Nasuverse Rin in Vanilla SAO

Wavelet365

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Prologue

Heaven's Feel: a true magic, which granted its user immortality and unlimited magical energy by preventing the dispersion of the soul and its consequent return to Akasha. Lost for one thousand years, it was a miracle sought by countless magi over the centuries. Now, for most magi, that search was over.

Due to the scientific research of Kayaba Akihiko, what had been the Third True Magic had degraded to mere magecraft: while Kayaba himself had not yet reproduced the Heaven's Feel, according to some of the Magic Association’s most esteemed researchers, its reproduction was now merely a matter of time and resources.

One more path to the Root had closed, and, with it, countless research projects were shelved. The Clock Tower was in chaos, as prominent magi in the faculties of necromancy, creation and curse, who had dedicated their lives to studying the Heaven's Feel, scrambled for more impressive projects. After all, the goal of any true magus was to reach the Root. Now that this was no longer possible through the use of the Heaven's Feel, it was only natural that magi would abandon research in that direction.

Indeed, only in one of the Clock Tower's twelve faculties was any magus at all pleased with this development. Of course, Lord El-Melloi II, a fourth tier magus in the Department of Modern Magecraft Theories, was hardly your average magus. For one thing, most of the time, when he was not attending to his duties as the new Lord El-Melloi, he preferred to be called Waver, or Professor Velvet, if he was speaking with students. For another thing, he was inordinately fond of video games (and not merely for a magus, for whom even having heard of such things might be enough to be considered inordinately fond of them, but even when compared to the population of his home country, England, as a whole).

Occasionally, in the personal opinion of Professor Velvet's secretary, this predilection resulted in behaviour which did not befit the Lord El-Melloi. As the blonde-haired woman opened the door to his bedroom, after having been told that she could come in, she reflected that today was likely to be one of those days.

Lord El-Melloi II (although, at times like this, it was hard for her to think of him like that) was sprawled out on his bed, wearing nothing but a pair of blue boxer shorts and a white muscle shirt. Propping his upper body up with his elbows, the young man was furiously pressing various buttons and pushing assorted knobs on the controller for his Playstation VII. On the television screen, perhaps a metre in front of Lord El-Melloi II, a teenaged girl drawn in the style of an anime character was pressing a gun to her forehead and then firing it, shouting, “Persona,” as she did so. Then something which looked a bit like a grim reaper appeared out of the character's body, slicing her scythe towards a giant, seven-headed hydra.

“Lord El-Melloi,” she began, ignoring the familiar spectacle. “A letter has arrived for you from the Dean. I believe it concerns your research proposal.”

“Mm,” he replied, clearly having tuned her out. “Just a moment, Samantha. I'll be with you as soon as I reach the next save point in this labyrinth. If it follows the pattern established on the previous floors, it should be somewhere around here.”

Drawing on the large reserves of patience she had acquired from two years serving this child trapped in a man's body, Samantha stood in place, holding the Dean's letter in her right hand. It was open, naturally, as Professor Velvet preferred for her to answer any correspondence from the Dean which did not directly concern his research.

“There!” the video game enthusiast cried out, apparently having spotted what he had been looking for, just as a large, black-winged bird flew onto the screen towards his avatar. Half a minute later, having soundly defeated the four bird-shaped monsters which had assailed his party, Lord El-Melloi II reached the save point he had been seeking and saved his game. Then, turning off his Playstation 7 with the push of a button, the esteemed lecturer sat up in his bed and turned towards her.

“Alright, Samantha. You said the letter was from the Dean. So, what does that old blowhard want now?”

Huh. So, apparently, he had been listening to at least some of what she had said.

“It's about your NerveGear research proposal, Lord El-Melloi. Apparently, the Dean does not feel that the benefits which would accrue to the Faculty from having you travel to Japan in order to play Sword Art Online for a year would justify losing a lecturer of your skill and experience for so long.”

“Huh,” he replied, apparently unconcerned. “Here, give me that,” the professor continued, walking towards his secretary and then taking the letter out of her hands. “And haven't I told you to call me Waver, or at least Professor Velvet?”

The professor's eyes scanned over the letter swiftly, as he mumbled to himself.

“Hm... Yes, yes, great regret, yes, yes... Ah, there we go. Excellent. That's just what I was hoping for.”

Samantha blinked, feeling puzzled.

“You're pleased that he rejected your proposal, Professor Velvet?”

“Hm? Oh, no. I'd much rather go myself, of course, but I knew that old fossil would never go for that. I only asked for so much in hopes that he'd give me what I wanted as a sort of consolation prize, and he did.”

“Oh. You mean the research assistant.”

“Right.” He nodded. “In order to investigate the magecraft formerly known as the Third True Magic using the NerveGear, I will need someone playing Sword Art Online to conduct tests for me and collect experimental results. Of course, I'd rather do it myself, but, as I can't get away from here for that long, a research assistant will have to do. It will mean that I'll have to sponsor another student in a few years, but needs must, I suppose.”

“I see. You'll want me to send out a call for applications then.”

“Yes. Considering that we'll be offering sponsorship and a full scholarship to study here once the research is complete, we're likely to get at least a few talented, young, Japanese magi applying. Hopefully, by the time I've decided between the applicants, I'll have at least a few preliminary research materials to send over to my new assistant, as we're a bit short on time, if we want to be ready for the game's release date.”

“Alright. I'll get on that right away then, sir. Oh, one more thing.”

“Yes?”

“Ah. It's a complaint from Mistress Reines, sir. Apparently, your maid golem has gone berserk again, and tried to strangle a Finnish friend of hers to death.”

“Again?”

Professor Velvet sighed.

“Okay. Well, inform Reines that I'll take care of that right away. I assume Volumen Hydrargyrum has been restrained.”

“Um, yes sir. Apparently, Lady Reines tore off its arms and legs.”

The professor dismissed that with a wave of his hand.

“That's fine. It'll keep it in one place, and, once Volumen Hydrargyrum's back under control, it'll be easy enough to fix.”

“Very good, sir,” she replied, sweeping out of the room. “I'll take care of sending out the call for applications right away then.”

Waver simply nodded.

In his mind's eye, he could see the promotional images of Castle Aincrad floating in the sky, as thousands of intrepid gamers braved its deadly labyrinths. He wished that he could be a part of that as well – a part of the game which would be the first step in replicating a miracle which, even a year ago, was beyond the grasp of human wisdom and the world – but studying Sword Art Online from afar would have to do. He'd just have to wait for the European release, if he wanted a chance to play himself.




So, there's a rough draft of the prologue. It probably needs some editing (and please tell me if Waver's OOC, as I'm not sure I really got him) but I wanted to at least get the start written up.
 

daniel_gudman

KING (In Land of Blind)
Staff member
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It's interesting; a good start!

But I guess there's one question I have: why is having a "research assistant" play instead of him something that he'd ask for? I mean, wouldn't it just be exasperating to watch as a total noob plays the game he wanted to play? ...Or is he staking out his territory, saying, "nobody else interfere with this, nobody retaliate against Kayaba; because a well-connected Clock Tower professor is researching it"? That is to say, Waver is trying to prevent any magus from screwing up the next console paradigm?

So from here, do you want to go through Waver interviewing candidates etc, or do you just want to jump immediately to Rin playing the game / witnessing the Official Launch?
 

Wavelet365

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daniel_gudman said:
It's interesting; a good start!

But I guess there's one question I have: why is having a "research assistant" play instead of him something that he'd ask for? I mean, wouldn't it just be exasperating to watch as a total noob plays the game he wanted to play? ...Or is he staking out his territory, saying, "nobody else interfere with this, nobody retaliate against Kayaba; because a well-connected Clock Tower professor is researching it"? That is to say, Waver is trying to prevent any magus from screwing up the next console paradigm?

So from here, do you want to go through Waver interviewing candidates etc, or do you just want to jump immediately to Rin playing the game / witnessing the Official Launch?
On the subject of his research assistant, it's important to note that Waver does actually have research he wants done. Waver's in the Department of Modern Magecraft Theories. His research area includes things like "why does this piece of technology cause Magic to degrade to Magecraft." At the moment, while everyone agrees that happened to the Third Magic, no one really knows for certain why it happened, so what Waver's saying is more like "this piece of technology offers our best chance at figuring it out." Playing the game himself would be optimal, but he knew it wouldn't fly (as he'd need to leave the Clock Tower) so he picked the next best option for getting his work done.

The next scene is actually Rin desperately trying to work out how to use a Nerve Gear (the instructions are simple, but not simple enough). Then she enters SAO.
 

Rising Dragon

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I have another question, but I think I'll save it for now. I might not need to ask it at all depending on how things play out.
 

lask

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Huh, interesting beginning. I'll be keeping an eye on this.
 

Wavelet365

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Note: This Chapter has been rewritten. The rewritten Chapter One may be found below here.

Chapter One

Professor Velvet had called it a device whose capabilities might nearly pass for sorcery. Some of the promotional materials he had sent her called it a miracle of modern technology. If her new supervisor was correct, it might be the key to unravelling both how magic degraded to mere magecraft and how one might create new magecraft to manipulate the human soul. If he was right, then studying it was the opportunity of a lifetime.

It looked like a motorcycle helmet.

Holding her brand new Nerve Gear up above her head, as she lay atop the beige sheets of the canopy bed in her room, Rin turned the dark blue helmet back and forth, as if just what was so special about the device might reveal itself if she looked at it from the right angle. Unable to see anything particularly remarkable about the device, the young magus spared a look at her alarm clock: 12:56 PM.

The game would begin in less than 4 minutes. Then she supposed that she would see if this Sword Art Online was really as impressive as Professor Velvet had claimed. In the end, of course, it did not really matter. Regardless of the results of Professor Velvet's research, her assistance would guarantee her a fully funded position as a student at the Clock Tower once she finished high school, as well as the highly-regarded professor's sponsorship. Even so, it would be nice if the two of them could make a ground-breaking discovery or two before she even began at the Clock Tower. Japan was considered something of a backwater among magi, so it would be useful to have results to her name which proved her worth before she arrived at the world's foremost magical research institute. It would also make her feel better about all the time she had spent preparing to play this game over the past two weeks.

Buying an internet had just been the first step. Rin had been well aware that she was not exactly the most expert person in the world when it came to using advanced technology, so she had given herself plenty of time to figure out how to set up her Nerve Gear. The instructions had been fairly complicated. It was not that they were excessively long, but that they had contained a fair amount of sophisticated, technical jargon, which had taken her a few days in her middle school's library to decipher.

Plug the Nerve Gear into your router. In order to avoid lag, ensure that you are using a high speed internet connection. Then insert the game cartridge into the slot in your Nerve Gear. Lay down in a comfortable position, and place the Nerve Gear on your head. At this point, begin the game by saying the words “Link Start.”

It had taken a week, but in the end, Rin had managed to have the internet installed inside a satellite dish outside her house, which apparently connected to a small, grey box inside her bedroom. This box, which communicated with the satellite somehow, was the router she supposedly needed. She had also solved the mystery of the game cartridge in that time. The back of her Nerve Gear contained a small, concealed compartment in which the copy of Sword Art Online she had procured (through the simple expedient of hypnotizing a store clerk the day before it was released) could be placed.

That had left her one final week in which to familiarize herself with the general principles of quantum brain dynamics (the general theory upon which Kayaba Akihiko had based his invention) to study some materials Professor Velvet had provided on past attempts to replicate the Heaven's Feel, and to thoroughly understand a variety of esoteric mysteries which had been used in the past in order to indirectly study the interaction between the soul and magecraft. It wasn't quite what she would consider a light workload, but, compared to the week she spent desperately trying to understand how to set up her Nerve Gear, it had almost been like a vacation.

Unfortunately, Rin reflected, taking one final glance at her alarm clock – 12:59 PM – her vacation had eventually come to an end.

She was already lying down, and the fluffy, white pillow her head rested on was fairly comfortable. Untying the black ribbons which normally held her hair in twin tails was the work of another minute. Then, after shaking her long, black, wavy hair out, the fifteen year-old magus placed her Nerve Gear on her head. Even with her hair down, the helmet was a bit uncomfortable, but, compared to the familiar pain of her magic circuits (to say nothing of her crest) it was nothing.

White letters appeared on the black-tinted visor which now covered the top half of her face.

If this is your first time using this Nerve Gear, you will need to perform a few simple exercises in order to calibrate your device. Begin calibration?

Hm. This was a bit like her phone, except it would usually add something like, “For yes, press 1, and for no, press 2.” However, there didn't seem to be any buttons she could press.

“Yes,” Rin uncertainly replied out loud, not sure if the Nerve Gear could actually hear her, but also having run out of other ideas. Her eyes widened slightly when the words lighting up her visor changed in response to her reply.

Touch your chin with your left hand.

The instruction was strange, but not too difficult to carry out.

Remove your left hand from your chin, and touch your right knee with your right hand.

The instructions continued on in this vein for about ten minutes, directing Rin to touch herself all over her body (she had blushed the first time she considered her actions in those words, before dismissing the inappropriate thought). While she had initially been confused by the procedure, its purpose had been clear once she thought about it for a moment. The Nerve Gear worked by intercepting signals to and from the user's brain, which would normally be sent to, or received from, one's limbs. It was unsurprising that it would need to be calibrated by having her identify the nerves connecting to various parts of her body through motion.

Idly, as she completed the last of the device's instructions – Raise your right leg into the air, and then roll your right ankle in circles counterclockwise – she wondered what would happen if she purposely performed the instructions incorrectly. Would the device confuse her legs and arms, for example? Was this device intelligent enough to detect such a deception? It might be worth investigating that idea later.

The calibration of her Nerve Gear finally completed, Rin settled herself into a comfortable position atop her bed again and took a deep breath.

“Link Start,” she calmly declared.

In an instant, the world she had watched from behind her Nerve Gear's black-tinted visor vanished, replaced by a white void. Her senses of taste, touch, hearing and smell were gone. Even the irritating feeling of the Nerve Gear awkwardly plastering her hair to her skull was absent. Then pillars of grey, red, purple, green, blue – too many colours to keep track of – shot past her. Five blue and purple gears then rapidly appeared before her eyes in sequence, labelled in English with touch, sight, hearing, taste and smell, respectively.

Abruptly, her senses returned, or at least they seemed to return. Of course, in truth, she knew that it was just the Nerve Gear overriding her true senses, replacing them with false input provided by the artificial world it created. Everything she was experiencing now was merely an illusion, but an illusion so true to life that the unobservant might confuse it with reality.

A prompt for her to select a language appeared, and she selected Japanese. Then a second prompt for an account number and password popped up. These had been provided with her copy of Sword Art Online, and she had memorized them. For a moment, she was not sure how to enter the information, but then an illusionary keyboard appeared at her fingertips, and she began to slowly type in the required information. All that appeared as she typed in the boxes provided were asterisks, but, for whatever reason (maybe the machine was broken?) this caused no problems, the machine easily accepting the input she provided.

Then more prompts began to appear.

Create New Character:

Yes

Name:

Tohsaka Rin

Gender:

Female


A more complicated screen appeared next, containing a vast array of options which she could tweak in order to alter the appearance of a rather generic looking, brown-haired woman, who floated before her eyes. The word Appearance hung in the air above the woman's head. So, what exactly was the point of this? Well, she was creating a character, so maybe the woman was supposed to be what she would look like inside the illusion. Yes. That seemed likely. The young magus sighed, as she took in the hundreds of options the game provided, from simple choices like height and hair colour, to completely unnecessary options like thumb nail thickness. This looked like it might take a while.

In the end, after nearly fifteen minutes of fiddling with the options available, Rin managed to create an illusionary body which vaguely resembled her own. She was still pretty sure that the body's legs were a bit too short, and her upper body wasn't quite proportioned correctly, but at least the hair and eye colour were right.

Rin sighed again, already a bit tired of this supposedly fun game, and pressed the Confirm Appearance prompt suspended in mid-air. Then, between one blink and the next, the words Welcome to Sword Art Online! appeared before her eyes in bold, black letters. Again, reality seemed to distort, as a blue vortex swallowed her. Her senses faded to nothing once more, as the world disappeared in a flash of white light. Then she was abruptly elsewhere.

Slowly, her senses began to return. Her limbs felt just slightly off, and were tingling as if they had fallen asleep. It was dark, but she could hear beeps and a rising clamour of excited voices. No. It wasn't dark; her eyes were closed.

Ignoring her sense of disorientation, Rin forced her eyes open. Her surroundings were bright and blurry. She could make out white cobblestones, a wall some distance ahead of her, and other people – many other people. Hoping to banish her sense of disorientation, Rin tried to push some od through her magic circuits and felt nothing at all. No od, no prana: there was not even the pain that always came with activating her magic circuits. Nothing at all. What?

