Ranma ½ Frozen Flame

rdde

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What must Ranma do to free Motoko and Ryoko from Genma, not to mention to get his own body back? Finally, Ranma vs Genma.
For a chapter about saving Motoko and Ryoko, there's nothing about the actual rescue moments. And the fight was a bit of a let down.

Then again, the story hasn't been a good read since the first few chapters. The initial style was pretty nice for when things where enshrouded in mystery, but it feels like you're taking that too far leaving the story's flow rather choppy and jerky. I'm still reading it, but it's now out of morbid curiosity than for the writing.
 

thermopyle2

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Meh. I'm not sure what you think the main focus of the story is, but for me it's been waiting to see the Ranma/Genma fight. This just wasn't near as good as I was expecting it to be, and the fact that you split the fight up with other scenes (that I honestly skipped over because none of the other stuff going on interests me) just brought down what you did deliver to a broken, disappointing level.

I'd suggest making the fight one uninterrupted scene at the very least.
 

Jomasten

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Well, I'm actually expecting either Sophia to be the Last Mid-Boss, so Ranma could his/her body back, and Genma being the Final Boss, a true all-out knock-down drag-out fight between alternate-father and son. Or possibly the other way around. I dunno.

That, or alternate-Ranma.
 

Skelethin

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Finally decided to sit down and read this...

and i noticed the disturbing trend of how fast you keep adding new crossovers to the fic. Not sure how many you intended to have... but its getting to the point where its overloaded. Too many series, especially when you are trying to show whats happening in both dimensions, makes it seem extremely overloaded.

It really hit that point once you brought the cursed weapons into it. The aliens almost pushed it to the point where I just stop reading a crossover. Mainly because there is simply too much going on. Too many storylines, too many ideas.

You seem to trying to make the storyline bigger, better, and more epic than it started out as... and its quickly getting to the point of overload. Back off and write the story, not stuff more into it.
 

Dreamingfox

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Author's Notes û

I guess it's time for more disclaimers.

I do not own the rights to Ranma ¢, Love Hina, Negima, Bio Booster Armor Guyver, Witchblade, Kurohime, Outlanders, Please Teacher, Chrono Cross, or anything else for that matter. This is simply a work of Fanfiction made for the primary intent of my enjoyment and the secondary intent of pleasing those who enjoy a good, creative story that happens to combine elements of the previously mentioned titles and properties.

X X X X X

Looking down at his hands, Ranma smiled. He could feel the power that coursed through every fiber of his being. Though he'd only been trapped in the other body for just over a week, he'd dearly missed it.

Feeling the strength of his trusty body as he moved his bodyà his body, he smiled. Yes, it was well worth everything that he'd endured to get this body back.

Only the sudden splash of cold water broke him from his reverie.

"What the hell did you do that for?" he shouted, noting the change in his voice. "Aw shit!"

"I guess you do have your old body back," Keitaro shrugged. "Curse and all."

"Um," Ryoko interjected, "what just happened?"

"I thought she knew about your curse?" the woman with two toned hair cut in.

"She knew about the curse," the tall man with the staff replied, "but she didn't know about him getting trapped in another body."

The slender kendoka beside the redhead simply blinked. Opening her mouth, she found that she couldn't find the right words to use. Closing her mouth, she simply stood there, unsure of what to do.

"I think we should go," the brunette girl suggested.

The sound of a gun being fired drove the point home as the scarred soldier shot the wall of the cavern, creating a giant stone golem. "Yes, I think now would be an appropriate time for us to withdraw."

X X X X X

"Sir," the short old woman said, announcing her presence to her superior.

"Hinata," the seated man replied. "I want you to mobilize your best stealth squad."

"You want us to follow Leonard's boys once they turn tail," the woman finished.

"Yes."

"He has superior numbers, but not firepower," Hinata noted as she glanced at the monitor. "You're certain that he won't be successful?"

"If he deploys more of his forces and appears to be capable of taking the ship than I want your forces to take that ship from both him and its owners." Glancing at his subordinate he nodded, "But if his forces flee, I want you to follow them back to his base. If possible I want you to pick up on the frequency that he's using and triangulate the position of his base.

The wise veteran nodded, "As you command."

# # # # #

The darkness of the country night always comforted him. Leo Biederman was glad he lived in the countryside, not only was the country sky clearer as a result of less light pollution, it also kept all those annoying idiots, well, not all, but most. It didn't help that he was a scrawny teenager and that he loved astronomy, but the fact that there had been a fictional character that shared his name made things all the worse for him. True, he did enjoy looking up at the stars with his telescope, but it wasn't because he loved space, it was because he positively knew that humans were not the only sentient creatures in the universe.

Every night the scrawny youth would hike two miles in the dark away from his family's house just so that he could comb the night sky without any interference. Tonight had started no differently.

"Soon," he said to himself as he gazed at his prize.

Smiling to himself, he put his eye to the lens.

"HOLYS*%^!"

Finding himself on the ground, young Leo gazed up at the sky. "I.. I didn't see thatà"

Trembling, the young man stood up, approaching his telescope. "Buck mush have taped something onto the other lens," he said aloud, rationalizing what he just saw. Shaking his head, he checks the lens, wiping it clean before putting his eye to the other lens again.

"Oh Godà HolyS*%^! Holy M*#$&ing S*%^!"

# # # # #

"You're sure about this?" the raven haired mage asked as he eyed the alien woman.

Nodding soberly, Hatsuho sighed.

"We were all there when her captain announced it," Hinata stated. "This is bad news indeed."

"How long will it take their fleet to get here?" the scruffy blond mage asked.

"Just over one week," the magenta haired alien answered. "Probably less if they're rushing to mobilize their fleet."

"And when should Ranma and the others be able to jump back?" Tsuruko asked as she turned towards the normally energetic blond.

"Um," Su replied, her mouth full of banana, "30 hours at least."

"Enshin! Takahata!" a new voice shouted.

Everyone turned to the new voice. A young girl, no more than 10 years old appeared at the doorway.

"Setsuna," the two Shinmeiryu exclaimed.

"Mistress, Master, Takahata-sensei," the young swordswoman bowed. "The Dean wishes you return immediately to Mahora."

X X X X X

A cool, humid breeze filled the dark chamber. Blinking, the figure forced his consciousness to the surface.

"So, you're awake," a squeaky voice greeted. "Don't speak yet, your body is still adapting. Let me get your grandfather."

The young man could do little but blink as he tried to locate the speaker. Straining his ears, he realized that he was actually submerged in some sort of liquid as it amplified the sound of the retreating man's steps.

A multitude of thoughts ran through his mind, but one image seemed to be etched into his mind û a raven haired boy wearing a red silk Chinese style shirt and black pants.

X X X X X

"Sir," a uniformed man said as he presented a report to the robed man.

Accepting the report, the wizened figure eyed the report, dismissing the helmeted man.

"I believe I have perfected the body for our next Zoalord," the bearded man stated.

"Finally, we'll have twelve," the other man stated.

"Archanfel," the first exclaimed, "I did not realize you had awoken."

"And yet you were reporting the discovery of a possible candidate for Zoalord," the fair haired man stated. "But you are aware that I have been keeping track of things even though I had been slumbering for the past decade."

The taller man nodded.

"There are distant rumblings," the pointy eared man stated. "I have not felt anything like it since the Creators left. An ominous and ancient power awakens to the east."

"The Relic?"

"No Barcas, this is something different altogether," Archanfel replied. "It is something dangerous."

X X X X X

A loud, thunderous boom echoed through the tunnel, announcing what Sousuke Sagara could not voice.

