Akamatsuverse Baking with Sempai

#1
Part 1

In the golden warmth of a lazy summer afternoon, footsteps echoed through a brightly illuminated hallway, climbing the stairs of the nearly abandoned building as a solitary figure headed towards the balcony. Outside was a beautiful day, the sun was shining and the air was cool. Not a cloud in the sky, the perfect day to be outside many would say. Sadly those that disagreed would apparently be the renters of the Hinata inn as most of it's residents having retreated into their rooms prior and stubbornly remaining inside.

Motoko paused to soak in the sun. it was the perfect day to practice. Just another lucky day in a long line of lucky days. Everything was going her way it would seem. Taking in a deep breath she unsheathed her sword and began her drills.

The girl soon lost herself in the comforting repetition. Swing, slash, block, block, parry, thrust. It helped calm her while training her reflexes. She never felt so right as with a sword in her hand. The perfect extension of her body. Even if it wasn't originally her sword the Hina-blade still felt right in her grip, it's evil purified by herself.

She let her thoughts start to drift, though never slacking in her practice. Her mind drifted towards her housemates and recent events. Sarah had gone to live with Haruka-san at the Tea house over a week ago and hadn't been heard from since.
Good riddance Motoko didn't normally consider herself one to irrationally dislike someone but the little girl just annoyed her and with her gone the inn settled down quite a bit.

Kitsune's luck had taken an unfortunate turn, having been laid off by her publisher the usually fun-loving prankster had gone into a funk. With her dept piling up the fox had finally called it quits and retreated to her room with several large bottles of Sake and Motoko hadn't seen hide nor hair of her since. While she loved her older friend Motoko couldn't help but enjoy the lack of uncomfortable teasing and would miss the break when Kitsune got over her bender.

Suu too had retreated to her room 2 days previous shouting about Shinobu and bananas. Motoko just assumed she was building another mecha-tama (shiver) or other destructive device. While Motoko's bed now seemed uncomfortably large and cold she took it as a trade off for no longer waking up with a foot shoved in her face.

Naru was busy studying. The pressure of going to Todai had taken it's toll on the poor girl and she would often lock herself up for days at a time to study. Even when she did venture outside she more closely resembled a zombie than the lively girl she had been prior to test season not even paying much attention to her newly returned love interest. Motoko was torn, she truly wanted what was best for her friend, to be healthy and happy but some little piece of her could help wanting her to continue a little longer, just until Motoko could get closer to Urashima.

Keitaro, There was a conundrum if there ever was one. Her pace increased, Motoko tried to ignore the conflicting feelings his name brought up inside her. The landlord had recently returned from his 6 month journey abroad a new man. More mature, more responsible, while inside he was the same clumsy lovable looser there was no denying that he'd certainly cleaned up a bit over seas. She remember Kitsune even joke that some lucky flo- American girl had made Urashima a man! Hmph, like any woman would ever find him desirable, with his perversions and stupid antics and sexy glasses and tigh a

Motoko barely caught her stumble. Stupid Urashima, not even here and still causing her trouble! She could have cut off her leg, curse his se- perversion! His perversion! Don't think about how the glasses bring out those his eyes!

After some lengthy meditation Motoko's thoughts finally settled and she continued on with her routine for a while longer. She never felt so alive as she did practicing swordsmanship. It was her life, her soul, her entire world.


Resting she looked up in the sky and saw it was getting late, and then she remembered she had agreed to meet Shinobu in the kitchen.

Early that morning the shy youngest tenant sought her out and ask for her help. Help with what Motoko couldn't fathom, a master kendoist she may be but her skill with a sword most certainly did not belay any skill with a santoku. She briefly considered blowing the whole thing off and going on with her practice, maybe heading off into the forest to meditate so not to humiliate herself in front of Shinobu. But her conscience got the better of her, she knew that leaving the poor girl like that would devastate her already fragile self esteem. The very thought of possibly causing such a cute and innocent girl like Shinobu to cry was like knife twisting in her stomach. Resolve affirmed Motoko headed towards downstairs


Upon arriving at the kitchen she greeted Shinobu who reacted by squeaking in surprise before relaxing at finding only her friend behind her.

"M-motoko-senpai! Th-thank you for coming" The shy girl bowed.

"I'm sorry I'm late Shinobu-chan, I was out doing my afternoon exercises and lost track of time." Motoko apologized. She'd been in rush and had neglected to return to her room to change or even drop off her blade.

Shinobu smiled up at her and gently accepted the sword hugging it close, "You're here now and that's all that matters to me Senpai. I've been waiting for you to come since this morning."

Motoko gave an uncomfortable laugh, while she like the fact the demure girl was starting to come out of her shell feeling such innocent shining eyes of admiration on her was making her nervous. The fact she was smelled and was still dressing in her sweaty training cloths in a room that practically stood for all her failures in femininity most certainly did not help.