Magic circuits were a part of a magus' soul. The pseudonerves in her body were mere reflections of the true circuits which dwelt within a nigh untouchable astral plane. To directly manipulate the soul: that was part of the Heaven's Feel. Suddenly, her mind was nearly as disoriented as her body.

She had read the theory, of course. Kayaba Akihito had posited that human consciousness – what a magus might call the soul, or at least its physical reflection – could be directly read as data from the microtubules of a human's nerves by a computer. With a sufficiently detailed scan, full reproduction of human consciousness might be possible. A year ago, that would have been what a magus would call true magic. But she hadn't actually believed it, or at least believed the Nerve Gear was capable of such a scan. In fact, it shouldn't have been capable of anything like that. It was only supposed to redirect inputs and outputs from the brain.

Her eyes narrowing in thought, Rin began considering the problem before her more carefully. In truth, there was no evidence that her magic circuits were not operational. It was, in fact, at least as plausible that she was simply unable to feel their operation due to the Nerve Gear overriding her senses. She would need to devise an experiment to test that hypothesis, but it would probably require a watcher on the outside of this game. Perhaps, a familiar would work.

Professor Velvet had only instructed her to spend the next few days getting acquainted with virtual reality, and to make some basic observations. They would begin the experiments he was really interested in next weekend. However, surely he would understand that-

“Um. Hello.”

There was a tanned hand waving in front of her face.

While she had been lost in thought, Rin's vision had cleared. Thus, she had no trouble at all making out the woman waving a hand in front of her face, wearing a mildly concerned expression.

Half a head taller than Rin, blond-haired and busty, the woman looked like some sort of amazon queen right out of a legend. Rather, she would have looked like an amazon queen if she carried herself with a bit more self-confidence.

“Are you okay? You're not lagging, are you?”

“Um, what?” Rin replied, jerking back a bit in response to the woman's sudden appearance. “I-What?”

“Oh. You're alright then. That's good. I got a bit worried when I noticed that you'd been standing still, staring straight ahead with that scary expression, for nearly five minutes.”

A sheepish expression crossed the older woman's face.

“I hope I didn't disturb you.”

She actually had disturbed Rin, but, at the same time, had she really just spent five minutes staring at nothing like some kind of space case? She didn't even want to think about what her father would have had to say about that if he'd seen her.

Rin, you should always strive to act in a reserved and elegant manner. That is the way of the Tohsaka family.

Argh! Hadn't she just decided that she didn't want to think about it. Nonetheless, it was certainly the truth. In public, a Tohsaka should be seen as reserved and elegant: not as an airhead who idly stands around staring at nothing. Wait. She was doing it again, wasn't she?

Taking a calming breath through her nose, Rin turned her most charming smile on the woman who had accosted her.

“Oh, I'm very sorry for causing you concern, Miss. I was simply a bit disoriented by all this,” Rin affirmed, gesturing towards the vista before her eyes. “I've never really seen anything like it before.”

That, at least, was true. In fact, the more time Rin spent observing her surroundings, the more amazed she found herself with this Nerve Gear technology. It was one thing to read about it, but entirely another to experience the world of Sword Art Online first hand.

The courtyard where she had appeared was filled with hundreds of people, and seemed to be only a small part of a far larger city. Even from the little she could see, in scale, at least, it was closer to a reality marble – an entire world reforged according to a practitioner's inner world – than any illusion spell she had ever encountered.

Of course, in other respects, it fell short of that lofty height of magecraft. In particular, while vast, it was still an illusion, rather than an entirely new world cut off from normal reality. Even so, aside from her difficulties with her magic circuits, the verisimilitude really was amazing. There were a few other problems: a lack of detail in a few places, particularly when she didn't focus on them, gravity that didn't quite push down on all the parts of her body quite the way she remembered, and some aches and pains she had grown used to over the years were missing. However, when she didn't concentrate on her surroundings, she could almost believe that she was in the real world.

“It really is something,” the blonde facing her replied. “I really just bought this game in order to take a bit of a break from university. It's been in the news, of course, and all the reviewers said it was spectacular, but, even so, I wasn't expecting anything like this.”

A gentle breeze floating through the courtyard ruffled the hair of both young women, carrying the scent of freshly baked bread.

“Anyway, it was nice meeting you,” the blonde declared, offering a polite bow. “I'm Sasha.”

“I'm pleased to meet you as well, Sasha,” Rin replied, not sure what to make of the woman's lack of a family name. “My name is Tohsaka Rin.”

The blonde frowned.

“Is that your name IRL?”

This time it was Rin's name to frown? IRL? Was that some kind of acronym?

Seeming to catch the confusion on Rin's face, the woman quickly clarified.

“I mean in real life. Is that your name in real life?”

Rin nodded, but found herself feeling uncertain. Wasn't using your own name natural?

“Yes. Is that a problem, Sasha?”

“Um, not exactly,” she replied, while her tone implied the exact opposite. “It's just that, usually, players don't use their full names in MMORPGs. Most players try to separate their real and virtual lives, so, it's a bit odd.” Again, her tone implied that it was more than a bit odd.

Rin did not exactly plan on socializing very much in this game, but she would also prefer it if her name did not make her stick out like a sore thumb every time she uttered it. Perhaps, in the future, she could just introduce herself as Rin.

“Tohsaka, I hope I don't offend you by asking this, but it this your first MMORPG?”

Rin thought she might have actually heard that acronym before (maybe on the promotional materials Professor Velvet had sent her?) but, while she did not want to seem ignorant, she had absolutely no idea what it meant. Oh, well. She could always bluff.

“Ah, yes,” she replied, feigning a touch of shyness. “It's a bit embarrassing, so...”

“Oh, no,” the older woman hastily replied. “You shouldn't feel embarrassed. After all, everyone's a newb at some point.”

Nube? That didn't exactly sound very complimentary. Her right eyebrow started to twitch before Rin forced it to still. Sasha seemed nice enough, so it probably wasn't anything too terrible.

“Of course,” Sasha continued, “except for the beta testers, I guess we're all sort of newbs. SAO is the first VRMMORPG after all.”

Once more, Rin had the uncomfortable feeling that the person with whom she was conversing was speaking an entirely different language.

“So, would you like to party up?” the friendly woman asked Rin. “I'm not an expert, but I don't mind helping you get started, if you're not too busy.”

Two impulses warred with Rin. On the one hand, outright rejecting an earnest offer of help would be rude, particularly when it was possible that she could learn a couple of useful things from Sasha. Professor Velvet had asked her to familiarize herself with the game, after all. On the other hand, she found the idea of accepting charity a bit grating. This was just a game, after all. Surely, it couldn't be too difficult.

“Oh, that's not necessary, Sasha,” she replied in a friendly tone. “I really appreciate the offer, but I think I'd prefer to figure this game out for myself.”

“Oh,” Sasha replied, looking a bit discouraged. “I see. Well, at least add me to your friends list. There usually aren't that many women playing MMOs, so it might be nice to party up a bit later.”

Wasn't that a bit quick? The two of the had only exchanged a handful of sentences. Rin would hardly be inclined to call them friends; really, they were barely even acquaintances. Even so, refusing this offer as well would be far too rude, and it was just some list. There was only one problem.

“I'd be happy to, Sasha,” she replied, smiling brightly. “I'm... just not quite sure how-”

“Oh, I can show you,” the older woman interrupted her. “Well, probably, anyway. I'm sure it won't be too hard to find in the menu.”

Then the blonde pressed her right index and middle fingers together, raised them up into the air, and then pulled them downwards, as if she was unzipping a jacket. Five, light blue circles appeared in the air, forming a vertical line along the path her fingers had just traced.

After a moment's thought, Sasha pressed the second circle from the top, replacing the five circles which had hung in the air between her and Rin with three white rectangles, which contained the words Party, Friends and Guild, respectively. The blonde clicked on Friends, but then she frowned, as she looked at what appeared next.

“No,” she mumbled to herself. “This is just the friends list. Maybe it's under communications.”

Faster than Rin could really follow, Sasha then proceeded to retrace her steps back to the main menu, before pressing the third circle from the top, and then one of the white boxes which popped up after the circles had vanished again.

What was she doing? Some sort of fake magic created for the game? If that was the case, then...

Rin raised her own right hand and aped Sasha's motion, summoning a series of circles of her very own. Each circle had a picture drawn on it in black: from top to bottom, a head, two heads, two chat boxes, like you might see in a manga, a balloon and a gear. Were the pictures supposed to mean something?

Rin's musings were interrupted by the appearance of a larger, white rectangle right in front of her face, accompanied by the same ping sound she had been frequently hearing since she materialized inside the world of Sword Art Online.

Befriend

Sasha wants to add you to her friends list.

Yes No

“Eh?” Rin spoke, feeling a bit startled by the pop-up's sudden appearance, before regaining her composure and selecting Yes.

“Okay,” Sasha responded, offering her a smile. “Well, if you ever want to party up, just send me a PM, or even if you just need a bit of help.”

Rin managed to keep her smile from betraying any confusion, as Sasha walked away from. What the heck was a PM? Oh, well. It probably wasn't that important.

The plaza where she had arrived was filled with people, all wearing essentially the same outfit. Well, in truth, the outfits were often coloured differently – Rin wore a long-sleeved, red shirt, beneath a tawny chest plate, and a black skirt, while Sasha's shirt and skirt had both been blue, but, otherwise, except for the fact that the men wore long pants, rather than skirts, they were all dressed identically.

The plaza itself was a bit more remarkable: a vast, cobblestone courtyard encircled by marble columns. Beyond the courtyard, a giant, black-domed palace loomed over top of the columns on one side of the courtyard, its ebony spires rising high into the sky. Meanwhile, in the other direction, a wide road stretched out far into distance towards tall stone walls, which she could scarcely make out from so far away. More of the steadily appearing players than not seemed to be leaving the courtyard by that road, so, not having any other particular plans, Rin followed the crowd.

Unfortunately, it turned out that trying to follow the crowd leaving the plaza could only take Rin so far. Almost immediately, once they had left the starting plaza, the crowd began to disperse, less than a fifth of them continuing along the large road leading towards the city gate, while the rest scampered down a dozen different side streets and alleys.

A beautiful park lay a few hundred metres ahead, along the road, lush green trees and a sandy beach surrounding a clear blue lagoon. Houses – some empty – while others were clearly occupied, lined the street, and, when she glanced down a side street to her right, Rin caught sight of a hefty man standing behind a stall, yelling something about the finest iron in all of Aincrad.

Everywhere she looked, people like her were moving purposefully in one direction or the other. Even the few groups who were just loitering around the plaza's entrance were clearly acquainting themselves with one another, or reacquainting themselves with people they already knew. Of course, she wasn't the only one who looked a bit lost in all the commotion. A brown-haired girl, who looked about her age, seemed to be having trouble finding the side street she was looking for, as she peered down one street after another. A tall, muscular guy with an afro was just staring blankly at the city surrounding them, as if he couldn't believe that it was actually real. Rin wasn't the only one, but she definitely felt like she was in the minority.

Just what was a person supposed to do in Sword Art Online?

Well, the name of the game was Sword Art Online, so maybe, to start with, she should get a sword. Of course, money might be an issue, as, when she had checked her pockets, she had not found any currency, but maybe there was somewhere to pick up a sword for free.

Hm. A little further down the city's main street, she could see a number of people gathering in front of a wooden sign displaying two crossed swords. Beneath the sign, an older man seemed to have set up some sort of stall where he was giving people swords. Rin couldn't see any money changing hands, so maybe that was what she was looking for. The line-up to reach the stall was long, but, if every player in the game needed to pick up a sword, then that was no surprise.

Getting into line behind a massive, bald, black man, Rin tried to get the man's attention.

“Um, excuse me,” she began, waiting for the man to acknowledge that he had heard her. “Excuse me,” she repeated a bit more insistently.

“Oh,” the man finally replied, turning to face her. “Yeah. What is it?”

Staring into the man's chocolate brown eyes, it was hard to ignore the fact that he was more than a head taller than her, and looked as if he might be twice Rin's weight. She wasn't exactly afraid of him, as the magus suspected that she could still put him flat on his back, or crush his bones, with the Chinese martial arts she had been learning for as long as she could remember. However, at the same time, size was a bit more intimidating when she lacked the ability to reinforce her body to a level which would make an Olympic athlete green with envy.

“I'm sorry to bother you, but would you mind telling me if this is the line to get a sword.”

The man smirked a bit.

“What? You couldn't tell from the sign?”

He jerked his thumb towards the sign behind his back.

“No. It's just that I don't have any money, so-”

“Huh?”

His voice had lost its teasing tone.

“You managed to lose all your money already? It hasn't even been an hour since the game started!”

“Lose? No. I didn't lose anything. I just didn't start with any money!”

Rin was beginning to get a bit agitated, while the man she was facing was wearing a sceptical expression.

“Really? Is it a bug? Let me see your inventory.”

“Inventory? What?”

The man seemed confused with her reply for a second before his eyes widened in sudden comprehension.

“Ah, I get it,” he said, nodding to himself. “So, why do you think you don't have any money?”

“What?” Rin asked. “Isn't it obvious? I checked my pockets, and-”

The man held up a hand to stop her there.

“Right. I think you've misunderstood something. This game might be a VRMMO, but they still seem to have kept some things the same as in a regular MMORPG. So, if you just open up your inventory...”

The man trailed off, as he swept his fingers downwards, summoning the five circles, which everyone in this illusion seemed able to call forth. Then he touched the top circle.

“See. In order to see how much money you have, you need to look at your items. I've got 1000 col, which is the same amount everyone starts with. Now, you try.”

The man suddenly to notice that the line had moved on quite a ways, while he had been correcting Rin's misconception.

“Ah, crap. Just a sec.”

Jogging a dozen steps forward, the black man caught up with the line, and then turned back to Rin, who had followed him.

“Okay. Now, try it.”

There was nothing complicated about the procedure, so, with a little thought, Rin copied the man's motions, summoning an item screen of her own. She nodded, as she confirmed that she had the correct amount of money as well. She was getting tired of being lectured and corrected all the time, but she had to admit that both this man and Sasha had helped her out a fair bit.

“Good,” the man replied with a grin. “I don't know what sort of gear 1000 col will buy, but hopefully it won't suck too much. By the way, I'm Agil.”

“Rin,” she answered his name with her own, nodding to the older man. “Thank you for your help.”

The man waved her thanks off.

“No problem. It's not like I had much else to do while we were standing in this line. Speaking of which,” Agil continued, “it looks like we're finally at the front.”

Then, turning towards the merchant they had been waiting for, Agil spent a few seconds looking through a list of, she suspected, weapons, before buying a large axe and a pair of armoured boots. Offering her a thumbs up, as she approached the merchant after him, the black man walked towards a group of armed men, who looked as if they had been waiting for him.

“Welcome to Baldwin's Blades and Armour Shop,” the old, balding man said from behind his wooden stall. “And what'll you be needing today, lass?”

Rin's eyes narrowed. She wasn't completely sure, but...

“So, have you ever been to Tokyo?” she asked cheerfully.

The man simply blinked, standing in place silently for a long moment.

“Welcome to Baldwin's Blades and Armour Shop,” he repeated. “And what'll you be needing today, lass?”

Rin nodded. From the way he was dressed, the fact that he already had a shop (when the game had started less than an hour ago) and the slightly mechanical way he had spoken, she had guessed that the shop keeper was just part of the illusion, rather than a real person. His range of responses seemed pretty limited, but, even so, provided he didn't talk, the illusion was actually pretty convincing.

“Oy! Hurry up,” someone called out from behind her. “We don't have all day!”

Frowning, Rin resisted the urge to turn and shout at the jerk who had interrupted her thoughts. After all, while he had been fairly rude, she could understand his impatience.

“I'd like to buy a sword,” she answered, hoping that would prompt the merchant to give her some options.

“Then you're in luck. Drexel may be better for shields, and Craster may make this town's best armour, but, if you're lookin' for a blade, no one has a better selection than old Baldwin.”

Of course, as Rin beheld the list of dozens of swords which appeared before her eyes, their prices beside them, she wasn't quite sure if she would call that lucky. Ranging from 50 col to almost 10,000 col, the length of his list of blades was staggering, and, as she couldn't see anything but their prices and names, she had no idea how to compare the merchandise on offer. Considering the fact that he was a salesman and an illusion, on top of that, it seemed unlikely that the stall's owner would be of much help either. So, she decided to go with her instincts.

“I'll take the cheapest one,” she exclaimed boldly, pointing to the short sword she had selected.

