Akamatsuverse Keitaro Otou-San

#1
After one too many beatings, Keitaro begs Kitsune to help him with Naru's problems. Kitsune, in turn, arranges for a psychologist to go over Naru's history and to actually talk with her. Naru, naturally, is unhappy about this but agrees to go in for an evaluation, even though she says that Keitaro is all to blame.

The psychologist comes up with a theory: Based on the evidence, Naru has severe issues with her father, and desperately craves a paternal figure because she's from a divorced home. As Keitaro is the only male around, she beats on him due to conflicting feelings regarding him. So, the psychologist proposes an unorthodox solution: Roleplaying.

Keitaro plays the role of Naru's paternal figure, and the rest of the Hinata Sou goes along with it to provide Naru with a family, something she lost. Naru protests, naturally, and believes that the other tenants won't go along with it. However, she is wrong.

Kitsune, Haruka and Mutsumi support it because it'll help Naru get better. Motoko supports it because if Keitaro acts as Naru's father figure he won't be perverted. Su thinks it'll be fun. And Shinobu is thrilled... Until it turns out that Kitsune will be Naru's mother figure as she has some issues with her, too.

A little hypnosis courtesy of Su's technology and Keitaro is in the right mindset to treat Naru like his daughter. Kitsune cheerfully leaps into the role of mother figure. And Naru, while petulant and angry at first, begins to modify her behavior... Especially after Keitaro starts spanking her every time she lashes out violently.

Shinobu competes with Kitsune to serve as a better mother figure (and thus, wife to Keitaro), Motoko is pleased to be a big sister... Until Keitaro calls her on telling "Naru-chan" that all men are perverts, and insists she act better. And Mutsumi essentially plays the role of Kitsune's whimsical, live-in sister.

What are your thoughts?
 

FinalMax

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#2
This sounds interesting. An unusual approach to therapy, though doubtful that any such treatment would be prescribed in reality. Being Love Hina, though, let's it slide on those pesky details.
 
#3
I thought that Kei would just be adopting so and so but this is a much better Idea. Though that'd make the romance akward later.
 
#4
Master of Squirrel-Fu said:
I thought that Kei would just be adopting so and so but this is a much better Idea. Though that'd make the romance akward later.
With Naru? Yes. With the other girls? Not so much. ^_^

Ya see, Keitaro is a good father...
 

zerohour

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#5
Now would this be serious, humorous, or serious with some humor?

I could easily see Kitsune and Keitaro "testing" some different parental personality types for a while until they settle into an acceptable one. Probably could be contained in a single bonus chapter or as a series of omakes if the tone was mostly serious. Bonus points if the personality is difficult for them to portray.




Would the roleplaying be limited to weekends, or would it be a daily thing? Would it extend outside of the property?

Lewd jokes of incest is best?

So would this make Haruka "Granny Haruka?" :snigger:

Would Kanako be added to the family at some point?
 
#6
zerohour said:
Now would this be serious, humorous, or serious with some humor?

I could easily see Kitsune and Keitaro "testing" some different parental personality types for a while until they settle into an acceptable one.? Probably could be contained in a single bonus chapter or as a series of omakes if the tone was mostly serious.? Bonus points if the personality is difficult for them to portray.




Would the roleplaying be limited to weekends, or would it be a daily thing?? Would it extend outside of the property?

Lewd jokes of incest is best?

So would this make Haruka "Granny Haruka?" :snigger:

Would Kanako be added to the family at some point?
I'd write it with some doses of seriousness, but given this is Love Hina, it is mostly humor. You might write it differently.

I figure Kitsune would try to go Yamato Nadesico as a wife and mother... Perhaps as part of a bet with Motoko. Motoko doubts Kitsune can be a proper wife, so they make a bet: Kitsune becomes the perfect wife and mother, Motoko has to go on a date with Keitaro. Kitsune fails, and she has to give up booze.

For a year. That'd be more than enough motivation for Kitsune to go all out.

I think the roleplaying would go on all the time for a while, until Naru adjusted and they could cut back on it gradually.

Oh, there will be plenty of such jokes, but Kitsune will have to mind her tongue if she's going to win the bet.

Heheheh... Oh yes.

As for Kanako... She'd join the competition to become Keitaro's wife figure.

Su isn't remotely bothered-After all, several wives and mothers is perfectly normal for her.
 

zerohour

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#7
I would protest the always roleplaying part, because if they're out in public, it could easily make Naru highly uncomfortable, which could lead to either violence or giving up on it.
 

The Ero-Sennin

The Eyes of Heaven
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#8
Pfft. It's comedy, though, that bit of reality can be disregarded, as it tends to always be in fiction.
 

Crusader

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#9
Why do I have the bad feeling that Naru will stumble on various father x daughter incest manga in the Hinata-sou while they're at it trying to make her more stable..
 

