Ranma ½ Divine Blood

Sect

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rdde said:
I don't really see anything compelling for a Sousuke/Kaname/Eija threesome. They're just three people trying to survive in a battlefield. For Sousuke, it could be his thousandth battle for life, and Eija should have her scraps as well; they should be emotionally well adjusted to it.
The three of them do seem to be clicking well, even from a non romantic viewpoint. The Sousuke/Kaname thing is pretty obvious, Sousuke and Eija have been working really well with each other so far, and Kaname's gotten over of her discomfort of Eija and Eija has put her life on the line for her further out than I would've thought.

So, even if there's no romantic tangle between the three of them, it's hard to not imagine them getting along well in the future.
 

Thrythlind

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"We've had repeated anomalies in the system relating to the same general area," Ere said, walking over to where Peorth was handling the paperwork end of their administrative task. "The system has it pegged as a virus."

"What are you telling me this for?" Peorth asked. "Purge it and move on."

"We've been trying," the other goddess said. "But after the automatic defenses suppress it...them we can find no trace of where it is."

"Them? Let me see the system logs in question," Peorth said frowning.

"Right, Peorth-sama," Ere said, calling up the requested information. "We've identified two at least, though one has only made a single incursion into the systems. The other is much more active, making five incursions into Yggdrasil systems and briefly infecting the file of one mortal."

Peorth frowned deeper as she took in the information and called up another screen. After a few moments of searching she found what she was looking for and displayed the recalled system log side by side with the one provided her by Ere and then she focused on a specific event.

"Does this look familiar?" Peorth asked.

"Well, it's almost exactly the same," Ere said. "Except for the lack of anti-viral activity. Is this an example of the virus before we identified it?"

"No," Peorth said. "It's an access record for a second class healing spell."

Ere blinked in surprise.

"There's no file reference link," Peorth noted. "That's why the system is mistaking it for a virus. This is a process by an orphaned file."

"What could cause that?" Ere asked.

"A few things," Peorth said. "An improperly processed demonic defector, a renegade god trying to stay out of sight, a cursed or improperly trained mortal. A few others."

"But the anti-virus defenses go into effect each time," Ere noted. "Can that be harmful?"

"Lethal," Peorth noted. "We can't deal with this without a file reference link. Speak to Kali, ask if one of her...immigrants is having magic troubles, and get me someone from security here."

"Anything else, Peorth-sama?" Ere asked.

"The mortal that was 'infected' briefly," Peorth said. "We'll need to send someone to speak with her."

"Yes, I have her file right here," Ere said, calling it up. "Oh, how lucky. She lives near the Norns."

Peorth fought the urge to growl at her subordinate.

****

Hild smiled as she read the files in front of her.

It was amazing what could be found by rooting around in the mass of Yggdrasil's operations.

Whole files wandering unlinked. People lost and forgotten by Heaven it would seem.

She moved through the four files curiously, looking for something she could use out of this discovery.

There were innumerable ways she could manipulate the discovery, but mostly in terms of indirect manipulation.

The sky-spawn was too much a danger. She could recruit him easy enough. He was arrogant enough and carried a self-righteous attitude toward anyone that hurt people he cared about. She could tell he shared the opinion of her and other demons that people who were undeserving should be punished for their sins. However, it was exactly that that she couldn't trust to take him on.

The boy would be hard to control. He might one day decide to take on his father and take the smug rapist out of the picture.

Neither Hild nor many other demons or gods would mourn the death of Zeus. Several on both sides had suffered the "pleasure" of his attentions in the past and there were a number of brothers, sisters, husbands, lovers and children that would love to see him gone.

Unfortunately, there were two things preventing the massacre the bastard deserved.

The first was that, even with a restricted license, Zeus was one of the most powerful beings in existence.

A class of his own among first class Gods.

He was prophesized to die at the hands of one of his children, but it had been tried before. No one was quite willing to make the attack on him.

At least not yet.

Then there was the doublet system.