A few minutes later, her new purchase in hand, Rin once again found herself at loose ends. She had a sword now, but that didn't help her figure out how to stave off boredom. She had overheard a number of people talking about going outside the city to grind mobs, which sounded pretty weird to Rin, but at least watching them would give her something to do.

Walking through the city gate, Rin sighed. Professor Velvet had suggested that she spend at least four hours familiarizing herself with Sword Art Online before they began working, and she had been hoping go get that all done this afternoon, but she was already getting bored after little more than an hour had passed.

Rin also didn't see any mobs outside the city, except for the odd group of players slaughtering defenceless animals. Even Agil and his companions, who she could faintly make out in the distance, seemed to be hunting the boars, who were peacefully grazing in the grassy fields surrounding the Town of Beginnings. So, the point of this game was what? Animal abuse?

She even tried hunting one of the boars herself, hoping that it might be more fun than it looked. It wasn't. The boar was slower than her illusionary body, and it attacked by charging towards her in a straight line. After nearly a decade of sparring with Kirei – one of the Church's most deadly executors – the animal would have only been a bit less likely to hit her if it stood still and hoped that she tripped over it.

The only challenge was actually killing the beast, as it proved remarkably durable. It probably wasn't helping that she swung her sword like a baseball bat, and struck the boar with the blunt end of her sword as many times as the sharp end, but it was still ridiculous that she had to hit the animal in the head with her sword thirteen times before it finally died, bursting into sparkling blue light.

The fight had also lowered Rin's respect for this illusion's verisimilitude quite a bit. Rather than being cut open by her sword and bleeding out, all that happened to the boar each time her short sword struck was that her blade traced a bright orange line across its head. Instead of actually simulating injury properly, all this game seemed able to do was decrement an initially green, then yellow, and finally, red bar, which floated above the boar's head.

Rin was aware that she herself had one of those bars. It floated around the top left corner of her vision, no matter how she moved her head, above what she guessed was its numerical representation.

250/250 Lvl 1​

Thus, it wasn't surprising when, upon trying to cut her own hand with her sword, rather than bleeding or experiencing any pain, she briefly acquired a thin, orange line of her very own.

248/250 Lvl 1​

Oh, right. Killing the boar had also netted her a reward.

Exp 24
Col 30
Items 2

She supposed this was why so many people were hunting the beasts, but it still seemed like a waste of time to Rin. Why spend an afternoon beating up fake pigs with fake swords, when you could go learn in actual dojo, or go on a vacation and hunt wild animals for real?

Oh, well. At least the scenery was pleasant.

Rin did not even notice that she had dozed off, while she lay on the grass just outside the Starting City, mentally reviewing what she had discovered about this illusion so far, until she found herself groggily waking up in the middle of the plaza where she had first arrived, two hours later.

“Huh?” she groggily questioned, not sure what had woken her up. Then a voice boomed throughout the plaza, clarifying the matter for her.

“My name is Kayaba Akihiko, and, as of this moment, I am the sole person in control of this world. I'm sure you've already noticed that the log out button is missing from the main menu.”

Rin blinked, feeling a bit confused by the towering, ominously cloaked figure, floating above her head. Was she still asleep? This certainly looked like a weird dream.

“This is not a defect in the game. I repeat: it is not a defect. It is a feature of Sword Art Online.”

What was the log out button again? Rin was pretty certain that she'd read something about logging in or logging out of something fairly recently, but she was having trouble recalling the details. Rubbing the sleep out of her eyes, she sat up, biting back a yawn. There certainly seemed to be quite a few people in the plaza.

“You cannot log out of Sword Art Online yourselves, and no one on the outside can shut off or remove your Nerve Gear. Should this be attempted, the transmitter inside the Nerve Gear will emit a powerful microwave, destroying your brain, and, thus, ending your life.”

Rin's head was finally starting to clear, and she was not at all happy with what she was hearing. Was that some kind of joke? Wouldn't someone have noticed if the Nerve Gear was capable of doing something like that?

“Unfortunately, several players' friends and families have ignored this warning and attempted to remove the Nerve Gear. As a result, 213 players are gone forever from both Aincrad and the real world.”

Rin's blood turned to ice. Either this was one of the worst jokes she had ever heard, or Kayaba Akihiko, in the past few hours, had become one of the most prolific mass murders who had ever lived.

Distantly, the Tohsaka heiress continued to register Kayaba's words. Death in the game meant death in real life. The only way to escape was to overcome all of Aincrad's 100 floors. A mirror appeared in the hands of every player, revealing his or her true face. The mad man claimed to have no motive beyond playing God: imprisoning, and if he willed it, murdering, 10,000 people for his own sick amusement.

But, beneath the surface, her mind was churning rapidly. Kayaba would kill anyone who tried to escape his game. He would kill anyone who tried to interfere with his game. As Rin swept out of the Town of Beginnings' central plaza, ignoring the panicked and dismayed cries of those she left behind, she realized that she was already planning on trying to do both.

To be a magus is to walk with death.

Her features looked as if they had been carved from granite, as she paid 50 cor for a private room in the Traveller's Inn, just a few hundred metres from the entrance to the plaza. Sitting atop her bed, cross-legged, Rin closed her eyes and breathed deeply through her nose. She could not afford any distractions right now.

When she had first entered Aincrad, Rin had almost immediately noticed that she could no longer feel the activity of her magic circuits, the od filling her body, or the circulation of her prana. At the time, preoccupied with familiarizing herself with Sword Art Online, she had put off investigating the matter until later, when she would be able to safely determine whether her Nerve Gear was simply blocking the sensations associated with performing her magecraft, or whether it was actually interfering with her soul, where her magic circuits truly dwelt.

If the Nerve Gear had somehow separated her mind from her soul, then performing magecraft would be impossible, but, the more she considered the matter, the less likely that seemed. Even if Kayaba Akihiko's research might one day allow for soul manipulation approaching the level of the Heaven's Feel, the Nerve Gear had not been designed with such a purpose in mind. All it was designed to do was perfectly deceive the senses.

So, if she was right, then it should still be possible for her to perform magecraft. She had no idea whether manipulating the illusionary world of Aincrad was possible, but her physical body's surroundings should be within her reach. Of course, only a fool would try to perform magecraft without being able to feel the activity of her circuits, her od or her prana. Mistakes in magecraft could easily be fatal, and performing faultless magecraft without even being able to see or feel what you were doing would tax even the greatest magus. It would be like a symphony trying to perform while all its members were blind and deaf. Even if each individual part was somehow perfect, there was almost no chance that the whole piece would hang together.

But it was theoretically possible, and not every mistake in magecraft was fatal. Spell casting was not a method used by a magus to speak to the World, but to oneself. It was form of self-hypnosis which allowed a magus to transform herself, in order to efficiently activate and mobilize the circuits in her soul. In theory, there was no reason why an aria spoken within the world of Aincrad should not be able to actualize a mystery in the real world. This was Tohsaka Rin's goal.

The delicate magecraft which would be needed to free herself from her Nerve Gear would be impossible using this kind of kludge. All she would accomplish is getting her brain fried, but something more limited, requiring less finesse, could, perhaps, be accomplished. First, however, she would need a proof of concept.

Even if she conjured a ball of fire or froze her entire bedroom in the real world, she wouldn't be able to tell what had happened while trapped inside Aincrad. So, it would need to be a spell which transferred her consciousness into the real world. Of course, even for a Tohsaka, a member of a family which excelled in transference and conversion, such spells were difficult and delicate. It would be nearly as hopeless a proposition as removing a Nerve Gear, except for one important fact.

The deeper the connection a magus had to an object, and the more power that magus had placed within the object, the easier it was to transfer one's consciousness to that object. So, a doll the magus had possessed since childhood was easier than one newly bought from a store, and a mystic code the magus had empowered herself was easier than a rock she had found on a beach.

A jewel which she had bled upon and infused with her prana for almost an entire year was probably the best target Tohsaka Rin could ever wish for.

Her breathing was steady. The door was locked, so that nothing should disturb her concentration. The image of the amethyst which she had infused with her prana since her fourteenth birthday, nine months ago, settled firmly into her mind. It was a gorgeous, octagonal jewel, which she stored in the top drawer of the desk beside her bed.

With more care then ever before, Rin pulled the mental trigger which activated her circuits, concentrating on the familiar image of a knife stabbing through her heart. There should have been pain, as her od, hopefully, began transforming into prana, but there wasn't, so she imagined it. This pain was familiar enough that she could picture it perfectly, faultlessly recreating every detail of the sensation, if only in her mind. Pain was part of the price for the power known as magecraft, and, if she couldn't feel it, then she needed to at least imagine it, if she wanted a mystery built upon such an unsteady foundation to have any hope of being accepted.

She visualized her prana, which she hoped was steadily flowing through her body, wrapping around her optic nerve, and connecting it to the jewel only a few feet away, whose every detail she held firmly within her mind.

Finally, she spoke a one-line aria, hypnotizing herself into not only believing that her mystery could be enacted, but that it would inevitably be enacted.

Rin felt nothing, but when she opened her eyes, the light illuminating her room at the Traveller's Inn was gone. She could sense her limbs and body, but there were no limbs or body for her to move. Vision was the only sense she had, and it was dark.










Author's Notes: The transition between Rin getting bored and Kayaba appearing is weak, but I'm not sure how to improve it. Maybe I'll look at it again later. Originally, I had a comedic scene in which Rin accidentally MPKs Kirito and Klein (as well as herself) there, but I decided to cut it (maybe it will be an omake?) since it didn't seem to quite fit. Thus, rather than accidentally gathering a horde of monsters, she now gets bored falls asleep, but it still seems to have issues.

Also, I realize that I'm currently using italics for three different things (in-game text/Nerve Gear text, some of Rin's internal thoughts/flashbacks and, once, for emphasis). Is this confusing?

Finally, is the characterization okay? Agil seemed a bit flat to me, and Rin is pretty tricky to get right when she's in either ice, cold magus mode (the end of the chapter) or school idol mode (most of her interactions with people in Aincrad). I find her much easy to handle when she's in tsundere mode, but she only seems to display that mode when she's alone, or with people she trusts.
 

daniel_gudman

KING (In Land of Blind)
Staff member
#7
I liked the gap between Sasha's assumption that the newb was lagging, compared to the reality that Rin was thinking about what the NG means for her research thesis so she can hit the ground running in grad school.

I agree that the transition was really weak.

My suggestion: bounce Rin off other characters with a conversation about "Is there more to this game than animal abuse?" Rather than getting Kirito + Klein in a comedy trap, having a serious conversation is better.

Well, the biggest thing is, if he knows her, Klein might sincerely extended a helping hand to look after a middleschool girl.

I guess the thing is, it felt kinda like Rin was breaking flags without even realizing it, with Sasha and Agil. Maybe I was just wondering where you were going with her interpersonal relationships.

So maybe that's the question I want to turn around and ask you: do you want Rin to establish a friendship with some other Players from the start? Or do you want her to be a Loner who isn't Playing, but is maybe doing something so wonky to her brainwaves that Kayaba notices?
 

Wavelet365

Well-Known Member
#8
daniel_gudman said:
I liked the gap between Sasha's assumption that the newb was lagging, compared to the reality that Rin was thinking about what the NG means for her research thesis so she can hit the ground running in grad school.

I agree that the transition was really weak.

My suggestion: bounce Rin off other characters with a conversation about "Is there more to this game than animal abuse?" Rather than getting Kirito + Klein in a comedy trap, having a serious conversation is better.

Well, the biggest thing is, if he knows her, Klein might sincerely extended a helping hand to look after a middleschool girl.

I guess the thing is, it felt kinda like Rin was breaking flags without even realizing it, with Sasha and Agil. Maybe I was just wondering where you were going with her interpersonal relationships.

So maybe that's the question I want to turn around and ask you: do you want Rin to establish a friendship with some other Players from the start? Or do you want her to be a Loner who isn't Playing, but is maybe doing something so wonky to her brainwaves that Kayaba notices?
Thanks for the advice on the transition. I suppose that I could have Kirito and Klein meet Rin there, as they would be leaving the Starting City around that time. I guess Agil could also take that role, although that might be a bit less natural.

As for raising flags, with Sasha, that was entirely intentional. Agil was more coincidental (in fact, originally, I had Kibaou there, but he annoyed Rin so much that she ended up going to jail, which I didn't want).

For anyone who's reading this, major spoilers for the first third or so of the story follow, so, if you don't want to be spoiled, don't read any further.

As for Rin, character development-wise, I need her to get attached to people in the game. Sasha is essentially how she gets started in that direction, as she has already tripped the Help out the Poor Children quest flag by getting added to Sasha's friends list, and while on that quest, she's probably going to accidentally trip over the Silica Wants to Fight flag, putting herself in a sort of mentor/big sister role which she will at once really enjoy and feel a bit uncomfortable about. Then she'll probably trigger Liz has found her Courage by staying near the Starting City long enough, as well as getting roped into MMO Today by Thinker (who's a natural choice to help out Sasha when she runs into trouble finding money to take care of her kids).

Essentially, I want Rin caught between what she thinks she should do as a solitary and ruthlessly pragmatic magus (personally escape the game and leave everyone else behind, preferably using her magecraft, after extensive, solitary research towards that distant goal) and the growing bonds she's developing with the other people inside the game (which make her reluctant to abandon them). This will come to a head when she gets into telepathic contact with Waver in a couple of months, and he pretty much says that he has a way to get her (but just her) out with a 75% chance of success or so. She's going to send him away to better the odds (convincing herself that her decision is just her self-preservation instincts talking) but when he shows up again a couple of months later with 95-98% chance of success, she'll have to grapple with the fact that her goal has changed from escaping SAO alone to escaping SAO along with her friends.

Essentially, in this story's first arc, I want Rin to move from consciously wanting to use her magecraft and other talents to help herself towards consciously wanting to use her magecraft and other talents to help other people. That's always been part of her character, deep down, but she tends to bury it under her magus mask. This arc should roughly correspond to the first 26-28 floors of Aincrad, with Waver popping by with his 95-98% rescue plan after Silica gets utterly traumatized in the 25th floor boss battle disaster and the KoB emerges, bringing hope back to the player base.

Arc 2 will essentially be where, after consciously acknowledging that she wants to use her magecraft to help other players, Rin starts seeing just what she can do with her magecraft in order to help other people.

I actually hadn't planned on Kayaba figuring anything out until Arc 3, when Rin gets stuck dealing with the consequences of her choices and having to make some hard decisions/take some dangerous risks, but maybe I should move that forward. I guess the question is whether having Kayaba not notice her until her in-game actions give him reason to look into her would be SoD-breaking. If he looks at her brain waves while she's performing magecraft, he'll obviously know something's up, so I guess it would be convenient for me if he doesn't look. Of course he probably has one of Cardinal's sub-processes handling something like that, which would likely flag anything really abnormal. Hm. Maybe I could have him realize something was up with her brain activity, but, as it didn't seem to be affecting his game, he chooses to watch her and try to figure out what she's doing, until it becomes clear that she's breaking his rules (even if he can't quite figure out how, or maybe he does figure out how?).
 

Wavelet365

Well-Known Member
#9
This is the rewritten version of Chapter One. It is too long 1 post, so it's been split into two parts. If you've read the previous Chapter One, it is identical up to when Rin leaves the Starting City, so you can skip to that point in the story.

Chapter One

Professor Velvet had called it a device whose capabilities might nearly pass for sorcery. Some of the promotional materials he had sent her called it a miracle of modern technology. If her new supervisor was correct, it might be the key to unravelling both how magic degraded to mere magecraft and how one might create new magecraft to manipulate the human soul. If he was right, then studying it was the opportunity of a lifetime.

It looked like a motorcycle helmet.

Holding her brand new Nerve Gear up above her head, as she lay atop the beige sheets of the canopy bed in her room, Rin turned the dark blue helmet back and forth, as if just what was so special about the device might reveal itself if she looked at it from the right angle. Unable to see anything particularly remarkable about the device, the fifteen year-old magus spared a look at her alarm clock: 12:56 PM.

The game would begin in less than 4 minutes. Then she supposed that she would see if this Sword Art Online was really as impressive as Professor Velvet had claimed. In the end, of course, it did not really matter. Regardless of the results of Professor Velvet's research, her assistance would guarantee her a fully funded position as a student at the Clock Tower once she finished high school, as well as the highly-regarded professor's sponsorship. Even so, it would be nice if the two of them could make a ground-breaking discovery or two before she even began at the Clock Tower. Japan was considered something of a backwater among magi, so it would be useful to have a couple of results to her name which proved her worth before she arrived at the world's foremost magical research institute. It would also make her feel better about all the time she had spent preparing to play this game over the past two weeks.

