Naruto Repeated Spiral
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You must enjoy beating my brain, huh? Fate Breaker, Crimson Edge, Frozen Ring, Operator, Revenant, War Born, this, your new 'Ebisu makes Naruto a WTFZOMGBBQ! Ninja' fic... :sweat:
Geesh.
Though, to be fair, I can't imagine what your brain must be like, with all of these(probably more too) bouncing around in there... :unsure!:
It definitely has potential, seems a lot like a very nice Ranma 1/2 fic, "Right Moments" by Judah. Similar concept, except Ranma repeated just one day.
As nice as it is, there are other stories you have going that I find more interesting, so in my selfishness I ask that you work on those first. :sisi:
Consider the motion Fifthed.
Geesh.
Though, to be fair, I can't imagine what your brain must be like, with all of these(probably more too) bouncing around in there... :unsure!:
It definitely has potential, seems a lot like a very nice Ranma 1/2 fic, "Right Moments" by Judah. Similar concept, except Ranma repeated just one day.
As nice as it is, there are other stories you have going that I find more interesting, so in my selfishness I ask that you work on those first. :sisi:
Consider the motion Fifthed.
aledeth said:
Though, to be fair, I can't imagine what your brain must be like, with all of these(probably more too) bouncing around in there... :unsure!:
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That and I wanted to read this again, reading something in the 'reply' field is a bitch.
That and I wanted to read this again, reading something in the 'reply' field is a bitch.
Fosfor said:
Now as much as I don't want to start a new fic, I don't have too much time to write because of my exam on saturday so I didn't manage to finish any of my stories yet. But I had this wierid idea and I couldn't get rid of it, so I wrote it down. Though it is written in 1st POV, it's done so deliberately and only for the prologue's sake - rest of the story would be normal. Anyway, tell me what oyu think. I could really use opinions on this one since I have no idea if to write it at all.
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto. Shame, but such is life.
Repeated Spiral
A Naruto fanfiction by Fosfor.
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Prologue
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"Ignorance is temporary - stupidity is forever."
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Have you ever wanted to know what is going to happen in your future? To have the preknowledge so accurate, so sure that would allow you to remodel your life as you saw fit? To know where to go, what to do to make your life better, avoid the usual pitfalls that life sets upon your path? To defy that pesky little concept some call 'fate'?
Dream come true, right?
Word of advice?
Don�t.
You�ll only end up complicating your life further.
Believe me, in this case having a cheat sheet does not pay.
Call it the butterfly theory, the chaos thesis, the sycnchronicity, the cosmic casuality, the pendulum theory, fate, hitsuzen... It's all the same.
Some things WILL happen.
Some things won't. Or rather will. But not when you expect them to.
Some things will twist, warp, bend and shatter - but one way or the other...
BANG! Like an overcharged explosive note, there goes your cheat sheet.
And you're worse out than where you began and back not to the step one, but to the step minus fucking THOUSAND.
Cosmic cheat sheet does. Not. Fucking. PAY.
Not in the way you want to, anyway.
Heard the saying 'Karma is a bitch and she knows it'?
It's true.
Thing is, bitch as she is, she LIKES it.
Tough shit, ain't it?
There are worse things, however.
Much, much worse things.
Like having The Bitch decide that she LIKES you. And doing something nice to you to offset the bad karma she sent your way.
I fucking swear Fortune, Karma, Fate, Kismet - whatever you call the flighty bitch - is in fucking LOVE with me.
Suck to be me, huh?
You don't know how the half of it.
My name is Uzumaki Naruto. Age... Who the FUCK knows after all that shit? Let's say I'm thirteen. Plus... something. Aww, who the hell cares?!
Point is, I'm Uzumaki Naruto. That's my fucking name. THAT much I know. Might be fake, might be not - I don't know, don't care and don't give a shit. It's MINE. It's one of the damn few things nobody can take form me. Heh. I'd like to see them try. Oh please, do.
Kakshi-baka's '1000 years of pain' will seem like a blessing if you do. Things I can...
Uh... Where was I?
Ah. Right. Introduction.
ANYway... My name is Naruto. Majority of the Konohagakure's esteemed citizens won't agree with that simple fact, of course. 'Hey you idiot' would be the kindest of what they would say. Very kind, in fact. 'Kuyybi brat', 'demon', 'trash', 'blemish upon the village' and 'that damn bastard' would be more up to their usual standard.
