LH BDSM style?

[runestar]

I was just rereading "Sailor Maid" on Greyarchive(can also be found on mediaminer), and this got me thinking - while there are quite a few Harem fics revolving around the LH setting, I don't recall ever having read a SM style LH fic before. Some stories come close, but said theme still does not play a central enough role in them.

Of course, it could simply be due to my lack of exposure. -_-

I was reminded of Hawk's "It's not enough". More specifically, the part where Motoko reads Keitaro's porn collection and tries some of those lines on him. I then went back to LH9(the broken blade saga) to refresh my memory....

After Tsuruko broke Motoko's sword in LH9 and banishes her from their school, Motoko was really discouraged and disillusioned then. What if the mental blow she experienced then was much greater, too much for her fragile psyche to handle at that time? Despite Keitaro's best efforts to boost her morale, she decides to forsake all her responsibilities and turn her back on her old life altogether, and decides to devote the rest of her life to serving Keitaro in a Master/Sub relationship, for whatever reasons you pervs can cook up?

Initially, Keitaro would be very hesistant, or outright opposed to the idea, though if Motoko was extremely persistant, he might be forced to agree to temporarily placate her and prevent her from doing anything stupid at the moment, like taking her own life. The idea is that he somehow falls naturally into said role, and later discovers that both he and Motoko actually enjoy their newfound roles. Ultimately, even Tsuruko, upon seeing how content Motoko is with her new life, decides to let them be, and even gives them her approval and blessings, despite her disappointment and regret. (She was responsible indirectly, one way or another...)

I guess this sort of story would not be doable without having to venture into Lemon territory. Also, my impression is that the story should have a slightly more "emotional" feel to it, not the :snigger: tone other stories playing the BDSM card tend to milk.

Also, try to avoid brainwashing/blackmail/coercion etc if possible. While a little might be justified if you think it is integral towards the development of the story, I would prefer it if Motoko made her decision entirely of her own free will, and not because of some warped sense of honour/duty/moral obligation whatever.

While the usual suspects such as bondage/spanking/whatever deviant behaviour you can come up with etc is expected or perhaps even necessary(your call ), please do not let it overshadow the underlying themes of this story challenge. Having Motoko prance around in a french maid outfit and pander to Keitaro's every whim might be nice , but that would not really be the main focus of this challenge.

I am not sure how long this should span, a 1-shot might seem too rushed, though it does not sound impossible altogether.....

Any takers? I am interested in seeing how this one turns out.

 

[Lord Raa]

I approve of this idea.

Unfortunately, I have too many other fics to work on before I could consider this taking up this challenge/idea.

 

[Alzrius]

This challenge is made of win. :yay:

This is usually the point where I pipe up that I like this idea so much that I'm gonna do it. Unfortunately, like Raa, I don't know if I can at the moment. Given that damn near everything else I've written is now a work in progress, and how I've got other, non-fic projects to work on, it's iffy that I'd be able to do anything with this idea.

Though someone should. It's just that hot. ~

 

[runestar]

While the rest of you pervs are mulling over my idea, going :blink: over it in abject shock, or just plain ignoring it altogether, I though that I might as well use this opportunity to clarify and delineate some boundaries.... B)

I will also revise my initial post to include the information below so you don't need to keep scrolling.

Try to avoid brainwashing/blackmail/coercion etc if possible. While a little might be justified if you think it is integral towards the development of the story, I would prefer it if Motoko made her decision entirely of her own free will, and not because of some warped sense of honour/duty/moral obligation whatever.

While the usual suspects such as bondage/spanking/whatever deviant behaviour you can come up with etc is expected or perhaps even necessary(your call ), please do not let it overshadow the underlying themes of this story challenge. Having Motoko prance around in a french maid outfit and pander to Keitaro's every whim might be nice :wub: , but that would not really be the main focus of this challenge.

Now...where is the next better player...? :unsure!:

 

[EagleCeres]

So... would the duel just be canceled out completely in favor of Motoko's service to Kei; or postponed for a waaaay later date, when Kei feels Motoko is strong enough to face her sister (with a chance of releasing her from, or keeping her in her self appointed role)?

with Kei slowly easing into that Master role, while Motoko pushes to be his servant, would they eventually to the point where they are both comfortable with their 'relationship'... even if he 'demands' she continue her day to day duties (school, training, maid service ); or would she forsake her old life to be devoted to him completely?

 

[runestar]

The duel would theoratically never happen at all, since Motoko would not have stood back on her own 2 feet by that time.

Or you could have the event take place after they challenged Tsuruko and lost...whatever rocks your boat.

It doesn't even have to be related to any event in the manga, though aforementioned event does provide for the most convenient and appropriate setting, IMO, thus serving as the perfect springboard to kickstart the story with minimal fuss.

would they eventually to the point where they are both comfortable with their 'relationship'... even if he 'demands' she continue her day to day duties (school, training, maid service? ); or would she forsake her old life to be devoted to him completely?

The whole idea is that they are both are comfortable with their newfound roles that they decide to embrace it altogether. ^_^ They could still go about their normal daily duties to project an image of normalcy to the outside world(the LH girls could possibly be in on the know, depends on how you plan to work round that), but when the doors are closed...

 

[Lord Raa]

Hmm, you know, I've had an idea for this challenge.

However, the set up is a bit different from what was outlined in the original post.

As in there could be more than just Motoko in the submissive role and the reasons for the changes in behaviour....

Depending on people's opinions of that, I may post something later today.

 

[Antimatter]

Hmm, you know, I've had an idea for this challenge.

However, the set up is a bit different from what was outlined in the original post.

As in there could be more than just Motoko in the submissive role and the reasons for the changes in behaviour....

Depending on people's opinions of that, I may post something later today.

I may be a Kanako fanboy, but Motoko will always be my main love. anything involving her is good (well, maby not everything...).

And hey, shes one of the few girls in canon to ever have experienced bondage, yuri-rape, and a few other things. Its plausable that she enjoyed it on some level.

 

[MnemoD]

This, is indeed made of Win.

Unfortunately, I can't find any inspiration for fics anymore. I try so hard, but I can't seem to work anything out lately.

I'd love to do this particular fic, but... Just no ability right now.

I'll get back to you if I do decide to do it, though.