Harry Potter London Nights

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I actually did post much of this in the miscellaneous ideas thread. Part of what inspired me to write this was reading "Herwald von Einzbern and the Philosopher's Stone." I hate to be elitist, but after reading, I thought I could do better.

I'll admit that I'm bending some of the Nasuverse rules, but please tell me if I horrifically mess things up. So, enjoy.

Chapter 1

They'd cut him off from his friends. He ran, pursued by the huntress. Without a master to hold her leash, there was nothing to prevent her excesses. She smelled of blood and death. Glittering trails of spells passed through the air around him. Aiming a wand was difficult enough already while standing, to say nothing of running. However, he was younger and in much better physical condition than his pursuer.

He jumped over a desk, barely breaking stride as he ran. There she was, relentless like a juggernaut. He swung his wand around and cried out a spell name, sending a bolt of magic that crossed the distance in an instant. Nonetheless, the witch was able to twist around to avoid it. A manic grin crossed her face as she cast her own spell while pushing off from the desk. He motioned once more with his wand. The bolt diffused against the barrier. This was but a part of her plan. In a fight between youth and strength and age and treachery, the age and treachery tended to win.

The feet planted themselves in his chest, bringing him to the ground. Agony surged through his spine as he crashed to the hard tiles. The fist broke his nose with an ugly snap. His vision temporarily turned white. Bellatrix dipped her fingers into the blood with the gentleness of a lover's caress. She tasted the life-giving fluid with a predatory glee. A mean-spirited smile threatened to split her face.

ôProblem, Ickle Harry?ö

ôYeah, your face.ö

The bony plate of his skull smashed into her nose. There was the same ugly snap of broken bone. It dazed her for an instant, but for the desperate, an instant could seem like an eternity. The brain delivered the impulse. The nerves directed the impulse. The muscles carried out the impulse. His knuckles smashed into her cheek in blistering left hook. Her head whipped about. The brain again delivered the impulse. Harry slipped out from under her weight and began to run again. The hot trail of spell scorched the side of his face as he ran. It was the right choice to run. Soon enough, another pair of feet began to pound against cool tile.

He ducked behind a large shelf of books. The tomes were musty and old. Each was undoubtedly worth a fortune both for their knowledge and value. With a single spell, knowledge collected by wizards for centuries turned into so much shredded, flying paper. The shelf began to topple. The old wood creaked and groaned under unforeseen stresses. Gravity took hold, and the shelf slammed into another with the snapping sound of splintering wood. Books tumbled in a tidal wave of paper, parchment, leather, and glue.

The huntress was faster, sliding to halt just outside the dominoes of falling shelves. The insane grin was still on her face. He ran, dodging spellfire and slinging back his own curses and hexes. There was a decided contrast in the strings of spells cast by the two. He cast his spells in a disorganized fashion, casting the first useful ones that came to mind. He would cast a stunning spell, then a blasting spell, and then a disarming spell. She, on the other hand, cast her spells in a manner designed to punch through his meager defensive abilities. She would, in contrast, cast a blasting spell, then a disarming spell, and then a stunning spell. Her master did want the boy alive, at least for the moment.

Nonetheless, the boy could not help but enjoy himself. Yes, it was a life-or-death situation. Yes, he was exhausted. Yes, his friends were fighting on their own. A surge of primal power swelled through his veins. In all humans, there was an instinct to kill or be killed, to choose fleeing or fighting. Even when running, he still chose to fight. For the boy, it made perfect tactical sense to fight a running battle. He was an athlete in excellent condition, particularly with regards to endurance and cardio. Mrs. Lestrange was middle-aged and had only recently come out from one of the most brutal prisons envisioned by the human eye. Provided that the fight was purely a contests of physical strength, he had the advantage.

The boy ducked into another row of shelves. For this occasion, he did not intend to topple the tomes. He paused to catch his breath. His legs ached, and all his muscles began to quiver and tremble. Still, he had gained at least a temporary respite. He looked down the rows of untoppled bookshelves and saw a door. The portal could bring him to return and fight alongside his comrades. At the very least, he would put more space between him and the huntress.

The lightning flash of a revolving blade barely had time to register before a sharp pain occupied his thigh. The cold steel slid between muscle with ease. Red blood oozed out to stain the leg of his trousers.

There was one fundamental flaw in his choice of tactics to deal with her. He forgot the terrain in which he was fighting. The tight and cramped quarters favored light and handy things like wands, and the obstructed visibility reduced ranges to those where wands were most effective. Ordinarily, this should not have been an issue, with both sides being at an equal advantage. Indeed, there was some advantage to the boy with razor sharp reflexes in a close-quarters duel. However, there was a vast power gap between them. At a range where magic was extremely effective, the advantage lay with the huntress. Moreover, these same close quarters also served to slow down his running, closing the physical gap. The greatest advantage for the older witch was the twisting and confusing and poorly lit nature of the battleground. For her, one of greater experience and treachery, it allowed her many options for nasty ambushes and trickery.

The knife which had buried its blade in his leg was a result of the environmental trickery. She had stealthily climbed all the way to the top of a bookshelf, being very careful not to tip it over. From there she was able to spot him. Knowing that a spell would give her away, she decided to make usage of the knife that she habitually carried with her. She had then thrown the knife. Knife-throwing was always somewhat of a gamble as to whether or not the knife would land with the blade in target, but the huntress was more than experienced in the ways of the knife. This expertise greatly reduced the margin of error. Additionally, the wild gamble of knife-throwing suited her personality quite well.

He limped toward the door. Blood trickled down his leg and onto the floor, leaving an obvious trail. The huntress smiled, leaping from bookshelf to bookshelf with the grace of a panther. She climbed down quite near to the boy and rushed out, wand at the ready as he made his appearance. He too had his wand at the ready. It was a battle of two lightning quick reflexes. The brain delivered the impulse. The nerves directed the impulse. The muscles carried out the impulse.

The boy was faster and managed to cast a stunning spell in the middle of her spell.

She finished her own spell before the stunner hit. It was a cutting spell aimed toward the tendons in his wand arm. Air distorted as the spell made its path. Green eyes widened in recognition. He began to sidestep to avoid the spell, but his leg gave out on him. Nonetheless, this sudden motion was enough to avoid the distorted air of the cutting spell. It was a close call, though. It shredded the sleeve of his robe. The dark fabric floated in the air like a vulture circling a meal.

Slowly, ever so slowly, he crawled. Blood dripped from the knife wound, but he didn't dare to remove it. To do so would likely increase the bleeding, and he'd end up bleeding out on the floor within minutes. He was already starting to feel lightheaded. Muscles and sinews strained as he righted himself. He continued his march, moving past the door. With a quick spell, the doors slammed shut.

Drip. Drip. Drip. More crimson left behind a trail for the huntress.

Pain was a constant. From his broken nose to the knife lodged in his thigh, there was only an agony. So great a pain brought a mist over his senses. There was no sense of real direction, merely a sensation forward. Perhaps forward would bring an end to his pain.

Step. Step. Step. Striving forward to success, that was his way.

He rested a weary body against a wall. Already, a small puddle was forming. He pushed ever onwards. Not even the huntress could stop him. Not even the Dark Lord could stop him. Not even the very fires of hell would stop him. He would reach his goal. Nothing would stop him.

His vision began to grow grey. He had lost all too much blood.

ôIt can't end. Not like this.ö

ôI'm afraid it can, Ickle Harry.ö

The twisted witch had returned. Step by elegant step, she approached. There was nothing to be done. A quick flick of her wand and an incantation forced his legs to lock up. That gaunt, insane visage taunted him every step of the way.

ôMy master wants you alive, at least for the moment.ö

She cackled at her own joke.

ôI've temporarily put your legs into stasis with that spell. No bleeding out for you, not until my master declares that you should. Now hand over the prophecy.ö

With this question, a burning rage wormed its way through his heart and spread throughout his body. There was only one response to her.

ôOver my dead body!ö

ôThat can be arranged.ö

All the while, he had been groping around for some method of escape. There was no door behind him, but one of the bricks had felt different. Thankfully, the gloom afforded him some secrecy during this action. The huntress would soon be upon him, and there would be no opportunity for this sort of subterfuge.

His hands felt a brick different from all the rest. There was nothing to do but go forward. He pushed against the brick, at his touch, it depressed. The wall behind him opened to form a door. It was a dark abyss behind him, but he would always go forward. He rocked back and fell.

Stygian darkness enveloped him. There was nothing to about it. He had made his choice. He had thrown himself into the depths of hell. He did not regret this choice. He would never regret any step he made forward. The only steps he would regret were the ones that went backwards. He hit stone steps. It was cold and old, bereft of human touch for uncounted years. He rolled and bounced against the hard stone. Feeling was beginning to return to his legs, and it was not a good feeling. The rent formed by the knife had opened further in his descent. Blood oozed out, as if from an oil well. There she was, at the top of the stairs. The shoes clicked against the hard stone.

One of the tenets of the Jewish religion is that the life is in the blood. This tenet provides a good deal of insight to some their food laws. For wizards, the same tenet was true. The most powerful magics required the transfer of life, a blood sacrifice. A great quantity of his blood had spilled out upon the floor. Were this an ordinary floor, nothing would have happened aside from the transfer of his life from the body. However, this floor was no ordinary one. This space was the secret workshop of a wizard. It was not a workshop for just any breed of wizard; it was the workshop for the old breed of wizard who worked in search of mysteries. The empty space was empty for the purpose of a magical circle. A hexagram made from gold leaf had been formed upon the floor. Mystical symbols lined the space between the inner and outer rings. It was prepared for a summoning. The former owner of the workshop likely died just before he would have begun his summoning.

Agony, a pain greater than all of his wounds, ripped through his body. It was as if his insides were going through a blender or crushed between millstones. Every last nerve was on fire. A foreign power ripped through his body. From an outside perspective, it was almost like the completion of a circuit. A mystery long since forgotten was reactivated this night. This magic was long forbidden by the Ministry, but they had lost sight of the essence of magic, the pursuit of mystical mysteries and things once forbidden. They had forgotten that death was the essence of magic. The blood provided a power. The gold drunk this power, communing with other worlds.

Magic gathered tonight to perform a mystery. There is a realm beyond death for those whose tales were sung long after they were gone. The brave men and women who had made their names in a world drenched in magic had gone to this place instead of joining back into the perpetual cycle of souls. It was a throne for heroes. It was a place for names such as King Arthur, Medea, Heracles, Lancelot, Alexander the Great, Gilgamesh, Cu Chulain, Hassan-i-Sabbah. They were legends, they were heroes. For this night, a spirit from the Far East was called into servitude. Magic crystallized spirit into a material form.

A hand was extended to boy. The magical furnace had staunched the bleeding.

