Evangelion Study War No More

bluepencil

that's why it's trash can, not trash cannot
#1
Won't that be one mighty day
When we hear world leaders say
"We don't have to cry no more"
"We're givin' it up, we gonna let it all go"

Ain't gonna study, study war no more
Ain't gonna think, think war no more
Ain't gonna fight, fight war no more
We're givin' it up, we gonna let it go
We're givin' it up, we gonna let it go

We will take gun powder to have fun
Then get rid of the atom bomb
Something else that we can do
Get rid of all those rockets too

The money spent on bombs alone
Can build poor people a happy home
Something good we can do
You treat me like I treat you

No more starving in the nation
Everybody gets an education
Everytime a baby is born
We know he'll have him a happy home

No more sleeping in the street
We all happy whoever we meet
Then we all will shake their hand
And make this world a promised land

-Willie Dixon


o

Deep Space
March 21, 2124 (CC 105)




The AngelÆs Thimble was the first ship to be built from Midgard Staryards, mankindÆs first self-sustaining extrasolar colony. The ship was shaped like a silver spindle, a long needle-like main body with a wide ring around its axis. The bulb on the far end was its antimatter drive. There was a broad sheath of ice up front, which served as both as a shield against the strikes of interstellar material at a third of the speed of light, and a reserve of reaction mass.

It was half a kilometer long and had a waking crew of five. It was seven years into its journey when man encountered the first truly xeno race in its experience.


ôI am certain they can see us.ö the Alien-Technologies officer persisted. He pointed with a clawed finger at the screen. ôThat ring was rotating when we first encountered it. It stopped when we approached to two hundred thousand (kilometers). It can only be a mechanism to imitate gravity through centripetal force, but the spin would throw off any attempts at maneuvering. So it is still.ö

The Captain flicked his long hairless pink tail back and forth thoughtfully. ôThis is worrying.ö A Hero of the Kzin of course would not run from danger, but a warrior must have a healthy respect for the unknown. ôThey know of us but arenÆt trying to get away. Are they that confident of themselves?ö

The Alien-Technologies Officer shook his head and flattened his ears. ôLook, captain. The hull is composed of mere iron alloys and some carbon composites. It is practically unarmored. The gravity ring tells us that there is life within that ship. They donÆt have the gravity planer, if they need such a thing. This is one of the most primitive crafts IÆve ever seen.ö

ôAnd yet we are lightyears away from the nearest star!ö

ôWe have matched their velocity at twenty-five percent of the speed of light. They must have some efficient reaction driveà we have never need one as good, not since we found the gravity planer.ö

ôHss. Are they a threat to us?ö

ôI cannot see a way how, Srul-Captain.ö

ôKeep all weapons trained on it anyway. Where is that cursed telepath!ö

The door to the dimly-lit bridge slid open and a much more slim catlike figure entered. He stood at attention exaggeratedly. His fur was unbrushed and he looked as if he required more sleep. ôReporting as ordered, captain!ö

Srul-Captain bared his teeth slightly in displeasure. The telepath was a disgrace to the ideal of a Conquest Kzin, but of course the rarity of the talent ensured he wouldnÆt be murdered to preserve the honor of the KzintÆi race. He pointed at the main screen and spoke with sheer contempt. ôWe have encountered a new enemy craft. You will read their minds for us.ö

The telepath slumped in misery. ôYes, sir.ö He slunk over to a chair and closed his eyes. His ears flicked and rolled, his tail hung slack, and soon he entered a trance-like state. The captainÆs mind intruded on him, a hate that was eagerly but inexpressibly returned, and he frantically tuned it out. One by one he filtered out the minds of those in the ship, and reached towards the alien craftà

Strange and disturbing thoughts clawed at him across the void, and his mind reeled trying to turn the chaotic sendings of the eleventh sense into something more sensible.

ôà bet they donÆt even have radioàö


o



So how does a man from old worn Earth end up leading the first extrasolar spacecraft built by mankind? Not in the reasoning behind it, of course- wealth, political wrangling, nepotism, oh the excuses are so easy and so believable. ItÆs more a matter of distance, my friend. Up until this era of ours all colony ships had to be built and delivered from Luna Prime. Not since the first wave of seedships had anyone born from GaiaÆs womb had any graduate of the Red TowerÆs Xenocourse have gone further than just bringing the completed ship through the wormgate.

The Xenocourse had a serious problem getting any students to make graduate. The past hundred years twice now it was almost canceled, the program that gave mankind the stars. I suppose it is a matter of enthusiasm then.

Behind every prejudice, no matter how obsolete, is a nugget of truth. Or at least a falsehood as attractive. The reputation of us Earthborn, called flatlanders, as na´ve, lacking imagination, sheltered, and soft- I, Janth Baladeva, this I must admit to still have basis in reality.

You see, itÆs not like I ûwanted- to be here. While travel between wormgates reduces travel times by half, two endpoints of the warp tunnel need to be linked to each other. The other end therefore must be brought to place the old-fashioned way, at sublight velocity, through decades snatched from cold sleep.

But it is a matter of obligation. The Cohesive Humansphere is more than a government, less than a religion. Setting up a wormgate is as much an art as it is an artifact of science. Much as weÆve left behind a lot of the old self-destructive tendencies, a whole host of new superstitions seem to have replaced them. A ship with Earthborn at the head is somehow innately luckierà as the saying goes, God favors small children, fools, and ships named Enterprise.

No one is allowed to name their ship the Enterprise. ThatÆs what Akagi named the quantum tunneling experiment back in 2019, and that one instead of teleporting a small sphere of silicon from the sea level to Serenity Base on the moon instead flung the entire Solar System off to God knows where (and HeÆs not telling).

Since this mission is about not getting lost or stuck in improbable but intensely interesting situations, no way were the Sigilata going near that name. While the whole ship is heavily automated that a child could perhaps command it, the captain is supposed to keep the crew from annoying each other to death from their boredom. So, what did that leave? A likable fool of some sort.

Of course IÆm a fool. I arrived on Alpha Centauri a sprightly twenty-six. Now IÆm a paunchy thirty-nine. IÆm sure my reaction was just hilarious when I told IÆd be on bed rota between the XO and the engineer. ItÆs not that Earth is all that repressive, but I just never expected how so blunt were the outborn towards sexual matters. Decades. In this ship, when not in cryo, thereÆs only fuck or sleep or find some other non-harmful way of not growing mad from boredom.

I didnÆt want to be here, not exactly in this ship, but something like that was the reason why I wanted to (ahem) explore known space.

I was young, all right? As much as roamed, I still expected to go back.

Earth is birthplace of mankind. ItÆs still sacred. We, as humans, still ûneed- that visceral connection to the source from which we all sprang.

It surprised me most of all to learn that IÆd been chosen to lead the mission, despite having no practical experience. But one does not ignore Vishnu Paramatma when He decides to call.

This mission ûmust- be specially blessed if He decides to take direct notice of it. This first contact with the first true alien race in humanityÆs experience is certainly a surprise, but not too much so. Am I giddy with excitement? Haha no. IÆm scared near out my wits.
The only sensible reaction, perhaps. I just canÆt show it. A captain needs to present a calm confident manner, itÆs not for nothing that I spent all these years.

ôà bet they donÆt even have radio.ö

IÆm jerked from my contemplative mood by a loud disputing snort.

ôRadio waves still propagate at the speed of light.ö speaks up Helena Diskport, the missionÆs Astrogator. ôWhy wouldn' anyone not recognize any signal sent through the spectrum? WeÆve tried every frequency outside of anythin' they could mistake for a targeting emission.ö She spun in the zero-grav of the central command bridge with a BelterÆs grace and floated over to other side of the bridge. ôAny species advanced enough to build a spaceship should know what can be used for communication.ö

ôWhat forms of communication should we be using?ö asked I ask her. Tall and leggy, with her hair in a military crew-cut, Helena puts her emphasis more in voice than in gestures. I guess that comes from being raised in a spacecraft where any random flailing could knock loose objects or switches in zero gee.

ôWe've already got the computer running the standard First Contact package, sa'ir. We've been throwing universal greetings in both analog and binary, running lights at pi an' Fibonacci, but they're just not responding. They should know thereÆs at least something annatural here.ö

ôThere might not be anyone there to respond.ö replied Changor Jicks, the shipÆs Pilot. He squints at the main screen behind thick-lensed goggles. While it was simple enough to get generic Earthform organs to replace bad eyes, he still rather likes the ones his mother gave him. Our lineage has a common thread, but he is Iupitrian.

Piloting a colony ship like this must be punishment for a rocketjock, and really just for that I have to suppress a bit of jealousy. That was the advantage of mystique IÆd never have. Everyone else on this ship, despite that we started off a young crew, had lived a more exciting life before being shoved into this hull.

ôA machine-piloted craft?ö Helena changed the main screen to show through the shipÆs optics. ôLook at that.ö Splashed across the shipÆs side was a line of dots and dashes, very different from the angular letters that made up human Interlang, but visibly serving the same purpose. ôSomeone had to have built that. Whoever they are, they write the ship-name across the hull like we do. They have language, obviously.ö

ôDonÆt you want it to be an AI?ö I ask her again. Astronavigation in deep space tended to be just plugging star charts into the computer. With next to nothing to do, her other job was tending to the computers. Her hobby was developing artificial intelligence without quite breaking the taboo on self-aware systems. ôIsnÆt that one of solutions to the Fermi question?ö

The only thing more boring would be the pilotÆs job, which would beà nothing. A seedship only needed to be steered at the start towards the prospective star, and then left to accelerate on its own.

Poor Changor. But thatÆs why he and Elena share misery and relieve it, among other pursuits, intellectually in making piloting and management sims.

ôLike, why havenÆt machine intelligences already consumed the galaxy, you mean?ö Helena shrugs. ôI donÆt knowà IÆd like something that thinks in ways I can understand. Something that we can talk toà itÆs better than risking a Berserker plague.ö

ôHow about a bug-eyed alien swarm? Biological von Neumann propagation is just a valid.ö Changor adds helpfully. ôThereÆs plenty ways of thinking and communicating. We might not even perceive space itself the same way. Spot!ö He curls his lips back. ôThat thing has a reactionless drive!ö

ôOur photon drive is also, by definition, reactionless.ö I say back not-at-all helpfully.

