Lord Raa said:
Perhaps it was him and his lack of social skills? There had been several times when he had felt like a fish out of water, and if their positions had been reversed, it was conceivable that heÆd been frustrated with a non-com trying to help out, only to end up risking the lives of everyone in the combat unit.
Right, mentioned thing on the other forum, but 'non-com' is possibly the worst term to use in this context, since its a term for someone with a lot of military experience (a Non-Commissioned Officer, like a Sergeant), and you're using it as a term for someone with none. Saying 'civilian' would work better, and not annoy military personnel and pedantic military otaku.
EDIT: The story itself is a good start, though.