Nasuverse Puella Magi Schutze Aurelent

biigoh

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#1
A work in progress... that I'm now finally posting here, given that I'm a massively slow writer and stuff.

The settings used in question are Puella Magi Madoka Magica and Fate/Stay Night. As of the early chapters, it'll be Fate/Zero because it's build up material.

Also note that C&C is always, always welcomed.

Table of Contents
<a href='http://z14.invisionfree.com/The_Fanfiction_Forum/index.php?showtopic=20742&view=findpost&p=11568303' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>Prologue</a>
<a href='http://z14.invisionfree.com/The_Fanfiction_Forum/index.php?showtopic=20742&view=findpost&p=11568304' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>Chapter 1</a>
Chapter etc etc
 

biigoh

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#2
Some times fate never works the way people expect it to.

Some times the dragon does win.

But for someone like Akemi Homura, that just meant that she had to try again. That one battlefield lost to her nemesis and worse nightmares just meant that she had a new battlefield. One where she merely had to apply what she had learned to it.

Over and over again.

She would no longer cry. She would no longer need the help of others.

This was a road she would walk. Over and over til she attained what she desired.

For her friend. Her only friend. The only one who believed in her. Who had stood by her despite not knowing.

Not remembering what they had done together. Never to remember.

The laughter they had shared.

The friendship that they had formed once, twice, thrice....

The freely given kindness from Madoka over and over.

The tears they had shed.

The agony of being on the edge of descent into witchdom.

For Madoka, Akemi Homura would do anything and everything.

Would cover her hands with the blood of Incubator, in the blood and shattered soulgems of other magical girls, and in the darkness and grief of slain witches.

This she vowed to herself.

Repeating it like a mantra. It was all she had left.

"She was really amazing... when she transformed." The words spoken by the white cat thing washed over her.

"I thought she would become the strongest magical girl, but to defeat the Walpurgis Night in just one hit..." Had Madoka always being that strong or had her wish being somehow sufficient to allow her greater access to what lay within her. Homura remembered fighting Walpurgis Night with Madoka, they had struggled. Paid in blood and tears to bring it down before.

"And how will this end? If she's even stronger than you thought." The raven haired magical girl's voice spoke up in response to the Incubator. She knew it wouldn't lie, misdirect yes, but never an actual lie.

"Either way, her end will be the same. As the strongest magical girl, she defeated her greatest enemy." Homura could hear the whistling wind as she heard the absolute confidence in the other survivor of Walpurgis Night's rampage and subsequent death. It certainly fit the desolate mood and the grief in her heart.

"Now there's nothing left for her but to become the most evil witch ever. As Madoka is now, it will take ten days before she destroys this world." The carefree manner that alien spoke of humanity's extinction and of what Madoka had become certainly fit with the way it didn't seem to care, or feel emotions.

If she could, she would end it.

But killing it hadn't ended the Incubator. It had returned with time, but then she hadn't found anything like a soul-gem in its body or near it.... Homura didn't quite shake her head, she should have known. With the way it had spoken of bodies of the magical girls being 'mere' hardware.

"But well, that's not my problem. I gathered alot more energy than our collection quota," Homura would have thought it would have sounded happier or cheerful at that, but that tone of voice... that same carefree manner that it spoke in... emotions truly were something alien to it.

Homura stood up as it spoke. She didn't need to hear more. This was, after all, a lost battlefield. Her goals had been lost when Madoka had been tricked into making a wish.

She would walk to the next one. And if it was lost, there would be another one. There would always be... another battlefield.

An eternity in the span of a month.

"Won't you fight?" No need to waste energy. No need to rage against that puzzled alien. Or the impossible giant witch that had been Madoka.

"No, this is not my battlefield." Indeed, it wasn't hers. Not any more.

And so she walked off once more, transversing the path forged by her spinning shield and the hourglass that lay at its heart, amidst gears and clockwork mechanisms.

Perhaps if she had stayed... she might have seen the departure of QB. And the world attempt to fight back against the encroachment upon its domain.

Perhaps, she might have noted the unseen, unknowable figures lost to time and history. Trapped by their choices, by their own bargains.

