Akamatsuverse Ronins Imperialis Prologue

#1
And here we have the Prologue for my LH/WH40k fic inspired by Antimatter's suggestion, Ronins Imperialis. I want to finish up the prologue first and get it posted to FF.net so that I have an actual obligation to do more work on it. Here's what I've written so far - enjoy.

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Prologue

Professor Ignatius Mobius was quite pleased.

His team was proving themselves quite adept at their duties. The spirits of their equipment had deigned to accept their offerings and function properly. The guards were staying out of the way and actually guarding rather than making trouble. The Project was ahead of schedule.

The Emperor had commended his progress.

Yes, Professor Mobius was quite proud. So much so, that he had readily agreed to the Emperor's suggestion - not that he'd have ever rejected His Lordship's advice - that the staff be given a day of rest. The hardest part was behind them. Now only the tedious part remained.

The waiting.

Mobius sighed as he settled into his desk chair in his office, browsing through a file on The Project that was written upon simple plain white sheets of paper. He could've used one of those data storing machines, but he'd decided to leave the day-to-day use of those to the younger staff. The more energetic, the more devout in their worship of the Machine Spirits, the more knowledgable than he - almost - in lost technologies from before the Age of Strife. The newer generation.

Emperor bless them.

Glancing at a chronometer on the wall, Mobius noted the time. 1100 Luna Standard. Still relatively early. Mobius stretched out, yawning. Well, he wasn't needed for anything right then, so he might as well make intelligent use of his day of rest - that is, actually resting.

Extinguishing the light torch in his quarters, Mobius floated over to his bed, which lay attatched upright to the wall. Sleeping was different in zero-gravity after all. Strapping himself in, Mobius lay there for a moment, pondering for a moment the glory the Primarch Project would bring to the Emperor of Mankind and his place in it all, before finally closing his eyes and fading off to sleep.

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Up next: the forces of Chaos put their plan to sabotage the Primarch Project into motion!
 

Mighty Bob

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#2
Glad I got to see this before disappearing; got off my ass and picked up a copy of Dawn of War, probably gonna load it and play for a few days (longer if I really get sucked in) Hell, I might even understand some of whats going on in this fic (from background) when I get back :D
 

Antimatter

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#3
I know a few people worshiped the Emperior back then, But If i recall, he really didn't rise to God status till the Golden Throne.

Has anything of pre HH religion ever really been said? I know the prolouges to the books say "Master of mankind by the will of the gods" but thats it.
 

Zenithos

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#4
Hi

The following message is from both Zenithos and Beyond the Bounds, as Beyond the Bounds was too lazy to log into his own account...

From BTB: Hey, nice to see you're back in the game. I've never actually read any of your works before, but I thought it a big pity back when you said you don't write fanfiction anymore. But this looks like a really good start. Keep it going and you've got yourself a fan right here.

From Zenithos: I like your use of language here. Very nice paragraph idea transitions (I never got the hang of that technique). I've been trying to learn if off Eternity Incarnate for ever, but I just could never get my ideas to string together between paragraphs in that comedic way I want it to. Anyway, I like it, though I'm not aware of the crossover, if it is one. But since it's titled ronin imperialis, then I imagine Keitaro, Motoko, Naru, and Mutsumi will feature in it, no? Well, good luck with this new endeavour. As BTB said, nice to see you back in the game.

Zenithos and BTB
 
#5
For those of you that haven't seen my other work on this: here's some work on Chapter 1 of the fic that I did earlier, and here is Antimatter's suggestion that started it all. Also, I'm getting Dark Crusade next week. If that doesn't give me enough inspiration to finish up the Prologue (and likely - hopefully - Chapter 1 as well), I don't know what will.

As for BTB and Zenithos' comments: thanks, it's always good for the ego to have authors who's works you're a big fan of (Sister Princess, Forevermore, and Soul Requiem are all spectacular, and I've been reading some Love Hina Alternative as well) compliment you, and when one says that you're better at something than he is - well, not sure how to respond to that. Thanks.
 
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