"So Shinobu-chan" Motoko prodded, "why did you ask me to come here? Did you need me to fetch something from the groccer, lift something heavy, reach-"

"We're going to make Senpai dinner." smile.

"Cooking? Surely not, you remember I" Motoko hesitated, not wanting to admit weakness before conceeding "I am not very talented in that area"

Shinobu continued to smile up at her "Don't worry Sempai, I only need your help with prepare some of the ingredients!"

"I'm still not so sure it a good idea..." Motoko continued to look for a way out, to not embarass herself in front of the girl.

"Please Sempai..." maybe it was a trick of the light but Shinobu's smile seemed a little more forced, "I can't do this on my own. I'll do most of the preparations and cooking."

Motoko still looked indecisive. "...Besides, making a tasty dish can help you impress the one you like"

Motoko did a double take, had Shinobu really just said that? Shinobu was blushing and looking at her feet, hair obscuring most of her face. Indecision warred in her, she wanted to help Shinobu-chan, she really did. But did she want Shinobu's hard work wasted on that pervert Urashima!? But wouldn't it be her dish as well? Both thoughts caused an uncomfortable twinge in her chest. After a moment she came to a decision.

"Very well" she agreed, as long as Shinobu-chan was happy she told herself, "What do you need me to do?"

"Step 1: Eat this muffin!" Said muffing was then thrust in her face by a very enthused Shinobu.

"...What? I thought I was supposed to help you make something?"

"I made this for you earlier, it's American." nudge nudge, "please take it."

"O-kay..." Motoko said taking the muffin nervously. "What does eating this have to do with baking?"

"It's a very important step Senpai. Now eat the muffin."

Motoko gave Shinobu one last worried glace before biting into the muffin, what was the harm? Shinobu hadn't a single wicked bone in her little body. Perhaps she just wasn't feeling well, maybe the heat of the kitchen was getting to her. As she started to chew Motoko thought the muffin tasted odd. Not bad, but definitely not like a muffin should taste. Had she a frame of reference she might have compared it to meatloaf.

"Now what Shinobu-chan?" Motoko asked after finishing the muffin.

"Step 2: Rohypnol!"

"Sure I'll go- Wait, what?" Motoko started to feel dizzy and lightheaded. The world swam around her as she collapsed. The last image she saw was Shinobu smiling down at her like an angel, Motoko's sword still clenched in her hands.

"Now to start the preparations!" Shinobu walked over to her victim and casually grabbed Motoko's hand and started to drag her body towards the door.

...or at least she tried to.
"Mou~ Senpai you're too heavy... perhaps I should have thought this through a little more..." Pull "...I wish Suu-chan was still around to help me..."
 

ragnarok1337

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#2
Huh. Wonder what Shinobu's deal is. I haven't googled the chemical Shinobu laced the muffin with, so I'm going to assume it was a sedative and not deadly poison. Is Shinobu yandere for Motoko or Sempai, or is it something completely different? I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
 

Hunter 1

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#3
Assuming my memory is correct (since I have no real interest in this kind of thing, and I'm better at remembering things that interest me), rohypnol is the proper name for a rather common date rape drug.

Why Shinobu would want to do that, on the other had, interests me.
 

image

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#4
Is this another cannibal Shinbou? Please no, once was enough.
 

Prince Charon

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#5
I vaguely remember articles about rohypnol, which mention that it causes some memory loss. So, unless she's got some odd ki technique to recover memories, Motoko isn't going to remember eating the muffin, or even finishing her sword practice - maybe not even starting. This may make her suspicious, but Shinobu, like any good shinobi, is not someone you'd suspect.

Could be unpleasant for Keitaro, later.

Also, really hoping that it's not another cannibal fic. On the bright side, it doesn't look like one.
 

EagleCeres

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#7
Taking a page from the LH random info threads, I'm not quite sure Shinobu would address Motoko as "Sempai"... as she tends to reserve that word exclusively for Keitaro. Although she might add it as a suffix to the full name, eg: "Motoko-sempai" or just plain go with her tried and true polite "Motoko-san".

I'm curious what Shinobu's master plan is... and the eventual use of the subtitle in dialogue :p

Fatuous One said:
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ragnarok1337

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EagleCeres said:
Fatuous One said:
Step 3: Rape the <a href='http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/6961/0557678f0e50649e65c1c26.jpg' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>Maid<s>s</s></a>.
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But in Love Hina there are no maids!
 

Avider

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#9
I actually read the title as "Banging with Sempai."




SO YES I WAS DISAPPOINTED!
 

chronodekar

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#10
I actually enjoyed the beginning of this story. It started giving me a few ideas for my own fic. But then I reached the end.

