Naruto Tag

Meinos Kaen

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#1
Well, what can I sayà After I published No Reading they suggested this a number of times but I always refused because I donÆt follow DC muchà Then I read a DCxNaruto crossover that sucked hard. So, I told myself: æHell, I didnÆt know much about Marvel eitherÆ. Before I began studying to prepare the Crossover. So, meet No ReadingÆs sister fic. A DC Crossover. Tag. Enjoy!

Prologue

ôNghàö

It was something incredible how one never finished learning in his life. About everything around him, about his own selfà In NarutoÆs case, about his body. Never in his life he would have ever thought that his body could feel so heavy. His arms, in particular. They felt like they were as heavy as lead.

ôHowà How can this beà?ö His opponent was probably having his same thoughts. Long gone was the immortal who controlled the mighty Kyuubi. The first Uchiha, the last Uchiha. Madara. Long gone was the man who could control time and space with his techniques so to appear basically invincible. Both he and his opponent were now reduced to one desperate struggle, punching each other till someone fell.

ôà Ehà Tired?ö Naruto this time remembered to pull back his arm, actually adding some more force into it. The hit was strong enough to sent MadaraÆs face jerking to the right, hard. One tooth and more blood came flying out of his mouth. The Uchiha was shocked for two seconds. But he retaliated immediately, gritting his teeth. He didnÆt possess much physical strength compared to his younger opponent, but he had experience. He knew where to hit to hurt him. A lot.

ôAhhh!ö Naruto let out a little scream when Madara hit him in the stomach. Right at the mouth, making him shot his head forward because of the enormous pain. The Uchiha finds enough strength for another blow. He joins his hands and hits Naruto under the chin with all the strength he manages to gather. ôà!ö Soreness, pain, damage. Everything concentrates in one blow that sends Naruto stumbling back and then falling on his back. So weak was the blow and the two fighters. Naruto falls on his back slowly, like a doll.

The blonde finds himself on the ground, staring at the nigh sky, where once was the ceiling of the enormous cave where the fight had started. Now it was just a huge, smoking, burned crater. The immortal panted heavily, and his head slowly started to look around. All destroyed. It had been really a harsh battle.

Young Naruto had learned of a way to defeat him just after the sacrifice of many of his friends, who had tried to come before him. Last, the only other living Uchiha beside him. A young prodigy that he had wanted to raise as his own, but his plan backfired when he and his team had turned on him. No matter, of course. The boy had fought well, but against him, all had been useless.

But he had managed to leave a message. A message that young Naruto had managed to understand. He left him the secret of the Sharingan. The Sharingan, the Magenkyou Sharinganà It wasnÆt simple illusion, or nijutsu. The Sharingan made the user able to manipulate space and time to a certain extent.

Tsukuyomi manipulated space and time, moving an enemyÆs consciousness inside an alternate dimension over which just the one possessing the Sharingan had complete control. Was it born with the Sharingan or it had been always there? He himself didnÆt know.

Amaterasu manipulated space. He opened a portal from the deepest recesses of the TsukuyomiÆs dimension, its hell on heart, and from there unleashed the black flame that never stopped burning.

Susanooà Uchiha Itachi really was unique. If it hadnÆt been for his illness, he believed he would have surpassed him too. Truly the strongest Uchiha ever. Susanno was a time-space jutsu, a summoning jutsu. It allowed him to summon the god of the TsukuyomiÆs dimension to do battle for him.

As for Madaraà His eyes made him immortal. He had learned to manipulate space and time no longer just in the other dimension, but time and space of his own body, so closely connected to it after centuries. In battle he manipulated his own space, shifting parts of his body away to avoid damage. He lived so long because he had learned that even his own body could be subject to the SharinganÆs rule in the TsukuyomiÆs dimension. And as such, he always could keep it young.

The boy had learnedà And had come prepared. At first, the boy had managed to hit him a few times thanks to his Frog Katas. Even he couldnÆt predict something invisible, such as nature chakra. It was invisible even to his eyes. But he had never been one for close range combat, after all. After he unleashed Tsukuyomi on his feeble mind just as he threw his strongest technique, the Rasen Shuriken, he thought to have the battle wonà But little did he know that he hadnÆt been aiming at him at all, from the beginning. Its target had always been the statue where the other eight Bijuu had been trapped into.

The statue shattered to pieces and dust, releasing the enormous masses of sentient chakra, who not possessing a body, needing time to make one back, obeyed their basic instincts. They lunged at him. He screamed as demonic chakra ravaged his body, burned him to its very core, but most importantly, it infected his body and the area around him with an evil, foreign chakra. It made him cut off from the Tsukuyomi, from the other dimension, disturbing the delicate flow that existed between the two. He couldnÆt use his full powers anymore, and god knew if he ever would be able to again.

From there, things had escalated. Without his invulnerability, Madara was just like any other Uchiha. Techniques upon techniques had been unleashed, destroying the landscape around them, till they ended up spent, hitting each other like tired brawlers after minutes of fightingà And that exactly what had happened.

ôAnfà Anfàö The last Uchiha looked around himself, observing the destruction, understanding its implication. Understanding that for the first time in his life someone had pushed him over the edge. Someone had de-structured him. Hurt him more than he could have ever thought. Made him weak and vulnerable. He slowly turned his gaze back to Naruto. ôYouÆre incredibleà Boyàö

ô...ö Naruto just kept on staring at the sky, while Madara slowly limped towards himà And then kneeled down, wincing in pain from his injuries and broken bones while he picked up a kunai from the ground. It was damaged, broken, but it would be enough to cut its throat.

ôYou could have beenà You would have the title of æStrongest NinjaÆ in the storyà If I didnÆt existàö Madara said, slowly, gaining lots of breath between each little sentence, while he grasped the kunai with both hands. ôBut in the endà You met meà IÆm the immortal, Uchiha Madaraàö He slowly raised it above his head, ready to strike, to deal the final blowà Then, he gathered all his remaining strength and breath to arch his body to put strength in his blow and talk with a loud tone of voice. ôEveryone will end like you, before me!ö

ôYeahà On their back, on the ground, perfectly stillàö Naruto said while Madara lowered the kunaià Only for his face to met NarutoÆs one, which shot from the ground along with his hands. ôThe perfect conditionà To gather some Sage Chakra.ö

ôàö His mouth didnÆt open till too much blood gathered in his mouth for him to keep it closed. Interesting how the bleeding came first. Blood flowing out of every pore of his body before the other effects of his wind chakra happened. A little tornado, a messed up æTitanic RasenganÆ that he had conjured in his messed up condition, that first damaged everything inside MadaraÆs body and then sent his body flying up in the air and Naruto flying back further on the ground, every hit hurting his body more and more.

He stopped a few meters behind, his whole body hurting, his breath rasped and his eyelids threatening to close. But he couldnÆt let them close. Not before everything was over. Not beforeà Before Madara fell to the ground, lifeless, no longer any blood in him to lose, his face distorted in a mask of terror and pain, no sound coming from it. He observe him a bit more, waiting for any signs of a reactionà A reaction came. His neck gave in, it bended and lengthened in an unnatural way. There was no way he was still alive, now. He let his head fall to the ground.