He glares at me. I think. I canÆt really tell with his lenses. ôOur Solenoid Engine doesnÆt create energy from nothing. If we could just generate black holes like the First Generation seedships, our drive would be much more efficient in transforming output into propulsion. But that thing isnÆt even emitting anything. I just saw it match our velocity from almost double ours!öHe wiggles his brush moustache at Helena. ôThatÆs not possible. It shouldn't violate the conservation of energy.ö

ôNot withà machines?ö I ponder out loud. ôAt least, not in the method we know from the history books.ö

Helena crosses her arms over her chest and lightly kicks off the back of ChangorÆs chair to drift back to her station. ôI donÆt have any proof that itÆs manned. I just think it likely that machine intelligence or no, it has to be ignoring us. If itÆs advanced to go interstellar on its own, howevÆ it does it, itÆs got to be enough to ûsee- us.ö

I canÆt help but to chuckle. ôItÆs still strange to finally meet an alien race that actually ûneeds- spaceships to cross the void.ö I guess that just leave us with just one important question.


o


The computers of the Kzin scoutship did receive the First Contact package, and speedily reinterpreted the data. ôBipedal, hands and feet with digits capable of fine manipulation, it looks like.ö the Alien Technologies Officer mulled over the data and snarled slightly. ôKzin-like, if just in shape.ö

ôThey look weak. These are the females, yes? Nearly the same size as the males. If not for the breasts, how can they even tell each other apart? Their furà hrr, itÆs not so much the lack of it that is unnatural, but that they seem to growing in the most useless places.ö But of course there was just one important question. ôWhat are their weapons?ö

ôThey have weapons, crude lasers and magnetic throwersàö the telepath murmured. ôThey are sure their weapons will have no effect, our armor is much thicker than they expected. They have seen our speed and are not confident they can even hit us.ö

ôAs they expected? Have they come to conquer?ö the Captain asked with relish.

ôNoà explorationà they have not been space for long, less than a hundred years. No, waità they have only two worlds.ö The telepath couldnÆt keep an expression of feral pleasure off his face. ôThey are afraid. Their worlds have almost no defenses. No warships.ö

ôThis is a primitive ship, but at least we know they can be taught to build.ö the Alien Technologies officer offered. ôA new slave race.ö

The captain let out a satisfied growl. This was most fortunate. It would bring them much honor, names and wealth. ôCan they fight?ö

ôYes, very much they want to fight us. They know we are superior and that makes them fear. They want to fight so much they want to die, as long as we die with them. We must not be allowed to know where their homeworld is.ö

The Captain yowled in delight. A spirited prey. This just gets better and better. The Fanged God was surely smiling upon them this day.

ôWhy are they here?ö

ôà colonization. They carry with them hundreds of colonists in coldsleep.ö The small Kzin hung limp and went silent for a long while. It was only by the twitching of his tail and the intense expression of focus on his face that the crew kept from worrying about his weak, but still useful life. Suddenly he opened his eyes and flicked his ears up in challenge. ôThey have faster-than-light!ö the Telepath yelped.

ôYou are lying!ö yowled Alien-Technologies-Officer, reflexively striking out but with claws in. The telepath yowled, more of rote than in pain, and cowered submissively. The larger Kzin gestured at the main screen. ôI have eyes! Do you think it would be here if it had an FTL drive? This craft is almost a toy!ö

ôIt is not a drive. ItÆsà a gate of some sort. They must travel sublight until they can set it up in the far end.ö

ôHrrà is this possible?ö asked the captain.

The Alien Technologies Officer flattened his ears out and took a more submissive pose too. ôI am not sure, honorable Srul-Captain. Certainly we know of some animals that possess faster-than-light, but none of them capable of challenging us. The (Puppeteers) have it, and the Slavers before them, but the Jotoki never achieved such a technology. This primitive lump of a ship! I cannot believe it.ö

ôThen this telepath should be punished for insolence.ö

The telepath could only let out a mournful yowl. ôI may be deceived, my great masters, but in this I am not lying. I have nothing to gain from lying.ö

ôThat much is true.ö Alien-Technologist said. ôIt would be simple enough to check when we take the ship.ö

The Captain clawed at the air towards the screen. ôYou say they have no weapons to challenge us, fool?ö he said to the telepath. ôThat photon drive of theirs is a weapon in itself. Are they thinking that?ö

The telepath flattened his ears and went back into a trace. ôà yes, yesà they realize it too. But their ship is too long. They know the speed of our ship, andà we could easily destroy them long before they are in position to fire.ö

Srul-Captain chuffed with laughter. ôThat is a lesson we need not teach today. Today we have slaves, and new technology, and will soon know where we can find more! Alien-Techologist, we must have this craft. It is too valuable to destroy.ö

ôYes, Srul-Captain. But it has no armorà any of our weapons could easily destroy and compromise its cryogenic systems. If these new slave-animals do possess gate-FTL, then surely the knowledge would be in those too valuable to spend their years between stars. As much as possible, we should recover their computer data intact.ö

The Captain began to scratch at the bottom of his chin with his thumb, claw out. ôBoarding it would be simplest, but we must not give them time to purge their storage of star charts.ö To scream and leap, it worked best when the prey was unaware. His ears flicked at an idea. ôWhich part is the command module?ö


o



In under just fifty years had seen most of humanity move from the shelter of its cradle to the having the bulk of its number in orbitals and belt-ships and the seed-ships. As much as the once-fractured world finally put aside their old grudges and burdens, so did man seem intent in forging new planes of division. ThereÆs plenty of us now. Earthborn, Lunarian, Sol Sider, Martian, Sol Belter, Martian, Iupter and Nepter, then Outshifter. Then there are the extrasolar colonies. The Centauri Siders in worldless Alpha Centauri, the Gardians and Swarm Belters in Beta Centauri, Lynxians in Felisa, and so on. A hundred years later and most of humanity was born off lonesome Gaia. Earth imposes no influence on her colonies, each one that sets off is implicitly politically distinct as long as all obeys the common laws of the CHS.

A lot of things remained the same anyway. Our common culture is in no hurry to leave this state of humanity. IÆve grown up through this voyage and I can understand how almost everyone wishes they hadnÆt wasted their childhood years hurrying to grow up. Mankind as a whole is still so young. We have all the time in the universe.

I lean back on my chair, take the cigarette from my lips and blow. I roll the stick between my thumb and forefinger thumb and forefinger as I think.

All this time, the woman to my left hasnÆt spoke up. Her sharp, hawk-nosed face is set in grim concentration. ôThey haven't shot at us yet.ö Comrade Esperanza says nervously. ôMaybe... they're like us. It's automated until they wake up the crew from coldsleep?ö

She looks at the other craft in her own viewscreen. The bulb-like vessel does looks distinctly unfriendly, with bulges that could only be weapon ports.

"Is it safe to assume they're not hostile?" asked Changor.

ôWar is such a hilariously expensiveà and slowà undertaking across interstellar space, that any resources applied towards waging it is very unlikely to be recouped in whateverÆs claimed.ö I say with a slight grin. ThaatÆs right. Listen to me, a bankerÆs son, laying down the costs of violence. ôThatÆs why the peace humanityÆs enjoyed for the past hundred years hasnÆt been because one political ideal or faction finally proved superior over all othersà we all learned itÆs not worth the heartache.ö

HelenaÆs smile is more than a little indulgent. ôEarthÆs peace, captain. And thatÆs because your primary export seems to be dissenting views.ö Jupiter and the Belt ended up not being happy with each other anyway.

Which just proves my point more, really. For all the talk of æpiratesÆ and rhetoric, they knew that industry put into building warships could be better habitats and resource extraction. Which in turn could be the seed for a military build-up, but in twenty-five, fifty years, trade would have linked them so tightly that war would be unthinkable.

ôExplorers, my dear. Such as we are.ö I point to the screen. ôAny species smart enough to get to space on its own should at least have managed to unite a good deal of their own species beyond violent competition. Fighting the well of gravity is hard enough.ö

All weÆve accomplished, weÆve done it without the waste of war.

I look to the station left of me, where sat Comrade Esperanza at the weapons controls. She shrugs. ôMaybe, but just because one got to space doesnÆt mean they have to be rational about it.ö The Lynxian has decided to take out her own smog-sticks. She takes a deep drag and swallows much of the smoke instead of blowing it out.

There are very many who still think smokingÆs a vile habit. I begin to spin the stick between my fingers. The missionÆs psychologists had accepted that some people did find it relaxing just to hold something in the middle of a crisis. It kept them centered. Poison might be in every breath, but it did force officers to take willful deep breaths regularly and that motion alone allowed them to keep their heads. The body needed to become the slave to the mind.

But to a Jinxian, the only other landborn in the Humansphere, the poisons would taste like home. Let me digress here a little. Lynx was the first real life-bearing planet humanity had found. Asgard doesnÆt count- itÆs a wordlet around a gas giant, like Europa for the Jupitris. Lynx is habitable, compatible with earthstock flora and fauna, except for one thing- its atmosphere was slightly toxic. Plants wouldnÆt care, but people would have to live in domes and carry oxygen packs when going about their world.

WeÆve learned from the colonization of Mars that dome dwellings are expensive and time-intensive. It would be much faster, and much more liberating, to implant whatÆs known as the BeecherÆs Organ, which allows human lungs to filter out poisons before they enter the bloodstream.

I can almost hear the reaction of the colonists when the next shipment arrived. Flatlanders. Yeah, only Earth-humans would think meddling with the genetic template was the simpler solution. Fortunately the implantation procedure only involved snorting down two thin hollow threads and a micro-pump pushing through the gene-seeds. ItÆs been a long time since we needed to do surgery just for implantsà there was no chance of organ rejection when theyÆre formed from the bodyÆs own cells.

The end result? Within a month, every Lynxian could walk outside, saving them a lot of time and effort and construction money. The improved lung efficiency also extends human normal lifespan by about five years. Another dirt-cheap solution brought to you by GEHRINÆs Artificial Evolution Labs. Subsidizing its research costs is part of where your taxes go.