The Ero-Sennin

The Eyes of Heaven
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#10
...Wow, I never considered that angle. Well done Crusader.
 

dan27

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#11
Who would Naru approve of as her mother figure?
 

Innortal

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#12
Well, if Kitsune, we know who will suggest bare-bottom spankings.
 
#13
Kitsune is the obvious choice... Shinobu might bribe Su with Banana Pies in order to get herself a "growth spurt" so she can compete as a mother figure. Naturally, part of Su's hypnosis of Keitaro would make him essentially think he was a single parent, just so he isn't too changed.
 

Innortal

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#14
Andrew Joshua Talon said:
Kitsune is the obvious choice... Shinobu might bribe Su with Banana Pies in order to get herself a "growth spurt" so she can compete as a mother figure. Naturally, part of Su's hypnosis of Keitaro would make him essentially think he was a single parent, just so he isn't too changed.
"Um ... Kitsune-sempai is alseep again from something called vodka. Can I stand in, Sempai?"
 
#15
Innortal said:
Andrew Joshua Talon said:
Kitsune is the obvious choice... Shinobu might bribe Su with Banana Pies in order to get herself a "growth spurt" so she can compete as a mother figure. Naturally, part of Su's hypnosis of Keitaro would make him essentially think he was a single parent, just so he isn't too changed.
"Um ... Kitsune-sempai is alseep again from something called vodka. Can I stand in, Sempai?"
"Er, sure... Isn't that outfit a little drafty?"
 

PCHeintz72

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#16
Motoko supports it because if Keitaro acts as Naru's father figure he won't be perverted.
Hmmm... so she would believe fathers cannot be perverted...

Depending on what you think her plans for Keitaro were, this likely would also have the potential to screw up Hina's objectives.... I like it.
 
#17
PCHeintz72 said:
Motoko supports it because if Keitaro acts as Naru's father figure he won't be perverted.
Hmmm... so she would believe fathers cannot be perverted...

Depending on what you think her plans for Keitaro were, this likely would also have the potential to screw up Hina's objectives.... I like it.
Well, anything to mess with the old bat, I always say. ^_^

The hypnosis would work on the fact that humans are very good at self-deception and that memory is a tricky thing. If Keitaro was to be convinced that he was a father and Naru was his daughter, then it wouldn't take much more input to allow his brain to fill in the "gaps" of memory to complete the illusion.

- - - - - -

Keitaro had just come from Su's room, and was smiling cheerfully. It was a great day-The sun was shining, birds were singing, and his beautiful daughter was waiting for him to help her study. He had learned a lot more teaching her than he'd ever learned being taught, that was for sure.

He saw Naru walking up the hallway, and he raised a hand to greet her-But, as was always the case in the Hinata Sou, he tripped and fell, his hand accidentally snagging her skirt and pulling it down.

"Whoops!" He shouted. He looked up at Naru. "Naru, you all right?"

Naru's eyes widened and she seethed in anger.

"YOU PERVERT!" She cried, and punched him hard. He slammed into the wall, and groaned. He then got angry.

"NARU NARUSEGAWA!" He snarled angrily. "WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING?!"

Naru looked shocked. The young girl stared in fear, and Keitaro, still running on anger, grabbed her wrist and yanked her over his lap.

"H-HEY! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!" Naru demanded. She gaped in shock as she felt Keitaro yank down her skirt and her panties. "Y-You wouldn't-!"

"I'm sorry Naru-chan, but this is for your own good," Keitaro said grimly. He spanked her, hard.

SMACK!

"OWWWW!" Naru cried. "YOU-YOU-!"

SMACK! SMACK! SMACK! SMACK! SMACK! SMACK! SMACK! SMACK! Keitaro spanked her quickly, ten times, before he let her go. Naru got to her feet, trembling, her face red in pain, anger and humiliation.

"Now, you go to your room and think about what you did," Keitaro said sternly. Naru choked back a sob, and pulled her underwear and skirt back up. She winced at the pain, and went off as quickly as she could.

Keitaro sighed, and bowed his head. He didn't like to spank Naru-It was the thing he least enjoyed about parenting, but... She couldn't just do that sort of thing without punishment. He took several deep breaths to calm himself, before he stood up and walked in the direction Naru had gone.

Kitsune and Su observed from a hiding spot nearby. The Mol Mol genius grinned at Kitsune.

"Am I a genius or what?" Su asked. Kitsune nodded, her eyes wide.

"Su is a genius."

- - - - - - -

Naru sat in her room, her covers over her head. She knew about the roleplay, how everything was supposed to be, but... She hadn't expected that! Keitaro was always a pushover, a weakling...

Not father material... Not someone who'd... Who'd...!

Keitaro knocked on her door. "Naru-chan? It's me."

"G-Go away," she sniffled. "You... You pervert..."

Keitaro entered anyway, and walked next to Naru's futon. He sat down next to her, and sighed heavily. She peeked out from her covers, eyes just above her blanket.

