Naruto Nature's Child

[Cooltony101neo]

Been thinking about Naruto getting banished but not the typical cliche reasons so this is my try at it.

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Naruto was sitting in the Hokage's office, with Shizune and his teacher Jiraiya next to Tsunade the current Hokage who was leaning on her wooden desk staring down into his blue eyes and she started speaking, "Naruto while you and Jiraiya went to the capital to talk to the Fire Lord after I became Hokage; did something happen while you were there for a week?" at this Naruto's face went red and he started speaking in a slightly panicked voice, "what-what nothing happened granny, geez" after he said that he started looking away.

Tsunade's eyes narrowed at his poor lie and opened up one of her right drawers and brought out a folder filled with a few papers and threw them on her desk showing pictures of the same 15 year old girl but in different places and clothes and spoke, "Did you know who this is?" at her question Naruto's face went confused for a bit and then answered her, "Yeah she's one of the castle servants I-" he was cut off by Shizune who spoke up, "Naruto those are the identical twin princess granddaughters of the Fire Lord and his heirs since his son died young."

Before Naruto could even think of a response or show an expression he started hearing a deep heavy booming laughter and he know who was laughing the Nine tailed fox was laughing at him and then his eyes widen and he shouted out in a loud voice, "What the fuck! They tricked me into it" and then he covered his face with his hands and sunk into the chair he was sat on in disbelief.

Shizune walked over and pulled him into a hug and softly started telling him, "Naruto there's a law that was put in place during one of the five Kage summits which banned chakra users from being with nobles now since you were the victim and the Fire Lord is understanding we were able to change the punishment from death to a banishment with a review after five years."

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I'll try to flesh it out and see how it goes, the main idea is Naruto has sex with the Fire Lords granddaughter(s) and because of politics he gets banished and crazy shit happens to him as usual

 

[Cooltony101neo]

RE: Banished

Okay time to continue I guess

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There was a puff of smoke and belongings were sealed up in storage scrolls Naruto was filling up in his apartment and just thinking to himself about what had just happened when a rude booming voice decided to interrupt his packing, "Hahahaha, to think they would banish you over fucking instead of figuring out a way to banish you over me at this Naruto's face went sour and he starting talking back to the fox in his mind while continuing to pack his stuff up, "Yeah I always thought I would get run out of the village because of you, not for getting tricked into sex."

Naruto let out of frustrated loud sound and continued, "Man they didnt even tell us about this stupid law now I'm banished for at least five years now traveling with Jiraiya." In the seal Naruto could see the disgusting grin the fox had when replied to his host, "You're just like your mother desiring the pleasures of the flesh, hmmm maybe I should make a body when I break free of you see what these senses feel like." after Naruto heard that he was shocked but managed to ask quickly, "How the fuck did you know my mother! Who was she!?" "I was sealed into her before I was ripped out of her when you were born, now store those scrolls in this damn seal and I'll show you how to get to your parents home where you can get your inheritance." "Holy shit, I can store stuff in the seal thats awesome!" Naruto exclaimed and after he seal his stuff into the seal holding an immortal being he followed the foxes directions and found his families home.

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Going good so far I think, I'll try to get the next part done in a day or two
I might change the title, I am open to ideas about the title name

 

[Yorae Rasante]

RE: Banished

I like the idea, but not the execution...

 

[Cooltony101neo]

RE: Banished

Naruto spent hours going through his parents house sealing pictures and anything that seemed important to him which ended up to being mostly neat stuff and all the jutsu scrolls he could find. Now he was sitting on a chair in the baby room his parents (really his mom) that set his room up and painted it in multiple shades of orange and in his crib was a stuff fox toy and other fox decorations in his room for some reason. He was holding his fox toy when the nine tails spoke out in a drawn out voice, They lied to you again boy." "What do you mean again you big fuzzybutt" Naruto couldn't see it but the beast had a nasty grin on its face when he answered Naruto, About your parents, they knew who they were and yet lied to you the son of the fourth and my previous host Kushina. But now we are free, losing that old perverted sage will be easy." "Free, but what about being a shinobi and where will I have a home, besides this banishment will be done and I'll be a shinobi again."

Once Naruto said that all he heard was a loud laughter for a few minutes and the fox replied back with a single sentence, "I have never lied to you, you shit filled sack of carbon, once you taste what true freedom is you will not go back." and a few days later Naruto left the village with Jiraiya, his teammates and friends thinking he was just going on a training trip but this would be the last time they see him for 6 years.

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This is what I have right now, I'm gonna take it into a supernatural fantasy type direction, focus on how having parts of a god (the tailed beasts) brings out crazy shit in you

the execution does need to be better, I'll see what I can do about it and I am open to ideas and suggestions

 

[Cooltony101neo]

RE: Banished

I'm thinking of just having a time skip and then having flashbacks towards events that happened during the time skip, also thinking of changing the title to "Natures Child"

 

[Cooltony101neo]

RE: Banished

I think I have the basic outlines of the plot figured out, and I will change the title to "Nature's Child" I should have something posted soon or so