Buying an internet had just been the first step. Rin had been well aware that she was not exactly the most expert person in the world when it came to using advanced technology, so she had given herself plenty of time to figure out how to set up her Nerve Gear. The instructions had been fairly complicated. It was not that they were excessively long, but that they had contained a fair amount of sophisticated, technical jargon, which had taken her a few days in her middle school's library to decipher.

Plug the Nerve Gear into your router. In order to avoid lag, ensure that you are using a high speed internet connection. Then insert the game cartridge into the slot in your Nerve Gear. Lay down in a comfortable position, and place the Nerve Gear on your head. At this point, begin the game by saying the words “Link Start.”

It had taken a week, but in the end, Rin had managed to have the internet installed inside a satellite dish outside her house, which apparently connected to a small, grey box inside her bedroom. This box, which communicated with the satellite somehow, was the router she supposedly needed. She had also solved the mystery of the game cartridge in that time. The back of her Nerve Gear contained a small, concealed compartment in which the copy of Sword Art Online she had procured (through the simple expedient of hypnotizing a store clerk the day before it was released) could be placed.

That had left her one final week in which to familiarize herself with the general principles of quantum brain dynamics (the general theory upon which Kayaba Akihiko had based his invention) to study some materials Professor Velvet had provided on past attempts to replicate the Heaven's Feel, and to thoroughly understand a variety of esoteric mysteries which had been used in the past in order to indirectly study the interaction between the soul and magecraft. It wasn't quite what she would consider a light workload, but, compared to the week she spent desperately trying to understand how to set up her Nerve Gear, it had almost been like a vacation.

Unfortunately, Rin reflected, taking one final glance at her alarm clock – 12:59 PM – her vacation had eventually come to an end.

She was already lying down, and the fluffy, white pillow her head rested on was fairly comfortable. Untying the black ribbons which normally held her hair in twin tails was the work of another minute. Then, after shaking her long, black, wavy hair out, the fifteen year-old magus placed her Nerve Gear on her head. Even with her hair down, the helmet was a bit uncomfortable, but, compared to the familiar pain of her magic circuits (to say nothing of her crest) it was nothing.

White letters appeared on the black-tinted visor which now covered the top half of her face.

If this is your first time using this Nerve Gear, you will need to perform a few simple exercises in order to calibrate your device. Begin calibration?

Hm. This was a bit like her phone, except it would usually add something like, “For yes, press 1, and for no, press 2.” However, there didn't seem to be any buttons she could press.

“Yes,” Rin uncertainly replied out loud, not sure if the Nerve Gear could actually hear her, but also having run out of other ideas. Her eyes widened slightly when the words lighting up her visor changed in response to her reply.

Touch your chin with your left hand.

The instruction was strange, but not too difficult to carry out.

Remove your left hand from your chin, and touch your right knee with your right hand.

The instructions continued on in this vein for about ten minutes, directing Rin to touch herself all over her body (she had blushed the first time she considered her actions in those words, before dismissing the inappropriate thought). While she had initially been confused by the procedure, its purpose had been clear once she thought about it for a moment. The Nerve Gear worked by intercepting signals to and from the user's brain, which would normally be sent to, or received from, one's limbs. It was unsurprising that it would need to be calibrated by having her identify the nerves connecting to various parts of her body through motion.

Idly, as she completed the last of the device's instructions – Raise your right leg into the air, and then roll your right ankle in circles counterclockwise – she wondered what would happen if she purposely performed the instructions incorrectly. Would the device confuse her legs and arms, for example? Was this device intelligent enough to detect such a deception? It might be worth investigating that idea later.

The calibration of her Nerve Gear finally completed, Rin settled herself into a comfortable position atop her bed again and took a deep breath.

“Link Start,” she calmly declared.

In an instant, the world she had watched from behind her Nerve Gear's black-tinted visor vanished, replaced by a white void. Her senses of taste, touch, hearing and smell were gone. Even the irritating feeling of the Nerve Gear awkwardly plastering her hair to her skull was absent. Then pillars of grey, red, purple, green, blue – too many colours to keep track of – shot past her. Five blue and purple gears then rapidly appeared before her eyes in sequence, labelled in English with touch, sight, hearing, taste and smell, respectively.

Abruptly, her senses returned, or at least they seemed to return. Of course, in truth, she knew that it was just the Nerve Gear overriding her true senses, replacing them with false input provided by the artificial world it created. Everything she was experiencing now was merely an illusion, but an illusion so true to life that the unobservant might confuse it with reality.

A prompt for her to select a language appeared, and she selected Japanese. Then a second prompt for an account number and password popped up. These had been provided with her copy of Sword Art Online, and she had memorized them. For a moment, she was not sure how to enter the information, but then an illusionary keyboard appeared at her fingertips, and she began to slowly type in the required information. All that appeared as she typed in the boxes provided were asterisks, but, for whatever reason (maybe the machine was broken?) this caused no problems, the machine easily accepting the input she provided.

Then more prompts began to appear.

Create New Character:

Yes

Name:

Tohsaka Rin

Gender:

Female

A more complicated screen appeared next, containing a vast array of options which she could tweak in order to alter the appearance of a rather generic looking, brown-haired woman, who floated before her eyes. The word Appearance hung in the air above the woman's head. So, what exactly was the point of this? Well, she was creating a character, so maybe the woman was supposed to be what she would look like inside the illusion. Yes. That seemed likely. The young magus sighed, as she took in the hundreds of options the game provided, from simple choices like height and hair colour, to completely unnecessary options like thumb nail thickness. This looked like it might take a while.

In the end, after nearly fifteen minutes of fiddling with the options available, Rin managed to create an illusionary body which vaguely resembled her own. She was still pretty sure that the body's legs were a bit too short, and her upper body wasn't quite proportioned correctly, but at least the hair and eye colour were right.

Rin sighed again, already a bit tired of this supposedly fun game, and pressed the Confirm Appearance prompt suspended in mid-air. Then, between one blink and the next, the words Welcome to Sword Art Online! appeared before her eyes in bold, black letters. Again, reality seemed to distort, as a blue vortex swallowed her. Her senses faded to nothing once more, as the world disappeared in a flash of white light. Then she was abruptly elsewhere.

Slowly, her senses began to return. Her limbs felt just slightly off, and were tingling as if they had fallen asleep. It was dark, but she could hear beeps and a rising clamour of excited voices. No. It wasn't dark; her eyes were closed.

Ignoring her sense of disorientation, Rin forced her eyes open. Her surroundings were bright and blurry. She could make out white cobblestones, a wall some distance ahead of her, and other people – many other people. Hoping to banish her sense of disorientation, Rin tried to push some od through her magic circuits and felt nothing at all. No od, no prana: there was not even the pain that always came with activating her magic circuits. Nothing at all. What?

Magic circuits were a part of a magus' soul. The pseudonerves in her body were mere reflections of the true circuits which dwelt within a nigh untouchable astral plane. To directly manipulate the soul: that was part of the Heaven's Feel. Suddenly, her mind was nearly as disoriented as her body.

She had read the theory, of course. Kayaba Akihito had posited that human consciousness – what a magus might call the soul, or at least its physical reflection – could be directly read as data from the microtubules of a human's nerves by a computer. With a sufficiently detailed scan, full reproduction of human consciousness might be possible. A year ago, that would have been what a magus would call true magic. But she hadn't actually believed it, or at least believed the Nerve Gear was capable of such a scan. In fact, it shouldn't have been capable of anything like that. It was only supposed to redirect inputs and outputs from the brain.

Her eyes narrowing in thought, Rin began considering the problem before her more carefully. In truth, there was no evidence that her magic circuits were not operational. It was, in fact, at least as plausible that she was simply unable to feel their operation due to the Nerve Gear overriding her senses. She would need to devise an experiment to test that hypothesis, but it would probably require a watcher on the outside of this game. Perhaps, a familiar would work.

Professor Velvet had only instructed her to spend the next few days getting acquainted with virtual reality, and to make some basic observations. They would begin the experiments he was really interested in next weekend. However, surely he would understand that-

“Um. Hello.”

There was a tanned hand waving in front of her face.

While she had been lost in thought, Rin's vision had cleared. Thus, she had no trouble at all making out the woman waving a hand in front of her face, wearing a mildly concerned expression.

Half a head taller than Rin, blond-haired and busty, the woman looked like some sort of amazon queen right out of a legend. Rather, she would have looked like an amazon queen if she carried herself with a bit more self-confidence.

“Are you okay? You're not lagging, are you?”

“Um, what?” Rin replied, jerking back a bit in response to the woman's sudden appearance. “I-What?”

“Oh. You're alright then. That's good. I got a bit worried when I noticed that you'd been standing still, staring straight ahead with that scary expression, for nearly five minutes.”

A sheepish expression crossed the older woman's face.

“I hope I didn't disturb you.”

She actually had disturbed Rin, but, at the same time, had she really just spent five minutes staring at nothing like some kind of space case? She didn't even want to think about what her father would have had to say about that if he'd seen her.

Rin, you should always strive to act in a reserved and elegant manner. That is the way of the Tohsaka family.

Argh! Hadn't she just decided that she didn't want to think about it. Nonetheless, it was certainly the truth. In public, a Tohsaka should be seen as reserved and elegant: not as an airhead who idly stands around staring at nothing. Wait. She was doing it again, wasn't she?

Taking a calming breath through her nose, Rin turned her most charming smile on the woman who had accosted her.

“Oh, I'm very sorry for causing you concern, Miss. I was simply a bit disoriented by all this,” Rin affirmed, gesturing towards the vista before her eyes. “I've never really seen anything like it before.”

That, at least, was true. In fact, the more time Rin spent observing her surroundings, the more amazed she found herself with this Nerve Gear technology. It was one thing to read about it, but entirely another to experience the world of Sword Art Online first hand.

The courtyard where she had appeared was filled with hundreds of people, and seemed to be only a small part of a far larger city. Even from the little she could see, in scale, at least, it was closer to a reality marble – an entire world reforged according to a magus' inner world – than any illusion spell she had ever encountered.

Of course, in other respects, it fell short of that lofty height of magecraft. In particular, while vast, it was still an illusion, rather than an entirely new world cut off from normal reality. Even so, aside from her difficulties with her magic circuits, the verisimilitude really was amazing. There were a few other problems: a lack of detail in some places, particularly when she didn't focus on them, gravity that didn't quite push down on all the parts of her body the way she remembered, and some aches and pains she had grown used to over the years were missing. However, when she didn't concentrate on her surroundings, she could almost believe that she was in the real world.

“It really is something,” the blonde facing her replied. “I really just bought this game in order to take a bit of a break from university. It's been in the news, of course, and all the reviewers said it was spectacular, but, even so, I wasn't expecting anything like this.”

A gentle breeze floating through the courtyard ruffled the hair of both young women, carrying the scent of freshly baked bread.

“Anyway, it was nice meeting you,” the blonde declared, offering a polite bow. “I'm Sasha.”

“I'm pleased to meet you as well, Sasha,” Rin replied, not sure what to make of the woman's lack of a family name. “My name is Tohsaka Rin.”

The blonde frowned.

“Is that your name IRL?”

This time it was Rin's name to frown? IRL? Was that some kind of acronym?

Seeming to catch the confusion on Rin's face, the woman quickly clarified.

“I mean in real life. Is that your name in real life?”

Rin nodded, but found herself feeling uncertain. Wasn't using your own name natural?

“Yes. Is that a problem, Sasha?”

“Um, not exactly,” she replied, while her tone implied the exact opposite. “It's just that, usually, players don't use their full names in MMORPGs. Most players try to separate their real and virtual lives, so, it's a bit odd.” Again, her tone implied that it was more than a bit odd.

Rin did not exactly plan on socializing very much in this game, but she would also prefer it if her name did not make her stick out like a sore thumb every time she uttered it. Perhaps, in the future, she could just introduce herself as Rin.

“Tohsaka, I hope I don't offend you by asking this, but is this your first MMORPG?”

Rin thought she might have actually heard that acronym before (maybe on the promotional materials Professor Velvet had sent her?) but, while she did not want to seem ignorant, she had absolutely no idea what it meant. Oh, well. She could always bluff.

“Ah, yes,” she replied, feigning a touch of shyness. “It's a bit embarrassing, so...”

“Oh, no,” the older woman hastily replied. “You shouldn't feel embarrassed. After all, everyone's a newb at some point.”

Nube? That didn't exactly sound very complimentary. Her right eyebrow started to twitch before Rin forced it to still. Sasha seemed nice enough, so it probably wasn't anything too terrible.

“Of course,” Sasha continued, “except for the beta testers, I guess we're all sort of newbs. SAO is the first VRMMORPG after all.”

Once more, Rin had the uncomfortable feeling that the person with whom she was conversing was speaking an entirely different language.

“So, would you like to party up?” the friendly woman asked Rin. “I'm not an expert, but I don't mind helping you get started, if you're not too busy.”

Two impulses warred within Rin. On the one hand, outright rejecting an earnest offer of help would be rude, particularly when it was possible that she could learn a couple of useful things from Sasha. Professor Velvet had asked her to familiarize herself with the game, after all. On the other hand, she found the idea of accepting charity a bit grating. This was just a game, after all. Surely, it couldn't be too difficult.

“Oh, that's not necessary, Sasha,” she replied in a friendly tone. “I really appreciate the offer, but I think I'd prefer to figure this game out for myself.”

“Oh,” Sasha replied, looking a bit discouraged. “I see. Well, at least add me to your friends list. There usually aren't that many women playing MMOs, so it might be nice to party up a bit later.”

Wasn't that a bit quick? The two of them had only exchanged a handful of sentences. Rin would hardly be inclined to call them friends; really, they were barely even acquaintances. Even so, refusing this offer as well would be far too rude, and it was just some list. There was only one problem.

“I'd be happy to, Sasha,” she replied, smiling brightly. “I'm... just not quite sure how-”

“Oh, I can show you,” the older woman interrupted her. “Well, probably, anyway. I'm sure it won't be too hard to find in the menu.”

Then the blonde pressed her right index and middle fingers together, raised them up into the air, and then pulled them downwards, as if she was unzipping a jacket. Five, light blue circles appeared in the air, forming a vertical line along the path her fingers had just traced.

After a moment's thought, Sasha pressed the second circle from the top, replacing the five circles which had hung in the air between her and Rin with three white rectangles, which contained the words Party, Friends and Guild, respectively. The blonde clicked on Friends, but then she frowned, as she looked at what appeared next.

“No,” she mumbled to herself. “This is just the friends list. Maybe it's under communications.”

Faster than Rin could really follow, Sasha then proceeded to retrace her steps back to the main menu, before pressing the third circle from the top, and then one of the white boxes which popped up after the circles had vanished again.

What was she doing? Some sort of fake magic created for the game? If that was the case, then...

Rin raised her own right hand and aped Sasha's motion, summoning a series of circles of her very own. Each circle had a picture drawn on it in black: from top to bottom, a head, two heads, two chat boxes, like you might see in a manga, a balloon and a gear. Were the pictures supposed to mean something?

Rin's musings were interrupted by the appearance of a larger, white rectangle right in front of her face, accompanied by the same ping sound she had been frequently hearing since she materialized inside the world of Sword Art Online.

Befriend

Sasha wants to add you to her friends list.

Yes No

“Eh?” Rin spoke, feeling a bit startled by the pop-up's sudden appearance, before regaining her composure and selecting Yes.

“Okay,” Sasha responded, offering her a smile. “Well, if you ever want to party up, just send me a PM, or even if you just need a bit of help.”

Rin managed to keep her smile from betraying any confusion, as Sasha walked away from her. What the heck was a PM? Oh, well. It probably wasn't that important.

The plaza where she had arrived was filled with people, all wearing essentially the same outfit. Well, in truth, the outfits were coloured differently – Rin wore a long-sleeved, red shirt, beneath a tawny chest plate, and a black skirt, while Sasha's shirt and skirt had both been blue, but, otherwise, except for the fact that the men wore long pants, rather than skirts, they were all dressed identically.

The plaza itself was a bit more remarkable: a vast, cobblestone courtyard encircled by marble columns. Beyond the courtyard, a giant, black-domed palace loomed over top of the columns on one side of the courtyard, its ebony spires rising high into the sky. Meanwhile, in the other direction, a wide road stretched out far into distance towards tall stone walls, which she could scarcely make out from so far away. More of the steadily appearing players than not seemed to be leaving the courtyard by that road, so, not having any other particular plans, Rin followed the crowd.

