I did not mean for this to take this long, but the big fight scene fought me for every line. Like usual when I've wrestled this much with a scene, I can't tell whether I won or not, but hopefully it works.
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"What do you think?" the green-eyed man asked his comrade as the two Leaf genin stood back-to-back in the center of a dome of ice mirrors. The masked image of the boy Haku, incongruously still wearing his pink kimono, seemed to be in every mirror at once as he moved between them, too fast for the eye to follow.
Wincing, the kunoichi pulled a senbon out from her upper arm. "We're screwed, Takeru. I can barely sense him moving from mirror to mirror; he's too damn fast. He can kill us whenever he wants."
Takeru frowned, though his teammate couldn't see it. "So why hasn't he?" he murmured softly, his lips barely moving. Idly, Haku tossed another senbon; Takeru managed to knock it aside with his kunai. With his other hand, he unrolled a storage scroll a fraction, brushing against the seal to remove another kunai, with a prepared explosive tag dangling from the hilt. "Cover me, Tsubaki."
"On it." Her hands blurred through seals, summoning a pair of water replications. The clones drew their short swords and charged the mirrors. Instants later, pierced by three senbon each, they collapsed into falling water.
Takeru's explosive kunai flew through on dissolving replication. A senbon came out of another mirror, piercing the explosive tag. There were sparks and smoke, but no detonation, and the kunai bounced harmlessly off of its target.
On the other side of the ice dome, Tsubaki had advanced in the shadow of the other water replication. She formed a rapid set of seals, then thrust one hand into the falling water. "Suiton: Water Lance!"
The water formed into a spear that jetted through the air, only to splash harmlessly against one of the mirrors. Tsubaki staggered backward, six senbon sprouting from her limbs. "Damn," she cursed, as she retreated to stand back-to-back with Takeru again. "He's too damned fast," she said again. She pulled out a senbon. "Tried to catch him between mirrors, and he was gone and coming at me from behind before I could react." Another senbon fell to the ground as she removed it. "At least he's avoiding our vital points," she finished quietly, as though she didn't want to give their opponent any ideas.
"Why?" Takeru asked, more loudly. "Why are you toying with us?"
Haku spoke for the first time since he'd enclosed the pair in his technique. "Zabuza-sama desires your medic's death," he stated calmly. "But once he has done that and completed our mission, there will be no more reason for us to fight. I have no desire to kill either of you."
"Generous of you," Tsubaki said sourly.
"It is," the boy agreed. "In return, I would hope that you would indulge my curiosity.
"Who did my story remind you of, Haruno-san?"
"That's none of your business, boy," Takeru answered.
Tsubaki frowned. "Shit, Takeru. Which part of 'he can kill us whenever he wants' did you not understand?
"You reminded him of his daughter," she told the boy. Behind her back, hidden from their opponent, she lightly touched her comrade with one hand, trying to pass a silent message.
Guessing the meaning - keep him talking and distracted - the man grimaced and spoke, "Sakura."
"Haruno Sakura," the boy said. "It's a good name."
"Her mother picked it," was all Takeru said to that.
"I wonder how her tale could be like mine," Haku stated. "Your country does not share the same prejudices as my own."
"We're not idiots, you mean," Tsubaki said.
"I won't disagree," Haku said, "but I may be biased." He paused. "And I am not nearly distracted enough for my technique to fall so trivially."
One ice mirror vanished briefly, just long enough to admit a whirling tornado of fang and claw. The newcomer came to a halt in a crouch beside Takeru and Tsubaki, revealing the form of Inuzuka Hana. The woman snarled at Haku.
"Shall we continue our conversation, Haruno-san?" Haku asked calmly. "Or would you prefer us to resume the battle?"
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Rage was not burning in Sakura. Her gut was not churning with barely contained wrath. She did not feel suppressed anger in the back of her mind. All of those words she had used to describe to herself what it was like when she felt the Nine-Tails stir no longer applied to her.
Sakura was burning rage. Her wrath blazed around her, crimson chakra boiling off into air in a display that should have driven her to exhaustion in mere moments. She did not suppress the anger; she welcomed it. She knew that this was not the fury of the Nine-Tails, that it did not belong to demon girl who wore her face. This was her, Haruno Sakura.
