"Lucky" Prince

armedlord · Mar 21, 2007

Wow...my first topic...and a spamfic no doubt.

I blame Mereo for mentioning a certain character (by accident) and me thinking about it and actually writing it. I think I also blame GH....just because I think he's also one of the reasons what I was about to write this small piece out.

No real title for now. Any suggestions for one please. Maybe a summary as well.

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It was a very quiet night for Dawn Castle. Not a peep in the night as far as anyone can tell.

It was at that moment that Viki, the teleporting sorceress somewhat awoken from her peaceful slumber.

"...mmmm...waffu..."

Walking, while trying to rub her eyes, went to attempt to find the kitchen for a snack before going back to sleep.

Only for her to end up at Prince Falenas doorstep.

Blushing, she idly wondered if he was awake and if he was willing to guide her towards the kitchen before shaking her head at such a thought.

Looking to her left, she noticed that Kyle, one of the Queen's Knights devoted to protect the Prince, was sleeping.

She frowned. That's odd. She thought. He wouldn't sleep protecting the prince. What's going on?

As if curious if the prince was there, Viki began to try to open the door. It was locked.

The Prince NEVER locks his door

A small drop of fear enveloped inside of her and she began to lean on the door, Ear pressed, intent to see if she can hear anything in the room.

What she heard was the founds of moans and muffled protest.

Deciding that something bad was happening she took action by casting a lighting spell at the door, shattering it. (not to mention frying Kyle by accident)

She shouted, "Mr. Prince!"

A second later, she ran in.

Five second later, a feminine scream loud enough to finally wake anyone up anyone that didn't wake up from the roar of the thunder that was cast.
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"Let me get this straight," siad a very tired Lucretia Merces, "You had thought that the Prince was in trouble and decided to barge in and saw her?"

'Her" being a young girl carrying a rod that was dressed and looked EXACTLY like Viki had she been reduced into a child-like form.

Said smaller looking person that looked like Viki grabbing on a very much embarrassed Prince's arm that was tied up eariler in the night by said girl.

Oddly enough, about nearly all the young women and not the men were there other than the Prince. The fact that the men were beaten to a pulp for having lolicon thoughts of the girl was ignored for such a reason.

"Yes!" the Viki that they know of practically screamed out, "I saw her with the Prince's pant's down and-"

"That's enough Viki." grumbled Miakis, who was in a rather dark mood than her usual playful mood. Damn it! I wanted to be the one that takes away his virginity! "I think we get the point."

"I see." Muttered Luserina Barows, apparently having the same thoughts.

Turning towards the younger Viki, Luserina began to speak with a serious intent to hurt.

"Why did you take advantage of the Prince?"

The answer was quick and to the point with an easy smile from the girl.

"Whoever gets the prince gets the kingdom."

...

"WHAAAAAAAAT?!?"

It didn't matter which woman said it.

"I said," the younger Viki began to repeat, "whoever gets the prince gets the kingdom."

"WHY?"

Again, it didn't matter who said it.

Young Viki scoffed and flicked soem of her hair out of her eyes.

"If you wanted to live in a life of luxury, wouldn't you do it too?"

And with that, she teleported away, leaving the Prince alone with the rest of his loyal and oh so devoted female troops.

The Prince, getting this sudden feeling of doom, which didn't help since before the younger girls teleport, she had pulled down his pants, he looked to the left, then to the right before looking upwards as if to plea for the heavens.

"Help..."

And that was when all hell broke loose.

Mereo Flere · Mar 21, 2007

I think I said all I needed to say in Gabbly.

^^

Fatuous One · Mar 21, 2007

A bit disjointed, and rough, but still amusing. ^_^

My shoddy-edit job:

It was a very quiet night for Dawn Castle. Not a peep in the night as far as anyone can tell.

It was at that moment that Viki, the teleporting sorceress awoken from her peaceful slumber.

"...mmmm...waffu..."

