Naruto A different couple of fic ideas

[DhampyrX2]

There are a couple of Naruto ideas that have been floating in my head for a while that I wanted to put down here.

First off, one thing that always bugged me was that Sarutobi just left Naruto to languish unwatched for the most part until Jiraiya of all shinobi taught him how to access the Kyuubi's powers. WTF? How could the lecher take the chance to help him with his tenant even if it was just to get chakra to summon. My first idea is that Sarutobi covers his bases early on by arranging an early tutor for Naruto so he could harness his control over the fox. The best choice? Well, if you want to go crossover, I'd say either Iori Yagami, or Vice and Mature of the Orochi clan. Yagami makes slightly more sense in that he's a boderline good guy for a muderous anti-hero. He could also be introduced through Genma, whose last name is, after all, Shiranui. Maybe Mai-chan could persuade the insane Orochi Warrior to help Naruto use the tainted nine-tails chakra the way he uses the tainted eight headed Orochi flames. Hell you could even claim the Orochi is really the hachibi if you wanted to. I'll admit, this has more with me wanting to see Naruto use the Maiden Masher on Sasuke-teme than anything else, but it still has potential, I think.

The second idea was inspiried by Naruto-kun's outfit. Does anyone else think it resembles Muten Roshi's student gi's from Drgon Ball and DBZ? So here's the idea from that, maybe he wears then from a family tradition. Like say, he's a descendant of Krillin and Juuachi-gou, perhaps? Not a recent one, or one where and DBZ character was still alive, but a blood relation none the less. Now, picture if he was giver his family tai-jutsu scrolls as a kid...in the art of Kamesennen. Picture Naruto pulling off things most nins never could, without using the kyuubi for power. Just an odd thought that popped into my head. Well, that and the sight of Naruto cutting off Orochimaru's tongue with Krillin's Destructo Disk when he and the ero-sennen for find Tsunade.

 

[GenocideHeart]

There are a couple of Naruto ideas that have been floating in my head for a while that I wanted to put down here.

First off, one thing that always bugged me was that Sarutobi just left Naruto to languish unwatched for the most part until Jiraiya of all shinobi taught him how to access the Kyuubi's powers. WTF? How could the lecher take the chance to help him with his tenant even if it was just to get chakra to summon. My first idea is that Sarutobi covers his bases early on by arranging an early tutor for Naruto so he could harness his control over the fox. The best choice? Well, if you want to go crossover, I'd say either Iori Yagami, or Vice and Mature of the Orochi clan. Yagami makes slightly more sense in that he's a boderline good guy for a muderous anti-hero. He could also be introduced through Genma, whose last name is, after all, Shiranui. Maybe Mai-chan could persuade the insane Orochi Warrior to help Naruto use the tainted nine-tails chakra the way he uses the tainted eight headed Orochi flames. Hell you could even claim the Orochi is really the hachibi if you wanted to. I'll admit, this has more with me wanting to see Naruto use the Maiden Masher on Sasuke-teme than anything else, but it still has potential, I think.

The second idea was inspiried by Naruto-kun's outfit. Does anyone else think it resembles Muten Roshi's student gi's from Drgon Ball and DBZ? So here's the idea from that, maybe he wears then from a family tradition. Like say, he's a descendant of Krillin and Juuachi-gou, perhaps? Not a recent one, or one where and DBZ character was still alive, but a blood relation none the less. Now, picture if he was giver his family tai-jutsu scrolls as a kid...in the art of Kamesennen. Picture Naruto pulling off things most nins never could, without using the kyuubi for power. Just an odd thought that popped into my head. Well, that and the sight of Naruto cutting off Orochimaru's tongue with Krillin's Destructo Disk when he and the ero-sennen for find Tsunade.

The problem with using Yagami, Mature or Vice is... Naruto has the Nine Tails. Mature and Vice are Heavenly Kings, heads of the Yamata-no-Orochi, which is an ENEMY of Kyuubi in Naruto's world.

Yagami MIGHT help, but Mature? Vice? No, they're 100% loyal to Orochi. And Yagami helping is actually pretty unlikely. He's a loner, and doesn't really care about teamwork, remember? Like hell he'd take on a disciple.