"Man, how long are they going to keep chasing us?" Ranma grumbled as he glanced back at the party's rear guard as the scruffy youth reloaded his magic gun. Though he enjoyed the power of his original body, being stuck in his female form while wearing armor tailored to the other body was just annoying - it didn't help that his female form was significantly shorter than his boy form as well as being bustier than Sophia's body. 'Man, this suit's rubbing me the wrong way now.'

"Probably until we're out of the sector," Ukyo stated. "They just want us away from any settlements. Though they could be after us to avenge the three Agents that Sousuke gunned down."

"That would explain why they tend to just engage him," Seta added.

"It's probably the scouts that were assigned to the Agents you killed," the brunette suggested. "If their agent is dead then they simply follow the last orders that their Agent."

"They are breed to be loyal," the resident alien supplied.

"Who is she?" Ryoko finally asked as she eyed the woman with two toned hair.

"An alien," Keitaro and Kanako replied.

The two kendoka simply eyed the Urashima heir.

"Seriously?" Motoko asked.

Ranma nodded.

"This just gets crazier by the second," the busty kendoka shrugged.

Behind them, Sousuke unloaded another deafening shot, this time at the ceiling, causing the tunnel to collapse, effectively blocking off their pursuers.

X X X X X

Ranma felt robbed. Having heard of how great a martial artist this world's Genma Saotome was and having seen and faced off against the muscled man, the cursed martial artist had been greatly disappointed in their fight. Sure, he'd gotten the girls back as well as received the Frozen Flame that Genma had possessed, but had he really won? After a half hour of trading punches, kicks, feints, parries, throws, and counters the fight had ended after Ranma had used a simple cord-cutting technique.

Looking back on it, the truth was that he hadn't won û he'd simply exchanged the girls and the Frozen Flame for Hina, Hannya and Kien. But at least he had his body back, even if he was currently in his cursed form.

"Ranma!" Keitaro exclaimed, breaking the sex changing boy from his thoughts.

"Yeah?" the younger martial artist replied.

"There are signs that there's someone up ahead," the Urashima heir stated. "They're heading in a different direction from where we came from, but it's pretty close to where we're headed. That tunnel leads to openings in the mountain behind the Hinata Sou."

With their pursuers still digging out the tunnel kilometers behind them, the party came to a stop, allowing Keitaro and Ukyo to check the passageway for any traps or other surprises that the other group may have left for them.

With her naturally light sensitive eyes, Birdy eyed the tracks on the ground. Curious, she pulled out her scanner, even as some of the others eyed her.

"She's really an alien?" Ryoko asked Kanako.

The lithe fighter nodded. "So she says."

"She looks human enough," the busty kendoka stated.

"And Ranma looks like a girl, but I wouldn't call him one," Seta countered.

Suddenly the scanner in the alien detective's hand started clicking.

"What's going on?" Sousuke asked as he noted the determined look in the alien's eyes.

"These tracks, they're Oculons'," the alien explained. "Oculons are a race of mechanoids, or artifical beings. Though they can take various forms or shapes, they use Oculium as their primary fuel source. The man I fought last week was an Oculon. Unfortunately he self-destructed rather than allow me to capture his CPU to download his memories."

Ranma quickly did the math, "So you think that the guys who made these tracks might be behind the princess' abduction?"

Motoko glanced at Kanako.

"Long story," the gothic girl answered.

Ryoko turned to face the lithe girl.

"I promised Birdy that I'd help her find the people who are responsible for the abduction of her people's princess," Ranma explained.

"Seta, you take the others back to the Hinata Sou. Birdy and I will investigate the guys ahead."

"But"

"No buts," Ranma said as he eyed the other passage. "Keitaro, lead them home, I'll let you know through Claire if I find anything."

"No," Seta said firmly. "We're in this together. Fate has brought us together to help you on whatever adventures you have."

Keitaro nodded.

"Keitaro, take the girls home," Ranma repeated. "They need some decent clothes and rest. We'll lead Sousuke's fans away from the Hinata Sou and check out the guys ahead of us."

"Two birds with one stone," Kanako nodded.

Ranma nodded. "Take Claire. If anything happens we'll let you know."

X X X X X

Leonard was not happy. He'd expected losses, but nothing like what he watched on the monitor. The small force that he'd left in Japan should have been enough to lay siege to Tokyo, yet they were being torn apart by the smaller defending forces that inhabited the desolate mountain forest. Yet it wasn't the fact that his forces were losing û it was the fact that they had superior firepower and technology that irked the young Whispered. Having developed and designed the mass produced miniature Arm Slaves and the weapons that they used, he had thought that they had enough firepower to level Tokyo. Yet the defenders, out numbered 10 to 1, were not intimidated by his cutting edge technology.

Watching several thousand kilometers away from Japan, the silver-grey haired youth could only scowl as another Arm Slave was cut down by what could only be described as a concussive blast of energy. The golden beam of energy ripped through the fortified titanium skin of the AS then knocked over a tree and blasted apart a three-ton boulder before hitting the ground and showering the area with debris.

Though his remaining forces in Japan had been reduced by nearly a half in a half hour, he was sure that they could still prevail. Despite their losses, they had managed to cut down nearly two thirds. Two hundred miniature Arm Slaves and their support units against thirty of the steel androids û those numbers had favored him, yet here he was with only sixty Arm Slaves remaining and perhaps all of their support units against only ten androids. Yes, the numbers still favored him by 10 to 1, but the losses were great.

Still, it was just a minor inconvenience. After all, now that he had the mysterious technology that the androids had been using as well as the ship that they were guarding he'd more than make up for the loss of an entire battalion of Arm Slaves.

X X X X X

The cool air with hints of pine told him that they weren't far from the surface. Unlike the tunnels that they had used to descend from the Hinata Tea House, these tunnels had been created in a giant spiraling stairwell. Each landing was at least three meters apart and one meter wide. Fortunately the gathered martial artists were able to traverse the passage easily, though the fact that those they pursued were doing so just as nimbly as they were did seem to discourage them slightly. Even Sousuke wasn't having problems with the passageway, though that was mostly due to the fact that he'd shot himself with a magic bullet that endowed him with wings.

Straining his ears, Ranma could make out seven distinct footsteps. "Seven," he signaled the others as he gently landed on another plateau. "I think they know we're following them."

Seta nodded.

It wasn't a surprise though, they had been following the other group for nearly an hour. The sound of Sousuke shooting the Witchgun probably had been a dead giveaway. Still, they were catching up.

A stiff breeze greeted them as they leapt to the next landing.

'Smoke?' the pigtailed boy thought as he landed.

"Gunsmoke," the scarred soldier stated. "That's from an armor piercing round û probably an ASP.7."

The others glanced at him as he flew above them.

"It's one of the rifles that I equipped my Bonta-kun Arm Slaves with," he replied, completely unrepentant in the fact that he was so intimate with guns. "But there's something else."

"Burning pine," Seta supplied.

Sagara shook his head, "Something else û I can't put my finger on it."

"Santovaskian napalm," Birdy grunted as she leapt to the next landing, "they love using it against mechanoids as it doesn't affect any organic metals."

"Organic metals?" Kanako gasped as she chased after the other woman.

"Their ships are organic creatures," the alien explained. "Pretty hard to crack open too."

Ranma nodded as he and Sousuke led the group on.

The sound of heavy fighting and gunfire greeted them, growing louder and louder with each landing that they reached.

X X X X X

Hinata eyed the battle below with great interest. Though Leonard had appeared to be on the cusp of victory, the arrival of the six additional androids had changed things. The new androids were clearly better than the others that had initially appeared to defend the alien ship. The first defenders were stiff and mechanical while the new arrivals used unpredictable attack patterns and tactics.