Perhaps, she might have cared to watch the futility as those guardians fought for humanity. With weapons beyond compare, with powers that were conceptual and fueled by the magic of the world.

But then... perhaps, she might observe them fall one by one as the encroachment of Kriemhild Gretchen's barrier grew. Their attacks simply striking harmlessly upon its surface.

Their bodies and souls crushed into non-existence as the boundaries expanded past their positions. Their very natures spawned from misfortune and the regrets that lay in their soul anathemic to the paradise that was the promise and gift the witch of salvation.

Perhaps, she might have cared to know that the world would attempt to defend itself.

But such knowledge would have been useless and pointless to her. For her goal wasn't the defense of the world or such conceits that might come of desiring to be a hero.

She was no hero.

Just a friend.

A friend who would break herself for the sake of one who she valued above all else.

***
Puella Magi Schuetze Aurulent
Prologue : A tragic beginning is like fire for boiling tea.
***

And then one day, her friend broke the world to save her.

DonÆt forget.
Always, somewhere,
someone is fighting for you.
As long as you remember her,
you are not alone.
 

biigoh

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#3
Once upon a time, Tomoe Mami believed in magic.

Well, she still did. But now she KNEW it existed. And knowledge didn't equal belief, at least not truly.

Once upon a time, Tomoe Mami had a happy family. She had her father, her mother, her little brat of a younger brother.

A fairy tale existence, one where things were if not ideal, at least good.

But that was before that day. Where the light of daybreak turned to darkest night as a black sun rose into the heavens, before transforming back into day of a sort by virtue of the light from explosions and fire.

The day that started as a vacation as the Tomoe family prepared to visited Mami's grandmother, to reassure her that despite the... odd happenings in the city, that they were doing fine.

The scream of jets and explosions in the darkness before dawn had awoken everyone.

Which was why they had been driving out of the city when the black sun rose. A circle that radiated not light, nor darkness, but an anti-light that consumed everything in its path as liquid poured from it. Perhaps gushed would have been a better word, gushing as blood congealed to the thickness of black ichor or mud.

A wound in the world. A hole in reality. A schism to that which should never be and which lay outside of all that was sane and human conceptualization.

It was here that Mami remembered things becoming disjointed.

The family car jumping like a cat.

The screeching of metal upon metal, as plastic and synthetic materials gave way.

A truck framed against the light of the fire that spread from the heart of Fuyuki city.

And then there was heat... and a coldness that slowly spread. She didn't feel pain, but then she didn't feel much of anything as she gestured at the light outside, pleading for help.

To be saved. To have her existence continued.

She tried not to look at where her parents had been, seated at the front of the car. Nor the empty seat beside her where her brother had been.

The blonde girl couldn't recall what happened to the lovable brat. She could remember that he had been playing with his lego toys, building some sort of space ship. There had also been hushed voices, filled with fear and concern, from the front as the car headed out of the city and she looked back at the black sun rising.

That was when she met it.

Kyuubey, the messenger of magic, granter of wishes and the maker of magical girls.

Her wish had been simple. She didn't want to die.

She refused to die.

And so she didn't.

Once upon a time, Tomoe Mami believed in magic.

Now she was magic, it pervaded her existence. It sustained her, as she wielded it to hunt. To fight. To kill.

The world she dwelled in now wasn't one of common sense, or such things as 'logic' that normal humans knew.

But then that was fine, she wasn't human. Not anymore. Even the not quite humans with their magic didn't consider her or her kind human... and she had run into a number of those.

Daemon girl. Magical girl. Puella Magi. It didn't matter what people called her. What mattered was that she existed.

That she lived. Ever unchanging. Ever the same as the world evolved around her.

A pitiful existence such as hers was still better than being dead.

***
Puella Magi Schuetze Aurulent
Part 1 : Birth by Fire
***

The steady sound of metal upon asphalt echoed in the chilly winter night. A relentless staccato that echoed against the road and buildings surrounding the road.

One that said I come. I am.

A notion and conceit worthy of the heroic mount that could only belong to the King of Conquerors. Both horse and rider were larger than life. Beyond mere physical prowess, they bore a majestic presence. A mien not seen in the modern day, one lost over the ages with the lessening of man as cold hard science and logic replaced the fantastical wonder that came of beholding the world as it was.

