Untitled Projekt 55

#1
Name and full timeline, plus more information, to come at a later date.

Timeline
2026 - World War Three begins as dwindling resources cause major powers to begin invading smaller states and each other.
2035 - Armored Cores are fielded for the first time as WWIII enters it's ninth year.
2045 - WWIII ends and becomes known as the National Dismantlement War as multiple megacorporations seize control of the globe, dissolving all remaining national governments and submitting the entirety of the earth's population (reduced by more than three quarters) to their rule. Armored Core NEXTs are fielded for the first time, quickly rendering older ACs ('Normals') largely obsolete. The new order is dubbed the Pax Economica, or 'Corporate Peace'.
2050 - The Pax Economica breaks down as it's members begin battling one another over resources. The resulting conflict becomes known as the Lynx War, as NEXTs prove to be the deciding factor in the conflict. Large-scale use of experimental Kojima weaponry during the conflict devastates the Earth's surface and kills over half of the world's remaining population. The surviving corporations reorganize themselves into the League of Ruling Companies and begin moving parts of the surviving population into flying cities known as Cradles.
2050-2055 - The Corporate Wars as the League corporations wage continuous conflicts with one another, typically through the assignment of Lynx NEXT pilots.
2055 - The ORCA Uprising as a group of rogue Lynx break away from Collared and wage open war against the League. Ideologically opposed to the Cradle system and having correctly deduced that the Cradles will soon fall victim to the world's rising levels of Kojima radiation, ORCA intends to destroy the Arteria energy transfer facilities keeping the Cradles aloft and used the freed up energy and resources to fuel space colonization efforts. The League-ORCA conflict is suddenly halted only a week later when two rogue ORCA pilots, Old King and Strayed, attack and destroy one of the Cradles, killing one hundred million people. An initial attempt to neutralize Old King and Strayed fails and results in the death of ORCA's leadership. Information gathered by ORCA on the rising levels of Kojima radiation and the Cradles' vulnerability is automatically released to the public as a result, resulting in widespread dissent against the League. A second attack against a Cradle by Old King and Strayed results in a further forty million deaths before the pair are driven off by Collared NEXTs operating independently.
2056 - A force of Lynx operating independently from Collared ambush Old King and Strayed as they attempt to attack a third Cradle. Old King is killed in the ensuing skirmish, though Strayed escapes. Strayed launches a solo fourth attack some months later, completely destroying a fourth Cradle and causing another one hundred million deaths. The Cradles' vulnerability to both the rising levels of Kojima radiation and attacks by lone NEXTs leads to the flying cities being grounded. An attempt by Strayed to attack one of the grounded Cradles is driven off by three NEXTs piloted by Lilium Wolcott, May Greenfield, and the Raven of Anatolia. In the resulting battle, the Raven of Anatolia is killed and Strayed is revealed to be not a human, but a self-aware AI. Now calling itself Nineball, the NEXT escapes, though with heavy damage. Lilium Wolcott and May Greenfield, the two survivors of the battle, are hailed as heroes, and Lilium's subsequent rise as president of the Bernard-Felix Foundation, a League corporation, gives her considerable leverage and power over the League of Ruling Companies. The world's remaining human population, now numbering only three hundred million, is largely moved to underground facilities such as Arteria Cranium, which had been hardened against Kojima radiation.
2057 - Nineball reappears, having repaired and upgraded it's NEXT through unknown means. Waging surprise attacks on Lynx across the globe, it succeeds in killing the vast majority of remaining NEXT pilots. Collared, as a result, crumbles, and the few remaining Lynx are absorbed into the League. BFF and Global Armaments, two of the largest remaining League corporations and patrons of Lilium Wolcott and May Greenfield respectively, draft a new plan, Babel, to replace the flawed Cradle system with a series of towers that will double as space elevators. Though an opposing plan to construct an elaborate underground facility is forwarded by other League corporations, Lilium Wolcott's personal approval of Babel and it's higher economic feasibility leads to the tower plan moving forward. Those League companies which opposed the plan are quietly dissolved, with rebelling assets abandoned to Nineball's global rampage.
2058 - Construction is begun on the first tower, Ar Tonelico.
 

Shaderic

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#2
... :huh:
You've earned it.

Congratulations on plotting out a very long multi-fusion, by the way.

Unfortunately, it's confusing as hell. You're gonna need to explain something a lot better.

Of course, from the way it looks like things are set up, it's more like a massive epic. Anyone of those bullets could be an epic tale in their own right. We're looking at 32 years worth of tales right here.

I'd recommend establishing characters to start following the story through. They don't even have to be main players, but someone has to explain these changes. Not to mention, establish what the 'norm' is. As times pass and things change, almost nothing stays the same.

Oh, and let's take another look...
Kojima (Hideo?)
Armored Core
Ar Tonelico
And I'm betting there's at least two more series in this mess that I can't identify.
Be careful. Too many ingredients can spoil the soup as easily as too many chefs.
 