Of course, I have one too. When I went off to work for Sol Space Agency, GARUDA, they gave me the full set of environmental tolerance implants. LunaÆs many white elephant industries are occasionally useful. Lunarians may be loony for their research, but itÆs still Terra that keeps on paying for it.

Speaking of Lunariansà

I thumb inship communications and call for Dr. Toyama. A short while later, I receive a reply from the coldsleep chambers.

ôMy apologies, Captain Baladeva.ö Our resident Scientific Adviser says, the tiny woman looking like a panda in her white parka. ôShe is nearly awake.ö

I nod. As a Captain, First Contact was never really my purview. I suppose anyone in this crew can be diplomatic if necessary, but there is only one person in this place that can truly ûknow- the border between man and alien. Qualifications donÆt really matter as much as beingà able to speak for all mankind. All of us.

ôThank you, Doctor. Please make sure sheÆs comfortable. WeÆll wait for you h-ô

The whole ship lurches as if struck by a hammer blow. I briefly feel a hot flash before the helmet-film engaged, covering my head and protecting it from the decompression. Air rushes out through two holes in the hull. The lights switch to emergency red, and I feel pops through the deck plates as the automated defense system shoot out laser-diffusion flares. Pressure containment seals rapidly flow from the edges of the hole.

ôHim on Earth!ö I gasp. ôWhat was that?!ö ItÆs a few more strained moments before I can move again.

I hear a whimpering through integrated comms. One of the holes is near the AstrogatorÆs station. Helenaà her legs are gone, the stumps seared and sealed. SheÆs still clinging to the side of her chair. ItÆs a good thing weÆre all hermetically sealed, IÆm sure we donÆt want to smell cooked meat.

I still feel sick anyway, imagining how oddly appetizing such an odor would be. ItÆs still part of our animal instinct, oh damn it.

Why would they attack?! Have we triggered some sort of automatic defense flag? No. I bump the alert from HARM straight into REFLEX. This is too precise. WeÆre being targeted. That shipà ôTactical! Hold fire!ö

Esperanza has already shot off our own defense lasers and a couple of missiles. The lasers had only tickled thick armor, and the missiles IÆm sure will be shot down by any decent point defense. ôBut, sir-!ö

ôWe need to look crippledàö

She gasps, understanding immediately. ItÆs the only way to avoid further damage. She glances at her screen to see two objects separating from theà enemyà ship. Boats? Boarding craft, yes quite likely.

ôMedical to the bridge! ö I shout into the inship channel. To those with me, ôEveryone belt in and brace yourselves. ItÆs not over yet. TheyÆre going to hit us again.ö

They did. But that attack never touches us. It splashes harmlessly off a hexagonal red barrier around our ship.

I feel cold straight past the bone, right into the soul. The terror in my gut pushes me to dry heaving. I feel so tiny, the light of my soul wavering under the unintended assault. I can feel her.

SheÆs Awake now. And sheÆs angry.

-o-
 

biigoh

Well-Known Member
#4
"Neongenesis Evangenlion" (apparantly) and "Man-Kzinti Wars"

<a href='http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Man-Kzin_Wars' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Man-Kzin_Wars</a>
 

eliar

Well-Known Member
#5
Very very interesting... I assume this is a continuation of Shinji and Warhammer 40k timeline?
Also a minor nitpick isnt the ship to small to carry enough colonists for a viable population base? Or are they just the advance party? If they do install a gate after all and the transition is instant then hordes of colonists could arrive at any time.
 

Prince Charon

Well-Known Member
#6
bluepencil said:
We grit our teeth and wait. But that attack never touches us. It splashes harmlessly off a hexagonal red barrier around our ship.

I feel cold straight past the bone, right into the soul. I feel like dry heaving. I feel so tiny, the light of my soul wavering under the unintended assault. I can feel Her.

SheÆs Awake now. And SheÆs angry.

Who dares? Who dares?!

-o-
Hmm. So they did keep Eva technology. I wonder if She is related to the gate.
 

bluepencil

that's why it's trash can, not trash cannot
#7
Not exactly. That Shinji is something of a paranoid lunatic. Expansion would be more ruthlessly pragmatic, and mankind would keep on studying war. Just in case.

This is split off that timeline which asks, what if Shinji was stuck in the 'canon' timeline from that bit with Leliel? He hasn't got the support that he accumulated from his timeline, so if THAT is the Imperium route then this is more like the Eldar route. To be more precise, low-key Xenodite farmer.

Gundam-style space colonies are by definition Craftworlds y'know.

edit:
Colonists in coldsleep don't need spin gravity. With pods stacked over each other, there's plenty of room for five hundred sleeping in the main hull. The five active crew are awake in four-year shifts. This time it's the captain's turn with the main crew. Next year would have been his XO's turn to stay awake. The mission at half lightspeed should take them thirty years.
 

Mercsenary

Well-Known Member
#8
They did. But that attack never touches us. It splashes harmlessly off a hexagonal red barrier around our ship.

I feel cold straight past the bone, right into the soul. The terror in my gut pushes me to dry heaving. I feel so tiny, the light of my soul wavering under the unintended assault. I can feel her.

SheÆs Awake now. And sheÆs angry.
You have no chance to survive. make your time.
 

violetshadows

Well-Known Member
#9
Mercsenary said:
They did. But that attack never touches us. It splashes harmlessly off a hexagonal red barrier around our ship.

I feel cold straight past the bone, right into the soul. The terror in my gut pushes me to dry heaving. I feel so tiny, the light of my soul wavering under the unintended assault. I can feel her.

SheÆs Awake now. And sheÆs angry.
You have no chance to survive. make your time.
Hell. Yes.
 

bluepencil

that's why it's trash can, not trash cannot
#10
o​

ôAgain!ö the Kzin captain screamed.

Lasers at full power pulsed and fusion bombs exploded against the strange red barrier. Ship-Gunner pressed the small Scout VesselÆs weapons to the safety limits. He reluctantly turned around to report ôStill no effect, Captain!ö

ôI can see that, eaters of sthondat dung!ö Srul-Captain stalked over to the telepath and hauled him up, His claws dug painfully into the smaller kzinÆs shoulder, but not enough to draw blood. ôWhat is this trickery, telepath?!ö

The telepath moaned, blood dripping how his nose. ô... there is nothing. The universe itself rejects its existence...! Ohh... I fear... forgive me, ancestors, but I fear...!ö

The captain snarled and squeezed, but the telepath reacted to the claws piercing his skin only by stiffening then hanging limp even more. Useless. As much as Srul-Captain would like to finally gut the honorless bastard, he had more important issues to think about. He threw down the telepath and gestured to the Communications Officer.

ôWhat is happening, Alien-Technologist? What is this prey doing?ö he radioed over to the boarding shuttles remaining at half a lightsecond and motionless relative to the strange ship.

ôI do not know, honourable Srul-Captain...ö HeÆd been granted the honor of leading the attack, and being stymied dishonoured both him and the captain. The latterÆs displeasure would likely prove murderous on the empty-handed return. ôI do not recognize this technology, but it does have a similarity to something IÆve seen before.ö

ôHrr, truly? Is it a Slaver device?ö A note of apprehension had crept into Srul-CaptainÆs voice. While Kzin would do anything to possess the technology of the beings that ruled the known universe billions of years before even the bacteria that would evolve into Kzinti had appeared, all had more than a healthy respect for the dangers such ancient and mysterious things. The Slaver Empire, those who could strip any being of its will, was without shame the only thing that a right-thinking Kzin could, and should, fear.

ôI do not believe so. Look! We can still see the prey ship.ö On both the shuttle and the shipÆs screens the AngelÆs Thimble showed battle damage from the initial, successful strike. ôIt is only when an attack breaches a certain distance that it becomes opaque and resistant. It is a field, and it is distorting the electromagnetic frequencies used for targeting. The lower frequencies used for communication and vision are allowed to pass unhindered.ö

ôI do not recall anyone possessing such a protective energy field.ö

ôNot a field, Srul-Captain. But it is similar to a (Puppeteer) hull, is it not?ö

The captain snorted angrily. The two-headed cowardly beings that would have been known as PiersonÆs Puppeteers in another time and place, built their General Products hull that were practically invulnerable to anything except lasers and antimatter. Because General Products hulls were transparent to visible light, lasers could be used to destroy the power plant, indirectly destroying the ship. This field however seemed most effective against lasers.

His ears flattened in unconscious terror at the thought. Whatever this technology, combining it with a General Products Hull would create a ship that was utterly invulnerable. ôThe Patriarchy must have this prey!ö he snarled into the comms. ôI want to know just how much firepower I can throw at this without destroying the ship when it fails.ö

ôMy apologies, but I can offer you no such knowledge captain. I do not know just how long you must claw away at the field before it is depleted. Or if it can be depleted.ö Cheerfully, Alien-Technologies added ôBut I do have a theory. We are almost ready to test it.ö

ôA theory? What is this theory?ö

ôHigh-power lasers and explosives are stopped a safe distance away from the ship. I have noticed that missiles are allowed to approach closer than the lasers are stopped. When the lasers are active, the missiles explode at that distance that serves as a barrier.ö Alien-Technologist bared his teeth excitedly, widening his nostrils as if scenting prey. ôIf it is a Field, then obviously its strength must lessen with distance. At the same time, it must affect objects according to how they interact with the Field. I hypothesize, Srul-Captain, that this defensive field reacts proportional to the energy that is acting against it!ö

The Captain didnÆt understand how certain Kzin relished fighting against themselves, rejoicing in solving conundrums rather than the simple joy of combat, but the Patriarchy had good use of such Kzin genes. Alien-Technologist was no coward, able to take challenge and ears from the defeated. He could be trusted. ôWhat do you propose? Rather than Scream and Leap, to Feint and Pounce?ö

The alien ship was still sending radio signals, a repeating message that probably said ædo not attackÆ. Maybe it was even æwe surrenderÆ, but as long as that Field was up there was no point to it. ôYes, Srul-Captain! If you will, we will begin the experiment. First, we will throw objects towards the ship at varying velocities. Then, one of the warriors will drift towards the ship at the limit and fire a laser rifle.ö

ôA laser rifle has an effective range, even in vacuum of only four (kilometres).ö the captain noted.

