Harry Potter Imperium Rising (2.0)

SotF

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#26
Skelethin said:
out of curiosity, how resistant is the clone's armour? like vs stunners, the unforgivables(mainly the crucio and the killing curse), and maybe some general hexes...

and as I said, I haven't bothered to read your old fic, so I have no real idea of how you are going to proceed, but I really liked the 'line in the sand' that you have Harry drawing. was afraid that he would 'fall' too fast or hard for such a moral code...

though all this star wars talk reminds me of how badly I need to track down some of this Sith lore...
I'm still hammering down their exact ability, a killing curse will break through the defenses but several of the other offensive spells wouldn't work. At the moment his reasons are more personal than that, he felt like he'd gotten dragged into Dumbledores war and decided that he would do his best to keep others from getting harmed by the wizarding world. His definitiion of innocence does not quite cover wizards at the moment.

Sith Lore is confusing as it keeps getting revised, in canon there have been several Sith Reformations for various reasons (Normally either extinction or near extinction of the Sith causes these)
 

SotF

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Harry wondered about the reactions his next actions would cause as he reclined upon his throne.

The girl and her parents were now in the fortress, though the prospects for her parents were grim due to the mental damage from torture. The girl had suprisingly bonded with Crimson in the last few days.

She was a sensitive though, and could in time be a worthy apprentice if he believed she was mentally prepared for it.

He had seen the degredation that Palpatines lack of control had caused to his body and refused to allow that same lack of control to infect him or those he trained. Dion would follow the instructors from the holocron first rather than the more recent ones that relied upon their emotions far to much while in the past they controlled their emotions without letting their fueling emotions control them.

The guilt that lay within him confirmed his course for him.

Harry did not feel guilty about the extermination of the Death Eaters any more than one would a slapped fly or trapped rat. He did, however, feel guilty for being to late to save most of the muggles in the area.

The fight was one that Riddle had no business involving civilians in, but it seemed that the wizards on both sides saw no reason to work to protect them during their battles unless it was for another reason.

Very few wizards would follow his ideals in combat, but he would need allies to complete his plan without having to deal with the ire of several individuals capable of being a nuisance to his plans though they would, in the end, be incapable of stopping him it would be an aggravation he could do without.

A piece of good news was that the medical droid had reported that the two rescued from the Death Eaters were in fact who he had believed them to be.

Igor Karkaroff, the former headmaster of Durmstrang, was the first, and his injuries had been the worst as they hadn't had the time to heal that the other had.

Yes, the other was the interesting one, Regulas Black was still amidst the living...

His dementors were working overtime to crack the minds of the captives from both of his own attacks while considering an offer from one of the two.

Alexander Jugson was an interesting being to contemplate.

The man was a violent fool who desired little more than to be set loose to kill anything he could be pointed at. In the end the offer had been rejected because the man had no real loyalty other than to the strongest he could find.

Eventually Dion paused in his meditiations when he realized that his next plan would need his presnece and would begin soon.

xXx

Cornelius Oswald Fudge froze as he entered his office.

The candles and the fireplace had died out as soon as he had entered and the door slammed shut behind him, sounding almost as a prison door would.

"Hello minister," came a rough and deep voice ahead of him as the cold touched his soul.

A mote of light seemed to appear, barely enough to illuminate the masked figure before him. The sphere of blood red light hovered above a gauntleted hand. The mask was not the skull like mask of a death eater, but something far more dangerous and terrifying in the light.

A brief motion brought his attention to the flanking figures that had passed his intial sight. Two were dementors, and the other wore armor that seemed to be metallic white.

The politician couldn't help it and squeaked in fear as a chair was conjured right behind him and an invisible hand forced him to sit.

"I believe that it is about time that we spoke."
 

SotF

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#28
The lightsaber spun in a flourish, crimson blade a mere blur as he leaped clear of the attack.

A wash of flame blackened the stone on which he had been standing.

He felt the force flowing through him clearly, the raw power that made him feel so alive.

This plan was his alone, something to do while waiting for the next part of his overall plan.

Harry dodged yet another blast of dragon fire as the blade left a glowing trail where the tip had brushed the stones of the beasts lair.

