General Fic Bashing Thread

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OK, this was originally going to be a post in the Stories you wish you can destroy because that sort of drifted to genral fic bashing and the two I wanted to post about mey, if they continue, cross over with Naruto as well, but then I decided we need a geneal fic hate thread.

The first is Porn World!, based off Death's entry in Metroanime's The Bet, Happi got his hand on the wishing sword. Net result is that the world is no something out of a lesbian porno, filled with only young, beautiful women who have sex with each other at the drop of a hat. It actually makes more sense then the average porno or Plot, What Plot lemon fic with regards to people having sex with each other at the drop of a hat.

There are however 2 problems with it. Ranma is saved because a dying Genma asks his wife to take their infant son and to the Amazons and have him dunked in the Spring of Drowned Girl, so he's had the curse since age 5, and has spent at least the last 5 years before the story starts locked in girl form to protect him from the pluage, so he thinks he's a girl. For some strange reason no other man was saved this way. Rouyge later shows up, he's Ranma's half brother and was saved in a similiar manner by his Goddess grandmother.

The other problem is the shear number of crossovers. I'd say 90% of the fic's word count is devoted to showing how other series are effected, almost all single scenes and one of them a fusion (Bubblegum Criss 2040, Armitage and possible a third series are covered in a single scene). Two of these crossovers seem to actually be part of the plot, AMG and Marvel. For some strange reason Wolverine is now the principal at Furiken and his healing factor wasn't able to completely protect him, he's now a hermaphrodite, who make up a small percentage of the world population for some reason.
 
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