Granted, if Hild were Kami-sama, she would have done what she could to insure that bastards like Zeus weren't part of the hostage system, but, unfortunately, the way it worked, not even her and Kami-sama knew who was part of a doublet and who wasn't. Killing Zeus quite possibly meant killing one of her own.

She'd rather not have an operative that was likely to start such a dissatisfying operation.

The mother and dark-spawn were too compassionate and protective toward others, all others. Hild respected such people and their belief in the basic goodness of a soul. However, she considered such people naive. Even this neo-woman and her daughter who were willing to kill to protect others were naive, if less so than the Gods. They mourned the fact that they had to cause those deaths, regardless of the fact that the ones they killed deserved it.

Contrary to popular belief, demons did not consider themselves evil for the most part. There were the odd demon that fit the sadistic, malevolent stereotypes, just like their were gods like Zeus in heaven, however, Demons, for the most part were marked by a particular ideology.

Happiness was finite.

And there wasn't enough for everyone.

If the person next to you was happy, then there was less happiness for you.

There had to be a regulation of who was happy and who wasn't.

Some people didn't deserve to be happy, and they had to be kept from being so. Others didn't deserve even life, much less happiness.

So they cursed the ones they felt worthless and encouraged the humans they interacted with to do likewise.

Unfortunately, those ideals would not sit well with either this mother or her youngest daughter.

But the sea-spawn.

She was reckless, eager to prove herself and protect her family. She wasn't one for holding a pointless grudge and she was just on the fencepost of agreeing with her mother on the matter of the sanctity of life...and whether all people deserved protection.

She'd make a great agent. Assuming she could be taught to be more cautious after using her recklessness to recruit her.

The only problem was that it was very, very convenient for her subordinates to stumble on a lost file before heaven did. While she couldn't look a gift horse in the mouth, there seemed to be something that smelled in all of this.

Of course, the best way to pick out a trap was to walk into it knowingly.

****

Zeus turned about and looked toward the sound of clicking heels as it echoed through his home.

Striding in to his pristine cloud-specked palace, a blood-haired woman dressed in tight leathers and stilleto heeled boots. The stench of blood seemed to cling about her as she came close to the smirking bearded figure of the old god.

"Morrigan," he said turning in his desk. "To what do I owe the pleasure of this visit?"

"I've just had a breakthrough in a case I'm working on," Morrigan said coolly.

"What case is that?" Zeus asked, smiling.

"The disappearance of Ranma Saotome," Morrigan noted.

"Since when do the Eyes of Ra care about the comings and goings of mortals," Zeus asked.

"Since a God breaks the rules and treats them like toys," Morrigan noted. She leaned forward onto his desk and stared into his face. "Until recently we'd been looking at the Chinese and Japanese, but someone recently messed around with a Musk Prince's dreams. They obscured the nature of the dreams and their name, but they left their legacy regional markers untouched. So we know it was Greek this time."

They stared at each other, Morrigan glaring into Zeus smug face.

"And because its Greek, you think it has to be me?" Zeus asked lightly.

"The disappearance of exceptional young maidens is your specialty, isn't it?" Morrigan asked.

"Last I heard, Ranma Saotome was male," Zeus protested.

"With a jusenkyo curse," Morrigan reminded him. "One that gives him a particularly attractive appearance."

"Please," Zeus noted. "I haven't played games like that since the old days when your precious 'rules' weren't even an idea yet."

"Get over yourself, Zeus," Morrigan said. "Even that long ago most of us kept a leash on our baser instincts."

"And the smell of blood around you is certainly evidence of that," Zeus taunted.

Morrigan remained unphased.

"This isn't about that incident with your granddaughter a few centuries ago, is it?" Zeus asked.

At that Morrigan growled and slammed her hand down on the desk, shattering it under her open palm.

"I'm going to find this mortal, Zeus," Morrigan said. "And when I do, she's going to give me what I need. You'll be saying goodbye to this luxury and hello to tartarus. Forever, if I have my say. I was angry enough that these games were going on, but now that I know it was you. This is personal."