Iskander truly belonged to an era before the world had moved on, as the age of the gods ended.

Still, in the monochrome landscape painted white, black and gray by the light of the uncaring moon high above as it shed its light. A brilliant and stark silver luminance that mingled with the washed out light from the blinking lamps poles that lined the streets, side by side.

A forest of steel amidst hills of wood and concrete, with globes of light floating beneath branches of steel. With the chilly breeze sharp from the heart of winter that yet still gripped Fuyuki city, it was possible to close one's eyes to imagine that one was across the world. Perhaps campaigning in the hinterlands, of what would become Europe, in Iskander's era.

At least, Waver Velvet imagined it so, as he sat before his servant, cross-saddle. A soft part of his mind murmured that this was how maidens in ages past sat upon their mounts. The strong arms of their lords surrounding them, the scent of well-cared leather armor heavy around them while the creaking of the armor with the motion of their wearers filled their ears.

Had mankind truly fallen that far in the long ages, as they praised the false gods of science and technology? Where men like him were as soft maidens to the hard masculinity of the heroes of antiquity?

Would future generations yet to come become nothing more than soft pale slugs that sat fatly before illuminated screens; laughing, raging, weeping upon command and offering their worship and love to false tawdry imagery that were nothing more than electrical pulses given shape and form?

Such idle thoughts were not worthy, and indeed, surrounded by the silent and overflowing presence of his Rider, Waver found himself drinking in the world around him as if he was a man long trapped in a desert who now found himself in an oasis.

The divide between life and death, where one's soul is shriven and exposed to the truth of the world with no self-deceptions, embellishments, nor a mind that strove to explain things with labels and conceits of his upbringing.

A sense of wonder rose in his heart to blossom in his soul, the world simply was.

An eternal moment of white, black, and soft velvety darkness. Shrouded by the world's mysteries and paradoxes, Waver accepted it all and found himself at peace. Perhaps, this was what eastern bodhisattvas meant when they spoke of peace being a singular moment without judgment, without conception or thinking that things could be better or worse or some other way.

The noble warhorse with its rider and his passenger moved out of the city, leisurely venturing towards the boundaries set for the Heaven's Feel; a border of darkness that neatly delineate what was Fuyuki city and what wasn't, Miongawa river.

The soft lapping of the water on the bank echoed softly in a pale shadow of Oceania that lay within Iskander's heart and simultaneously at the edge of the world.

Spanning above the darkness that served as the boundary was the Fuyuki bridge; a construct of steel, painted white by the brilliance of hollow mercury lamps. The light cast were sufficient to drown out the light of the moon and stars above. A modern day bridge that bore an aura of light and which lay over perdition, between life and death.

"Rider, that's..." It wasn't necessary for Waver to complete his statement, as Rider responded with a slow nod. He, too, had seen him.

Illuminated by the brilliance of the man-made light as if cast in the light of day, the golden armour shone as if a fragment of the glory of the sun had been made manifest and deigned to step upon the filthy world of mud. The lamps' light were mocked and rejected as if the very presence of the armour said that it only bore the light forged of man's artifice because the sun itself had yet to rise to illuminate it as was right and proper.

The cruel gaze gracing the noble visage. Remorseless, haughty as only a king could be. The rich ruby hue of the eyes was enough to pressure Waver into stillness, pushing him against Iskander with nothing more than the mere presence of the king of antiquity.

Servant Archer, the King of Heroes, Gilgamesh.
 

Tsukino_kage

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#6
Another thing is that Madoka is a crappy enough universe, but adding the churches or mage associations on top of it would make it worse. Although the witches are a lot like dead apostles really, they're not. They're something entirely different, and as for the aforementioned groups, they're not likely to help the girls, but actively hunt them and either exterminate or dissect them for research.
 

biigoh

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#7
I have things planned out. A notation to pay attention to is that the Incubators and the Puella Magi have been around for as long as was noted in the anime...