ôI ask of you, are you my Master?ö

Standing in front of him was a girl. She was clad in armor of a Japanese design. Had he known more about Japanese armor, he would have recognized the suit as dating back to the Sengoku period of Japan. The iron and leather and bamboo suit was colored in scarlet and black. The thing, strangely enough, which drew the attention of the boy was the smooth, black cuirass of the armor. Had he known more about Japanese armor, he would have recognized it as being of the Hotoke-Do style, but alas. Her hair was tied back in a neat topknot. The other thing that struck him was her eyes, an unnatural golden shade. Twin swords, long and short were secured to her side. Secured behind her back were a pair of matchlock muskets with shortened barrels and pistol grips. The steel of the barrels was perfectly blued, and the image of a demon was etched with silver in the dark metal.

He took the offered hand, and she effortlessly pulled him up.

ôI ask of you, are you my Master?ö inquired the girl.

ôI don't know.ö

ôWhere are your command seals?ö

ôI don't know, but I did summon you or something like that.ö

ôCorrect. There is a steady flow of prana from you to me. I am willing to temporarily make an alliance with you before ascertaining whether or not you are my Master.ö

ôWho are you?ö

ôYou may call me Servant Archer. Before you ask, that is not my true name; however, I will not reveal my name in the presence of enemies.ö

ôSay, Archer,ö he began, ôLet's shake on it. I know it's probably a meaningless gesture, but let's shake on it.ö

He extended his hand to the armor-clad girl. With a firm grasp, she shook it.

ôThat was touching, but I'm afraid that you've got to go, Archer. That boy is mine,ö said the huntress.

ôStay back and allow me to handle this,ö stated Archer

The twin muskets were already in Archer's hands. The wand was pointed at Archer. The boy simply stood back. Archer laughed; it was a haughty laugh, the laugh of a warrior told that his opponents would be old men and boys. She twirled the muskets before sliding them behind her back where they had previously been secured.

ôI don't even need those to win. You aren't even worth my signature style.ö

Archer grasped the hilt of her katana. Slowly, she drew the length of the sword. The blade was a gleaming river of silver with a wavelike pattern along the edge. Where the blade met the handguard was a single symbol: ? or ôtenö. This symbol was the kanji character for ôheaven,ö a character derived from the radical for outstretched limbs. The hilt was wrapped with a pure, white cloth.

The huntress cast a spell against the archer. There was no effect. Another spell was cast against the scarlet and black samurai. Archer laughed once more at her foe. The razor sharp blade of the katana sliced apart a spell in midair.

ôDon't you know,ö said Archer, ôthat I have magic resistance?ö

In an instant, Archer crossed the space. Under the constraints of physics, such movement should have been impossible. However, she was not human. Magic reinforced her steps and magic made a form that did not yield to such trivialities. Steel, flawless and firm, flashed in the light.

The huntress was not there. In her place was a man. He was not a healthy man with his corpse-like pallor and sickly form. Nonetheless, he practically hummed with magical power. Archer halted.

ôBella, Bella, Bella. You simply play with your food too much. Potter, you continue to surprise me, still. Nonetheless, Avada Kedavra.ö

There was a misconception on the part of the Dark Lord. With regards to Archer's magic resistance, he failed to grasp how it worked. There was a certain element of power connected with the length of the aria used for the spell. This relationship also explained why silent spells were not nearly as powerful as those with the full enchantment. For all its power, the Killing Curse was a mere one-verse spell. Archer's class ability of magic resistance canceled out any spell with a length below two verses. Therein, was perhaps the greatest weakness of modern witches and wizards. Almost all spells had their lengths confined to a single verse. Such a thing made them childishly easy to cast, but still childishly weak in comparison to the wizards willing to deal with death or permanent separation from magic when they attempted longer and more involved magical rituals.

Understanding this, Archer moved forward. The spell had been perfectly aimed, even accounting for her skills surpassing human limits. The Dark Lord had turned the Killing Curse into an art form. It struck Archer squarely in the center of her breastplate. Archer nearly collapsed as an agony surged briefly through her nerves, but Archer was strong and moved to separate the Dark Lord's head from his body with a single slash of her katana. The powerful thing, for it was not truly alive or dead, disappeared into so much smoke. The huntress, Bella, too disappeared in a likewise manner. Archer resheathed her sword.

ôAbout the matter of command seals?ö

ôI understand, Archer. Check me over.ö

Archer took a look at his leg. The knife was still lodged deep in his thigh. Blood trickled out, but not nearly as much as it had before/

ôYou're wounded.ö

Archer grabbed at the dagger's hilt and yanked it out. He screamed bloody murder as she pulled the steel out. The dagger itself was plain to the layman's eye, but to Archer's eye and touch, it was masterfully balanced with a perfectly shaped blade for a throwing knife. Using the very same knife, Archer cut off part of the trousers leg and set about cutting off a strip to make an improvised bandage. Quickly, she finished with that business. Immediately, she began to look at his wrists before simply pulling off his robe and shirt.

ôAh, you are my Master. Your command seals are located on your back, just outside of where you could see them,ö said Archer, ôNow I don't have to kill you. What is your first official order?ö

ôFirst, my name is Harry Potter. Please call me Harry because it's just strange to be called 'Master.' Second, I'd like to meet back with my friends. Is there any way you could help me?ö

ôYes, Harry. Allow me to explain a little. I am a Heroic Spirit who was summoned by you into the class of 'Archer.' One of the basic abilities of the Servant is, since I am a spirit, to dematerialize into a spiritual form. This would allow me to pass through walls and such, provided there are no spiritual barriers to search for your friends. However, I need to see these friends of yours. Furthermore, Harry, you would be at risk. Even if I can survive for some time without your prana, I would still disappear if you die. That is a gross oversimplification, but it will do for now.ö

ôArcher, please go into your spiritual form and search for my friends. As soon as possible, return and lead me to them. Chances are that they'll be fighting people in dark cloaks and skull masks.ö

Archer nodded. Harry stood up.

ôAcknowledged, Master. If you need me, call me.ö

The samurai disappeared and Harry was left all alone. He decided to examine the workshop and perhaps glean some information with regards to Archer. There was a manilla envelope on the desk. Dust had collected for years on that ancient piece of paper. With a quick spell, he checked for magic countermeasure on the envelope. It was better safe than sorry. He opened up the folder. The information in the letter was useless. There was another paper on the desk. Though stained horrifically with dried blood, parts were still readable.

Holy Grail War. London. Servants. Heroic Spirits. The Holy Church. Seven Masters. Fight to the death. Wish machine. Saber. Archer. Lancer. Rider. Caster. Assassin. Berserker.

Reading through these notes, he felt even more confused than when he had began. His mind was simply unable to grasp the magnitude of thing into which he had entered.

ôMaster...ö

There was no response from him.

ôHarry!ö

ôYes? What is it?ö

The red and black knight sighed. Of all the people she could have ended up with for a master, it was this one.

ôI've found your friends. Follow me.ö

ôRight!ö

Harry began to run. Archer easily kept pace with him, leading him through the twisting corridors and confusing sets of rooms.

ôThis is taking too long. Allow me to hasten the process.ö

ôWhoa, Archer! What are you doing?!ö

Archer had taken hold of Harry in her arms, carrying him bridal style. With the Master securely in her arms, Archer was able to move at a pace more fitting for one like her. Inhumanly strong, inhumanly fast. Legs cracked the ground as they rushed forward. Archer moved yet faster, leaving a trail of shattered tile in her wake. The sounds of battle drew near. Some of the sounds were different, the swish of a wand through the air and arcane incantations of spells. Others were in the universal language of curses and pained screams. Archer slide to halt. Friction should have torn her sandals apart, but even her garments had the same sort of existence as that of the spirit herself. Archer set him down.

Archer knelt in front of him. Nonetheless, he felt that Archer's display of respect was only mocking him. He'd seen her action, the breathtaking speed and power. There was a wry smile just for him on her countenance, proving his suspicions.

ôOrders, Master?ö

ôYou said you were a Heroic Spirit, right?ö

ôCorrect.ö

ôThat means that you were a hero during your lifetime, correct.ö

ôIndeed.ö

ôSurely, you were a king or warrior or knight or something?ö

ôAgain, correct.ö

ôThen shouldn't I, the normal human, be bowing to you instead. Besides, it just doesn't look like subservience is something that comes naturally to you; you seem to be the commanding type.ö

ôI appreciate the sentiment. During my life, I was a warlord, a leader of armies. I was also a noble. I suppose that such things are more natural. However, you are Master and I am Servant. There is a difference, and I'll accept such a relationship to get what I want.ö

ôArcher, I'm not really interested in this Master and Servant thing. If anything, you're my superior. Let's be partners, equals.ö

Archer smiled and laughed softly. He extended his hand to help her up. She took it.

ôShall we shake on it?ö inquired Archer, ôSince that seems to be your preferred method of sealing a deal.ö

He smiled and they shook hands. Compared the formalities of the Master-Servant relationship, this was a mere gentleman's agreement, but it was an agreement undertaken out of free will rather than the necessity of the Master-Servant bond.

Archer laughed loudly.

ôWell then, Master Harry Potter, you have now obtained the favor of a demon. The die has been cast. I hope you are enough of a man to live with the consequences.ö

ôI'll keep moving forward, Archer. That's my way.ö

Archer laughed and clapped him on the back.

ôYour orders?ö

ôDispose of those fighting my friends.ö

ôWhat an interesting choice of phrasing! I'm liking you even more.ö

Archer unsheathed the blade of heaven. She was off like a shot from a gun. Harry too was off. It was not the sort of thing he would do to give up on his friends, and furthermore, it would be a disappointment to not fight alongside his partner. Sitting back and letting someone else take care of his mess simply did not sit well with him. He saw one Death Eater pointing a wand at Ginny's head and cast a stunning spell. The dark wizard blocked his spell with a quick shield. A thunderous roar of noise echoed throughout the office-turned-battlefield. The enemy wizard's head practically exploded like an overripe watermelon hit with a sledgehammer. Blood and gore, a rather small amount considering that the Death Eater had been practically decapitated, splattered onto Ginny. There was Archer. The musket had been fired over her shoulder without so much as a glance at the foe.

ôYou fool! In a battle, you fight to kill!ö shouted Archer as her lightning quick slashes cut another Death Eater into seven distinct pieces.

ôW-Who is that?ö

ôArcher, she's a friend. Where are the others?ö

ôI don't know! I was separated from them!ö said the near, hysterical girl.

ôHey, calm down. Wipe your face, dry your tears. It's no fault of your own. Hell, I was separated for a while.ö

ôHarry, someone approaches,ö called Archer.

ôHarry, is that you? Thank God that you're alive!ö exclaimed a man. The man walking into the room had gaunt features and a rough stubble covering his jawline. It could only be one man, his godfather Sirius Black.

Archer flicked the blade of her katana, removing the blood from the gleaming surface of the supernatural blade. Such fluids made a mockery of the perfection of the blade. It was the very concept of ôswordö ascended to a higher plane of existence. Nonetheless, there were greater legendary blades than Archer's own such as those possessed by King Arthur: Caliburn and Excalibur. However, neither of those blades fitted Archer; they only truly fit with King Arthur. In a split second, Archer's blade was at his throat.