ôà Ero-Sanninàö Naruto says, feeling his eyelids close slowly, batting a few times. ôI couldnÆtà Find a way to makeà Everyone get a long, butàö He laughed a bit sadly. He was too injured, maybe even for the furball, to survive this. ôIà Paved the wayàö He said, his eyelids finally closing, while in that closed space something finally happened.

The massive energy of all the bijuu had warped and weakened the dimensional fabric around them enough for it to be a little disaster. But with the disappearance of Madara, yet another thing happened. Missing the only link it had to the real world, the Tsukuyomi dimension reacted in an awful way, desperately trying to call back its loose link. A small spark of black lighting suddenly became bigger and louder, till a crack formed in mid air, a strong wind surfacing as the crack began to pull in everything he couldà Including Naruto.

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In the meanwhile, in another placeà In another universe. In another æmultiverseÆ. Long ago the people living in that universe had discovered that there instead was a æmultiverseÆ. Many ultimate realities different or similar to each other, but all with some kind of same base. What they didnÆt know was that their one wasnÆt the only multiverse existing. And then, it disappeared. Following an incident, a crisis, caused by a creature called the æanti-monitorÆ, the multiverse became a single universe, dubbed æEarth-OneÆ.

But now, another crisis has come into place. Something that has been building up for a lot of time before reaching the breaking point. A spirit of vengeance became crazed and started a foolish crusade against everything magic. Earth-OneÆs mightiest villains joined together in a æSocietyÆ, carrying together a plan to mind-wipe all heroes existent. Gods of Myth tried to escape that universe before the crisis happened, uncaring about the lives and planets they destroyed. A galactic war erupted because of a crazed cult for a demonic god. A satellite who was supposed to help monitoring heart meta-humans got hijacked and perverted, before he broke freeà And became ruthless.

A huge, terrible situation caused by the action of some of the survivors of those other universes who got erased in that old crisis. Alexander Luthor from Earth-Three and Superboy-Prime from Earth-Prime. They believed that the world that got saved wasnÆt the right one, seeing how it had degraded over the course of time. They started to devise a plan once Kal-LÆs Lois Lane fell ill. That gave them the time and freedom to escape their æprisonÆ that Alexander himself had created and started working on a plan. To build a machine to basically rewrite an universe.

The machineÆs material was the Anti-MonitorÆs body. Its keys were a few specific individuals, that Alexander collected thanks to the Society that he created posing as that universeÆs own Lex Luthor. Its fuel was the worldÆs magic, made astray and chaotic by the maddened Spectre. The one to re-map the universe and redirect the stray magic would be the satellite Brother I, now Brother Eye, made sentient by Alexander. They re-aligned the center of the universe itself so it would coincide with Earth-TwoÆs one. All this to find and create the æperfect earthÆ.

But of course, heroes are known for putting up a fight. All over the universe, heroes fought back. In the end, their plan got stopped. At the cost of many lifes. The most prominent one being the one of Conner Kent, who gave up his life to destroy the very machine that was supposed to destroy their universe. But Alexander had a back up plan. If they couldnÆt find the perfect earth, they would just create one from the one already existent. That was what the Society was always meant to do.

The back up plan was a massive prison break of every villainous meta-human existent on the planet. After that, a massive attack on Metropolis, SupermanÆs city. It falls, the other will follow suit. But thanks to a group of still in maybe affiliation, the heroes managed to get their defences ready in time. So, that plan failed as well.

The only risk left was the crazy Superboy-Prime who had his own back-up plan. Causing another big bang by making the center of the universe, Oa, detonate. Leaving him the only thing alive, the only æheroÆ alive in the universe. But the universe he wanted to destroy still havenÆt given up fight.

ôCold?ö The barricade he had found in his way was maybe the entire Green Lanters corp. ôYou donÆt know cold.ö He gritted his teeth before before breathing out extremely cold air, freezing and shattering two Green Lanterns. Their rings flashed green and departed at high speed towards the deceased guardiansÆ space sector, searching for their replacements. ôCold is being the only survivor of an earth that was erased from history.ö

He then turned his heated gaze in another direction, unleashing an inferno of heat with just a glance, unleashing it on more Green Lanterns that were to be his victims that day. ôCold is being imprisoned because you tried to do the right thing.ö He gritted his teeth again, turning his attention to the rest of the group. ôCold is what this universe has made meà Nnng.ö

ôCode fifty-four, lanterns!ö A peculiar thing about the Green Lanternsà There should be just one for every space sector. But earth has more than three individuals possessing that kind of power. One of them was Guy Gardner. ôExcessive force has been approved! And encouraged for this cry baby.ö Brash. Probably brave. But today, weak against his newest opponent, who ignored his green blast of energy although it hurt him and grabbed him by his throat.

ôYouÆre rude and offensive, Guy Gardner.ö The crazy kryptonian said, while trying to break his neck with his hold, the only thing preventing it the force field created by the ring. ôI wonder who your ring is going to go to.ö

ôHis ring stays with him.ö Superboy-Prime cried out in pain as a green blast of energy cut through his armor and his arm, making him lose his grip on Gardner, courtesy of another one of the earthen Green Lanters. Hal Jordan. The kryptonian retaliated immediately, by lunging at the Green Lantern.

ôDonÆt pretend youÆre a good guy now. I saw what you did, Hal Jordan. YouÆre one of the most awful.ö He punched him in the face, with a strength that was enough to shift a planetÆs orbit. ôYouÆre a maniac!ö

But interference, intervention, came in the form of two blurs of red and blue that impacted him æfaster than a speeding bulletÆ, making him travel through space with them. He recognized the two faces. Superman of Earth-One, Kal-El. Superman of Earth-Two, Kal-L. ôWhere do you think youÆre going? Where?!ö They kept on pushing him, and he retaliated by punching them in the face. They didnÆt let up, neither of them. ôYou canÆt send me back into the speed force. YouÆre not fast enough.ö

His first thoughts were of course to the way they had imprisoned him first. But it took the efforts of all the Flash from past and future to do so. Then, suddenly, his vision was filled with green rocks. A smirk came to his face. ôOh, I see where youÆve brought me now. To the place this Krypton exploded.ö He then laughed in their faces, lowly. ôBut this Kryptonite isnÆt from my universe. It wonÆt hurt me. All youÆre going to do is kill this Superman.ö He said, looking at Kal-El with an amused smirkà Before laughing again. ôI mean, did you think these rocks would stop me? Hahahahaha!ö His laughter boomed again in the silent abysses of space. ôDid your really?ö

Nothing. Not a reply from his opponents who just kept on pushing him forward. That finally hit him as strange. They were just pushing him, holding him in place while looking at himà No, not at him. Just forwardà And he understood why, finally, when he felt an immense heat on his back, coming from behind him, feeling it on his skin even through his armor. He turned aroundà And found that their aim hadnÆt been the kryptonite fieldà But the red sun right behind it.

They dove straight through it, all three of them. The corona, the core, the nucleus burning their very skin and flesh during those we seconds of travel, before they got out of it. The two SupermanÆs hold broke and the three of them fell through the atmosphere of a nearby planet, slamming into the ground, creating three small craters.