"I didn't want to do that, Naru-chan," Keitaro admitted. "But... You have to understand, if you can't control that temper of yours, well... You might hurt someone and get in trouble... And that's the last thing I want for you."

"You... You pulled down my skirt!" She insisted. Keitaro nodded.

"I know... I'm sorry. But it was an accident. You know I wouldn't intentionally do something like that, right Naru-chan?"

Naru sniffled, about to retort, but... Keitaro had been modified by Su, right? He wouldn't act like a pervert... Unless something went wrong. But, the genuine look in his eyes, well... That was hard to fight. She nodded grudgingly.

"Y-Yeah..."

"And you shouldn't hit people for their accidents," he said calmly. "You wouldn't want me to punch you for making a mistake, would you?"

Naru felt a stab of guilt at this, and slowly nodded.

"Yes... But... But you mess up too much!" She insisted. Keitaro nodded.

"You're right... I am clumsy. I should try to do better."

"Yes, you... What?" Naru blinked. Keitaro smiled.

"I promise, I'll do better about that, okay?" He said. "But you need to learn how to control your temper... How about we help eachother?"

Naru stared for a moment longer, before she slowly nodded. "All... All right..."

"All right," Keitaro said with a smile. He pulled Naru into a tight hug, one which she hesitantly returned. He kissed her on the top of her head, an action that immediately made her blush.

"Ah..."

"It's all right," he said. He smiled at her. "I love you, you know that right?"

"You..." Naru's blush darkened. "R-Right..."

"Good... Now, dinner's going to be ready in a little while... You want to go play for a bit now, or later?"

"I... I'd just like to be alone for a while," she said. Keitaro nodded, and hugged her again.

"All right... I'll come get you when it's time for dinner, okay?"

Naru nodded, and Keitaro let go. He stood up, and walked towards the door. However, he stopped when he got to Liddo-Kun, picked him up, and took him over to Naru.

"Here... Don't let him sit all by himself," Keitaro said with a gentle smile. Naru nodded, and held the toy.

"R-Right..."

Keitaro left, and Naru sighed.

This is... So weird... He spanked me! I can't believe it... She looked at her Liddo-kun.

But... It was kind of... Nice... Afterwards...

- - - - - -

"This is working out great," Kitsune enthused. "He's kind but firm, I love it!" She also had to admit watching Keitaro spank Naru was a bit of a turn on. Hey, she was kinky, deal with it.

"Mmmhm," Su said cheerfully. She looked at her personal computer... And frowned. "Uh oh."

"Uh oh? What's uh oh?" Kitsune asked flatly. Su began typing rapidly.

"Oh... Probably nothing," she said quickly.

"Probably?" Kitsune asked with a growl. Su shrugged.

"Well, may have added an extra variable to perception alterations..."

"You mean a mother figure to Naru, right?" Kitsune asked. Su nodded. "Well, that's pretty simple... It's me, right?"

Su coughed. "Ahhh..."

"Right?"

"Well, you're one," she said. "The other, ummm..."

"The other?" Kitsune prompted. Su coughed.

"I couldn't resist! She made me banana cream pie!"

"Shinobu!"

- - - - - - -

Keitaro entered the kitchen, stretching with a groan. He opened his eyes, and smiled. There was Shinobu, gorgeous as usual, working at the stove. He snuck up behind her, and wrapped his arms around her tightly.

"Ah...! Sempai!" She cried out, surprised. Keitaro nuzzled her neck with a grin.

"Come on Shinobu-chan, I'm not that much older than you," he said, as his hands began to roam her generous curves. "But if that's the sort of thing you want to play~..."

"Oooohhh..." Shinobu moaned happily. Oh yes, she was going to love being Naru-sempai's mother... And Keitaro's wife, heheheh...
 

Ordo

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#18
"Clever girl...."
 

Crusader

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#20
Sneaky Shinobu :D

Will Seta and Sarah also try to help Naru with this therapy by playing along?
 
#22
Where is Mutsumi in this? I demand her participation. Or else I will hunt you all down and smack you with fish.
 
#23
nuclear death frog said:
Where is Mutsumi in this? I demand her participation. Or else I will hunt you all down and smack you with fish.
Ugh, fish. I hate fish.

All right, Mutsumi plays Kitsune's live-in sister... Who also serves as a wife figure to Keitaro and an aunt figure to Naru. Hey, it's programmed by Su after all.
 

Crusader

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#24
Andrew Joshua Talon said:
Crusader said:
Sneaky Shinobu :D

Will Seta and Sarah also try to help Naru with this therapy by playing along?
Yes they will, heheheh.
Will Ramba and Amara Su also be added into this? I can imgaine the mess they would make. :p
 

zeebee1

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#25
That sounded like a complaint. You're lucky you hadn't started then.
 
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