She still froze for what could have been a fatal instant when she caught her reflection in the settling water of the hot spring. She was almost a mirror of the image the Nine-Tails had worn: dark whisker marks on her face leading to red, inhuman eyes. Her clawed hands twitched, and she forced the unsettling image aside. Naruto and Sasuke were worth it.
Sakura breathed deeply, and the crimson chakra faded from sight, but the power did not leave her. In one powerful leap, she followed Kasumi through the hole in the wall, back to the room where the others waited. She landed a handful of paces from the dark-skinned girl, who scrambled to her feet, hammer coming alight. "Stay back, you... whatever the hell you are!" she shouted.
In a heartbeat, Sakura closed with her. The hammer strike seemed impossibly slow, like a patient teacher demonstrating the move. With an unconscious grace alien to her usual clumsy taijutsu, Sakura flowed around it. Her elbow dug at Kasumi's gut, with enough force that the other girl doubled over, stumbling back and nearly falling. Sakura's other hand raked at Kasumi's eyes. A hastily raised arm shoved the blow aside, but Sakura's claws still drew blood.
In a puff of smoke, Kasumi was gone, replaced by a bar stool. Snarling in anger, Sakura shattered the wooden seat with one idle blow. Her eyes hungrily sought out her prey. First she found the medic Hikaru, under poor cover near a window at the front of the building.
"Don't move, Sakura-san."
At Eimi's voice, Sakura abandoned her search, turning to face the chuunin kunoichi, near the center of the room. She froze as she saw Eimi's kunai at Sasuke's neck. She took a reflexive step back, and then she froze for entirely different reason.
Sasuke's dark eyes - the ones she could have stared into for hours if there was any chance the boy would let her - were open, open and staring directly at her, widening slightly. Relief and fear warred in her. Sasuke was alive and aware. Sasuke was seeing her, seeing this monstrous thing she'd become to save him and Naruto.
Eimi mistook the reason for her hesitation. "Good. Now, whatever technique you're using, end it," she ordered. "Or..." she trailed off, moving her kunai suggestively.
Sakura's original fear returned. Out of the corner of her eye, she saw Kasumi rising from behind an overturned table, but she couldn't look away from her captive teammate. She wasn't sure she could force down the power of the Nine-Tails at all, now that she'd accepted it, even if she wanted to. She had to think. She had to protect her teammates.
"Now, Sakura-san," Eimi pressed, but she didn't move her weapon again.
Sakura's clawed hands clenched, almost tight enough to draw blood. "No," she said. Her voice sounded strange to her own ears, deep and growly. Unthinkingly, she bit at her lip like she did when pondering a hard test problem, and sharp fangs did draw blood for a painful instant. The pain brought clarity, cutting through the gathering clouds of fear and uncertainty. "You won't hurt him. The Sharingan is your target, after all."
It had to be. There was nothing about Naruto to make him worth this betrayal. The Cloud had no idea what she was. The feared bloodline limit of the Uchiha, though... that was a grand prize, and hardly an unprecedented kind of target for the Hidden Cloud. They would never kill Sasuke.
Eimi swallowed once, and her weapon still didn't move. Sakura smiled unthinkingly, and took a deliberate step forward.
"You're right, Sakura-chan," Kasumi said suddenly. "But the pervert isn't so valuable, is he?" She kicked the table she stood behind away, revealing Naruto's still form. For a heartbreaking instant, Sakura thought he was already dead, but she then saw his chest rise and fall weakly.
Kasumi raised her hammer, lightning dancing around it. "One move, Sakura-chan, and I finish what I started." The redhead grinned.
She and Naruto were closer than Eimi and Sasuke. But were they close enough? Sakura tensed. She faster, unbelievably fast. She could do this, she believed, and for an instant red chakra flared around her.
"Stay back!" Kasumi warned, her hammer moving to a guard position.