Eyeing the red and black haired woman through her binoculars, it was clear to the grizzled veteran that that woman was in charge. Had Leonard attacked when she was onboard, Hinata was sure that the battle would never have been in doubt. No, even with her own forces primed for battle, Hinata knew that they would not prevail against the aliens. The mechanoids and remaining battle robots outclassed even Leonard's Arm Slaves. Perhaps if he had sent his Belial type Arm Slaves he would have won, but relying on the simple AI of the miniature Alastor types had been the deciding factor as the inhabitants of the ship had managed to scramble the unprotected unmanned Arm Slaves. Unable to think for themselves beyond their simple reactionary programming and not having the weapons necessary to deal with the durable defenders proved to be his undoing. Then again, it was hard to hide that many miniature Alastors, much less full sized Alastors or Belials, perhaps he wasn't in Japan after all.

"I've got the frequency," Haruka stated as she reported to her adopted mother. "It appears that he's not in Japan at all."

"I thought as much," Hinata replied. "We'll see if he tries to deploy any more units, though I doubt that he was able to hide any of his prized Belial types in the forest. Still, even with the current chaos, I doubt that the government or Mithril will take too much longer to get here."

"So they're really aliens?" the younger woman asked.

"They're our patrons," the shorter woman replied. "How do you think we've been able to create such cutting edge technology for so many years? It wasn't the Whispered and their Black Technology, though some of the advances are because they gave us a greater understanding of the alien tech we had been rewarded with. No, we've reverse engineered the technology our patrons gave us. The weapons that our Arm Slaves are equipped with are all alien, the only things really capable of damaging that ship and its defenders."

The brunette nodded. Though it boggled the mind, it really did make a lot of sense. "And they oppose the aliens that are manipulating Mithril," she stated rather than asked.

Hinata nodded. "There are many different alien races û most of them view us as being young and impressionable. And we are."

"So the stories of alien abductions?"

"Some are true," the older woman answered honestly, "but those were mostly done by rogue scientists of other non-humanoid species. Once our patrons and others like them realized that we were a sentient race they outlawed those experiments."

Haruka nodded, slowly accepting that she was much smaller and less significant that she had originally thought. Stillà "Why?"

"Because if we don't help them, than their enemies are going to destroy us," the experienced veteran answered. "Their enemies used to be our neighbors, back when there were eleven planets in our solar system."

"Eleven?"

"Well, if you count Pluto as a planet."

Again Haruka nodded.

"That is a story for another time," Hinata said, concluding that discussion.

"Well, well, well," the old woman smirked. "It looks like my grand children are making an appearance. I wonder how this is going to end."

X X X X X

Ranma practically beamed with joy despite the carnage before him. Though the aliens they had pursued weren't technically enemies (not until Birdy confirmed that they were at least) he was sure that the miniature Alastor type Arm Slaves were definitely part of Leonard Testarossa's rogue faction of Amalgam. Though he did not carry the cursed weapons, their influence lingered, prompting him to rush into the heated battle.

"You!" Birdy shouted as she spotted the red and black haired alien woman. "You're Christella Revi! You must be behind the princess' abduction!"

The rogue Omega Cygni sighed. "She's not my princess," she replied as she pulled out a gun, "so why would I care about her?"

"But you were responsible for her abduction," the pigtailed boy shouted as he eyed the mechanoid that rushed at him.

"What if I am?" Christella asked as she took aim at the quicker Ranma.

His quick eyes spotted the deft motions of her feet as she swiftly drew a magic circle before firing the weapon. A loud, thundering boom filled the afternoon sky.

Ranma's instincts prompted him to leap back as the shot fell well short of him. But it wasn't the shot that concerned him, it was the giant stone hands that emerged.

"A Witchgun!" Birdy exclaimed. "But only the Santovasku can use those!"

Ranma eyed the woman in a new light. "That's not red hair," he stated as he noted the odd flow of her hair, "those are horns!"

"Hahaha," the hybrid alien laughed, "I'm the product of an illicit and illegal marriage between an Omega Cygni and a Santovasku. And I can use a Witchgun."

Leaping out of the way of the giant stone fist that descended on him, Ranma smirked. "I'm so going to enjoy kicking your ass!"

Rushing past the giant golem, he heard another powerful boom, this one from Sousuke. "I'll take care of the Arm Slaves!" he stated in his usual, even tone.

Birdy nodded as she dashed past the slow golem.

"We'll take care of the small fry," Seta declared as he extended his staff, smashing the head of the golem as he did so.

Kanako nodded as she used her ring to put out the fires and freeze the various mechanoids and Arm Slaves. "Find the Princess!"

Even Keitaro got into it as he cut down a mechanoid that had approached his adopted twin. "Go ahead!"

"Retreat!" Christella ordered as she loaded her Witchgun. Running cautiously it was clear to Ranma that she lacked the physical endurance of even Hatsuho.

"She's only capable of one shot at a time," Ranma noted as he evaded the punch from an Oculan, his counter kick to what he supposed was equivalent to the back of the knee broke the limb, folding it in half even as the mechanoid fell over.

Birdy simply smashed through one of the few unmanned Alastor Arm Slaves that had managed to make it this close to the alien ship. Ripping off the arm of the mecha, she used it to bat away one of the combat robots that had been deployed to protect the ship.

While Birdy favored brute force, Ranma was an elusive snake, slithering around and past his opponents and launching strikes that propelled him towards his ultimate target.

"Hey Leonard Nemoy!" he taunted as he looked directly into one of the Alastor type Arm Slave's camera. "I'm gonna be coming for you. Now that I got my real body back, there ain't a thing in this world that's gonna stop me from getting you and Sophia, ya bishonerd!"

A quick kick beheaded the steel titan, cutting off the visual feed that it sent to its creator.

Springing over the listless automaton, Ranma deftly dodged the angry golden beam that shot his way as the concussive force of the weapon knocked down the beheaded automaton. A sudden explosion rocked the side of the mountain as one of the rogue Amalgam soldiers shot a rocket propelled grenade at either Ranma or the Oculan that was shooting the strange energy gun.

"Gather all the guns you want," Ranma declared as he watched some of the surviving soldiers robbing the fallen aliens of their weapons, "just tell Leonard that I'm gonna come kick his ass too!"

None of the soldiers dared to get in his way as he rushed after the fleeing aliens. Parrying a punch from an unarmed Oculan, he pulled his other arm back for a quick counter. An iron fingered strike ripped through alien bio-metal as Ranma speared an Oculan with his hand. Using the unfortunate alien as a shield he threw the still struggling mechanoid on top of a grenade. Stepping on him, he hoped that the creature's tough skin would hold up even as the grenade exploded.

As he had hoped the explosion propelled him all the closer to his intended target even as it launched him into the air. Kicking off of the still alive alien, he sailed over the half Santovasku/half Omega Cygni. Twisting in the air he avoided several shots even as he threw a golden ball of ki at several attackers without bothering to announce his attack. This wasn't a duel or fight against another martial artist, and he had long ago mastered the technique to the point that he no longer needed to shout the name of the attack to help focus his ki.

Yes, he was enjoying the feel of his ki, his muscles, working within him as he planted his feet on the head of another Oculan, crushing the metal spine and head of the artificial creature as he did so. Spinning around as he landed, he wrapped his hand around the slender neck of the alien hybrid while the other gripped her hand, directing the barrel of her smaller Witchgun towards the sky.

"Going somewhere?" he asked, a hint of malice in his usually even voice.

He didn't know why, but he found himself slowly crushing her throat.

The alien woman's dark blue eyes filled with fear and panic as he brought his face closer to hers. Unable to get any air in or out of her lungs, all she could do was stare into his frenzied eyes.

'Kill her,' Hina's voice echoed through his mind.

'Add her power to yours,' Kien suggested.