The last 20 lines (or so) leave me with a feeling of dread. :unsure:

-chronodekar
 

Light02

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#11
Oh GOD not a remake of a very very very very creepy MLP:FIM fic called Cup Cakes

*Edited to correct a title*
 
#12
Well, fuck. a few of you guessed right on the money so the surprise is dead. Damn you and your hive mind TFF!


Hmm, I should I just post my next chapter as is to try to go a new route with this...

Mayhaps a little of both. A rather nasty alliterative bug has infected me recently (mayhaps from that dirty orphan I feasted on last night). Alas this will likely mean a lack of snippets for the day as I ponder on what to do to properly surprise you little ingrates.

This also means that the illustations I had made are also on the chopping block. Pity, more time wasted...

I shall report back in an hour with the answer to this predicament. If I don't I am either dead, forgotten, or am simply feeling lazy and answer later.
 

chronodekar

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#13
Master of Squirrel-Fu said:
Well, fuck. a few of you guessed right on the money so the surprise is dead. Damn you and your hive mind TFF!
:flameon: :rip1:

DAMN YOU !!!!! :rant:

-chronodekar
 
#14
Whelp I've given it some thought and have decided to go a new direction with this little pseudo story. Where I plan to take it even I'm no sure. But for now I'll give you a little something, the original second snip I planned to uses. Revised of course with a slightly different ending. For the first half, at least one of you is going to notice what I heavily drew from as inspiration, though for the later half I decided to go a different path. I know no one could have guessed the last little twist.



Original Part 2: Edited Edition : Nightmare Route: A Dinner is You!: A Tale of Soylent Muffins


The first thing she notice was the stench. The putrid smell of rotting meat. So heavy the rancid scent that all she could do for her first moments of regain consciousness was try to hold back the bile in her throat. Once her stomach started to settle she tried to get a sense of her situation. It was cold, freezing cold. It was so dark she ould barely see in front of her face. Her ears could pick up a dripping sound and a low grinding like the familiar sound of a whetstone on a katana that would normally give her comfort and peace. She tried to shake her head but found that the taut leather strap kept it firmly in place.

Motoko was scared she couldn't remember how she got here or even her memory of how this could have happened was fuzzy. She struggled to move, but the braces around her chest and limbs glued her to the upright planks. Her legs were spread wide apart to remove any leverage.
The grinding stopped.

"Oh Motoko Sempai your awake! Oh dear I'm not quite done preparing yet..."

"Shi- Shinobu-chan what's going on?" Motoko ask trying to keep calm.

"We're preparing a dinner for Keitaro-Senpai, Motoko-sempai. Did you forget already?" The younger girl teased mischiviously. Absently Motoko noted that the grinding noise started up again.

"Why am I tied up, I thought I supposed to help?"

Shinobu giggled from where ever she was outside of Motoko's sight, "You are helping senpai! I was going to make Sempai a delicious meal but I didn't have all the right ingredients. ...Mou~ it's still not sharp enough..."

"The ingredients?" Motoko was starting to panic, "Then just let me go and i'll go get it for-"

"I'm sorry Senpai, but I already got my secret ingredient and I can't just let you run off before we get started, how will we ever make a tasty dish for Keitaro-Sempai if you leave?"

"Urashima?" Motoko shouted, rage replacing her fear, "I would never make a meal for that perverted worm!"

"Motoko Senpai you shouldn't be so hard on Keitaro-sempai he trying his best. It's not his fault he's so clumsy. Hmhm~ Ah, I'll make you into a very tasty meal for sempai as an apology! ...Aww~ Still too dull" Grind

Motoko was about to make another retort about Keitaro horrible perversions when Shinobu's words caught her attention. "What was that you said"

"Oh it's just that this blade is starting to dull on th-"

"No Shinobu-chan before that" Motoko hoped she heard wrong.

"Ah, about making you a tasty meal for Sempai? I just think he deserves an apology for how hard you are on him" Shinobu pouted, not that Motoko could see her from where she was still strapped down.

"Sh-Shinobu-chan," Motoko choked, Hoping against hope that somehow someway her suspicions were wrong. "What was that

ingredient you were missing?"

"Hmm, It was a special Sake blend. I was hoping to use it as a marinade..." Grind~ "I'm sure it'll make you taste positively delicious senpai!"

"No. nononono" It couldn't be true, shy innocent Shinobu couldn't possibly want to kill her. She started to laugh "Haha, he. Oh you sure got me Shinobu-chan. That was a very funny joke just now very good. Now let me go please"

"Oh thank you Sempai, but I don't know what you're talking about what joke?"

"Please Shinobu! Let me go now, This isn't funny!"

"Than why did you laugh and say it was?" Shinobu asked finaly walking into veiw. her face showed genuine confusion though that's not what Motoko noticed. Motoko's eyes widened in panic and she renewed her struggling when she saw just what she was carrying.

"Mou~ I'm sorry Motoko-Sempai but I couldn't get it sharp enough" Shinobu smiled and held up the worn cleaver, looking even larger than it was against her small frame, "But I won't keep you waiting any longer."