Unfortunately, it turned out that trying to follow the crowd leaving the plaza could only take Rin so far. Almost immediately, once they had left the starting plaza, the crowd began to disperse, less than a fifth of them continuing along the large road leading towards the city gate, while the rest scampered down a dozen different side streets and alleys.

A beautiful park lay a few hundred metres ahead, along the road, lush green trees and a sandy beach surrounding a clear blue lagoon. Houses – some empty – while others were clearly occupied, lined the street, and, when she glanced down a side street to her right, Rin caught sight of a hefty man standing behind a stall, yelling something about the finest iron in all of Aincrad.

Everywhere she looked, people like her were moving purposefully in one direction or the other. Even the few groups who were just loitering around the plaza's entrance were clearly acquainting themselves with one another, or reacquainting themselves with people they already knew. Of course, she wasn't the only one who looked a bit lost in all the commotion. A brown-haired girl, who looked about her age, seemed to be having trouble finding the side street she was looking for, as she peered down one street after another. A tall, muscular guy with an afro was just staring blankly at the city surrounding them, as if he couldn't believe that it was actually real. Rin wasn't the only one, but she definitely felt like she was in the minority.

Just what was a person supposed to do in Sword Art Online?

Well, the name of the game was Sword Art Online, so maybe, to start with, she should get a sword. Of course, money might be an issue, as, when she had checked her pockets, she had not found any currency, but maybe there was somewhere to pick up a sword for free.

Hm. A little further down the city's main street, she could see a number of people gathering in front of a wooden sign displaying two crossed swords. Beneath the sign, an older man seemed to have set up some sort of stall where he was giving people swords. Rin couldn't see any money changing hands, so maybe that was what she was looking for. The line-up to reach the stall was long, but, if every player in the game needed to pick up a sword, then that was no surprise.

Getting into line behind a massive, bald, black man, Rin tried to get the man's attention.

“Um, excuse me,” she began, waiting for the man to acknowledge that he had heard her. “Excuse me,” she repeated a bit more insistently.

“Oh,” the man finally replied, turning to face her. “Yeah. What is it?”

Staring up into the man's chocolate brown eyes, it was hard to ignore the fact that he was more than a head taller than her, and looked as if he might be twice Rin's weight. She wasn't exactly afraid of him, as the magus suspected that she could still put him flat on his back, or crush his bones, with the Chinese martial arts she had been learning for as long as she could remember. However, at the same time, size was a bit more intimidating when she lacked the ability to reinforce her body to a level which would make an Olympic athlete green with envy.

“I'm sorry to bother you, but would you mind telling me if this is the line to get a sword.”

The man smirked a bit.

“What? You couldn't tell from the sign?”

He jerked his thumb towards the sign behind his back.

“No. It's just that I don't have any money, so-”

“Huh?”

His voice had lost its teasing tone.

“You managed to lose all your money already? It hasn't even been an hour since the game started!”

“Lose? No. I didn't lose anything. I just didn't start with any money!”

Rin was beginning to get a bit agitated, while the man she was facing was wearing a sceptical expression.

“Really? Is it a bug? Let me see your inventory.”

“Inventory? What?”

The man seemed confused with her reply for a second before his eyes widened in sudden comprehension.

“Ah, I get it,” he said, nodding to himself. “So, why do you think you don't have any money?”

“What?” Rin asked. “Isn't it obvious? I checked my pockets, and-”

The man held up a hand to stop her there.

“Right. I think you've misunderstood something. This game might be a VRMMO, but they still seem to have kept some things the same as in a regular MMORPG. So, if you just open up your inventory...”

The man trailed off, as he swept his fingers downwards, summoning the five circles, which everyone in this illusion seemed able to call forth. Then he touched the top circle.

“See. In order to see how much money you have, you need to look at your items. I've got 1000 col, which is the same amount everyone starts with. Now, you try.”

The man suddenly to notice that the line had moved on quite a ways, while he had been correcting Rin's misconception.

“Ah, crap. Just a sec.”

Jogging a dozen steps forward, the black man caught up with the line, and then turned back to Rin, who had followed him.

“Okay. Now, try it.”

There was nothing complicated about the procedure, so, with a little thought, Rin copied the man's motions, summoning an item screen of her own. She nodded, as she confirmed that she had the correct amount of money as well. She was getting tired of being lectured and corrected all the time, but she had to admit that both this man and Sasha had helped her out a fair bit.

“Good,” the man replied with a grin. “I don't know what sort of gear 1000 col will buy, but hopefully it won't suck too much. By the way, I'm Agil.”

“Rin,” she answered his name with her own, nodding to the older man. “Thank you for your help.”

The man waved her thanks off.

“No problem. It's not like I had much else to do while we were standing in this line. Speaking of which,” Agil continued, “it looks like we're finally at the front.”

Then, turning towards the merchant they had been waiting for, Agil spent a few seconds looking through a list of, she suspected, weapons, before buying a large axe and a pair of armoured boots. Offering her a thumbs up, as she approached the merchant after him, the black man walked towards a group of armed men, who looked as if they had been waiting for him.

“Welcome to Baldwin's Blades and Armour Shop,” the old, balding man said from behind his wooden stall. “And what'll you be needing today, lass?”

Rin's eyes narrowed. She wasn't completely sure, but...

“So, have you ever been to Tokyo?” she asked cheerfully.

The man simply blinked, standing in place silently for a long moment.

“Welcome to Baldwin's Blades and Armour Shop,” he repeated. “And what'll you be needing today, lass?”

Rin nodded. From the way he was dressed, the fact that he already had a shop (when the game had started less than an hour ago) and the slightly mechanical way he had spoken, she had guessed that the shop keeper was just part of the illusion, rather than a real person. His range of responses seemed pretty limited, but, even so, provided he didn't talk, the illusion was actually pretty convincing.

“Oy! Hurry up,” someone called out from behind her. “We don't have all day!”

Frowning, Rin resisted the urge to turn and shout at the jerk who had interrupted her thoughts. After all, while he had been fairly rude, she could understand his impatience.

“I'd like to buy a sword,” she answered, hoping that would prompt the merchant to give her some options.

“Then you're in luck. Drexel may be better for shields, and Craster may make this town's best armour, but, if you're lookin' for a blade, no one has a better selection than old Baldwin.”

Of course, as Rin beheld the list of dozens of swords which appeared before her eyes, their prices beside them, she wasn't quite sure if she would call that lucky. Ranging from 50 col to almost 10,000 col, the length of his list of blades was staggering, and, as she couldn't see anything but their prices and names, she had no idea how to compare the merchandise on offer. Considering the fact that he was a salesman and an illusion, on top of that, it seemed unlikely that the stall's owner would be of much help either. So, she decided to go with her instincts.

“I'll take the cheapest one,” she exclaimed boldly, pointing to the short sword she had selected.

A few minutes later, her new purchase in hand, Rin once again found herself at loose ends. She had a sword now, but that didn't help her figure out how to stave off boredom. She had overheard a number of people talking about going outside the city to grind mobs, which sounded pretty weird to Rin, but at least watching them would give her something to do.

Walking through the city gate, Rin sighed. Professor Velvet had suggested that she spend at least four hours familiarizing herself with Sword Art Online before they began working, and she had been hoping to get that all done this afternoon, but she was already getting bored after little more than an hour had passed.

Rin also didn't see any mobs outside the city, except for the odd group of players slaughtering defenceless animals. Even Agil and his companions, who she could faintly make out in the distance, seemed to be hunting the boars, who were peacefully grazing in the grassy fields surrounding the Town of Beginnings. So, the point of this game was what? Animal abuse?

She even tried hunting one of the boars herself, hoping that it might be more fun than it looked. It wasn't. The boar was slower than her illusionary body, and it attacked by charging towards her in a straight line. After nearly a decade of sparring with Kirei – one of the Church's most deadly executors – the animal would have only been a bit less likely to hit her if it stood still and hoped that she tripped over it.

The only challenge was actually killing the beast, as it proved remarkably durable. It probably wasn't helping that she swung her sword like a baseball bat, and struck the boar with the blunt end of her sword as many times as the sharp end, but it was still ridiculous that she had to hit the animal in the head with her sword thirteen times before it finally died, bursting into sparkling blue light.

The fight had also lowered Rin's respect for this illusion's verisimilitude. Rather than being cut open by her sword and bleeding out, all that happened to the boar each time her short sword struck was that her blade traced a bright orange line across its head. Instead of actually simulating injury properly, all this game seemed able to do was decrement an initially green, then yellow, and finally, red bar, which floated above the boar's head.

Rin was aware that she herself had one of those bars. It floated around the top left corner of her vision, no matter how she moved her head, above what she guessed was its numerical representation.

250/250 Lvl 1

Thus, it wasn't surprising when, upon trying to cut her own hand with her sword, rather than bleeding or experiencing any pain, she briefly acquired a thin, orange line of her very own.

248/250 Lvl 1​

Oh, right. Killing the boar had also netted her a reward.

Exp 24
Col 30
Items 2

She supposed this was why so many people were hunting the beasts, but it still seemed like a waste of time to Rin. Why spend an afternoon beating up fake pigs with fake swords, when you could go learn in actual dojo, or go on a vacation and hunt wild animals for real?

Oh, well. At least the scenery was pleasant. Or, at least it was pleasant until she noticed her audience.

Two young men, both of whom looked five or ten years older than her, had apparently been watching her fight with the boar from a little ways away. In another situation, she might have thought them handsome, the taller red-haired man looking a bit like a noble samurai from a historical drama, while the shorter, black-haired figure could have passed for a model. However, considering the fact that they seemed to be a pair of young twenty-somethings who had been intensely staring at a girl who wasn't even quite out of middle school, Rin's first thought about the pair was rather less complementary.

Are they... lolicons?

Then the red-haired man enthusiastically exclaimed, “That was awesome!” and she had to rethink a couple of her assumptions.

“Huh?” she faintly responded, as the refugee from a Sengoku period drama hastily walked towards her.

“I mean, I'd heard that this game had a lot of awesome skills, but what the heck was that? The ninja skill? I mean, that spin kick, and then jumping out of the way, and then you parried it with your bare hands, and...”

“Huh?”

The black-haired guy with the movie star looks walked towards her more casually, but his eyes betrayed a similar interest.

Suddenly a bit embarrassed at the attention, Rin blushed. She wasn't the kind of excessively modest person who wouldn't admit that she had a fair bit of skill at martial arts, but wasn't he praising her a bit too much? And, uh, he was kind of good-looking, if you went for that sort of noble, feudal warrior look.

“Ah, it's, um, just a bit of kenpo. Not anything special, really,” she replied, waving the pair off.

“Kenpo?” the black-haired man enquired with an intense look on his face. “I'd heard rumours that there was a martial arts extra skill in the beta, but I had no idea it was hidden this early in the game.”

He nodded to himself.

“And I guess that would explain why you were wasting so much time with that mob, as well, if you were grinding your skill.”

Rin's right eyebrow twitched. Wasting her time? And what was he doing loitering around out here? It's not like there was anything in this field besides these stupid pigs. Half his words sounded like nonsense, and the other half seemed like an insult.

The man's eyes lost focus and his brow furrowed, as he continued muttering to himself.

“It would have to be in the Starting City and short, so it's probably provided by one of the NPCs, but it wasn't well known in the beta, so it must be obscure. Maybe a hidden puzzle? A simple fetch quest which only triggers if a complex series of flags are raised?”

Rin ran out of patience.

“What are you talking about?”

The dark-haired man started at the interjection, before shaking his head and then refocusing his gaze on her.

“Sorry. I was just trying to figure out where you got a skill like that. Don't worry. I won't pressure you. I want to figure it out for myself. This sort of thing is-”

“I practise for 2 hours every day.”

“What?”

Rin held up 2 fingers in front of the man's face, and spoke haltingly, as if she was talking to a small child.

“2 hours. That's how long I practise every day.”

“Practise? What? I don't-”

Then his eyes widened.

“You mean... you practise kenpo in real life. That was your real life skill?”

What did he think it was? Her fake life skill?

The man seemed to hesitate for a moment before slowly drawing a sword and awkwardly settling into a kendo stance. His eyes narrowed in thought.

“Huh. I guess that sort of fighting might work as well.”

Then he shook his head and put his sword away.

“But something like that will always be inferior to a sword skill, so there's not much point.”

Rin's expression sharpened into a furious, piercing glare at the casual dismissal of her abilities. To his credit, the man immediately noticed her expression, and began doing damage control.

“Ah. I mean, in Sword Art Online. In real life, I'm sure it's a great skill.” He nodded fervently. “Really great. Um. Ehem. It's just that, in this world, there are sword skills.”

He took out his sword again, and turned towards his red-haired companion.

“Klein, do you mind if I demonstrate here? I'll explain, so following along shouldn't be too hard.”

“What?” Rin cut in. “Demonstrate-”

“No problem, Kirito. I mean, you're the one doing me a favour, so complaining at adding another beginner would be kind of...”

He trailed off, but the implication was clear.

Kirito nodded.

“Alright,” he began, a faint smile ghosting across his lips. “I'll demonstrate on that frenzy boar.”

Kirito gestured towards a boar that was peacefully grazing five or ten metres away.

“This is the rage spike skill,” he began, as his eyes sharpened, focusing. “It's a skill which only does weak damage, but provides nearly instantaneous movement over short distances. To perform it, I need to first equip the skill.” The man's index and middle fingers swept downwards, summoning the five circles, and then selecting the top circle, the bottom white rectangle on the next selection, and something from the middle of a very long series of selections after that. “Then I need to keep my body low,” he bent his knees and leaned forward, “and keep my sword parallel to my right leg, while pointing it towards an enemy.”

Then he demonstrated, beginning a sprint towards the boar, which, two steps into the run, transformed itself into a blur, his sword glowing blue as it pierced through the boar he had targeted. The animal was thrown back, squealing, as its health dropped into the yellow zone, while, for a single second, Kirito seemed frozen in place. However, before the beast could recover, he was suddenly in motion again, taking two steps forward to meet the boar, before his sword, glowing red this time, cut a vertical line through the beast, reducing its health to 0. It had barely exploded into blue light when Kirito banished the white rectangle listing his rewards and turned back towards them.

The tension leaching out of his body, Kirito casually continued his lecture.

“The second skill was vertical. It's just a single sword swing, but it's much faster and deals much more damage than a swing without using the skill. The key is the pre-motion. Once the system recognizes that you're making the correct initial motion, your weapon will begin to glow. Then, provided your weapon's targeted correctly, all you need to do is let the system take over, and it will automatically complete the sword skill with a speed and strength which would normally be impossible.”

Rin was frowning thoughtfully, her interest in Kirito's display having overcome her brief anger.

“So, when you equip a skill, and then make this pre-motion,” Rin began, placing the word in finger quotes, “you're essentially applying to the system of this game, which indicates that it has accepted your application by causing your sword to glow. Then the system will take over for you, creating a miracle called a sword skill.”

Kirito's face twisted into a rather puzzled expression of his own.

“That's kind of an odd way to put it, but, yeah. That's about right.”

Rin simply nodded, walking towards a nearby tree, while Klein and Kirito looked on.

Equipping rage spike was the work of a few minutes, and, annoyingly, she needed Kirito's help twice in order to properly manipulate her summoned circles (which he called her menu). Then, leaning down with her knees bent and sword pointed at the tree, Rin tried to copy the pre-motion she had just watched Kirito perform, but her blade insistently refused to glow. After a few moments of waiting she realized what she was missing, and carefully angled her sword so that it was parallel to her right leg.

Blue flames seemed to lick at her short sword, as she took off at a run. Then something alien tried to flow into her mind, and Rin instinctively slammed the door into her mind closed, sealing it with every trick she knew, which didn't require any prana. Her legs kept moving, and her sword kept glowing, but, even as she stabbed her sword into the tree in front of her, seemingly to no effect, Rin knew that she had failed to perform the skill.

“Eh? What happened?” Klein asked, seeming more than a bit confused. “I thought you had it.”

Kirito just shook his head with a smile.

“You resisted the system assist, didn't you. A lot of players have that problem at the start, as it feels unnatural letting the Cardinal system control your movements, but you'll need to get over it if you want to perform sword skills. Klein, why don't you try?”

“Eh? Uh, okay. Just let me find a good mob, and, uh, there we go.”

As the red-haired swordsman began settling into a stance of his own, Rin walked back over to Kirito, putting her own sword away.

“You're really comfortable with something like that?” she asked, a bit uncertain. “Letting this system freely access your mind?”

Kirito shrugged.

“I was a bit wary at the beginning, but it's not that different from putting on the Nerve Gear in the first place. Even more than that, I don't think the government would allow Argus to produce a system which could harm a person's brain, and even if it did, Argus would face lawsuits that would bankrupt it ten times over if it caused any damage.”

