Need help outlining the plot for a Lucky Star adventure story

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So, here is my Lucky Star fanfic Starbound. I've already got five chapters up, plus a spinoff fic.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8895129/1/Starbound

Basically, what's going on, is that the main four, along with a relative of Kagami and Tsukasa's, are about to embark on a journey around the world to seek a certain goddess and thwart an alien invasion (or so they think), with the help of some magical gemstones that have given them various psychic powers. They will also be making a host of new friends along the way. Hoping to create something similar to Earthbound and Earthbound Zero, though while certain segments do directly parallel those two games, I am also hoping to come up with original content as well.

Right now, I do have certain ideas planned out for the future, but not enough for what I really want, and nothing for the immediate future beyond the first dungeon. I have also commissioned a friend of mine for a backstory fic involving certain girls from a past universe, which I'm hoping will shape this story's version of Magicant (which is scheduled for the next chapter), but he's been unable to make any headway with it so far.

Here is a page I've created on TV Tropes & Idioms for the fic:

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/Starbound

Most of the characters who will be involved (some of whom are already canon). If anyone thinks that any of them seem flat, I'll be more than happy to receive tips on fleshing them out.

https://charahub.com/user/McKnight

And, some images pertaining to the fic (and yes, the longer-haired girls *are* going to have their hair done up into "beehives" for the whole fic, courtesy of the aforementioned gemstones):

http://dmxrated.deviantart.com/art/Lucky-Star-Earthbound-sprites-347019932 (A spritesheet of the main four in their winter school uniforms.)

http://dmxrated.deviantart.com/art/Lucky-Star-swimwear-sprites-493677170 (Another spritesheet, of the main four in bikinis.)

http://dmxrated.deviantart.com/art/Starbound-shopping-469397303 (A scene of the main four and Rokuna on their way to a burger joint in chapter 3, though they technically shouldn't have those handbags.)

http://dmxrated.deviantart.com/art/Starbound-swimwear-479781869 (Rokuna and Mondo (yes, both transplanted and modified from another anime called Mon Colle Knights) showing off some swimwear, as happens in chapter 5)

And finally, if anyone would like to help make it more like Earthbound than it currently is, I'll welcome your ideas, though I will decide where to draw the line based on my personal tastes or what might or might not fit. (In general, I can't quite promise to actually use anyone's ideas in general, but I will try to apply as many as possible however practical.

Hope to hear from you all soon.
 
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