KOTOR 2 AU Fic

#1
Before I start, here is the reasoning behind this fic.

(Going off of Terry Pratchetts' "Trousers of Time" concept, and adding a taste of Temporal Mechanics, this is what I have:


Every action has an equal and opposite reaction, and this is true even in reference to time and space. Thus, our reality has an uncountable number of realities branching off of it, from small things like whether this morning you put left shoe on before your right or vice versa, to big things, like Germany winning the First World War.

Sometimes, these diffent realities are so similar, they rub against each other, weaking the "walls" of their realities. Furthermore, inside each reality, there are certain resonances. For instance, no matter how far apart two KOTOR universes might be, they will always have a Revan who was mind wiped by the Jedi Council.

Sometimes, though, the resonance is very subtle, but can be amplified by certain events. The use of the Mass Shadow Generator on Malachor V, for instance, killed a vast number of Force-Sensitive beings. These deaths, all happening at once, caused a breach in the walls of reality. In most of the realities, this event passed without mishap, but in the story I want to write here, another reality (our own) was interacting with the KOTOR reality, and something, or rather someone, came through, and harmonised with the Exile.

Because of this, the Exile now has what I'm referring to as "Inter-Dimensional Uncertainty". At almost random times, she'll phase out of reality, and the second entity phases in in her place.)

On with the fic.

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TEN YEARS AGO....

OVER MALACHOR V
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Turbolasers flashed and glowed red-hot as two fleets tore into each other, like starving Kath Hounds. Mandalorian gunships and Republic frigates blazed as enemy fire burned through the vacumn. On the bridge of one Republic destroyer, Jedi Knight Fiolla Karris touched a panel on her chair, and nodded to the Zabrak beside her.

"The time is now. Activate the Mass Shadow Generator, Bao-Dur."

"Yes, General." Bao-dur replied in his usual toneless voice, and activated a terminal as Fiolla opened a channel to her leader. The holopit flickered into life as Revan, the Jedi leading the Republic defence against the Mandalorians began to speak.

"What's the situation, Fiolla?"

"We're transmitting the activation codes for the MSG now, Revan. The weapon should fire in 180 seconds from now."

"Very well, General Karris. Start pulling your ships back to Point Gamma to avoid the effects of the MSG." Revan said, as the hologram winked out.

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APRIL 12th, 1944

KOHIMA, INDIA
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The whistling of shells and small-arms fire was almost overwhelming. Sergeant Peter Openshaw and his squad hunkered down behind a fallen tree and fired at the approaching ranks of Japanese soldiers, who streamed towards their location on Garrison Hill.

"Come on lads! Let's give these yellow devils a bloody nose!" Openshaw bellowed, sighting down his No. 4, and cranking off round after round. There was a sharp chattering sound, and a Jap LMG opened up, kicking up mud and dirt around the squad.

"Tony!" someone said, as one of the squaddies jerked backwards. Peter crawled over to take a look. It was bad.

"Parkins! Jones! Get Harris back down the line, to the nearest aid station. Thompson, Smith, go with them and try to round up any able bodies you can."

"Right away, Sergeant." the four men said, and slipped down the other side of the hill, out of the Japs' Line of Fire. Openshaw looked back at the five men with him, and nodded to himself.

"All right, we're in a tight spot, lads, I don't deny that. Nonetheless, we have to try to hold this ridge until Thompson and Smith get back. If neccessary, we'll pull back to that line of rocks over there. Until then, let's give 'em hell!" Openshaw barked, his strong Northern accent betraying his Manchester upbringing.

An unholy scream of "BANZAI!" rang out as he spoke, causing the reduced squad to duck as another fusilade of Japanese gunfire snarled overhead. The Japanese were attacking again, this time a full company in strength. The six British soldiers raised their rifles and SMG, and replied in kind, occasionally rolling hand grenades down to the Japs.

The Japanese were being pushed back, when suddenly mortar bombs started exploding around the Brits. "Fall back, I'll cover you!" Openshaw bellowed, loading fresh ammunition into his rifle.

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OVER MALACHOR V
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"MSG activating in T minus 10 seconds." Bao-Dur said. Fiolla nodded, and kept her eye on the holochart.