Zeus stood up and smiled into her face.

"You want me to make a move, don't you," Zeus asked. "Grab your chin like the petulant woman you are and silence you with a kiss so that you can scream to your mortal-lover's clubhouse that I attacked you. This little threat and trick of yours is as transparent as your breath."

"I'm Morrigan, I don't bluff or threaten," she said firmly. "I promise."

And with that, she turned around and walked out the way she came.

****

Hecate smirked.

Everything was moving into place perfectly.

She was going to have to hide herself soon, but by then her part would be finished.

And Heaven and Hell would be a closer step to being back what they were supposed to be.
 

Andy2kk

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Nanya said:
Politics...

*SO* much fun...
So Hecate might get away scot free? Seems from that last bit her end game plan is that she wants to get rid of the doublet system?

Any chance that it will be Ranma who gets to have revenge on any of the gods? I don't see how Ranma could though, mortal compared to god level powers. One other question, will this be a Ranma-chan fic to the end or is there a chance Ranma might gain his original body back? Cause if you're not going to pair Ranma with the sexy Yui sisters. Mao (can't see her ever being interested in other women) is my second choice!
 

PCHeintz72

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Thrythlind... I'm not convinced this latest episode was the best direction. You have Hild knowing more than Heaven in regards to the Satomi's, by hacking into the very systems and files heaven is using to try to figure things out themselves. That makes little sense to me.


Mao (can't see her ever being interested in other women) is my second choice!
Hmmm... I don't know... it is not like canon really went into it. She certainly has no issues bathing with the captain and Kanami.
 

ringlhach

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Hild has always been more willing to bend the rules, if not outright break them, than the rest of the OMG cast. Well, other than Urd, anyway. It's part of Hild's job, after all. I'm sure she'd be able to identify the Satomi. Maybe not their parentage, though; I'm not really sold on that. Leanings of their power, yes; their parents, when said parents have gone out of their way to disguise it, not so much. Yeah, there's all that metaphysical crap about the law of sympathy in magic, but that'll only take you so far when someone's trying to block it. And that stuff is Hecate's bread and butter. Magic's one of her spheres of influence, after all.

While I'm thinking about it- and so I don't have to explain it- the law of sympathy is freakishly simple: like calls to like, and can be used to affect or duplicate effects on one or the other. The more alike things are, the stronger the sympathetic connection, and the better the spell's effect. Voodoo dolls are a great example.

Hild having a... recruitment plan, for lack of a better phrase, isn't really surprising, though.
 

Thrythlind

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PCHeintz72 said:
Thrythlind...? I'm not convinced this latest episode was the best direction.? You have Hild knowing more than Heaven in regards to the Satomi's, by hacking into the very systems and files heaven is using to try to figure things out themselves.? That makes little sense to me.


Mao (can't see her ever being interested in other women) is my second choice!
Hmmm... I don't know... it is not like canon really went into it. She certainly has no issues bathing with the captain and Kanami.
actually, Hild getting those files is part of Hecate's plot, as far as Hild knows a demon was poking around and got lucky...

and yeah, I vacilated on that part, hmmm...perhaps I should a comment that she felt it was a bit suspicious to come to her so easily


Canon in the novels has her and Kurz in an intimate relationship later on.

I haven't settled on Ranma-chan permanently.
 

Thrythlind

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Merida Island was a crescent shaped island in the West Pacific that did not appear on most charts and sat outside most of the important satellite paths.

The home port of the Tuatha de Danaan battle group, it was the hub for Mithril's West Pacific Fleet. With Captain Testarossa and the Special Response Team, Urzu, amongst its most illustrious members.

Tessa was here, at her desk going over her operation report and other pertinent files in preparation for the council meeting scheduled to begin in the next two hours.

She'd expected to spend only a brief time going over the facts in her report and soldify her thoughts and positions, however, she had, almost immediately found her reports had been changed.

