Wandering Airhead said:
This sounds, to be insufficient. You are picturing them to see us as we see ourselves, in other words you are applying our thinking to them. The problem is, I just don't see them looking about it that way.
They live in a culture focused on secrecy, they literally live, breath and dream secrecy. From their perspective the knowledge about magecraft is unknown in the real world. Or at least so rare as to not be there at all. And suddenly they discover a breach, and not just a little thing, like some guy claiming to have seen this or that, but a large-scale spectacle that uses the exact setting of a grail War. A red alert burst inside my mind if I try to picture how an average enforcer seeing this. An average enforcer that is used to dealing with small scale outbreaks, sometimes as big as a small city. But half the world? That's the whole new level of challenge.
So lets imagine the thought process continue. The guy calms down from the first moment of shock. Rationalizing kicks in. Grail war is an old tradition, and small parts of it leaked out over time, and maybe someone did discover an old text about the subject (side note - check the literary registers for missing items). Ok, it's just an entertinement [I doubt the guy would be able to rationalize like that, he would most likely not understand the outside world stance about entertainment], no-one's gonna believe that. Great. It's not such a big deal. We could maybe just ignore it? Right? Nothing bad is going to come out of it, surely? Of course it won't. Then he goes to sleep, with modicum of internal balance, but with cold sweat on his forehead. And the next day he goes abuout and try to look into that Kayaba Akihito guy. Surely nothing will come out of it. Just a freak accident, yeah? But just for the peace of mind, lets do this thing.
And when some time later he finds the very same name as a registered magus. I imagine all sort of different alarm bells will go on ringing in his head. Ones he can't rationalize and ignore. This didn't sound like a particularly paranoid enforcer. I could certainly imagine a more paranoid one.
They live in a culture focused on secrecy, they literally live, breath and dream secrecy. From their perspective the knowledge about magecraft is unknown in the real world. Or at least so rare as to not be there at all. And suddenly they discover a breach, and not just a little thing, like some guy claiming to have seen this or that, but a large-scale spectacle that uses the exact setting of a grail War. A red alert burst inside my mind if I try to picture how an average enforcer seeing this. An average enforcer that is used to dealing with small scale outbreaks, sometimes as big as a small city. But half the world? That's the whole new level of challenge.
So lets imagine the thought process continue. The guy calms down from the first moment of shock. Rationalizing kicks in. Grail war is an old tradition, and small parts of it leaked out over time, and maybe someone did discover an old text about the subject (side note - check the literary registers for missing items). Ok, it's just an entertinement [I doubt the guy would be able to rationalize like that, he would most likely not understand the outside world stance about entertainment], no-one's gonna believe that. Great. It's not such a big deal. We could maybe just ignore it? Right? Nothing bad is going to come out of it, surely? Of course it won't. Then he goes to sleep, with modicum of internal balance, but with cold sweat on his forehead. And the next day he goes abuout and try to look into that Kayaba Akihito guy. Surely nothing will come out of it. Just a freak accident, yeah? But just for the peace of mind, lets do this thing.
And when some time later he finds the very same name as a registered magus. I imagine all sort of different alarm bells will go on ringing in his head. Ones he can't rationalize and ignore. This didn't sound like a particularly paranoid enforcer. I could certainly imagine a more paranoid one.
I like the snippet. It's nice to real, although you might want to work on that first part. Till the very end I was sure the first scene was Kirito's narrative. And I had a hard time determining who said what. The rest was alright though.
This does indeed pose a way to go about it. With this setting, I can see it going that way, true. But still there is a missing piece to it all. There is no actual explanation on how. I guess it didn't really fit the snippet, for the characters didn't quite know what was going on as well. But when the fic is going the people will want to know.
Just exactly how is it that the bodies grow along with the in-game characters. How the unanimous belief in their in-game capabilities can affect their real-world bodies. So I wonder how the actual mechanism works for that to happen.
And while I can sorta, kinda see the connotation for the athletic capabilities, I would expect magic to be much more diminished, if nor outright impossible. For most of the believers will not believe the freed players to be able to replicate the feats outside of the game. It doesn't make the obvious kind of sense, and thus an explanation should be there.
This does indeed pose a way to go about it. With this setting, I can see it going that way, true. But still there is a missing piece to it all. There is no actual explanation on how. I guess it didn't really fit the snippet, for the characters didn't quite know what was going on as well. But when the fic is going the people will want to know.
Just exactly how is it that the bodies grow along with the in-game characters. How the unanimous belief in their in-game capabilities can affect their real-world bodies. So I wonder how the actual mechanism works for that to happen.
And while I can sorta, kinda see the connotation for the athletic capabilities, I would expect magic to be much more diminished, if nor outright impossible. For most of the believers will not believe the freed players to be able to replicate the feats outside of the game. It doesn't make the obvious kind of sense, and thus an explanation should be there.
Type Moon Wiki said:
Leysritt is skilled in combat, particularly with halberds, and she is able to sacrifice her life to manifest the Dress of Heaven. Her physical strength is able to match that of a Servant; she is notably on par with Rider, the strongest female Servant in terms of physical strength.
Leysritt's primary weapon is a large halberd made of Rhenium, far rarer and more valuable than the tungsten steel used in the armor plating of tanks. Its density is about three times that of iron, making it too heavy to be swung around in melee combat by humans. For anyone other than Leysritt, an Einzbern homunculus that doesn't suffer from fatigue and has muscle power on the level of Servants, ranked at B- at the same level as Rider using Monstrous Strength, it would be better to fight with bare hands instead of using it. It was forged as an "attacking defensive" item with an emphasis on toughness instead of sharpness that allows for it to sustain heavy damage in order to defeat the opponent. It seems like it was designed after the antiques that decorate castles, but it makes use of the latest Einzbern technology and various thaumaturgical characteristics.
Leysritt's primary weapon is a large halberd made of Rhenium, far rarer and more valuable than the tungsten steel used in the armor plating of tanks. Its density is about three times that of iron, making it too heavy to be swung around in melee combat by humans. For anyone other than Leysritt, an Einzbern homunculus that doesn't suffer from fatigue and has muscle power on the level of Servants, ranked at B- at the same level as Rider using Monstrous Strength, it would be better to fight with bare hands instead of using it. It was forged as an "attacking defensive" item with an emphasis on toughness instead of sharpness that allows for it to sustain heavy damage in order to defeat the opponent. It seems like it was designed after the antiques that decorate castles, but it makes use of the latest Einzbern technology and various thaumaturgical characteristics.
So he take ~12K kids, whose body isn't completely developed and still maleable, store their souls into a virtual environment, apply body modifications to those kids, and 'put back' a soul that matches those capabilities inside... (Of course this is an oversimplification)