Walking, while trying to rub her eyes, she attempted to find the kitchen for a snack before going back to sleep.

Only for her to end up at Prince Falenas' doorstep.

Blushing, she idly wondered if he was awake and if he was willing to guide her towards the kitchen, before shaking her head at such a thought.

Looking to her left, she noticed that Kyle, one of the Queen's Knights devoted to protect the Prince, was sleeping.

She frowned.

That's odd. She thought. He wouldn't sleep protecting the Prince. What's going on?

Curious to if the Prince was there, Viki began to open the door. It was locked.

The Prince NEVER locked his door

A small drop of fear enveloped inside of her and she began to lean on the door, ear pressed, intent to see if she could hear anything from inside the room.

What she heard was the sound of moans and muffled protests.

Deciding that something bad was happening she took action by casting a lighting spell at the door, shattering it. (not to mention frying Kyle by accident)

She shouted, "Mr. Prince!"

A second later, she ran in.

Five seconds later, a feminine scream loud enough to finally awaken anyone up that didn't shoot up from the previous roar of the thunder rang out.

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"Let me get this straight," said a very tired Lucretia Merces. "You had thought that the Prince was in trouble and decided to barge in, and then saw her?"

"Her" being a young girl carrying a rod, that was dressed and looked EXACTLY like Viki - had she been reduced into a child-like form.

Said smaller looking person, that looked like Viki was grabbing on a very much embarrassed Prince's arm, who was tied up earlier in the night by same said girl.

Oddly enough, about nearly all the young women and none the men were there other than the Prince. The fact that the men were beaten to a pulp for having lolicon thoughts of the girl was ignored for such a reason.

"Yes!", the Viki that they knew of practically screamed out. "I saw her with the Prince's pant's down and-"

"That's enough Viki," grumbled Miakis, who was in a rather dark mood instead of her usual playful one.

Damn it! I wanted to be the one that takes away his virginity! Miakis' mentally grumped. "I think we get the point."

"I see," muttered Luserina Barows, apparently having the same thoughts.

Turning towards the younger Viki, Luserina began to speak with a serious intent to hurt.

"Why did you take advantage of the Prince?"

The answer was quick and to the point with an easy smile from the girl.

"Whoever gets the prince gets the kingdom."

...

"WHAAAAAAAAT?!?"

It didn't matter which woman said it.

"I said," the younger Viki began to repeat, "whoever gets the prince gets the kingdom."

"WHY?"

Again, it didn't matter who said it.

Young Viki scoffed and flicked some of her hair out of her eyes.

"If you wanted to live in a life of luxury, wouldn't you do it too?"

And with that, she teleported away, leaving the Prince alone with the rest of his loyal and oh-so-devoted female troops.

The Prince sudden felt an impeding feeling of doom. It didn't help that after the younger girl's teleport, she had pulled down his pants. He looked to the left, and then to the right before looking upwards as if to plea for the heavens.

"Help..."

And that was when all hell broke loose.

EDIT:

Also, for a title, I suggest "But I thought it was a Queendom?!"

Or not.

AbyssalDaemon · Mar 21, 2007

Nice start; though I am rather curious on where Lyon is and what her reaction to this will be.

armedlord · Mar 21, 2007

Although I'm supposed to be asleep, I'm not. Huh.

Well Lyon is basically still in the infirmary and mostly knocked out for the count. This is kind of before the second to last war battle that let's you get her back from or something.

When she does wake up and learns of what Little Viki said...well she joins in on the hunt for the Prince and/or trying to make sure that no one else, well maybe Miakis, will get him.

The Prince might try to use Roy as a decoy, provided that he revives him from the total beatdown that is, but I planned that somehow they know that it's Roy and not the Prince. Still it gives him time to get hidden away...by Big Viki. :snigger:

What you just read is basically the first part that has been recently posted up in under's F1's title. Although the summary I gave it at FF.net needs to be better.

