Naruto Encyclopaedia Botanica

MnemoD

Well-Known Member
#1
This is the prologue to a story I started awhile ago, and want to work on again, but just can't seem to get any inspiration on it.

WARNING!

Further chapters of this will be considered Y at least, and X at worst! Contains Het, Yaoi, Yuri, Some Bondage, Rape, Depictions of Violence, and acts of a tortorous, and disturbing nature.

Note: There is some mention of nudity in this section, but no depiction, so I figure it's safe for this board right now, it will be moved to Hardcore if anyone actually finds interest in the series.

Encyclopaedia Botanica
Prologue
Open Field,
Konohagakure no Sato,
Home.

It's raining outside, in the streets of Konohagakure no Sato. Children are being ushered by their parents into the warmth of their homes, crying out in delight at having gotten dirty, which annoyed most parents. He watches the people scurry from under the rain, the rain he doesn't mind at all. It is a field, He thinks, thinking of the village he lives in, It is a field, barren and ugly, but full of beautiful flowers, and trees. He muses, watching a particularly beautiful couple walk, arm-in-arm, through the rain-soaked streets with a simple umbrella over their heads. And, I am the lonely Kitsune, of this field. He thinks to himself, drawing the silk-sheets around himself tighter as his mood plummets steadily.

Uzumaki Naruto, once again, was depressed. He had no one to come home to, no one to love him, or hold him. Sure, he had friends, and a 'family' of his own, but it just wasen't working anymore. He wanted someone to kiss, someone to hold, someone to feel. Soft flesh, or hard flesh (As Naruto wasen't quite so picky as some men.) He just wanted someone to love, and be loved in return. He slowly returned to his bed in his new home he'd bought himself after a few particularly wealthy clients' itches had been scratched. He liked his new house, it was better than the old, barren apartment he'd had a large part of his life. He quietly slipped under the covers, nude save for the sheets that still covered him, and fell into a dreamless sleep...

(Edit: Because, Mereo was right, it was in one piece... Though, I did have to paste it straight from my files, Sorry about that!)
 

Mereo Flere

Well-Known Member
#2
You lost me at Yaoi.

Also, since it's mostly in one paragraph, that leaves it very hard to read. Breaking it up would improve it instantly.
 

BlackSun

Well-Known Member
#3
You lost pretty much everyone here when you mentioned yaoi. I think no one here but you will read it, unless it's both canon and very well writen.
 

MnemoD

Well-Known Member
#4
Well, if it makes all of you feel better, it's not really any DEPICTIONS of Yaoi, it's just some... Well, relationships that may be mentioned.

Besides, I usually mark my fics very high, anyway. I just adore being depraved.
 

BlackSun

Well-Known Member
#5
Well, if it makes all of you feel better, it's not really any DEPICTIONS of Yaoi, it's just some... Well, relationships that may be mentioned.
Maybe you should have said it in the disclaimer. I don't mind mentions of yaoi (they're good for comedy sometimes), as long as it's not Naruto/Sasuke.
 

H-Man

Random phantom.
#6
IWouldLoveHerForever said:
I just adore being depraved.
Same, same.

Anyway, unless you'll state the males will have sex, then I don't think it's yaoi. Or is it slash that is the mindnumbing gay sex crap?

Either way, I'm reading this, if only because it can be better than crap.
 

MnemoD

Well-Known Member
#7
True enough, I guess, but I'm used to everyone throwing crap at you if you have a mention of a boy-boy relationship without a mention of the word 'Yaoi'.

And, I'll post up the first chapter soon, it doesn't have a pairing, but I need to finish it off..

You can tell by the chapter's names who the chapter will focus on, by the way.

By the way, the NaruSasu thing, in this story, Sasuke's dead, so is Itachi. EXPLAINED LATER O.O!

:flameon: Sas-gay.
 
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