"Order your men to stop fighting!" he growled, loosening his hold on her throat.

No longer held up by the powerful martial artist, the rogue alien scientist fell to the ground, grasping at her throat with her free hand. "Stand down," she muttered, "stand down."

X X X X X

"Impressive," Mr. Gold smirked as he watched the end of the fighting.

"Orders?" Hinata asked, her voice coming through crystal clear despite the fact that she was not in the commander's office.

"You have your orders," he stated. "Find Leonard, but keep an eye on the boy as well."

Hinata nodded. "Yes, sir."

X X X X X

"So the knave knows the Tendos, does he," the young man growled.

A well dressed man in a dark navy business suit nodded, "Remember, your grandfather wants him alive."

The youth grinned, "I'll bring him in alive û though he might be missing some limbs."

The other man simply pushed his sun glasses up, "That's fine."

X X X X X

A/N

I think I'll just leave things where they're at for now.

Please Read and Review.

Dreamingfox
 

armedlord

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I haven't been reading this for a while but I agree with Skelethin of seeing way too many crossovers here. It's like you're trying to match Madhat886's level of insanity and that's pretty much a bad thing by itself. I'm not sure that, at some point, that you 'jumped the shark' as the saying goes, but it certainly feels that way.
 
I have to agree. I'm really not sure why I'm still reading this, to be quite honest. There are way too many characters and names and such that I know absolutely nothing about, and the storyline is convoluted, and a note from a few segments back said that's only going to get worse.
 

cgobyd

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...You completely lost me on all of that.

I have zero clue what is going on.
 
I know what you mean. Most of Dreaminfox's fics start out good but quickly become giant flaming train wreaks that you just can't seem to take your eyes away from. The only one this hasn't happened to so far is One Half Tenjou, One Half Tenge.

Whether or not this train wreck turns out to be a good writing strategy on Dreamingfox's part remains to be seen.
 

Seed00

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AyanamiRei2 said:
Is it me or did you add in Guyver?? :huh:
He had every intention of adding it.

Guyver, Witchblade, Kurohime, Birdy the Mighty, and Onegai Teacher, and this mysterious youth who wants to cut Ranma's legs off.

Too many crossovers too fast.
 

Skelethin

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Seed00 said:
AyanamiRei2 said:
Is it me or did you add in Guyver?á :huh:
He had every intention of adding it.

Guyver, Witchblade, Kurohime, Birdy the Mighty, and Onegai Teacher, and this mysterious youth who wants to cut Ranma's legs off.

Too many crossovers too fast.
unless i missed my count... it has been at LEAST one new crossover EVERY chapter/snippet.

There is simply so much going on, with so many different plot threads that he simply can not HOPE to make sense of...

I couldn't get a quarter of the way through the last bit to see any story... it was all a mass of new plot threads and crossovers tossed in, with something happening between chapters with no explanation.

Its changed from a train wreck you can't just look away from to something that gives me a migraine just TRYING to read... much less trying to piece together all the fraying plot threads, ideas, and new crossover bits that have zero hint of ever being there before.

Was fun while it lasted, but this gets firmly labeled 'Utter Shit due to excessive crossovers'
 

Lufio

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--'{@

Um, I am confused.
How did Ranma change bodies?
Wasn't his stolen?

I'm missing something here. The previous chapter ended with Ranma in the Whispered girl's body, but the new chapter started with Ranma in his cursed body. The hell? I thought Leonard and what's her name stole Ranma's shape-shifting body.
 

Skelethin

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Lufio said:
--'{@

Um, I am confused.
How did Ranma change bodies?
Wasn't his stolen?

I'm missing something here. The previous chapter ended with Ranma in the Whispered girl's body, but the new chapter started with Ranma in his cursed body. The hell? I thought Leonard and what's her name stole Ranma's shape-shifting body.
It was taken, and now its not...

This was the unexplained thing i was referring to.
 
Skelethin said:
Lufio said:
--'{@

Um, I am confused.
How did Ranma change bodies?
Wasn't his stolen?

I'm missing something here.? The previous chapter ended with Ranma in the Whispered girl's body, but the new chapter started with Ranma in his cursed body.? The hell?? I thought Leonard and what's her name stole Ranma's shape-shifting body.?
It was taken, and now its not...

This was the unexplained thing i was referring to.
I know, I kept scrolling up and down convinced I missed a part of the story, but it doesn't seem to be there.
 

dracklor

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Its the Chrono Cross element, when Serge got the Frozen Flame he got his body back too, if I recall correctly.
 
yeah, but it would have been nice to at least get a wow, I got my body back when it happened....
 

Dumbledork

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Questara said:
yeah, but it would have been nice to at least get a wow, I got my body back when it happened....
And maybe explain it to the readers who don't know.
 

PCHeintz72

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Dumbledork said:
Questara said:
yeah, but it would have been nice to at least get a wow, I got my body back when it happened....
And maybe explain it to the readers who don't know.
Actually... when I read the first couple paragraphs of the chapter, I double checked the FF.NET copy, when I did not find it there, I merely assumed he had changed the instant he got it back.
 
PCHeintz72 said:
Dumbledork said:
Questara said:
yeah, but it would have been nice to at least get a wow, I got my body back when it happened....
And maybe explain it to the readers who don't know.
Actually... when I read the first couple paragraphs of the chapter, I double checked the FF.NET copy, when I did not find it there, I merely assumed he had changed the instant he got it back.
That's what I figured too.
 

Dreamingfox

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Author's Notes û

Yes, after the long hiatus this fic is back on track. So much going on over the last year or so, but I'm slowly getting things back on track.

Oh, any scenes that start with the breaker 'X X X' denote that the scene starts in the Alternate world, where as '# # #' means that the scene starts in Ranma's home dimension.

X X X X X

Few of the people who knew Ranma looked past his physical prowess. Considering his dedication to mastering various styles of martial arts, the pigtailed boy never took it as a slight against him. Few people ever gave him the credit that was due to him though as he was more than just a jock. Able to dissect, dismantle, and reproduce various techniques as well as to adapt them to various situations on the fly, the young master martial artist was far from stupid. Few understood the true depth of his unique intelligence though, often claiming that it was just luck or the stupidity of his opponents, but the truth was that Ranma thought best when fighting.

Having spent the past three hours in running fights with the strange thrulls and their handlers he was slowly getting used to the repetition of the Underground's fighters and their tactics of thrulls attacking and diverting attention while their elemental user. Even with several users their tactics didn't vary, though they often appeared to get in each other's way as they appeared to be unused to fighting with more than two teams at a time.

No longer having to compensate for his weaker body and having adjusted to the exo-suit that Su had created for him and all the others, the pigtailed fighter allowed his body to simply react to the fighting, allowing his mind to wander.

'You know, this kinda feels like an RPG,' he mused. 'Me, the hero, and my loyal companions jumping from one quest to another without having time to really rest between the missions. The adventurers fighting hordes of minions until they find a clue to something or other that will help them defeat the boss of the mission/quest who in turn helps prepare us for our ultimate showdown with the big boss. All that's missing is some unexpected true boss that's been manipulating the other boss that I've been gunning for.'

Clenching his fist, he felt the tendons and ligaments stretch while the other men allowed the soothing hot waters of the Hinata Sou's onsen to ease their tired muscles. Though his renewed body was perfectly capable of chasing after Leonard's vanishing forces, the others in his little squad weren't. The hard, destructive battle on the isolated mountain top and the run through the Underground had taken a lot out of the others

'This is why the hero only has a handful of companions on each mission, gotta keep the others fresh for the next crisis.'

Relaxed yet restless, the cursed martial artist returned to his room. He didn't know how long he'd paced the floor of his tiny room, but evidently it was still night as the pale moon could be seen from his window when a gentle knocking interrupted him.