A more interesting twist would be to have Orochi himself sealed in Naruto. Not only would it make for some extremely interesting interaction with Orochimaru (the Kusanagi was used to kill Orochi, how do you think it'd react to seeing it? I almost feel sorry for Orochimaru...), it'd also make a good excuse to actually use the Heavenly Kings, as Naruto would play the part of Chris.

Also, if you're interested in a KoF crossover, I myself would recommend not using the actual Heavenly Kings, but instead making new ones. What if Akatsuki was actually an organization including all 8 Heavenly Kings, plus someone working to resurrect Orochi?

Just a thought...

Another crossoverish idea I had:

-Naruto/Far East of Eden. The two games have lots in common, including a long-haired man who is full of himself and summons snakes named Orochimaru (Hmm...), a ninja who summons firebreathing toads named Jiraiya (HMMM...) and a freakishly strong young-looking girl who swings around an axe three times her sizelike nothing called Tsunade (HMMMMMM!!). Incidentally, when she was young, Tsunade was flat-chested... like the Tsunade from Far East of Eden. Dunno about you, but that's a little too many coinciidences, especially when one of the sub-bosses is a giant marionette called Karakuri, who looks suspiciously like Kankuro's second Kugutsu...

 

[GenocideHeart]

On a side note, in my fic I have several characters use several KoF moves. In particular, Hatori uses Benimaru Nikaido's Raikouken (Lightning Gleam Fist) and the Elec-trigger grapple, and Ino uses Orochi Chris's Daichi Wo Harau Gou Ka (Hell Fire that Sweeps Over The Earth - love this name!) SDM and an attack that's suspiciously like Iori Yagami's Ura 327 Shiki YamiSugi (Inverted Type-327 Fading Darkness).

I'm considering having Naruto use Shingo Yabuki's Ge Shiki Kake Hourin (Foreign Type Running Phosphorous Phoenix) and Burning Shingo combo, and Sasuke will probably use Kyo Kusanagi's Ura 108 Shiki OrochiNagi (Inverted Type-108 Great Mowing Serpent).

 

[Israfel]

-Naruto/Far East of Eden. The two games have lots in common, including a long-haired man who is full of himself and summons snakes named Orochimaru (Hmm...), a ninja who summons firebreathing toads named Jiraiya (HMMM...) and a freakishly strong young-looking girl who swings around an axe three times her sizelike nothing called Tsunade (HMMMMMM!!). Incidentally, when she was young, Tsunade was flat-chested... like the Tsunade from Far East of Eden. Dunno about you, but that's a little too many coinciidences, especially when one of the sub-bosses is a giant marionette called Karakuri, who looks suspiciously like Kankuro's second Kugutsu...

What exactly is 'Far East Of Eden'? And the characters are really that much alike? The trio of names Tsunade, Jiraiya, and Orochimaru must have some sort of cultural significance if they were used more than once to characters that looked the same and acted the same, it would just be too much of a coincidence otherwise and culturally siginificant names I've noticed tend to get a lot of use in animes and such in Japanese culture.

 

[GenocideHeart]

What exactly is 'Far East Of Eden'? And the characters are really that much alike? The trio of names Tsunade, Jiraiya, and Orochimaru must have some sort of cultural significance if they were used more than once to characters that looked the same and acted the same, it would just be too much of a coincidence otherwise and culturally siginificant names I've noticed tend to get a lot of use in animes and such in Japanese culture.

The characters are very much alike. Jiraiya acts like a perverted dumbass and is very egocentric, Orochimaru is cold and has total confidence in himself, and Tsunade is arrogant, lazy and has a small crush on Orochimaru (nothing serious, she thinks he looks good, and IIRC Tsunade in Naruto USED to find Oro attractive).

The game was ported on Neo Geo with the name Kabuki Klash.

 

[BlackSun]

The trio of names Tsunade, Jiraiya, and Orochimaru must have some sort of cultural significance if they were used more than once to characters that looked the same and acted the same, it would just be too much of a coincidence otherwise and culturally siginificant names I've noticed tend to get a lot of use in animes and such in Japanese culture.

They're from "The Tale of the Gallant Jiraiya"

What exactly is 'Far East Of Eden'?