ôàö The first to recover is Kal-El. He slowly crawls out of his own hole, and slowly gets back on his feet, his whole body hurting. Such a silenceà It really was over? But at yet another price? First Conner, nowà His eyes shifted to his Earth-TwoÆs counterpart still form. ôSupermanàö

ôDIE!ö He suddenly screamed in pain when heat-vision suddenly started to burn through his skin, hitting him in the back. He fell to his knees still screaming as Superboy-Prime let him know that he was still alive and kicking. ôDIE AND LEAVE THIS UNIVERSE TO ME!ö He said keeping on focusing his heat vision on him, wanting him to burn aliveà Before it began to fail him. The power and the range began to lessen little by little, like a car suddenly ending without fuel. His mouth opened, his whole face a mask of disbelief. ôMy heat vision?! WhatÆs happening?ö He said, his hands going instinctively for his head, worry getting a hold of him as Kal-El got a break to recover.

ôYouÆre losing!ö And Kal-L gave him the latest news, including the one that he too was alive and kicking, by slamming his fist at full force in his face, sending him flying for a few meters. Superboy-Prime at first didnÆt react, too dazed, too confusedà Too hypnotized by the sight of his own blood flowing by his nose.

ôMy armoràö He finally began to understand. ôThat red sun destroyed my armor.ö He started to breathe heavily, downing on him just what the effects of that trip through the sun had been. His glare settled on Kal-Là Who unfortunately, had two disadvantages. They were both Kryptonians, but he was older. And the red sun had started to take away his own superpowers as well. ôYou.ö Superboy-Prime sprung forward, æspearingÆ him, grabbing him by the waist and throwing him to the ground, rage and madness possessing him completely. ôYou took my superpowers?!ö

Then, he began to unleash his fury. Pinning Kal-L to the ground he began to hammer at him with both his fists, without mercy, without letting up. ôYou said the earth was dark and corrupted! You saw it all happen! You saw our sacrifice become pointless!ö He kept on throwing fists at his face, caving it in, blood flowing freely from the older SupermanÆs body, drenching his clothes and fists. ôLois died because of them! My earth died because of them! You have to understand why IÆm doing thisàö

ôUnderstand, Superboy?ö His right fist, ready to get lowered and hit its target again, got stopped by the wrist by a hand. A hand belonging to the now recovered Kal-El. Earth-OneÆs Superman pulled him away by his Earth-Two counterpart and threw him to the ground. ôYouÆre willing to destroy everything and everyone to feel what?ö Rage was now evident in his voice too, filling his every word. ôSpecial? Needed?!ö

ôI am special!ö On his face, Superboy-Prime took a hold of a big piece of Kryptonite laying on the ground. He turned around and smashed it against Kal-ElÆs face, sure that on him it would be effective in debilitating him. ôIÆm the only one who can rescue this messed-up universe!ö The blow was effective indeed. Now Kal-El ended on the ground as well, Superboy-Prime hands a vice around his neck, trying to pop him. ôIÆm the only one who knows how to make it right. I will be its greatest hero! When youÆre goneà I will be Superman!ö

ôà Superman?ö Maybe it was his pretentious words. Maybe just willpower. Kal-El seemed to be able to ignore the effect of the Kryptonite. His right hand shot forward to SuperboyÆs chest, grasping hard his symbol. He then pushed hard with his legs, ripping it off cleanly. ôYouÆll never be Superman! Because you have no idea what it means to be Superman!ö

ôYes, I do.ö Superboy-Prime landed on one knee, breathing heavily, blood marring his face. ôIÆm from Krypton! A better Krypton than yours ever was!ö

ôItÆs not about where you were born.ö Superman stood tall above his opponent, grasping tightly with his hand the symbol he had just stripped him of. ôOr what powers you have. Or what you wear on your chest.ö

ôSHUT UP!ö The younger Kryptonian reacted and send a left straight at SupermanÆs chin, with the last of his strength, it seemsà But it was time to end it. Because Kal-El felt his own strength starting to fade as well.

A left hook. A skyscraper would have crumbled. A right straight. A whole cityÆs glasses would have shattered. A left straight. That city would have been hit by a small earthquake. Another right straight. The ground would have opened in a fissure. Last hit. A powerful, left upper-cut. The echo of the ækraakÆ reached far, far away, miles in all directions. Superboy-PrimeÆs body flew in the air, a few feet above the groundà Before he fell, completely spent.

ôItÆs about what you doàö Superman said, his last strength spent, his breath heavyà The kryptonite starting to drain his very life force. He fell on his knees. ôà ItÆs about action.ö His knees and arms couldnÆt hold him anymore. He fell on the ground, face first in the dirt, fragments of kryptonite all around himà

ôThere they are.ö Before countless flashes of green light started to obliterate or transmutate them, ending the threat to his life. He didnÆt bother to look up, or maybe he just couldnÆt. He just kept his eyes closed while the whole Green Lantern corps and his other allies who could fly through space freely like him arrived on the planet.

ôLet me down now, John.ö One of the in particular was eager to land, seeing the form of her adoptive father on the ground, far more bloody and injured than the other two. Kara, alias Power-Girl. From Earth-Two, like Kal-L. The Green Lantern complied to her wishes while the other created a holding cell for the now unconscious Superboy-Prime. The menace finally over.

ôSuperman?ö The Martian Manhunter went to Kal-El, helping him back on his feet.

ôIÆm okay, JÆonn.ö He replied, even if he couldnÆt stand without leaning on the green martian. But his concern was for someone else. ôHowÆsàö

ôKal!ö Power-Girl had reached Kal-L, kneeling down beside him.

ôKaraàö His breath and voice were rasped. His body battered and injured. His life ending. He was dying. And yetà The Superman from Earth-Two was smiling. ôWe stopped himà Superman stopped him.ö

ôYouÆre going to be fine. You have to be fine.ö Kara said, feeling tears starting to gather in her eyes.

ôItÆs okay.ö Kal-L said, still smiling, assuring her that it was okay if he faded away.

ôNo. DonÆt leave me alone, Kal. Please, donÆt leave me alone again.ö She couldnÆt believe the injustice of it all. She had found someone understanding her and her memories after so longà And now the people that had given them those memories were all going away. She sniffed and put a hand to her face, holding it, trembling. ôIt canÆt end this way.ö

ôKaraà I finally understand.ö The dying kryptonian continued. ôI know what Lois was trying to tell me.ö He raised his right arm and hand, moving it to her left cheek. She held it close, tears now falling freely.

ôWhat are you talking about?ö She said, confusion joining sadness in her.

ôIÆll always be with you, Kara. Even if you canÆt see me. IÆll always be here.ö His strength began to give away for good, his hand retracting. Kara didnÆt let go of it, grasping it softly with both her own hands. ôItÆs never going to end. ItÆs never going to endà For usàö His gaze then wandered to the sky above, now darkened, myriads of stars shining brightly aboveà And yet, his gaze fixed on a single one. The brightest of all of them. Shining stronger than any other one. A single, final word came out of his mouth, realizing that she had been waiting for him. ôLoisàö He said, his final breath being the fuel of those words. His hand finally fell limp along with the rest of his body. Kal-L diedà Peace, freedom and love all finally in his grasp, as the people left behind cried him. A whole universe thankful. Thankful to a true hero. Thankful to Superman.