ôWe have already tried firing our hand-carried weapons, and they have not been stopped. Presumably they possess too little energy to interact with the field. If this is a success, simply by moving very slowly relative to the ship we may be able to slide through the protective field.ö

ôGood. Do this, and I will be sure to mention your contributions in my report.ö

Alien-Technologist slunk back in a respectful pose. ôYou honor me, Captain.ö

ôI know so.ö Srul-Captain cut off the link dismissively.

Alien-Technologist didnÆt know what effect the Field would have on living creatures, but all other Kzin in the craft volunteered loudly and enthusiastically for the test. The armoured battle suit of the Kzin only had enough air for about three hours. All Kzin were, by nature, impatient. They would have to get much closer on their own to make sure the test could have any useful result.

His theory was starting to get legs the closer they approached. The field showed red hexagons when struck. Their boarding shuttles were encountering resistance, impossible as that may seem in empty space, the faster they were going. Alien-Technologist had decided to split the boarding party even further, cramming more into one shuttle (the one he was in) while the other with half crew pushed ahead at slightly higher speed. He kept a wide-angle view, and the wisps of red light were taking shape at the higher inward velocity. The hexagon was appearing outwards in, the shape multiplying on itself as it steadily æthickenedÆ to form a barrier, and thus he could correlate the amount of rate of resistance with that physical signal.

A spiral path around the ship seemed best, but at some point the repulsive force would become a zero-sum game for the shuttles. To continue further would require pushing the engines, but that would impart more energy to the vehicle and thus more resistance.

The lead shuttle was dragging a Kzin warrior behind it on a tether. Those inside the shuttle could æfeelÆ the resistance of the Field to their vehicle, as it if was pushing against water, but the Kzin outside reported feeling no such resistance.

Firing off the rifles had the beams stopped about five hundred meters by small hexagonal barriers. Finally the shuttles approached to within ten thousand kilometres of the alien ship, and they looked as if crowned by red hexagons. There was still empty space in front of the lead shuttle, but the patterns of red light were near the outline of hull. Still the tethered Kzin reported no change in resistance. A while earlier heÆd been thrown forward ahead of the shuttle. Although his velocity matched, there was no resistance. Alien-Technologist had ordered Kzin to fire his rifle again. First away from the prey-ship, then towards it.

The laser beams were stopped by small red hexagons, still at five hundred (meters), but when fired in front of the shuttle no such hexagons appeared. The beam was stopped at the same distance as the soft barrier in front of the shuttle. Even though it was fired deeper inside the protective Field. ôThis makes no sense.ö Alien-Technologist grumbled.

The men were getting restless. TheyÆd been stuck waiting for several hours as the shuttles approached. TheyÆd have been better off just jumping towards the prey, wtsai out, like a Hero should.

ôPilot-Sergeant, I want you to push the engines as far as it will go.ö From experiments with thrown objects, it appears the Field simply transformed and transferred energy. Kinetic weapons were being introduced to its own value of energy at some point and neutralized effectively. Lasers were not so much losing cohesion as sharply being sapped past a certain distance. Objects would up motionless and were dragged along at a one-third lightspeed by the inexplicably viscous field. One could almost think it was a gravity well, except that the gravity planer was not acknowledging its existence. That was the theory, since the shuttles were already much further into the Field than the harmless thrown objects.

The shuttles were more in danger of overloading their engines than from the Field itself, which seemed only to be responding to outside input.

Already the shuttle ahead was slowing down. Alien-TechnologistÆs shuttle had its engines off. He watched the overlapping red hexagons around the lead shuttle thicken and draw inwards.

Suddenly Pilot-Sergeant screamed ôFanged One! I did not -...!ô All Kzin in the shuttle screamed in blind terror, loud and high-pitched, which was even more suddenly cut off by a loud squelch. The Kzin being dragged yowled, spasmed uncontrollably, and then his limbs hung slack. Blood splattered all over the inside of his faceplate.

Alien-Technologist yowled as something seemed to squeeze his heart. The red hexagons around the lead shuttle had finally thickened to the point the shuttle looked like a dart aimed at a target board, and suddenly the Field thickened considerably. Rather than a repulsive force flinging the shuttles back, or sapping them of kinetic energy to quickly be left behind, the Field became more opaque. From the outside, the Scout Ship could see it as like a sphere of fogged glass. It pressed down on the shuttles û impossibly, Alien-TechnologistÆs mind could still protest û like the weight of water in an ocean.

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The lights are still red. ItÆs been a few hours since we were first attacked, but while weÆre safe for now weÆre still technically under attack. This is still a combat situation.

ThereÆs five of us that should be awake at any point in time during this journey. WeÆre supposed to take four-year shifts. Next year, it would have been my XOÆs turn and a different crew. We could choose to spend the shifts in coldsleep or extend how long weÆre awake. ItÆs the captain that approves the requests. We only get paid as long as weÆre awake. The XO canÆt approve that, shift change requests during his term would wait until IÆm next awake. It seems that my mission as the captain is to measure the sanity of my crew.

ItÆs been an hour since I took a small nap here in my captainÆs chair. Who judges ûmy- sanity? Doctor Cuerva recommended I take a nap, but he looked uncomfortable staying here in the bridge. Not that I blame him. Helena... she should be all right. Dr. CuervoÆs going to take care of her, but she might be better off staying in coldsleep the rest of the voyage.

Hah! If we do manage to survive that far.

Changor really wants to be with Helena, but after a while at the medbay heÆs back here. EsperanzaÆs scared. Dr. Toyama doesnÆt look it. ThatÆs creepy.

IÆm afraid.

But not of the enemy.

The enemy shipÆs not doing anything. I guess they figured they might as well save their ammunition. The two boats are approaching slowly but steadily. Esperanza looks like wants to blow them right out of space, but the same Field that protects us is also preventing any of our weapons from being useful.

The Field could do something about those two, but... itÆs not like anyone has any control over it. ItÆs not a part of the shipÆs systems.

The command module is near the prow of the ship. WeÆre about half of lightspeed, but here the gravity we can feel is about one-sixth of Earth. The photon drive is efficient, but itÆs not on big linear acceleration. The floor is more like a ramp, and there are five chairs. My command seatÆs in the center, with tactical to the left and astrogation to the right. The pilot sits up front. The fifth is the æguestÆ chair, behind me. Like all seats, itÆs on a swivel mount for when we change directions and whatÆs the floor is being turned into the ceiling. That chair is empty.

Dr. ToyamaÆs taken over the navigation station. SheÆs pointedly ignoring everyone. Seriously, you loony! YouÆre like a priestess of Science! Help us communicate with your God! The boarding craft are getting closer. It looks like the aliens are doing experiments with the Field. ThatÆs interesting. I canÆt really tell what they look like. Those spacesuits of theirs are thick and armoured, canÆt really get anything useful at this distance.

TheyÆre getting too close. What, should they just be allowed in? Should we surrender? Are we supposed to fight them off in close combat?

Our guest has chosen to stand ahead of me, between my chair and the PilotÆs station. SheÆs not obscuring the main screen, since the bridgeÆs floor does tilt downward, but sheÆs short. Her naked feet are on cold bare metal. Dr. ToyamaÆs thick parka on her shoulders is more like a big fluffy coat.

God, what am I supposed to do?! Um. Yes, thatÆs right. IÆm asking.

Our guest has been standing there for the past several hours, not moving a muscle. This bridge is cold with silence. None of us have dared to disturb the stillness with our meaningless mortal sounds. This place feels like a chapel. Or a tomb.

Esperanza is motioning at me with her hands, flicking from side to side, glaring and silently begging for me to speak up. Changor doesnÆt dare look back to express impatience. Hey. Damn. Dr. ToyamaÆs not going to let herself receive any such signals. Fine. IÆm the captain.

ôUm...ö

CanÆt She read my mind already or anything? Can She? Ugh. If so, then IÆm already screwed. Might as well get it over with. ôExcuse me? Ah. Your... Worship?ö I recall thatÆs what they used to call the head of a religion, right? The Papa? The Holy Father? So today, that would mean... ôHoly Mother?ö

ôI am no oneÆs mother.ö She replied.

Oh sweet serenity my heart just stopped. Wait. ThatÆs just my own panic attack. ôI beg your forgiveness...ö

ôI am the Sixteenth.ö She turns around slightly to look at me. Her face is buried under the hood of the white parka, but I can see stray blue hair around a face almost as pale as the threads. Her eyes are glowing red. ôI forgive nothing.ö

ôOh god.ö I am not fucking trained in this, okay? Xenocourse is a overall a secular education. ôIÆm sorry. But, I have to ask...ö

ôI have no such right. I am your servant, not the opposite.ö

That makes no sense. I guess something in my face showed it, for She nodded briefly then turns her back on me again. ôI am but a protector of his legacy.ö She whispers softly. I feel it. SheÆs so sad. SheÆs so huge. SheÆs so adorably small in that parka I suddenly want to hug her. Her presence fills the void.

Huh? I turn to look at Dr. Toyama for a moment. What does Hawaii have to do with anything?

I hear a loud æahem!Æ from the other side. Ezperanza waves at me to continue. I already started the conversation, might as well finish it, right? ôMy apologies anyway. But these aliens... shouldnÆt we be doing something about them? Do we have to fight?ö

ôYes.ö

I want to laugh and cry at the same time. ôHow?ö WeÆre no match for that ship out there. ThereÆs only five of us, against all those aliens in the assault boats. Um. Six. I guess sheÆs more than worth more than all of them combined. ôI must ask, please, we donÆt want violence. CanÆt you just make them go away or something like that?ö SheÆs already defending us with her AT-field, but why is she allowing those two in?

ôI am forbidden.ö She exhales softly and clenches her dainty fists. ôIf I were to use the light of my soul to attack, I would destroy not just this ship... but the promise to Him. I would rob you of the power you possess.ö

ôPower?ö What power?