“So,” he finished with a half-grin, “I guess I decided to trust them, and it hasn't caused me any problems so far.”

Rin found it difficult to be so blase about the sanctity of her own mind, but, seeing no point in arguing with Kirito, she decided to ask about something else instead.

“When you say it hasn't caused you any problems, so far, how long are you talking about? Didn't the game only begin a couple of hours ago?”

“Oh. Well, I was lucky enough to get selected for the beta test, so I've already been playing for 2 months.”

Rin nodded.

“I see.”

She had no idea what someone would do in this place for 2 months (she was struggling to occupy herself for a few hours) but that would explain why Kirito seemed so experienced, even if she wasn't quite sure what a beta test actually involved.

Wincing, as she watched Klein collapse to the ground, the boar he had been attacking having bashed its head into his crotch, Rin turned her thoughts towards the game's sword skills. They weren't thaumaturgy. The application process was a physical motion, rather than an aria, there was no prana, and the actualization had a mental component which mildly disturbed her. However, it was similar enough in form that it was easy for her to understand the basic principles of the system.

Her main problem was the details. The menu spell, or whatever it was... even it could be activated with a single action, there was hidden complexity there. It wasn't like actualizing a single miracle, but more like a list of miracles, from which one could select a miracle at leisure. Understanding it was exactly the sort of thing Professor Velvet had probably wanted her to do, when he told her to familiarize herself with the game, and Kirito was a person who had been utilizing his own menu for months. It stung her pride, but...

“Kirito,” she called out to the dark-haired man, interrupting him, as he teased Klein about the redhead's excessive reaction to the painless strike he had received from the boar he had been fighting.

“Hm?” Kirito replied, casually cocking his head in her direction.

It wasn't like she needed his help. This was just the most efficient way to use her time. After all, she wasn't in this game for fun. The faster she collected the information she needed, the faster she could get back to the real world, where important responsibilities awaited her.

“Would-Would you mind helping me learn how to use the menu? I mean, I could definitely do it on my own, but-”

“Sure,” he interrupted her with a smile. “No problem. Just let me finish helping Klein first.”

Annoyed to realize that her illusionary face could actually blush, Rin took a deep breath, forcing herself to calm down. Getting him to help her had been less trying than she'd anticipated. Kirito and Klein: they were both kind people, weren't they?


* * *​


A few hours later, as the sky turned red and the sun set, Rin, Kirito and Klein overlooked the first floor of Aincrad from atop a lookout, watching as a tremendous waterfall spilled into a vast, clear lake, forming a rainbow. Of the three, one was content, a second was awed by the world around him, and the last of the trio was sulking.

“Ah, Rin. I'll cry if you keep making a face like that. Seriously, it was just a sword. Enjoy the view.”

However, Rin refused to be cheered up, her expression darkening at Klein's words.

Kirito shrugged his shoulders, a teasing expression on his face.

“Well, when a person buys the cheapest sword in Aincrad, and then refuses to use sword skills for hours, meaning that she takes nearly ten times as many strikes to kill a mob as a normal player, then it shouldn't be too surprising when her sword shatters into polygons in the middle of a fight.”

Rin's eyes were like daggers, stabbing into Kirito without mercy, but Kirito was the kind of person who would happily take that kind of minor damage in return for the opportunity to score the last attack.

“Of course,” he continued, stroking his chin, “it is a bit more surprising when she loses her balance and gets knocked into a pond a second later, and I guess even I'd forgotten that was the pond where you were supposed to go to fetch all those leeches for that lady in Horunka..”

Sopping wet, and still not sure that she'd managed to pull off every one of the dozens of illusionary leeches which had attached themselves to pretty well every part of her body, Tohsaka Rin took a deep, calming breath and smiled.

“Ah, Kirito,” she piped up in a suspiciously cheerful tone of voice. “I think you're forgetting something. Who was it again who kept bothering me to use sword skills when I had been fine all day? And what happened the first time I used one, again?”

“Hey, Rin, you can't blame Kirito for that. Even if sword skills decrease your durability twice as fast, it's not like-”

Rin's head slowly turned towards Klein, allowing him to catch sight of the terrifying, closed-eyed smile on her face.

“Oh. Did you say something, Klein?”

Eyes wide, Klein hastily shook his head.

“Uh, no mam.”

“That's what I thought.”

By this time Kirito had also noticed Rin's expression. It was completely different from her previous glares, like the difference between a solid horizontal cutting you in two and an unblockable 12 hit combo, which did poison damage and caused a paralysing debuff with every strike.

“I-uh-I mean-Rin...”

Satisfied that the person teasing her had learned his lesson, Rin cheerfully continued to watch Kirito squirm for a few more moments before letting him off the hook, relaxing her expression with a loud exhale. Then she stood up and tried to squeeze a bit more water out of her skirt. According to Kirito, as soon as she changed her clothes, the water would automatically disappear, but there was no way in Hell she was doing that in front of two grown men.

Oh, well. It was already past 5PM, so she could leave now and be done with her job until Wednesday. She actually thought that she might miss Kirito and Klein a bit while she was gone – somehow, the pair had managed to grow on her – but she couldn't allow that sort of attachment to interfere with her training as a magus. At the end of the day, she was only in this game in order to get her scholarship to the Clock Tower. Even so, she couldn't resist the opportunity to get Kirito back for his teasing before she left.

“So, as it was all your fault, Kirito, I'll be expecting you to pay me back, and don't think I'll accept something like a replacement sword. Even offering yourself as my personal slave might not be enough to make up for the indelible trauma your actions have inflicted upon an innocent, young girl.”

“Sl-Slave?” Kirito replied, gawping at her.

She nodded.

“Oho! So, you're into that sort of thing then, Rin? Heheh. It sounds like-”

“Klein,” Rin cut in ruthlessly. “Were you about to say something to an underage girl, which could get you arrested?”

“I... Uh...Heh...”

“Anyway, Kirito, we can discuss the details later. I need to leave now, and won't be back on for a few days, so it'll have to wait until then.”

Rin wasn't actually in the market for a slave, of course, but watching Kirito's reaction had been hilarious. It would be even funnier to watch how he reacted the next time he saw her. Would he run away and hide like a mouse, which had sighted a cat? She couldn't wait.

“Ah. You too, Rin?” Klein responded. “My pizza'll be arriving in 5 minutes, so I guess we'll be leaving you all alone then, Kirito. Well, I'll be back online in a half hour or so, but you know what I mean. Anyway, before we go, I want to add you two to my friends list. Okay?”

“Ah. That thing again,” Rin replied. “It's fine with me.”

Kirito just nodded.

“Great.”

The red-haired samurai wannabe manipulated his menu for a few seconds, and then, an instant later, a message popped up in front of Rin's face.

Befriend

Klein wants to add you to his friends list.

Yes No

Befriend. She daintily pressed her index finger to the word Yes. Two friends – four if you counted Kirito and Agil – in only 4 hours: that was more friends than she had in the real world. It was strange.

Then, unexpectedly, another message appeared.

Befriend

Kirito wants to add you to his friends list.

Yes No

Her gaze turned towards the black-haired man, who was smiling at her encouragingly.

“I'm online a lot, so, if you ever want to go hunting again, just send me a message.”

“I...” she began uncertainly, before trailing off, not sure what she wanted to say. Then she pressed Yes. That was answer enough, wasn't it?

In nearly three years of attending her middle school, Rin had only shown a handful of people as much of herself as Kirito and Klein had seen this afternoon. She was a class representative, and known throughout the school, but even Sasha and Agil, who she had barely known for 10 minutes, had probably seen more of her true personality than most of the students in her class. Was it that this was a false world, where anyone might wear a false face? Was that why she felt free to reveal a bit more of herself? Or was it that she would never need to see these people again, if she so chose? She couldn't say.

Of course, none of them (in either world) had ever seen the real Tohsaka Rin: the ruthless and pragmatic magus who would sacrifice anything – even her own life – in order to be a worthy successor to the Tohsaka family. But, still...

“Huh? There's no log out button.”

What?

“Look closer,” Kirito replied to Klein.

“No. It's not there.”
 

Wavelet365

Well-Known Member
#10
Chapter One (Part 2)​


That was when it all truly began. First, there were 30 minutes of waiting for some sort of fix (Kirito said something about bugs, but Rin didn't really get it) while Kirito explained just how hard it would be to take the Nerve Gear off of one's own accord, the sky darkening all the while. Then they were all forcibly teleported into the plaza where they had all started the game earlier that afternoon, along with what seemed like every other person in the illusory world of Aincrad. Finally, the sky began to bleed, and a towering, ominously cloaked figure appeared, floating far above their heads.

“My name is Kayaba Akihiko, and, as of this moment, I am the sole person in control of this world. I'm sure you've already noticed that the log out button is missing from the main menu.”

Well, yes. Good of you to finally notice.

“This is not a defect in the game. I repeat: it is not a defect. It is a feature of Sword Art Online.”

What? So, how exactly were they supposed to log out? It wasn't like he could just trap everyone in the game forever.

“You cannot log out of Sword Art Online yourselves, and no one on the outside can shut off or remove your Nerve Gear. Should this be attempted, the transmitter inside the Nerve Gear will emit a powerful microwave, destroying your brain, and, thus, ending your life.”

The crowd was beginning to get unruly, not seeming terribly inclined to entertain Kayaba's posturing. Rin had similar feelings. There was such a thing as taking a joke too far, and she had other things to do tonight. She didn't have time to entertain this sort of nonsense. After all, wouldn't someone have noticed if the Nerve Gear was capable of doing something like that?

But, apparently, it was possible, or at least that's what Kirito told Klein, when the redhead raised that same objection. Rin had no idea how something like that could ever make it to market, but she had to admit that Kirito seemed to know far more about electronics than she did.

“Unfortunately, several players' friends and families have ignored this warning and attempted to remove the Nerve Gear. As a result, 213 players are gone forever from both Aincrad and the real world.”

What?

Rin's blood turned to ice. Either this was one of the worst jokes she had ever heard, or Kayaba Akihiko, in the past few hours, had become one of the most prolific mass murders who had ever lived.

Klein was still denying it, while Kirito looked shell-shocked, but Rin couldn't bring herself to pay either one of them much attention in the face of what Kayaba had just asserted.

Distantly, the Tohsaka heiress continued to register the self-proclaimed mass murderer's words, her expression growing colder all the while. Death in the game meant death in real life. The only way to escape was to overcome all of Aincrad's 100 floors. A mirror appeared in the hands of every player, revealing his or her true face. The madman claimed to have no motive beyond playing God: imprisoning, and if he willed it, murdering, 10,000 people for his own sick amusement.

But, beneath the surface, her mind was churning rapidly. If he was telling the truth, then Kayaba would kill anyone who tried to escape his game. If he was telling the truth, then he would kill anyone who tried to interfere with his game. As Rin stood motionless, coolly considering her next move in the centre of thousands of cries of despair and disbelief, she realized that she was already planning on trying to do both.

To be a magus is to walk with death.

“Rin.”

A voice was calling her name.

“Rin.”

A hand was pulling on her own insistently, and her feet seemed to be moving as well without any input from her brain. It didn't matter. She just needed to make sure she had the theory right. That was the first step.

“Rin!”

“Kirito?”

The voice was Kirito's but the face was different. A red-haired man she didn't recognize was there, as well, being pulled along with the two of them. Wait. Kayaba had restored their original appearances. If Kirito and Klein had chosen to enhance their own looks, then...

“Kirito?” she asked the somewhat girlish-looking boy with short, black hair.

“Klein?” she questioned the red-haired man, who looked about the same age as before, but quite a bit scruffier.

Her mouth opened before her brain realized what she was planning on saying.

“You two aren't nearly as good-looking in real life.”

Probably-Klein was confirmed as definitely Klein when he cracked a half-hearted grin at her words.

“Ugh, Rin. That-That hurts. And I can't even say anything back, as you've barely changed at all.”

Kirito looked a bit offended for a few seconds, but then the brief moment of levity passed, and the events of the past few minutes began to weigh down on them once more. Kirito was the first to break the ensuing silence.

“Listen to me. I'm heading to the next village right now. Come with me.”

“Huh?” Klein replied, but Rin's reply was far more definite.

“No.”

“No?”

“No.”

Kirito's dark eyes were sober and serious when he looked into Rin's own cerulean orbs, but whatever he saw there was enough to make him lose his composure.

“Don't you understand? If what he said is true, then the only way to survive in this world is to make yourself as strong as possible, but the resources in-”

“No,” Rin repeated again. “If what he said is true, then the surest way to survive is to stay in this city. But that's only if you trust a lunatic who would murder hundreds of people and effectively kidnap thousands more for, according to him, no real reason at all. The promise to release everyone if the game is cleared is equally suspect.”

“So, what are you saying? That it's hopeless.”

“No. If you want to live, Kirito, then stay in this city and wait to be rescued. That's the safest course. You should do the same, Klein.”

Kirito's hands were clenched into fists, even while his face remained expressionless.

“I can't do that. Just sitting here and waiting for a rescue that may never come... I-I'd rather die.”

“I see.”

It hurt to look at the walking corpse in front of her – the fool who planned to die for nothing more than his own stubborn need to be doing something – so she turned away.

“And you, Klein?”

The older man flinched at the look in her eyes, but then, with a sigh, he gathered himself and replied.

“It's not that simple for me. I've got friends back in that plaza. We waited in line together to buy this game for hours. I-I need to go back and see them: figure out what to do. I don't like the idea of just rotting away in this town anymore than Kirito, but, even so, I can't just...”

His eyes were troubled, but Rin could tell that he was resolved as well. Unless Klein's friends were truly cowards, then he would be leading them out of this city and into Kayaba's death game as well. He would probably die too.

Refusing to allow Kirito and Klein to see anything but cool resolution on her face, Rin turned away from the pair, and began to walk towards an inn she had seen when she first arrived in this illusionary world.

“Rin, where are you-” Klein began to ask before Rin cut him off.

“I have a few things to check up on,” she replied. “In the meantime, try to stay alive.”

Then, without sparing either of the young men another look, Rin walked away.

A handful of minutes later, her features looked as if they had been carved from granite, as she paid 50 col for a private room in the Traveller's Inn, just a few hundred metres from the entrance to the plaza. Sitting atop her rented bed, cross-legged, Rin closed her eyes and breathed deeply through her nose. She quite pointedly did not think of a dark-haired boy, maybe even younger than her, who might die today. She did not think of the red-haired man who might follow him into the grave. She did not think of a tall black man or a friendly amazon. She could not afford any distractions right now.

When she had first entered Aincrad, Rin had almost immediately noticed that she could no longer feel the activity of her magic circuits, the od filling her body, or the circulation of her prana. At the time, preoccupied with familiarizing herself with Sword Art Online, she had put off investigating the matter until later, when she would be able to safely determine whether her Nerve Gear was simply blocking the sensations associated with performing her magecraft, or whether it was actually interfering with her soul, where her magic circuits truly dwelt.

If the Nerve Gear had somehow separated her mind from her soul, then performing magecraft would be impossible, but, the more she considered the matter, the less likely that seemed. Even if Kayaba Akihiko's research might one day allow for soul manipulation approaching the level of the Heaven's Feel, the Nerve Gear had not been designed with such a purpose in mind. All it was designed to do was perfectly deceive the senses.

So, if she was right, then it should still be possible for her to perform magecraft. After all, spell casting was not a method used by a magus to speak to the World, but to oneself. It was a form of self-hypnosis which allowed a magus to transform herself, in order to efficiently activate and mobilize the circuits in her soul. In theory, there was no reason why an aria spoken within the world of Aincrad should not be able to actualize a mystery in the real world. She had no idea how to manipulate the illusionary world of Aincrad itself, but her physical body's surroundings should be within her reach.

This was Tohsaka Rin's goal: to reach outside the world of Kayaba Akihiko.

Of course, performing magecraft without being able to feel the activity of her circuits, her od or her prana was extremely dangerous. Mistakes in magecraft could easily be fatal, and performing faultless magecraft without even being able to see or feel what you were doing would tax even the greatest magus. It would be like a symphony trying to perform while all its members were blind and deaf. Even if each individual part was somehow perfect, there was only a small chance that the whole piece would hang together. But Tohsaka Rin was a genius, and not every mistake in magecraft was fatal.

Performing the sort of delicate magecraft which would be needed to free herself from her Nerve Gear was probably impossible using this kind of kludge: all she would accomplish would be getting her brain fried. But something more limited, requiring less finesse, could, perhaps, be accomplished. First, however, she would need a proof of concept.