Many names for a sawed off blond runt, huh? Yep. I'm popular. Famous, even. Or should it be 'infamous'?
Both, propably.
Meh. See if I care. Now, anyway.
But wait, I have more!
'Jinchuruuki'.
Bit of a mouthful, ain't it?
Though 'Kyuubi no Kitsune no jinchuruuki' is even more of a bother.
But still, that's what I am.
The living demon container. Jailor for the most powerful of the tailed beasts.
Got the furry bastard sealed into me barely few hours after I was born.
Major bad karma, that. Just fucking PERFECT omen for my future life. Indeed it was.
How went that old saying? 'Start the story with an earthquake...?' Something like that.
Considering that the baka-fox could allegedly start earquakes, tsunamis and other apocalyptic goodness with his tails...
Ah, well, I digress.
So. I'm a jinchuuruki. Was. Am. Dunno. Don't CARE. Oh wait. I DO. Or I should.
Shouldda, wouldda...
Fuck it.
You might think that shoudl be my biggest problem in life. I mean, hello?! Orphan with a demon sealed in his stomach here? Reviled by the vilage that should be his home, crappy life, assassination attempts (Shit WERE there any? Dunno...), 99% people around me hating my guts, caped freaks after me - though that's for later...
Unfortunately it isn't. Or is. Though not directly.
Ya see, the problem is POWER.
Because when there is power, there are power hungry morons that want to use it.
And some are bigger morons that the others.
One particular moron proved to be the biggest one you might imagine.
Punch to the gut, some blood... Eh. Part of the course. Move along.
I mean, I wasn't beaten or abused, no. The Old Man Sarutobi would have kittens if I had been and would propably throw a fit. Like that one time in the orphanage after he had learned I was fed that spoiled food by that 'nice elderly lady'. And Hokage throwng a temper tantrum... Whoo. Not nice, let me tell you.
Still, it happened. Not frequently, but enough that I was familiar wit it.
Since it didn't hurt too much and I heal at crazy rate, I didn't pay attention.
Big mistake. Cause the punch hit the seal on my stomach. And my proplems REALLY started. Not that I had any idea, really. That little draining feeling didn't even register until Wave, when I used Foo Foo's chakra directly for the first time.
Bad move. Not that I knew it then.
I mean I FELT something odd. But being the wonderfully fucking IGNORANT little urchin, I went and ignored it to my heart's content.
Oblivious doesn't begin to cover it.
Anyway, Wave was strike one.
Chuunin exams - most importantly the Forest of Death and the fight with Neji, were strike two.
The whole mess with finding Tsunade and fghting Orochimaru and that bastard Kabuto didn't help any. But the real clincher was the Valley of the End. I jsut HAD to go and pull a nearly a tail's worth of energy fighitng that Uchiha bastard.
And loose too, but let's not get into that. I was a moron. Let's leave it at that.
Still, the Valley was REALLY the Valley of the End for me. Or rather the beginning of the end.
Because between exhausting my own chakra and overburning my chakra system, drawing on Kyuubi's power and Foo Foo working overtime to patch me up after that bastard ran me through with chidori, I finally started to notice the drain. Shame it was too late by then. Every time I used the power, even my own chakra - no matter the Kyuubi's stufff - I allowed the 'channel' to widen, gave more acess to the Kyuubi. And the jutsu, whatever it was, finally ended up overtaxing even Kyuubi.
I don't know WHAT it was supposed ot accomplish. Maybe it was just siphoning power, maybe it was revenge, maybe the fucking bastard wanted have the Foo Foo as a summon or fucking attempt on time travel for all I know.
I tried to find him but it proved futile. It's as if the guy doesn't exist. As if he NEVER did. Which is ridiculous since I saw him plenty times around the village as a kid. Only he isn't there. And people never heard of him. Even his friends.
Whatever.
Point is what that meant for ME.
Seven months, fourteen days, nine hours, twenty two minutes and three seconds.
Exactly.
That's how long it takes for the time turn back. For the world to rewind.
Seven months, fourteen days, nine hours, twenty two minutes and three seconds.
Every. Damn. Time.
Seven months, fourteen days, nine hours, twenty two minutes and three seconds.
And infinitum, ad nauseum.
My name is Uzumaki Naruto. I don't know my age anymore. I am shinobi of the leaf. And Cloud. And Mist. And Sound. And Earth.
Seven months, fourteen days, nine hours, twenty two minutes and three seconds.