Also look at the Mami portion. ^_^
 

Wilder

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#8
I'm guessing Shirou is Mami's little bro?
Going from there, in this fic is Mami (And if I'm right, Shirou) related to Enjou?
 

biigoh

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#12
Num... so, been doing some posting on fanfiction.net... I'm going to try to keep the updates quick and stuff... ^_^

<a href='http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7429425/1/Puella_Magi_Schuetze_Aurulent' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>Puella Magi Schuetze Aurulent</a>
Wishes are wonderful things. Wishes make the world go round. After all, are they not made of hopes and dreams? Let us visit a world where wishes are made by various maidens.
Crossover - Fate/stay night & Puella Magi Madoka Magica/ûéû@Å¡Åùé?éÃé®üÜâ}âMâJ - Rated: T - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 4 - Words: 4,988 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-4-11 - Published: 10-1-11
 

biigoh

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#13
Why do I do this? The latest part post is like equal to the parts before it... XD

New chapter from Biigoh,

Title: Puella Magi Schuetze Aurulent

Category 1: Fate/stay night
Category 2: Puella Magi Madoka Magica/ûéû@Å¡Åùé?éÃé®üÜâ}âMâJ

Chapter 5 Title: War and victory are like fire
Words: 4,734
Genre(s): General/Supernatural
Rating: Rated: T
Summary: Wishes are wonderful things. Wishes make the world go round. After
all, are they not made of hopes and dreams? Let us visit a world where wishes
are made by various maidens. *Beware of spoilers for Fate/zero*


URL: <a href='http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7429425/5/' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7429425/5/</a>
 

biigoh

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#14
New chapter from Biigoh,

Title: Puella Magi Schuetze Aurulent

Category 1: Fate/stay night
Category 2: Puella Magi Madoka Magica/ûéû@Å¡Åùé?éÃé®üÜâ}âMâJ

Chapter 8 Title: After a fire, comes new growth
Words: 2,635
Genre(s): General/Supernatural
Rating: Rated: T
Summary: Wishes are wonderful things. Wishes make the world go round. After all, are they not made of hopes and dreams? Let us visit a world where wishes are made by various maidens. *Beware of spoilers for Fate/zero*. A late update, but still an update.

URL: <a href='http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7429425/8/' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7429425/8/</a>

An update unforeseen, and yet... here it is. ^_^;
 

biigoh

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#15
An incomplete snippit that is being posted to encourage me to keep on typing... must type and stop being so lazy. }p

stuff edited out because I is lazy...
 

biigoh

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#16
Zouken Matou fretted.

An impossibility.

An action that none could or would believe, especially from those who knew of the old man.

Such as Shinji and all who bore the name Matou did.

But still, from the feverish haze of heat that ravaged his body, it appeared to the boy that his... grandfather was fretting over him.

The normal fear that the Matou scion held for the patriach of his family was subsumed by the fading in and out of awareness, incinerated by the burning heat that radiated from beneath his skin and frozen by the cool air that surrounded him. The lack of his normal fear to color his vision allowed to see that the old man was worried.

The soft muttering was something he couldn't quite catch, and which his mind shied away from fully comprehending.

The words felt wrong.

Meaning, they held. But the manner they strung together, that was wrong. It offended his ears. His sensibilities. Behind those words, he could hear a dull roaring.

And it was not only him.

He could see her... Sakura, his new sister, shuddering at the murmured words every now and then as she looked after him. Shinji was fairly certain that she couldn't hear the same roaring sound that grew and faded, that familiar sound of the sea and yet so very alien, as if they belonged to waves that had never crashed upon the shores of the world.

And yet, even as he looked at Sakura. He could see how... hollow she was. Perhaps, that was why she couldn't hear the roar of the sea.

NPC. A vague part of his mind murmured.

Darkness squirmed in her interior like a mass of shadows. Worms, his mind murmured. Code, the back of his mind murmured.

Every now and then, the world... shifted.

Soft cooling aquamarine hexagons filled the world, interlocking and supporting each other.

Where Sakura walked on the hexagons, light blossom like flowers before inverting into impossible straight lines that glowed and faded swiftly....

But where Zouken walked as he murmured his words, darkness flared and sparked before fading away, light drunk as cheap wine by the shadows.

And still he could hear the sound of the waves, soothing as they washed over wooden hulls and became foam. The scent of alcohol hung heavy around him. The hint of a devilish smile surrounded by smoke from a pipe.