That was enough. Sakura slammed into Kasumi, shoving her into the table she'd kicked aside. Bright light flared around the dark-skinned girl's hammer. Sakura threw up her hands to protect herself. There was a crack like thunder, and Kasumi's hammer shoved Sakura away and up, her arms erupting into shattering pain like nothing she'd felt. She landed on her feet and staggered backward a few steps, before falling to one knee between Kasumi and Naruto.
A pair of senbon thudded into her shoulder, and a third was blocked by the torn bandages that still hung off of it. Those pinpricks were nothing compared to the pained tearing she felt when she tried to move her arms.
"And stay down," Kasumi said tiredly as she stood, her glowing hammer flying back to her hand.
Sakura's hands clawed weakly at the wooden floor. She would not be defeated so simply. Not when Naruto and Sasuke were depending on her. Fire filled her, painful in its own way, and red chakra flared again. Her arms twitched, almost convulsing, and when she moved them again there was no pain. She stood and her legs did not shake. Eimi's senbon fell to the ground in a clatter. "No," she told Kasumi.
"Can't you learn?" Kasumi asked, and she threw her hammer again.
Sakura was ready for it this time, and she batted it aside with one arm. The shock of the impact sent jarring waves of pain down her arm, but they faded as soon as they came. She charged, and she beat the weapon to its wielder. One hand grabbed Kasumi's neck, claws scratching bloody trails as Sakura raised her captive into the air. "Anyone who touches Naruto-kun," Sakura promised in a low growl, "dies."
Kasumi kicked at her, but Sakura barely felt the blows. Then the dark-skinned girl grabbed her hammer out of mid-air as it returned. A short, weak blow still knocked the wind from Sakura's lungs and made her lose her grip, and Kasumi jumped away, landing on the stairway leading up to the balcony that overlooked the room. "Stay back!" she warned, but her voice wavered.
Behind Sakura, Eimi had abandoned her position by Sasuke and was moving to shield Kasumi. Sakura charged as the Cloud kunoichi formed seals. Tiny, floating bolts of lightning surrounded Sakura, blocking her path toward the two Cloud. Sakura ignored them, not slowing in the slightest as countless small electrical shocks jolted her. The pain was gone almost before she felt it.
Eimi almost froze as Sakura kept coming, fumbling for a kunai that she barely had time to raise in a defensive posture before Sakura closed with her. Despite her hesitation, the warding swipe of the blade was well-timed and sure. It should have been enough to force Sakura to keep her distance.
Instead, Sakura dove under a slow-seeming strike, tackling Eimi by the legs. The chuunin fell underneath her, and Sakura's claws drew long furrows across her white armored jacket. They didn't draw blood, and Sakura snarled in frustration. Eimi half-rose, trying to throw off Sakura. An elbow to the back of her knee made her fall again. Sakura forced herself up so she was directly on top of the other girl, staring eye-to-eye.
Eimi's kunai stabbed at Sakura's gut. Sakura caught the blade with her open hand and wrenched it out of the other girl's grasp, tossing it aside. The bloody gash across her palm hurt, but it was already closing. Eimi, panic clear in her expression, raised her hands, lightning dancing between them. The powerful shock made Sakura's whole body spasm, but she recovered before Eimi could get free. Sakura punched her in the face, and felt the other girl's nose crack. "No one hurts my friends," she stated.
"Eimi!" Hikaru called out from behind Sakura. She glanced back to see the medic hobbling toward them on a broken leg, too slow to make any difference.
"What are you?" Eimi asked Sakura weakly. She tried to knee Sakura in the chest, but Sakura half-rolled aside, raking her claws across Eimi's armor again. The chuunin took advantage of Sakura's movement to try to wriggle out from underneath her.
Before she could escape, Sakura grabbed at Eimi, catching her while she was still rising. She slammed Eimi's head into the wooden floor, and the other girl lay still for a moment, clearly dazed. Instinctively, a snarl in her throat, Sakura's claws went for the other girl's neck.
"Get off Eimi!" Kasumi yelled, and Sakura looked up at the dark-skinned girl. "Let her go!" Kasumi demanded, her hammer half-raised, clearly afraid to risk hurting Eimi if she threw it.
