Naruto Dead Nin Tell Tales

KurokamiDG

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sith2886 said:
Anyonr else get turned on by reading this?
This.

That was oddly hot. I'm honestly not sure why, but that was pretty...yeah...
 

windfalcon

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Thanks for the feedback guys ^^ Course, I KNOW Itachi had his own purposes, and this was written early into Shippuuden... but is it true he really DIDN'T kill Shisui?! I am out of the loop when it comes to this junk, so any canonical failings are needed to be pointed out.

Alternatively... shoudl he had done something to help Shisui, or was him being too traumatized to move til the Police got there too much? I know the event is helping to shape him, but I'd like to make sure things go decently.
 

KurokamiDG

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Well Naruto was still a relatively innocent kid at the time of the massacre so I don't really expect him to even be capable of functioning after watching that.

I am wondering just how Naruto freaked Itachi out to the point where he forced himself out of Tsukuyomi, but seeing as how he just recently gained the Mangekyo ability I'm not surprised that someone with a strong will could break out of it.

Still odd though.
 

windfalcon

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KurokamiDG said:
Well Naruto was still a relatively innocent kid at the time of the massacre so I don't really expect him to even be capable of functioning after watching that.

I am wondering just how Naruto freaked Itachi out to the point where he forced himself out of Tsukuyomi, but seeing as how he just recently gained the Mangekyo ability I'm not surprised that someone with a strong will could break out of it.

Still odd though.
What freaked Itachi out was less Naruto's will but the sudden influx of Kyuubi chakra released via Naruto getting really REALLY pissed.

Guessing it doesn;t work?
 

windfalcon

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trying out a different ending, since someone brought up doubt that Anko would have been unobserved in her interrogation...

"I'LL DO IT!"

Sarutobi jumped at Anko's insistence, placing a hand over his heart as he tried to calm himself down. "A... are you sure Anko-chan? I agree you may be the best choice, but..." Sarutobi trailed off as he searched Anko's face, only to find an intense determination and a fiery will he had not seen in a long time. Letting out a sigh, the elderly man nodded and placed a hand on Anko's shoulder. "Very well Anko-chan... I'll make this a long term B-rank mission for you to watch over Naruto-kun, complete with regular mission pay."

Anko let out a sigh of relief, before giving the old man a genuine smile. Something must have happened in there to make her feel so protective over the boy. he thought. As she was making some excuse to leave, Sarutobi gently increased the grip he had on her shoulder. "A moment Anko-chan... before you go, could you tell me what happened to your hands?"

Blinking, Anko looked down at her palms before smiling tenderly at them. "Nothing really Hokage-sama. The kid got me angry early on, so I clenched my fists a bit too hard. At the sight of blood, the kid calmed down real quick." Chuckling softly, she looked back up at Sarutobi. "I promised the kid I'd help him out... kinda made a little blood pact over it too." Blushing, the Special Jounin scratched the back of her head, laughing a bit nervously. "So... I kinda can't go back on my word now! Didn't realize what I got myself into til it happened, so I'm glad you're assigning me this Hokage-sama."

Shaking his head, the Hokage motioned for Anko to go ahead. As she left, the Hokage's kind smile turned to a thoughtful frown as he pulled his scrying orb out from one of his sleeves, watching intently as Naruto slept peacefully as Anko had said. Narrowing his eyes, Sarutobi couldn't help imagining someone else in that bed... a young boy with long black hair and skin far paler than Naruto's. Closing his eyes, Sarutobi felt the years weigh heavily on him as he sighed. "It won't be the same this time... " he swore before tucking the orb back into his sleeves.
 
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