Spectrum said:
fraggle said:
“Kiritsugu-san?†Nanoha shook the unconscious man. “Please wake up! You always knew what to do. What should we do!? Please!â€
I realize you're playing off both Nanoha's youth and the generic Japanese anti-gun philosophy, but this does make me laugh, considering half a minute ago she was castigating him for using a gun in the first place.
The last time thing went wrong ( as in the giant tree) Kiritsugu was there to tell her that she had done well, even if things went south. When the night began she was confident that things would go right because Kiritsugu had planned on how to handle things, and because she was following his orders.
Then her image of Kiritsugu was smashed. She wan't castigating Kiritsugu, she was vocally expressing just
how badly the image of the kind Kiritsugu shooting people was having on her spirit. And then he actually tried to shoot Fate before dropping on the spot.
Now you have a nine year old who'se first friend just got fried, impaled and then kidnapped right in front of her while her image of her supposed mentor/guide is completely blown apart.
This is becoming an healing fanfic isn't it?
daniel_gudman said:
I thought it was a little artificial when the Magus Killer failed a concentration check like twice in a row, even if he is rusty and sick.
Kiritsugu's mental defenses have been reduced to scrap. Right now countless curses are working on his mind and the sight of a burning city didn't help. Add to that that he really, really doesn't want to show this ugly side to Shirou and you have an problem when said son is deliriously asking what he is doing.
Being Kerry is suffering.