It had taken him a week to use the satelites to locate the nest of a dragon, and in the end he had settled, for the time being, on a Welsh Green.

His grin widened as he lashed out throught he force, retaliating with the saphire sparks of force lightning that made the winged leviathan rear up and roar in pain within the burnt out grotto that lay before the entrance to the creatures actual nesting place.

Crimson was waiting in the gunship circling, but he would face alone if he could as a test of his powers.

One example he had now seen was that while the dragons were nigh impervius to magic and steel, the iron content of those defenses left a wide open choice, namely electical attacks such as his force lightning or even a higher powered tazer would do be highly effective at stopping them and driving them back.

Another blast of the cackling energy sent it back into a wall, leaving the massive reptilian beast almost whimpering in pain as Harry gave the signal to his servant and the LAAT/c rose into the air to release a charged net over the injured and twitching monster as he leaned back to catch his breath while a team of Clone Commando's exited a second gunship to secure the dragon for transport before he would proceed to recover any eggs within the nest.

He raised his mask to allow himself to breathe easier and relaxed into the force to ward off fatigue as Crimson joined him with a satchel including water to help.

The clone was loyal, even beyond the standard clones of his type and proved it. Unlike most of the Sith Lords, he would reward that loyalty by granting more power along with the responsibility for it as well.

Crimson would soon become the first of his guards, changing into the red of the royal guard his master had used, especially since the clone had all but adopted the Prewett girl since her rescue. She had yet to actually talk to anyone, and he would prefer not to use his abilities on her mind unless it was necesary although, in the end, that meant that he still didn't know her actual name.

He nodded to his bodyguard and rose, motioning towards the actual nest and replaced his mask with a calm motion.

In the end the eggs would be the beginning of a plan to create some monsterous beasts in the way that his mentor had. While he could not compete with a Crystalide Rancor, he could make his own version of the Hississ' on this world.
 

Skelethin

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#29
ok, I was somewhat twitching when I read these last two snippets. They both seemed too fast, with too little detail. Or would the proper term be rushed, with too little time? Not sure...

The Fudge encounter all happened with too little set-up. It was nice you explained it out, but it was still confusing. I would really like to see at least some of what goes on in this little meeting, but I am expecting you to keep it a secret, and reveal pieces of the result at a time.

and the dragon? how/when did he get access to satellites? Was this part of the deal with Fudge? but Fudge doesn't have access to satellites, as those are muggle technology...
 

SotF

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Satelites were mentioned before, he's got access to surveilance satelites for his use. He has some extremely advanced technology thanks to Palpatine not really caring how advanced he got from their mutual training, cracking secrutity codes is a simple matter combined with programs to enhanse the images to find the environmental effects of a dragon nest.

And with the way satelites can pick out people clearly enough to identify them from orbit, dragons should be easy to find though it raises questions about just how the wizards deal with that kind of technology.

The Fudge one will be touched on again as I continue, but the reason for it is to keep the purpose of it hidden for the time being while allowing me to finish setting up that area.

The dragon part will have later effects, and while I used Hississ in the original, I really wanted to remove them, which means him acquiring a suitable replacement namely the existing dragons of the HP world after Harry uses a little Sith Alchemy to modify them a bit. There will be a bit more on the capture, I've been helping my relatives prepare for a two day trip so I've been having trouble getting enough time to write long segments at a time.
 

Skelethin

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#31
perfectly understandable. I must have missed the part where he got access.. either that or I missed that it was implied with all his training...

also, do any of the wizards even know what Star Wars is?? and do the muggles have the Star Wars movies, or does this world simply not have them? It could cause quite a few interesting rumors if they know.

or the unending confusion as to what those red light thingys he keeps whipping around are as the wizards spend ungodly amounts of time trying to figure out how to 'copy that spell' that can bat aside the killing curse like its nothing...
 

SotF

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#32
Skelethin said:
perfectly understandable.? I must have missed the part where he got access.. either that or I missed that it was implied with all his training...

also, do any of the wizards even know what Star Wars is??? and do the muggles have the Star Wars movies, or does this world simply not have them?? It could cause quite a few interesting rumors if they know.

or the unending confusion as to what those red light thingys he keeps whipping around are as the wizards spend ungodly amounts of time trying to figure out how to 'copy that spell' that can bat aside the killing curse like its nothing...
At the moment, Star Wars doesn't exist in the universe. It would be highly amusing for that sort of rumor to get out though. I'm still trying to decide wether or not I'm keeping the Stargate crossover I was using in the original but keeping it serious which having the fictional star wars universe in it wouldn't do very well.