A videogame.

Yagami MIGHT help, but Mature? Vice? No, they're 100% loyal to Orochi. And Yagami helping is actually pretty unlikely. He's a loner, and doesn't really care about teamwork, remember? Like hell he'd take on a disciple.

Chizuru probably would help. If I remember, it's her job to keep Orochi contained, and, if she could have help from someone with the power of Kyuubi, she would probably try to get it.

A more interesting twist would be to have Orochi himself sealed in Naruto. Not only would it make for some extremely interesting interaction with Orochimaru (the Kusanagi was used to kill Orochi, how do you think it'd react to seeing it? I almost feel sorry for Orochimaru...), it'd also make a good excuse to actually use the Heavenly Kings, as Naruto would play the part of Chris.

According to the legend as I found it once, Orochi manages to steal the Kusanagi, and becomes almost as powerful as the Kyuubi, but without the infinite chakra.

 

[GenocideHeart]

According to the legend as I found it once, Orochi manages to steal the Kusanagi, and becomes almost as powerful as the Kyuubi, but without the infinite chakra.

The original legend's Yamata-no-Orochi is technically a manifestation of the Earth's uncontrollable anger, so it's already plenty more powerful than Kyuubi to begin with. h43r:

 

[DhampyrX2]

The reason I suggested Iori, Vice, and Mature was that while they were all three servants/avatars to the Orochi, they turned against him in KOF 96 or 97. In a way Iori's struggle against his own power is similar to Naruto's as a demon vessel. As for the Secretaries of Destruction, well, they're spies and assasins. Perfect tutors for a ninja, if you will, and willing to work for pay. If Iori was used, it would have to be the more mellow, post KOF 98 Iori that doesn't want Kusanagi dead; he just wants to beat the crap out of him. The Chizuru angle might work with Yagami, actually. She could assemble the current Shinji Trioca (sp?) of Iori, Kyo, and herself to help train Naruto for a short time.

Personally, I'd see Iori helping Naruto after seeing how he's treated compared to Sasuke. The similarities between them is almost a mirror of the hatred vs. blind adoration of Iori's own feud with Kyo. Really, I might write this one eventually. It seems to be forming into a full plot bunny. Besides, just picture Naruto's possible innovations to something like the Maiden Masher, or Iori going apeshit on Orochimaru. Those almost sell the idea by themselves.


I'm kind of surprised nobody weighed in on my DBZ cross idea. Really, this wouldn't even screw up the power levels because it would be based on Master Roshi, Krillin, and possible Yaumcha as the sources of the Kamesennen-ryu taijutsu. You could add some of Goku's skills, like the Kaioken or the Spirit Bomb, but nobody would reach his or Vegeta's insane strength levels. It could also give Lee some substitutes for his lack of ninjutsu if Naruto trained him as a sparring partner. Imagine the two if them with the kamehameha and afer image attacks at their disposal. Impressive, but in Naruto's case, no more dangerous or powerful than the Ransengan or the Kage Bunshin. Really, the only thing that would be a radical shift is using ki to fly. Which, I believe, even Lee could learn as it uses purely ki, something inherent in all living things, as opposed to chakra, which is a balance of two different energies.

 

[DhampyrX2]

One more thing... Anko and Vice in a catfight over Iori, while he chases Kurenai.


Think about it. h43r:

 

[GenocideHeart]

The reason I suggested Iori, Vice, and Mature was that while they were all three servants/avatars to the Orochi, they turned against him in KOF 96 or 97.

Um, Vice and Mature didn't turn against Orochi. In KoF 96, they were with Iori to control him under Goenitz's orders, but he flipped out and killed them both, and in KoF 97, Iori supposedly entered the competition with Chizuru and Kyo, and Vice/Mature were already dead.

That's also the only reason why Orochi was defeated again back then. Four of his eight heads (Goenitz, Gaibel, Mature and Vice) were killed before the resurrection was complete, and of the remaining four, one (Yamazaki) refused to cooperate. Iori was meant to replace one of the lost heads, but also refused to cooperate, and Leona was too weak to replace her father Gaibel.