The over all basics of the events were the same, but not all.

Her updates on Ranma Satomi's capabilities had been rendered more vague. She'd given reports on Ranma's demonstrated abilities including statements from the woman herself and some witnesses. But now the woman was played off as an independent mercenary.

There had also been reports of unusual blood work from the three children taken in for medical treatment, now very much appearing to be routine. Mention of their involvement reduced to only hostages.

Reports on the Musk, reduced to descriptions of a regional terrorist group with similar kidnapping tendencies.

Frowning, she started to pull up the various files' adjustment records and found that, as far as the computer was concerned, she was the last one to modify them.

She was pondering this as the message came in that the meeting had been pushed up by forty minutes.

"Private Farrel?" Tessa called, pushing down on the intercom. "Inform Lieutenant Commander Kalinin and Commander Mardukas that the council meeting has been pushed up to thirty minutes from now and have them meet me in the council chamber in ten minutes."

"Yes, Ma'am," the secretary said on the other end.

Gathering her information together the captain mentally prepared a new report on this breach of security. She stood up and started walking out of her office towards the Merida council room where she sat calmly down and waited for her subordinates.

They weren't long behind.

"Captain, I assume there is there a reason you asked for us to be here twenty minutes ahead of the meeting?" Kalinin said.

"Someone's tampered with my reports," Tessa said firmly. "Much of the mention of the Satomis and other paranormals has been mostly eliminated from the report."

"Do you think they altered them somehow?" Mardukas asked.

"I wouldn't say so from their behavior," Tessa said. "And if they had a psionic way to alter the reports why would they bother with our memories intact?"

"Perhaps they assumed we would overlook the changes to your report," Kalinin suggested.

"Perhaps," Tessa said. "In any case, I plan to report this to the council in addition to my debriefing on the rescue operation."

As she spoke, her chair and one other started into life.

Across from her was the monocled image of Lord Mallory's hologram looking across the table at her.

"Captain Testarossa," he said. "It is good to see you well."

"And good to see you as well, Lord Mallory," Tessa said.

"I'm glad you can make it to this briefing," Lord Mallory said.

"Briefing?" Tessa said. "Shouldn't we wait for the rest of the General Council."

"This meeting is not for the General Council," Lord Mallory said. "In fact it is paramount that we finish this before the General Council convenes, at the original time."

"I'm not sure I understand, sir," Tessa said.

"You may have already noticed changes in your recent operations report," Lord Mallory said.

Tessa's eyes widened.

"Sir," Tessa said. "What is Mithril's interest in Ranma Satomi?"

"I'll be explaining that," Lord Mallory said. "Check your monitors, you should be receiving a report on Psyche Division."

Nodding, she looked down toward her chair's briefing screen and watched the information pulling up on her screen.

"Psyche Division, yes, I see it here," Tessa said. "I don't believe I've heard of this before, sir, but on first glance it appears to deal primarily with paranormal affairs."

"That's exactly what it is," Lord Mallory said. "Psyche division primarily keeps a list of known psychics and mystics and files on investigated paranormal phenomena. In fact, if the Whispered had not been a key factor in the founding of this organization, they'd likely fall under the aegis of Psyche division."

"And Ranma Satomi is an operative of Psyche?" Tessa concluded.

"If you can pull up her file," the head of the General Council suggested.

Tessa did as instructed and looked over the screen.

Ranma Satomi
Ethnicity: Japanese
Nationality: Recently established Japanese citizenship.
Age: 34
Birthdate: Unknown
Status: Independent Operator
Flags: Reliable, Uninitiated, Potential Recruit
Enhanced Bio-Energy Production: Inborn, Class A
Bio-Energy Manipulation: Training, Class A
Paranormal Sensitivity: Exposure, Class C
Regenerative Inhibitor: Exposure, Class C
Danger Sense: Training, Class C
Environmental Energy Manipulation: Training, Clas...


There was a small laundry list of martial art styles and demonstrated abilities.

She read further and noted that the first time Mithril had used her was eight years back.