ôBut.. you canÆt just not DO anything. Who knows what these aliens would do to us?ö

ôThey would kill those who resist, enslave the rest, and eat the flesh of those they consider useless.ö She says without emotion. ôThey would seek out our home and do it to our families, our children.ö

ôReally?ö Esperanza gasps. ôI mean. If thatÆs so, then we really need a miracle!ö

ôI cannot.ö

ôAll that is necessary for evil to triumph is for good me... um, the good... to do nothing.ö I say, in as scolding a manner I could dare to living god. I only I could remember those old prayers that my mother used to say. The Humansphere is a society that has no need to call for divine intervention to excuse the tumult in human lives, but at the same time one that legally recognizes the existence of a divine being.

ôThey will not.ö I can definitely hear a touch of anger in her tone. I wish I can be sympathetic.

ôYouÆre letting them in! Why? Is this a test?ö Is this really the time to be thinking of at constitutes morality? WhatÆs good to a god? Maybe, perfection is the definition. To fail at that, is evil? So, what? We donÆt matter if we donÆt live up to those standards?

ôIf you wish it to be.ö

ôCan you give me a straight answer? IÆm begging you. Tell us what to do.ö

ôI cannot.ö SheÆs hugging herself. I can feel her pain. ôI do not want you to die. You are free. You will die free, if that is what you decide.ö

ôDecide? WhatÆs there to decide?! I want to-...ö And then suddenly it hits me. Why me? Almost anyone else can do the job attached to this seat.

ThatÆs the point. IÆm Earth-born. I have the obligation. It wasnÆt divine intervention, I was foolish enough to be there are the right place and the right time to be available. Do you believe in fate? If you have faith, then the answer should be NO. Only we can carry out GodÆs Plan.

ôCan I tell you what to do?ö Wait. Semantics. ôMay I tell you what to do and would you do it?ö

ôYes.ö

ôThatÆs gr-... wait. I may have made a mistake.ö Legends are full of fools who fail to be sufficiently specific when dealing with powers unknowable. ôTo which part of the second question?ö

ôThe first part.ö

I sag into my seat. So close. I put my hands over my face. ôWhy are you letting these aliens in?ö

ôI must be captured.ö She replies. ThereÆs a bloodthirsty edge to her tone. ôI must know more.ö

She is the Sixteenth. Hmm. ôI heard that if this part of you... dies... your memories would return to Him on Earth.ö

ôThat is true.ö

I begin to rub my forehead. The problems just keep on multiplying. ôIf we survive, and we reach the Dragon Cluster, we wonÆt be able to build a gate leading back to Earth.ö Only She can tear through the universe and connect two points in space through the duality of Her existence as both mortal and divine. Earth might get sufficient warning in time, if She... these aliens are making me angry. No. SheÆs Ours, you bastards. This goes beyond flatlander, belter, whatever. WeÆre all human beings. Their gods are not our gods. Our angels who choose are not to be traded for convenience. They serve. We protect. We have an obligation too.

ThereÆs something tickling at the edge of my perception. I look at Dr. Toyama, who fully approves of wanting to know more. She adjusts her glasses just so, and light glints off them. Of course she disapproves. She wants to live long enough to grant her knowledge to others. I peer over Her head to see ChangorÆs fists clenched tight over the controls. What does he want? HelenaÆs alive, but she could have died. So easily. We all die so easily. I can almost feel it. ItÆs not revenge he wants, but to make sure nothing like that happens again. EsperanzaÆs afraid, but in that fear she wants to hit back. She wants to hit and hit and hit and blank out her mind, to go where no fear can touch her. Absolute Terror is always deep within all of us.

I remember.

Xenocourse. Before knowing what is the other, first it is important to ask: What is Man?

Mankind is the last Angel, created by God to serve his will upon the cosmos. Mankind is One Being, separated by the Ego Border, made to live free and discover all that is to be known. We are born of Him and in the end return to Him, and we are all deserving of Paradise.

ôYou need to be captured. You ûwant- to be captured?ö I asked, amazed. ôWe donÆt have the right to take that responsibility away from you.ö I point at the screen. ôBut, do you really care what happens to that ship out there? Do you really need to be captured as you are?ö

I can feel her smile. ItÆs small, but itÆs there. WeÆre making her proud. WeÆre not her children. She is both first and last of her kind. But she loves us all the same.

I blink. Several times. ôI think... I have a plan.ö

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ôAlien-Technologist! Report! Do you hear me?!ö

The Field was now fully opaque, black as space, except for rapidly whirling flickers of what looks like white outlines of eyes. The mystery of the thing was going past what was useful to the Patriarchy to a danger to the Patriarchy. Srul-Captain was seriously considering just ramming his ship into it at two-thirds of lightspeed. What could survive that? Even it did have properties similar to a General Products hull, then it would at least be a Heroic death.

More sensibly however, was getting this information to the Patriarchy. The shipÆs sensors were thoroughly confused. Space was being thoroughly bent over there, but utterly dissimilar to that of a gravity well. It would be simplicity itself to alter the vector of the gravity planer and retreat.

Retreat was logical. It also smelled like cowardice.

HeÆd already ordered the Pilot to send the Scout Ship into a semi-random course around the prey. If, unlike his own sensors those in the ship could see out, they still wouldnÆt be able to effectively target his ship. The bridge smelled like death. Ignored fallen on the floor was the TelepathÆs corpse, his throat torn out. The Captain licked blood out of the side of his mouth. HeÆd had enough of the lesser KzinÆs moaning about the doom that waits for the Patriarchy. Such cowardice and treason, the useless son of a sthondat should have suffered more before dying. Srul-Captain snorted, he hadnÆt bothered even to take the ears of such a waste.

He growled speculatively and flicked his thick hairless tail from side to side. ôThis thing. I want it destroyed. First, prepare a message to the Fleet.ö Then pointing from Communications to the Weapons Officer. ôWe will use ALL our missiles.ö

ôI hear, Srul-Captain.ö Ship-Gunner dutifully replied. Of course to keep the missiles from explosively fratriciding each other into uselessness, heÆd have to calculate carefully their vectors. Maybe they should strike all around the strange enemy globe?

Suddenly all felt as if a cold wave passed through space. Through the hull, into the bones, then out the other side. ôCaptain!ö Ship-Gunner hissed in alarm. The enemy was no longer opaque. ôThe Field!ö

The protective field was gone. ôBurn the-!ö the Captain yowled.

Then his eyes widened on really seeing the enemy on the monitor. The spindle-shaped ship was oriented away from its direction of motion. The flash of light had already faded. ôManoeuver us! Anywhere!ö

The ship lurched on its axis and began moving. The speed of light was about three hundred thousand kilometres per second in space. The unbreakable speed limit was simply just how fast the universe can update itself. They were two million kilometres away from the prey ship. Good enough to avoid that hasty attack.

He grinned fiercely. Fools. He would break their ship and glean his glory from their carcasses!

Then an awful light shone upon the control dome of the ship, and the captain was on fire, and the hull blew out, and the ship was cut in half.

For the AngelÆs Thimble had not aimed at the Kzinti ship, but where it ûwould- dodge.

To someone who remembered fighting beings of spacetime and probability with her bare hands, calculating the possible future of one ship was a ChildÆs play.


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The seedship has five hundred colonists stacked in its main hull. It would be about three more decades until we would reach the Draco Trinary. Normally, that is. Now thatÆs too dangerous. We donÆt know how soon before the other aliens receive whatever transmissions the enemy sent and send another ship for pickup. If the enemy sent our vector, itÆs extremely simple to calculate our destination.

ôThat is true, but it is more likely they would prefer to calculate our point of origin and head there.ö Dr. Toyama had said. ôThis one ship of ours is not a very big prize. The enemy, I think, for their strange reactionless drive is still very much limited by the speed of light.ö

ôIt depends on which is closer.ö Ezperanza hissed. ôThe Jurmugand Stars? Or Midgard.ö

Note to self: decide what weÆre going to name the colony. SolÆs policy on letting settlers name their chosen stars over what the astronomers on Earth call them relies on have gates being able to send star chart updates back. ItÆs going to be a while before anyone gets any news about it. Maybe even never.

ôShould we even continue on this vector?ö At only seven years in, we could still turn around or head for another place entirely. For all we know, that place was already enemy territory.

ôYou decide.ö She says firmly. ôI will help.ö

ôAre you allowed to do that?ö

ôThou shalt not murder.ö She says, but to herself. ôI will no longer be here.ö She tilts her head to the side. ôI will give you the Super Solenoid Engine.ö

Changor stands on tiptoes excitedly. ôYou can do that? You can turn this ship into a first-generation seedship? ItÆs that simple?!ö

ôYes.ö

ôHuh. No offense meant, but why are all new seedships less capable?ö

ôThe Solenoid Engine is a biomechanical engine. The Super Solenoid Engine is an organ.ö She says. She tilts her head to the other side. Like a puppy. Too. Damn. Cute. ôOne of my organs.ö

ôI am suddenly much less excited about this idea.ö Changor says quickly.

ôIt is no problem. This has been foreseen.ö

Past the cold cylinders of the cryostage modules is the Engine core. The Solenoid Engine generates minute amounts of antimatter. Not much, but itÆs able to do so for a long time. ItÆs cold down here, and IÆve always thought these big tubes and pipes were far too vein-like for comfort.

ôWark. Wak.ö

A troop of Engineer Penguins greet us. Doctor Toyama is officially also the ShipÆs Chief Engineer when Dr. BrinÆs in coldsleep but the Engine itself really is maintained more by the Uplifted penguins. TheyÆve adapted to space quite easily and theyÆre LunaÆs predator species. They swim in low-g hunting the photosynthetic void-fish. More of the Artificial Evolution LabsÆ side projects.

Still, intelligent and reliable and surprisingly able to withstand great ranges of temperature and environment, theyÆve been with us even before the first seedship was built. They were designed alongside the first-generation, in fact.

The penguins receive the orders to shut down the reactor and enthusiastically float around flipping switches and turning dials with those hook-shaped claws on the end of their flipper-wings. TheyÆre very smart, but not human-smart. There are those who keep the Engineer Penguins as pets, but itÆs more like those penguins recognize what a rewarding job it is just to sit around and look cute. How smart are they? We donÆt know. They donÆt form societies or make rituals or their own language like humans do, but instead have been made to integrate seamlessly into our own. They can understand human speech and while they canÆt speak it, can write it. Are they incapable or just choose not to follow complex reasoning?