Even if she conjured a ball of fire or froze her entire bedroom in the real world, she wouldn't be able to tell what had happened while trapped inside Aincrad. So, it would need to be a spell which transferred her consciousness into the real world. Of course, even for a Tohsaka, a member of a family which excelled in transference and conversion, such spells were difficult and delicate. It would be nearly as hopeless a proposition as removing her Nerve Gear, except for one important fact.

The deeper the connection a magus had to an object, and the more power that magus had placed within the object, the easier it was to transfer one's consciousness to that object. So, a doll the magus had possessed since her childhood was easier than one newly bought from a store, and a mystic code the magus had empowered herself was easier than a rock she had found on a beach.

A jewel which she had bled upon and infused with her prana for almost an entire year was probably the best target Tohsaka Rin could ever wish for.

Her breathing was steady. The door was locked, so that nothing should disturb her concentration. The image of the amethyst which she had infused with her prana since her fifteenth birthday, nine months ago, settled firmly into her mind. It was a gorgeous, octagonal jewel, which she stored in the top drawer of the desk beside her bed.

With more care then ever before, Rin pulled the mental trigger which activated her circuits, concentrating on the familiar image of a knife stabbing through her heart. There should have been pain, as her od, hopefully, began transforming into prana, but there wasn't, so she imagined it. This pain was familiar enough that she could picture it perfectly, faultlessly recreating every detail of the sensation, if only in her mind. Pain was part of the price for the power known as magecraft, and, if she couldn't feel it, then she needed to at least imagine it, if she wanted a mystery built upon such an unsteady foundation to have any hope of being accepted.

She visualized her prana, which she hoped was steadily flowing through her body, wrapping around her optic nerve, and connecting it to the jewel only a few feet away, whose every detail she held firmly within her mind.

Finally, she spoke a one-line aria, hypnotizing herself into not only believing that her mystery could be enacted, but that it would inevitably be enacted.

Rin felt nothing, but when she opened her eyes, the light illuminating her room at the Traveller's Inn was gone. She could sense her limbs and body, but there were no limbs or body for her to move. Vision was the only sense she had, and it was dark.
 

Rising Dragon

Well-Known Member
#11
The stuff with Klein and Kirito was definitely a better transition than the nap. I'm leery that they're included, as this is Rin's story and Kirito's a bit of a showstealer at times, but I can't really see any other way you could've made a better transition this early in.

Also, poor, poor Rin--dat Lancer-level luck. :V
 

Wavelet365

Well-Known Member
#12
Rising Dragon said:
The stuff with Klein and Kirito was definitely a better transition than the nap. I'm leery that they're included, as this is Rin's story and Kirito's a bit of a showstealer at times, but I can't really see any other way you could've made a better transition this early in.

Also, poor, poor Rin--dat Lancer-level luck. :V
Kirito being a bit of a show stealer is exactly why he got put on a bus at the end of the chapter. He'll eventually be back, but, as far as Rin's concerned, he's probably dead. As Rin plans on staying in the Starting City for the moment, it will be quite a while until they meet up again.

As for goof-up girl, did you really expect anything else from her? :D
 

MasalaQuaker

Well-Known Member
#13
Yeah, but she mostly goofs up important things.

Anyway, really liked the revisions.
 

Wavelet365

Well-Known Member
#14
Chapter Two (Part One)​

“So, in summary, the changes observed in the governing intellect of a human brain when moving from a human body to a puppet body are not observed when moving between different puppet bodies. Thus, it is clear that a human body itself has some sort of will which shapes the personality formed within the body to a certain extent. Consequently, I would put forward that any experiment aimed at studying the mind or soul must control for this factor through the use of puppet bodies, or some other similar measure, as results obtained without such a control may be tainted.”

The speaker, a handsome, blonde man wearing a long red coat and brown, leather gloves, smiled confidently, as he offered his audience a shallow bow.

“Are there any questions?”

In Waver's personal opinion, there were few parts of the moonlit world quite so absurd as the academic conferences sponsored by the Mage's Association.

Many magi had killed at some point in order to protect the secrets of their research, and even those who had not yet gone that far certainly accepted that such a step might some day be required of them. A mystery shared was a mystery weakened, but, even more importantly, each path to the Root admitted only one. So why share even a tiny piece of one's hard-earned road to Akasha?

As was so often the case in the Mage's Association, the answer was politics. Recognition, status, support, resources, funding: in order to obtain such things, one had to periodically show results. The trick was to show just enough that the value of one's work was unquestionable without offering up any details which would actually be of significant value in recreating one's own mysteries.

Case in point: the keynote address at the Third Biennial Conference on Neural Networks, Familiar Construction and Puppetry would be profoundly valuable to many of those attending, as it had important methodological implications which would directly impact how they constructed future experiments. There was also an element of one-upmanship involved, as the presenter's own findings would likely call into question the findings of many who would be presenting in the smaller sessions this afternoon and tomorrow. However, ultimately, it offered no more insight into Cornelius Alba's own mysteries than one could glean from his attendance at this conference in the first place. It was exactly the kind of deft address one would expect from the Deputy Director of the Sponheim Abbey.

Offering Deputy Director Alba a second round of applause after the older man had finished addressing the questions his talk had raised, Waver stood up along with the rest of the magi in the room. However, unlike most of them, his objective was not the doors at the back of the abbey's refurbished, former central chapel, which led to a sumptuous, lunchtime buffet, but the lecturer at the front of the room, who was smiling at the crowd, while he gathered his notes together into a handsome briefcase.

Pushing his way through the milling crowd was not too difficult, with his height, but even so, by the time he reached the front of the room, Waver found that a few other magi had beaten him to Alba, most of them simply offering their congratulations to the high-ranking researcher on an excellent talk. In response, the deputy director thanked his well-wishers with a gracious smile, before turning to address a follow-up question from a young, pretty brunette, dressed in a smart, charcoal pant suit.

“As I said before, Lady Court de Gebelin, what you propose sounds like an interesting experiment. Cartomancy is not exactly my area of expertise, but even I can appreciate the value in examining whether destiny is an inherent property of the soul, or merely a property of the vessel in which that soul dwells. I would be happy to speak more with you on this topic later tonight and, perhaps, to arrange for collaboration, if that proves agreeable to you, but, for the moment, I must see what brings Lord El-Melloi to speak with me.”

That Lord Alba left off the 'II' in his title was a bit grating, but that was mostly balanced out by the mild gratification he felt at watching the heir to a three hundred year-old magus bloodline spin around like a top to face him, stuttering, “L-Lord El-Melloi?” with wide eyes.

It wasn't like he felt the title was particularly impressive himself, particularly when the 'II' was left off, but, even after all these years, it was still nice to receive that immediate recognition from a magus who would have looked down her nose and sneered at him a decade ago. Of course, he amended, as he fought the urge to wince at the young woman's hastily sputtered out apologies, a pleading look in her eyes, there was such a thing as taking one's bowing and scraping too far as well.

“It's fine,” he replied gruffly. “After all, it's not like I had to wait long, anyway.”

The young woman smiled gratefully in response, before stepping out of his way.

“Thank you, Lord El-Melloi. You probably don't remember me, but I was in your class on cross-disciplinary approaches to magecraft three years ago. It really influenced how I think about cartomancy.”

It was pretty clear from the look in her eyes that, despite her words, what she really wanted to hear was that Waver remembered her too, but, while she looked vaguely familiar, that had been a class of a hundred students, and he couldn't say that she had really stuck out. Even so, there was no reason to let the heiress to an old and moderately influential family know that.

“I'm glad you got something out of the class, Lady Court de Gebelin. Didn't I say at the time that I hoped my lessons would encourage more researchers to consider cross-disciplinary approaches in their own work? From what little I caught of your conversation with Lord Alba, it sounds like you took the class' most important lesson to heart.”

Blushing a bit at the praise, the young magus nodded at him politely before moving towards the refurbished former chapel's exit, along with most of the other magi who had been clustered around Lord Alba before Waver's approach. Unsurprisingly, they seemed to realize that, if Lord El-Melloi II had saved his questions for after the question period following Lord Alba's talk, they probably weren't questions he was inclined to ask in public. At the very least, if they planned on listening in, it would be prudent to do it from out of sight.

That said, the contents of the discussion Waver hoped to have with the Sponheim Abbey's deputy director weren't really a secret. If they were, he would have definitely approached Lord Alba in a more private setting. They just would have been a bit off topic, following Alba's keynote address.

“So, Lord El-Melloi, I trust you have a reason for approaching me.”

Waver took note of Lord Alba's slightly strained tone – apparently, he must miss his groupies – while carefully suppressing the urge to grimace at Alba leaving off the 'II' again.

“Would you mind not leaving 'the Second' off my title? I'd appreciate it.”

“If you wish,” Lord Alba replied airily, as if he hadn't been purposefully leaving it off because he suspected that it would piss off Waver. “Naturally, I have no desire to offend the head of one of the Clock Tower's most esteemed factions.”

Waver smiled thinly back at the magus standing across from him, carefully suppressing any signs of the aggravated groan he wanted to let out. He hated dealing with this sort of pompous wind bag, but needs must.

“Right,” Waver took a cigar out of his crimson overcoat. He suspected he'd need it. “Do you mind if I smoke?”

“Go ahead,” Alba offered grandly. “It's not a habit I indulge in, but I would hate to make you feel...” The magus drew out the pause before finishing his sentence, “uncomfortable.”

Waver simply lit his cigar silently in response, taking a puff from the rolled tobacco.

“I'll try to be brief, Lord Alba. You're widely considered one of the greatest experts alive on preserving human brains inside puppet bodies.” A little flattery never hurt with this sort of magus.

“I have that reputation,” the blond replied with a guarded smile. “What of it?”

“Well, it's no secret that I'm working on gaining insight into the Heaven's Feel by realizing those implications of Kayaba Akihiko's work which remain mysterious. Unfortunately, as I'm sure you're well aware, it's not so easy to create the sort of stable interface I need between a human consciousness and a body.”

“Oh? And why should this interest me? Why, in particular, should it interest me enough to share important details of my own mysteries with another magus, if that's where this is leading?”

“Hm...” Waver mused. Time for a stick and a carrot. “Well, I suppose I can think of two reasons. One: unless I've missed my guess, I would say that those mysteries aren't anywhere close to what they were two or three years ago. Moreover, you're probably aware that they're going to rapidly degrade further as the Nerve Gear technology continues to develop.”

“How dare y-” Alba began to hiss, before Waver cut him off.

“Which is why I figured you wouldn't mind the opportunity to take your mysteries a few steps further beyond what's possible with modern technology.”

Alba's expression didn't clear, but he also refrained from immediately denouncing his fellow Lord.

“I'm listening.”

“Good. I thought you would be. Your mysteries provide what amounts to a very limited form of immortality. It's not just the capabilities of your puppets which are limited, but the fact that, over time, even if perfectly maintained, the brains your puppets use will themselves age and degrade, losing their capacity to tether human souls to your puppets. Basically, it's an immortality which is only good against car accidents, not something like old age.”

“But if you could digitize human consciousness, as Kayaba posits, then something like age should no longer be a limiting factor.” Waver frowned. “Or, at least, it would be a factor you could theoretically overcome by restoring the lost human consciousness from your back-up data.”

“I already have some help with digitization and restoration. I even have a student testing the Nerve Gear, so that I'll be able to understand how it interacts with mysteries beyond the understanding of contemporary science, but that's all meaningless if I can't reliably connect a restored consciousness to a body. A living body would be best, but even a puppet or digital avatar would do for now. That's where I was hoping that your help would come in.”

Drumming his fingers along the top of one of room's wooden pews, Lord Alba considered the offer for a moment before replying, his eyes shadowed by the brim of his top hat.

“So, let me see if I understand your proposal. In return for my expertise in preserving the consciousness of a human and facilitating its connection to an artificial body, you will assist me in learning these mysteries which will digitize and restore the consciousness of a human.”

His eyes narrowed.

“That's an unusual exchange for a magus. Most would offer money or favours, rather than dulling their own mysteries.”

Waver simply shrugged.

“I've prepared a contract to that effect,” he replied, pulling the ensorcelled papers out of his overcoat. “It's binding, so you can trust I'll keep my end of the bargain. Feel free to take some time to look it over, and, if necessary, we can discuss any amendments tomorrow morning.”

Taking the papers from Waver's outstretched hand, Alba replied with a short nod.

“I'll consider it. Is that all?”

Waver nodded, taking another puff from his cigar.

“In that case, I'll take my leave of you, Lord El-Melloi II,” Alba stated, picking up his briefcase, as he strode past his colleague. “After all, it would not do for the Deputy Director of Sponheim Abbey to miss all of the meal following his own keynote address.”

Waver didn't bother responding, preferring to take another puff on his cigar, as Alba left the room.

That conversation could have gone better, he mused, as the door closed behind Alba. Although, he supposed, it could have gone worse as well. He had heard that Alba could be a bit prickly about criticism, but had still thought that bringing up the degradation of Alba's own mysteries would be a sound negotiating tactic. Instead, it had probably been a miscue.

Even so, he reflected, Alba would probably agree to work with him. One thing he had gotten right was that the deputy director was far too proud of his mysteries to simply let them degrade away to nothing. The opportunity Waver offered, in that sense, was to good to pass up.

Nonetheless, Waver knew that he would need to watch his back. At the best of times, collaborating with other magi was about as safe as sleeping in a nest of vipers, and, unless Alba's reputation was grossly overstated, he could turn Waver to ash with a snap of his fingers. Consequently, irritating him was probably not great for Waver's life expectancy.

Accepting that he'd need to be a bit more sensitive towards Alba's feelings in the future, Waver pulled out his smart phone and habitually checked his text messages. Trash, a whiny student who somehow got his number, trash, complaints from Reines, trash, trash.

His gaze stopped on one particular message from his secretary, dated from a little over an hour ago.

Check the news. - S

Huh. That was weird. Well, Samantha knew not to disturb him over trivialities while he was at work, so, presumably, she'd seen something relevant to his interests on the BBC.

Even so, he thought, bringing up his phone's news ticker with his left thumb, while his right hand loosely gripped the cigar in his mouth, couldn't she have at least given him a hint? After all, it wasn't like... His eyes stopped on the first headline.

Ten Thousand Hostages Taken in SAO Video Game Kidnapping! Hundreds Dead! BBC has the Full Story.

What. The. Hell.

After quickly confirming that his news ticker had not somehow gotten linked to The Onion, Waver checked Reuters and Yahoo News, but they were both leading with the same story.

Scanning through the article penned for Reuters, Waver found himself more and more puzzled with each word. No demands, no real leads besides the identity of the perpetrator, who had released that information himself in in a public broadcast: honestly, it sounded like something out of a video game, which, he supposed, was a bit ironic.

Even so, while certainly relevant to his interests, Kayaba Akihiko going mad wasn't likely to cause any real problems for his research. Well, he amended, after a moment's consideration, it might cause one, small hold-up.

Waver sighed.

Somehow, he suspected that Tohsaka's first report would probably be a little late.




AN: The Rin segments of this chapter are still works in progress, but I figured I could at least put a draft of the first scene up for now. Hopefully, more will be coming soon.
 

DIT_grue

Well-Known Member
#16
You did a good job with the 'why' of these conferences, conveying the mood of it, and of then turning around to use those to illuminate your characters. One typo that stuck out to me as I read:

Wavelet365 said:
Nonetheless, Waver knew that he would need to watch his back. At the best of times, collaborating with other magi was about as safe as sleeping in a nest of vipers, and, unless Alba's reputation was grossly overstated, he could turn Waver to ash with a snap of his fingers. Consequently, irritating him was probably not great for his Waver's life expectancy.
 

Wavelet365

Well-Known Member
#17
DIT_grue said:
You did a good job with the 'why' of these conferences, conveying the mood of it, and of then turning around to use those to illuminate your characters. One typo that stuck out to me as I read:

Wavelet365 said:
Nonetheless, Waver knew that he would need to watch his back. At the best of times, collaborating with other magi was about as safe as sleeping in a nest of vipers, and, unless Alba's reputation was grossly overstated, he could turn Waver to ash with a snap of his fingers. Consequently, irritating him was probably not great for his Waver's life expectancy.
Thanks. Fixed.
 

Prince Charon

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#18
Wavelet365 said:
Waver took note of Lord Alba's slightly strained tone – apparently, he must miss his groupies – while carefully suppressing the urge to grimace at Alba leaving off the 'II' again.