#3
I think you're a bit confused: the timeline is mentioning things that happened in the distant past, rather than a list of stuff that happens throughout the fic. To summarize the actual plot:

Tenba accidentally Nineball (for those unfamiliar, a highly advanced mecha piloted by a genocidal AI). Hilarity ensues.

The data on the history from WWIII onwards is a quick timeline of the events of Armored Core 4 and Armored Core for Answer, and how I'm unashamedly mashing them into the Ar Tonelico timeline (which has stuff entirely different happening in around that period). I'll be condensing AT's three thousand year history into the 2058-3770 period, pruning stuff that doesn't fit like the whole two moons thing and explaining away the Sea of Death as "Kojima radiation EVERYWHERE". The fic itself takes place in 3770 AD, during the events of canon Ar Tonelico (more specifically, everything begins during the game's third act).
 

Shaderic

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#4
HOLY HELL!
THAT'S A FUCKING LOT OF HISTORY IN THAT LINK!!!

... Err...

Moving on... What is the actual premise of your story, seeing as I have no clue what 'Nineball' or who Tenma... Wait... No, that's TenBA... Still lost.

Anyway, I still haven't finished Ar Tonelico (owing mainly to lack of a personal telivision and motivation, rather than any real road blocks.). And, for those of us who haven't played Armored Core, or who are lazy asses, can you give a slightly more... tied to the main story explanation of your plot?

Because, as cool and interesting as it is to know what happened some thousand years before the story happens... what does it have to with the story?
 
#5
/sigh

Ok, short version.

After a series of massive world wars, a genocidal AI takes over a giant robot and wipes out most of the Earth's remaining population. It's eventually stopped before it can finish the job, but the planet is so devastated and irradiated by the previous conflicts that it's becoming completely inhospitable to human life - especially thanks to dangerous Kojima (no relation to Hideo) radiation, which lasts thousands of years and is slowly spreading across the globe. The surviving global government - a cabal of megacorps now largely under the control of a young woman who helped take down Skynet Gundam earlier - decides to build a series of giant towers that stretch all the way into orbit to safeguard the Earth's few million survivors and act as a link between the irradiated surface and orbit. Three such towers are built - becoming the three towers of Ar Ciel - and within each is sealed a third of Nineball's programming (Because simply deleting it would make too much sense and kinda ruin the whole point of the fic. Divine Author Plot Powers. Do not question them.), with the remains of it's mecha body put on display inside the first tower, which happens to be Ar Tonelico.

Nearly two thousand years pass, shit happens, song magic is discovered, Reyvateils are created, mankind raises landmasses from the irradiated surface and cleans them up enough to build stuff on, two disasters in a row cause most of these flying continents to fall back to the surface, Mir goes nuts, Shurelia seals her away, and then finally we get to the events of Melody of Elemia. At the end of the second act, Shurelia hits the power button for Ar Tonelico and shuts everything down to stop Mir from destroying the world... inadvertently setting free part of Nineball's programming, which also wants to destroy the world. After bodysnatching it's way through some of the deactivated tower guardians it finally manages to infect a Tenba computer and leapfrog through their systems back to their headquarters at Firefly Alley, where it finds that Tenba has managed to find it's old NEXT and repair it to some basic functionality. Nineball promptly jumps back in, thanks Tenba by blowing up Firefly Alley, then flies off to the surface to finish repairing itself and plan to destroy humanity.

Leaving Lyner and crew to not only deal with the still-hostile Mir, but a self-aware one of these.
 
#6
Still procrastinating on the writing, but I thought everyone might find <a href='http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xSZZXV_vlFY' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>this video I found</a> somewhat relevant.

Enjoy your five-way NEXT clusterfuck, set to the tune of EXEC_over.METHOD_SUBLIMATION/.omness chs ciel sos infel.
 

Shaderic

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#7
... What did I just watch?

I literally couldn't tell what was going on. It was that fast.

... I think I saw an Armored Core game at the local Game Stop. I'm not sure if I want to go get it now, or just ignore this, since there's no plot coming yet, other than background I don't get.
 
#8
Like almost all of my ideas this one will probably never move past the conceptual stage, so don't let this fic change your mind about whether or not to try out Armored Core. It's an excellent series, especially the two most recent games (4 and 4A), which simplified things dramatically as compared to older titles (like, for example, Last Raven, where having powerful thrusters but a cheap radiator could cause your AC to take heat damage whenever you started boosting around).
 

GenocideHeart

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#9
Not enough Otsdarva in that backstory. 0/10 crap.

/troll

Seriously, though, nice one. Although AT might lend itself better to an Evangelion xover, come to think of it...

... I think I saw an Armored Core game at the local Game Stop. I'm not sure if I want to go get it now, or just ignore this, since there's no plot coming yet, other than background I don't get.
If that game is For Answer, get it - if nothing else because you can be a complete genocidal bastard and kill 100 million people for the hell of it.

That thing with Old King that gafgar mentioned? You can enact it yourself in 4A. And if you do, you eventually get singled out as the biggest threat to humanity since forever and ambushed by up to five ace pilots in overpowered mecha - they deem you THAT dangerous.