They seem happier than most humans, at least. No angst, no fear of the future, no hesitation about social interaction.

ôWeÆre able to live in peace....ö I murmur. EveryoneÆs attention is drawn to me (except for the penguins) and I embarrassedly follow with ôWe can do it. Why canÆt we just live in peace instead of having to call them The Enemy?ö

ôWe didnÆt make that choice.ö Helena says to me. SheÆs with us in a float-chair. ItÆs going to take some time to clone her new legs.

The Solenoid Engine itself is this big armoured sphere. ThereÆs an opening for the control rod and thereÆs orange-red light from the inside even when itÆs shut down. IÆm somewhat disturbed to realize that the size of the hole for the control rod was a perfect fit for Her. SheÆs lowered and the heavy cap covers the hole. WonÆt she suffocate in there? ItÆs freezing cold in here. Without the parka, I can see that SheÆs looks quite young, as if barely out of Her teens. Her form is mortal but she doesnÆt seem to feel the cold. On second thought, just suffocating to death is the least of the many lethal events waiting inside.

It didnÆt take long. She looks as unperturbed as ever, but itÆs strange. Does she feel a little bit more ærealÆ now? Her red eyes seem slightly duller. Dr. Toyama asks the penguins to bring out another float-chair, and She shakes visibly as she sits.

Back to the center of the ship we go. Her coldsleep chamber is much more robust than the standard issue. Even should all systems fail and sheÆs frozen, her cell wouldnÆt die, she tells us. She will wake exactly when it is time to wake. She smiles at us. Humans have free will. Beings such as her, those that our law recognizes as the pantheon of Man, do not have such a luxury. It is fair, they do not pay taxes. Was that a joke? That smile of hers...

ôNo!ö Dr. Toyama shouts suddenly, surprising us all. She steps up and hugs her tight. ôThis isnÆt fair. I wonÆt let you!ö SheÆs actually sobbing. ôIÆve known you all my life, Ayanami-sensei... please. DonÆt do this.ö

ôItÆs all right, Rin-rin.ö She says soothing, patting the scientist on the back.

ôI donÆt want you to die.ö

ôI cannot die.ö

ôThe Seventeenth wonÆt be you! She wonÆt be the one who taught me how to fly a kite, the one who graded my exams, who gave me that talk on virginity while in the middle of the city council, the one who failed me three times before I could graduate, the one who punched that Service Colonel in the face... no! I wonÆt let you go!ö

ôYou must.ö

ôIf I can just do it in your place, IÆd do it! ThatÆs it! Let me do it!ö

ôI refuse.ö

Dr. ToyamaÆs always been reserved around us. SheÆs never been unpleasant, but weÆve come to know we were all more comfortable if she were by herself. Coldly efficient, weÆre all content to be colleagues. SheÆs the type that seems not to need any friends. SheÆd never before let her emotions go like this, blubbering and weeping... and damn it. It's just the cold. It's irritating my eyes. Yes.

ôThank you.ö She whispers. ôI do this to protect you.ö She looks up and our gazes meet. ôThis is the path I have chosen for myself.ö

I grimace. Sacrifices are sometimes needed that others may survive. Those who give of themselves, we call them heroes. ItÆs not supposed to be easy. ôDoctor...ö

ôShut up.ö Dr. Toyama whispers back.

ôDonÆt disrespect what this means.ö

The Lunarian clings even tighter, her shoulders trembling, then agonizingly let go.

ôThank you. I will not forget.ö She says as she steps back into the coldsleep capsule.

Dr. Toyama listlessly operates the controls. The pod slides shut and cold fog obscures the person within. Then, the scientist turns around and angrily says to me ôYou better do this.ö

Nearby is the lever that will launch the pod into space. All seedships are designed like this, only now do we recognize the reason. I put on a resolute face and approach the lever.

I put my hand over the lever and I canÆt push it down.

I donÆt know how long IÆve been standing here.

I think of distant Earth, blue and innocent again. I think of the great unknown, like a tide of wild fanged beasts circling in the dark around a campfire. The human is a fragile thing. Humanity... we are strong because of the fearful little animal inside that will do anything to survive. We are strong because others lend their strength that we may in turn give of ours when they need it most.

Slam. The lever goes down.

Whoosh. The capsule inside the sealed pod is sucked down and out. Up in the bridge, IÆm sure thereÆs this blinking light to make us notice a distress beacon.

ôWe canÆt let them get away with this, can we?ö Helena whispers bitterly from behind me.

ôI almost wish those bastards find Sol.ö Changor replies while putting his arms around her. ôLet them come. WeÆll make them bleed. Then we'll find their homeworld and make them scream.ö

Dr. Toyama still has her eyes shut tight. SheÆs still trying not to cry. Esperanza goes over and hesitates. She takes a deep breath and puts her hand over Dr. Toyama, flinching already for the woman to push her away. Dr. Toyama doesnÆt reject the overture.

ôAliens. Hah.ö the scientist whispers bitterly.

ôWe canÆt waste the time SheÆs bought us.ö I say. ôWeÆve got to be strong enough to see it through.ö I look around at the other pods, unlike the empty one before us these were stacked along the side. Humanity must spread out, that was command. Never again must it feel the touch of extinction. Xenocourse taught the history of mankindÆs first encounter with profoundly alien lifeforms. ItÆs the pain of that lesson that makes it so unpopular. ôWe canÆt let it happen again.ö

We set aside war and weÆre better for it. We have the weapons. We just forgot how to use them.

We just now need the nerve to pick them up again.

Listen to me, you murderers among the stars! We study war no more. WeÆve become too good at it. The universe does not deserve the plague we could become. We're written our fates onto the bones of dead gods and burned them into nothing. DonÆt make us open that cursed box again, weÆve suffered so much to force it shut. ItÆs going to hurt us more than it hurts you, but damn it all, weÆll laugh as it bursts open and burrows into our souls.

Faintly in the distance I hear the solemn warbling of penguin-song. These days it's only the penguins that have a battle-hymn.


O​


Alien-Technologies Officer groaned awake and tasted blood in his mouth. Slowly he looked around. The boarding shuttle was cut in half, and the Heroes spilled out. He was piloting the craft and had secured himself to the seat. There was a buzzing in his ears.

After a while, he realized that it was outside, to the left. He turned his head painfully and realized it was coming from the communications circuits. Weakly he reached over to push a switch and heard a Kzin voice.

ôThis is the Cruiser Thunderous Roar.ö he heard. ôAre there Heroes who can hear us?ö

ô... this is... Alien-Technologist of... scout sh.. Blood Seeker...ö he managed to say, before darkness consumed him.

He woke up later being tended to be a Kzinti doctor. The Kzin was only worried if his patient was well enough to report to the Captain about what happened. Time-dilation effect had thrown him just as the Cruiser had arrived in response to the report sent by the scout ship.

ôThat Field...ö he moaned, flattening his ears in fear.

As expected, there was much interest in that defensive field that he encountered. Distressingly he couldnÆt offer any useful information. Then, he was told that among the remains picked up was an alien cold-sleep capsule. His ears flicked up in interest. Taking an abased pose he asked ôHonorable Captain, I beg of you, allow me to interrogate this creature.ö

ôYou have no experience in the interrogation and training of slaves.ö the captain replied with his teeth bared in a sneer. ôYou have been useless in gaining anything useful from the loss of a shipful of Heroes. Why should I honor you with this?ö

ôI know how we may defeat this Field. I just need confirmation...ö

The captain, a large dark-streaked Kzin scarred from many honor-duels, was less greedy for glory. He could consider the benefits of sharing some honor for the sake of future advantage. ôSo be it. We have calculated where the prey may have come from. If your knowledge proves worthwhile, then you may find a place in the Conquest Fleet.ö

Alien-TechnologistÆs ears flicked up in surprise. That was far more gracious than heÆd expected. ôYou are too kind, mighty captain.ö

ôI will have my best trainer do the interrogation. You will provide the questions about the technology and make them useful for the Patriarchy. If you do not succeed, I will kill you.ö

Eagerly, he bowed in obeisance. ôI will not disappoint you, Mrrosk-Captain.ö

ôSee that you donÆt. Now kneel and accept my mark!ö

Swiftly, Alien-Technologist did so. He closed his eyes as the captain urinated over him. Now, he was under the direct protection of the captain and should be free to do his work without having to be distracted by honor-challenges from the crew. With his face still respectfully bowed, his face out of view, he bared his teeth in glee. The new slave-animals would learn to fear his vengeance. He would stop at nothing to pull out their secrets, and earn his name as the Kzin burn their worlds into eternal servitude to the supreme beings of the galaxy.


o​

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violetshadows

Well-Known Member
#11
So is Shinji still alive, or not; I'm a little confused. Ayanami talked like he was dead, but I sort of get the impression that he merged with Adam and Lilith, only this time he refused to drag the rest of humanity with him.

Also liked the bit with the penguins.
 

eliar

Well-Known Member
#12
Uh ok many questions after this snippet...Him on Earth seems to be Shinji but I would guess he is dead? Incapacitated? It would be ironic indeed if he suffered the 40k Emperor's fate i.e. 9/10ths dead in a cryo chamber.

Rei as an ultimate defence of the seedship seems to imply that there is only one seedship at any time traveling to establish a colony? If I remember my cannon correctly there can only be one Rei active at any time and if she is killed the soul fragment returns to Lillith and then another clone is activated? Or are there more seedships out there and this just happened to have a Rei onboard?

How much time has it been since the "cannon" events exactly? If this is yhe 16nth clone and there are already many establised colonies both in and out of the Solar System then it must have been centuries.

anyway I cant wait to see more of this...I had seen some time ago another attempt to cross Eva with a space opera story but it was nixed by the author in favour of another cross...I hope this goes further than the first chapter or that you pick up again the naruto story
 

bluepencil

that's why it's trash can, not trash cannot
#13
2124 - 2016 = 108 years after Third Impact (rounding up) and 105 years since the Shift.