ôIt's alright, Archer. That's just my godfather. He's on our side.ö

ôOf course.ö

Archer quickly backed off, returning to Harry's side. Amazingly, not one drop of blood had so much has touched her armor. She sheathed the blade without any sounds aside from the click as the handguard met the sheath. Ginny could not help but gasp at the casual ease at which the foreign knight assumed the demeanor of an aristocrat. Such ease could only come from years on the battlefield or from a heart cold as ice; Ginny could not tell which one was the case.

ôIt's nice to see that my godson has become acquainted with the ladies, but what exactly happened? Why is she with you? Who the hell calls themselves 'Archer?'ö

ôI met your godson in this complex. Extenuating circumstances brought about an alliance. As for those men, I killed them. 'Archer' is more of a title than anything.ö

ôShe helped me against the Dark Lord and Bellatrix,ö said Harry, speaking up.

ôI suppose you're alright, Archer,ö said Sirius, ôYou should follow me. The Order arrived and is dealing with the Death Eaters. Let's rendezvous with them.ö

They began to run through the twisting, turning, and confusing maze of corridors, rooms, and chambers of the Ministry. Aside from the din of their footsteps, there was but silence. Harry vaguely recalled the route; if he remembered correctly, it was the one which led to the large and empty gothic vault with the Roman arch and ragged, grey veil.

ôSay Archer, how old are you?ö asked Harry, ôYou don't look much older than your late teens or early twenties.ö

ôWhat year is it?ö responded Archer with a query of her own.

ô1996,ö answered Ginny.

ôY'know, Harry,ö began Archer, ôThere are two things you should never ask a girl, or so I've heard. These two things would be her age and weight.ö

ôSorry Archer. Out of curiosity, do your weapons have names?ö

ôYes,ö said the scarlet knight as she drew close enough to whisper in his ear, ôMy blades and my guns both have names, but understand this, Master, we are but one of seven teams involved in a Holy Grail War. There will be six other legends like me...ö

ô... Holy Grail War,ö whispered Harry, ôI read a little about it. Whoever had been that place before I had stumbled upon it had evidently been preparing for one.ö

ôNow listen, every Servant like me has a legend that was passed down through the ages. To know the name is to know the legend, which can be used against the Servant. Similarly, there are items and skills of these Heroes which become a crystallized mystery known as a Noble Phantasm. My swords and guns are Noble Phantasms. They have names, names which relate back to the owner. To reveal the Noble Phantasm is to often reveal the identity of the Servant, something I wish to avoid unless absolutely necessary,ö whispered Archer softly.

ôI think I understand,ö replied Harry, ôbut could you please reveal your identity to me privately.ö

ôI was planning on doing that, Master, but I don't particularly trust this company.ö

The boy made as if to say something but thought better of it. He asked another question to her, inquiring, ôHow many do you have?ö

ôI have three Noble Phantasms, Harry,ö said Archer so quietly that only Harry could hear her voice.

The four came down the end of the corridor. Their path was barred by a stout wooden door. A spell from Sirius opened the door. A soft laughter reached their ears alongside the pungent fragrance of wine which reached their noses. There sat the most dangerous man in magical Britain neither dead nor alive. The thing sat regally upon an opulent throne he had created via magic. At his side, the unstable huntress of Bellatrix shared in her lord's pleasure. The clinked crystal goblets of sweet, dark wine together for a toast.

ôGood evening Harry Potter, Ginevra Weasley, Sirius Black, and you too, mysterious Archer,ö began Voldemort with a voice as smooth as glass.


ôWhat do you want!ö shouted Harry.

ôThe prophecy, of course. The prophecy can only be heard by those to whom it pertains -ergo, you and I- and I wish to hear it with my own ears. Sadly, my men were too incompetent to obtain it from you. As the saying goes, if you want something done right, you must do it yourself.ö

ôOn my signal, make a break for it,ö whispered Sirius, öI'll try and hold them off as long as I can. Harry, I'm sorry that I couldn't have been a better godfather.ö

ôYou don't seem too willing to divulge the prophecy,ö said Voldemort, ôPotter, I have a question for you: why do you want to keep the prophecy from me? Is it for your own sake? Is it for another's? I'm honestly quite curious why you fight.ö

ôPartly, I'm doing it for Dumbledore. Honestly, Voldemort-ö

ôHah! The boy uses my name. Only one other man would use my name like that. I must give you some grudging respect.ö

ô-I'm doing it out of revenge. To be honest with myself, I want to avenge my parents and the others that were killed in your reign of terror.ö

ôI see you can do what few can and admit the selfishness of their own existence. I like that. We're so close that we might as well be old friends. What say you, Harry?ö

ôI'm no friend of yours, Voldemort.ö

ôThis is precisely why I like you, this fighting spirit; it reminds me of myself. However, I would like to clear up a misconception that you hold, one undoubtedly fed to you by Dumbledore like a fawning spaniel. My desire is not really pureblood supremacy. You see, I have a much greater goal in mind. I wish to reach Void and bring it into this world. This has become a stagnant age. In my world, such men would perish by the sword and fire. This world must be destroyed and new, more perfect form rise from the ashes. Do you now understand, Harry?ö

ôI think I do. It seems like an insane desire to me.ö

ôOne who speaks his mind, I like that. None are nearly so blunt as you are.ö

ôReducto!ö shouted Sirius. The crystal goblet shattered. None of the shrapnel so much as grazed the dark lord. A shark-like grin threatened to split the thing's corpse-like face. Harry took Ginny and ran to leave. Archer followed.

ôBella, Bella, Bella, please stay your hand. I can deal with this trash. Avada...ö

The incantation had begun. There would be no end until the magic released itself. For a spell of its nature, the Killing Curse was surprisingly effective. The greater raw power behind the very concept of the spell allowed it to rip through magical barriers and protections.

ô... Kedavra.ö

A flash of green and another demise. Harry turned around. Sirius collapsed upon the floor. He had died with a smile on his face. A simulacrum of the defining event of his life. The hammer was cocked. Something exploded inside him.

ôGinny,ö he said coldly, ôleave. Get some help if you can. I've got a job to do.ö

Archer gave him a slow applause. Ginny gave him a strange look, but still left. He knew just how insane this course of action was. He was acting upon his passions, but he nonetheless felt empty on the inside. There was nothing.

ôYou're the sort of man I would have wanted in my army. Your plan?ö

ôWe're going to go in and fight and we'll win. You'll deal with the Dark Lord; I'll deal with his henchman.ö

ôYes, my Master.ö

The two strode into the chamber. The twin muskets were in Archer's hand. The matches glowed a hellish orange. The wand was ready. This time, he had a plan on hand. Like cartridges in the chamber of a revolver, he had his next six spells sorted out and ready. Blasting. Piercing. Cutting. Fire. Cold. Shield. The chambers were loaded.

ôSo you've come back to face me and avenge your godfather. You've got a certain visceral fortitude I admire. I really could use someone like you on my side, Harry,ö said the dark wizard.

A single twitch of a finger. A snapping of a spring. A strike of a match into a pan. An ignition of powder. An explosive impulse. A slug of lead hurtling out. Air compressed as it easily broke the sound barrier. A wall of stone rose up to block the musket ball. Had this been an ordinary stone, a projectile shot by a Noble Phantasm would have punched cleanly through; however, powerful magics bound the stone together. It was a base and ugly method, but it worked.

The first spell was already out of his mouth and moving at a fast rate toward the witch. The second was cast as the first was flying. The witch returned fire with a blasting spell of her own. Neither was casting protective magics, trusting in their skill and reflexes. His cutting spell was in the air as the blasting spell ripped apart stone with ease. The piercing spell left a long trench as thick as his thumb in one of the walls. Her blasting spell ripped made a crater four feet in diameter behind him. It was a raw power that he couldn't match. At his best, his blasting spells made perhaps a crater three feet in diameter, a size reduced in the heat of battle. It was a much better shot than he would have against Voldemort; that was why he had sent the Heroic Spirit against the Dark Lord. The incantation for the fire spell began. His intent shaped the magic coalescing into his wand. As a result, instead of a spark that would slowing cross the distance and ignite flammable objects, the spell acted like a flamethrower, spewing blue flames at the huntress.

It should have been impossible. A wizard of the modern era against the Knight of the Bow. Modern magic was simply not up to fighting a Heroic Spirit with magic resistance, but Voldemort was managing it anyway. With a mastery of apparation, she found herself unable to use her swords. With a mastery of transfiguration and a creative mind, he was able to defeat the musket fire. For Archer, there was but one final option, one which she was loath to use against a mere human. Noble Phantasm. Even if she trusted her Master, she did not like this plan one bit. If he were far away in a fortress, Archer might have been able to fight at her full power. However, the amount of concentration she had to spend on keeping track of her Master interfered with her fighting ability. If her Master were to die here, she would lose any and all chance of obtaining the Grail. Such was unacceptable.

The doors burst open. Air already overflowing with magical power received an additional booster shot as the most powerful wizard of the times entered into the chamber. All fighting temporarily ceased at his majesty. Behind half-moon spectacles were eyes as cold as ice.

ôHarry, m'boy, you'd best leave. Tom, I'm afraid I'll have to stop you here.ö

ôYou can try, Professor, but I don't think so. Bella, leave me. This fight will be one on one.ö

Archer returned to Harry's side. Bellatrix apparated away. Archer grabbed her master with a knowing smile. Harry returned his Servant's smile.

ôYeah. Let's go Archer.ö
 

Prince Charon

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#2
Interesting start. I look forward to finding out who he got.
 

Coelacanth

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#3
You have my undivided attention sir. Keep it up.
 

cgobyd

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#4
Ok I know I'm going to be in the minority but here are my thoughts.

In the first part (the one before Harry gets back to his friends) who's POV is that? Is it the authors? Is it Harry's? If it is the author then why is it describing the fact that Harry will "never give up", "never regret" as if it is his thoughts? (There are others that come of as Harry's thoughts as well) If it is Harry's thoughts then you definitly need to tone down the Purple Prose? (Although I would argue that needs to be toned down anyway)

Secondly I could not get any feel for any of the characters from there dialogue, it just seemed like 'generic person fights generic bad guy'. And even then the roles could have been reversed and much of the dialogue wouldn't have had to have been changed.

Then why the hell would Harry stop to have a conversation, and try to make introductions when he knows Belle is literally down the hall coming to him?

Such a thing made them childishly easy to cast, but still childishly weak in comparison to the wizards willing to deal with death or permanent separation from magic when they attempted longer and more involved magical rituals.
Ok I'm not saying that Archer can't block it, and I'm thinking that this line comes from you trying to shoehorn in Game Rules, but the Killing Curse is known as an unblockable curse. One of three unblockable curses. If there was more powerful killing curses where all you had to do was chant to make Avada seem "childishly weak"then a. Avada would not be held up with such awe, b. there would certainly be other spells that blocked it since it is "childishly weak".

