Yomieiro Choice X MGLN Fusion.

Kireen

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#26
Nanya said:
If I might make a suggestion, Sora, Isamu and Alicia should make a comment about "oh no, not another alternate timeline" or some such. at least to themselves.

And, yes, One of the kids should be trolling everyone.
I was thinking of something around:
S: What did you touch this time.
I: Why should it always be my fault?
A: Because that's how we usually end up in these kinds of situations.

But that works too XD

The 'possible' wives are just three, the other kids come out from completely different AUs with alternative Yuunos becuase of a time-space mess, because their fathers are somehow missing, and they are investigating their disappearences.

And obviously for the lulz.

Edit: I'm writing/wrote original fics, I can handle quite a lot of char and OCs if I have the right inspiration. My issue is more or less the language.
 

Old Iron

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#27
lhklan said:
I think there should be a limit to the number of kids and possible wives though. Less than ... 7 would be good.
I would personally stick to Nanoha, Fate, Hayate, and perhaps one or two others. If we start adding in everyone and their dog, I'm looking at you Arf, then the story could get really bloated really fast. There's also diminishing returns on character investment.

If we have the Aces, all the female Wolks, Eins, Materials, 63!Chrono, and such, that's a minimum of 11 children to deal with and 11 possible ships to tease. Not to mention Canon!Strikers is missing 5 of those characters. Though drama with Eins' child does have potential, as does Vita growing up to avoid... issues.

So yeah, I would stick to the Aces and one or two more plausible characters to bring in children. Signum, Subaru, and Shamal are good potentials methinks.
 

Kireen

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#28
I dunno I'm not too sure about Subaru, I personally don't like to separate her from Tea.

But let's for now I'd say.

From main story timeline:
Nanoha
Fate
Hayate

AU 1
At least Signum son/daugher bu i'd like to have Eins son daugher as well

AU2
At least Curren child

AU3
Troll child

Relationship AU (Hint at possilbe harem ending)
Sora
Isamu
Alicia

I can leave out the materials, and that leaves me with 10 additional chars and 5 alternative Yuuno to write for the final arc.

I can skip the ship tease with most of them cause their father is not that Yuuno. What I have to do is create the backgtound that justifies their existence.
 

Old Iron

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#29
I'd leave out the Harem AU bunch as well and instead have Hayate's child or the Troll child hint at it being a possibility for the sake of trolling/lulz/Hayate's genetic perversity. I suggest leaving out the Harem AU trio not only because it reduces character bloat, but primarily because they're currently characters from another fic. Readers would only really understand them if they read Relationships and a lot of the connections wouldn't make sense. You're likely to end up with people going off to read Relationships so they can makes full sense of the three rather than reading a fanfic crossover. And by that time, this story may have been forgotten or would fall prey to "Character X isn't like that. What the hell?"

So yeah, I'd suggest leaving out the Harem AU trio. Or if you must have a group like that, create your own to fit this story rather than using existing ones from another story. There's a lot of potential for making your own.

Signum and Eins' children would definitely be good choices for AU kids though. particularly considering what sort of backstory they're bringing into this and how they could react to the Canon!Nanoverse's situation. Curren... I'm curious as to what brought her into this. Not complaining, just curious.
 

Kireen

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#30
More or less my desire to see more Yuuno (or any other old male character for the matter) post A's, and becuase I find the pairing funny.

@Nanya: I think that I need to re-read your Due story.
 

Nanya

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#31
That might help, Kireen.

Still, couldn't help it, I ended up liking that girl.

Then again, I'm sure anyone who read the fic probably ended up liking her.
 

lhklan

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#32
If you're going for a Yuuno/Signum child, I have a setting for you: Iron's Swords & Shields. Yuuno in that verse is a bit more ... blood knight-y then usual.
... Also, my inner shipping self is telling you to go for Yuuno/Due. My rational self is beating it back senseless.
 

Kireen

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#33
My idea was a Signum child that came from a universe in which Yuuno got the book instead of Hayate as suggested by Daniel, but if I find that too difficult to pull off, and if Iron allows, I can use it as an alternative.

As for Due if I'm going to have her child appear it's going to be from Nanya's version of Due (no, seriously you can't dislike that version), and if I actually do that it's going to be a joke character.
 

lhklan

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#34
Eh, it's your choice. It's your story after all.
As for the Three Aces... might I suggest some ideas? The Yuuno/Hayate child could come from Iron's Leave of Absence story, while Yuuno/Nanoha and Yuuno/Fate is the SIA trio from Nanya's Relationship series.
 

Kireen

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#35
First I'll need their permission, and for SIA I already have permission, but they come from their own timeline as guest characters, I need to have the three aces kids as separate being to start the children war.

But Leave of Absence as a possible future for the story is interesting, so that I can have a Eins shipping if my Yuuno get the book idea bombs on me.

But then again I need Old Iron permission to use his works first.
 

Kireen

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#36
Double Postan.

Anyway I had some free time at work during lunch break, and I tried to do a couple of designs for the children cause I usually tend to draw my OCs before using them.

Sorry about the bad quality, but I'm only armed with my phone and an HB pencil. And Nanoha style eyes are a bitch to draw without multiple pencils.

Nanoha's dughter.


Fate's son. (I know, he's not that manly.)


What do you think?
 

Old Iron

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#37
They look nice, they really do. =3

As for Absence, I don't mind you using that as a template for Yuuno/Hayate. Sadly I've had to scrap it owing to having written myself into a corner and losing all ability to continue it, so I can't really do anything with it save for using it as an idea base. But feel free to use it for that relationship.
 

Kireen

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#38
Thanks for the compliment and thanks for the permission to use your story, it's a pity that you won't continue it, it was nice.

I'd try to post a better version of them on white paper, but it seems that I'm not capable of drawing the same thing twice even if my life depends on it, and I'm still at work until Sunday morning.

Whoever thought about 48 hour shifts (technically 60 with 12 hour for sleeping/eating/washing that usually ends up as barely 8) has all of my hate.
 

Nanya

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#39
Kireen said:
Thanks for the compliment and thanks for the permission to use your story, it's a pity that you won't continue it, it was nice.

I'd try to post a better version of them on white paper, but it seems that I'm not capable of drawing the same thing twice even if my life depends on it, and I'm still at work until Sunday morning.

Whoever thought about 48 hour shifts (technically 60 with 12 hour for sleeping/eating/washing that usually ends up as barely 8) has all of my hate.
You have to work Saturday through Sunday?

*Shudders* Bad memories, bad! Bad memories!

You poor bastard.
 

Kireen

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#40
From Friday morining to Sunday around lunch time to be precise, but at least the pay is good and I like the work, the only problem is that my social life has taken a huge blow since I started.
 

Nanya

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#41
Kireen said:
From Friday morining to Sunday around lunch time to be precise, but at least the pay is good and I like the work, the only problem is that my social life has taken a huge blow since I started.
*Used to work like that, still has memories show up at times of that time*

Bleah.

Only difference was I worked Friday night, Saturday all day, Sunday mornings until like 3-4 PM.
 

GaelicDragon

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#43
You know, if you are looking for names, there is a series of pics that have Yuuno with Nanoha, Fate, Hayate and Subaru, the pictures though are of the children (all daughters). I believe they are in the Nanoha pic section.
 
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