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KOHIMA, INDIA
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Openshaw heard the whistling sound of a falling mortar shell. He leapt to his feet to run, but the bomb was too close. Peter shut his eyes-

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OVER MALACHOR V
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"Activating!" The ship suddenly lurched as the force of gravity multipled exponentionally. Ships, fightercraft, and people cried out as they were crushed by an unyieldingly massive force. Their dying screams echoed out through the Force, hammering at the mental walls of all Jedi, and Fiolla Karris in particular. She grabbed at her head, her fingernails cutting into her flesh as she screamed in pain.

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?
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The bomb did not explode. Cautiously, Peter opened his eyes after a few seconds.

"What the blood and stomach pills...?" he faltered, turning his head around this way and that.

He was suspended in the centre of an endless expanse of purple, streaked with black. In front of and behind him, two huge circles of pitch black shimmered, giving the impression of unimaginable speed as Peter stood upright. Slowly, he slung his rifle over his shoulder, took his eyeglasses off, and rubbed his face slowly. Donning his glasses once more, he looked around. Nothing had changed.

"Oh boy....." he sighed. He had no clue what was going on, but he had the feeling that if something was going to happen, it would take a while to get to here..... wherever 'here' was. Sighing once more, he pulled a carton of Benson and Hedges from his tunic, and drew out 'the lucky smoke', the one that he'd found upside-down in the pack when he'd bought it at the NAAFI, which was to be only smoked in the direst of occasions.

"Wh-Whoops!" he said, as the carton slipped out of his hand. "Damn! That was my last packet!" he said crossly, seeing the cigarettes disappear. As he despondantly looked after them, he spotted a glowing reflection in his spectacles.

"What on Earth?" he wondered, turning around. "Oh, I say......" he breathed.

Before him, the dark circle now had a spot of bright white light growing. Peter stared as he was sucked into it. "Oh, Bliiiiiimmeeyyyyyyyyyyy....."

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OVER MALACHOR V
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Peter felt his jaw drop as the light faded away. "...Bloody Hell..." he gaped soundlessly. He was suspended miles and miles over a planet, surrounded by what could only be spaceships. In the centre of his view, was a spaceship far larger than anything he'd ever seen, even in one of those Flash Gordon serials at the pictures. He floated towards it, like a moth to a flame. As he drew close to it, he saw the name painted on the hull, identifying it as the VALIANT.

"It's English!" he exclaimed.

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Fiolla Karris was lying down on the deckplates, barely concious. The awful screaming had mercifully ceased, but it had extracted a terrible toll on her. The bridgecrew were in a state of barely controlled panic as they fought to pull the Valiant out of the gravity well. A few marines and medics bustled onto the bridge, lead by Lieutenant Azkul, who directed the troops and medics.

Unseen by anyone, Peter drifted onto the bridge, towards a striking woman with almost white-blonde hair, who was lying on the deckplates. He looked at her as people bustled about.

'I say.....' he thought, watching a pair of orderlies load her onto a stretcher. 'She's beautiful...' Idly, he reached out, and traced her fine jawline.

"Hey! What do you think you're doing?!" a woman shouted. Peter jumped, and his head thumped against something.

"Ohgodthebackofmyhead! he yelped, putting his hand up to rub the bruise that was forming. Looking around, he performed a double-take. "What the blue blank blazes?" he exclaimed, seeing the woman standing not a foot away from him, next to the stretcher, with her hands on her hips. For several seconds, his eyes darted between the two.

"I said, what do you think you're doing?" the woman said, taking a step towards Peter.

"Woah, woah, woah, woah, easy, easy. I didn't mean to cause any offence." Peter said, waving his hands in front of him in what he hoped was a concilliatory fashion.

"Well... You don't look like the sort who'd cause harm to anybody..." the woman said bluntly. "Just who are you, anyway?"

'Well, thank you very much!' Peter thought archly, as he repositioned the rifle on his shoulder. The sling was cutting into his shoulder. "Openshaw. Sergeant Peter Openshaw, British Army. And you are...?"

"Karris. General Fiolla Karris of the Galactic Republic."
the woman replied sternly, but inwardly chortling at the sudden change in demenour of this 'Sergeant Openshaw'.

With an "Erk!", the British Sergeant shot upright into a stiff pose of attention, which partly dislodged his glasses, and saluted. "I apologise for speaking so rudely, ma'am!" he barked, feeling a bead of cold sweat trickle down the side of his face.

Fiolla blinked at the strange man who was staring cross-eyed towards her. Quietly, she began to laugh. It rose higher and higher, until it was an out-and-out cackle.