"Ranma?" the nearly breathless woman called out to him from the other side of the thin sliding door. "It's me, Hatsuho; can I come in?"

"Ah, sure," he replied automatically.

The darkness of the hallway told him that it was late, though there was just enough light for his keen eyes to make out the alien's silhouette as she entered his room.

"I wanted to thank you," the explorer stated.

"Why?" he retorted. "It's not like we saved her."

"No, you didn't," she replied. "But thanks to you Birdy knows where to look for her."

"We still gotta get back down to the Underground, and we don't have a lot of time to work with," he growled. "But here I am, trying to rest but failing miserably."

"You're doing more than I am," the alien scout admitted as she settled closed the door behind herself.

"à" Words just weren't his forte. Perhaps that was why he'd had so many problems with Akane and the other girls. "So you can't sleep?" 'Why the hell did I ask her that?'

"I'm used to a different time unit," she finally answered. "We also require less sleep than a typical human."

Accepting her information, Ranma found himself nodding. The feel of soft yet strong hands cupping his face should have startled him as the long hours of fighting had honed his senses and reflexes, yet rather than flinching and pulling away he allowed her to pull herself closer to him. For all the fighting and killing that he'd recently experienced he had not expected the alien woman to provide him with a moment of humanity and gentleness.

X X X X X

The recent turn of events soured the elder's mood. Ranma's recent bloodlust as a result of his contract with the cursed blades and armor were understandable, but with those items gone Happosai couldn't help but wonder if the boy's psyche would be able to process everything. From what he'd heard of Ranma's life in the other world the boy had only killed once before. Since coming to this world though he'd killed the Kuno heir as well as countless Amalgam soldiers and Underground thrulls.

There was blood on Ranma's hands, but could he handle that burden? Or would he become a soulless killer with an insatiable bloodlust?

The signs pointed to the later. Though the others needed a moment to rest, Ranma appeared to want to press on. But was that simply masking his desire to kill more opponents?

Then there was the incident when he'd returned to his home dimension only to attack and seriously injure his rivals.

But what could he do?

X X X X X

The gentle glow of the approaching dawn filled the sky with a reddish hue as the storm clouds loomed in the horizon.

Fully rested, Ranma sat up, fully expecting to see a buxom alien sharing his futon. Though his sheets were slightly disturbed there was no sign of the redheaded Alpha Cygni. 'Waità was it a dream?'

Dressing quickly and silently, he rushed down to the lounge.

"Morning," the ever cheerful Seta greeted as Sagara glanced up at him from stockpile of ammo.

"Morning," Ranma returned. Glancing around the room he eyed his companions as he pushed aside the strangely vivid dream he'd had.

The others stifled yawns, though a few actually yawned as they greeted him, leaving him with the distinct impression that they were still exhausted despite the night's rest they'd had.

"I've decided," he proclaimed, drawing all eyes onto him, "that it's best if only a three man team goes into the Underground."

The stunned looks from the others hadn't been completely unexpected. Yet mixed in was also a sense of relief.

"A three man team would probably work best," Seta seconded. "You'd be able to move faster, and we wouldn't be getting into each other's way as often as we did last night."

Ranma nodded.

"I'll go," Konatsu volunteered quickly. "Aside from Ukyo, I have the best knowledge of the Underground."

"You're not leaving me behind," the young galactic officer insisted as she jumped to her feet. "The Princess' safety is my highest priority."

Though Kanako looked likely to object, the adopted Urashima opted to remain quiet. None of the others questioned the team selection, leaving Ranma to feel a bit better about his decision. "Sagara, work with Kaname and Hatsuho to inventory the weapons we captured from those aliens; as a Whispered she might have some insight on the weapons the aliens were using. Keitaro, try to find out what those other artifacts we recovered from Okinawa do. Seta, see if Mithril can help you secure that alien ship, I've got a feeling that either Granny or Sophia are going to try to get their hands on it."

"Sure," Seta smirked. "Leave it to us."

"Right," Ranma replied, extending his hand to the older man. "I'll do that. We should be back before tonight, but if we aren't, we'll let you know. We've only got a few communicators from the aliens, so we should be able to contact you if anything happens."

Strengthened by his resolve, the others nodded, accepting his orders. No longer was he merely chasing leads and reacting to circumstances; no, now he was leading them.

X X X X X

"He's no son of mine," proclaimed Genma Saotome. "It's impossible!"

Despite his most logical and emotive statements, Genma Saotome couldn't help but doubt himself. Years of solitary confinement in the secret prison known as Hades and his already fragile mind had led to his propensity to talk to himself as he tried to rationalize things.

'You know the truth,' Hina him sent. 'The boy truly is the son of Genma Saotome, though he is not your son.'

The addition of the two cursed blades and their voices didn't help his psyche; nor did the fact that the two blades seemed to have an intimate connection to the person who claimed to be Ranma Saotome.

'The other Genma succeeded in raising a 'Man amongst Men',' taunted the blades, though which one had said what still baffled the master martial artist. 'But it wasn't thanks to him, it was thanks to Hinata Urashima. She managed to destroy the Omni-sphere in the other world and keep the bond between the spirit and this world intact, while in this world the Omni-sphere managed to sever that link.'

"Resulting in a higher reliance on technology to compensate for the loss of spiritual energies," concluded Genma. "So what do I do?"

X X X X X

The long shadows of the dimly lit corridor danced, mimicking the figures that moved throughout the underground passage.

"We have the sacrifice," a masked man stated. "We need to perform the ritual now!"

"We can't, not yet!" hissed the robed man at the front of the procession. "The priests need to harness more mana before they can begin the ritual. If they tried to start it without enough power the spell would fail, leaving us without a sacrifice and the priests."

"Butà" the masked man sputtered.

"If only we had the forces necessary to capture the dragon-ship," the horned man stated.

"What good is a mere dragon-ship to the Dragon God?" the robed man demanded as he spun around on his followers. "At best their ship would have allowed us off this planet, but that's only if we managed to avoid the damned Galactic Police and the stupid science vessel in orbit around this miserable rock!

"Besides, our goal isn't to just escape this rock, it's to destroy it. The Dragon God will give us the power to do so."

"But, what of those intruders?" the horned man protested.

"The ones who fled?" robed man asked. "What of them? They've fled; they're no concern to us. If the thrulls wish to pursue their master's killer let them, but tell the others that they are not to pursue anyone wishing to leave the Underground, only stop any who try to enter. We cannot allow anything to interfere with the ceremony."

# # # # #

"We have the sacrifice!"

A roar of cheers greeted the robed man's proclamation, reverberating off of the stone ceiling and walls as his followers celebrated the news.

"The time is nigh! We shall begin the ceremony!"

Silence greeted his words as those gathered immediately took up their tools and weapons in preparation for the sacred ritual.

"All will be ready soon," the robed man smirked as he looked down at the tiny bundle in his arms. "Before the day is done you shall die a glorious death, all for the sake of our master."

# # # # #

Silence filled the Dean's office as the gathered teachers and staff met. The fact that nearly all of the magical staff had been summoned to should have cued the scruffy blond mage to the fact that something extraordinary had happened, but then again, given the fact that had currently been dealing with someone traveling between parallel dimensions/universes, Takamichi Takahata wasn't surprised to see them all gathered. As one of the Dean's most trusted teachers it fell on him to explain the odd circumstances to his peers.

"Thank you all for coming," the weathered old mage greeted once the door was closed behind Takahata. "Sister Shitaki, if you would?"

The blond blinked.

"Thank you Dean," the humble woman replied as she stepped forward. "Last night, I was in charge of the University's Astronomy class, when one of the students made an interesting discovery. My initial thoughts were that she'd mistaken spotted a satellite or perhaps one of the Russian or American space-ships, butà well, you can see for yourself."