“Would you mind leaving the 'II' on my title? I'd appreciate it.”
Just checking, but are you aware that 'Lord El-Melloi II', when spoken aloud, would be pronounced 'Lord El-Melloi the Second'? Saying “Would you mind leaving the 'the Second' on my title?” sounds rather awkward. Also, I'm reasonably sure that leaving it off would not be considered insulting normally, though given Waver's issues with his predecessor, that part does make some sense... maybe.
 

Wavelet365

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#19
Prince Charon said:
Wavelet365 said:
Waver took note of Lord Alba's slightly strained tone – apparently, he must miss his groupies – while carefully suppressing the urge to grimace at Alba leaving off the 'II' again.

“Would you mind leaving the 'II' on my title? I'd appreciate it.”
Just checking, but are you aware that 'Lord El-Melloi II', when spoken aloud, would be pronounced 'Lord El-Melloi the Second'? Saying “Would you mind leaving the 'the Second' on my title?” sounds rather awkward. Also, I'm reasonably sure that leaving it off would not be considered insulting normally, though given Waver's issues with his predecessor, that part does make some sense... maybe.
You're right in saying that I phrased that awkwardly, so I'll have to fix it.

On the subject of Waver's title, according to the wiki, he finds it unbearably grating without the "second," which is the kind of thing I would expect well-connected magi to know about. I can't find another source for this claim, as it's not in the Character Material Book which covers Lord El-Melloi II, but, as I think it fits Waver's character, I'm probably going to stick with it unless I find out that it's wrong.
 

Wavelet365

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#20
Chapter Two (Part Two)

“Bilden die brücke.”
(Building the bridge)

From the moment Kayaba Akihiko had announced the beginning of his death game, Tohsaka Rin had realized that she would be operating under a rather strict time limit. Two metaphorical clocks were ticking.

The first deadline (which might not actually occur first chronologically) would be passed within a matter of days, provided Kayaba was not deceiving them all. Within the week, the bodies of those trapped within Sword Art Online would be transferred to local hospitals by the Japanese government. From that point on, Rin's options would be far more limited. Not only would she be effectively cut off from her workshop – where her family's many mystical tomes and tools were stored – but she would also be placed in a situation where escaping SAO without attracting immense attention from Japan's national media would be impossible.

As magi were heretics who worked their miracles in seclusion, even if she discovered a method of escaping Aincrad using her magecraft, in such a situation, she might not be able to employ it without being hunted down by the Mage Asscoiation's enforcers for endangering the secrecy of magecraft.

In essence, once her body had been moved to a hospital, freeing herself from the prison called Aincrad would be far more difficult and time-consuming, if it could be accomplished at all. That brought her to the second time limit under which she laboured.

“Passeren durch das Tor.”
(Passing through the gate)

Kayaba Akihiko was clearly either a madman or a liar. In either case, when the police tracked him down and cornered him, there was no guarantee that he would not respond by killing his hostages. Consequently, even if a strategy like patiently waiting for rescue had appealed to Rin – which it didn't – it would be foolishly optimistic to assume that she would survive to be rescued, no matter how careful the police were in pursuing Kayaba.

Thus, before Kayaba Akihiko was apprehended, it was in her best interests to be safely out of his grasp.

“Jenseits des Horizonts.”
(Beyond the Horizon)

However, all of that reasoning relied upon one crucial assumption. She assumed that Kayaba Akihiko was not deceiving them all. So, before anything else, she intended to test that assumption. No true magus would do any less.

“Jenseits der Scheinwelt.”
(Beyond the Illusory World)

Now, the young magus sat cross-legged upon her bed in the Traveller's Inn, her eyes shut, and her mind focused on the task of faultlessly recreating the sensation of her body turning into a circuit, connecting her prana to a particular magic formula written upon the foundation of the real world.

“Ich gehe.”
(I go)

The transition was smooth.

Her familiar was an eight inch tall, amethyst statuette in the shape of an owl. With wings instead of arms, sharp talons in place of long, slender legs and a beak where she was used to having a mouth, the body of Rin's familiar should have been utterly alien to any human being.

However, it was a form which the Tohsaka heiress had worn countless times before, in the years since she learned the basics of crafting such familiars from her father's grimoires. Dispatching familiars like this one was Tohsaka Rin's preferred method of performing long-range reconnaissance. So, even if Kirei still handled most of her responsibilities as the guardian of Fuyuki, crafting and sharing the senses of her familiars was a skill she had been sure to hone in anticipation of the day when she would fully inherit her father's responsibilities.

“Oi, Tatsuki, I heard you're quitting the swim team. Are you-”

No.

“Mana, your bag is so cute! Where-”

No.

“Hahah! That's as expected of Dai-”

No.

“So, do you think anyone at our school was involved?”

“What? Like one of those otakus from the video game club?”

There.

“Un. I mean, even if they're otakus, it's not like they deserve to die for that.”

“I guess so. That Kayaba. For days, the news went on about how he's such a genius. I guess what they say about genius and madness must be true, after all.”

“Un.”

Rin's familiar had perched itself on a tree branch fifteen feet above the ground, which hung over the entrance to the courtyard in front of Homurabara Middle School. High up enough and sheltered by enough leaves that she would not be spotted by any of her classmates, while close enough to the ground that she could easily overhear their conversations, the location was ideal.

Of course, to be more precise, it was the ideal location from which to listen in on her classmates as they gossiped before the beginning of the school day. There were almost certainly other locations in Miyama which would have provided her with an accurate picture of what was publicly known about the Sword Art Online incident at least as quickly, but, for some reason, this particular perch had appealed to her.

“Issei, have you heard anything from-”

“Even if I had heard anything from the school administration, I definitely would not be able to share it with you, Kayanagi.”

“Oh, come on. Isn't it the job of a class representative to deal with the concerns of the student body?”

“The privacy of your classmates comes before that, as you well know, Kayanagi. So you will have to satisfy your desire for scurrilous gossip elsewhere.”

On topic, but not containing anything new.

“Did you hear about, Akira? Apparently, his grandfather was one of the ones trapped inside SAO?”

“But that's terrible! The police will rescue him soon though, right?”

“Who knows? They don't seem to have accomplished much so far. Anyway, Akira told me that his family's leaving town to visit his grandparents.”

“Of course. His poor grandmother must be terrified, and aren't people still dying?”

“That's what I heard? Almost 300 so far, and it's been less than a day.”

Oh, who was she trying to fool? For Tohsaka Rin, school was a place to have fun playing at being a normal girl. It was a place where she could casually interact with other people her age, even if she couldn't allow them close. For the foreseeable future, she would not have the time to return here. The perfect honours student named Tohsaka Rin would vanish for a time, so that the magus named Tohsaka Rin could rescue herself from her predicament. This was reconnaissance, but it was also a goodbye.

The buzzer marking the beginning of the school day rang, as the last few latecomers rushed through the gate into the schoolyard, and Rin cast one last look towards Class 3-B (her own homeroom). Then, stretching out her wings, she took to the air once more, squashing her regrets beneath the practicality of a magus. She had gathered all she needed – enough to confirm the parts of Kayaba's words which could easily be confirmed. There would be no more need to return here: not until she was free.

Her next step would be gathering materials, most of which could be found in her own home. However, before that, there was something else which she needed to do.

Sending her familiar a mental command to return home, Rin dissolved the thin line of prana tying her optic nerve to the body of the familiar she had possessed, returning her consciousness to the illusionary body she wore in Aincrad with a gut-wrenching twist. Her eyes were closed, but Rin felt nauseous, as if she had been spun around again and again until she was on the verge of throwing up. Her room was poorly lit, but as her eyes shot open, even that faint light was blinding.

The symptoms were familiar. Returning to her own body after having inhabited another was always a disorienting experience. Kirei had repeatedly forced her out of familiars and back into her body in the middle of some of their training sessions for that very reason, or so he claimed. Personally, Rin had always suspected that the fake priest secretly derived some sort of sick pleasure from watching her miserably try to deal with the aftereffects.

Breathing deeply through her nose, Rin waited for the nausea to subside. Due to the benefit of her long experience, that only took a handful of seconds. Unfortunately, no sooner had her stomach settled than her body began to insistently remind her why she had returned to Aincrad in the first place.

“Fuuwaaaah,” her mouth stretched open wide in a jaw-breaking yawn, as her stomach growled.

She had been up all night. First, it had taken her nearly two hours of practice and developing a five line aria to reach the point where she could reliably and stably transfer her consciousness, even to objects with which she shared a deep connection. Then, buoyed by that success, she had tried to craft one of her gems into a fairly simple familiar – a mystery which she had enacted countless times before – and had failed miserably. Actually, that was being too generous, considering how that first gem – easily worth half a million yen – had exploded, shattering another few million yen worth of gems at the same time, as it shredded the jewelry box on her bedside table. She was extremely lucky that particular failure had not damaged her Nerve Gear, or else she might well have died at that very moment.

In the end, after wreaking God only knew what damage on her own body due to two separate spell failures, Rin had needed to use, not just a ten line aria (practically a ritual) but one of her most valuable mystic codes – one of the only fourteen gems which she had been specially preparing for the coming Holy Grail War since she was nine years old – in order to transform said jewel into a useful familiar. Each was worth a fortune, contained months worth of her prana and, with each one, she could have literally worked miracles under normal circumstances.

In her present circumstances, apparently, each of her greatest treasures was good for a basic spell.

It galled Rin that she needed such a crutch for magecraft which would normally be practically instinctive for her. She suspected that she now knew how an injured, former competitor in the Tour de France might feel upon barely managing to ride a bicycle with the training wheels on. Even so, conserving her resources for the coming Grail War would be meaningless if Kayaba Akihiko killed her before it even started. She had to be practical. If her pride stung now, then she would simply remember that pain well, and then, once she had escaped from Aincrad and hunted down Kayaba in the real world, beat him to death with a rusty pipe until he had experienced five hundred times that pain.

But that would have to come later, she was reminded by a second yawn. Right now, she was too tired: too tired to be certain that the plans she had spent half the night concocting were actually sound. She was too hungry: too hungry to properly concentrate on her spellwork. Basically, before she could progress any further, she needed to take a nap and eat a meal, in that order.

Reclining from her previous, seated position until she lay flat on her back, Rin stared up at the paneled, wooden ceiling above her bed. Less than a day ago, she would have marveled at its detail and been amazed that she could faintly detect the scent of the wood. She would have had mixed feelings about the hard mattress upon which she lay, as her preference was for something softer – more sinfully luxurious. She might have complained about the pillow beneath her head, while at the same time being stunned that it really felt like a pillow beneath her head. Less than a day ago, Sword Art Online had seemed pretty remarkable.

But that had been a very different Tohsaka Rin.

Now, Rin merely sighed. She would not marvel at her prison cell, no matter how much effort and care had gone into its construction. This room, no this entire world, like Kayaba, was just another enemy which she needed to overcome. Drowsily, she reflected that Kirei would probably scold her for sleeping surrounded by the enemy, but she didn't exactly have a lot of options on that front.

Slowly, Rin's eyes drooped closed and her breathing steadied. Moments later, her sleepy thoughts occupied by the Kirei's irksome, scolding face, Rin drifted off to sleep.




AN: And here's Part 2 of Chapter 2. Please let me know if you have any problems with the magecraft in this section, as I went back and forth for a while on just what Rin should be able to do in this situation. Also, if anyone knows German, feel free to correct my Google-translated rubbish German.
 

daniel_gudman

KING (In Land of Blind)
Staff member
#21
Regarding the title, Lord El-Melloi II...

I think that in a situation where you are addressing a noble with their title, it's considered perfectly fine to leave off the number if the other holders of the title are all dead, and as a corollary, there's a higher expectation of tracking the number when there's more than one running around.

So it's the kind of thing that people could be doing to insult him, but it's also something that's perfectly acceptable? I'm not sure. I don't understand the courtesy of peerage titles well enough.



...It occurs to me that the person who will be responsible for escorting the medical staff into the Tohsaka house is Kotomine Kirei. Obviously, he'll be entering before then to tidy up anything that could make them ask questions about The Secret.

On one hand, as someone that delights in seeing people suffer, the SAO Incident would be extremely entertaining for him. For example, he could use his connection to the event to become the chaplain assigned to the Incident, keeping everyone's hope up, to maximize the families' trauma of Players getting their brains fried essentially at random.

On the other hand, could he establish contact with Rin? He's also pretty good at that Transference of Senses thing, so it's pretty likely that he could hold a conversation with her, and he might feel some kind of obligation to help fish her out.



I guess I can't decide whether he'd run interference to protect Kayaba or not.
 

Wavelet365

Well-Known Member
#22
daniel_gudman said:
...It occurs to me that the person who will be responsible for escorting the medical staff into the Tohsaka house is Kotomine Kirei. Obviously, he'll be entering before then to tidy up anything that could make them ask questions about The Secret.

On one hand, as someone that delights in seeing people suffer, the SAO Incident would be extremely entertaining for him. For example, he could use his connection to the event to become the chaplain assigned to the Incident, keeping everyone's hope up, to maximize the families' trauma of Players getting their brains fried essentially at random.

On the other hand, could he establish contact with Rin? He's also pretty good at that Transference of Senses thing, so it's pretty likely that he could hold a conversation with her, and he might feel some kind of obligation to help fish her out.



I guess I can't decide whether he'd run interference to protect Kayaba or not.
You share my thoughts on Kotomine. I actually think he'd find Sword Art Online fascinating. After all, he sees himself as an evil existence within the creation of a good God. Those trapped in SAO are largely decent people trapped in the world of something like an evil God. He would also absolutely appreciate the suffering.

That said, Kirei absolutely feels an obligation to make sure that Rin is raised properly, so, like you, I'm also not sure whether he would save Rin or not.

However, can Kotomine save Rin? His only real talent as a magus is in healing spiritual injuries, so, while telepathically contacting Rin is possible, I don't think he'd be up to keeping the Nerve Gear from frying Rin's brain (and certainly healing a fried brain is out). I would actually say that Rin (Miss Energy Conversion and Transference) would, under normal circumstances, be a far better candidate for converting electromagnetic radiation into a harmless form or transferring it into a jewel before it could kill someone. I'm really not sure what Kotomine could do there.

I really do like the Chaplain Kotomine idea though. That has high amusement potential. Originally, I was just planning on him coming in to give Rin a lecture and screw with her before the hospital staff showed up, but that sounds much better.
 

Rising Dragon

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#23
Speaking of Rin, with her deciding not to marvel at what is effectively her prison, she seems to be headed down the route Asuna was when it came to regarding the game, before Kirito showed her how she didn't have to feel that way about the game.

As for dealing with the threat of the NerveGear itself, if anyone is qualified for shutting one down or destroying one safely, it'd probably be Shirou, as his Structural Analysis would probably tell him everything he needs to know about how dismantle it safely (if it can be at all, and Kayaba doesn't truly have every single non-magical base covered) or, failing that, he can just simply overload it with prana and destroy it or the EMP emitter instantly, before it can trigger.

But, from the looks of things, this is before Rin was aware of Shirou's status as a magecraft practitioner. Ah well. Sucks to be her.
 

Wavelet365

Well-Known Member
#24
Rising Dragon said:
Speaking of Rin, with her deciding not to marvel at what is effectively her prison, she seems to be headed down the route Asuna was when it came to regarding the game, before Kirito showed her how she didn't have to feel that way about the game.

As for dealing with the threat of the NerveGear itself, if anyone is qualified for shutting one down or destroying one safely, it'd probably be Shirou, as his Structural Analysis would probably tell him everything he needs to know about how dismantle it safely (if it can be at all, and Kayaba doesn't truly have every single non-magical base covered) or, failing that, he can just simply overload it with prana and destroy it or the EMP emitter instantly, before it can trigger.

But, from the looks of things, this is before Rin was aware of Shirou's status as a magecraft practitioner. Ah well. Sucks to be her.
Yeah. Rin's definitely no great fan of living in Aincrad. If anything, she's worse than Asuna was after Kirito knocked the suicidal impulses out of her in Aria in the Starless Night, as Asuna was at least living in Aincrad, while Rin is constantly temporarily escaping her prison by joyriding in her familiar in the real world.

She wants out, but, as you note, unfortunately, she's lacking in useful allies at 15. As for overloading the Nerve Gear with prana, that would definitely set off its anti-tampering defenses and kill the user (or else Rin would be doing it). The one second or so it takes to remove the Nerve Gear is apparently enough time for it to kill someone, so whatever it's doing (never clearly explained in SAO) has to kill really quickly at any sign of tampering.
 

Rising Dragon

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#25
I suppose so, but from what I've seen of how Shirou does things, destroying something in that manner is quite thorough and instantaneous. I would argue that, combined with his other talent, he'd be able to at least pinpoint the exact device that causes the EMP burst and destroy that before it could do anything.
 
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