~*Why?~*

#1
A short about the death of a father of 3 children but it more affects the 2nd born.

~*Why?~*

I stood gazing at his lifeless body that was on the hospital bed. Tears slowly fell down my cheeks dripping on his arms as I put my hand on his forehead. It was cold; stone cold that it grew on me; gliding it in his hair twirling his locks.

"Why did you have to leave us?" I asked myself with more tears coming down as I tried my best to stay strong. "Why did you have to leave us like this?" I asked again my voice louder this time. "You promised that you would be here forever making sure that we do well in school, helping us with our homework, and more importantly, keep us out of trouble and be here whenever we were down and depressed" I couldn't take it anymore as I fell down on the floor and sobbed endlessly.

My two brothers came inside the room seeing me in my misery, the eldest one came up to me and hugged me very tightly as I leaned in from his warmth still crying as he tried to calm me down. "It's okay we'll make it even if it takes all of us to do it together." He said trying hard not to cry but I could glimpse a tear slowly coming down as he quickly wiped it off.

"Come on Grandma is waiting for us." He said with the little one running near behind him as I looked back at him; getting up, I kissed his forehead. "I love you daddy" I said and I left

~*The End~*
 

AoMythology

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#2
'Previews' refers to posting chapters/snippets here to have other members propose improvements (or tell you it's irredeemable trash, but that's another story). This was too short to be anything but a teaser. 'A short' indeed!
 
#3
'Previews' refers to posting chapters/snippets here to have other members propose improvements (or tell you it's irredeemable trash, but that's another story). This was too short to be anything but a teaser. 'A short' indeed!
Sorry About that. I have some stories that are chapter stories and I plan to share them on here too.
 

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#4
Sorry About that. I have some stories that are chapter stories and I plan to share them on here too.
Okay. Do you have anything ready? I'm curious.
 

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#6
Well, I am working on a Gay Story on Dreame.com if you have ever heard of the site, are gay stories allowed on here?
By 'gay story' , do you mean graphic/lemony slash?

If so, it's allowed in the Restricted Forum section, but not many appreciate slash on this forum. If it's not graphic, it's allowed, but the lack of appreciation still applies.
 
#7
By 'gay story' , do you mean graphic/lemony slash?

If so, it's allowed in the Restricted Forum section, but not many appreciate slash on this forum. If it's not graphic, it's allowed, but the lack of appreciation still applies.
It's rated T for teens. It is called The English Teacher.
 

AoMythology

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#8
It's rated T for teens. It is called The English Teacher.
Okay, hit us with it. Be aware that if it's terribly written, I will say it, likely terribly bluntly.
 
#9
Okay, hit us with it. Be aware that if it's terribly written, I will say it, possibly bluntly.
Okay, But I'll make a new thread on it though. If it's bad, then I will know to not come back on here just to let you know.
 

AoMythology

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#10
Okay, But I'll make a new thread on it though. If it's bad, then I will know to not come back on here just to let you know.
Well, I'm not exactly fond of slash myself, but I won't reject something just because of the pairings.

If it's terribly written, nobody will mourn your not coming back. ;) We deal in honest opinions, not stroking egos.
 
#11
Well, I'm not exactly fond of slash myself, but I won't reject something just because of the pairings.

If it's terribly written, nobody will mourn your not coming back. ;) We deal in honest opinions, not stroking egos.
I see that, I have been a member since 2015 and I have not remembered until late last night when I was just browsing around. You really do have a way with words no matter how bluntly you put them.
 
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