For the part about satelites, I'd mentioned that he was using them, not how he got them.
 

Skelethin

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#33
I just read your original version...

definitely helps to cut down on the number of troops...

and slowing down has helped out. So has all the extra details...

also, are these the same Hissess from KOTOR that were smaller than a normal person? those didn't look too much like dragons, as I remember...
 

SotF

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#34
Skelethin said:
I just read your original version...

definitely helps to cut down on the number of troops...

and slowing down has helped out.? So has all the extra details...

also, are these the same Hissess from KOTOR that were smaller than a normal person?? those didn't look too much like dragons, as I remember...
The Hississ in the KotOR games aren't quite equal to the originals. Those were baby ones at best, and even then didn't quite get it right. The Hississ were nasty and could get massive, they were as a whole alchemically modified to the point where they were real monsters that I believe matched the size of a Greater Krayt Dragon on occasion and were weapons of war for the sith lords of the past.

The KotOR ones were ones who had probably lost the Sith augmentations and degraded, though before those appearances they didn't have the invisibility they got there.

But for the originals most of them were around the size of a city bus if I remember right.
 

SotF

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The depths were a strange place, especially in a dragons nest.

The damp and dark surroundings coupled with an almost swamplike atmosphere that the bloody light of the saber did little to push back as the armored duo maneuvered slowly through the cavern.

The roughly hewn stone occasionally blasted smooth by dragonfire was impressive due to its size, even for a dragon of the size that had made it.

Harry was on edge as he probed the shadows with the force while Crimson's helmet included the nightvision gear that his own ancient mask would not be able to use.

However nerve wracking, this adventure was an almost relaxing change of pace from convincing Fudge to go along with his plans. He had been forced to use the powers of persuasion given by the force in the end, but the mans desire to discredit Dumbledore was the main key and the weak minded fool's description had reminded him of how one of his teachers had described Toydarians.

The fool was easily convinced that Dumbledores little bird club was a threat, enough so that he had written an order that allowed Dion to round them up as enemies of the state while letting him bypass standard laws in such a pursuit.

That permission was enough to allow him to start his other plans without any fear of having to deal with the Aurors unless he had to, at least until he could purge their ranks as well.

His eyes caugh a glimpse of the prize and he signaled to Crimson to call in the collection team to retrieve them.
 

Skelethin

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#36
This is more of what I was looking for. And what was missing last time...

though, are there any members of the Order that Harry will be seeking to specifically 'turn'?

and I really like how Crimson is developing as a character. He actually has a specific presence that sets him apart from the other clones, and seems to be more like his own person.

And the difference between how Harry is treating his 'army' and how other Dark Lords have in the past is good. I hate it when I see people that run armies with little consideration to the actions of the individuals.

On a quick side note, I think you have missed exactly how powerful really small groups of soldiers can be. you brought in 6 LAAT (which is what, 36 troops total? 12 of which are gunners/pilots) which is prolly twice what would have been needed unless I grossly underestimate the numbers of Death Eaters in question. By almost an order of magnitude underestimate.

Honestly, the number of troops needed from the way these troops operate is more dependant on the size of the area/density of area rather than the number of enemies. I think you would be amazed at the speed 2 or 3 squads could easily take over a neighborhood, especially when the layout is known and enemies relatively obvious. Hot knife through butter is a phrase that comes to mind.

This is a friendly reminder that small number of troops can do massive damage if the intel of the area is known. and they can sometimes do it quicker than a much larger force. Especially if the intel is good.
 

SotF

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#37
The six LAAT's weren't fully loaded.

They did have full crews which is four each (1 pilot and three gunners).

Two of them are LAAT/i's which are the standard transport ones and had a total of 30 soldiers between them. (1 six man ARC unit, two 6 man Commando squads, and a 12 man standard trooper group)

There is a CnC variant that was refitted as a control platform which only had Harry and Crimson in it.

