Evangelion Neon Gundam Evangelion

Prince Charon

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It is the year After Impact 15. The Zeon Space Alliance, incorporating the governments of LaGrange Points 2 and 5, makes plans to free the other space colonies from the control of Earth's nations, as they had freed themselve fifteen years before, in the year of the Second Impact, when one half of the decompressed Zeon habitat pair was dropped on Antarctica, ending the First Revolution.

The Arctic Treaty which followed aknowledged the independence of Sides 1, 3, and 4; forbade the use of weapons of mass destruction, including colony drops and nuclear weapons (such as the one that rendered Zeon uninhabitable, and killed the 17 million people who lived there); and reaffirmed the earlier Treaty of New Brunswick, which forbade the creation or use of dedicated space combat vehicles, whether crewed or uncrewed (hence the arming of construction equipment, such as Mobile Suits).

On Tokyo 3, Dr. Ikari Gendo, Director of Near Earth Response Vector, the Alliance's paramilitary combat force, has installed the new 'Evangelion' Direct Neural Control System in several of NERV's elite 'Gundam' Mobile Suits. This system allows a Mobile Suit to react faster than any previous design. Unfortunatly, only the genetically engineered Newtypes can use the Evangelion system, and even the oldest Newtype is not yet sixteen.

On Earth, Seele, a conspiracy which strongly influences the policies of many nations on Earth, have there own Newtypes, and have obtained an encoded copy of the Evangelion system. It will take time for them to decode it, however, and knowing this, the ZSA Cooperative Council have chosen to start the war now.

The other Space Colonies will be freed from their parent nations... whether they want to be, or not.

So, thoughts?
 

Prince Charon

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... 41 views, and the only reply is mine. Is it really that boring?
 
#4
SIEG ZEON
 

Prince Charon

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locke69

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#7
Its a good idea, though I would hate to see a crappy writer take this idea and run it with dierrana of the typed word.

I'd offer more, but my knowledge of Zeon and that part of the MS universes is limited to ten episodes Mobile Suit Gundam, Char ?Strikes Back?, and Gundam F-91. And one PS2 game... :headbanger: :headbanger:

I'm not calling you, Prince, a crappy writer, but some :sweat: writers have tried similiar stories.

:headbanger: SEED user Asuka :headbanger:
 

Prince Charon

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locke69 said:
Its a good idea, though I would hate to see a crappy writer take this idea and run it with dierrana of the typed word.

I'd offer more, but my knowledge of Zeon and that part of the MS universes is limited to ten episodes Mobile Suit Gundam, Char ?Strikes Back?, and Gundam F-91. And one PS2 game... :headbanger: :headbanger:

I'm not calling you, Prince, a crappy writer, but some :sweat: writers have tried similiar stories.

:headbanger: SEED user Asuka :headbanger:
Don't worry, the only SEED Asuka will be using in this fic belongs to- actually, I haven't decided if she's getting laid, or into guys, in this one, so she might not get any SEED, at all. :snigger:

(Unless my co-author comes up with a very good reason why they sould, I don't plan on these Newtypes being similar enough to Coordinators to have a SEED mode.)
 

SimmyC

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Fatuous One said:
Fusions don't interest me. *shrug*
I have to second this. Not a huge fan of fusions. No matter the fandom.
 

locke69

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Prince Charon said:
locke69 said:
Its a good idea, though I would hate to see a crappy writer take this idea and run it with dierrana of the typed word.

I'd offer more, but my knowledge of Zeon and that part of the MS universes is limited to ten episodes Mobile Suit Gundam, Char ?Strikes Back?, and Gundam F-91.? And one PS2 game...? :headbanger:? :headbanger:

I'm not calling you, Prince, a crappy writer, but some? :sweat: writers have tried similiar stories.

:headbanger: SEED user Asuka :headbanger:
Don't worry, the only SEED Asuka will be using in this fic belongs to- actually, I haven't decided if she's getting laid, or into guys, in this one, so she might not get any SEED, at all. :snigger:

(Unless my co-author comes up with a very good reason why they sould, I don't plan on these Newtypes being similar enough to Coordinators to have a SEED mode.)
I thank whatever god or goddess that exists that someone doesn't try to mix the two (Mobile Suit and SEED). Reading a fusion of Wing and SEED made me want to punch the writer. SEED doesn't fuse with its backstory intact, SEED crosses semi-well.

Sorry about the rant; lack of good fics and alcohol makes me rant.
 

Prince Charon

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I realized that I forgot to put up a link to the Addventure thread for this fic, so here it is.
 

Sanji Himura

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#12
This is a poor idea, and it wouldn't matter who does it, it would eventually lead to poor execution as well.
 

zeebee1

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#13
Maybe you could bother explain why you think it's a poor idea instead of whining like a little girl.