ôThen shouldn't I, the normal human, be bowing to you instead. Besides, it just doesn't look like subservience is something that comes naturally to you; you seem to be the commanding type.ö
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ôArcher, I'm not really interested in this Master and Servant thing. If anything, you're my superior. Let's be partners, equals.ö
Ok this might just be in my imagination but I can not think of anyone speaking naturally like this, and they certainly would not be worried about this while inbetween life and death battles.

In fact most of the dialogue between Harry and this new Archer seems to be forced and out of place. I mean there is a better place to try and make introductions then the middle of a battle.

Also how did Voldemort get all the way down into the DOM?

Finally I know that it is common to bash HP wizards but please don't just say that all of them are lazy (no longer using longer more powerful spells even when the situation calls for it) and stupid (no drive to find out the "Mysteries" as you put it).
 

nairit

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#5
Also, you might want to consider making Voldemort come off as more longwinded there.

Harry also refers to him as 'the dark lord' when he has no reason to.

And doesn't Lupin also call him Voldemort?

That said, I can certainly say that I like this story. I like that Harry has an unflinching heart, even though he commands Archer to possibly kill the death eaters yet uses stunning spells himself. He does not stop to question his actions in the middle of battle, which I also like.

The purple prose may need to be cut down a bit but honestly, I appreciate that you're trying to give it the same atmosphere as the VN.

I have to agree that Harry really wouldn't stop to introduce himself, while injured, running away and in danger. It would be far more likely for him to warn Archer and try to keep fighting instead.

Something that bothered me, why didn't Harry attack Bella when he headbutted+punched her?
 

ttestagr

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The Killing Curse is blockable. The uninformed don't think so, but there have been enough outliers at this point to definitively know it isn't infallible. Lily's protection on Harry, Voldemort's protection of Horcruxes, Dumbledore using transifuration to move stuff to shield, Harry's protection of Voldemort having his blood.

If something with as hax a mystery as a heroic spirit showed up, I'd fully expect them to not be effected either. For one, they're already dead. For two, magic resistance even at low levels is amazingly hax.
 

cgobyd

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ttestagr said:
The Killing Curse is blockable.á The uninformed don't think so, but there have been enough outliers at this point to definitively know it isn't infallible.á Lily's protection on Harry, Voldemort's protection of Horcruxes, Dumbledore using transifuration to move stuff to shield, Harry's protection of Voldemort having his blood.

If something with as hax a mystery as a heroic spirit showed up, I'd fully expect them to not be effected either.á For one, they're already dead.á For two, magic resistance even at low levels is amazingly hax.
Let me just quote something...

Ok I'm not saying that Archer can't block it,
That is the very first thing I said after the quote. So my statement was not that Archer would be killed by it but rather that there was other spells that made it look "childishly weak" just because they said something longer.

And also 1. That is true 2. Voldemort's Horcruxes didn't stop the killing curse from killing Voldemort, they just stopped him from moving on, 3. That isn't a spell stopping (or blocking) the Killing Curse but rather a spell moving a physical shield into the path of the curse and letting the shield take the hit. 4. I thought harry was protected because of the Horcruxes in his head (and thus having the Killing Curse affect the Horcruxes instead of himself) and not because Voldemort had his blood.
 
#8
Part of the issue is just how I write. I don't like to stop the flow of a paragraph for something like

And the thought, "Blah, blah, blah"

Magic resistance really is that hax. At Archer's rank, it dispels any incantation that is below two verses. Compared to Nasuverse magic, which is pretty much what I'm contrasting HP-verse spells against, it is much simpler and easier.

Voldemort is supposed to be a real threat. THat's why he can piss over whatever protections the ministry has.
 

cgobyd

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Professional Cynic said:
Voldemort is supposed to be a real threat.á THat's why he can piss over whatever protections the ministry has.
If that is true then why didn't he just have his DE's clear out the ministry one night (like they did for Harry) and then just teleport in grab it and then teleport out?

Secondly there is a difference between being a threat and being having so much power that literally nothing appears to be able to stop them.

Finally I will bold it this time since people don't seem to be noticing it...

"Ok I'm not saying that Archer can't block it,"
there is that better?

Edit Just In Case: It isn't the fact that Archer would survive it, because Magic is Magic and thus if you have a defense for something it could work for any reason from the color of the spell, to the fact that the spell had an 'i' sound in it, that gets me but rather the fact that the AK is considered "childishly weak" in this story just because they don't recite a poem while casting it, despite it is considered "unblock-able" and "instant-death" in canon.
 
#10
Weak against Servants with Magic resistance =/= Weak

Does that explain it better. To be honest, it would also seriously mess up someone like Caster or Berserker (in this story) or any other Servant without magic resistance.
 

cgobyd

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Hmm... I know that I posted a reply yesterday but I guess it just got eaten.

Anyway...

That does make more sense but in that case might I suggest that you change the wording from 'It is childishly weak compared to other longer spells' to 'it has little effect on Archer due to magic protection.'?
 
#13
I was surprised myself with how quickly I wrote this. The chapter is a bit shorter than the first one, though. Archer's identity is revealed.

EDIT: Thanks, evantide

Chapter 2

The Grail War

New footsteps and voices echoed throughout the halls. A quick glance from around a corner confirmed that it was the slimy minister and his cronies. At this point, Archer and the boy had two goals: evasion and escape. Neither of these tasks were easy ones for the pair. Harry had to assume that the others had been able to take care of themselves. However, Archer's ability to turn into an incorporeal spirit form was a great asset for remaining undetected. Now, they were mere yards away from escape. Several aurors guarded the elevators to exit the Ministry building.

ôYour orders, Master?ö came the voice of Archer in spirit form in his ear.

ôDon't kill them, but get rid of them. Please avoid maiming also.ö

ôOf course. I would never...ö

ôI saw what you did with those Death Eaters, Archer.ö

ôYou told me to 'dispose of them.' I did so. Problem?ö

ôYes. I know I ordered you to kill them, but I never thought killing would be like that.ö

ôSuch sights were not uncommon during my life. Death was so common that mothers would but smile as their infants were quartered. To use a more modern idiom, grow a pair and gain some testicular fortitude.ö

ôI'll try, Archer.ö

ôNo you will, Harry.ö

Archer and Harry continued. In spite of the calm and unhurried gait of the boy as he walked away from the Ministry Building. The London nightlife easily surrounded the boy. Ethereal as she was, Archer was an unnoticed guardian angel. She fell in above and behind him. London was parts old and new. At this time of night, though, most well-meaning folks had surrendered themselves to sleep's sweet embrace. The night's crowd was not a good crowd. Drunkards and harlots, revelers and druggies, criminals and homeless. This was the night's crowd.

Harry liked to consider himself a good man. He liked to think of himself as an upstanding and friendly type of guy. Part of this stemmed from a desire to simply prove Uncle Vernon and Aunt Marge wrong about him; they thought he was the sort of person common in this light-polluted darkness. It was doing the right thing for the wrong reasons. It was partly out of spite that he tried to be a good person. It was an almost paradoxical existence, but there was a genuine goodness.

ôWhat I read had a little information on the Grail War. One of the things I picked up, Archer, was that it's run by the Catholic Church. Problem is that there are a few Catholic Churches in London. Obviously there are more Anglican churches, but it's a sufficiently large and spread out number of Catholic ones to make finding the right one difficult,ö communicated Harry via thought.

ôYou seem upset.ö

ôWell yeah, I'm trying to change the subject.ö

ôWhat is it, Harry? Are you upset by what I told you?ö

ôYeah, but I suppose it's because you're right, Archer.ö

ôYeah, truth hurts. Deal with it and get better. Besides, it's not like I hate you. I don't claim to be an expert, but without a physical catalyst, the catalyst is a matter of personality and desire. As a general, this is obviously preferable; I'd rather work with an average soldier that I could get along with than a powerful soldier who I can't get along with. It builds trust and in the thick of battle, you have to trust in your comrades to cover you while they trust you to cover them.ö

Harry smiled before thinking, ôThanks, Archer.ö

ôIt's no problem. I just don't want some effeminate, emasculated man as my partner.ö

ôYou're pretty blunt, Archer. Y'know that?ö

ôI do. I was called a 'Fool' throughout my youth. Good times.ö

High in the air, a black crow flew. Beady eyes gazed down without pity or judgment on the world below. It was looking for something specific. This was no normal bird. The bird was fashioned from clay with an expert's touch. Loving detail had been applied with the paint for every individual feather was painted on. The eyes were made from pure crystal. Most important of all in its creation was the breath of life provided my magic, allowing the sculpture to take flight in the skies. It's task was simple. For a device lacking any sentience or sapience, such a task was ideal. It was ordered to detect a particular type of magic. The Ministry building glowed a bright blue, almost like propane flames. Mundane things were a plain greyscale. Within six blocks of the Ministry of Magic, something glowed red; it was a red like luminescent blood. Upon detecting this, the automaton sent a burst of information via magic in a manner much like secure military transmissions back to its creator. The clay raven moved to circle around the phenomenon. It did not care or need to care what the phenomenon was. Right now, it was a tracker.

Elsewhere, the information flooded into the head of the creator. Soon enough, a phone was in his hand. It was black, old-style rotary dial phone. It had been loving preserved over the years. In hushed tones, a conversation was carried out across the line. Far away, a man got into a conservative, grey 1986 Rolls-Royce Silver Spirit. He fired up the well-oiled V8 6750 cc engine. British automotive engineering purred like a kitten. The car slipped into the traffic of the London night. There was nothing strange about this car; it blended right into the others. The grey Rolls-Royce pulled by the sidewalk where Harry was walking. A tinted window rolled down.

ôYou,ö said a voice which Harry new was directed towards him, ôC'mere.ö

Harry did so. He had Archer right there in case of something happening. He trusted the Heroic Spirit with his all.

ôThe supervisor of the Sixth Heaven's Feel requests your presence.ö

ôWhy?ö

ôIt is a requirement; all the other Masters have already done such a thing. There are certain rules which must be observed. I'll drive you there, kid.ö

öAlright. This had better not be a kidnapping attempt.ö

ôYou do have a Servant with you, right? If you do, such idiocy would be folly.ö

ôAlright, alright. That's a good point. So, how are you involved in this whole thing?ö

ôMe, the supervisor called in a debt. I'm just working that off.ö

Harry opened up the door and sat in the back. He pulled it closed with a heavy sound. Archer followed him as he strapped into the leather of the Rolls Royce.