Suddenly, the ship lurched again, and the stretcher swung to one side, passing through Openshaw and Karris at the same moment. There was a metaphysical gurgling sound, and Peter and Fiolla both corkscrewed down into her body, with a cry of "Stop the universe, I want to get off!" on Peter's part, and "What the fra-?!" from Fiolla.
 

Gong

Well-Known Member
#2
Egads! You're thinking of dropping a 1940s Englishman into the The Exile's misadventures? That's pretty awesome. This fic must continue.

Since the bit in India focusses on Openshaw, may I assume that he is going to be "dropping in", so to speak? I'd like to see how Kreia deals with this setback.

At the very least it'll confuse the hell out of Atris.
 
#3
Oh, yes. Right now, actually. It won't be exactly how people will imagine....

:evil: :evil: :evil:
 

Fosfor

Well-Known Member
#5
<reads it>

<turns it around>

<turns it upside down>

<reads it again>

I don't know why... It is well written, seems interesting but... I don't like it at all. And I have NO IDEA why. I just don't. Sorry.
 

Gong

Well-Known Member
#6
Poor Sergeant Openshaw. Doomed to share a body with a pushy Jedi general. If there aren't any physical changes when he is in control, then I feel even worse for him.

Looking forward to moar.
 
#7
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ABOUT SEVEN DAYS LATER

CORUSCANT
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Fiolla Karris was led through the maze of winding passageways that made up the Jedi Temple on Coruscant, the boots of her escort thumping loudly against the floorplates. Silently marching in time to her was a pale man wearing a dust coloured short-sleeved tunic and a pair of knee-length shorts. Over his shoulder, a large slug-thrower rifle jostled as he held its sling on his shoulder.

"Now then, Openshaw, the Council doesn't know about you, so don't do anything to make me look a fool, understood?" Fiolla sternly said through the Force to her unexpected passenger.

"Crystal, ma'am." Peter Openshaw agreed, a bead of sweat trickling down his cheek. He rubbed the back of his neck with his hand as the group arrived at a pair of elegant double doors. The two Jedi opened them, and indicated that Fiolla should enter with their thumbs. With her silent Sergeant following warily in her footsteps, Jedi Knight Fiolla Karris entered the meeting chambers for the High Council of the Jedi Order.

"Do you know why we have called you here?" a stern, older man said. He looked to be in his late 50's, and had balding grey hair. To Peter, he looked remarkably like an officer he'd met once, during an inspection.

"Yes. You've called me to explain why I went to war, right?" Fiolla stated, knowing full well that that was why they were all here. Peter himself wandered around, examining each member of the High Council closely.

"As Revan summoned you, so have you come full circle to return to the Jedi." A younger man with reddish-brown hair spoke next. Peter wasn't sure, but it almost sounded like this man, whoever he was, was disappointed in Fiolla. His thoughts were interrupted by the third man, bald like the first man, but who seemed to compensate with an enormous walrus moustache.

"Why did you defy us? The Jedi are guardians of the peace and have been for centuries. This call to war undermines all that we have worked for." the moustached man spoke. Peter turned his head again, as this time one of the women spoke.

"Is Revan your master now? Or is it the horror you wrought at Malachor that has caused you to see the truth at last?" she spoke disdainfully, her eyes and voice as cold as her snow-white hair.

'That's curious....' Peter thought, and walked over to the white-haired woman. He was suprised to see that she could not have been more than, at a guess, 28-30 years old. Certainly she was younger than Peter himself.

In the silence as Fiolla considered her answer, Peter turned his attention towards the last member of the Council, which was starting to sound more and more like a kangaroo court. A short exclamation of Anglo-Saxon invective passed the Sergeants' lips.

"A bloody Jap!" he growled, unslinging his rifle and slapping a clip of .303 into the magazine, before loading a round into the firing chamber.

"Peter! What the hell are you doing?!" Fiolla mentally barked at her passenger. The sudden, fierce tones that reverberated in his skull caused Peter to drop his rifle and clap his hands over his ears with a yelp.

"Ow! That hurt!" he groused at Fiolla.

"Serves you right, you violent pip-squeak." Fiolla replied severely. Peter glowered angrily at that. He hated it when people made fun of his small stature.

"A-HEM!" The older man said loudly, breaking Fiollas' concentration. "Master Atris asked you a question. You would do well to answer it."