The main issue is that this is a massive change that seems more like a fusion than anything else. The whole conspiracy angle also doesn't seem to fit. It just seems like there isn't much Evangelion beacuse of the changes proposed.
 

Prince Charon

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#14

Relevant picture is relevant... and pretty.
 

The Ero-Sennin

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#16
May as well make it a Super Robot Wars fanfic, period.
 

Prince Charon

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The Ero-Sennin said:
May as well make it a Super Robot Wars fanfic, period.
If it were in the SRW forum, I wouldn't see it.
 

Crusader

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Why do I suddenly imagine Amuro Ray becoming a big brother figure for Shinji, angsting together about not wanting to pilot their mecha and bemoaning together their fate in having to pilot a mecha in the end. BTW: Wasn't Shinji supposed to be Gainax's anti-Amuro when they made NGE or was Amuro already an antithesis character of teen mecha pilots?

Shiro Amada would probably want to try to make them snap out of it, but he's always getting himself court-martialled for always getting into sticky situations with Aina and also have to deal with Aina's nutty brother.
 

alansg

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Amuro was as whiny as Shinji, if not more than him (when he ran away from the White Base, he took the Gundam with him!). He gets better, but not before a very close friend died.
 

Liam-don

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Crusader said:
Why do I suddenly imagine Amuro Ray becoming a big brother figure for Shinji, angsting together about not wanting to pilot their mecha and bemoaning together their fate in having to pilot a mecha in the end. BTW: Wasn't Shinji supposed to be Gainax's anti-Amuro when they made NGE or was Amuro already an antithesis character of teen mecha pilots?
He's different in the sense that he isn't an incredible badass who takes to the job of piloting a giant robot against other giant robots who are doing their damndest to kill him as if it was a mildly entertaining challenge, but antithesis is probably too strong a word. After all, he's still incredibly competent at the job and becomes a badass soon enough.

Amuro was as whiny as Shinji, if not more than him (when he ran away from the White Base, he took the Gundam with him!). He gets better, but not before a very close friend died.
He's prone to bout of teen anger and stupidity but I don't think he ever really whines, except that one time when he was stuck in the brig.

As for the story... 2nd Impact happens right as the battle of A Baoa Qu ends and the Federation is forced to give up on their conquest of Zeon proper as their forces are needed for the rescue operation on Earth. 14 years later, Shinji Ikari arrives at Side 1 just as a group of MS from the Londo Bell Taskforce is engaging a the Third Angel that was flying straight to Earth on a collision course with Tokyo-3

UC tech would make an Evangelion vastly more lethal too. Beam weaponry, a nuclear reactor for power, I-field for defense. Actually you'd need to considerably boost the Angels if you don't want them to get taken out by the regulars army.
 

Prince Charon

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I am quite confused how so many people are mistaking this for a crossover, instead of a fusion. :headbanger:

Amuro Rey does not exist in this story, except as a possible alias or renaming for Ayanami Rei (after all, they gave Asuka a different Japanese family name in Rebuild), and an inspiration (in the out-of-universe sense) for the character of Shinji.

Please go read the OP.
 

Ghostface

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#23
I would say they're not mistaking it for a crossover, but are instead trying to turn it into a crossover. Also how would the angels fit into this?
 

Liam-don

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Prince Charon said:
I am quite confused how so many people are mistaking this for a crossover, instead of a fusion. :headbanger:

Amuro Rey does not exist in this story, except as a possible alias or renaming for Ayanami Rei (after all, they gave Asuka a different Japanese family name in Rebuild), and an inspiration (in the out-of-universe sense) for the character of Shinji.

Please go read the OP.
There's a story? Because all I've seen here is an short premise which received no reply in four years.

Anyway I'm not sure I get this right, but essentially you have NERV as a the spearhead of a war of agression against the other space colonies and possibly Earth itself? Which make them the bad guys?

Honestly, this isn't the most engaging beginning.
 

Prince Charon

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Liam-don said:
Prince Charon said:
I am quite confused how so many people are mistaking this for a crossover, instead of a fusion. :headbanger:

Amuro Rey does not exist in this story, except as a possible alias or renaming for Ayanami Rei (after all, they gave Asuka a different Japanese family name in Rebuild), and an inspiration (in the out-of-universe sense) for the character of Shinji.

Please go read the OP.
There's a story? Because all I've seen here is an short premise which received no reply in four years.

Anyway I'm not sure I get this right, but essentially you have NERV as a the spearhead of a war of agression against the other space colonies and possibly Earth itself? Which make them the bad guys?
They were the bad guys in canon, really, the pilots just didn't know it. They're less so, here, given Seele's Newtypes and Evangelion system (to clarify, there will be a war, no matter who starts it, its just a question of who'll have the advantage; the sooner it starts, the better off the ZSA is).

One thing I thought about, was that the ZSACC would arrange for someone else to start the war, before Seele is ready for them.

Does that help?
 
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