As I started writing my still untitled Love Hina fic, I originally had a similar idea with a different crossover idea. Instead of Slayers, I would use Naruto. Originally the change would take place in the same area, namely the fight with Tsuruko; only Keitaro would use the kage shuriken instead of the shadow snap and would maybe summon something to force Tsuruko's surrender.
Now I think I should still write this, but use a different starting point. Imput on just where to start things off would be appreciated.
The revised basic premise will be this: We all know who Keitaro's grandmother is, but what if his grandfather was none other than Uzumaki Naruto? Basically, during the time of Danzou's attempted coup, Naruto chose to resign his commission as a Shinobi and did the unthinkable to prevent a civil war in Konoha, he left the elemental countries all together. He knew that if he moved anywhere else like the Sand or the Wave that it would just be a reason to declare him a missing nin and start a war for the powerful head of the ROOTS Anbu movement.
(Before you say anything YES I know they had videos, computers, and complex earpiece walkie-talkies in Naruto so it should not be possible for Naruto to be Kei's grandfather based on the timing of the tech in Konoha. However, technology meant almost nothing to the story and they were still using messenger birds to communicate over long distances. Willingly suspend a little disbelief and let me outline everything before you scoff.)
Needless to say he eventually emigrates to Japan, changing his name from Uzumaki to Urashima in an attempt to further cover his trail, and meets and marries Granny Hina. Over the years before his death, Naruto trained both his kids and his grandchild, namely Keitaro, as much as he could until he passed away. Once he died, Keitaro's mother, who for the sake of plot device will be from a snobby minor noble family, forbade Keitaro from training in something as dishonorable a ninjitsu (Or taijutsu and genjutsu for that matter
) so he never showed any of the skills Naruto-jiji taught him.
Cue some kind of situation where Keitaro feels he needs to leave...he used his skills, he got drunk and slept with a girl which in turn PO'ed the Hinata girls, Naru finally manages to push him too far, whatever. Keitaro leaves for where the girls can't track him for a time, namely a Konoha that overthrew Danzou's supporters a few years after Naruto left them. Keitaro accepts a standing invitation to visit from the retired Nanadaime Hokage, Konohamaru, who is now very much like the long deceased but not forgotten Sandaime. Konohamaru had been trying for years to get some of Naruto-niichan's family to at least visit, if not his one time 'rival' himself. (Even after Danzou is stopped Naruto refused to return to Konoha because he gave his word to go into exile.)
Now here comes the Love Hina-ness. Several clan heads want to return the Uzumaki/Kazama family line to the villiage as the children of the Kages are considered noble houses equal to even the Hyuuga in this day and age. If you add something like a pact with the Kyuubi to give him a chance to live on after Naruto's death, maybe as a boss summons of some kind that acts like a Bloodline Limit for the Urashima family, well you have several geezers trying to marry off, or at least breed, their young women to our hapless kanrinrin. (This is mostly to introduce a rokubi kitsune named Kasumi that will act like Keitaro's personal guardian/young childhood age babysitter. [And have a remakably similar personality to a certain eldest Tendo sister until you piss her off. Then she acts more like her Kyuubi-otousan])
Needless to say Haruka will soon realize a.} where Keitaro went after the girls fail to locate him within the first few weeks, and b.} just what kind of prime beef the schemers of Konoha, particularly the clans related to the famed Rookie 9 who had wanted Naruto back, will see in him. From there she'll use her own connection as a descendant of Konoha to allow the LH girls to track down Keitaro.
Now comes ythe problems of their attempts to get Keitaro to return from a place he is well liked and respected, as well as deal with the competition for more than one kunoichi with her eyes on being the next Mrs. Kazama/Uzumaki/Urashima.
Among the OC's I will create for this will include:
Hatake Keiko, current Kyuudaime hokage at the age of 31, and just as much of a pervert and her grandfather...Kakashi.
Hyuuga Chizuru: Hanabi's (one of only two origina Naroto characters still alive bsides Konohamaru) grandaughter. A shy girl similar in temperament to her great aunt Hinata.
Inuzuka Minako: Kiba and Hinata's granddaughter...a spitfire with a geat deal of boundless energy and a tomboyish streak a mile wide.
Uchiha Setsuna: Sakura (who is the other survivng geezer) and Sasuke granddaughter, a giggly ditz more concerned with having fun and enjoying life than carrying on the solemn duties of the Uchiha name (basically an anti-Sasuke. Consider her karma's way of trying to balance her ancestor's angst-ridden stupidity)
Well, what do you think? Comments? Suggestions? Death threats?