If you notice, I said first part.

The second part I'm actually debating on is due to because I'm trying to think if I should make it hentai or not make a second part at all really.

Considering that I'm a virgin and despite reading the stuff here, I have no clue on how to do that so it's almost leaning no for the moment.

I might post it into non-hentai, but I really feel that it needs the hentai or something.

GenocideHeart · Mar 21, 2007

Something tells me that when Lymsleia hears of this, she won't be a happy camper. Only a blind man wouldn't notice she has the hots for her brother. <_<

armedlord · Mar 21, 2007

Damn you GH! Now that you gotten me to remember that, You opened up a new can of worms! :jawdrop:

Since this is before the second to last war battle, Sialeeds and Queen's knight Alenia are still alive, making the three of them making a beeline for him as well!

Sialeeds only betrays the Prince only because she wanted to get the Twilight Rune to see if she can get eternal nookie with her nephew...and I mean ETERNAL NOOKIE! (her biggest regret in doing so was Haswar getting to the prince while she wasn't around)

Queen's Knight Alena only wanted to have Royal nookie once in her life and thus sided with the Godwins because the other faction had...well you know how the Barows looked on the male side of course...and hadn't realized that there was still the Prince who is of royal blood until now.

And Lymsleia? The real reason why she loves her brother so much was because of a innocent (to the prince that is) bath that they had together before and saw how big a piece he was packing. Thus, off to save her brother from hussies, it leads her to finally topple Gizel and the rest of the Godwin faction (rather easily as he and the rest are in a WTF mode thanks to little Viki's visit to them) and runs off to claim her bigger brother for prime nookie.

I forgot about Leknaat as well! Sensing that the fate of the Sun Rune has been massively altered, finally decides 'what the hey' and goes for the prince as well!

Damn you! now I must try to write this out somehow!

GenocideHeart · Mar 21, 2007

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

SoulGriever13 · Mar 21, 2007

*raises finger* You realize that if Lym gets the Sun Rune it's going to be not only Eternal Nookie, but also Eternal Loli, right?

Just sayin'

-Griever

sigfried27 · Mar 21, 2007

Minor technacalities, so don't let them stop you, but I don't believe that the Dawn and Twighlight runes would give immortality since they are not true runes, but I could be wrong, so don't let that stop you.

GenocideHeart · Mar 21, 2007

sigfried27 said:

They are in the same boat as Bright Shield/Black Sword or Front/Back Gate Rune. And Leknaat has been around for a few centuries, at the very least. So yes, they would grant immortality all the same. Or at the very least an obscenely long lifespan.

sigfried27 · Mar 21, 2007

I don't recall them ever saying that the Black Sword or Bright Shield rune granted immortality, but I suppose I can concede to the point about the Gate rune. I seem to either miss or misinterpret a lot of facts.

armedlord · Mar 22, 2007

This is somewhat of a jumble and not the entire thing. Please bear with me on this.

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Sialeeds was, of course, a smart woman. Taught by the best scholars from all over the country. Able to make plans that can barely fail.

Although her current plan was NOT one that she wanted use use, it was about the only way to secure the Twilight Rune.

Although I'd perferred that it didn't involve leaving my nephew alone with just Haswar... She bitterly thought. A darkly green aura of jealousy began to come forth from her as if responding to her next thought.

And considering how she is I wouldn't go past her to more than just 'comfort' him in his time of sorrow....

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(Sialeeds Mindscape of Haswar and the Prince)

"Haswar!" A far more bishnen looking Prince Falenas in a rather less clothed version of what he normall wears cried out in sorrow, "Sialeeds went over to the Godwins, hurted Lyon and said that she perferred Gizil over me! what can I do?"

Haswar, somehow wearing a g-string bikini for no apparent reason, began to reach over with her right arm basically to snuggle his face right into her bountiful bosom. The left hand however, was instead slowly going down his waist and towards an area that no other than Sialeeds herself should be touching.