"No please Shinobu..." Motoko started to hyperventilating trying to find a way out "We're friends aren't we?"

"Mhm!" The little girl chirped, "You, Kitsune-sempai, Naru Sempai, Haruka-san, Suu-chan, and Sarah-chan, everybody! And I'm so happy you're going to help me with Keitaro-sempai. Friends help friends right?"

"Shinobu, their going to notice me missing" Maybe she could scare the girl into letting her go, "they'll start looking and they'll find out, they know it was you"

"Don't be silly sempai, no will notice." Shinobu giggled, "You didn't after all..."

And then Shinobu flipped on the light switch.

Motoko's mouth open but no words came, she could only gape in horrified awe at just what she was seeing. Blood caked the wall in layers. in the corner sat a pile of bloody something bits of bone poking out. Skinned bodies hung from various hooks alongside them was their intestine stuffed like sausage. On top of a blood cover table on the far side of the room sat a ribcage, striped clean, a meat grinder and various butcher's tools. She cringed when she saw on the table nearest her were the heads of her kohai from school, guilt hit her as unbidden memories on how she enjoyed their absence surfaced. Averting her gaze her eyes locked onto a tapestry on the wall opposite made from stitched together skins.

Motoko felt something rubbing her leg. The young chef now donning a bloody apron was squeezing her thigh.

"Awawa, your quite fit sempai I'm getting jealous..." Shinobu gave her an appreciative once over, "I might have to tenderize it but I'll bet you'll be very lean!"

"P-please Shinobu-chan don't do this" Motoko choked out "I'm sorry. What ever I did to you I'm sorry! please do-don't-"

"Ah please don't sad sempai" Shinobu looked around before disappearing from Motoko's view soon followed by the creak of an

opening door. "I know just the thing to cheer you up!"

The seconds passed like an eternity to Motoko who continued to plead for Shinobu to let her go. begging, sobbing to herself. Finally Shinobu found what she wanted and Motoko clenched her eyes not wanting to see anymore of this nightmare.

"Howdys Motoko-chan! Whatcha doing down here?"

"Suu!" renewed hope blooming in her chest Motoko called out to her friend again, " Suu I've never been so happy. Please quick you have to untie me!"

"Okies! And then we'll go play games right!" step step

"Yes of course! anything you want Suu" please just hurry before she comes back

"So~ we can play with Keitaros too?" step step

"Yes anything! just please untie me quick!"

"So you'll hit him again and Suu can kick him in the face right! And then we can make a big mess for Shinomu to clean up!" step step

"ye-" Motoko blink, that didn't sound like Suu. Not just the words were off but the voice was starting to falter. "Suu?"

"Yeah Mo-to-ko-Chan?" 'Suu' finally came into Motoko's line of sight. "You want to Play with Suu right? Smiley Smiley"

No. No... It hurt, it hurt so much to see this, like a red hot iron stake through her heart. She closed her eyes shut as tight as she could to block it out to no avail, the image burning itself on her very soul. "Please, god, no..."

"'Come on Motoko-chan!'" 'Suu' cheered. "'What's Rohypnol, do think it's tasty?'"

"Not Suu," Motoko ignored her. "Not Suu..."

"Do you like it? I made it myself." Shinobu pulled off the mask she was wearing "I caught her the other day after we came home from school. I almost didn't go through with it I had such a hard time finding a recipe for her. But boy let me tell you it was worth it for that exotic flavor! Much better than I expected, You remember it don't you! The Molmolian dish yesterday?"

Yes, Motoko could remember, a large roast marinaded in a sweet sauce made from exotic fruits. She remembered wondering why Suu wasn't there, she would have loved the sweet taste and it wasn't like her to miss the banana themed deserts. It was delicious. Suu was delicious. Once again bile rose in her throat.

"Suu was a good friend it would have been a shame to just cook her so I made myself a little something with the leftovers," She started playing with the mask in her hand. "It took a lot of work to get it off in one piece, and getting the chemicals to preserve it and the timing...Mou~ but it was worth it for Suu-chan! Baby soft skin and such silky hair, here have a feel"

Motoko just sobbed and withered, shedding tears for her lost friend praying for her soul as Shinobu rubbed Suu's face against Motoko's.

"Ah! I'd almost forgotten, sorry about that Motoko-sempai it was rude of me to keep you in suspense." Shinobu chirped, casually tossing Suu's remains over her shoulder she once again picked up her cleaver. Bringing her fists up in a show determination, "Don't worry Sempai I'm all business now! I'll make you my most delicious dish yet!"

Without any warning Shinobu lifted the large blade above her head and brought it down on Motoko's right leg in a flash lodging itself halfway through the femur. For a brief moment there was nothing just the shock but all to soon the pain registered. Like a searing hot metal rod shoved into her skull. A shrill scream tore itself out of the young womans throat.

