama while Tux-Boy realizes that Nanoha doesn't particularly care for him, but have him get over it.
I would have to stop reading the fic if he pulls a Beryl. And that would be a shame, because this is a great story.
*Drops on knees* Please. PLEASE don't go the angst route. Like DKG said, the whole "estranged lover gets violent FUR DIE DRAMAS" been done to death. Maybe have a bit of drama while Tux-Boy realizes that Nanoha doesn't particularly care for him, but have him get over it.
I would have to stop reading the fic if he pulls a Beryl. And that would be a shame, because this is a great story.