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ôàö He felt like he had not opened his eyes in ages. And it took him a bit of time to gain focus on his surroundings. Mostly because of the surroundings themselves. His vision was just filled with black, filled with many bright, shining small white dotsà Then, other colours began to came into play. Red waves, yellow streaks passing byà He got back in a sitting position, looking around. ôà Where am I?ö

He slowly got back on his feet, recognizing that he didnÆt recognize his surroundings at all. It reminded him of the night skyà But it was more deep, biggerà And he was like he was into the night sky. There was no ground under his feet, just more space. And why he could see his reflection too? ôà What is ità Uh?ö

He then noticed something else. Those streaks of light, of various colours. Those werenÆt just lights. He could seeà Human shapes inside them. And while at first they were far away, some were now passing right beside him. Two on his sides. One green and one azure. ôH-Hey!ö He shouted, since he had seen clear human shapes inside those streaks of light. He instinctively shouted at them since they had passed by him a bit too close for comfort. ôWatch where youÆre going, idiot!ö

Suddenly, one of those two streaks stopped dead in his tracks. It stopped running. The azure one. And then it turned around towards him. He could finally make out a clear shape as the figure inside the light faced him. It was a boy maybe older than him. Definitely taller and more in shape than him, with short hair on his head. His choice of clothing was strange. Some kind of long sleeveled pants and a pair of shoes the likes of which he had never seen. And finally, the only thing he could make out a colour of because of how dark it was. A short-sleeveled black t-shirt, with a symbol on its chest. Probably dark red. The symbol wasà A big æSÆ.

ôàö The figure was staring at him and Naruto was just staring back. It was so normal, it felt so normalà He didnÆt know who had approached the other. All he knew was that the distance between them suddenly lessened, from a few tens of meters to maybe less than one. He didnÆt know exactly. ôà What is it?ö The blonde suddenly asked.

The S-boy suddenly extended his right arm and hand, opening it wide, the palm facing up. Naruto blinked and just stared at the extended appendage. It wasnÆt the pose for a hand-shake. He stared at it for a while before the boy moved his hand up and down briefly. Naruto blinked. ôMe too?ö The boy nodded. Naruto didnÆt understand but complied, extending his own right arm and hand, palm open towards the sky. The boy suddenly raised his own arm and turned the hand around, just to move it down towards NarutoÆs open one, slapping it loudly. Naruto got confused by the strange gesture, staring at his hand in confusion. He then raised it to stare at the boy, to find that he was æwalkingÆ away. ôH-Hey?! What was that all about?!ö

ôTag. YouÆre it.ö Those were the only words he heard before the azure figure disappeared in the darkness that once more took a hold of his sensesà
 

Lanceavalon

Well-Known Member
#2
Well I can say I'm liking this even if I haven't been following DC for the last year.
 

semil

Well-Known Member
#5
Skelethin said:
I have no Clue what the hell just happened.
Ditto.

Edit: I think I might get it. The place with all the lights going past is (I'm guessing) the afterlife. So when Kal-el (I think its that one) says Naruto is "It", I'm guessing he means that Naruto is the next...whatever name you want to give Superman.

Either that or he just gave Naruto Kyrptonian superpowers, too.
 

Karnath

Well-Known Member
#6
semil said:
Skelethin said:
I have no Clue what the hell just happened.
Ditto.

Edit: I think I might get it. The place with all the lights going past is (I'm guessing) the afterlife. So when Kal-el (I think its that one) says Naruto is "It", I'm guessing he means that Naruto is the next...whatever name you want to give Superman.

Either that or he just gave Naruto Kyrptonian superpowers, too.
I thought it was the speed force.
 

Meinos Kaen

Well-Known Member
#7
I guess I put too much emphasis on Kal-L and too little on Superboy. Changed the last part of the Prologue a bit.


ôàö He felt like he had not opened his eyes in ages. And it took him a bit of time to gain focus on his surroundings. Mostly because of the surroundings themselves. His vision was just filled with black, filled with many bright, shining small white dotsà Then, other colours began to came into play. Red waves, yellow streaks passing byà He got back in a sitting position, looking around. ôà Where am I?ö

He slowly got back on his feet, recognizing that he didnÆt recognize his surroundings at all. It reminded him of the night skyà But it was more deep, biggerà And he was like he was into the night sky. There was no ground under his feet, just more space. And why he could see his reflection too? ôà What is ità Uh?ö

He then noticed something else. Those streaks of light, of various colours. Those werenÆt just lights. He could seeà Human shapes inside them. And while at first they were far away, some were now passing right beside him. Two on his sides. One green and one azure. ôH-Hey!ö He shouted, since he had seen clear human shapes inside those streaks of light. He instinctively shouted at them since they had passed by him a bit too close for comfort. ôWatch where youÆre going, idiot!ö

Suddenly, one of those two streaks stopped dead in his tracks. It stopped running. The azure one. And then it turned around towards him. He could finally make out a clear shape as the figure inside the light faced him. It was a boy maybe older than him. Definitely taller and more in shape than him, with short hair on his head. His choice of clothing was strange. Some kind of long sleeveled pants and a pair of shoes the likes of which he had never seen. And finally, the only thing he could make out a colour of because of how dark it was. A short-sleeveled black t-shirt, with a symbol on its chest. Probably dark red. The symbol wasà A big æSÆ.

ôàö The figure was staring at him and Naruto was just staring back. It was so normal, it felt so normalà He didnÆt know who had approached the other. All he knew was that the distance between them suddenly lessened, from a few tens of meters to maybe less than one. He didnÆt know exactly. ôà What is it?ö The blonde suddenly asked.

The S-boy suddenly extended his right arm and hand, opening it wide, the palm facing up. Naruto blinked and just stared at the extended appendage. It wasnÆt the pose for a hand-shake. He stared at it for a while before the boy moved his hand up and down briefly. Naruto blinked. ôMe too?ö The boy nodded. Naruto didnÆt understand but complied, extending his own right arm and hand, palm open towards the sky. The boy suddenly raised his own arm and turned the hand around, just to move it down towards NarutoÆs open one, slapping it loudly. Naruto got confused by the strange gesture, staring at his hand in confusion. He then raised it to stare at the boy, to find that he was æwalkingÆ away. ôH-Hey?! What was that all about?!ö

ôTag. YouÆre it.ö Those were the only words he muttered before starting to fade in the distance again.

ôHey! Who are you?! WhatÆs your name?!ö Naruto said, starting to run after himà But to no avail. It seemed like he could not advance no matter how many steps forward he took.

ôConner Kent. Superboy.ö He said while keeping on floating away into the distance. Suddenly NarutoÆs senses began to get engulfed by darkness once again. ôà When you meet themà Tell them IÆm sorry.ö Those were the last words he heard before passing out.
 

ksho

Well-Known Member
#8
From my limited understanding of the DC verse...(which is HUGE meat grinder level of a mess I'll tell you :sweat: )

The S-boy in the black t-shirt with the who tagged Naruto is Conner Kent a.k.a. regular-universe Superboy who's a teenage clone of Superman that was killed by Superboy-Prime a.ka. alternate universe Prime version of a teenage, more psychotic Clark Kent (the guy all the heroes were ganging up on in this story)

The Superman who *died* while fighting alongside Superman and the other heroes in this story is Kal-L a.k.a. a much..much older version of Clark Kent who was around during World War 2 from alternate universe 2.