Sakura bit back a snarl. Kasumi was the one who'd threatened Naruto. She was the one who had hurt him. Her hand reflexively closed tightly around Eimi's throat. The other girl fought for breath, her own hands futilely trying to pry Sakura's fingers loose.
"Eimi!" Sakura looked up at Hikaru's cry, and saw the boy drawing close, a kunai in hand. He threw it at Sakura, high enough that it wouldn't hit his teammate. It was too easy to lean aside at the right moment, reach out to snag it by the hilt as it almost seemed to hang in mid-air and -
Kasumi slammed into her side. There was a moment of wild struggle, and Sakura was forced off of Eimi. The black-haired girl sat up, gasping for air, but Sakura had no time to watch. Kasumi attacked with a new fury, rolling on the floor with Sakura. She was too close to get a good strike with her hammer, though, and after a few moments Sakura kicked her off.
Both kunoichi rose to their feet, and then Kasumi grinned. Sakura's red eyes widened as she realized, a sinking feeling in her gut, that the other girl had wound up a few steps from Naruto. Her hammer started glowing again. "This is for hurting Eimi," she stated calmly, and then she brought the hammer down on Naruto's arm.
There was a loud cracking sound, and Naruto's until now unmoving from spasmed wildly as electricity discharged into him. "That should prove we're serious, Sakura-chan," Kasumi said, satisfaction clear in her voice. "Try anything and he gets worse."
"N-naruto." The quiet, weak voice was Sasuke's, but she couldn't turn to look at him. Naruto's body kept twitching, and she couldn't hear him breathing.
She could hear a low, inhuman growl. It took her a moment to realize it was hers. Her lips curled back, baring her teeth as she stared at Kasumi. The dark-skinned girl hefted her hammer. "Just try me."
It was like a dam breaking inside of Sakura. The rage that suffused her boiled over, and she literally saw red as chakra flared around her again. Sakura roared, and it was like a physical thing, knocking Kasumi back a step.
Before Sakura even realized she was moving, she was on the other girl. A snarled, "Die," escaped her lips as lengthening claws ripped through Kasumi's red dress, drawing blood. One hand twisted, carving through her left arm. Kasumi didn't panic, using a quick hammer blow to force Sakura away.
Sakura caught the second strike in one hand, ignoring the weak pain of the electric shock and the cracking of her bones. Kasumi grunted, her hammer's glow brightening. "Idiot berseker. With my hammer, there's nothing in this world I can't -"
With a sudden burst of strength, Sakura ripped the head from the hammer's haft. Kasumi froze, gaping at her as Sakura tossed the broken weapon half aside. "Die," she said again, and then she casually backhanded the girl, sending her flying. Kasumi hit an exterior wall hard, but Sakura didn't let up.
Red chakra blazing around her, Sakura fell on the other girl, striking again and again. Kasumi screamed as Sakura's chakra thickened, starting to burn her, but Sakura didn't care. All she could see was what her prey had done to Naruto. "Anyone who hurts my friends," Sakura growled, "will pay." Kasumi tried to block the next blow with her right arm, and Sakura grabbed on with both hands and broke it with a trivial effort. Kasumi screamed again, more loudly, and Sakura just laughed.
"Don't hurt her!" someone shouted. Sakura kept Kasumi pinned to the wall with one hand and half-turned, ready to drop Kasumi and pounce.
"Stop," Hikaru said weakly, holding a kunai in a shaking hand, but only in a defensive posture. He limped a few steps closer.
Sakura took a deep, shuddering breath. "You... can't fight me," Sakura said, trying to force calm into her voice. It was a bizarre, utterly alien feeling, but it was true. The medic, already injured, couldn't hope to win.
Hikaru took a step closer. "Let me help my teammate," he said calmly. He didn't lower his weapon.
It took an effort of will not to jump at him. Sakura fought back the urge to attack. The red chakra around her started to thin and fade. "Why... should I?" she asked, as she looked over the medic's shoulder. Eimi hadn't moved from her seated position near the stairs. Sasuke was still bound in the center of the room, but his eyes had turned their own shade of red. The sight raised strange feelings in Sakura, but it was the final person she looked for. Naruto lay still, but his chest still rose and fell.