Her body bucked up in knee-jerk reaction, unfortunately disrupting Shinobu's aim, who had efficiently removed the blade and was readying it for a second swing. She hit her mark but at a wide angle and so had accidentally cut deeply into Motoko's thigh muscle.

"Sempai, be careful or you'll spoil the cut" Adjusting her aim Shinobu brought the knife down again. And again. and again. Each strike eliciting another scream from her struggling captive. Shinobu, covered in blood but no closer to her goal, gave the knife her fiercest glare. She ran her finger up and down the length of the blade "Mou~ I guess I shouldn't have rushed it, I'm so embarrassed using such poor cutlery. I'll be right back Sempai."

Shinobu casually tossed the blade aside and went off to search for a better tool for the job leaving Motoko cold, injured, and alone. Motoko cried to herself as she heard the clink of metal on metal of Shinobu looking for more instruments of pain.

"No" Thunk "No" thunk "... no" Thunk "Oh this might be fun! Don't worry Sempai I found just the thing!"

Shinobu ran back in and Motoko saw what she held. She had been prepared for anything, from the nightmarish to the mundane but once she laid eyes on Shinobu's new toy she felt her heart impossibly sink even farther.

"I'm just like you sempai!" Shinobu swung the katana around striking poses and making the occasional 'woosh' sound "Hehe This'll work perfectly!"

The final humiliation Motoko braced herself, no longer bothering to struggle Helpless, wounded, at the mercy of a little girl, to be killed by my own blade. At least it'll be quick...

Motoko's prediction proved correct. Even with Shinobu's clumsy untrained slash the unnatural keenness of the Hina-blade allowed it to cut through flesh and bone like wet tissue. In an instant the leg was completely severed and blood flowed freely. Motoko blacked out quickly, not bothering to fight the fuzziness gripping her thoughts nor the blackness eating away at her vision.


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The next time Motoko opened her eyes her sight was filled with Shinobu. The girls face hovering centimeters from her, staring into her eyes with an expression of utter fascination. She moved her mouth though the significance was lost her awakening roommate. Motoko stared back without comprehension, the fog of sleep still obscuring her mind and dulling her understanding. This tableau of blissful one-sided ignorance stood for a few seconds as the older's brain completed it's reboot. And then Motoko's eyes widen, in fear, anger, shock, a veritable bout of emotions played face the moment understanding finally sunk in, memories and comprehension flooding back. A smile bloomed on Shinobu's face as she saw this.

"Sempai, you're awake" She looked as if she had just been given a puppy.

Motoko's reply was a low keening noise forced out her clenched jaw. With her sense returned so too had her senses and her body filled her brain in on just what it had missed. Phantom pains from her missing leg was the most obvious, this was followed by a dull ache resonating from every muscle in her body at once. Echos of exhaustion were chased off by adrenalin, though still nagging on the peripheral of her consciousness as if waiting for a chance to steal her back to the land of nod. As her mind (far to slowly in her opinion) adjusted to the pains she noticed a discrepancy. Her lower half was a blank, there was no sensations forthcoming from below her waist, not pain, not anything. Only a gentle numbness followed by the complete lack of sensation answered her.

This did not comfort Motoko. Not. One. Bit.

She returned her attention to her tormenter who had returned to staring at her like she expected Motoko to suddenly reveal the secrets of the universe. She was also chewing something. Motoko just glared back at her as she swallowed whatever it

was she was eating. Shinobu just replaced the snack and continued to stare expectingly at the older girl. Stare, chew chew. Gulp.

Chew, chew, chew. Gulp

Chew, chew, ch-

The girl froze, eyes widening. The blush that spread across her face was nearly luminescent. "Ah! Oh I'm so sorry that so rude of me! Would you like some too Motoko-sempai?"

Motoko opened her mouth to deny, in fact, that she wanted any but struggled to get her throat to work properly. Shinobu took this as agreement and promptly place some in her mouth. Which was quickly spat back in her face in defiance by her irate captive.

"Eww! No! That's mean Motoko-sempai!" She pouted and wiped her face, "You're being very rude you know. First You fall asleep in the middle of helping me make dinner for Sempai and now you're wasting food... Mou~ If you don't start being nice then we won't be able to finish before dinner time..."

Motoko glare at her, focusing all of her pain and anger through her eyes. Shinobu, seeing her admonishment ignored, sighed and shook her head. A quick muttering of "Sorry Motoko-sempai but I warned you..." she then started to fiddle with something sitting beside her. That was all the warning Motoko received.

The next instant Motoko's entire existence was Pain. Her body jerked and spasmed wildly, her back arced, arms straining against her restraints with enough force to snap bones like twigs. The electricity coarsed through her body for several seconds that seemed to stretch into an eternity. But it did eventually end, and Motoko collapsed into herself like a marionette with it's strings cut. Her muscles relaxed but giving sporadic twitchs and jerks. Motoko felt her heart stop.