"Yes, Master Vrook." Fiolla said, slightly sullenly. "I realize that following Revan to war was in violation of the Jedi Code - and I broke it, knowingly defying the wishes of the Council. But, Masters, the Mandalorians could have defeated the Republic if we'd continued to stand idly by."

The white-haired woman, evidently Master Atris, snorted and muttered under her breath. "You refuse to hear us. You have shut us out, and so have shut yourself to the galaxy."

The younger, clean-shaven Master seemed to ignore Atris, and merely said "It is good you recognize this. It means you will understand why you must leave us."

"You are exiled, and you are a Jedi no longer." the moustached Master said. Finally, Master Vrook spoke one last time. "There is one last thing. Your lightsabre. Surrender it to us."

Peter winced slightly. "Oooooh, that's a kick in the teeth." he remarked. He'd not been in this galaxy for very long, but even in that short time he had picked up about just how important a lightsabre was to a Jedi.

Fiolla walked up to the centrestone of the Council Chambers. With a shout of anger, and anguish, she activated the single cyan blade of her weapon and jammed it securely into the centre of the pillar. After that, she spun on her heel and marched out.

"Come on Peter." she said sharply. Openshaw gave the Council a dirty look, and then turned to follow. As his arms swung, one of his Mills grenades was knocked off of his belt, and the pin caught on a button. The bomb bounced off his heel and rolled into the centre of the Council Chamber, the handle of the safety catch barely kept in place, keeping it from detonating.
 

Jakkun

Well-Known Member
#8
I need to play Kotor 2. -_-

It looks like a good game.

Although I don't know much of what's going on, it looks pretty good so far.
 

Gong

Well-Known Member
#9
"Now then, Openshaw, the Council doesn't know about you, so don't do anything to make me look a fool, understood?"
Whoops. Sorry lady, you just screwed yourself over. Mr. Murphy is coming to town.

I need to play Kotor 2.
Yeah, I'm waiting for the restoration project to be completed before I fire up my copy for the first time. I loved KOTOR 1, and the waiting is killing me, but I want to get the full experience when I create my character.
 

Jakkun

Well-Known Member
#10
Restoration project? I think I'm out of the loop here.
 

Fatuous One

Well-Known Member
#11
KoTOR 2 had a lot of cut content, even so far as the removal of an entire stage. However, a lot of the data for that stage (unfinished as it is) was left. The restoration project is a fangroup finishing it themselves, basically.

Knights of the Old Republic II Restoration Project



On a side note, even discarding that they cut a lot of the content, the story of KoTOR suffered so much that it was painful to play towards the end. Damn if I didn't feel cheated when I finished it.
 

Jakkun

Well-Known Member
#12
I shall wait then. I didn't know the game could use mods. Interesting. I wonder just what they could potentially add.
 
#13
Bwa-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-haaaaa... Murphy is in the house! Now, for an encore, Master Lonna Vash (the woman Peter called "a Jap") will interrupt Fiolla, and Peter shall re-enter the world of the living.....
 

Gong

Well-Known Member
#14
Oh crackers. I am most curious to see what happens when an astral grenade detonates.

Does Openshaw retain the Exile's form when he is in control, or does the body change?
 
#15
Fiolla fades out, and Peter fades in. That's the best way I can explain it.

Anyhow, on with the story!

Fiolla Karris, once a Knight of the Jedi Order, but now an Exile, trudged away from the Council Chambers, faintly leaning to the right due to the lack of the balancing weight of her lightsabre. Behind her, visible only to her, walked Peter Openshaw, a very small, but pugnacious man with glasses. The bolt-action rifle over his shoulder bounced against the back of his left thigh with each step. Both Fiolla and Peter wore expressions of deep contemplation on their faces, albeit for different reasons.

'That's it then, I suppose...' Fiolla thought as she headed away to collect her things. 'Tossed out on my ear like a piece of trash. Story of my life, really.'

'By Heavens, if I had my body back, I'd give those doddering, bossy fuddy-duddies a piece of my mind, and no mistake!' Peter grumbled mentally, his moustache bristling like a tiny hedgehog on his upper lip. 'Pity I can't, though. A mere shade in reality, that's me,' he waxed philosophically, before putting his right hand into the waist pocket of his short trousers. A faint tinkling sound and a tugging sensation on his belt caught his attention at that point, making him look down.