"Naruto," she growled unthinkingly at the reminder of the reason for her rage. Hikaru was just as responsible as his teammates. His next, cautious step closer provoked an instinctive response, Sakura's claw swiping at air to force him back.
Instead Hikaru stopped favoring his broken leg, darting at Sakura in a burst of speed. The tip of his kunai ripped a line of fire across her stomach, and Sakura doubled over, dropping Kasumi. The redhead slumped to ground and didn't rise. The shallow, rapidly healing wound hurt more than it should have. Poison.
Hikaru stabbed at her again, but only to make her keep her distance as he bent down to pick up his fallen teammate. Kasumi stirred weakly. "Hi -" she began.
Sakura's chakra blazed into full strength, anger burning away the poison's pain. The medic had used his concern for his teammate to lull her into dropping her guard. Now he was trying to get away with Kasumi, the one who had hurt Naruto, the one who had to pay. She screamed in rage, and enjoyed the look of fear in the boy's eyes as she attacked, shoving him away from Kasumi. Mindless fury filling her, Sakura went for the fallen kunoichi, who barely had the presence of mind to weakly raise her unbroken arm to try to shield herself.
Hikaru jumped at her, wrapping both arms around her and trying to force her to the ground. His weight staggered Sakura, and they both fell. Sakura bit at him, sharp fangs finding flesh and filling her mouth with the taste of blood. Her claws tore great gashes across the medic's chest as she wrestled to the top. Her thick, dense chakra surrounded them, burning, and he screamed. Long seconds passed in a blur as Sakura spent her rage, striking again and again, no longer knowing or caring that it was Kasumi's defender and not Kasumi herself that lay underneath her
"Stop!" Sakura looked up at Eimi's yell, and fear pierced the rage that clouded her mind. The tall kunoichi stood unsteadily next to Sasuke, a kunai in her hands. Sakura had forgotten that the other girl was only dazed. Now, she had a hostage. Sakura let Hikaru fall to the floor as she rose on suddenly weak legs. Her chakra thinned again, a pale aura that flickered around her instead of the dense cloak that had burned Hikaru.
"Please just stop," Eimi pleased as she knelt beside Sasuke. "Please." She raised her weapon, and Sakura took a step forward before freezing. "It's over," Eimi said. Sakura growled. If she hurt Sasuke -
Eimi cut the wires that bound her captive. Sasuke instantly shoved her aside and tried to rise, but he collapsed to his knees next to her instead. "What?" Sakura asked, trying to keep her voice steady.
"It's over," Eimi said again. "I... I can't beat you. Kasumi and Hikaru are..." she trailed off. "You win, Sakura-san."
"You... surrender?" Sakura asked.
"Yes," Eimi said quickly. "Please. We never wanted to do this. Even Kasumi argued with Tetsu-sensei about it, but we had to follow orders. Please. Don't hurt my teammates any more."
"Your village would have done worse to Naruto-kun and Sasuke-kun," Sakura snapped.
"Yes," Eimi said softly, looking down. "I know. I should have... I don't know. Maybe I should have warned -"
"I'd advise you not to finish that sentence, Eimi-kun," a new voice said from the main doorway.
Eimi paled. "Testu-sensei."
Sakura looked up. The Cloud jounin's face was expressionless. His metal arm pointed straight at Sakura. This was the man who was truly responsible. For the first time, Sakura deliberately tried to raise the fury of the Nine-Tails, and it eagerly complied. Red chakra thickened again in an instant, almost becoming a shroud to cover her whole body as she stepped away from the fallen Cloud genin and toward their teacher.
Seals on the man's metal arm began to glow. "I'll have to finish this quickly," he said. "Hatake will be here soon, and we need hostages before then. Stay out of my way, Eimi-kun, and keep the Uchiha secure. We'll talk about the rest later."
"Yes, sir," the chuunin said weakly, but Sakura couldn't waste any attention on her, because in the same instant a bolt of lightning shot from the jounin's arm at her and the battle was joined.