Prior to that they tracked her to a police report, sexual assault Tessa noted, and hospital, shark attack, in Greece.

Tessa winced at the day that must have been.

Unfortunately, that's where the story stopped and since Mithril hadn't yet been formed, much less Psyche division, little more had been found on the woman.

"For the most part, Psyche does not have full agents," Lord Mallory said. "But keeps track of individuals such as Miss Satomi that we've found to be trustworthy in the case that we have a paranormal situation to deal with. Since Miss Satomi and you have stumbled on each other, it is convenient to brief you on the situation."

"I understand, sir," Tessa said. "And I am to assume that this is not to be discussed with the General Council."

"Correct," Lord Mallory said. "You are going to find yourself reprimanded for your reckless authorization of the use of the arbalest in the rescue of three individuals, as well as your risk of the Danaan to run the secondary rescue."

"Of course, sir," the captain said.

"This extends to your subordinates, is that understood?" Mallory asked.

"Of course, sir," the two behind Tessa said.

"As to Ranma Satomi," Lord Mallory said. "Psyche division will handle that on their end, hopefully you'll be seeing more of her. As far as the general council is to be told, her potential ESP is unconfirmed. The DNA reports on her children are classified to the highest degree, I expect you to inform your medical staff immediately."

"And the troops that witnessed the abilities?" Tessa asked.

"Soldier's rumors, campfire stories," Lord Mallory said. "Be sure to brief the SRT members that had close contact with her as well. No mention of Psyche Division should be made at this time."

"Understood," Captain Testarossa said.

"Now, this briefing is at an end," Lord Mallory said. "Take the remaining time to the council meeting to be appropriately surprised at the accusations of recklessness. And do have counter arguments prepared."

"Yes, sir," Tessa said, saluting moments before Mallory's chair disconnected and his image vanished. "Well, that's informative."

She closed the information on Psyche in her council monitor.

"I'm not sure I like the idea of this Psyche division," Mardukas said frowning.

"People such as Miss Satomi rarely have military attitudes," Kalinin noted. "This might be the best way to utilize their abilities without the problem of organizational strife."
 

PCHeintz72

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Canon in the novels has her and Kurz in an intimate relationship later on.
I meant canon anime, which is the only canon I know for FMP, not having read the novels.

As for Hild and Hell... her ability to hack in does not concern me, it is expected. It is the fact that using the same systems, she knows more than Heaven, when they are actively working on the issue.

As such... Hild or the reader should be questioning how that can be.
 

Thrythlind

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PCHeintz72 said:
Canon in the novels has her and Kurz in an intimate relationship later on.
I meant canon anime, which is the only canon I know for FMP, not having read the novels.

As for Hild and Hell... her ability to hack in does not concern me, it is expected. It is the fact that using the same systems, she knows more than Heaven, when they are actively working on the issue.

As such... Hild or the reader should be questioning how that can be.
yep, added a comment toward that end in the previous episode
 

Thrythlind

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regenerative inhibitor, btw, means that she inhibits the regeneration of other beings....it basically seemed to be the best way to say "her body counts as a magic weapon"
 

PCHeintz72

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Thrythlind said:
PCHeintz72 said:
Canon in the novels has her and Kurz in an intimate relationship later on.
I meant canon anime, which is the only canon I know for FMP, not having read the novels.

As for Hild and Hell... her ability to hack in does not concern me, it is expected. It is the fact that using the same systems, she knows more than Heaven, when they are actively working on the issue.

As such... Hild or the reader should be questioning how that can be.
yep, added a comment toward that end in the previous episode
So... are you going to have edited the last two episodes on the AA then? The one with the Hild comment, and the fact in the last one, the abilities are jamed into a paragraph, rather than made boldface and listed out one per line.
 