Yes, I'm a KoF nut. Yes, I have too much time on my hands to analyze the plot

 

[DhampyrX2]

I was kind of AU-ing from the main plot with the fact Vice showed up in both Capcom vs. SNK games, and if she fights Rugal then Mature is there with her in the intro. And I always got the impression Goenitz made Iori go riot and try to kill them because they turned on him and sided with Iori in '96. That's where I would see them showing up.

Although, now that I mention Rugal...he would fit the profile for someone from Akatsuki, wouldn't he?

Anyway, the Iori, Kyo, and Chizuru angle does make the most sense. I'll admit that, and You could toss in Genma contacting his sister/cousin/clanswoman/whatever Mai to help get in touch with them.

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Speaking of Mai, another similar idea I had was Genma seeing how Naruto is treated and not liking it. Now, a confirmed bachelor and playboy like him can't raise the kid, obviously, so he gets in touch with his sister/cousin/clanswoman/whatever Mai and her new husband Andy to raise him away from the baka villiagers until he's old enough for the Genin exam.

Behold a Naruto trained by the likes of Andy, Mai, Terry, Blue Mary, Rock Howard, and the like. I especially like the idea of him countering Neji's Kaiten defense with one of his own at the Chuunin exams... the Raging Storm.

Interesting, no?

 

[GenocideHeart]

If you absolutely WANT a KoF crossover, I'd suggest having Naruto be trained by Eiji Kisaragi of AoF fame. Eiji's moves were much more interesting than most others IMHO, and he's one hell of a lot better than Mai as a ninja.

 

[GenocideHeart]

Oh, and the CvS games are non-canon. After all, Goenitz is still alive in them, while in the official KoF timeline he's been dead since 1996.

Personally, I'd like to see a Naruto trained by NESTS. Imagine him using Igniz's Brutal God Project SDM on Sasuke. HEH. Can you say 'overkill much'?

 

[Israfel]

Oh, and the CvS games are non-canon. After all, Goenitz is still alive in them, while in the official KoF timeline he's been dead since 1996.

Personally, I'd like to see a Naruto trained by NESTS. Imagine him using Igniz's Brutal God Project SDM on Sasuke. HEH. Can you say 'overkill much'?

Heh, most definitely, but I couldn't help but notice your new quotes and while I like both of them, don't you think it's a little pretentious to be quoting yourself? After all 'Twisted Fates' is your fic isn't it? Nah I'm just kidding .

 

[GenocideHeart]

Oh, and the CvS games are non-canon. After all, Goenitz is still alive in them, while in the official KoF timeline he's been dead since 1996.

Personally, I'd like to see a Naruto trained by NESTS. Imagine him using Igniz's Brutal God Project SDM on Sasuke. HEH. Can you say 'overkill much'?

Heh, most definitely, but I couldn't help but notice your new quotes and while I like both of them, don't you think it's a little pretentious to be quoting yourself? After all 'Twisted Fates' is your fic isn't it? Nah I'm just kidding .

Yes, it's pretentious. Then again, I'm hardly modest. And the quote isn't mine. I don't remember who exactly said it, though. :unsure:

EDIT: Changed 'em.

 

[Israfel]

Yes, it's pretentious. Then again, I'm hardly modest. And the quote isn't mine. I don't remember who exactly said it, though.?

Yah that's for sure, hmm, but as long as somebody else originally came up with it then I don't really care, in fact I didn't really care in the first place, I just felt like giving you a hard time.

 

[DhampyrX2]

Another fic idea has struck me... Anko raising/taking care of Naruto from the age of four or so, but they never mention it to anyone. Things go as canon until she shows up for the chuunin exam.

"'Kaasan?!? What the hell are you doing here?"

WHAP "Quiet brat. I've told you a hundred times to call me oneechan. I'm far too young to be your mother."

"You've been watchin' me since I was four, and adopted me at six, 'Kaasan. You're my mom. Deal with it."

"Ramen-obsessed brat."

"Dango-obsessed old woman."

"Ano, Naruto. Are you certain Anko-sensei adoptedyou?"

"What do you mean, Sakura-chan?"