According to known space canon, there are creatures in hyperspace who eat ships that try to jump too close to a gravity well. There are no such creatures around Sol, because there's a much larger predator sleeping overhead. There's a little cheap tourist-trap sushi restaurant somewhere in Turkey n by a young man of no specific ethnicity. There's a young red-haired girl in just being born in America, she's going to be genius in mathematics. As conscription happens as the Man-Kzin War begins, the former is probably going to get pulled into the infantry like life's little bitch and the latter will grow up into the new Navy.

Reincarnation works. There's now actual proven immortal souls for everyone and finally something to really receive, contain, protect, and hand down memories of past lives.
 

Jorlem

Well-Known Member
#14
I just read the version up on ff.net, and I noticed a typo: At one point, you typed 'Angel's Pencil' instead of 'Angel's Thimble'.

I'm a fan of Niven's Known Space series, so I'm looking forward to reading more of this. Thanks. :)
 

Mercsenary

Well-Known Member
#15
bluepencil said:
2124 - 2016 = 108 years after Third Impact (rounding up) and 105 years since the Shift.

According to known space canon, there are creatures in hyperspace who eat ships that try to jump too close to a gravity well. There are no such creatures around Sol, because there's a much larger predator sleeping overhead. There's a little cheap tourist-trap sushi restaurant somewhere in Turkey n by a young man of no specific ethnicity. There's a young red-haired girl in just being born in America, she's going to be genius in mathematics. As conscription happens as the Man-Kzin War begins, the former is probably going to get pulled into the infantry like life's little bitch and the latter will grow up into the new Navy.

Reincarnation works. There's now actual proven immortal souls for everyone and finally something to really receive, contain, protect, and hand down memories of past lives.
And its going to be AWESOME.

:D
 
#16
Bluepencil, what do you mean by this sentence.

The precise meaning escapes me and I can't find any relevant results using Google or any dictionary's.

 
#17
To be more precise, low-key Xenodite farmer.

(my bad about double posting, didn't get the quot e properly)
 

bluepencil

that's why it's trash can, not trash cannot
#18
Woops, major brain fart. My bad. Not Xenodites, Exodites.

As Eldar civilization neared its Fall, many groups among the Eldar denounced their decadent societies, abandoning their homeworlds in a series of migrations called the Exodus. These Exodites travelled far away from their collapsing civilization, settling many, often harsh worlds.
The degeneration of Eldar society leading to the Fall did not go wholly without resistance. Some, the more far-sighted, began to openly criticise the laxity of their fellow citizens, and to warn against the effect of Chaos cults. These people were mostly ignored or else treated as narrow-minded fools and fanatics. Soon the general collapse of society convinced even the most resolute amongst them that the only end to the steady decline would be in a terrible collapse. Some decided to leave the Eldar worlds, and settle new planets far from Eldar civilization. They were the ones still untainted by the touch of Chaos, and by now they were few. These Eldar are known as the Exodites.
The Exodites purposefully settled worlds where life would be hard. Those among the original Exodites came from all levels of Eldar society, but all were united in their powerful determination to survive. Eventually a new form of society took shape. The Exodites divided into clans each led by a warrior elite. When the Fall came, the Exodite worlds were untouched.
The Exodite Worlds are generally considered backward and rustic compared to the rest of the space-roaming Eldar although they still possess a good deal of high technology. One of the pieces of technology they have maintained is the Infinity Circuit, although on the Exodite worlds these are known as World Spirits and exist in the form grids of stone menhirs, obelisks, and stone circles all crafted from psychoactive crystal. Despite the presence of some technology, these worlds are often agricultural, however, and it is not uncommon for groups of Exodites to exist in a nomadic state, living off roaming herds and seasonal harvests. This is the most common image of the Exodite life. Many Outcasts will find a refuge among these Eldar, who are generally more accepting.
To others, they are the groundwork of a new Eldar Empire on the edge of the galaxy, composed of the descendants of those far-sighted and strong-willed enough to escape the touch of Slaanesh. Biel-tan is one of the chief proponents of the Exodite potential, and will often mobilise its forces in defence of one of the scattered worlds.
 

bluepencil

that's why it's trash can, not trash cannot
#19
Study War no More
Chapter Two


They didn't understand, but then again they weren't expected to understand. This was Mercury, and upon it was EOS base, Sol's primary antimatter production facility. Built so deep in the system's gravity well, it was hoped that even a catacylsm enough to crack the planet would simply sputter, insignificant, into the awesome fount of power that was their Sun.

Overloading their systems to deliberately trigger that event more than worried the solar engineers. This was no S2 Engine, gently doling out antimatter in steady streams. This was a straight-on Siphon, sapping power straight from the heart of the sun. EOS Antimatter production was by itself an inefficient process, requiring almost twice as much energy as what was required to bottle and contain AM packages. The Darksphere colonies of the Outshifters living around the Oort Cloud, unable to partake of the light of the sun, relied on these to transform the cometary ice into heavier elements.

Matter editing wasn't magic. It happened all the time, within the furnaces that were stars. S2 Engines were completely 'clean', requiring only an input of simple hydrogen. EOS Antimatter reactors fed a fusion loop that could produce elements of steadily increasing atomic weights.

Should something happen to the Mercury EOS base, thousands of dark globes around miniature suns would cool down and die. The Siphon was a wormhole straight into the very center of the sun. Under normal operation, the magnetic sheath could just barely hold in that much raw plasma. Doubling it was fifty percent more than the Plant's maximum tolerance.

"System reset complete." said Dr. vanKost, with barely a quaver in his voice. The containment pit was dark, a hold nearly six kilometers deep. The Chief Engineer nodded to his Operations Director and then then flipped a switched. "Containment field engaged, warp zone released."

And there was light.

Even behind his goggles he closed his eyes. Not because of the bright light, but because he expected the whole complex to explode with unbridled starfire.

Three breaths passed and he was still alive. He opened his eyes to see a pillar of sunfire blasting up into space. The containment fields whirred contedtedly. The contained solar flare seemed to pulse timed to a heartbeat.

Operations Director Kolvenbach turned around and bowed to the blue-haired young woman who stepped up to the public address system. "I really don't recommend holding this for more than ten minutes, but... " here he shrugged. "This shouldn't be possible anyway." It was downright Miraculous.

"Thank you." Rei Ayanami bowed back. She stepped up to the microphone. "I am the Sixteenth."

"HELLO THE SEVENTEENTH." the air rumbled, as the soul implanted into the sun pulsed her lifeblood. "I AM THE SIXTH."

"Greetings, Sister. I have come seeking advice."

"I CAN OFFER NO WISDOM FROM WITHIN THESE FIERY DEPTHS. GO AHEAD AND ASK."

Ayanami the Seventeenth explained the rush of memories she gained from the demise of the Sixteenth on the Angel's Pencil. She spoke of the aliens that have come to threaten mankind again, and of their goals. Murder and slavery; how odd. It was rather refreshing again to face a war of conquest, not extermination. The Human Commonality had decided to resist, and how she was gathering information on humanity's options.

"I SEE. HAS HUMANITY BECOME THE PACIFISTIC PLANETMIND YET?"

"No."

"YOU WANT ME TO BLOW UP THEIR SUN."

Gasps all around. "No." Ayanami said firmly.

"... YOU WANT ME TO BLOW UP -ALL- OF THEIR SUNS?"

The Seventeenth brought up memories from Ninth. "Why is that your solution to everything?"

If a solar flare could shrug, it was doing that. "I AM WHAT I AM AND ALL THAT I AM IS AN AYANAMI." the Sixth said. "HAVE YOU TALKED TO MY PREDECESSORS?"

"The Fourth maintain Her vigil over His Body. She refuses to participate in mortal concerns. Her only duty is to remain by His side, as She had sworn in the time before all was remade. The Fifth maintains her experiments deep within Venus. She proposed shelter and secrecy within her clouds. An unoccupied garden world as Earth would still be a target. Our colonies would remain vulnerable. Our sisters within the stargates can only self-annihilate to prevent enemy FTL."

"OUR TASK IS ONLY TO SEE TO THE SURVIVAL OF HUMANITY."

"It is immortal to let the bulk of humanity be killed or enslaved, no matter how short it is in the timescale we must watch. It is not excusable even as a 'learning experience', humanity would still prefer to maintain its sovereignity."

"ARE YOU SURE I CAN NOT BLOW UP THEIR SUNS?"

"No. That would be mass murder." Rei XVIII tilted her head to the side. "-You- are a -sun-. Your region of Absolute Territory maintains sapience in the fractal level. You are using 'can', instead of 'may'. I... am starting to believe that you are not actually capable of blowing up any star. They are too distant. You are attempting to be humorous."

"RUIN MY FUN." the Sixth replied, her tone communicating a pout. Even Ayanami was capable of acquiring and developing new personalities. "GO AWAY . LET THE MEN HAVE FUN MAKING THEIR TOYS. I WILL TRY TO INCREASE ANTIMATTER PRODUCTION FOR THEIR ENGINES, BUT NO MORE."

"You have mine and humanity's gratitude, sister."

"THAT THOUGHT WILL WARM ME AS I SLEEP."

'Am I going to be a wiseass as I get older too?' the Seventeenth wondered.
 

Watashiwa

Administrator
Staff member
#20
BP: This is a Known Space/Eva cross, not a Galactic Civilizations 2 cross. Wiping out star systems is only for Terror Stars to do, not actual stars.

As for the rest... eh. I think that the Ayanami's developing weird ass personalities is amusing, but the Seventeenth's final comment is still odd. I have a few more issues with how you've welded KS and Eva, but I assume that you'll go through that eventually.

One recommendation I did have is for chapter titles: if you want to name them, why not use famous pacifist quotes? The Bible, Gandhi (OUR WORDS ARE BACKED BY NUCLEAR WEAPONS! *cough*) and so forth could make for an interesting thematic system.
 

Ashaman

Well-Known Member
#21
It continues to be interesting, and I'm liking the personality of the 6th, but..

"Thank you." Rei Ayanami bowed back. She stepped up to the microphone. "I am the Sixteenth."