Thrythlind

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hmm, really hard to get edits on AA....might paste this one into an edit request though...

and yeah...the * * that were supposed to do boldface apparently didn't work right.....

sent a contact form....

and....IE ate my episode I was working on....grrrr
 

PCHeintz72

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Thrythlind said:
hmm, really hard to get edits on AA....might paste this one into an edit request though...

and yeah...the * * that were supposed to do boldface apparently didn't work right.....

sent a contact form....

and....IE ate my episode I was working on....grrrr
I would never think to work on a project inside a browser. I would make it elsewhere, then paste into the edit windows for the sites posting it to.

Heck, for some of my longer posts, I do that instead of a tiny little window that is about 1/6th my screen.
 

Thrythlind

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Melissa Mao smirked as she walked past the horde of kids going in to visit Kaname Chidori, including a tall young man with a scar along his jawline.

She'd just told Kaname that Sousuke had been assigned to his next mission.

The girl was probably worrying and imagining all sorts of improbably dangerous missions for Sousuke to run through just now. Somewhere in the litany she could almost see a mummified Sousuke floating in a cloud over Kaname's head, like some parody of the English Patient, and Kaname bemoaning the fact that she couldn't be there for him.

And any moment now, the girl was going to see, hear or otherwise notice Sousuke among the hordes of other students and...

"What are you doing hiding back there?! You big dork?!"

Yep, there it was.

Toying with children was fun and easy.

Now all she had to do was pick up Kurz from his touching base with Eija Satomi, since she was awake too, and they could be back to the Danaan.

The Satomi girl's room was much more sedate, with only Eija, her brother and mother within visiting her.

A lot in contrast to Kaname Chidori.

Melissa put on her best nurse's smile as she moved into the room and closed the door behind her.

"Hey," she said. "Good to see you're all better. Two days of sleep gets fairly worrisome. Where're your visitors?"

"Sousuke and Kyoko visited earlier," Eija said, pointing toward a small bouquet next to a first-aid kit and bottles of vitamin supplements.

"It would have been better if we could have avoided the hospital," Ranma said. The red-head's feathers seemed to get ruffled as soon as she saw Mao come in dressed as a nurse.

"There are a lot of questions I imagine," Mao agreed, looking around. "Something the matter Miss Satomi?"

"Just some dark thoughts," Ranma said. "Are you here to tell us what not to say?"

"Actually, Kurz was already supposed to be doing that," Mao said.

"The German perv?" Ranma asked. "Don't think we've seen him. Anyway, we know better than to say anything about what happened."

"Yeah, we've had to keep secrets a long time," Deimosu agreed.

"Good to hear," Mao said, but paused as she noticed something. "You said Kurz never showed up?"

"That's right," Ranma said.

"And your other daughter?" Mao asked.

****

"Oh please," Naiki half-giggled, blushing madly and giggling as she leaned back against a wall with a can with tea held coquettishly in front of her blossoming chest. "You can't be serious."

"No, really," Kurz said, leaning in close to her. "You are, without a doubt, the most beautiful and gorgeous woman to ever save my life."

"I was all beat up and bloody and sweaty," the green-haired girl protested, sharp white teeth glinting cutely.

"And there is nothing more beautiful than a treasure born up out of the depths of the earth," he said. "With the dirt shaken off to find an emerald masterfully sculpted into the wonderous warrior-siren in front of me."

Naiki's eyes glittered at the words "warrior-siren" and she drank from her tea, trying to copy Eija's demure manner comedically.

"Warrior-siren," she intoned giddily as Kurz leaned further in.

The mercenary's lips were getting closer to her own and she felt a rush of blood to her face.

"Exac..."

"Ahem," two voices coughed darkly behind Kurz.

The german sniper and the green-haired demi-goddess turned about to see two women staring darkly at the situation before them.

"Ah, Mao," Kurz said nervously.

"'Kaasan?" Naiki said hesitantly.

"Pull out, Weber," Mao growled. "I mean disengage...grr back off."

As if about to be burned, Kurz backed away from the green-haired young woman.

"I'll just go...keep Eija company," Naiki said as she started to walk away.