A lot can happen in that time. More than you could ever think. Less as well.
Hero. Villain. Conqueror. Savior...
Seven months, fourteen days, nine hours, twenty two minutes and three seconds.
I have been lover, brother, husband, master, teacher and student. I have been shinobi, samurai, archeologist, ramen cook and countless others.
Seven months, fourteen days, nine hours, twenty two minutes and three seconds.
I have been genin. And chuunin. And jounin. Even a nukenin.
Seven months, fourteen days, nine hours, twenty two minutes and three seconds.
I have yet to be a Kage. But I will. I have time.
Seven months, fourteen days, nine hours, twenty two minutes and three seconds to be exact.
I am Uzumaki Naruto. And if there is anything I have beside my name, it's time.
Whole seven months, fourteen days, nine hours, twenty two minutes and three seconds of it.
I'm Uzumaki Naruto. I'm stuck in time.
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Comments?
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto. Shame, but such is life.
Repeated Spiral
A Naruto fanfiction by Fosfor.
*
Prologue
*
"Ignorance is temporary - stupidity is forever."
*
Have you ever wanted to know what is going to happen in your future? To have the preknowledge so accurate, so sure that would allow you to remodel your life as you saw fit? To know where to go, what to do to make your life better, avoid the usual pitfalls that life sets upon your path? To defy that pesky little concept some call 'fate'?
Dream come true, right?
Word of advice?
Don�t.
You�ll only end up complicating your life further.
Believe me, in this case having a cheat sheet does not pay.
Call it the butterfly theory, the chaos thesis, the sycnchronicity, the cosmic casuality, the pendulum theory, fate, hitsuzen... It's all the same.
Some things WILL happen.
Some things won't. Or rather will. But not when you expect them to.
Some things will twist, warp, bend and shatter - but one way or the other...
BANG! Like an overcharged explosive note, there goes your cheat sheet.
And you're worse out than where you began and back not to the step one, but to the step minus fucking THOUSAND.
Cosmic cheat sheet does. Not. Fucking. PAY.
Not in the way you want to, anyway.
Heard the saying 'Karma is a bitch and she knows it'?
It's true.
Thing is, bitch as she is, she LIKES it.
Tough shit, ain't it?
There are worse things, however.
Much, much worse things.
Like having The Bitch decide that she LIKES you. And doing something nice to you to offset the bad karma she sent your way.
I fucking swear Fortune, Karma, Fate, Kismet - whatever you call the flighty bitch - is in fucking LOVE with me.
Suck to be me, huh?
You don't know how the half of it.
My name is Uzumaki Naruto. Age... Who the FUCK knows after all that shit? Let's say I'm thirteen. Plus... something. Aww, who the hell cares?!
Point is, I'm Uzumaki Naruto. That's my fucking name. THAT much I know. Might be fake, might be not - I don't know, don't care and don't give a shit. It's MINE. It's one of the damn few things nobody can take form me. Heh. I'd like to see them try. Oh please, do.
Kakshi-baka's '1000 years of pain' will seem like a blessing if you do. Things I can...
Uh... Where was I?
Ah. Right. Introduction.
ANYway... My name is Naruto. Majority of the Konohagakure's esteemed citizens won't agree with that simple fact, of course. 'Hey you idiot' would be the kindest of what they would say. Very kind, in fact. 'Kuyybi brat', 'demon', 'trash', 'blemish upon the village' and 'that damn bastard' would be more up to their usual standard.
Many names for a sawed off blond runt, huh? Yep. I'm popular. Famous, even. Or should it be 'infamous'?
Both, propably.
Meh. See if I care. Now, anyway.
But wait, I have more!
'Jinchuruuki'.
Bit of a mouthful, ain't it?
Though 'Kyuubi no Kitsune no jinchuruuki' is even more of a bother.
But still, that's what I am.
The living demon container. Jailor for the most powerful of the tailed beasts.
Got the furry bastard sealed into me barely few hours after I was born.
Major bad karma, that. Just fucking PERFECT omen for my future life. Indeed it was.
How went that old saying? 'Start the story with an earthquake...?' Something like that.
Considering that the baka-fox could allegedly start earquakes, tsunamis and other apocalyptic goodness with his tails...
Ah, well, I digress.
So. I'm a jinchuuruki. Was. Am. Dunno. Don't CARE. Oh wait. I DO. Or I should.