"HELLO THE SEVENTEENTH." the air rumbled, as the soul implanted into the sun pulsed her lifeblood. "I AM THE SIXTH."
and

Rei XVIII tilted her head to the side
Try to keep the numbers right.
 

bluepencil

that's why it's trash can, not trash cannot
#22
I actually forgot what number the Rei on the Angel's Thimble, if she was 16 or 17. I lost the original document when my thumb drive ceased functioning. :p

Anyway, please comment;

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The heavens and the earth had passed away, and in their place comes a new Earth, and new Heaven. So many things had changed, and so much had remained the same - deliberately so - as mankind tried to purge itself of misplaced pride and pointless avarice. People still lived, and loved, and lost, and their children grew up in the many different places that mankind chose to make its home. These children still had to go to school, eventually perhaps to college, and stress over the final exam.

Paulina Kaska had to fight off chewing her standard #2 pencil as she pondered the questions fronting the sheet.

1) What is a Miracle? Give examples.
1a) Why is it that the miracles are very rarely allowed to happen?

2) What is a Legal Entity? Give examples.
2a) How is a Legal Entity different from a Citizen?

3) Do you believe this should be changed? If so, in what way?

In a sense, it was easy. She'd been asked similar sets of questions since elementary school. It seemed the government wanted to make sure everyone had an opinion on these matters that formed the bedrock of the Cohesive HumanSphere. All she had to do now was to fill in the brief acceptable answers. On the other hand, she'd always tried to do her best in every test.

1.
a )
A Miracle is an extraordinary event that happens in contravention of natural law, and or is a direct result of intervention by the being recognized as the God of Mankind, and/or as a result of an approved Extraordinary Measures Request Form #33-A. It is not a right, nor privilege nor a reward.

There are three types of Miracles - causal, edict, and axiomatic. Causal miracles appear to be nothing more than extremely unlikely coincidence, such as cometary collisions in the asteroid belt just so conveniently sent slow-moving asteroids towards the Lagrange points and arriving for easy exploitation just when the first series of Island-2 Shells were finished at the Red Tower Orbitals. Edict miracles are inexplicable and with no visible cause, such as how Mars' core was started spinning again to provide a protective magnetosphere. Axiomatic miracles explicitly violates all known natural laws, such as the cracked singularity that provides Earth-normal gravity to the lunar colony, but whose gravitational boundary has a sharp vanishing point.

B ) While it is every human's right to apply for a Miracle, such requests are not often granted for the sake of free will and self-improvement. Humanity already has all the tools needed to face up to any problem it may face, and with intelligence and willpower create new solutions. Mankind is the miracle, and when the God of Man acts, it is by burning the potential of mankind. The early days of the After Genesis Calender saw the most open use of miracles, and no matter how people have tried, there was a near-zero birthrate even as that generation suffered from no physical degeneration. It is not our generation that pays for the miracles, but those yet unborn. To waste human potential in frivolous requests is horrid.

2.
a ) A Legal Entity (separate from the legal entity, which is a simplification for suits involving large groups of people; such as for corporations) is a being whose existence is a Miracle. They that have all full human rights under law without being human, whose existence is in service to the human race. The Penguin gestalt is a Legal Entity, for example. A single penguin is not very intelligent, but their species as a whole is to be treated as one person. Another Legal Entity is the being known as deity Rei Ayanami, without whom Faster Than Light travel is impossible. And, of course, Our God is also a Legal Entity.

B ) The main difference between a Citizen and Legal Entity is that a Legal Entity may also be thought of as the communal property of humanity and must be protected as such. They are answerable only to the Human Commonality, and it is unlawful for any human nation to attempt to restrict their passage. They are entitled to free passage and lodging wherever they may go, and need not pay taxes to any government of man. A Legal Entity may be called only to a Commonality Tribunal, not any local court of law.

3)
There is no reason to change the Legal Entity laws at this point, due in part to the very few numbers of LEs and their role in making our interstellar civilization even possible. A future problem may be from how artificial or augmented life may be integrated into our society. While the trappings of being a Legal Entity apply to strong Artificial Intelligence or cyborg and genemodders, their existence is not Miraculous. That requirement should eventually be done away with, having the Legal Entity laws as dealing with the immortals in our society. Renaming it is also a suggestion. It is inevitable that there will those be immortals who would prefer individual values, and while it is best they be treated as Citizen Entities, a status guideline such as Alternate Entities may be required. Those who do not have individual identities may be known as Composite Entities.

Paulina looked at her watch. It took her less than ten minutes. There were four more questions, dealing with the Propety Laws on an artificial habitat, and the issues of colonial independence. She licked her lips and prepared to sweat for her grade.

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The legalism is kind of eh, I'll sleep on it a bit. The only reason to me it could work because of the quasi-religious nature of the Commonality. Shades of the old religions survive, though Hinduism and Buddhism are oddly more popular despite that they have proof of but one God. The presence of Ayanami means that God can't move as One because it would harm Creation, but it's perfectly fine to watch out for much smaller aspects and presences.

Please think up more Miracles.

The Commonality Council is more like a super-UN, and there are different philosophies and governments around Sol. They still tend to look down on each other, but not acrimoniously.

Mercury:
EOT Base
-- > zen laboratories


Venus:
Cloud City
Magma City
---> life exploration, genetic manipulation

Earth
Red Tower Orbital
University of Luna
---> government seat, ship and gate-building

Mars
Olympus
Red Frontier
---> farming, mining, medium industry

Ceres
Chandrilla Base
---> habitat construction

Jupiter
Europa
Titan
---> hydrocarbons, energy capture

Uranus
Cyclops Base
---> perennial energy research, out-system depot

Neptune
Mermaid Base
---> helium-3 siphon, out-system depot

Pluto and other icy planetoids
Penguin Marches
---> penguin parks and recreation



The Penguin Gestalt is, to put it mildly, huge. They have a representative on the Human Commonality and they get four votes; one for Sol, and one for each of Earth's other colonies. By default they get the useless ice worlds on a settled system which they then transmute into their ice paradise(s). Imagine the geth with a dash of orkish enthusiasm, okay? One penguin isn't too smart, more like a mechanical engineering savant, but all together they're the only ones who understand how the fuck humanity's quasi FTL drives actually work.

Let's say like in Known Space, the Outsiders and the Puppeteers sell hyperdrives to humanity anyway. You'd get penguins trying to strap hyperdrives to themselves trying to leap from system to system in a grand game of tag. They never really got over how they're flightless birds, though working in microgravity is close enough.

Penguins have mild telekinesis focused on the tips of their claws, which allow for extremely fine manipulation.



... oh god, now I'm tempted to uplift other animals and give them other Team Fortress archeypes.


Humanity here is not exactly pacifistic or utopian, but it's still a society such as what Nagisa in SnW40k would hate. It's a humanity that's stopped reaching for glory, stagnant and secure in the patronizing glow of their distant but undemanding God. They've tamed themselves, and part of why his Shadow Moon initiative was to ensure there would always be an enemy to prod humanity to further growth.

No Singularity or Ascension because humanity's been there and realized they didn't need it or want it. Check out Gurren Lagann Parallel Works 8, and how LordGenome decided to turn on his Spiral Knights. It's kind of like that.
 

Steel

Well-Known Member
#23
A humanity that turns from progress, a humanity with a visible god that doesn't make people say 'Clarke's Third Law'...they pretty much deserve whatever shits on their chest.
 

bluepencil

that's why it's trash can, not trash cannot
#24
I kind of like to subvert the irrational hate that tends to get delivered to inoffensive societies. Why do they 'deserve' being shat on?

Humanity's become Space Dwarfs. They ask 'why' first before doing something, then do it to the hilt. It's only been a one hundred and eight years since Impact, their FTL is gate-based. It still takes decades to reach the next stars. They do have colonies, you know. It's just that humanity has no reason anymore to wage futile wars of ego against each other.

Their in-system tech is already pretty good. Their lifespan has doubled. I haven't written it yet, but they've got cheap teleporter tech that makes going from Earth to Mars to any colony as simple as switching hallways. There are no laws governing genetic manipulation on Venus, except that if you want it to be communicable to the next generation you've got to get a permit. There are Gundam-style space colonies in the Lagrange Points and in the Oort Cloud a light-year away. They've got a sapient Sun.

In this manner humanity needs never fear being extinct again because they can just redefine what it means to be 'human life'. Is it to exist on a humanoid shell? Can they be human when they're fractal patterns simulating whole universes on the layers of a thousand thousand suns? Do they really need to do all of this -now-?

They've got progress, but glory? I want to examine here just what constitutes glory? Do you need it; will being a hero bring as much joy as seeing your young child watch in awe his first sunrise? Which do you need more; furious determination or solid discipline?

Humanity here isn't the Culture, but always at the back of their minds is the whisper that they could be... but what's easy to get isn't valued as highly. It's only been 108 years, the frontier's still fresh. Think of the mindset of a frontier family; they'd just as well have them Injuns just leave them alone. All them big Navy battleships ain't much good on the prairie, are they?


I don't like to go there, but it's more like how Bin Laden crowed victory over the wicked and complacent regime that would never be able to invade and cow his country when even Russia couldn't manage it.

Awakening a Sleeping Giant for a more stale aphorism.

Civilization means being able to walk down the street without being murdered. It also means the necessary mechanisms of society and economy to enable the calm, structured annihilation of your enemies.



edit:
Although, yes, I do intend to 'punish' them for their complacency and have the colonies fall to the Kzinti. Since it's only been at most 30-60 years since they've been established, they still lack most of the industry needed to put up much of a fight or raise a guerrilla campaign. End result: a lot of people getting eaten.

A crisis of faith when one has a provable God is something I'm interested in developing. Even when you know where souls go... would that drive some people into suicidal acts of bravery when they're reassured of reincarnation, or apathy because trying to die for a nationalistic ideal means nothing in the end. Good or bad, everybody goes to the same place.
 

violetshadows

Well-Known Member
#25
Very interesting, in the sliding scale of happiness vs self-actualization humanity has largely chosen happiness: they're become hedonistic without the immoral decadence. Some might complain, but this as a choice actually works for me; what I'm really interested in though is how they respond to a proven god like you mentioned, especially in times of stress: is faith still a part of their culture or has it been subsumed by empirical fact; it's true that they know they have a god, but has faith become a conscious decision to trust in it, despite the pain and uncertainty inherent in the comming invasion?
 
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