Once again her eyes clouded and darkness threatened to take her and once again she embraced it, a release from the pain...

And then Shinobu reconnected the circuit and Motoko started jerking once again. This scene repeated itself 9 more times. A broken girl lay where Aoyama Motoko once had, Both arms broken under the weight of her own body's struggles, muscles torn, cover in sweat and other more unpleasant fluids that had escaped her body, her eyes out of focus staring into nothing. Her heart beating once again, arhythmically, in a struggling to keep her alive, pumping what little air her lungs could snatch from her shallow breaths. Shinobu ignored all this and smiled down on her, the same smile she wore around the inn everyday.

"Motoko-sempai, are you ready to apologize?" It was the same question she asked between every session, "Are you going to help me make dinner for Sempai?"

Tears rolled down the poor girls cheeks but she gave no response still starting off into space mouth slightly gaping, as if trapped in her own little world. Shinobu waited patiently and asked again, no response, Shinobu asked a final time. Again no response, sighing the girl reached for the switch before her eyes caught something. Motoko's lips twitch and her jaw started to loosely twitch up and down. Her eyes still gave the unfocused thousand-yard stare but her mouth started to mouth words near inaudibly. Shinobu hmmed and put her ear directly in front of Motoko's mouth, straining her hearing to catch a response.

"rry... So sorry... please... I... so sorr...please... rry" The mantra continued, neither gaining nor losing strength.

"That's great sempai, now would you like to try some more food?" Shinobu smiled down at her, gently stroking the loose strands of hair off her face. Motoko just continued mumbling. Shinobu picked up the dish sitting on a stand next to her and carefully selected a sample, then delecatly placed it into Motoko's mouth. Motoko just continued muttering, ignoring the foreign object in her mouth even as it slid into her thoat, and began to gurgle but still did not stop.

Only Shinobu's quick reaction saved her, she pulled the glob out and inspected it. She popped it into her mouth and again turned to the tray for another treat for her catatonic friend. This time removing the restraints and lifting Motoko's head she replaced the treat, gently guiding her jaw to chew and massaging her throat to get her to swallow. She repeated this until Motoko began to do so herself.

"Do you like it Motoko-sempai?" She got no response, the girl continued to eat with dead unfocused eyes, though tears no longer flowed. "I had wanted to you to be the first to try it... Taste testing is a very important part of cooking."

Shinobu continued to feed her until the plate was finally cleaned before gently laying her head down. She then walked away.

Motoko again lay alone in the room with only a dull clinking as Shinobu went to go search for the appropriate tools for the final stage. When she returned, pushing a gurney she found Motoko's dead eyes gazing at some point far above her head, through the concrete and linoleum ceiling above them. She smiled and began the preparations...

Taking the towel and bucket Shinobu gently but methodically began to clean Motoko's stained flesh. The entirety was covered in sweat, her chest had a layer of bile where her stomach contents had evacuated themselves, her lower half where her bowls had done the same, the stumps where once her long beautiful legs had been were now charred stumps, the bones where the wires had been attached blackened. But Shinobu just rinsed the towel and continued to bath her.

When she was finished Motoko once again looked pristine from the waist up. Shinobu had even taken the time and effort to clean and fix the kendoka's hair from it's once disheveled state. Shinobu smiled proudly down at her work and grabbed the next tool.

"Why" Shinobu very nearly didn't hear it, even than she almost though it was just her imagination. But still she turned and found Motoko, lifting her head, eyes still foggy but trying valiantly to focus on her. Shinobu smiled, she glided over to the girl. Gently, as if it was made of the finest glass, Shinobu guided Motoko's head back down. She didn't resist, just keeping her eyes on the youngers even as her head drew closer towards hers. Shinobu's lips met hers, though she still didn't react. There was nothing in it, it was not a deep kiss, just lip contact, there was no romantic feelings inside it.

But still it felt warm, like a greeting, a hug between friends. And then there was a prick on the side of her neck and Shinobu withdrew holding a syringe. Motoko stared blankly, mind unable to string two thoughts together let alone understand the words flowing from her former friends mouth.

"Speci... drug... numbing a... 't fee... g below... eck" A stream of nonsense just flowed from her kohai's mouth, but she'd given up trying to decipher it. Shinobu had disappeared at some point and now there was cold feeling on her stomach, as if someone had run an ice-cube from the middle of her chest to below her naval. Motoko didn't pay it any mind, nor the wet squelching noise that soon followed.

She laid her head back and let her thoughts wonder. They drifted in in out with litle rhyme or reason. She though of Tsuruko, her Aneue would not be pleased by her laziness. She was sure to receive an epic tongue lashing when Aneue came to vist again...