Confused yet? :p
 

violinmana

(Hardcore) Gamer
#9
... huh?

And this is nice writing. Provided I don't know shit about the DC universe except that superman is awsome.
 

voidseeker

Well-Known Member
#10
I'm SUPER confused...damn you DC comics are you need to bring all of the multi-verse characters together into a super confusing jumble of stuff!

:headbanger:
 

Juopunumies

Well-Known Member
#11
Interesting, like with Marvel, I know next to nothing about DC. Though, I bet that it'll be interesting anyway.

I'm feeling up for some editing, please learn from your mistakes.

His opponent was probably having his same thoughts.
"His opponent was probably thinking the same thing." works better, "his same thoughts" is grammatically incorrect; the correct form being "the same thoughts as him". In this case, what I'm proposing works better.

Naruto this time remembered to pull back his arm, actually adding some more force into it.
"Naruto remembered to pull back his arm this time, adding some more force behind the blow." "Actually" is redundant, since it's obvious that cocking back an arm will give more force.

The hit was strong enough to sent MadaraÆs face jerking to the right, hard.
send

The Uchiha was shocked for two seconds. But he retaliated immediately, gritting his teeth.
Combine these sentences for better flow: "The Uchiha was shocked for two seconds but retaliated immediately, gritting his teeth."

ôAhhh!ö Naruto let out a little scream when Madara hit him in the stomach. Right at the mouth, making him shot his head forward because of the enormous pain. The Uchiha finds enough strength for another blow. He joins his hands and hits Naruto under the chin with all the strength he manages to gather. ôà!ö Soreness, pain, damage. Everything concentrates in one blow that sends Naruto stumbling back and then falling on his back. So weak was the blow and the two fighters. Naruto falls on his back slowly, like a doll.
This is a rather confusing paragraph. There's a tense change right in the middle of it, making it rather jarring. Change the tense in the first part of it and it would read a lot better. There's more, though.

Naruto let out a little scream when Madara hit him in the stomach. Right at the mouth, making him shot his head forward because of the enormous pain.
This is a confusing passage, did Naruto receive a single blow to the stomach? If so, what does the "right at the mouth" mean? Also, shooting his head forward because of pain doesn't make much sense to me, did you mean that he pitched forward, bending over the hand?

Soreness, pain, damage.
Soreness is lesser pain, which he wouldn't be feeling over the actual pain of the blow, it's something that you feel afterwards, when the pain starts to subside.

Everything concentrates in one blow that sends Naruto stumbling back and then falling on his back. So weak was the blow and the two fighters. Naruto falls on his back slowly, like a doll.
were; a slow fall would mean that he had no momentum, does this mean that he stopped the stumbling backwards and then started to fall?

Now it was just a huge, smoking, burned crater. The immortal panted heavily, and his head slowly started to look around. All destroyed. It had been really a harsh battle.
Scorched fits better. No need to specify that he's looking around with his head. "a really harsh battle" or "It had really been a harsh battle."

Young Naruto had learned of a way to defeat him just after the sacrifice of many of his friends, who had tried to come before him.
They had tried to come before Naruto? You have a bad habit of referring to different people with similar pronouns inside a single sentence or paragraph, making it very hard to distinguish who you're referring to. There's no way of knowing who you're referring to at the end of the sentence.

Last, the only other living Uchiha beside him.
I have no idea what this sentence means. Last what? Beside who?

It wasnÆt simple illusion, or nijutsu.
a simple; ninjutsu

Tsukuyomi manipulated space and time, moving an enemyÆs consciousness inside an alternate dimension over which just the one possessing the Sharingan had complete control.
...complete control of.

He opened a portal from the deepest recesses of the TsukuyomiÆs dimension, its hell on heart, and from there unleashed the black flame that never stopped burning.
earth

Susanno was a time-space jutsu, a summoning jutsu.
Susanoo

He had learned to manipulate space and time no longer just in the other dimension, but time and space of his own body, so closely connected to it after centuries.
Madara shouldn't be centuries old, at least canonically. He should be just about 100 years old or so.

But little did he know that he hadnÆt been aiming at him at all, from the beginning.
Again with just pronouns, specify who didn't know or who hadn't been aiming.

The statue shattered to pieces and dust, releasing the enormous masses of sentient chakra, who not possessing a body, needing time to make one back, obeyed their basic instincts.
The punctuation is a bit confusing in this one. Either separate it into two sentences, or change it to something like this:
"The statue shattered to pieces and dust, releasing the enormous masses of sentien chakra, who -not possessing a body and needing time to make one back- obeyed their basic instincts."

He screamed as demonic chakra ravaged his body, burned him to its very core, but most importantly, it infected his body and the area around him with an evil, foreign chakra.
He screamed as demonic chakra ravaged his body, burning him to his very core. But most importantly, it infected his body and the area around him with an evil, foreign chakra.

It made him cut off from the Tsukuyomi, from the other dimension, disturbing the delicate flow that existed between the two. He couldnÆt use his full powers anymore, and god knew if he ever would be able to again.
The first him is Naruto and the second one is Madara, right? Either way, it's very unclear, stop using pronouns only. :rant:

"between the two planes of existence" if you're referring to the dimensions, instead of Madara and Naruto, there. Use individuals or ninja if it's the latter.

And that exactly what had happened.
"And that's exactly what had happened up to this point."

The last Uchiha looked around himself, observing the destruction, understanding its implication.
"...destruction and understanding its implications."

Only for his face to met NarutoÆs one, which shot from the ground along with his hands.
"...meet Naruto's, which had shot..." 'one' is redundant, when it comes to body parts there is no need to clarify that the other person has the coresponding part of the anatomy, it's assumed. For example: "She rubbed her cheek in his." There's no need to add the 'one' since it's obvious that 'he' has a cheek as well. Try to remember this in the future.

His mouth didnÆt open till too much blood gathered in his mouth for him to keep it closed.
"He didn't open his mouth till too much blood gathered in it for him to keep it closed." It's not like he has to open his mouth, he just would start choking on blood if he didn't, so it's safe to say that he opens his mouth, instead of it opening automatically.

Blood flowing out of every pore of his body before the other effects of his wind chakra happened.
"the wind chakra"

A little tornado, a messed up æTitanic RasenganÆ that he had conjured in his messed up condition, that first damaged everything inside MadaraÆs body and then sent his body flying up in the air and Naruto flying back further on the ground, every hit hurting his body more and more.
"A little tornado, a messed up æTitanic RasenganÆ that he had conjured in his messed up condition. It damaged everything inside MadaraÆs body and then sent him flying up in the air at a high speed. Naruto himself got blasted backwards bouncing on the ground, every hit hurting his body more and more."
The original paragraph was rather confusing and I'm not sure if I interpreted it correctly to make the changes here.

He stopped a few meters behind, his whole body hurting, his breath rasped and his eyelids threatening to close.
"Naruto stopped after a few meters of tumbling backwards, his whole body hurting, his breath rasped and his eyelids threatening to close from exhaustion."
Only a few meters? Not many hits he could sustain, then.

