Harry Potter Me at Privet Drive

shakeval

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#1
anywho basically my story is about what really might have happened that night, now it may be an SI and the begining kinda sucks but i'm think that as the story progresses i'll just make things more and more difficult for myself, while still beating up Draco and his kind.

one thing that i don't need to be told about is Luna's prescence, early, that was intentional.

basically the main character is me, who is a foul mouthed punk/goth brat who won't take shite from anyone and likes a curvy vampire every once in a while.

he isn't go to take anything from vernon and he's slowly twisting the eldrich powers of the protective spell to his own means, power, while having loads of fun beating people up.

so yeah please read and give me some feedback, cause ideas will be accepted if they are serious and reasonable.
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lunaitc

Well-Known Member
#2
Congratulations. After many years of research you have discovered the exact alchemic formula for FAIL!
 

shakeval

Well-Known Member
#3
well congradulations, you've just wasted your time for nothing.

it would generally help if you gave a little more insight then 'FAIL'
i can see why your a lunatic
 

ttestagr

Well-Known Member
#4
Okay. There are a few problems here. One is you posted this in two different threads. Two is that it is a Self Insert. Self Inserts fail simply because the reader doesn't care about you and no one wants to read about you. That is as simple as I can put it. Three is aside from the SI, this is just a character bashing idea and that isn't interesting either.
 
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