ôCatholic priests, huh?ö

ôNah, don't talk shit about the Catholic Church, kid. I know you've kinda' been indoctrinated, but there's a long history of demonizing and whitewashing on both sides. Just look past that, and think for yourself. Me, I'm Catholic by educated choice. Blindly following gets ya' nowhere.ö

ôSorry, Mister.ö

ôNo problem.ö

Harry gazed silently at the London nightlife. The V8 purred quietly. City lights passed by gold and white and blue and green and red. The pinpoints of light blended themselves into a streak of luminescent color. These were not the only pinpoints of light in the city. For each and every incandescent, fluorescent, or neon light there was a soul of a person out there. Eventually, every last point of light in this grand plan would burn out. Then existence would end and they would be dead and gone. Without a doubt, none of them would get a second chance like Archer. Such were the thoughts which swirled around Harry's head over the car ride. Eventually, the car came to a halt on the outskirts of town. A small church made from ugly grey stone and slate shingles was what awaited Harry.

ôHere's your stop, kid. You seem a bit young for this sort of thing, but best o' luck to you. Name's Bobby MacTavish. Try not to die and we might be able to talk sometime. You seem like a good enough kid, if rather quiet.ö

ôThanks for the ride, Mr. MacTavish.ö

ôNah, just call me Bobby.ö

ôThanks, Bobby.ö

ôSee you later, kid.ö

ôI'm Harry, Harry Potter.ö

ôSee you later, Harry. I've got to go, so you've got to get a ride back on your own.ö

ôNo problem. Thanks for the ride again.ö

The conservative grey Rolls Royce Silver Spirit drove off, kicking up a fair amount of dust. Harry smiled. MacTavish seemed like a good enough guy that he hoped he could meet again. Of course, what a person showed on the outside might not be their true colors, but he had a good feeling about the man. He walked the path down to the thick, oaken doors of the church. He rapped on it once, twice, three times. Slowly, the doors opened.

ôDo come in, child. We have much to discuss,ö came an old and wizened voice.

Harry attempted to peer into the gloom, but he couldn't see much of anything.

ôPlease come in. It is my job to manage the miracle of the Sixth Heaven's Feel.ö

Harry peered into the gloom again. He should have been able to see something, but with the new moon, the stained glass windows were not pouring light into the church. He could make out a slight reflection of light off eyes from the shadowy, flickering candlelight. Taking a deep breath, Harry crossed the threshold. His shoes made a loud noise as they touched down upon the bare stone floor. Archer moved to follow him.

ôChild, your Servant cannot cross the threshold. This is a neutral ground. Defeated Masters may take refuge in my church. To allow a Master and his Servant upon this holy ground would compromise the neutrality of the supervisor's position, something I take quite seriously.ö

Harry gave a nod to Archer, who reluctantly waited at the door.

ôYour Servant seems to be quite reluctant,ö said the man, chuckling.

ôWhy did you bring me here, Father?ö

ôGive me a moment, child. I'm going to turn on a bit more light for the two of us. You can't have a truly good conversation when the two parties can't see each other.ö

Footsteps sounded as the man moved around toward something, presumable a light switch. Hanging fluorescents flickered on one after another throughout the length of the church. The entire room was bathed in an artificial light. Somehow, the candlelight felt more comfortable, but this seemed to rip open his mind and bare all his sins. He was able to take a good look at the priest now, but the harsh, white light didn't seem to have the same effect on the priest. He was dressed in the black garb of Catholic priest as was to be expected. Grey hair was combed back neatly on a wrinkled and wizened head. He was clean-shaven, a remarkable contrast to the long, wild length of Dumbledore's beard. Dark eyes glinting with intelligence examined him from behind round, silver-framed glasses. These eyes pierced through him like a lance. There was none of the sensation of Legilimency, but the man simply did not need it to penetrate the depths of his soul.

ôUmm... Father, what's your name?ö

ôHill, Nathan Hill. Now I have a question for you. Please allow an old man his idiosyncrasies, but were you baptized Catholic.ö

ôNo, Father. I'm not sure if I was baptized, but I think I was baptized Anglican. To be honest, I don't really practice.ö

ôA shame... At least you are an honest child. Now let's sit and talk business,ö said the elderly priest, who went off to grab a pair of folding chairs for the two of them to sit face to face in the middle of the aisle.

ôMuch better, wouldn't you say?ö

Sitting down, Harry agreed with Father Hill.

ôFather, would you please explain the Grail War to me. My summoning was an accident, so I don't really know what is going on.ö

The priest leaned back, considering these words.

ôBefore I even explain the Grail War. There is an important question that only you can answer: do you wish to take part in Heaven's Feel?ö

ôWhat sort of question is that?ö

ôOne you must answer before you continue. The prize of Heaven's Feel, or 'The Grail War' as you call it, is the Holy Grail -not the artifact of Arthurian legend and Christianity, I'm afraid- which is a 'wish-granting machine' for lack of a better term.ö

ôAny wish? No matter how ludicrous.ö

ôIndeed. You must keep it in mind that you essentially have a one-in-seven chance of success. Defeated Masters are often killed, so chances are that you will perish. You might think of yourself as immortal -I know I did at your age- but, simply put, people die when they are killed. The way out of this Sixth Heaven's Feel is quite simple: relinquish your command spells and seek shelter with the Catholic Church, not any of those Protestant upstarts to say nothing of heretics like the Nestorians.ö

Everything seemed to stop. Harry's heart sounded like the beating of war drums in his chest. Tha-thump. Tha-thump. The priest had said it. He'd probably end up dead. It would be so simple, so damn simple, to simply get out of this thing he. He could go back to school and enjoy his life for a little while and just be a normal teenager. Of course, he'd be thrust into some new situation as he always had, but such normalcy was precious to him nonetheless. On the other hand, to enter this would be of his own free will, a choice of his own. It was just like his sorting into Gryffindor. Unlike his conflict with Voldemort, there was no real reason for him to do this. But his mind then recalled a flash of green light and a woman's scream. That was right; he had always lived with death. It was death the practically defined his existence. His parents were killed. He had brushed with death in the form of the Killing Curse. Cedric had died. At some point, he would kill or be killed by Voldemort. In almost all of the pivotal points in his short life, it was death that followed him around. He already walked with death so often that the reaper was like a dear friend to him. Then there was Archer. The mysterious girl had been brought about as a result of his doing, inadvertent as it was. To go back would completely betray his relationship with her. She trusted him and relied on his commitment. They were already partners. Furthermore, to do such a thing would be to take a step back and retreat. Such a thing was not his way; his way was to go ever forward to new heights without regret.

ôThank you for the offer, Father Hill,ö said Harry, ôBut I think I want to stay. What were you going to say about the Grail War before your offer just now.ö

The priest chuckled at this. He put the teen under a scrutinizing eye before chuckling to himself for a second time.

ôYou have a strange existence, child, but shall we get on with this?ö

ôOf course.ö

ôAllow to start from the beginning. At its essence, the Grail War is an auction for the wish-granting machine of the Holy Grail. What is being bet are the lives of the Masters and their Servants. You have been given three command spells. They allow you to issue three absolute orders to your servant. The more specific the order, the more powerful the effect on the servant. For example, if I were a Master, and I told my Servant to 'dodge that blow,' the Servant would almost surely dodge due to the specificity of the command. However, were I to give a more general order like 'obtain the Holy Grail,' the Servant would get a small boost in power but nothing quite like the boost in power of the first example. Do you understand?ö

ôI understand, Father.ö

ôExcellent. Now, once you use up all three of your command spells, you don't have quite the same authority of your Servant as before. Should that happen, I suggest not antagonizing your Servant. Now, there are some other rules of Heaven's Feel. All battles must take place at night. No muggle witnesses will be allowed. Also, try to keep property damage to a minimum. Aside from those general rules, this is a battle royale.ö

ôThank you for your time, Father Hill.ö

Harry turned around to leave, crossing the threshold.

ôPeace be with you,ö called the priest.

ôAnd also with you.ö

Father Nathan Hill slowly got up and closed the doors to his church. Quietly he moved the chair back to their original positions. Once he did so, he muttered to himself.

ôThese London nights will once again ring with the sounds of battle and reek of the smell of blood. It is such a nostalgic feeling.ö

Back outside, Harry walked out onto the concrete path through the tall grass. Archer materialized next to him. A vexed expression was on her face.

ôI overheard some of your conversation. Do you plan on giving up? I understand if you want to, and with my Independent Action, I could find another Master...

ôIt's alright, Archer. I'm going to see this Holy Grail War through with you.ö

ôThanks, Harry.ö

Archer returned to her invisible spirit form. Harry began to simply walk through this area of town. It was sparsely inhabited and quite run down. Only a few houses had lights on, others being clearly abandoned.

ôHarry, thanks for sticking around to see this through.ö

ôIt's no problem, Archer. In fact, you were part of why I decided to stay.ö

The walk took Harry and Archer to a park. Tall grass and weeds filled the space. Gnarled trees stood resolutely, stoic to their surroundings. Most of the streetlights were out, only a few providing singular pools of illumination. Everything else was dark. A few rusted swingsets remained, but there were no children. It was decayed and weakened, but it still remained in stubborn defiance of nature. Harry picked out a rusted park bench made from wrought iron and moved to sit down upon it.

ôSo Archer,ö asked Harry via thought communication, ôWhat do you think of these modern times?ö

ôHmm,ö began Archer, considering her words, ôIt feels rather hollow and empty to me. I hate to sound like an old man filled with regrets and nostalgic memories of times long since gone, but in my time, there was a sense of purpose for a man and things seemed to be more real. Of course, you wouldn't understand since you come from this era.ö

ôSpeaking of 'your time,' but who exactly are you, Archer?ö

ôI'm-ö

ô-Heroic Spirit Nobunaga Oda or Oda Nobunaga depending on how you give the name. Summoned into the class of Archer. Your Noble Phantasms are as follows: Demonic Right of Kings~Demon Lord of the Sixth Heaven, Rank A Support; Brimstone and Hellfire~Implements of Heresy, Rank B Anti-Unit; and Heaven and Hell~Dualistic Blades of the Warlord, Rank C Anti-Unit. Would that be correct, Archer?ö came another voice, acidulous and cutting.

Immediately, Archer materialized into her full battle regalia. The twin arqebuses were in her hands, pointing toward the source of the information. A figure cloaked in grey was there, face concealed by the shadows of the cowl and some unnatural glamor. A wand was in his hands, meeting the threat of Archer's twin handguns. A smirk crossed his visible features. Beside him was a girl. She was slightly older than Harry. With her light blonde hair, ice blue eyes, and elfin features gave her an angelic look. She curtsied in her yellow sundress toward the two. The angelic look ended in her eyes, hard and cold like a glacier.

ôAllow me to introduce myself,ö she said with a slight accent, ôI am Elise von Schaefer and this is my Servant, Caster. Isn't it amazing what a little scrying can do for you. You are Harry Potter, correct?ö

ôIf I am, what is it to you?ö asked Harry, immediately on guard.