"This means I have to worry about both genders doesn't it?" Ranma asked as her daughter walked past her and flinched.

And as Naiki walked away, both Mao's and Ranma's attention turned on Kurz.

"I...I was just deflo...err debriefing her," Kurz said nervously.

*********************

AN: the little window is less intimidating than a blank whole screen
 

PCHeintz72

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"I...I was just deflo...err debriefing her," Kurz said nervously.
Had he finished that 'd' word... he would be very... very... 'd' himself, even if a different 'd' than he intended.
 

PCHeintz72

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Thrythlind said:
most definitely

^_^
Would have been funny, though not for him... had she been in briefs at the time he stated that.
 

Hawk

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Just... how much of this is explaned?
You seem to expect that everyone has knowledge of all anime crossovers you add. Then you add Greek mythos. This is just confusing.
Also where is Ranma? I don't mean the character Ranma, it just doesn't feel like Ranma at all.
 

Tonyloco

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SmileOfTheKill said:
Just... how much of this is explaned?
You seem to expect that everyone has knowledge of all anime crossovers you add. Then you add Greek mythos. This is just confusing.
Also where is Ranma? I don't mean the character Ranma, it just doesn't feel like Ranma at all.
There's no Ranma at all in this story, just you'r standar raped redhead for the sake of the plot... wich its actually better that the stupid redhead slut for the sake of the lemon.

you should know better than ask for him.
 

Hawk

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Tonyloco said:
you should know better than ask for him.
You're even more biased that he is and you also didn't try to back up any of what you said. I will use your bad trolling as an attempt to say what I dislike about how this is not Ranma.

At the start Ranma was acting like Ranma just stuck as a girl. However as the story went on, we lost focus of Ranma very quickly. This would not be a problem if the story started to focus on cannon characters but all that ends up showing is a bunch of OC's and characters from an anime I barely know about.

The crossovers in this thing have been poorly elaborated. I don't know a damn about FMP besides be watching the first two episode. I know the airplane jacking happened in the anime but nothing else. Then the plot of this story is all based off of FMP. If I knew more about the anime I wouldn't be so lost here. Then you added OMG so I am lost.

In total, I have to remember three new children of Ranma, everyone in FMP, enough in OMG to have a clue, any mythos from the real world, and Ranma is just on the sidelines.

This feels like FMP, not Ranma. If this story was in FMP section, I would have no issues.

Also to make the story more stupid, there is pairing between OC children and FMP main character. I don't give a damn about these characters yet and everyone is acting excited. Not the authors fault with the excitement everyone is having but it is a turn off.

I suppose I should just say what I want now. The only reason this story is in the Ranma section is that no one goes to the FMP section. The only reason raped redhead is here is that making the same character but not having Ramna would remove the familiarity factor. I did want to end here, but I had to edit this post so I add more. Ramna here is weak as hell eh? He should be able to take out any mech in 10-20 seconds, not 2-3 minutes. Run to mech, jump on mech, hold onto mech. Hit mech really hard till you can get in and destroy everything.
 

shinzero01

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Well that is kind of easy to explain. This isn't the Ranma 1/2 Ranma. The character is 34 and has been raising kids/dealing with supernatural incidents ever since the Gods interfered in her (his?) life. She is also not a primary character at the moment. The focus appears to be more on her offspring with the plot seeming to lead towards an eventual confrontation with Zeus, the cause of most of the problems. Yes, the plot currently follows that of Full Metal Panic but its pretty clear there is going to be a divergence point.
 

Thrythlind

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learned recently that Gauron is supposed to be suffering from cancer, Eija should have noticed that, unless he's just swimming that much in blood that she missed it.
 

ringlhach

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There are cancers that catch up in weeks or months- pancreatic comes to mind. Or it could be benign right now, or in remission. I don't think the FMP-TSR (Season 3) anime said what it was, exactly, and I haven't read the books/manga.

They were throwing around a lot of energy, too. I don't know how Eija's senses work, but that could have interfered a bit.
 
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