Threre are two LAAT/c's which each carried a single AT-PT each.

The last was basically empty and configured to contain prisoners by replacing that space with cells.

He has a total of 45 clones with him (43 as two died, one of which was an ARC trooper).

Harry has one other LAAT/c that was set up specifically for the capture of the dragon as well, but it doesn't have a normal use and used the crew of another for the mission.
 

mindpron

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#38
Skelethin said:
This is more of what I was looking for.? And what was missing last time...

though, are there any members of the Order that Harry will be seeking to specifically 'turn'?

and I really like how Crimson is developing as a character.? He actually has a specific presence that sets him apart from the other clones, and seems to be more like his own person.

And the difference between how Harry is treating his 'army' and how other Dark Lords have in the past is good.? I hate it when I see people that run armies with little consideration to the actions of the individuals.

On a quick side note, I think you have missed exactly how powerful really small groups of soldiers can be.? you brought in 6 LAAT (which is what, 36 troops total?? 12 of which are gunners/pilots) which is prolly twice what would have been needed unless I grossly underestimate the numbers of Death Eaters in question.? By almost an order of magnitude underestimate.

Honestly, the number of troops needed from the way these troops operate is more dependant on the size of the area/density of area rather than the number of enemies.? I think you would be amazed at the speed 2 or 3 squads could easily take over a neighborhood, especially when the layout is known and enemies relatively obvious.? Hot knife through butter is a phrase that comes to mind.

This is a friendly reminder that small number of troops can do massive damage if the intel of the area is known.? and they can sometimes do it quicker than a much larger force.? Especially if the intel is good.
I think he was going for the psychological effect of serious overkill. While small squad tactics are good for most things, few things will make your enemies piss their pants like the sheer brutality of overwhelming force.

Quantity has a quality of it own, and tends to be far scarier to have to face.
 

SotF

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#39
mindpron said:
I think he was going for the psychological effect of serious overkill. While small squad tactics are good for most things, few things will make your enemies piss their pants like the sheer brutality of overwhelming force.

Quantity has a quality of it own, and tends to be far scarier to have to face.
Yep, that was the original aim for the planned mission, and if the Death Eaters hadn't shown up an hour early they would have been far more terrifying.

As a side note, I'm considering having Crimson actually be a Null-ARC rather than the normal variety. ARC troopers are terrifying when fully kitted out, especially when going by the animated stuff
 

Skelethin

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#40
that is true... i wasn't really thinking about the psychological effect of massive overkill...

Though I would suggest a really small force going after some big target. So they can see being completely overrun by 2 or 3 squads. Which then makes them think of what a larger force is actually capable of...

*shivers in glee*

the joys of being able to rip through an enemy force that outnumbers you 4 to 1 like they aren't even there....
 

SotF

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#41
The first raid the ARC's were used in was like that, 6 troopers and a single LAAT that was mainly there to prevent escapes.

Of course, I have something planned to top that soon with Crimson suggesting that Harry use the Exiles method of breaking and entering...
 

SotF

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The plan for his next attack had been suggested by the teacher of Revan on the holocron and had been worked out with the plans for devices that Palpatine had not seen in his lifetime.

Revan and several of the Sith Lords of his era had seen them, and they knew the power of their type of attack.

Sideous was an effective politcal force, but not as much of a military one. He had used several others to plan the military side of things such as his Grand Admirals.

Crimson had been given the guardsman armor rather than the usual armor he was used to, his position as field commander for the clones was taken up by one of the other ARCs that left two rookie ARCs and another new clone to fill up the roster of his active soldiers.

He only had a few more days until his knight was ready, the slower cloning process required for a force sensitive was frustrating, but prevented the malady known as clone madness.

His plans for dealing with the Order were on hold until Dumbledore arrived at Hogwarts, the man was apparently spending most of histime elsewhere and he wanted that strike to be very public.

The construction of a single thing specifically for the next attack he had planned, something that could safely be unleashed with the target area having been abandoned as "unsafe" by the muggles.

Little Hangleton was one of the major centers of Voldemorts power, and he planned to shatter that powerbase in one fell stroke.