An annoying presence, and yet one that was comforting, like an irrepressible older sister who would tease him and yet made sure he was safe.

An idle part of Shinji's mind wondered... was this magic? Was this how Grandfather, Sakura and... Uncle Kariya had seen the world? A world of light that glittered and sparkled, an ephemeral existance that was unseen by the dull and crude world?

As his grandfather's words droned on, Shinji's world faded to darkness as weariness overtook him.

And in the darkness, he could heard faint laughter amidst crashing waves, as if daring the world to stay the same.

And the darkness squirmed... and perhaps it did. Perhaps, it was an endless mass of... something.
 

biigoh

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#17
I bring to you thread necromancy!

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Zouken Matou fretted.

An impossibility.

An action that none could or would believe, especially from those who knew of the old man.

Such as Shinji and all who bore the name Matou did.

But still, from the feverish haze of heat that ravaged his body, it appeared to the boy that his... grandfather was fretting over him.

The normal fear that the Matou scion held for the patriarch of his family was subsumed by the fading in and out of awareness, incinerated by the burning heat that radiated from beneath his skin and frozen by the cool air that surrounded him. The lack of his normal fear to color his vision allowed to see that the old man was worried.

The soft muttering was something he couldn't quite catch, and which his mind shied away from fully comprehending.

The words felt wrong.

Meaning, they held. But the manner they strung together, that was wrong. It offended his ears. His sensibilities. Behind those words, he could hear a dull roaring.

And it was not only him.

He could see her... Sakura, his new sister, shuddering at the murmured words every now and then as she looked after him. Shinji was fairly certain that she couldn't hear the same roaring sound that grew and faded, that familiar sound of the sea and yet so very alien, as if they belonged to waves that had never crashed upon the shores of the world.

And yet, even as he looked at Sakura. He could see how... hollow she was. Perhaps, that was why she couldn't hear the roar of the sea.

NPC. A vague part of his mind murmured.

Darkness squirmed in her interior like a mass of shadows. Worms, his mind murmured. Code, the back of his mind murmured.

Every now and then, the world... shifted.

Soft cooling aquamarine hexagons filled the world, interlocking and supporting each other.

Where Sakura walked on the hexagons, light blossom like flowers before inverting into impossible straight lines that glowed and faded swiftly....

But where Zouken walked as he murmured his words, darkness flared and sparked before fading away, light drunk as cheap wine by the shadows.

And still he could hear the sound of the waves, soothing as they washed over wooden hulls and became foam. The scent of alcohol hung heavy around him. The hint of a devilish smile surrounded by smoke from a pipe.

An annoying presence, and yet one that was comforting, like an irrepressible older sister who would tease him and yet made sure he was safe.

An idle part of Shinji's mind wondered... was this magic? Was this how Grandfather, Sakura and... Uncle Kariya had seen the world? A world of light that glittered and sparkled, an ephemeral existence that was unseen by the dull and crude world?

As his grandfather's words droned on, Shinji's world faded to darkness as weariness overtook him.

And in the darkness, he could heard faint laughter amidst crashing waves, as if daring the world to stay the same.

And the darkness squirmed... and perhaps it did. Perhaps, it was an endless mass of... something.

***

Puella Magi Schuetze Aurulent

Part 7 : The all encompassing embrace of the sea's depths can be as bad as the burning wrath of fire...

***

Shinji remembered her. She wasn't loud and aggravating like that Tohsaka, nor was she clingy and adoring as his fans were.

She just was.

There would be a smile at his jokes, as bad or poor as they were.

A willingness to work with him.

She had that something that drew him, even when he threatened her and tried to bully her into submitting in the first round. She just shook her head at him. Her servant, that ever talking pink haired Paladin of a Rider, had not been as understanding when her mistress yielded in defeat to spare him from being deleted in combat.

Or perhaps, he did, hadn't he smiled and said something at the end? "For a friend, huh?"

Even at the end, when they were both k... no, deleted by the Moon Cell... she had still been a friend who died to let him go on.

And that, that was what drew him forward to win the grail.

Not for the money, nor the wish of infinite possibilities.

But to prove that her death had not in vain.