Heh heh. How's that for an excerpt, minus little details like adding actions or who's speaking? Of course this would change several things. One, Naruto might know how to summon some snakes, even without the contract, since Anko would certainly show him jutsus. Another might be a more blood-thirsty fighting style once he cuts loose in the Forest of Death. As well as anything anyone else might suggest.

Well? Comments? Criticisms?

 

[GenocideHeart]

Another fic idea has struck me... Anko raising/taking care of Naruto from the age of four or so, but they never mention it to anyone. Things go as canon until she shows up for the chuunin exam.

"'Kaasan?!? What the hell are you doing here?"

WHAP "Quiet brat. I've told you a hundred times to call me oneechan. I'm far too young to be your mother."

"You've been watchin' me since I was four, and adopted me at six, 'Kaasan. You're my mom. Deal with it."

"Ramen-obsessed brat."

"Dango-obsessed old woman."

"Ano, Naruto. Are you certain Anko-sensei adoptedyou?"

"What do you mean, Sakura-chan?"


Heh heh. How's that for an excerpt, minus little details like adding actions or who's speaking? Of course this would change several things. One, Naruto might know how to summon some snakes, even without the contract, since Anko would certainly show him jutsus. Another might be a more blood-thirsty fighting style once he cuts loose in the Forest of Death. As well as anything anyone else might suggest.

Well? Comments? Criticisms?

For starters, if Anko raised him, the villagers would be too busy being afraid of him to hate him.

As for snakes... I actually expect him to have a contract with them. Why not? And his pranks would be definitely more harmful. His definition of a 'good prank' would probably involve someone getting wounded more or less severely. <_<

Another possible AU would have Ibiki raise Naruto in such a fashion. Now there's a positively creepy Naruto. This Naruto wouldn't get mad - he'd get even. And most of his victims won't even be able to prove it was him.

Think of him as Chibi-Ibiki. Expert in messing with his opponent's mind, and with a caustic sense of humor. And probably not at all above inflicting mass amounts of pain to prove a point.

Imagine the Chuunin Exams:

"...Oyajii is the examiner? Great, I'm screwed. Sadistic bastard..."

"I can hear you, brat."

"I know. That's the whole point of it, isn't it?"

"...at least you learned that lesson."

"What lesson is he talking about, Naruto?"

"How to piss opponents off to the point they forget strategy, of course, Sakura-chan."

"...so THAT'S who you took this attitude from..."

Heh.

 

[DhampyrX2]

I think Orochimaru has the physical contract with him, so Naruto would never be able to sign it. That's why he'd have to only summon lower snakes for jutsu use.

Ibiki's been done at least once. I think Anko will be more fun because her personality is already similar to Naruto's. Besides, I see the exam more like this when raised with Ibiki...

"Hey, you. The Chuunin that knows the answers. Gimme," Naruto growled as he takes the test from the chuunin in front of him.

"What the hell are you doing, brat?" Ibiki yelled.

"What you want us to, Oyaji. Getting answers successfully in less that three tries. He gives them up or I gut him like a fish before taking out the head screws. No cheating, just a simple transaction," Naruto replied casually.

Ibiki blinks once before smiling evilly as he he answered, "Fair enough. Carry on."

 

[GenocideHeart]

I think Orochimaru has the physical contract with him, so Naruto would never be able to sign it. That's why he'd have to only summon lower snakes for jutsu use.

Ibiki's been done at least once. I think Anko will be more fun because her personality is already similar to Naruto's. Besides, I see the exam more like this when raised with Ibiki...

"Hey, you. The Chuunin that knows the answers. Gimme," Naruto growled as he takes the test from the chuunin in front of him.

"What the hell are you doing, brat?" Ibiki yelled.

"What you want us to, Oyaji. Getting answers successfully in less that three tries. He gives them up or I gut him like a fish before taking out the head screws. No cheating, just a simple transaction," Naruto replied casually.

Ibiki blinks once before smiling evilly as he he answered, "Fair enough. Carry on."

I actually have NEVER seen a fic where Naruto interacts with Ibiki, and I've seen PLENTY with him interacting with Anko. If you have a Naruto w/Ibiki fic, LINK NOW.

 

[Israfel]

Here, here's the 'Naruto raised by Ibiki' fic, as promised.

No One by Wolvesm0on.