Before Madara fell to the ground, lifeless, no longer any blood in him to lose, his face distorted in a mask of terror and pain, no sound coming from it.
him

He observe him a bit more, waiting for any signs of a reactionà
He observed him a bit longer,..."

His neck gave in, it bended and lengthened in an unnatural way.
"His neck gave in, bending and lengthening in an unnatural way."

He let his head fall to the ground.
Naruto

ôà Ero-Sanninàö Naruto says, feeling his eyelids close slowly, batting a few times.
said

ôI couldnÆtà Find a way to makeà Everyone get a long, butàö

along; also, I don't think that you have to capitalize the word after an ellipsis (...) when it indicates a pause in speech when a new sentence doesn't begin after it. I'm not totally sure about that one, though, someone who knows more about grammar than me clarify this?

A small spark of black lighting suddenly became bigger and louder, till a crack formed in mid air, a strong wind surfacing as the crack began to pull in everything he couldà
it

In the meanwhile, in another placeà
"Meanwhile, in another place..."

Many ultimate realities different or similar to each other, but all with some kind of same base.
"Many ultimate realities different or similar to each other, but all with a somehow shared base."

A satellite who was supposed to help monitoring heart meta-humans got hijacked and perverted, before he broke freeà
earth? I have no idea what you're referring to so I'm not sure if the heart is intended or not.

It falls, the other will follow suit.
If it falls, the other(s?) will follow suit./It falls and the other(s?) will follow suit.

But thanks to a group of still in maybe affiliation, the heroes managed to get their defences ready in time.
"still in maybe affiliation"? Is it not certain if the group can be considered heroes? Or is this sentence missing a word? It makes little sense to me, as is.

But the universe he wanted to destroy still havenÆt given up fight.
hadn't

He gritted his teeth before before breathing out extremely cold air, freezing and shattering two Green Lanterns.
He then turned his heated gaze in another direction, unleashing an inferno of heat with just a glance, unleashing it on more Green Lanterns that were to be his victims that day.
"He then turned his heated gaze in another direction, unleashing an inferno of heat on more Green Lanterns that were to be his victims that day with just a glance."

But today, weak against his newest opponent, who ignored his green blast of energy although it hurt him and grabbed him by his throat.
"But today, weak against his newest opponent, who ignored his green blast of energy although it hurt him, grabbing him by his throat."

He punched him in the face, with a strength that was enough to shift a planetÆs orbit.
Who punched who in the face? Pronouns, pronouns, pronouns!

ôDid your really?ö
you

The corona, the core, the nucleus burning their very skin and flesh during those we seconds of travel, before they got out of it.
few

He started to breathe heavily, downing on him just what the effects of that trip through the sun had been.
"He started to breathe heavily, the effects of that trip through the sun dawning on him."

On his face, Superboy-Prime took a hold of a big piece of Kryptonite laying on the ground. He turned around and smashed it against Kal-ElÆs face, sure that on him it would be effective in debilitating him.
He lifted the piece of kyptonite with his face? Or was he lying on his face? Also, "on him" isn't needed.

Now Kal-El ended on the ground as well, Superboy-Prime hands a vice around his neck, trying to pop him.
"Kal-El ended up on the ground as well, Superboy-Prime's hands a vice around his neck, trying to strangle him."

His right hand shot forward to SuperboyÆs chest, grasping hard his symbol.
"His right hand shot forward to SuperboyÆs chest, grasping his symbol hard."

Superman stood tall above his opponent, grasping tightly with his hand the symbol he had just stripped him of.
"Superman stood tall above his opponent, grasping the symbol he had just stripped him of tightly in his hand."

He raised his right arm and hand, moving it to her left cheek.
"He raised his hand, moving it to her left cheek." No need to include the arm, if he raises his hand it's obvious that the arm is rising as well.

Peace, freedom and love all finally in his grasp, as the people left behind cried him."
for him

And he was like he was into the night sky.
"And it was like he was in the night sky."

Some kind of long sleeveled pants and a pair of shoes the likes of which he had never seen.
Long pants? Sleeves are only used for arms.

A short-sleeveled black t-shirt, with a symbol on its chest.
sleeved,

The S-boy suddenly extended his right arm and hand, opening it wide, the palm facing up.
"The S-boy suddenly extended his right hand, opening it wide, the palm facing up." Not necessary to mention arm if hand is being extended.

Naruto didnÆt understand but complied, extending his own right arm and hand, palm open towards the sky.
"Naruto didnÆt understand but complied, extending his right hand, palm open towards the sky." Same as above, but 'own' isn't necessary and just makes the sentence look awkward when it's specified which hand is being extended, if it was just "his own hand" then it wouldn't matter.

The boy suddenly raised his own arm and turned the hand around, just to move it down towards NarutoÆs open one, slapping it loudly.
Quoted this just because it's probably the only instance where you use the dreaded 'own one' correctly.

Damn, now I remember why I've been shying away from trying to edit your stuff, it's a shitload of work! Oh well, what's done is done, learn from your mistakes, you damn Italian! :p

Edit: There was some mixup pasting all of this, it should make more sense now.
 

Skelethin

Well-Known Member
#12
About all I know about DC is who a decent amount of the Justice League are, at least according to the cartoon. Beyond that, I don't really know anything.

Which leaves me at, again....

What the hell just happened?
 

zeebee1

Well-Known Member
#13
Apparently Superboy did something to Naruto. Despite the fact taht both of them are dead.
 

semil

Well-Known Member
#14
zeebee1 said:
Apparently Superboy did something to Naruto. Despite the fact taht both of them are dead.
Superboy is dead, I think Naruto just inbetween.

Like Miracle Max said, "Mostly dead means he's still partly alive."
 

Vog

Well-Known Member
#15
Good luck on this Meinos. I really like your work on No Reading and hope you can do the same here. PM me if you need any help with DC history, or the multiverse, , I'm quite the comic geek.
 

Meinos Kaen

Well-Known Member
#16
Vog said:
Good luck on this Meinos. I really like your work on No Reading and hope you can do the same here. PM me if you need any help with DC history, or the multiverse, , I'm quite the comic geek.
Absolutely. ^^ I plan on doing this good like I'm doing with No Reading. I'm going through all the issues of 52 since I want to have the full backstory before beginning the story, 'One Year Later'.
 

Juopunumies

Well-Known Member
#17
There was some mixup in the post with all my edits, which probably had something to do with me backing it up about midway. Edited that and made it more compact.
 

Nasuren

Well-Known Member
#18
I can't really say anything about DC, except I know less than Marvel.
 

Meinos Kaen

Well-Known Member
#19
Next snippet. Containing the 'arrival' of Naruto and the introduction of the Teen Titans. ^^ Enjoy!


Tag
ChapterI: T stands forà


ItÆs strange, being non human. Non human meaning, in this case, being a Cyborg. Half machine. You can survive many things, like surviving being fused together to another superhero in the after-wave of finally putting a universe back together. After the separation, though, comes the difficult part.