"There there," Whispered Haswar in a tone the was far too sensationally for Sialeeds' ears. "I'm here you. I'm here for you and will never leave you like she did."

The prince looked up teary-eyed at her face, somehow even adding more of an effect of hot good he looked.

"Really?"

Haswar smiled and a twinkle in her eye appeared.

"Yes really. I won't ever leave you alone as long as you wish it."

She gestured towards a bed that definately wasn't there before.

"Now, why don't you just lie down on the bed and I'll make it all better then?"

Complying to Haswars request, he lied down and let her take off his clothing, in which she began to put her lips on his p-

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Sialeeds quickly curb stomped that thought into the ground before it went any further than that.

Oh, no. I'm not letting THAT happen. She thought. Other than Lyon and Georg, I have been around him the most! I know what he likes and dislikes! I had shared his pain, his joy and his sorrow! I am not going to have that...that tramp get her before I do! He's Mine!

She quickly gathered her thougths and began to try to calm down. She knew that she had at least several things over her. Nothing really to worry about.

But...if what this smaller version of that girl back at Dawn Castle was saying was true...then she has a lot of people going after the Prince other than herself.

I have got to get back there NOW!

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I decided that part two will not be hentai as of yet...this should focus on Sialeed, Alena and Lymsleia's thoughts after little Viki's announcement.

Although I am still thinking of at least a lemon for the Prince and Viki when I near the end of 'finishing' this off. So I guess there's a third and fourth part I suppose.

Edit: This was on the Gabbly chat:

Think I should go that way with the princess?

GenocideHeart · Mar 22, 2007

Why not? It's all good fun. :snigger:

armedlord · Mar 23, 2007

Okay, somewhat more organized, but not finished. I also need to put in Alenia's mindscape to boot. After that will be the princess.

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But I thought it was a Queendom?! Part Two

Sol Falena.

The Capitial of all of the Queendom of Falena. The home of the royal family who reside within the majestic Sun Palace. Taken over by the Godwin Faction in their quest for what they take for unity.

And...quite currently experiencing a major earthquake that gave the Sun Palace a crack the size of Raftfleets main ship, the Dahak, could fit through all due to the surprised scream from their current Queen, Lymsleia.

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"...I said that the Prince's female troops decided that he needed to loosen up by taking away his virginity," said a young raven-haired girl with emerald colored eyes who had covered her ears in time to prevent herself from being deaf for the rest of her natural life, "And began many attempts to seduce him by any means necessary your highness."

Who knew that a scream that loud can come from such a small figure...? Thought the younger version of Viki. I don't think even a nest of dragons could outscream her.

"How can you be sure?" Asked Gizel who looked like he was ran over by the Dragonhorse Cavalry...five times over...in full armored gear.

The fact that he's only wearing nothing but boxers covered in tiny pictures of Salum Barows made it worse and raised too many questions that even the writer does not want to think about and want to reach out for the nearest bottle of anything alcoholic to forget that image just now.

"I mean there's no that-"

"Be Quiet!" Screeched out a massively panicky Lymsleia. "Or else we will be going back to our excersizes that we were having HUSBAND!"

Said 'husband' flinched at both the stressed out word at the end as well as the threat given out, ran into a corner far away from her, getting very vivid images of that experience, curling up and began to suck on his thumb.

"I can't believe those hussies are even thinking of-"

Oh dear, she's ranting now. Let's check on the thoughts of two others until she stops repeating herself about hussies for several hundred times.

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Sialeeds was, of course, a smart woman. Taught by the best scholars from all over the country. Able to make plans that can barely fail.

Although her current plan was NOT one that she wanted use use, it was about the only way to secure the Twilight Rune.

Although I'd perferred that it didn't involve leaving my nephew alone with just Haswar... She bitterly thought. A darkly green aura of jealousy began to come forth from her as if responding to her next thought.