Shouldda, wouldda...
Fuck it.
You might think that shoudl be my biggest problem in life. I mean, hello?! Orphan with a demon sealed in his stomach here? Reviled by the vilage that should be his home, crappy life, assassination attempts (Shit WERE there any? Dunno...), 99% people around me hating my guts, caped freaks after me - though that's for later...
Unfortunately it isn't. Or is. Though not directly.
Ya see, the problem is POWER.
Because when there is power, there are power hungry morons that want to use it.
And some are bigger morons that the others.
One particular moron proved to be the biggest one you might imagine.
Punch to the gut, some blood... Eh. Part of the course. Move along.
I mean, I wasn't beaten or abused, no. The Old Man Sarutobi would have kittens if I had been and would propably throw a fit. Like that one time in the orphanage after he had learned I was fed that spoiled food by that 'nice elderly lady'. And Hokage throwng a temper tantrum... Whoo. Not nice, let me tell you.
Still, it happened. Not frequently, but enough that I was familiar wit it.
Since it didn't hurt too much and I heal at crazy rate, I didn't pay attention.
Big mistake. Cause the punch hit the seal on my stomach. And my proplems REALLY started. Not that I had any idea, really. That little draining feeling didn't even register until Wave, when I used Foo Foo's chakra directly for the first time.
Bad move. Not that I knew it then.
I mean I FELT something odd. But being the wonderfully fucking IGNORANT little urchin, I went and ignored it to my heart's content.
Oblivious doesn't begin to cover it.
Anyway, Wave was strike one.
Chuunin exams - most importantly the Forest of Death and the fight with Neji, were strike two.
The whole mess with finding Tsunade and fghting Orochimaru and that bastard Kabuto didn't help any. But the real clincher was the Valley of the End. I jsut HAD to go and pull a nearly a tail's worth of energy fighitng that Uchiha bastard.
And loose too, but let's not get into that. I was a moron. Let's leave it at that.
Still, the Valley was REALLY the Valley of the End for me. Or rather the beginning of the end.
Because between exhausting my own chakra and overburning my chakra system, drawing on Kyuubi's power and Foo Foo working overtime to patch me up after that bastard ran me through with chidori, I finally started to notice the drain. Shame it was too late by then. Every time I used the power, even my own chakra - no matter the Kyuubi's stufff - I allowed the 'channel' to widen, gave more acess to the Kyuubi. And the jutsu, whatever it was, finally ended up overtaxing even Kyuubi.
I don't know WHAT it was supposed ot accomplish. Maybe it was just siphoning power, maybe it was revenge, maybe the fucking bastard wanted have the Foo Foo as a summon or fucking attempt on time travel for all I know.
I tried to find him but it proved futile. It's as if the guy doesn't exist. As if he NEVER did. Which is ridiculous since I saw him plenty times around the village as a kid. Only he isn't there. And people never heard of him. Even his friends.
Whatever.
Point is what that meant for ME.
Seven months, fourteen days, nine hours, twenty two minutes and three seconds.
Exactly.
That's how long it takes for the time turn back. For the world to rewind.
Seven months, fourteen days, nine hours, twenty two minutes and three seconds.
Every. Damn. Time.
Seven months, fourteen days, nine hours, twenty two minutes and three seconds.
And infinitum, ad nauseum.
My name is Uzumaki Naruto. I don't know my age anymore. I am shinobi of the leaf. And Cloud. And Mist. And Sound. And Earth.
Seven months, fourteen days, nine hours, twenty two minutes and three seconds.
A lot can happen in that time. More than you could ever think. Less as well.
Hero. Villain. Conqueror. Savior...
Seven months, fourteen days, nine hours, twenty two minutes and three seconds.
I have been lover, brother, husband, master, teacher and student. I have been shinobi, samurai, archeologist, ramen cook and countless others.
Seven months, fourteen days, nine hours, twenty two minutes and three seconds.
I have been genin. And chuunin. And jounin. Even a nukenin.
Seven months, fourteen days, nine hours, twenty two minutes and three seconds.
I have yet to be a Kage. But I will. I have time.
Seven months, fourteen days, nine hours, twenty two minutes and three seconds to be exact.
I am Uzumaki Naruto. And if there is anything I have beside my name, it's time.
Whole seven months, fourteen days, nine hours, twenty two minutes and three seconds of it.
I'm Uzumaki Naruto. I'm stuck in time.
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