Naruto different take on a silly cliche

[slickrcbd]

In my mind this Kyuubi seems to be a bit like Sayuri. Get rid of the other Kitsune shenanigans, give Sayuri a more appropriate age, and there you go.

"Crap. I hope I didn't crush Sasuke and Sakura..."

Wiggle. Wiggle.

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I...guess? I was thinking of Brionac from the Arago manga; the protag causes living things to rot and wither like "overfertilised plants".

I'm (the OP) unfamiliar with either of these two fandoms. I have no idea who "Sayuri" is nor Brionac.

Knight504 is obviously unfamiliar with Stargate, which goes to show that not everyone has seen everything. So much to watch/read, so little time...

 

[slickrcbd]

Sorry for the above post being messed up on the quotes. I don't know what I did wrong as I tried to fix it twice. I'm usually not this inept at BBCode.

 

[zeebee1]

Sayuri is from that fic on the site that nobody can pronounce.

 

[Hardcore Heathen]

Sayuri is from that fic on the site that nobody can pronounce.

I pronounce it, "Gen-kee-yo-in." Anybody else got a better one?

 

[ragnarok1337]

In my mind this Kyuubi seems to be a bit like Sayuri. Get rid of the other Kitsune shenanigans, give Sayuri a more appropriate age, and there you go.

"Crap. I hope I didn't crush Sasuke and Sakura..."

Wiggle. Wiggle.

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I'm (the OP) unfamiliar with either of these two fandoms. I have no idea who "Sayuri" is nor Brionac.

The fic was okay when I first started reading it, and I got a kick out of the Kyuubi being a little girl that won Kyuubihood from Inari, god of foxes in a gambling contest. Also that she she wouldn't hurt anybody, and had no idea she was killing people.

Then the other Kitsune came in, and things started to go downhill. They should have been mostly relegated to the background. The moments that made it "M" were completely unnecessary, and took away from the story. I stopped reading it around the 8th chapter, and haven't looked back.

That said, the concept was amusing, and I'd like to see another take on it.

 

[Knyght]

I'm (the OP) unfamiliar with either of these two fandoms. I have no idea who "Sayuri" is nor Brionac.

Knight504 is obviously unfamiliar with Stargate, which goes to show that not everyone has seen everything. So much to watch/read, so little time...

Sayuri is an OC from Naruto Genkyouien. It was written by Daneel Rush, a member of this site, and can be found in the previews section or <a href='http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4730390/1/' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>here</a>. It's awesome and I'd definitely recommend it but YMMV.

Brionac is a protag's power in the manga ARAGO; it's not very well known but it's good. You can read it <a href='http://www.mangahere.com/manga/arago/' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>here</a> or just check out the relevant <a href='http://arago.wikia.com/wiki/Arago_Hunt' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>wiki page</a>.

 

[goldenarms]

Poisoned the Juubi's right ass cheek! While the anime dub may not bring over every single detail, usually its accurate on the big ones, and I have seen that episode recently, Kabuto mentions nothing about poison while healing her, just that (To the best of my recollection) getting hit by someone shrouded in the Kyuubi chakra is a really bad thing and can be worse than normal blows.

<a href='http://www.batoto.net/read/_/5097/naruto_v33_ch290-299_by_shannaro/100' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>Orochimaru using a snake to try and stop 4T!Naruto's attack. It's not effective.</a>

The snake is disintegrating on contact with 4T!Naruto's chakra. It's safe to say that it's, at the very least, caustic as hell, and you wouldn't want to be in contact with it for any amount of time.

Seeing how we've been told that Kurama's chakra is filled with life energy, could that be the reason for Naruto's body being continually destroyed? The life energy is what enhances Naruto's healing but due to the sheer quantity/concentration as well as hateful nature chakra, it ends up destroying his body at the same time.

Well, it's life-enhancing when Naruto takes it away from Kurama and uses it. When Kurama's doling it out, it's dyed in his malice and hatred, hence why it's so important for Naruto to wrest away that chakra. Yamato states this when he sends a Wood Clone to watch the battle, and heavily implies that if it were anyone other than Naruto, they would would have been killed a long time ago just from the sheer presence of Kurama's chakra.

 

[mortalone]

In my mind this Kyuubi seems to be a bit like Sayuri. Get rid of the other Kitsune shenanigans, give Sayuri a more appropriate age, and there you go.

"Crap. I hope I didn't crush Sasuke and Sakura..."

Wiggle. Wiggle.

* * * * * * * * * * *

I...guess? I was thinking of Brionac from the Arago manga; the protag causes living things to rot and wither like "overfertilised plants".

I'm (the OP) unfamiliar with either of these two fandoms. I have no idea who "Sayuri" is nor Brionac.

Knight504 is obviously unfamiliar with Stargate, which goes to show that not everyone has seen everything. So much to watch/read, so little time...

Sayuri is Daneel's Kyuubi. Wiggle. Wiggle. Mugyu. A cute little Kyuubi girl who is literally a child. When she attacked Konoha, she thought the ninjas were PLAYING with her. She had no concept of the pain and suffering she caused.

You'd probably want your Kyuubi to be a bit older (mentally as well as physically), but the same general premise of not being able to understand humans could apply.

 

[seitora]

Sayuri is something like 103 years old but only the last 3 years count

 

[zeebee1]

She can't be that young. She couldn't have been involved in Kitsune Poker Night until she was at least a hundred. And she spent over a decade inside the seal.

 

[RJL333]

Sayuri is 114 years old according to the character page.