And considering how she is I wouldn't go past her to more than just 'comfort' him in his time of sorrow....

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(Sialeeds Mindscape of Haswar and the Prince)

"Haswar!" A far more bishonen looking Prince Falenas in a rather less clothed version of what he normall wears cried out in sorrow, "Sialeeds went over to the Godwins, hurted Lyon and said that she perferred Gizil over me! what can I do?"

Haswar, somehow wearing a g-string bikini for no apparent reason, began to reach over with her right arm basically to snuggle his face right into her bountiful bosom. The left hand however, was instead slowly going down his waist and towards an area that no other than Saileeds herself should be touching.

"There there," Whispered Haswar in a tone the was far too sensationally for Sialeeds' ears. "I'm here you. I'm here for you and will never leave you like she did."

The prince looked up teary-eyed at her face, somehow even adding more of an effect of hot good he looked.

"Really?"

Haswar smiled and a twinkle in her eye appeared.

"Yes really. I won't ever leave you alone as long as you wish it."

She gestured towards a bed that definately wasn't there before.

"Now, why don't you just lie down on the bed and I'll make it all better then?"

Complying to Haswars request, he lied down and let her take off his clothing, in which she-

---

Sialeeds quickly curb stomped that thought into the ground before it went any further than that.

Oh, no. I'm not letting THAT happen. She thought. Other than Lyon and Georg, I have been around him the most! I know what he likes and dislikes! I had shared his pain, his joy and his sorrow! I am not going to have that...that tramp get her before I do! He's Mine!

She quickly gathered her thougths and began to try to calm down. She knew that she had at least several things over her. She had the bigger breast, the tighter ass and the rest of her body that screamed "I'm oh so sexy that you should grovel before me and lick my boot to even touch it". Nothing really to worry about against Haswar.

But...if what this smaller version of that girl back at Dawn Castle was saying was true...then she has a lot of people going after the Prince other than herself.

I have got to get back there NOW!

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One of the Queen's Knights had similiar but entirely different thoughts from Sialeeds.

I can't even imagine that I had grossly missed my chance eariler for the Prince. Queen's Knight Alenia sourly thought.

Now how the hell am I and the Prince are even going to have our first time together if all these women get in my way?

Now, Alenia, one of the two remaining Queen's Knights that remained in the castle, was a very dutiful woman and prided on being one of the few people to ever reach such a high position and bask in the presence of what is the awe and strength that is called a Queen.

ALthough even if she was a Queens Knight, first and foremost she was a young (in her mind at least) woman.

And like all young women, they at least have one dream.

For her, it was to have the chance to basically get extreme wild monkey sex from the blood of the Royal Family.

Oh sure, she could have fucked King Ferid from dawn to dusk and back to dawn again without stopping, but even if she had the utmost respect for him as a king, he was still a barbarian that married her queen and didn't have the royal blood of Falena within him.

Fucking the Queen was an idea, but she wanted something hard doing between her legs than her own fingers.

Before the Prince has been born, she was basically reduced to plan ahead and choose from the two of the most powerful factions that has ties to the royal family other than some blood relations. Namely the Godwins and Barows.

While it was tempting, she didn't go for Marscal Godwin. For one thing she didn't have a thing for bald men with a prick the size of her pinky.

Salum Barows...ugh...straight and to the point, he was fat and grossly ugly looking to boot. His wife must have been drugged out and drunk to marry him, let alone pop out several kids from him.

Young Euram Barows didn't look too bad, but he seemed skinny as a pole and no muscle form to look at. Wouldn't last even for half a minute if you asked her. She could have gone for the older Barows brother, but sadly he died all due to assassins from what she heard. Too bad that Luserina was a girl and after the Prince...she could have been a good choice if not for that.

That left the only child of the Godwins, Gizel. He was level-headed, tall and a decent figure. He was perhaps the only choice she had and thus, joined the Godwin faction to get closer to him.