His plan was a two pronged assault, starting with a small group utilizing a rapid blitz at the Riddle House itself. The second part would happen after the fight began, the LAAT's would deploy the rest of his forces into the surrounding area before providing air support.

His ARC's, however, would have a seperate mission in the area and would be equipped with the first few versions of the combat speederbikes for their own skirmish as a preperation against any of the Death Eaters who decided to use brooms in the conflict.

He would burn Little Hangleton to the ground and would make the snake lord know that he was the hunted now...
 

SotF

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The evening calm of Little Hangleton had recently become even quieter as the disappearances and "accidents" slowly drove the inhabitants from their homes and to other portions of the country.

However that peace was shattered by what, at first glance, appeared to be a fireball descending from the sky like a meteor.

Avery's eyes turned skywards in shock, just in time to take the full blast of the upgraded Basilisk War Droids thrusters that slowed the craft down enough to land without harming its crew.

The mechanical behemoth landed with a roar as the ground compacted beneath the veranda, absolute silence filled the town as the Death Eaters moved to see what had happened.

Then the hiss of releasing steam filled the air along with the mist that concealed the sight but not sound of the hatch opening to the sky.

A sudden flash of scarlet in motion drew their attention upwards as the armored form of Crimson leaped while firing his customized light repeating blaster at full auto into the gathered Death Eaters before landing in a crouch.

"Sir," he stated calmly as he finished a clean sweep of the gathered dark wizards, "Dropzone cleared, ready to proceed."

Dion used the force to leviate free of the tight confines of the craft and joined his bodyguard atop the droind before both leaped to the ground and headed into the Riddle Manor they had targeted.

Harry activated his lightsaber, the blood red energy cascade hissing in the growing mist of the evening fog mixed with the steam of their landing.

A wave of force energy ripped the ancient, oaken, double doors off their hinges and into the building a moment before spells started flying at the pair of warriors.
 

SotF

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#46
Mercsenary said:
WOOOOOO! Alright! This is heating up.
Combine rewatching the Clone Wars with the Basilisk scene from KotOR 2 and the plans for this begin to come togather.

ARC troopers get more and more terrifying each time I watch Clone Wars, especially considering one of them took down an AAT with a blaster.
 

SotF

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Reaching deep within the force and grasping his enemies presence firmly, Harry utilized a slight modifiaction of one Exar Kun's stunts.

The screams began inside as the spells stopped coming through the ruined entranceway, the force ripping power from the targets to fuel a few wards he was putting up to prevent the rats from escaping his grasp.

A moment later the agonizing screams ended with the lives of his enemies.

"All units," he stated into the comlink in a wrist mounted computer, "Containment wards are up, commence assault."

"Roger," came the answer as Crimson and Dion entered the manor to see the dessicated enemies, the remnants of lives drained of their very essences by the power of the dark side.

Harry's cloak swirled around him as his heavily armored companion walked just behind and to the left.

Crimson laid a hand on his Lord's shoulder and pointed to the ceiling, the smirk plainly visible to Harry even through their masks and nodded in response.

xXx

Severus Snape was in hell.

He finally admitted that, and hoped he could get out of this one with his skin intact.

Over the past several weeks, the Dark Lord had been troubled by massive and unexplainable losses that started with the loss of the Rosiers and two prisoners that Voldemort had refused to divulge the names of.

He was involved in this madness entirely because he wanted to be on the winning side, and at first playing both sides off of each other was working but that had ended.

A distant explosion rocked the old manor house and a glance out the window showed what looked like gigantic metal birds walking towards them firing off some sort of spell that he couldn't identify but had to be some variant of the blasting hex.

And then he froze as the stench of burning wood touched his nostrils a moment before a burning tube of red flame shot up through the floor and looped around him in a complete circle before he realized what had happened.

"Shit," he managed to stammer before the floor collapsed under him to send him plummeting to the floor below and slam to the ground with a bone jarring impact.

His black eyes adjusted to the limited light of the entryway and saw a helmeted form staring at him right before a blue beam hit him dead on and sent him to unconsciousness.

xXx

A feral growl brought both the siths and clones attention to a figure that slowly began to change.

"Am I missing something here?" Crimson asked as he stepped back.

With a glance down at the computer, Harry gulped before answering, "Damn, it's a full moon and that's a werewolf!"