Now I think I should still write this, but use a different starting point. Imput on just where to start things off would be appreciated.
The revised basic premise will be this: We all know who Keitaro's grandmother is, but what if his grandfather was none other than Uzumaki Naruto? Basically, during the time of Danzou's attempted coup, Naruto chose to resign his commission as a Shinobi and did the unthinkable to prevent a civil war in Konoha, he left the elemental countries all together. He knew that if he moved anywhere else like the Sand or the Wave that it would just be a reason to declare him a missing nin and start a war for the powerful head of the ROOTS Anbu movement.
(Before you say anything YES I know they had videos, computers, and complex earpiece walkie-talkies in Naruto so it should not be possible for Naruto to be Kei's grandfather based on the timing of the tech in Konoha. However, technology meant almost nothing to the story and they were still using messenger birds to communicate over long distances. Willingly suspend a little disbelief and let me outline everything before you scoff.)
Needless to say he eventually emigrates to Japan, changing his name from Uzumaki to Urashima in an attempt to further cover his trail, and meets and marries Granny Hina. Over the years before his death, Naruto trained both his kids and his grandchild, namely Keitaro, as much as he could until he passed away. Once he died, Keitaro's mother, who for the sake of plot device will be from a snobby minor noble family, forbade Keitaro from training in something as dishonorable a ninjitsu (Or taijutsu and genjutsu for that matter
) so he never showed any of the skills Naruto-jiji taught him.Cue some kind of situation where Keitaro feels he needs to leave...he used his skills, he got drunk and slept with a girl which in turn PO'ed the Hinata girls, Naru finally manages to push him too far, whatever. Keitaro leaves for where the girls can't track him for a time, namely a Konoha that overthrew Danzou's supporters a few years after Naruto left them. Keitaro accepts a standing invitation to visit from the retired Nanadaime Hokage, Konohamaru, who is now very much like the long deceased but not forgotten Sandaime. Konohamaru had been trying for years to get some of Naruto-niichan's family to at least visit, if not his one time 'rival' himself. (Even after Danzou is stopped Naruto refused to return to Konoha because he gave his word to go into exile.)
Now here comes the Love Hina-ness. Several clan heads want to return the Uzumaki/Kazama family line to the villiage as the children of the Kages are considered noble houses equal to even the Hyuuga in this day and age. If you add something like a pact with the Kyuubi to give him a chance to live on after Naruto's death, maybe as a boss summons of some kind that acts like a Bloodline Limit for the Urashima family, well you have several geezers trying to marry off, or at least breed, their young women to our hapless kanrinrin. (This is mostly to introduce a rokubi kitsune named Kasumi that will act like Keitaro's personal guardian/young childhood age babysitter. [And have a remakably similar personality to a certain eldest Tendo sister until you piss her off. Then she acts more like her Kyuubi-otousan])
Needless to say Haruka will soon realize a.} where Keitaro went after the girls fail to locate him within the first few weeks, and b.} just what kind of prime beef the schemers of Konoha, particularly the clans related to the famed Rookie 9 who had wanted Naruto back, will see in him. From there she'll use her own connection as a descendant of Konoha to allow the LH girls to track down Keitaro.
Now comes ythe problems of their attempts to get Keitaro to return from a place he is well liked and respected, as well as deal with the competition for more than one kunoichi with her eyes on being the next Mrs. Kazama/Uzumaki/Urashima.
Among the OC's I will create for this will include:
Hatake Keiko, current Kyuudaime hokage at the age of 31, and just as much of a pervert and her grandfather...Kakashi.
Hyuuga Chizuru: Hanabi's (one of only two origina Naroto characters still alive bsides Konohamaru) grandaughter. A shy girl similar in temperament to her great aunt Hinata.
Inuzuka Minako: Kiba and Hinata's granddaughter...a spitfire with a geat deal of boundless energy and a tomboyish streak a mile wide.
Uchiha Setsuna: Sakura (who is the other survivng geezer) and Sasuke granddaughter, a giggly ditz more concerned with having fun and enjoying life than carrying on the solemn duties of the Uchiha name (basically an anti-Sasuke. Consider her karma's way of trying to balance her ancestor's angst-ridden stupidity)
Well, what do you think? Comments? Suggestions? Death threats?