Pointing to the projector she waited for the dark image to appear, drawing several gasps from the gathered magi.

"This is a joke, right?"

"Aliens? Seriously?"

A feeling of dread crept up the blonde's spine.

"They're the Santovasku," the elegant woman beside him proclaimed.

All eyes immediately turned to the head of the Shinmeiryu as the proud kendoka stood beside her brother û the Dean's very own son-in-law.

"You know of them?" Konoe asked as he stepped forward.

"Our current investigation has led us to make some interesting discoveries," Takahata replied.

"Saotome?" the Dean muttered as he scratched his chin.

"Has picked up some interesting allies," finished Tsuruko. "Aside from being able to jump between parallel universes, he's made the discovery that only those who do not have a counterpart in the other world can travel between the two worlds û one of them happens to be an alien."

"One of these Santovasku?" Sister Shakti concluded.

Takahata shook his head. "No, she considered herself an Alpha Cygni, a member of the Galactic Police. She was pursuing a Santovasku though."

"It appears that something similar is happening in this world as in the other one," Eishin interjected. "From what our sources told us, the Cygni and Santovasku are ancient enemies. The Santovasku apparently kidnapped the Cygni's princess, and apparently triggered a galactic war between the two races."

"And somehow Earth is caught in the middle," muttered the Dean. "What can we do? Our sources in the government have confirmed that there is increased chatter in the space program of a discovery. From the size of the fleet I wouldn't be surprised if others have made this discovery."

Takahata glanced at his friend and her sister, unsure what to say.

"We hope that Saotome returns from the other world quickly," Tsuruko finally replied. "Perhaps he and his alliesà"

Takahata resisted the urge to shake his head. Even if Ranma managed to get his original body back and get back to this dimension, could he really stop and an intergalactic alien war?

X X X X X

The chill of the morning air failed to clear the kendoka's mind even as she tried to concentrate on the handful of leaves in the wind. Careful, practiced strikes neatly cleaved the offending leaves in two.

"You're distracted," a sagely voice stated. "You're usually able to cut them down the stem of the leaf, but to see the uneven remains lead me to believe that you're still upset about being kidnapped."

Motoko paused, breathing deeply as she eyed the next target.

"You're the future heir of the Shinmeiryu," the shriveled old man stated. "You're the one who should be rescuing, not being rescued, right?"

Her blade flashed in the air, reflecting the light of the approaching dawn, missing the leaf completely.

"Few people could hope to stand toe-to-toe with that monster," Happosai scowled.

"It's not that he defeated us," Ryoko interjected as she sheathed her blade. "It's that weà I... I couldn't do anything to help Ranma!"

The admission stung the young kendoka.

"Keitaro has the Kusanagi," she spat out. "Yes, he's the better fighter, and he's Ranma's cousin"

"He also fights to protect Kanako," Happosai pointed out. "She fights because our Kanako died. Sagara fights for Kaname, Seta to help Ranma. Those three are the only ones other than Ranma and Birdy who can travel between the two worlds."

Hearing him state the obvious only hurt her all the more.

"You wish to help Ranma, do you not child?" the sagely old man asked.

Fighting back the tears, Ryoko nodded.

"Then support him."

Blinking away her tears, the slender kendoka tried to make sense of his words. "How? I'm not strong enough to fight like the others, I can'tà"

"It's not physical strength that Ranma needs; the boy needs good friends, not just comrades. He needs someone to help him shoulder the weight of what he's doing, of what he's done; someone to let him know that when this is all over that he has somewhere to return to, someone to return to."

Her eyes now clear, Motoko saw the sun rising in the east, a new sense of purpose and determination in her heart.

X X X X X
 

Dumbledork

Well-Known Member
WOW! After all this time. Great update, but there's a lot of stuff I don't remember. I guess I'll have to reread the whole thing.
 

Dreamingfox

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Author's Notes –

Yes, it's back – back again. I know some of you who have followed my other fics have long hoped for the day when this fic would once again updated and revived, especially when some of my other fics have also gotten updated, though I did delete a few of them.

Honestly, this fic gave me the most problems because I said one thing when I started writing this fic yet callously disregarded my promise to keep this fic from following the plot of Chrono Cross (which is a great game, but damn, it gets complicated at times). Yes, I brought in many different anime into this fic, and it's gotten insane. I've contemplated deleting/removing some of the later chapters just to make it more streamlined, yet find that I kind of like what I did with this fic. The problem is not finding a direction to take this fic, but how to transition this fic back in the direction I want it to go.

I just hope that this chapter is as satisfying to write as it is for me to read. Oh, and I hope that those of you who have waited for this fic to update are pleased with the result.

X

X Cross world X

Free of the influence of the demonic blades and cursed armor, Ranma Saotome found that he did not enjoy the return trek into the Underground. Having been granted his original body back he had initially thought that the trip would be easier, yet found it far more difficult than he had ever imagined.

Years of training had turned his body into a well-oiled machine capable of incredible feats. Those same years though had also developed a keen mind capable of breaking down various martial arts techniques into their basic components and then recreating them to suit the situation. The rare combination of sharp mind and rare athletic ability made him perhaps the greatest martial artist in generations. His ego had long convinced him that he was the best in his generation, but the realization and understanding had only begun to set in.

With his skills and ability he did not need to fight the hordes of thrulls nor did he need to kill them. According to the alien Birdy the creatures were simple-minded creatures at best, yet the gnawing sensation he had as he dispatched one did not disappear. Leaving them alive would complicate things, yet he couldn't justify killing them in cold blood. This was not like killing a rabbit or dog for food as killing the thrulls served no purpose other than to eliminate a future threat to his companions.

Signaling his companions he indicated for them to stop. The stealth option to Su's upgraded suits allowed the group to avoid any unnecessary fighting, though Ranma really couldn't think of it as fighting. Of the few patrols that they had encountered the thrulls had fallen in the blink of an eye to the highly trained martial artists and their alien companion.

The powerful alien could break boulders with an easy that would make Ryoga envious. In terms of training she was at least equal to Ukyo, well, this Ukyo.

For her part Ukyo was as technically sound but lacked the strength and power of her contemporary in his home world. Her utter ruthlessness and knowledge of their enemies though gave her a considerable edge over the thrulls. Though her name was familiar, it only served as reminder that this was not his world and he truly did not belong here.

"We're wasting time," Birdy hissed once Ranma signaled that the passage was clear. "Once we're through here we still have to go to your world and rescue the princess there."

He knew that he was weighing lives against time, but failure to save the princess would mean that all life on the planet were in peril. "We don't have the time to engage in a fight," he stated firmly. "We can't get separated from Ukyo since she's the only one who knows her way around here. We're also letting your computer map the underground so that we can reference it in my world."

Despite Birdy's urgency, she relented. In her limited interactions with Ranma he had proven to her that she needed his help, especially if it involved the dimensional gates.

As the central figure in this inter-dimensional maelstrom and it was his decision to make about whom would handle what duties. It was Birdy's mission to find the princess and apprehend the criminals responsible for the young royal's abduction. Ukyo was needed because she was the only person with sufficient knowledge of the Underground, and Ranma, well, was Ranma.

With Birdy's help they had managed to keep track of just how far they had gone. In less than two hours they had traveled over five kilometers though they had only descended less than two kilometers below sea level.

"There is an air shaft in the passage to the right," Ukyo said as she eyed the forking passage. "It should take us closer to the Company's central building on the lowest level, but it's a straight drop. The left passage leads down to the next level and a guard station."

"How many levels down is the lowest level?" Ranma asked.

"Less than two kilometers," the brunette replied nerviously.