And so, and so... he progressed.

Always one step further... always another day, as those around him were winnowed one by one.

Hacking the arena to gift his Rider, Dragon, with a horde of wealth for her to scatter in a storm, to drown their enemies in a hail of fire.

The treachery of the old man's Archer proved no match for the deluge of golden fire of his Rider. Honor could and did cripple one who was used to fighting treacherously with ambushes and assassination techniques.

"Honor and Pride before all else!" That statement of the old man had brought a frustrated look to that archer of his, who bore a certain villainy that even his El Draque could appreciate.

And so, they drowned in fire despite the archer's attempts at assassination and use of poison.

The trickery of the twins provided no defense to his own skills at manipulating the arena and his code casting. And thus, in the end, they too fell. Unable to bring to bear their might against him in the coliseum, the tricks of Caster were futile and useless.

"Ahhh~ you're just like everyone else," were the last words uttered by the digital ghost and her servant.

It was amusing how in his attempts to eliminate him by deceit and abuse of the system only netted that dog of Harway a disqualification and an undignified end as the penalties inflicted upon his assassin by the Moon Cell made it possible for his big sister to bring him low.

"Just like how history bore out, huh... you foreigners always cheat. But it was a fun fight, I'll give you that," The last words uttered by the crimson haired assassin. There was a hint of respect there, from the servant if not the master.

With the dog dead, it was only reasonable for him to start planning on how to deal with that pompous show off with his Saber. He was so confident that he didn't bother to conceal who his servant; Gawain, the knight of the sun. Assuming of course that they both made it past their next challenges.

The Lancer of Tohsaka proved to be... unbearably annoying in how he was disrespectful of him. But then, what else could one expect from the servant of that one? In the end, her words were meaningless. Her attempts to get him to make a wish to change the world was utter nonsense.

This was a game, and wishes were idiocy. He was in it for the prize money and the title. Nothing more, nothing less. Really. And so to her last words, he had responded as his Rider, of his El Draque cackled. "Just drown in your ideals, Tohsaka, and... die."

How could he not, when the last words of hers, to be remembered by him was a desperate plea to overthrow the world as it was. To bring ruination and conflict to all. She truly was a devil woman.

There was never any doubt that with the strength of his servant, that ludicrously overpowered knight, that the Harway representative wouldn't make it to the end.

Overconfidence was the downfall of the Harway scion. He might have been young, but one did not become the premier gamer in Asia by being stupid. And so, he had done his research, readied his trap.

And the Knight of the Sun fell in the darkness of night with only the roaring thunder of the Golden Hind and her escorts to guide him into the underworld.

The memories of those who had fallen before him stained his hands red. He might have been young, but he had walked the fine line between life and death, the razor thin blade of existence and non-existence.

And so, he entered the sum of all knowledge, the heart of the idiot god that knew all and had no sense of self. There had been something more, hadn't there? He vaguely remembered fighting someone else before he ascended into the Eye that gazed upon itself.

[MU]

There had been emptiness and a false existence amidst featureless monuments, hadn't there?

The sound of the waves, soothing as they washed over wooden hulls and became foam surrounded him. The scent of alcohol hung heavy around him. The hint of a devilish smile surrounded by smoke from a pipe.

An annoying presence, and yet one that was comforting, like an irrepressible older sister who would tease him and yet made sure he was safe.

While he was with her, he would always be safe. Even in a sea of data and knowledge.

He had made a wish, hadn't he? To be with her, and for countless new games.
 

biigoh

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#18
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Amusingly, this picture is relevant...
 

marthf1

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#19
I....am terribly confused.

If I'm reading the prologue snippets right, it goes Homura -> Mami -> Shinji -> the Fate/Stay game? Er, or rather Shinji blending nightmare and dream? Do I need to know a lot more about the Type-Moon universe? Is there a table of contents?
 

biigoh

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#20
marthf1 said:
I....am terribly confused.

