balthanon said:
Had a chance to go through and read part of this and make some suggestions in the Google Doc. Have some work I've been procrastinating on though that I need to finish up now, so I'll need to leave it at that. Will try and come back later, since this is one of my favorites among your stories.
Dumbledork said:
I really like the interaction between the three. Doesn't Ranma have any suspicions as to who Nodoka might be?