Suu... she wanted to see Suu again, the smile on her face, her laughter, her warmth. She remember her first night with Suu, it was aggravating at first, the little girl repeatedly beating her unconsciously. But in her nocturnal mumbles she had found a comrade in loneliness, separated from treasured family as well... Though she could do without Suu's cooking so spicy. ...cooking? Suu? What? Oh maybe she should make something for her friend, perhaps some bananas and wasabi... hehehe even she wasn't that bad...

Her thoughts continued to wander all around. She didn't care about what Shinobu was doing. It no longer hurt... Actually it kind of tickled. It was just a mass of tingling sensations below her breast, All she could feel was the steady and slowing beat of her heart and the expansion of her lungs the rest was incomprehensible. Though she felt oddly empty...

It ends and Shinobu raises. She's red... she's holding something long... it's familiar, comforting, Shinobu brings it down. Chop... it's getting darker, so cold...

Maybe she could ask Kitsune for some Sake to warm her up. the fun loving fox always had a large supply and was willing to share if asked... She needed to act more proper though parading around in lingerie teasing everyone, like that Urashima...

Urashima... Urashima. Keitaro. Urashima. Keitaro. Motoko. Urashima Motoko... She liked the sound of that... She couldn't muster up the will to lie to herself. Thoughts of Urashima and herself brought a steady warmth to her. Memories flooded her thoughts. Urashima arriving, Urashima beating her on accident, Urashima bathing with her, Urashima helping her, Urashima comforting her, Urashima Urashima Urashima. Keitaro... Naru calls him that... Keitaro and Naru, they loved each other...

I wish you would smile at me like you do her

Keitaro and her. If Keitaro loved her, They'd be together. A loving reunion after his return from America. She could see her friends smiling for her, sad smiles, they too loved the man and who could blame them. But still they were happy for her... She saw Naru's face, hers was the saddest so full of regrets... it pained her, on how that look hurt. But she still loved Keitaro. She cared but still she would not hand over Keitaro...

Time flew by they stayed at the inn even as the others left one by one. even Naru... The two now had a beautiful family, two lovely girls and a happy little boy. She would raise him to be a true chivirous man, not a lecherous idiot like his father... her lecherous idiot and not anyone elses. She didn't become a perfect wife for her husband, and he loved her for this, for her faults. She had tried to raise her skills as a woman to her skills as a warior, and she improved but only with the comfort and suport of her Keitaro...

They're old now, their children had grown and had children of their own. they spend their days with their family and friends and finally her time has come. Family and friends surround her, their beautiful children, their loyal friends... but as she drifts off her eyes are only on her husband. He looked so sad so lost. She had a million things to say but no time the darkness was creeping. She becons him. they share one last kiss and as he rises his eyes seem differnt... it's nothing... She looks at him. A lifetime together, She smiles and the words flow with tears

It was a dream a fairy tale "Ke" but she couldn't help feeling happiness "I" He was an idiot, a pervert, couldn't swing a sword to save his life "Ta" And she loved him, and she would forever love him, he was hers and she his "Ro" Forever...


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Shinobu stared at the head of Aoyama Motoko. It didn't stare back. She held her new trophy in her hands examining it. It's face, once marred by pain, anger, and fear now looked like it was slumbering peacefully a small but loving smile adorned it's lips. Shinobu just stared at it without expresion. And then she let it drop.

It landed with a plunk in a tub of colored and strong smelling liquid. A preservitive. Shinobu just coninuted to stare at the head.

"Just like all the others" She fell to her knees and supported her head on the tub, never taking her eyes off the head. "every. single. one. just as it ends you smile... and say his name..."

She sighed and turned around.

"But in the end you're all still dead..." She stood up and brushed the dirt off her apron, "And that means I win."


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Keitaro was not worried. No, Keitaro was hysterical. At first he had expected everything to go back to the way it was when he'd returned to Hinata Sou. Maybe even a welcome back party if he was honest. He had not expected the somber air of the once lively inn, the verious inhabitants shuffling around like death warmed over before retreating to their rooms.

At first Keitaro had assumed they were just avoiding him, mad at his leaving them to whatever problems had caused them to seem so down. And he'd taken it. But after so long without having seen any trace of them he grew worried and checked up on them. There was no one. The house was empty. Every single room looked like it hadn't been visited in days or weeks. Their possesions untouched as if they had simply disapeared one after the other...

Adreniline in his veins he moved as fast as he could to check every nook and cranny of the inn. No one in the attic, the baths and kitchen empty, even the verious hidden doors and holes that Suu and Sarah so loved to explore where completely devoid of life. He nearly tore the Inn down in his search but found nothing. Not a single clue as to what had happend.

He colapsed into a boneless heap on the floor. he had failed them. he could have stopped this, if he had just noticed the signs. If he had just manned up and went to see them. if if if if. His fists pounded the floor as he listed every failing of his that lead to this tragety. Blood began to flow but he didn't care. Tears flowed freely...