In the dim light Ranma eyed his companions. "How big is the air shaft?"

"Large enough for three people," Ukyo explained. "We are at the point where the shaft splits into several smaller shafts that run up to the surface. There's a shaft for each of the four zones – this is the only shaft to the Company."

"Let's check it out," the cursed boy stated as he lead them to the right.

The service entrance to the air shaft was a circular shaft some three meters wide but with iron rungs for climbing spaced roughly every 15 cm or so. "Looks good," he assessed. "I'll take the lead."

X

X Cross world X

"It's too soon," the robed figure stated even as he backed away. "Your body still needs to adapt to the changes and you haven't mastered"

"I will not let him get away from me," the lean youth stated. "I will be the one to kill him, no one else!"

"But sir," the scientist pleaded.

Eyeing the imposing guards in the hallway the young heir stood tall. "You two," he pointed to the two closest to him "come with me."

"Sir," the scientist again spoke out. "The one you're chasing went Underground – if you're going down there you should at least take the entire squad."

"I though you said that I should be able to defeat him myself," the teen remarked. "Why would I need the rest of them?"

"While you are more than sufficient to take out your rival," the scientist said as he carefully picked his words. "But the Underground is full of threats far greater than your rival."

"More the reason why I should hurry," the teen said as he eyed the rest of the guards. "Ranma Saotome dies by my hands, no one elses!"

X

X Cross world X

The third planet from the solar system's sun was a rarity in the galaxy. Though it was home to a sentient species the Galactic Federation had assessed them to possess what they considered Level 6 technology (nuclear power and the capacity to travel beyond their planet's atmosphere) the "humans" that dominated the planet were a diverse species with what they deemed to be several different races and cultures. The planet was rich in resources, though the distribution of said resources often caused conflicts between various factions. Surprisingly the primary source of their conflicts was the result of the apparent differences in "culture" or "race".

Yet it was the vast differences between the various races of humans that allowed other humanoid species such as the Cygni, Altarians, Oculon, and Santovasku to blend into human society so seamlessly. Several others did so as well, though most of them needed some type of cosmetic aid to keep them from standing out. To a human the aliens could appear to be completely, well, human, but to an alien with the right tech finding another alien was not the most difficult thing.

"This is it," the violet haired alien stated as she eyed the display on her hand held monitor.

Accompanied by a lean man and a scarred youth, Hatsuho eyed the shop before them.

"This is a used game shop," Sagara muttered as he eyed the store front.

The taller man pushed his glasses up his nose, giving himself a better view of the building. "So it is. It's a good cover, just like in Men in Black."

"Men in Black?" the scarred soldier repeated.

"It's a movie," Seta explained. "There's a secret organization tasked with hiding the fact that aliens are among us and making sure that the aliens abide by our laws." He eyed his younger compatriot then shook his head. "You need to watch more movies and relax."

"I find that cleaning my weapons most relaxing," Sagara countered. "Knowing that my weapons will not fail me gives me great peace of mind."

"Perhaps you need to relax a bit more," Urzi-2 stated.

"I like watching war movies," Urzi-7 added.

Seta shook his head, "What solider likes to watch war movies? I find that the battlefield is traumatic enough without needing to be reminded of how bad it really was."

"Um, I'm going in," Hatsuho remarked.

The shop was full of shelves holding anything from video game boxes, DVDs, CDs, boxes of figurines, and model kits. The obese man with pale, sickly skin and sunken eyes eyed the trio as they entered.

Hatsuho could feel the eyes of all of the shoppers – some ogled her, others undressed her. It was an unusual experience to say the least. Ignoring their looks, she walked over to the store's owner. "Dust sent me," she said just loud enough for him to hear.

"Kentaro!" the big man shouted, summoning his lone employee. "Take care of the front."

A scrawny young man rushed to the counter, "Yes boss! I'll take care of everything."

Sliding out from behind the counter the alien led the trio into the back then into the basement. "You have the mark of a witch-gun."

Sagara eyed the overweight man, noting how casually he moved through the unmarked boxes.

"Santorum are considered magic users," Hatsuho whispered.

"And you're a Cygni," the owner added as he pulled out a box. Holding it out he waited for her to accept it. "Bullets for the gun – they increase the effectiveness of your gun and reduce the amount of mana you need to use. You can only use two shots a day otherwise your gun's going to explode or melt depending on the model. Ten bullets altogether."

Sagara nodded as he eyed the black bullets that the alien woman gave him.

"A two plasma grenades" he handed a box to Seta "sticky grenades – strong enough to hold down even an Alpha Cygni – half a dozen, one gravity grenade, and a fusion gun with two shots."

"Fusion gun?" Seta remarked as he eyed the chrome gun with a glowing blue chamber.

"It sprays a liquid onto your target and fuses it to whatever it is touching."

Sagara eyed the gun, "An industrial strength glue gun?"

The pasty man shook his head, "That would mean that the target is simply adhered to the surface of whatever it is touching – the fusion gun fuses the target with what it is touching at a molecular level. The Federation banned them because the damage is permanent to any organics."

"Organics?" the scarred boy remarked.

"If you use it on someone while they're standing on cement their legs become cement, but if you use it on an Oculon they can just sever the limb at a joint and replace it with another artificial limb," Hatsuho explained. "Just hitting someone with it is nasty – if they're not wearing uniforms made of unstable molecules their flesh is fused with their clothes. That's why galactic officers like Birdy wear such skimpy clothing."

"To limit how much flesh can be affected by direct contact with something," Seta concluded.

Hatsuho nodded. "Fusion guns also by-pass the telemetry fields that negate energy and ballistics weapons."

"So they aren't affected by force fields?" Sagara asked.

Again Hatsuho nodded.

"Speaking of armor," the owner muttered as he moved them towards a stack of boxes in the back. "I only owe Dust so much, but if you find anything that you can spare I might be able to barter with you. I heard that there some Oculons were involved in an incident outside of Tokyo. I don't deal in their CPUs but everyone knows that their other parts make for great cyber ware."

"We'll keep that in mind," Seta replied as he stashed the last of the grenades before handing the unusual gun to Hatsuho. Though Mithril and the Japanese government had claimed most of the salvaged parts, the former SRT agent knew that he their future ventures might provide them with things that they could barter with. Besides, from what his daughter had told him about Su, the college professor turned secret agent was not sure how much he could rely on her to not blow up the Hinata Sou.

X

* Home world *

A not so distant explosion threw the Hinata Sou into chaos. Clutching her blade the slender kendoka rushed to her room, a slight edge of fear and nervousness in her mind as she eyed the soft flow emanating from her room. Yet it was not her room that was the source of the disruption.

"Su!" she shouted as she noticed the billowing smoke coming from her friend and neighbor's room. "What did you do?"

The eccentric blond was covered in soot, yet despite the debris and destruction she was beaming. "I discovered something," she exclaimed excitedly.

Several aged figures rushed up the stairs, unsure what to expect.

"Did Ranma return?" the dorm manager shouted from the stairwell. "I thought the portal wouldn't open for another four hours."

The tiniest figure hopped on her cane, her long gray hairs trailing after her. "What happened?"

"Su blew something up," Motoko explained even as she checked on Su's condition.

"The robots!" the tiny girl grinned crazily. "They've got a force field of sorts. I was able to reproduce it"

"but it blew up," the kendoka finished.

Su shook her head vigorously. "The plasma grenade launcher I made blew up, but everything behind the force field was fine. Now if I could only make the force field generator smaller…"

The others eyed the brilliantly insane girl, unsure what to make of her.

Keitaro sighed. With the prospect of his adopted sister returning dashed combined with the need to clean/repair Su's room the ronin appeared drained.

"Do you need a hand?" Naru asked as she caught up to her fellow cram school student.

