Naruto Fantasy Unleashed (what is with me and this story?)

[Xamusel]

So, because I'm currently writing this story for what amounts to the... what, fifth time? Anyway, because I've spent a hell of a lot of energy in writing this story over and over again, I need to know this for a fact. Is the story I'm about to link here as good as I'd like it? Or do I need to revise it for one last time before leaving it to die?

URL for the story is here: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10826375/1/

Also, if this isn't the right sub-forum for this request, I apologize... and I request that, should it be the wrong one, it get moved to the right one.

 

[Fellgrave]

No, this is the right thread. It's too late for me to properly look it over right now (sleep and my paper await) but I'll give it a look tomorrow. I'm just glad to see it's still kicking.

 

[Xamusel]

Thanks... though, really, I decided it's better to rewrite the story for one final time. I dunno why, but I feel that the story would've gotten into a train wreck that I couldn't salvage at the rate it was going, sadly.