"Sempai?"

Keitaro froze, he looked up and saw hope. He leapt to his feet and lunged at the girl. His arms wrapped around her like a life perserver and hung on tight so she that she couldn't just somehow float away.

"S-Sempai!?"

"Oh thank god Shinobu!" he gave her one last squeeze just to be sure she was real before grabing hold of her shoulders and questioning her, "Where is everyone!? What's happened!? Where were you!?"

Shinobu squeeked "S-sempai please! You need to calm down, maybe if you should eat-"

"We don't have time to eat we have to find the rest of the girls!" They needed to hurry, Shinobu's apearence had given him hope that maybe the others might still be okay.

"Sempai you're hurting me!"

The kanrinin stopped. As he calmed he finally saw Shinobu's face, he saw the fear, he saw tears starting to form in her eyes. he stumbled back letting go of her arms, and guiltily noted that there apeared to be marks where he had grabed her. he landed a few feet away on his backside and she colapsed holding herself. he lowered his head in shame.

They sat like that for a while, each unwilling to broach the awkward silence. Finally Keitaro had enough

"Shinobu, I'm sorry..."

"I-it's okay sempai"

"I didn't mean to hurt you or scare you."

"It's fine sempai... You were only worried about everyone."

The silence returned only this time not so opresive

"...would you like me to make something for you to eat sempai?"

"...Yes, thank you..."


They retreated to the kitchen. The Kanrinin sat in silence at the table trying to collect himself as his only clue towards whatever what going on hummed to herself preparing something to fill thier stomachs. after a long wait the meal was prepared and the Shinobu set the table for the two of them. They beagan on their meal in silence.

"Thank you Shinobu-chan," Keitaro smiled "that was very good."

"Thank you sempai, it was very hard to gather the right ingredients... Oh would you like some tea?"

"Yes please," Keitaro sighed, "I could really use a glass about now..."

Shinobu soon handed him a glass which he drained quickily before looking curiously at his cup.

"Shinobu-chan... Was this a new blend?"

"No Sempai, I just added a little something to help with your nerves"

Keitaro's hands began to shake, he looked at Shinobu dread on his face "Shinobu, what did you put in my tea?"

"...Rohypnol."

Keitaro collapsed, but still he tried his hardest to fight for conciousness even as his mind began to cloud. He saw Shinobu's feet aproaching. She knelt down next to him and set his head on her lap. He struggled to move to do anything at all but his body wasn't responding and his vision swam.

"Don't worry we're all alone now," She began to rub his head, "Those girls are gone now, now it's just you and me. Like it was always supposed to be..."

All Keitaro could see now were blurrs some black-blur had lept on the Shinobu-blur. The Shinobu blur petted it and then started to touch her face. Was, Was she peeling off her own face!? Shinobu?-blur moved closer and instead of red the blur was still pink. It opened it's mouth and a new yet somehow familiar voice came out.

"We'll be together forever O-nii-chan~"
 

DhampyrX2

Well-Known Member
#15
Really? It was just Kanako on a killing spree? That's the big twist?
 

jaredstar

Well-Known Member
#16
:sick2: :sick: :sick3:


i think i wanna puke a little

That is easily one of the most disturbing things i have ever read (is only a few steps behind agony in pink)
 

The Ero-Sennin

The Eyes of Heaven
Staff member
#17
Meh, Derivative. <_<
 

zeebee1

Well-Known Member
#18
And thus another person understands that Kanako is scum but still writes her out of character.

Also, I'm awaiting the seqeul where granny Hina comes out, kills Kanako, and raises the other girls from the dead with her voodoo magic.
 

ThreadWeaver

Beware of Dog. Cat not trustworthy either.
#19
zeebee1 said:
And thus another person understands that Kanako is scum but still writes her out of character.

Also, I'm awaiting the seqeul where granny Hina comes out, kills Kanako, and raises the other girls from the dead with her voodoo magic.
Raising from the dead? Better be some seriously strong magic since they've all.... lost significant weight... from the experience. That or she'll have to follow Keitaro around with a pooper-scooper for a week.

Okay, the story was gross and unsettling, but that just image just sent it over the top...

:sick: :sick3:
 
#20
<a href='http://squirrelly-sama.deviantart.com/#/d57dbt4' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>Because I hate you all.</a>
 

chronodekar

Obsessively signs his posts
Staff member
#23
I am .... uncomfortable ... reading this kind of thing.

:(

-chronodekar
 

The Ero-Sennin

The Eyes of Heaven
Staff member
#25
Oh no, Kanako went on a murderous rampage.

Shinobu, Kanako, they're too easy to set off onto killing sprees. Keitaro too.

Here's a project for anyone who dares to pick it up.

"Mitsune Konno the Homicidal Psychopath"
 
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