The lanky man simply shrugged as he turned towards the stairs.

Eyeing the pair, Hina shook her head. "I'll watch the room," she said as she eyed Motoko's room. "I doubt that I could go back to sleep now."

X

X Cross world X

"Where is he?" The well-dressed man in white stood impatiently before the gathered scientists and board members of his company.

None of the assembled men dared speak out for fear of angering their lord. Finally a scientist stepped forward, "He, he went after his rival."

"Rival?" the white haired man remarked. "The Zoalords should have no rivals, even amongst themselves."

"He must mean the individual who injured our newest Zoalord." The man dressed in traditional Japanese attire, stepped forward. "My grandson was critically injured, nearly killed even, by an individual claiming to be Ranma Saotome."

The white haired man eyed his subordinate, "You speak as though I should know this 'Ranma Saotome'."

"My apologizes," the Japanese elder said with a bow. "Ten years ago there was an incident in Japan involving a Ranma Saotome and his crazed father Genma Saotome. The elder Saotome attempted to train his son in martial arts, but ended up killing him."

"That matters not to me," the other man said. "Where is your grandson?"

Again the head scientist bowed his head, "He is in the Underground."

"The underground?" the elder Kuno gasped.

"I sent him with a squad of Gregoles and Hodluff, two Rocies, and a Vamore," the scientist added in his defense. "They should be more than capable of dealing with the residents of the Underground."

"How could those Santovasku refugees have become such a threat?"

"It appears that there are other aliens who have sought to take advantage of Earth's resources and humanity as a whole while you were asleep," the elder Kuno stated.

Archanfel scowled. Had the energy signature that had woken him up been the result of another alien incursion?

"Speaking of aliens," Kuno added. "Have you heard the recent news? Of the alien fleet that the Americans have spotted approaching Earth?"

The Antediluvian stood straight, clearly alarmed by this morsel of information. "Gather the other Zoalords – I will bring our newest lord home and show him his proper role in things. Complete as many Hyper-Zoanoids as you can before my return."

"Sir?" the scientist said hesitantly. "We just finished screening the latest candidates."

"Then begin processing them – now!"

X

X Cross world X

Inconsistent gusts of air filled the shaft, making it difficult for the trio to communicate to each other as they descended. At times the air flowed down, then shifted dramatically so that it added to the pull of gravity on them, almost as if the Underground were alive; drawing in breath and exhaling irregularly.

Traversing in near darkness Ranma was hopeful as he noted that distant light beneath him. "Stop," he hissed at Birdy, glad that his eyes had adjusted to the limited light. "There are no more hand or foot holds."

Above him Birdy nodded, passing on the message to a tired Ukyo before checking with her tiny computer. "Clare says that we're roughly one hundred feet from a slight bend in the shaft then another seventy before it opens up to the cavern below. It's a thirty degree shift at the bend."

"I'll drop first," he stated once he had mapped out the shaft in his mind, hoping that there was a cover of sorts at the end of the shaft and not a straight drop.

Supporting his weight on one hand he braced himself against smooth stone wall. Once the message was passed up to Ukyo he released his hold. In a flash he reached the bend, then slid down to the opening. His hunch was correct as the steel bars that covered the opening kept him from tumbling into the cavern. Tapping the bars he hoped that Birdy would be able to hear his signal. A few seconds later the alien crashed into him. Moments later Ukyo added her weight to theirs.

"I should be able to bend this," Birdy muttered once she freed herself from the tangled mess. Straining just slightly the powerful alien easily bent the bars.

Poking his head through the bars Ranma eyed the cavern. Though he could not see the entire cavern he could tell that it was huge. A lone stone building standing at least ten stories at its highest surrounded by a seemingly bottomless chasm and a forest of stalagmites filled the cavern floor while the ceiling was surprisingly devoid of any stalactites.

"How much rope do we have?" he asked.

"Twenty meters, give or take a few centimeters," Ukyo replied.

"Give me fifteen meters," he instructed her. "Hold onto this end."

Tying it about his waist he slipped through the opening. Clinging to the slightest remains of the stalactites he kept going until he felt Ukyo and Birdy tugging on the other end. Extracting a knife he struck the ceiling, imbedding the blade before untying the rope from his waist and attaching it to the blade. It would not hold all of their weight, not for long, but long enough perhaps.

Crawling along the ceiling he eyed the towering structure beneath him. "We're going to swing from this rope then jump to the building."

"That's not long enough," Birdy objected.

"I know," Ranma replied. "Tie this to your belts – once we reach the apex of the swing I'll throw you two towards the building."

The others did as he ordered; placing their trust and faith in him even though they barely knew him.

The rope held and the trick worked, allowing him to swing the girls so that they managed to reach the building before his returned to the vent. Pushing off of the grill he nearly reached the zenith of the return swing when the ceiling about the knife gave way.

Instinctively he spread his limbs out even as he aimed his descent so that he closed the distance between himself and the building. His aim was true, though he landed a few floors below the girls. His short climb up to the balcony that they found themselves on provided Birdy with enough time to scan the area for the princess' signal as well as to map out some of the building.

"I've got her signal," Birdy stated once he reached them. "The princess appears to be at the top of the building."

"Did you get a map of the floors?" he asked as he coiled the rope and set it aside.

The alien nodded.

"Give to me," he ordered her. "I'll take the lead, you take the rear."

Again she looked to question him. "Fine."

Following the rough map that the tiny AI provided him Ranma led his team.

X

* Home world *

Chaos filled the staff room at Mahora Academy. The prestigious school system was home to a primary, junior high, high school, and college – all of which helped to hide the presence of the few magi in a world dominated by technology and science. Yet despite their dwindling number the magi had begun to adapt, merging their magical knowledge with scientific advancements.

Even with the changes in their world view the realization that alien life-forms existed and possibly were among them was startling.

"You're telling me that Saotome has made first contact?" the wizened old man said, unsure of what to believe. Only a few weeks ago he had heard of the dimensionally misplaced youth seemingly banished to a more scientifically advanced version of his own world.

The raven haired mage nodded. "Two of them, though they are of the same species. I have seen them myself."

"Are they from this world or the other?" a female mage asked.

"One is of this world," the man replied. "Though from what Saotome tells me there is another version of her in the other world as well. The other alien is from the other world, but her counterpart died in this world, allowing her to travel with Saotome through the gates."

The headmaster nodded. This really was more than he had expected, and the entire situation had gone completely beyond anything that they had expected. "What of the report from our allies in the Americas and Europe?"

"You mean the one stating that NASA had spotted a fleet of alien ships just past Mars?" a blond woman asked. "The AP has put out a few stories already, but very few seem to take it seriously. Our contacts in New Ostia have confirmed that a fleet of alien ships is just outside of Mars' atmosphere and in the asteroid field between Earth and Mars."

The wizened mage sighed, displeased with the news. "Do we know their intentions?"

His blond assistant shook her head, "The Ostians know nothing about them, but our contacts in Hellas recognize some of the markings on the ships. They're trying to translate them as we speak, but"

The room was silent as everyone turned their attention to her.

"But?" the headmaster said, prodding her.

"Ancient Hellian history and myth indicates that there was once a planet between Earth and Mars, long before man even descended from the trees. There were refugees from that planet that made their home on Earth and on Mars."

"But what do they want?"

The blond shrugged, "I don't know. Myth says that their planet was destroyed by another alien race, that they apparently fought over control of Earth with those aliens, but after the war both sides left Earth alone."

Again the room was silent, finally, "Evacuate all unnecessary staff and personal. The aliens left Mars alone last time, they should hopefully leave Mars alone again."

X

A/N

I'll leave things here for now. Be glad I've updated this fic at least.

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