The human part needed healing. The machine part needed repairs. And after that, the memory and the equivalent of a computer CPU. The memory in particular needed time to adjust to the improved body but most of all, it needed time to defragment all the data with which it had been overloaded, along with all the data he kept on receiving. Even while not-online, it seemed that his eyes kept on watching and recording. After one yearà

ôHnnkk.ö Victor Stone, alias Cyborg, was back online. The first thing he noticed was how hard it was to stand. He fell to his knees, spitting out a bit of what flew through his body instead of blood. It still was red, though. ôG-Garà?ö He was still a bit confused. The last æmemoryÆ he had been witnessing was one of Beast Boy, Garfield Logan, saying goodbye to him, bag in hand. Suddenly, he heard voices coming from somewhere.

He uneasily got back on his feet, using his hands to grip on the wall and held himself up, crushing part of it in the process. æDonÆt know why RobinÆs wasting his time looking for her again.Æ, æWell, she was a titan. And she was one of his best friends or something, right?Æ æYou met her. SheÆs a bitchÆ. Whispers. He had to thank his machine side to be able to hear. But the more he approached the source. The clearer they became.

ôThatÆs five dollars for the swear jar!ö

ôæBitch isnÆt a swear word.ö

ôBlue devil says it is! Pay up, sinner!ö One voice was completely new to him. A male one. The other one, a femaleà It sounded familiar. But he was still dizzy. CouldnÆt access his databaseà ôBlue Devil says you gotta take the evils in this world and make something good out of æem.ö

ôWhy are you pointing at me when you say that?ö The female voice sounded a little annoyed by now.

ôI wasnÆtà Hey! Put the sword down!ö Yes. Just a little. He was to the angle. He just had to walk another few steps. He shot his hands forward and grasped the wall hard. ôDid you hearàö

He pulled himself into the room the voice came from. His human eye and his cybernetic one took in, as he had foresaw, one unfamiliar face and a familiar one. One wasà A little devil. He didnÆt know how to describe him otherwise. Long white hair, two black horns coming from his forehead. Reddish brown skin, a tail with an arrow end, normal hands butà Talon like feet, and glowing red eyes and mouth. He was standing crouched on the table of what he supposed was a kitchen.

ôHot damn! CyborgÆs awake!ö Was the boyÆs comment upon seeing his figure.

ôYour turn to feed the swear jar.ö The girl said, while polishing her sword with some kind of rectangular stone. She was the familiar face. Her uniform had changed a bit, but he could recognize her from other things. Gray hair, very long. An eyepatch covering a missing eye. And the uniform was unchanged enough.

ôR-Ravager?!ö He said, raising his right arm up, morphing it into some kind of cannon. It felt slightly different. Someone had modified his body, it seemed.

ôLooks like thereÆs no brain damage. He remembers meàö The girl said, a bit sarcasticà Before it dawned on her. ôà Uh, oh. He remembers me.ö She dove out of the way just in time to dodge the repulsive blast, that still had the effect of sending every item around flying in different directions. ôOw.ö

ôWhyÆs he attacking us?ö The little devil jumped out of the way too, dodging kitchen tools in mid air. ôWhatÆs wrong with him?ö

ôConsidering the last time he saw meàö She jumped over him as he came rushing, ending up destroying some furniture behind her. Good thing she dodged, then. ôI was trying to slit RavenÆs throat, IÆd say nothing.ö She landed back on her feet easily. ôA little help here, Eddie.ö

ôWeÆre not bad guys! WeÆre just having lunch!ö The devil-like boy, named Eddie, jumped on top of CyborgÆs back, trying to restrain his movements while talking to him. ôWe live hereà Hhhmph!ö But either his reasoning still wasnÆt back online, or Victor just didnÆt believe him, since he elbowed him in the stomach. And an elbow-blow from Cyborg hurts. A lotà The after effect was that he let out a torrent of flames from his mouth, setting fire to lots of things around him.

ôYou just set the kitchen on fire.ö The girl unsheated her swords. He was half machine, right? Incapacitate those parts and it would be fine.

ôI couldnÆt help it. He hit me in the gut.ö Eddie said while trying to grab onto VictorÆs back again.

ôYouÆre such a girl.ö She said, before trying to slash through his cannon-like armà Just to fail miserably, just scratching it.

ôSweet! RavagerÆs swords canÆt cut through him!ö Two new voices began to echo in the room, observing the battle ensuing. ôThe promethium alloy and self-repairing nanotech shell is working well.ö

ôMy idea.ö Again, a boy and a girl. Suddenly, VictorÆs body flared with electricity, stunning and sending Eddie flying up in the air.

ôElectrical discharge from his body for in-close grappling.ö The girl, Ravager, had crossed her swords together in an attempt of stopping Cyborg from caving her head in, while she turned her gaze to the two idiots who had repaired said half-machine man and were now observing the fruits of their work, just as the girl said æMy idea tooÆ.

ôWill one of you geeks grab his remote control and turn it off?!ö Ravager was losing her cool, finally. She didnÆt like having a weapon in her face.

ôEmergency shutdown?ö The brown haired boy said, turning to the black haired girl beside him who met him just with confusion.

ôI thought you put it in.ö She replied.

ôI thought you did.ö He said, before they got pinned to the ground from a glowing blue net.

ôMetal mesh net.ö

ôYour idea.ö While they debated, Victor seemed to have finally got a hold on both his opponents. Lifting them by their necks, he slammed them into the wall in front of him back first.

ôWhoà Who are you?ö Victor said, turning to the devil-like boy of the two, held by his throat by his left hand.

ôWeÆre the Teen Titans.ö He said, breath barely passing through his throat.

ôNo, youÆre not.ö Victor replied. He remembered clearly of not having seen any of them around in his team before.

ôWeÆre the new Teen Titans.ö Eddie replied again.

ôI was a New Teen Titan.ö Victor said again. Lies, lies, lies.

ôThe New New Teen Titans?ö Eddie continued, his breath escaping him and his voice getting out similar to a whine.

ôVic!ö A voice called to him. The voice was familiar, and the fact that they were using a shortened version of his name indicated a certain kinship. He turned aroundà And he was met with a familiar face indeed. The costume had changed a bit, mostly in the colours, but he was him. Tim Drake. The Boy Wonder. ôWelcome back.ö

ôRobin?ö Victor said, still a bit stranged out by how calm he was with all the obvious nonsense around him.

ôWe all hoped youÆd be awake soon.ö That sentence reminded him that, indeed, he had been on shut down for a long time. He let got of his two captives.

ôWhatÆs going on?ö He said.

ôWe kicked butt on you, thatÆs what.ö Replied the black haired girl under the mesh net, while Robin helped her and the boy to get out of it.

ôAnd now we need to remodel the kitchen.ö Joked the brown haired boy.

ôThese two are Marvin and Wendy. TheyÆre kind of the caretakers of the tower.ö Robin pulled on the net and got it off the two twins. ôThey spent the last six months rebuilding you.ö

ôDad sent us over to help after we graduated from M.I.Tà. On our sixteenth birthday.ö Boasted Wendy. And yes, it was an impressive feat. Robin let them finish their introduction, Marvin saying æIÆm the oldestÆ, Wendy replying æBy like five minutesÆ, while turning his head to Eddie.

ôThis is Eddie Bloomberg.ö He said. The red-skinned boy nodded.