Sometime later, she had met the Prince. Even if he WAS of royal blood, he was far too young and she was still fixated on Gizel. Thus she treated the Prince as some high powered no-faced noble to tolerate.

I am such an idiot for doing so. Alenia thought. He gotten so strong and handsome that I dismissed for a weaken man.

The fact that in her second to last encounter with the Prince she had slashed off some of his clothing that basically exposed his manhood for all to see wasn't teh reason for her change of heart.

GenocideHeart · Mar 23, 2007

Just for the record, the Prince's name is supposedly Freyador, shortened in Frey.

armedlord · Mar 23, 2007

As per the Novels, yes I know....

I just like calling him Prince for now. ^_^

Gah, need sleep. Must dream up mindscape to pervert. -_-

armedlord · Apr 8, 2007

Small tease of what I managed to get out before I gotten sidetracked by something called a writers block. I swear, I can't seem to have the will to finished Alenia's part up and finally get into the princess' head here.

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The fact that in her second to last encounter with the Prince she had slashed off some of his clothing that basically exposed his manhood -barely damaging it for which she and many others were grateful of- for all to see wasn't the reason for her change of heart. No siree. Nor the fact that it was larger than her arm was the reason either.

I hope that Prince Freyador would be lenient with me...

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(Alenia's Dreamscape)

"I am so sorry my Prince!" Cried a groveling Alenia, dressed in a ragged female villagers clothing. "I will never ever betray the royal family again! Please forgive me and my slight towards you!"

Standing in front of her was something that looked like Prince Freyador himself, except a lot more buff and a eye patch that covered his right eye, the left giving off a glare that sent shiver down her spine. He wore no clothing except for only a loincloth that's barely holding together and you could barely call it a loincloth at that.

The buffed up Prince snorted in an annoyed matter before placing a foot underneath her stomach and then somehow lift her up with only that limb, to make her slide down towards his knee to finally have her in a position of her stomach lying on top of his leg, her behind basically waving in the air.

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...help?

GenocideHeart · Apr 8, 2007

So wait, Alena fantasizes about the Prince cosplaying as Georg? :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

armedlord · Apr 8, 2007

*blinks and rechecks his own work*

...I knew something was funny about that. that wasn't intentional, but I think that kind of works off now that I think of it. ^_^

...think I should change it so that he was cosplaying Kyle instead? Braid turned into a ponytail?

Then again, the thought of him cosplaying Georg has me thinking of the prince taking his nickname only because of how big his package is and that it'll probably 'kill' Alenia if he gets his penis all the way inside of her...thus the deathblow. ^_^

zeebee1 · Apr 8, 2007

If it was bigger than her arm it wouldn't even fit in his pants.

windfalcon · Apr 8, 2007

.. that must be one long loincloth.. *snickers*

Ahh... gotta love it when a whole bunch of people are going after the Prince.

Please, do keep it up, writing random drabbles tends to help the Blockage.

armedlord · Apr 25, 2007

for the size thing, well, all I can say is that this is a crack-fic that I'm making that's NOT supposed to make sense. Get over it.

Wait, if I'm posting, then that means I have a small snippet to unload!

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I had to sadly kick out Alenia's dreamscape as if was extremely annoying me that I couldn't get past it so I opted to finish it off like that instead of trying to make it more eechi or soemthing...plus if I did try to get further, then it COULD have been entering lemon area or something and I really wanted to try to get into Lym's mind here instead as I'm only making the last part (IF I ever get there that is) the lemon (and my first attempt at lemon to boot) if I can help it.

I MIGHT have to not use the Idea I had for Lym, but I'll find out later.

GhostElder · Apr 25, 2007

armedlord said:

I think you mean fun, but other than that, great snippit. I'll start the filing the paperwork and applications for Mo4r.

GenocideHeart · Apr 25, 2007

GhostElder said:

While you are at it, file my copies too. I'm too busy rolling on the floor at Lymsleia's part.

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