The clone nodded slowly while bringing his blaster to firing position, "Go, I'll handle the furball."

Without hesitation, Dion used the force to leap through the hole he had carved in the ceiling while the guardsman readied himself for the next battle.

The armored boots impact on the wooden flooring echoing as he landed in a crouch.

Dion moved forwards, bisecting the nearest foe and continuing, becoming a whirling engine of death and dismemberment amidst the screams of the dead and dying.

He did not even pause when shattering another door with a blow backed by the force and a flying death eater.

Harry did, however, stop when he heard the last remaining deatheater draw a sword.

A small smirk graced his lips for a moment as he turned to see who would dare challenge a master of the sith arts to a duel of the blades.

"Rastaban Lestrange," he commented slowly, the mask distorting his voice as he spun his ruby blade, "What a pleasant suprise, I've been wanting to wipe out that stain of a family you are part of."

The energy blade and the rapier clashed, but the blade held against the strike, both combatants pressing the other.

"I must say that you blade is impressive," Dion remarked offhandedly, "Usually mine slices through just about anything with little to no effort."

The dark wizard grunted in effort before a blast of force energy sent him back several steps.

"Now what is your secret?" the sith lord asked as a leap carried him over his foe like a blur.

His gentle touch with a mind probe gave him the answer, "Ah, such a naughty one you are, unbreakable AND sharpening charms, I must say that it is quite devious of you."

Spinning and bringing his blade up, "But you must know..."

He met the next charge, using the saber to run his foe through.

Harry stared into the fading eyes as the dying man let out a gasp for air, "...you cannot win."

Steping to the side while deactivating his saber, Dion let the man fall to the ground while snatching up the rapier.

"I believe that this could do better in my hands," he stated to the fallen Lestrange before feeling the place was all but empty, the rest of the Death Eaters escaping through the air on the roof.

A glance out the window saw the ARC squad swoop down on BARC's to deal with the escapees.

Harry's attention turned back to the gasping man on the floor, "It looks like your 'all so noble' sacrifice was in vain, but I believe that I will let you live for now and let you take a message for me to your pathetic master, tell him that the Sith is comming and nothing can stand in the way."

xXx

Crimson dodged the beastial assault by the greying wolfman that was attacking him, the burns of a half-dozen blaster shots still smouldering on its flesh.

The creature moved fast and a suprise strike sent sparks into the air where the claws met armor before the beast sent his blaster flying.

That annoyed the soldier as he lashed out, driving his knee into the werewolf's stomach with enough force to send the creature tumbling end over end as he drew his vibrodagger.

"Look's like I've been forced to skin a wolf," he muttered to himself as he dodged another attack, "The old fashioned way."

Another kick, this one taking a full rotation from the guardsman before the attack connected, sending the silver furred monster across the room before throwing the weapon.

A high pitched yelp burst from the were as the blade pierced its arm at the elbow, severing the lower left arm.

Crimson charged his foe, driving his fist into the right shoulder with a bone crunching punch.

The wolf tried to run, but the armored warrior was quicker and snatched its tail to swing it around and smash it to the ground with another yelp.

A savage kick flipped it to its back as he pulled a silver and sperical device from a belt pouch and jammed it between the creatures jaws.

"How's that for a chew toy," Crimson commented as he used his booted foot to force the now flashing device farther down the beasts throat and walking away to grab their single prisoner while Dion dropped back down the hole and joined him on their way out.

The heavily injured Rastaban was left in the ruined garden as they met up with the other soldiers that had burned the village to the ground and were boarding the LAAT's.

"Mission complete," Harry stated calmly as the house detonated behind them, "Return to base."
 
#48
Thermal Detonators as Werewolf-chewtoys?! :hail:
 

Skelethin

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#49
Crimson commented as he used his booted for to force the now flashing device farther down the beasts throat and walking away
Didn't you mean "booted foot to force the now flashing device farther down the beasts throat and walking away" ?
 

SotF

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#50
Skelethin said:
Crimson commented as he used his booted for to force the now flashing device farther down the beasts throat and walking away
Didn't you mean "booted foot to force the now flashing device farther down the beasts throat and walking away" ?
Fixed it, thanks for the catch
 
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