ôWell, you're the person who I will personally make sure has their guts splattered across the sidewalk.ö

ôFool,ö stated Archer, ôPutting Caster against one of the knight classes is such incredible idiocy that I'm surprised nobody has splattered you across the sidewalk.ö

ôI wouldn't be nearly so confident,ö drawled Caster, ôAfter all, I already know all of your noble phantasms. Besides, I know your magic resistance isn't made of the same stuff as that of the Saber class. If I'm a legendary magician, which I am, I can cast spells that can get around your defenses.ö

ôYou wizards are all the same, always talking the talk but when the fighting goes down, cold steel always seems to have the last word,ö returned Archer.

ôPft, amateurs. They always ruin the prestige of the wizard and let meatheads like you think that they are so superior because they fight harder. Lady, I fight smarter, not harder.ö

Archer's response was to level her arquebus and pull the trigger, sending hot lead at the cloaked Servant. With a sharp crack, just like that of a bullet breaking the sound barrier, Archer disappeared and reappeared, completely dodging the bullet. The sounds of Casters laughter fill the park. With a flourish, Caster shot a bolt of lightning at the scarlet samurai. The air smelled of ozone from the ionized particles. Thunder rolled and pealed. Travelling at least 87,000 miles per second, Archer should not have been able to dodge the lightning, but she did while grabbing her Master, Nonetheless, the attack scorched her armor.

ôHeh, not bad,ö said Archer.

ôSame to you,ö returned Caster insincerely

ôSince you already know my Noble Phantasms, there is no problem is using them against you, Caster. Thank you for allowing me to fight at my full potential. Or, as we say in my land, arigato gozaimasu.ö

ôThanks for the gratuitous Japanese, Archer, but I can really do without it. This is an English speaking country.ö

ôDemonic Right of Kings.ö

Archer activated her most powerful Noble Phantasm. Unlike her swords or her guns, this Noble Phantasm was not a weapon or item in of itself. It was the power of demon's blood running in her veins which she could tap at will. It conferred a powerful physical boost to her and made her demonic armaments, her arquebuses and wakizashi, deadlier.

ôBrimstone...ö

The matchlock in her right hand morphed into something altogether more sinister, becoming almost live. A sickly yellow glow emanated from the weapon.

ôHellfire.ö

The matchlock in her left hand did likewise. For these demonic arms, there was no need for her to reload. One after another, Archer squeezed the triggers. A cloud of noxious, sulfurous fumes obscured the crimson Servant momentarily. Caster twirled his cloak around him and simply disappeared as the projectiles continued moving to turn a tree to splinters.

ôLet's go, Caster. I've had enough of this.ö

Reappearing, Caster nodded and grabbed his Master before teleporting away to some other location. Archer scowled at their backs and then at the air they had once occupied.

ôMaster, we're going to need to take them out first. It's simply to dangerous to allow them to live.ö

Harry nodded numbly, still in shock at this battle of Heroic Spirits. Such a fight was nearly beyond comprehension. At the very least, it was warfare on an entirely different level.

ôYeah. Let's get going before the police arrive,ö said Harry.

Interlude

The circle was drawn. Quicksilver flowed into painstakingly crafted grooves. The spell began. The magician sat down, tomes of mystic lore nearby and began the chant. A few drops of blood were spilled, as was necessary for the ritual.

The door was opened, connecting to a place, for it was a poor term, outside of space and time. A spirit, a famous one was called down from this lofty place to compete in a war of men. Nonetheless, the end goal of this war aligned with that spirit's desire. It could but answer the call to arms. It did so gladly.

The circle began to glow and hum with a frightful amount of power. If were such energy were released, it would be like a bomb going off. The building, no matter how reinforced would be annihilated and men would be ripped apart limb from limb. However, such was the essence of true magic. To deal with higher powers in search of the greatest mysteries was to deal in death. Perhaps this was the sin of magic, the one that caused its persecution by religious organizations.

Almost like particles, magic coalesced for a singular purpose: to create a minor miracle on earth. Creation began, giving form to spirit. Everything was, for the moment, just right. Shining armor and an aristocratic blue. The most noble of kings appeared, a figure of legend. With the king's most famous sword, victory was always assured. Arthur, King of the Britains, had returned to the British Isles. The legends passed down had managed to neglect one minor and altogether unimportant detail concerning the gender of the legendary king. For the king, such a concern was irrelevant. A king was simply a king. The standing king gazed down at the sitting summoner. The summoner was dumbstruck by the glory of the King of Knights.

ôI ask of you, are you my Master?ö

The summoner dumbly nodded, showing the command seals to the King of Knights. She simply nodded.

ôVery well then, I have been summoned into the class of Saber. Let us strive to obtain the Holy Grail.ö
 
#14
Professional Cynic said:
ôI wouldn't be nearly so confident,ö drawled Archer, ôAfter all, I already know all of your noble phantasms.
Think you mean Caster at this part, not Archer.
 

Archanon

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#15
Professional Cynic said:
Archer twirled his cloak around him and simply disappeared as the projectiles continued moving to turn a tree to splinters.
Did Archer get an instant sex-change?
 

Duraiken

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#17
Archanon Posted on Mar 28 2011, 06:40 PM
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Did Archer get an instant sex-change?
My knowledge of Fate/Stay Night is shoddy at best, having not gotten to play the game yet, so I apologize if I'm wrong, but from the sound of it, a different person got summoned into the role of Archer than in canon.
 

Genericrandom

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#18
He was poking fun at a Typo.

Also, awesome start to a very promising story Pro.
7/10 to start with, I think.
 

nairit

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#19
Saber, inside Britain?

Well, there goes the neighborhood.
 

Ninsaneja

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#20
this is one of the reasons I never really liked this fandom.

now oda nobunaga is a woman too? what? you're all nuckin futs.
 

nairit

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#21
I think that she's from Samurai Girls or some anime like that where most of the warring states heroes are girls.
 
#22
While I enjoyed Samurai Girls and some similar things (did not like Ikki Tousen), Nobunaga here is not taken from any particular work. I do have a paragraph or so explaining how the historical Nobunaga is a girl in this fic on Spacebattles. I'll post that up asap for yall.
 

Ninsaneja

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#23
it's not your fault, it's japan's fault for liking cute girl versions of things no matter what the thing is

historical figures
candy
operating systems
moustaches
the works.
 
#24
I think this version is a bit rough, so I might change it later. This is the only Master that I think is kind of a stretch as a fanfic author, but I think it works. I'm also trying to write a better Dumbledore than is usually found, and avoid a certain piece of fanon.

Chapter 3

London Day

Harry ran, footsteps pounding the concrete of the sidewalk. Archer was with him, again in her spirit form as she followed her Master. The blood was pounding a fierce drumbeat in his ears as he ran. Above, the sky darkened with large, ugly clouds the color of bruises. They were swelling with rain. Right now, no moisture fell from the heavens. There was only a sticky, clinging humidity and a still air. It was the calm before the storm. Harry continued to run even as the very first droplets of rain began to splash against the earth. Cold precipitation left him completely and utterly soaked.

ôArcher?ö

ôYes Harry.ö

ôThat shouldn't have happened.ö

ôWhat?ö

ôCaster. He shouldn't have been able to just divine your identity and abilities. I don't believe him at face value.ö

ôHmm,ö Archer hummed as she considered his words, ôI absolutely agree. Something is off about Caster. He knows something.ö

ôYeah. His Master believes the crap he fed her by the look on her face. Do you think he's a spellcaster that you knew during your lifetime?ö

ôThat's the most likely answer, but appearances often reflect the homeland of the Heroic Spirit. I mean, look at me: I'm Japanese and I'm dressed like a samurai. The clothes he's wearing look a lot like something from Europe back in the day.ö

ôYou knew Europeans?ö

ôYes. Portugese merchants and a few Jesuit missionaries. He wore almost that sort of clothing, but European wizards always dressed rather anachronistically. Not to say that ours were much better. But you see, that Caster he could be a European wizard from almost any given time. Therein lies the problem with understanding him.ö

ôI think he really hates me. I got a sense of pure loathing in his eyes as he looked at me. What do you think, Archer?ö

ôI don't know. It's probably the power difference between the wizards of his time and those of now disgusts him, but there's a good chance of there being some other connection.ö

Harry slowed down to a simple walk. Up ahead was an abandoned warehouse. Plants grew on the walls. Glass windows had been shattered over the years. Somehow, the bilding had managed to escape demolition. A twisted and rusted gate barred the way

ôAh, what about this place, Master?ö

Harry smiled at the invisible Archer, or at least where he assumed she was.

ôIt'll do. It's been a long night and I need some rest.ö

Through the now-pounding rain, Harry walked. He couldn't help but shiver a bit under the cold liquid. It was almost like a shower or cleansing. He walked up to the gate and began to walk around to see if there were any gaps through which he could enter because the tall, rusting iron was both sharp and protected with rolls of barbed wire. There were none.

ôHow do I get in?ö wondered Harry.

ôCarefully.ö

ôWell that's a real load of help,ö returned the teen. He had more he wanted to add, but he felt himself rising and that same sensation of flying as he arced over the fence.

ôThank you, Archer.ö

ôOf course, but couldn't you have just opened it up with a spell.ö

ôI could, but the magic would be traced and I'd be in more trouble with the Ministry of Magic than I was in before.ö

Harry walked along the concrete of the walkway to the building. On both sides was a veritable sea of grass and weeds. Why someone would put a lawn by a warehouse was beyond him, though. He moved to open the door, but an invisible Archer kicked it in. He could easily imagine her silly grin at this.

ôHello!ö he called just in case there was anyone in there, but his only reply was silence and echoes. He shrugged and walked into the warehouse. There was probably some sort of office in which he could spend the night. Even with the few holes, there was not enough light for him to see. He didn't dare move forward at this time onto a floor covered with a fine film of dust.

ôArcher, what do you see? I'm looking for some sort of office.ö

ôI see something. Let's get you there, shall we.ö

Harry felt Archer sweep him into her arms bridal style. He supposed that it was practical measure to avoid damaging the pauldrons of her her armor as she might with a fireman's carry, but he had a suspicion that Archer really enjoyed reversing gender roles. She had gone down in history as a male warlord after all. Archer was still seemed like a pretty good person. They touched down on the rickety landing of prefab iron stairs. He heard the sound of a door unlocking. Taking his hand, the samurai led him through the open door. He heard the sound of her armor moving. Then there was some light, not much but enough to see.

It was, as he suspected, a small office that would be used by someone to watch over the warehouse's business. The desk was plain and made from cheap particle board. The floor was plain white linoleum. Unsurprisingly, there were no papers or documents on the desk. There was, however, a moth-eaten swivel chair by the desk. Testing its firmness, he sat down. After everything that happened, this was like a feather mattress fit for a king.

Harry sighed appreciatively and turned to Archer, ôThanks.ö

ôNo problem.ö

ôHey Archer.ö

ôWhat is it?ö

ôI know that you're Oda Nobunaga, but wasn't he supposed to be a guy instead of well... you?ö

A wistful look crossed Archer's face. Harry couldn't help but feel Archer's age, reminded that she was several centuries older than him. She exhaled and smiled in reminiscence of times long past. Happy memories. An age of war. Conquest and trickery. Political intrigue and betrayal.