If I'm reading the prologue snippets right, it goes Homura -> Mami -> Shinji -> the Fate/Stay game? Er, or rather Shinji blending nightmare and dream? Do I need to know a lot more about the Type-Moon universe? Is there a table of contents?
<a href='http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7429425/1/Puella-Magi-Schuetze-Aurulent' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7429425/1/Puel...huetze-Aurulent</a>

I really should post the full thing in sequence...
 

marthf1

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#21
Ooooh. I thought that because you continued from a prior snippet, that it was just more snippets like in the rest of the thread instead of a chapter. I totally missed the 'Part 7' after the intro sequence. I forgot that story threads & posted stories do not necessarily match up....

Huh, I remember this story now. Feels like short stories with an overarching theme. I guess about wishes & their consequences.... Uh, I am just restating the summary?
 

biigoh

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#22
marthf1 said:
Ooooh. I thought that because you continued from a prior snippet, that it was just more snippets like in the rest of the thread instead of a chapter. I totally missed the 'Part 7' after the intro sequence. I forgot that story threads & posted stories do not necessarily match up....

Huh, I remember this story now. Feels like short stories with an overarching theme. I guess about wishes & their consequences.... Uh, I am just restating the summary?
Ah ha... I do appologize for that mix-up.
 

biigoh

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#23
previous chapters archived here -http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7429425/1/Puella-Magi-Schuetze-Aurulent

***

Damp.

Dark.

Those were Shinji's first impressions as he walked down the stone stairs into the basement of the Matou mansion. There was a hint of that sound, that soft slithering sound the further he walked.

The soft squeaky sounds of his shoes against the stairs were absorbed by the stone.

It was when he reached what he thought was the bottom, that he understood. This wasn't a basement that he was in.

For he stood upon a platform that looked down into a catacomb.

A soft green luminous glow from soft glittering lamps that moved in the shifting darkness.

The soft cooling aquamarine hexagons that had filled the world since his re-awakening were still present, here and there... but the shadows here, they consumed them.

Leaving behind that ever shifting darkness.

No, that wasn't right. Shinji's eyes widened as he truly took in what lay before him.

The walls that vanished down into the murky green darkness, the numerous holes that dotted them at regular intervals.

Intellectually, he knew that those holes were for the burial of dead people, where corpses decompose and vanish with the passage of time. Leaving them empty once more for their next occupant.

But where time and air took care of those buried above, here... it was something else.

That smell, which had pervaded the Matou mansion, which he had lived with all his life, it was strong here. He could truly notice it now. That moist earthy scent.

The slithering darkness.

The moving points of light along with the glow of alchemically altered moss.

The darkness lived.

It breathed and ate just as he did.

The countless things that squirmed over the floor, covered in shadows, that were the shadows.

"Do you see them?" the pride in his grandfather's voice could be feel by Shinji as he and Sakura stood at the platform overlooking into the catacomb. "My happiness worms?"

For once, he felt ill. The meal in his stomach threatening to come up.

This.

This was the Matou magic?

For this, Uncle Kariya died?

For this, his father was shot?

For this, Sakura was given to their family?

He looked at her once more. The silence from her telling him more than anything he had been told.

Did he truly desire to become a magus at any cost?

***
Puella Magi Schuetze Aurulent

Part 8 : Progress is like a fire, it can only grow or die.
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"Shinji, do pay attention. This is something that Sakura already knows," As he struggled to keep his breakfast inside his body, his grandfather continued speaking. Perhaps uncaring of the nausea being displayed here, perhaps uncaring of its cause, simply knowing that what he spoke of was more important. "I call them happiness worms. But that isn't what they really are called. To be more accurate, they are the worms that will bring happiness to any true Matou magus."

"W... what do you mean?" He looked up, breathing in heavily with his mouth in a futile effort to calm his body down. Looking up meant he wasn't looking down as he followed his grandfather ever downwards.

"Boy, the heart of any quest by any magus to reach the origin of everything, the [root] of existence, is that it is a race against time. More accurately, it is a race of endurance" The raspy voice echoed in the hollow beneath the matou mansion. The echoes gave it depthm reinforcing what was said. "Time is the one enemy that can't be defeated, even by magus. It can be stalled by various tricks... but it can not be truly stopped."

"Continuation..." Shinji blinked and the light shifted just so, and it appeared that the old man had no need to breath. For a moment. "Continuation is key against relentless time that erodes away at a magus' mind, body and soul."