Needless to say, if you win that stage (Occupation of Arteria Carpalis) you can congratulate yourself on your gaming skills, because it's pure hell. Get ganged up on and you WILL be scrapped in seconds, you can't just rush in guns ablaze.
 
#10
Isn't Otsdarva one of the Lynx that jumps you in Occupation of Arteria Carpals? Along with your Mission Control chick if you're playing on Hard, to boot?

And yes, I'm playing this off the Old King path. Given that you can unlock Nineball's parts and emblem from S-ranking Occupation of Arteria Carpals I also decided to shoehorn in the Strayed=Hustler One thing.

Oh, and then Nineball goes active just as Lyner and co. are waking up Shurelia. So Mir hasn't gotten her Befriending yet.
 

SotF

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#11
I kind of like the slower engines of destruction type of AC from 1-3, 4 seems to have taken a far more Gundam approach to things. It's still fun, but the disconnect in the series bugs me.

However, in 4 and 4A you can dodge bullets and missiles with relative ease.
 
#12
SotF said:
I kind of like the slower engines of destruction type of AC from 1-3, 4 seems to have taken a far more Gundam approach to things.
Most Mobile Suits are nowhere near as agile as NEXTs.
 

GenocideHeart

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#13
Dark Knight Gafgar said:
Isn't Otsdarva one of the Lynx that jumps you in Occupation of Arteria Carpals? Along with your Mission Control chick if you're playing on Hard, to boot?
Otsdarva is Maximillian Thermidor, in case you haven't realized yet. :snigger:
 
#14
GenocideHeart said:
Dark Knight Gafgar said:
Isn't Otsdarva one of the Lynx that jumps you in Occupation of Arteria Carpals? Along with your Mission Control chick if you're playing on Hard, to boot?
Otsdarva is Maximillian Thermidor, in case you haven't realized yet. :snigger:
I'm aware of this. I just can't remember who all jumps you in OoAC. I think Otsdarva/Maximilian and Wynne D were two of them, plus your former operator if you're playing on Hard, but I don't remember the other two. Maltzel was one, maybe?
 

GenocideHeart

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#15
Dark Knight Gafgar said:
GenocideHeart said:
Dark Knight Gafgar said:
Isn't Otsdarva one of the Lynx that jumps you in Occupation of Arteria Carpals? Along with your Mission Control chick if you're playing on Hard, to boot?
Otsdarva is Maximillian Thermidor, in case you haven't realized yet. :snigger:
I'm aware of this. I just can't remember who all jumps you in OoAC. I think Otsdarva/Maximilian and Wynne D were two of them, plus your former operator if you're playing on Hard, but I don't remember the other two. Maltzel was one, maybe?
Wynne D Fanchon, Otsdarva, Roadie, Lilium Wolcott and your traitorous Mission Control.

Respectively piloting Reiterpallasch, Stasis, Feedback, Ambient and Serene Haze.

I remember them by memory. That tells you how many times I go that route. :snigger:

And be thankful that White Glint isn't involved in this mess. :headbanger:
 
#16
I've never once beaten OoAC, even on Normal. I've never truly gotten the hang of AC-on-AC combat, even back in the older games, since I'm always outfitting my Core for mass MT/tank/mission objective destruction. And I can't get hit the broad side of a barn with Kojima weaponry, so the easy route is useless too.

Plus my 360 RROD'd a few months ago and I haven't replaced it yet. I'm probably all kinds of rusty now.

Edit: And they really should've put Merrygate in that mission or something. I've always wanted to see what May Greenfield would have to say about you during the Old King path.
 

GenocideHeart

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#17
Dark Knight Gafgar said:
I've never once beaten OoAC, even on Normal. I've never truly gotten the hang of AC-on-AC combat, even back in the older games, since I'm always outfitting my Core for mass MT/tank/mission objective destruction. And I can't get hit the broad side of a barn with Kojima weaponry, so the easy route is useless too.

Plus my 360 RROD'd a few months ago and I haven't replaced it yet. I'm probably all kinds of rusty now.

Edit: And they really should've put Merrygate in that mission or something. I've always wanted to see what May Greenfield would have to say about you during the Old King path.
The best way to take them down actually is to use a light AC and spec it for blading. Mind, that means you'll need to play it safe and lure them out, but it's doable.

Some pointers:

1) You do have a rifle, but your ideal range is 300 or less. You want to lure them out one at a time and engage them in singles.

2) Stay in the air. Your AC is much more maneuverable in the air, and you should only land if it's part of your strategy. Make sure your AC is energy-efficient.

3) Don't pause to look around. Most of the time, the moment you stop moving is the moment you'll STOP MOVING, if you get my drift.

4) Be especially wary of Feedback. A direct hit from it usually whacks you for 8000 on Hard, and it has a decent rate of fire, so if it gets on your case do your damnedest to lose it or you are pretty well damn fucked.

Besides that, it's a matter of skill. If you lack that, I can't help you.
 
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