ôWell Master, do you mind spending some time for me to monologue about my life's story, or at least my childhood. By the way, I think you should know that the proper order for my name in your language would be 'Nobunaga Oda.' My own name is 'Nobunaga,' and my clan's name is 'Oda.' It's just that Japanese name order follows a pattern of family name followed by personal name.ö

ôThat's not a problem, Archer.ö

ôThis might take some time, you see.ö

ôAgain, I don't mind.ö

ôThank you. Back in the Sixteenth Century Anno Domini, as you know it, there was a certain man named Nobuhide of the Oda clan who ruled Owari. He had a daughter which he named Nobunaga. As that little girl grew up, she was more than a little bit of a tomboy. She ran with a crowd of rascals from all classes; some were commoners, others were middle class, and a few were nobles. This little girl and her band of rogues got into all sorts of trouble. She was even titled the 'Fool of Owari.'ö

ôOkay, but that doesn't quite explain how you came to be known as a man.ö

ôMaster -no, Harry- listen, but more importantly think.ö

Harry racked his brain, trying to think. The Japanese seemed to place a lot on honor, particularly family honor, but Harry couldn't figure out for the life of him how that could relate to Archer coming to be known as a girl.

ôThe only thing I could think of was that the Japanese think family honor is really important.ö

ôSee, thinking is good. That's exactly the right connection. Now think from there.ö

ôI'm really not sure. I'd kind of expect the family to exile the child or just force you to conform.ö

ôCorrect. It did not suit a rather prestigious noble clan like the Oda to have a young noblewoman acting in such a rough manner. Now the girl would have, as you said, been forced to conform and act like all the other girls. As they say, the nail that sticks up the most gets hammered down. However, her father, Nobuhide Oda, had something of a soft spot for hisdaughter. So, a secret agreement was made. This little girl was to act and dress like a boy in order to act as she had. Though not ideal, it would be vastly less disgraceful for the clan to have boy who acted like that than a girl who did. That ruse lasted throughout her entire life, even as the demon conquered, armies marching.ö

ôYeah, I can accept that. Personal testimony definitely beats historians.ö

In the dim light, Archer smiled. Harry found her grin infections and smiled too. He leaned back into the chair and closed his eyes for a moment. There should have been only peaceful darkness behind his eyes, but he kept reliving that moment over and over again. The only way to end the nightmare was to open his eyes and see Archer watching over him. She should have been sleeping, but her presence was mostly well received.

The hellfire hot lead leaped from the barrel. The sphere was both lead and not-lead, a phenomenon made possible only by a Heroic Spirit. It hurtled, air cracking as it broke the sound barrier with ease. The target was in sight. It slammed into soft bone like a freight train into a puppy. It deformed, turning into a shape much like a mushroom. Nervous tissue was annihilated. It exited through an eye, covered in a gore and slammed into a wall. The difference in pressure caused by this sudden ventilation caused the skull to explode like a ripe watermelon slamming into cement.

Harry's eyes flashed open. He was still there. Archer looked over him like a guardian angel. Again he closed his eyes, hoping that sleep would come.

The silver perfection of the blade swept out in a curving arc. With the ease of a moonlight passing through a pane of glass, the blade passed through the right arm at the elbow. The forearm containing the wand fell down. The blow passed down through the man's abdominal cavity with similar ease. A turn of the wrist sent the sword through the left leg and into the right arm midway through the bicep. The sword then came in a diagonal cut that split the torso in half. A one handed blow passed through the neck, turning a man from one whole into seven pieces.

Harry opened his eyes again. This time, he didn't close them to again relive that instant. Instead he turned to Archer and asked her a question.

ôArcher, am I a bad person?ö

ôWhy do you ask?ö

ôIt's this whole killing-people thing.ö

ôWhat about it? You haven't killed anyone so far.ö

ôYeah, but I ordered to you to kill those two guys.ö

ôWhat? You still feel bad about that. I think I understand the type of man you are, Master. You, subconsciously want to be hero, right.ö

A hesitant nod.

ôI really hate to say this because its easy to go down the slippery slope, but imagine your goal. You want to save people, right. Now these men, as you said or at least implied, use terror and murder to inspire fear. Their deaths lead to fewer deaths in the long run.ö

ôBut I've got all sorts of blood on my hands now.ö

ôI don't have much room to speak, given that I did use those sorts of tactics. Fear is the mind killer, and if the enemy fears me, then I'll lose fewer soldiers. I look out for my own. Just harden your heart, and deal with it. That's the best advice I can offer.ö

ôI'm worried if killing becomes easy for me. I'd like it to, but what does that make me if I can just kill without a thought like you, Archer? What does it say about me that I summoned you?ö

He was crying a bit now. Awkwardly, Archer tried to comfort her master as hot tears streamed down his face. She grabbed his shoulders and sat him up straight. It still didn't work. He was starting to get almost hysterical. So, Archer did as she would have done to a soldier in her army. She backhanded him. His head whipped about; but when he turned back to look her in the eyes, he no longer crying and was focused.

ôThanks Archer, I needed that.ö

ôIt's not a problem, Master. I'll admit that I don't feel much of anything when I kill people. It's simply a means to an end. Besides, for someone like you, good-at-heart, there will be a someplace for your soul. Besides, physical death is nowhere near as bad as spiritual death. With spiritual death, you would be gone and soul erased from existence. Only divine intervention could save you then. So, wipe your tears and go to sleep.ö

Harry smiled, leaned back into the chair, and closed his eyes. Soon he was fast asleep. Archer, having no need for sleep, kept a silent, smiling vigil. It was a restful night.
***
ôHarry.ö

ôHarry, wake up!ö

ôWake up, Harry!ö

Groaning, he opens his eyes. Things are blurry and unreal. Archer must have taken his glasses off in his sleep. He sniffed and thought about how much he smelled. He smelled quite bad from a mixture of sweat and blood.

ôJust a second,ö groaned the teen, sitting up. He began to fumble and grope around before a familiar object was placed into his hand. Quickly, he put on the black glasses. Through the blinds, the light of rosy-fingered, early-born dawn filtered through. Archer was still there, that image of Japanese military tradition in timeless stasis.

ôThanks, Archer.ö

ôNo problem. How are you today?ö

ôMuch better. Umm, about last night, thanks.ö

ôIt's just my job. More importantly, there's someone outside. Right now, he's not moving. I think he know we're here and knows to keep a wide berth from Servants. There aren't any Servants nearby, so I don't think he's a Master.ö

ôWoah, you can detect other Servants!ö

ôCorrect.ö

ôWhy couldn't you detect Caster last night?ö

ôI think that his cloak was some sort of Noble Phantasm. He might also have Presence Concealment skill like the Assassin class if stealth was part of his legend.ö

ôOkay, so how far out can you detect other Servants? And what are some of the Servant skills that you just mentioned?ö

ôMy own Servant skills, those that I receive from my class, are Independent Action which allows me to act without your magical energy for some time and Magic Resistance which let's me resist all magic that only has less than two lines of incantation. Some of my personal skills are Military Tactics, Disengage, and Charisma.

The skills of the Saber class are Magic Resistance to a degree that lets Saber be effectively immune to magic. The Saber class's other class skill is Riding which lets Saber supernaturally enhance a 'mount,' something rather vaguely defined as 'something that can be ridden.'

The skill of the Lancer class is Magic Resistance but to a lesser extent than Saber.

The skills of the Rider class are Magic Resistance, usually to the weakest extent, and Riding to a vastly greater extent than the other classes. They would tend to have some sort of mount as their Noble Phantasm to act in synergy with this skill.

Caster's class skills are Territory Creation and Item Construction. Territory Creation allows them to alter the land to suit their magic and Item Creation allows them to, as you might guess, create magical items.

Assassin's skill is Presence Concealment which allows him to slip past the detection skills of other Servants.

Berserker's skill isn't really as much of a skill as it is an ability. It is called Mad Enhancment. What it does is increase the physical power of the Servant at the expense of their sanity. I suppose it is somewhat like my own Demonic Right of Kings~Demon Lord of the Sixth Heaven, except that doesn't take away my sanity.ö

ôSo, how do you know all of this?ö

ôIt's my connection with the Grail. We receive some knowledge from the Grail when summoned.ö

ôAlright.ö

Harry stood up and walked over to the blinds. Using his fingers, he opened up a crack to take a peak outside. There was a man standing by the fence. He waiting, simply waiting. This man was dressed in a black, pinstriped three-piece suit with black leather Oxfords. His shirt was a plain grey and the tie also black. He had a full beard of white hair and a head of similar hair. Half-moon spectacles, gold rimmed, hung from his nose. Those piercing blue eyes could belong to no other man. Despite the change in hairstyle, this was without a doubt Albus Dumblefore.

ôArcher, that's Professor Dumbledore from Hogwarts. I think you saw him in passing against Voldemort, right?ö

ôI did, but I wasn't quite sure about him at the time, Master.ö

ôI'm going to go out there and meet him.ö

ôAs you wish, I'll be there to back you up just in case things turn 'pear-shaped.' Your language has some weird -but fun- idioms.ö

ôI'll bet Japanese has its fair share of similar idioms.ö

ôIt does. Would you like me to teach you some of them later?ö

ôThat would be fun. Sounds like a great way to spend an afternoon or something.ö

ôAlright, let's go meet him.ö

Harry moved to stretch a bit, working the kinks out of his back and neck and shoulders. Then he began to walk. The warehouse was still gloomy and dark, but he could see well enough to navigate through the mess.

ôSay Master, would you like me to carry you once more?ö asked Archer facetiously.

ôI think I can handle myself, Archer.ö

ôOf course.ö

Quickly, he walked over to the door as Archer disappeared into incorporeal her spirit form.He opened it and waved at Dumbledore. Harry wave was returned by the smiling old man. He walked out across the path and called out to the Professor.

ôHello Harry, what a pleasure to see you again,ö greeted the old wizard kindly.

ôYou too, Professor. Fancy meeting you here.ö

ôI'm well aware, quite well aware,ö said Dumbledore, eyes twinkling happily, ôIsn't it a wonderful day.ö

It really was a great day. After last night's storm, everything had cleared to beautiful sky tinged with gold. It was as if Eos had outstretched her rosy digits across the sky. Nonetheless, red in the morning meant that another storm was coming in. It was just the London weather. Right now, though, a pleasant breeze passed by him. The temperature was neither overly hot nor overly cold.