"Knowledge must be transmitted because one can only live so long, and the journey to the [root] of everything... that takes longer than the life span of a human, even with life extension techniques," There was a smile and a nod from the patriarch of the Matou family at Shinji in answer to the unspoken question of just how old Zouken truly was.

At the smiling nod from the dark eyed elder magus, there could be little doubt in Shinji's mind, this was a magus who would extend his life at unspeakable cost. That he would extend his life for any and all effort to continue down the path of mysteries. "Books are one way of transmitting knowledge. But inefficient and it runs the risk of being lost in some disaster or stolen by rivals."

Shinji had to nod at that statement, he could see the dangers of storing things by pen and paper, or... digitally, a small part of his mind spoke up. "So... there is something better?"

"Indeed, boy... most magus are content with the current system is use, that of books, scrolls and other storage mediums and their family crests," The approval at Shinji's question could be heard in the indulgent tone of voice. "The magic crests used by most magus are magic circuits imprinted with the techniques and gradual advances over the ages, physically transmitted from one head of the family to the next."

"Tell me boy, what is the inherent drawbacks of the crest system," They stood at the final platform above the squirming mass of worms now. It was obvious to Shinji that the worms had to do something with the path of the topic that his grandfather was guiding him through.

Still, the question had an obvious enough answer if one applied certain basic precepts of computer knowledge. "I... I suppose that if it's from one person to the next, it can get disrupted or corrupted given that it's in a series? And that there can only be one 'heir' or person receiving it?"

The answer, despite its tone of voice, was the right one Shinji determined from the slight smile.

"And, this is my answer," Shinji's grandfather gestured at the mass of squirming things that vaguely resembled worms in the sense that humans resembled dogs. "My happiness worms. Or rather, to be more accurate, my crest worms."

"Every single spell that depends upon the Matou Thaumaturgical Theory reside within the worms. Every single piece of knowledge that the Matou have gathered and gained over time reside within the worms. And as long as a single worm exist, that knowledge, that wisdom, they will never be lost," Shinji could only gapped as he looked at his grandfather as he spoke.

"So... basically, you have a huge mass of crests that distribute everything to whoever has a worm in them?" The logic was sound, Shinji had to admit to himself. It did sound like something that even in the mundane world with computers did, or was that would do?

"That's right, boy, But it isn't a one way road, everything you learn will be given to the worms as well..."

The not quite glimpsed motion from the corner of his eye drew Shinji's attention.

What he saw, however, was not what he expected. It was a sight that had him blushing and turning away to his grandfather's cackles.

His adopted sister was undressing and putting away her clothes in a neat pile as if she was about to go swimming.

"Don't look away, Shinji. This is what is needed to harmonize with the Matou magic... to become one with the Happiness Worms." What? The boy's mind rebelled against what his eyes saw, as his adopted sister gingerly stepped into the swirling mass of things.

Walking as if she was descending further down another flight of stairs into a swimming pool, and just floating in not-water [worms/insects/things].

"Harmonization is only necessary at the beginning. She has yet to finish doing so. But before that... you need this," Shinji turned to his grandfather, the question on his lips dying as he realized that he would need to do this. There was the vial of liquid that glowed a soft lambent green.

"You need happiness worms within you, to connect your magic circuits..."

In his other hand, his grandfather held a syringe of glass and immaculate steel.
 

marthf1

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#24
The first portion was very nice. The short sentences, repetition, incremental observations, pacing.... They really set the mood & crept me out along with Shinji.

I enjoyed the exposition & it conveyed the reasons for the worms well, though I'm not sure I should be amused by the name 'happiness worms'.... I suppose it's less of toning down their nature to make them more palatable, & more of what they mean to Zouken.
 

biigoh

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#25
marthf1 said:
The first portion was very nice. The short sentences, repetition, incremental observations, pacing.... They really set the mood & crept me out along with Shinji.

I enjoyed the exposition & it conveyed the reasons for the worms well, though I'm not sure I should be amused by the name 'happiness worms'.... I suppose it's less of toning down their nature to make them more palatable, & more of what they mean to Zouken.
Thank you.

And I suspect it's only Zouken who calls them Happiness worms, everyone else calls them the Matou Crest Worms.
 
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