"Hello? What's this?" he commented softly, unhooking the metal thing from his belt. "A ring-pull. That's unusual... to... Oh, 'Eck!" he gulped, spinning around and haring off in the direction he'd came.

He dived through the doors that lead into the chambers, and saw the hand grenade on the floor. It looked as though the only thing stopping it from detonating was the weight of the explosive pressing down on the safety handle. He grabbed the Mills Bomb and looked around, barely noticing that those so-called Jedi Masters were still there talking.

"Ah, a window!" Peter exclaimed, spotting an arpeture in the windowframe. He ran over to it, and jammed the grenade in. It got stuck, and he swore violently.

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Master Vash glanced behind her for a moment. She could have sworn that she had heard something just now.

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With a growl of frustration and a bit of fear, Peter unslung his rifle, and slammed the shoulderstock into the window with all his might. The window shattered with a huge crash, and the grenade flew out into mid-air, where the safety grip opened and the grenade began to cook off. Four seconds later, it detonated about a hundred feet below the window.

"Well, that could have been nasty for all concerned... Oh...." he commented, as he turned around, and suddenly realised that he was being stared at. There was a long, awkward silence.

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The Jedi Council stared in, it couldn't be called shock, perhaps suprise, as the strange man in short trousers looked back at them. "Uhm.... Sorry about the window," the man said. "Muggins here-" he pointed at himself. "-knocked a grenade from his belt by accident." Vrook stood and walked towards the odd man, his hand warily hovering over his lightsabre, before Kavar stayed him.

"I'll, er, let meself out, so, er, yeah, bye!" the man said, before spinning around and breaking out into a flat run for the door. His short legs pumped as he put on a suprising turn of speed towards the door. He was only a few feet from it before one of the Jedi Masters reacted.

Peter yelped as he rose several feet up into the air, flip upside-down, then began to float back towards the group. He shut up and gaped in shock as he saw his rifle unsling itself from his shoulder, and the bolt open on its' own, ejecting all the rounds in the magazine before coming to rest on the ground beside Kavar.

"Um... Hello." Peter began nervously. "I'm Sergeant Openshaw. Sorry about this..." His hand nervously twisted into the fairly shaggy hair that had grown up since before he'd been sent to the front lines, before he'd come to this galaxy. He gazed around the group, feeling, for some reason, like he was a kid again, and his mum had caught him pinching biscuits.

The woman in white, Atris, didn't seem to have heard him, because she got in his face and said, "Who are you? Are you one of Revan's assassins?"

"Who's Revan? The name sounds French..." Peter said, sniffing slightly in accordance to the age old tradition of Englishmen disliking the French.

Vash raised her hand. "I sense something strange about this man. Can you not feel it? It is as if he is here, but also lightyears away at the same time. And there is... a trace... of the Exile on him."

The entire group, including Peter, stared at Vash. Peter raised his hand. "Ah, if it's not a bother, could you possibly put me down? Or at the least, turn me right side up? I only ask because of all the blood rushing into me head..." He was quickly turned right-side up again.

"Thank you. Now, is there any reason you've got me, or can I go find Fio now?" he grumbled.

Vash put her hand on his shoulder and spoke in a soft, gentle voice. "Be at peace, Peter, we merely wish to ask you some things." At that, Peter stiffened, and said in an officious voice,

"I'm sorry, Madam, but under the Geneva Convention of 1929, Prisoners of War, which is what I assume I am, may only give their name, rank, and serial number. This I have already done." he then fell obstinantly silent.

At least, that was his intention. He opened his mouth, inhaled, and-

"All right, what do you want to know?"

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Fiolla sat in the cell that she'd been left in while the Council arranged for her to be sent off-world. She looked at her hands, and rubbed at the thick callouses from where she'd wielded her lightsabre for so long, and took stock of herself. She'd been cut off from the Force, abandoned by the only family she'd known all her life, and had few, if any skills that could offer her a life; needless to say, her outlook was grim. She sighed, and leaned back against the wall. "I wonder where Peter is? He may be an idiot, but at least I could talk to him."

In her mind, she heard a petulant 'I heard that' from Openshaw and actually giggled.

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Dawn_Gazer

Well-Known Member
#16
David winz the internetz, all of them.

Story seems rather well doen so far, I look forward to seeing how it plays on...

Oh and David, what are the words on your sig?
 

kingdark

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#17
the last scÚne was very amusing, but err it has been since february since it has seen an update...
 
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