ôHow have you been, Professor?ö

ôAside from that scuffle with Voldemort and having to deal with Fudge, I've been doing rather well. How about you, m'boy?ö

ôI've been doing well for the most part, myself. Right now, a shower and hot meal would be like ambrosia and nectar for me.ö

ôI see that you've learned to appreciate life's simple pleasures; it's a very important skill to have.ö

ôOf course.ö

ôSo, how does a night in Diagon Alley and a train to Hogsmeade the next morning sound to you?ö

ôHonestly, I would prefer to get back as soon as possible. I would really hate to become really behind for the O.W.L exam.ö

ôYou've got a good head on those shoulders, Harry. If time of such essence, then I can arrange for a ticket this afternoon at 3 o' clock.ö

ôThat would be great, Professor. Thank you.ö

ôIt would be my pleasure. Now let's make you presentable.ö

A few quick cleaning charms left Harry feeling almost as fresh as if he'd just showered.

ôSo,ö began Dumbledore, öWhat would you say to breakfast? I know a wonderful little French cafe in the area. In fact, it's within walking distance.ö

ôI would say that it sounds great.ö

ôSplendid!ö

They began to walk around the neighborhood. It was much less threatening in the sunlight than in a dark, stormy night. As he had for the past night, he could feel Archer's reassuring presence. Even at the edge of his mind, there was a vestige of Archer to remind him that she was there. They walked a few blocks calmly and in good spirits. To all the world they would look like a kindly grandfather spending a day with his teenage grandson. They took a right and came across the little cafe. The walls were made from white stucco with exposed wooden beams. Wood shingles painted black covered the roof. The heavenly smell of baking pastries wafted through the air. A few tables and chairs sat outside on a porch under the cover of the eaves. A sign written in fancy calligraphy gave the place its name: Chateu Leblanc. Several customers were already there.

Dumbledore walked through the oaken door inlaid with six panes of glass, ringing a bell as he entered with Harry. The lady behind the cash register smiled at him. Dumbledore gave a friendly wave.

ôGood to see you again, Albus. You visit here all too rarely. Please seat yourselves wherever you want. Someone will be out to wait on your table shortly.ö

ôIt's good to see you too, Grace. How have you been?ö

ôI've been doing well. Things have been going well for the family too.ö

Dumbledore smiled and nodded. They soon selected a booth near a window for the two of them. The upholstered seats were quite comfortable. Soon enough a waiter, a young guy whose nametag read ôEdward.ö Harry ordered an crepe with eggs and spinach and coffee while Dumbledore ordered a plate of four beignets with cafe au lait ôNew Orleans style.ö The drinks arrived first, Harry added some sugar and cream to his coffee. Dumblefore added no sugar to his drink, saying that the beignets had more than enough sugar to compensate. Harry conceded the point as he laid eyes on the beignets for the first time, mouth watering at the sight of the fried French dough nuts covered in powdered sugar. His own plate arrived. The two men dug into the tasty breakfast, enjoying the food in amicable silence.

ôLet's not dawdle on pointless things, pleasant as they may be. I want to discuss one particular thing with you: Heaven's Feel.ö

A sharp intake of breath from Harry.

ôYou know?ö:

ôIndeed, I was a Master in the Fifth Heaven's Feel, the Long Grail War. It lasted 293 days from 1945 to 1946. Enough about me, I want to talk about you. Firstly, do you still have the prophecy?ö

ôYes sir, would you like it?ö

ôYes please.ö

Harry handed over the sphere to the old man.

ôProfessor, what are the contents of the prophecy?ö

ôThey are the words that brought you onto your path:

The one with the power to vanquish the Dark Lord approaches. born to those who have thrice defied him, born as the seventh month dies . and the Dark Lord will mark him as his equal, but he will have power the Dark Lord knows not . and either must die at the hand of the other for neither can live while the other survives . the one with the power to vanquish the Dark Lord will be born as the seventh month dies .ö

ôReally?ö

ôReally.ö

ôIt's self-fulfilling anyway. Even if I hadn't heard it, I'd still want to stop Voldemort. Besides, I've got bigger fish to fry like Heroic Spirits.ö

ôI think you've grasped what most people have a hard time understanding. Prophecies are only what we make of them. Not even Voldemort learned that.ö

ôSo, if you were a Master, which Servant did you summon?ö

A wistful smile crossed the wizened man's face before he answered, ôA fair and radiant maiden who sacrificed everything to become a king, Saber. In the end, it was myself and Saber against the King of Heroes Gilgamesh and Grindelwald.ö

ôShe sounds like something else.ö

ôShe was the only woman I ever truly loved,ö said Dumbledore before turning back to seriousness, ôSince you are participating in the Grail War, I assume your Servant will be following you. There will be no fighting within the walls of Hogwarts. I will not allow innocent bystanders to be hurt in this brutal contest.ö

ôI understand, sir.ö

ôDid you know that the Grail War can change your life? It changed mine,ö said Dumbledore, suddenly changing topic.

ôHow so, Professor?ö

ôWell, you see. Before the Grail War, I was much more of a moral relativist than I am now. For Grindelwald and myself both -we had been friends-, there was a sense that lesser evils were inconsequential if they were to bring about a Greater Good. But then, then I saw the horrors and brutality of the Grail War. I saw the clash of Earth's greatest heroes in all their flawed glory for the chance at a wish, none of them every thinking they would be the dead one until that day came. I saw where the Greater Good had taken my beloved Saber. Most of all, I saw the Greatest Good, the Holy Grail. I rejected it. I rejected it for the mountain of evils that brought it into the existence.ö

ôWhat about the wish?ö

ôI ordered Saber to destroy the Grail, thinking that perhaps her Noble Phantasm would cleanse it. I'll warn you, the Grail is simultaneously the most beautiful and loathsome thing in existence.ö

Dumbledore finished quietly and went back to the vestiges of his meal. Harry did likewise, mulling over the great wizard's words. Archer was silent, taking in the very same words.

***
As he had promised, Dumbledore had procured a ticket to the three o' clock train to Hogsmeade. The amber light of the afternoon filtered through the panes of glass of the ceiling of Platform 9 3/4. There were some people here but not many. Soon enough, Harry found himself sitting on the train in one of the comfortable leather seats. Harry leaned back to rest for the long journey.

ôMaster, there is something very important for you to know,ö communicated Archer mentally with an uncharacteristic trepidation. Something had her worried.

ôWhat is it?ö asked Harry, worry creeping into his voice.

ôThere's another Servant here. It's a powerful one.ö

ôHow do you tell?ö

ôThe Servant is carrying some holy relic anathema to my demonic heritage. It's carrying a sense of overbearing power and majesty.ö

ôWell, shit.ö

Harry took in this revelation silently. It was all he could do to simply look at the inside of the cabin, looking at the green wallpaper slightly peeling at the edges. He tried counting all the screws he could find, and it did work somewhat to soothe his nervous.

ôThey're moving, Master. They have obviously sensed us.ö

His heartbeat grew faster. He could feel the each nervous second slip past. He knew they were drawing near. Yard by yard. Foot by foot. Inch by agonizing inch. They were coming to him and Archer. More accurately, they were going after him and Archer.

ôHere they come, Master.ö

The doorknob turned as someone on the other side began to enter. It was an instant that seemed like an eternity to him. His heart was pounding like war drums in his ears. That eternity was what he needed to calm himself down for his second Servant confrontation. The door then swung open. Two people walked in.

The first person to walk in was a pretty redhead with blue eyes. She wore the standard black Hogwarts robes. In contrast to to the scarlet and gold of Harry's own Gryffindor uniform, she wore the yellow and black of a Hufflepuff. He knew her from Hogwarts; she was in his year, but he found himself incapable of coming up with a name at the moment.

The other person, another girl, was something else. Her eyes were the first thing that he noticed, deep green pools of a green like that of a dragon which threatened to crush him under its power. Her hair was golden like a field of ripe wheat. Nonetheless, her hair reminded him of a lion's main. He could also feel something from her, a primordial power that made him want to bow down to her like a serf to king. This girl was dressed in a navy blue jacket and skirt alongside a white blouse with a blue bow. She was obviously the Servant. In the back of his mind, Harry could feel incorporeal Archer feeling similar things.

ôHarry! What are you doing here?ö

He should have recognized her voice but he still didn't. It rhymed with ôLoans.ö Bones! That was it. This was Susan Bones. He was talking to Susan Bones, the Fifth Year Hufflepuff who had joined Dumbledore's Army. He then had a moment to come up with a decent answer which definitely had to be a lie.

ôI needed to go off campus for a bit,ö said Harry, ôThere was some family business I needed to take care of, but it didn't quite work out. What about yourself?ö

His statement was partially a lie and both knew it. Nonetheless, she went along with his sham.

ôLike you did, I took care of some family business.ö

Susan gestured to the blonde girl beside her who looked only slightly older than either of them.

ôThis is my cousin, Penny. She's a squib, but my family wanted me to bring her with me to Hogwarts where things would be safe. Please be nice to her.ö

It was a lie. It was a damn lie. Both of them knew it; but accepted it anyway, hoping to
avoid a confrontation between friends or at least friendly acquaintances.

ôIt's a pleasure to meet you, Penny,ö said Harry offering a hand to her. Penny smiled and gave him a firm handshake of her own. Harry idly noted that the color blue seemed to suit her quite well.

ôNice to meet you too, Harry...ö

ôPotter. Please don't let all the rumors about influence you. Just look at me for who I am. That would be wonderful.ö

ôI'll try to keep that in mind, Harry.ö

The blonde smiled. Harry could sense Archer at an edge. He could also see a certain tenseness in both Susan and ôPenny.ö So, he decided to ask an innocent enough sounding but altogether probing question based on a hunch from his earlier conversation with Dumbledore about Heaven's Feel.

ôYou look like a real fencer, Penny. What do you fence? Saber?ö he asked.

It wasn't much of a reaction, but it was there and just enough for him to add to his suspicions and gut instincts about this mysterious girl.

ôGood going, Master,ö communicated Archer, ôYou should have seen the look on her face when she couldn't tell whether or not 'saber' was direct address or simply part of the question. I do believe that we have found Saber. We do need to confirm it at a later date, but I rewarded that sort of initiative when I was the commander of my armies.ö

ôThanks, Archer. It's even better, though. I've got just the tool to confirm it at Hogwarts. Of course, it's pretty obvious that she suspects me, sensing you.ö

Susan snapped her fingers.

ôYou were getting spaced-out there.ö

ôThanks, I needed that.ö

ôWell be quiet for a bit, my cousin is going to answer you.ö

ôI'm not really interested in fencing per se,ö began the blonde girl, ôFencing is simply a watered down form of swordfighting. I greatly prefer what you would call Historical European Martial Arts.ö

ôThanks. That's really quite interesting.ö

ôSo how did you guess I was a fencer?ö asked Penny or ôSaberö as he had mentally labeled her.

ôIt was just a wild guess of mine, nothing more.

ôSo Harry,ö began Susan, ôwho did you meet?ö

ôI saw Professor Dumblefore recently and took a ride around London with this guy named Bobby MacTavish who had a nice Rolls-Royce. Aside from the obvious, what about you?ö

ôJust my aunt and grandfather.ö

In spite of himself, Harry found that he enjoyed the idle chatting over the train ride. It was almost a shame to part ways once they arrived late in the evening at Hogsmeade.
 
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