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SimmyC

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#51
I guess it should be noted that there are times when a character, could be OOC (something I was rallying against...sort of in my last post besides the corny dialogue). I mean, just look at my own work, Vallient Shinji. ^_^

HOWEVER, if they have NO reason to being OOC, AND they take that extra step and make it just...just...horrible (Valley Girl Bell again. Or 'Punk' boy Shinji in a NON-humor fic. Or fics that follow that Sasuke/Naruto guide. ^_^) that is unacceptable.
 
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Israfel

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#57
Bah, lesbian's don't do anything for me, a lot of guys like them but not me, I'd much rather Rangiku and her amazing...personality *cough* than 'lesbian undertones' which, at best, I would be able to watch, as opposed to participate in, I'm a 'hands-on' kinds' guy. ;)
 
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GenocideHeart

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#58
Israfel said:
Bah, lesbian's don't do anything for me, a lot of guys like them but not me, I'd much rather Rangiku and her amazing...personality *cough* than 'lesbian undertones' which, at best, I would be able to watch, as opposed to participate in, I'm a 'hands-on' kinds' guy. ;)
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Yoruichi looks better than Rangiku, anyway. Rangiku is a rather boring design.

And technically, Yoruichi would be bi, not lesbian. Same thing...
 
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Israfel

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#59
Ahh yah, I'd forgotten who Yoruichi was, yup Yoruichi definitely wins in the looks department, Rangiku's double D's just can't hold up against Yoruichi's fine face, kickin' curves, and chocolaty skin (darker skin always was my weakness). For camparison. Yoruichi or Rangiku.
 
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GenocideHeart

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Israfel said:
Ahh yah, I'd forgotten who Yoruichi was, yup Yoruichi definitely wins in the looks department, Rangiku's double D's just can't hold up against Yoruichi's fine face, kickin' curves, and chocolaty skin (darker skin always was my weakness). For camparison. Yoruichi or Rangiku.
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Have you noticed that Rangiku could be Tsunade's twin?

By the way, I swiped some, ahh... interesting fanart off 4chan featuring Yoruichi. I'll see if I can upload it somewhere and then link in the lemon topic.
 
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Israfel

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#61
Ohh goody, you know me, I love that 'fanart' *cough* *cough*.
 
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SimmyC

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#62
#62
Yeah, Yourichi looks much better than the still nice, but not as good looking Rengiku.

And I understand the idea about the lesbian bit. While I'm partly facinated by it, the idea that I won't be able to play as well, not a good thing. Then again, we are talking fictional characters here...<_<
 
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GenocideHeart

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#63
SimmyC said:
Yeah, Yourichi looks much better than the still nice, but not as good looking Rengiku.

And I understand the idea about the lesbian bit. While I'm partly facinated by it, the idea that I won't be able to play as well, not a good thing. Then again, we are talking fictional characters here...<_<
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Meh, watching can be just as good as doing the deed, in my opinion.
 
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Israfel

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#64
Meh, watching can be just as good as doing the deed, in my opinion.
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Nah nah, I don't get off on just watching, if I wanted to just watch I'd look at porn, if it's happening in front of me then I wanna' be in on the action. And speaking of that, how you coming on those links GH?
 
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SimmyC

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#65
#65
Yeah. Watching can be fun. Like I said, I am partly facinated by it. But at the same time, what good is it to watch when I can't get...um, hands on with it?

Now, Ranjiku being a Tsunade twin, well, she's lazy and likes to drink sake. Yup, I noticed that too. Must be something about huge boobs and being lazy and drunk. :p
 
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Israfel

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#66
Yeah. Watching can be fun. Like I said, I am partly facinated by it. But at the same time, what good is it to watch when I can't get...um, hands on with it?

Now, Ranjiku being a Tsunade twin, well, she's lazy and likes to drink sake. Yup, I noticed that too. Must be something about huge boobs and being lazy and drunk.?
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Hey same with Kitsune as well, while not as big those two she was still the biggest (I think) in Love Hina, I think we might have noticed a pattern here, perhaps all the excess sake goes to their boobs?
 
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GenocideHeart

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#67
#67
Israfel said:
Meh, watching can be just as good as doing the deed, in my opinion.
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Nah nah, I don't get off on just watching, if I wanted to just watch I'd look at porn, if it's happening in front of me then I wanna' be in on the action. And speaking of that, how you coming on those links GH?
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Not this evening. Or morning. 5AM here. Sleep now.
 
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SimmyC

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#68
#68
Israfel said:
Yeah. Watching can be fun. Like I said, I am partly facinated by it. But at the same time, what good is it to watch when I can't get...um, hands on with it?

Now, Ranjiku being a Tsunade twin, well, she's lazy and likes to drink sake. Yup, I noticed that too. Must be something about huge boobs and being lazy and drunk.?
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Hey same with Kitsune as well, while not as big those two she was still the biggest (I think) in Love Hina, I think we might have noticed a pattern here, perhaps all the excess sake goes to their boobs?
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Apparently we found the secret to big boobs. Sake! Another reason why to buy a woman a drink or two. :p
 
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GenocideHeart

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#69
#69
Taeko in Ai Yori Aoshi doesn't drink, and has bigger boobs than Tina.

I think the secret is milk.

Either that, or lots of, ah... massages. :lol:
 
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runestar

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#70
#70
Well, when I read a story, I tend to quickly skim through it first to get a gist of the plot. This also allows me to gloss over all but the most glaring of errors. :lol: Then I reread it again more slowly and indepth. I find that it allows me to focus more on the plot of the story for what it is and less on being distracted by spelling errors.

And I dunno about spellchecker. I don't really think its the godsend people make it out to be. Spelling mistakes, sure...but my experience with it is that it is unable to accurately point out grammatical errors and mispelled words which conveniently happen to be legitimate words themselves. :(

All in all, I guess you just have to be more careful. Maybe proofread a while after you have finished writing it? That way, you may spot mistakes you didn't think were mistakes before...
 
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Israfel

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#71
#71
And so the people cried out to the Lord "Help us, we cannot edit our own work!" and so the Lord gave us...Betas!
 
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GenocideHeart

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#72
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Israfel said:
And so the people cried out to the Lord "Help us, we cannot edit our own work!" and so the Lord gave us...Betas!
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I don't have a beta. All my editing is my own. I'm just that damn good. </ego>
 
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