ôKid Devil here.ö He said, his fingers in what he thought was a cool pose, it seemed. ôIÆm Blue DevilÆs sidekick.ö

ôI thought Blue Devil was a sidekick.ö Victor said, a whisper loud enough for the boy to hear.

ôAnd you already know Rose Wilson.ö Robin finished, turning his head towards the girl who was recovering her swords from the rubble.

ôWhat the hell is SladeÆs daughter doing here?ö Victor voiced this opinion loud. Ravager just smiled maliciously.

ôOh, donÆt worry Cyborg. IÆm not like Terraà IÆm a good girl now.ö

--

ôWhen you came back from space, you were pretty messed up.ö After settling down, Robin brought Cyborg out of the tower, on the side facing the sea. The enormous T-shaped building stood behind them as Tim guided Cyborg somewhere, through the now machine-tended garden, once a former titanÆs pride.

ôWhereÆs Kory?ö CyborgÆs thoughts immediately went to said person. An alien who had lost her planet and that was very protective and jealous of her garden.

ôNot all of you came back.ö Robin simply replied. Cyborg tensed.

ôIs sheàö

ôSheÆs still out thereà We hope.ö Robin cut him off, not letting him even voice that kind of thought, of hypothesis. Victor understood his line of thoughts. Soà Other people.

ôWhere are the other Titans?ö He asked, still remembering that their team didnÆt have a Kid Devil and the daughter of one of their worst enemies in its roster. And even more, what had happened to those who were?

ôAccording to Green Arrow, MiaÆs off on some island with Connor Hawke.ö Mia Dearden. Speedy. The newest sidekick to Green Arrow. ôBart isàö Robin stopped talking, thinking about the best course of action about explaining BartÆs whereabouts. It wasnÆt that big of a deal, so, he decided to keep it short. ôHeÆs kind of retired. Raven quit after she and Gar broke up.ö

ôWhereÆs Gar?ö Beast Boy and Raven broke up. Raven quità But what about Beast Boy? He was maybe his best friendà

ôGarÆs rejoined the Doom Patrol.ö Robin replied, earning a repetition of the teamÆs name by Victor, out loud. Suddenly, they stopped walking. They had arrived at the place Tim wanted to show Victor. ôAnd Conneràö Robin slowly raised his head, taking in once again the enormous statue they had made of his best friend. ôHe saved the universe. Superboy saved everybody.ö

ôàö Victor took in the statue and those words, which immediately weighted heavily on his shoulders. On his very soul. They didnÆt make statues just out of anyone. They needed a special reason for statues to be made. And TimÆs wordsà They had been his gentle way of telling Victor that Conner was no longer among the living. ôNoàö

Victor leaned his hands on the unshaped rock base of the statue, his fingers making dents and cracks into it. A single tear found his way down from his human eye. His thoughts went almost immediately to the last missing member of the team he remembered. ConnerÆs girlfriend. ôWhereÆs Wonder Girl?ö

--

The west coast is beautiful in may. ItÆs still not as hot as it is during summer, even if just a little bit less cold, and thereÆs not much super-trouble, mostly because of the presence of a famous super-team on it.

ôStop her! Somebody!ö But again, thereÆs a lot of interesting spots for villains. Like the S.T.A.R. labs in San Francisco.

ôOh, quit screaming. I left you alive.ö The black haired woman, the said thief, said while running towards that floorÆs window.

ôDo you have the blastocyst map?ö She heard the voice from inside her intercom say. ôOf course, Mallah.ö She replied, not stopping her running.

ôMeet at the rendezvous. The Elephant Man will escort you back.ö ôOn my way.ö She said again, before using her powers. She shapeshifted into a big black raven, grabbing the little metallic tube she had just stolen with her talons. She smashed through the glass without troubles and then aimed for her landing spot. One of San FranciscoÆs typical sightseeing trams. ôThe Brain will reward you well. Long live the brotherhood.ö

ôLong live the brotherhood.ö She shapeshifted back into her human form and landed effortless on top of the vehicle, grasping the tube with one of her hands. She almost caressed it, a dreamy smile finding its way on her face. ôItÆs all for love.ö

ôHey, Gemini.ö Gemini, the thief, shot her head up, hearing that familiar voice once again. She was starting to get really annoyed. She took in the sight of the blonde girl floating at mid air in front of her, holding a shining golden rope in her hands, a glare coming from her blue eyes. ôDidnÆt your mommy teach you stealing was wrong?ö

ôIÆve got company.ö Gemini said over her intercom. ôWonder Girl?ö ôWho else?ö Gemini suddenly got in action. She lowered herself to theà Roof of the tram and lengthened her leg, trying to kick Wonder Girl in the face. The blonde shielded herself by crossing her arms in front of her face. ôYouÆve been a real pain, lately.ö

ôItÆs a talent.ö She said, floating back in position in front of her opponent.

ôIÆll show you mine.ö Gemini said, putting her leg back into a normal shape and shapeshifting her whole body. Into an animal of her choice. ôYou put Houngan away. You wonÆt get me.ö Once fully shapeshifted she charged at her opponent.

ôA bull? ItÆs that the best you can do?ö Wonder Girl simply hit her under her now taurine chin with one of her fists, unleashing her superstrenght in full, the ækrakÆ from the hit echoing. In the meanwhile, the occupants of the tram had noticed what had happened. And as such, they had started jumping out of it, letting it end into a parked car to the side of the road.

Gemini got bounced up in the air from the incident and her punch, so the blonde heroine shot forward her golden lasso and grabbed her in mid air, before unleashing the power of her weapon, electrocuting the thief for good. She then floated to her location on the ground, unconscious, shapeshifting back into her human form. ôYou move, you get another five hundred volts.ö

ôIÆd ask you if you want helpàö Wonder Girl suddenly blinked, hearing a familiar voice she hadnÆt hear in months. ôBut it doesnÆt look like you need it.ö She took in the side of Robin, Ravager, Kid Devilà And Cyborg moving a destroyed car out of the way.

ôOh my god! Cyborg?!ö She immediately ran forward and embraced her old friend. ôYouÆre okay!ö She couldnÆt believe he was okay. Last time she had seen him, he still was fused with Firestorm.

ôOne of the advantages of being part machineàö He said, returning the embraceà Before suddenly remembering that they had a shared loss. For which she had suffered a lot more than him, he was sure of it. ôà IÆm sorry about Conner.ö

ôIÆm sorry too.ö She replied in a whisper. It didnÆt upset her much, since she was expecting it. She was used to it, people reminding her of what had happened.

ôVicÆs back, Cassie.ö Tim suddenly said. Cassie broke the embrace. She was expecting it. ôYou should come back too.ö

ôNo.ö She immediately replied. She had lost count of the times he had asked her. Ravager cut him off too after hearing just a æButàÆ coming from her.

ôWeÆve asked her three times to join the team. She keeps saying no. Please donÆt start begging, Robin.ö The swordswoman said, a bit of truth in her words, but she was talking just to tick Cassie off. ôSheÆs not worth it.ö She continuing, pointing her sword at Wonder Girl, a bit too close for effort.

ôGet that out of my face, Rose.ö Cassie ordered, stressing the grey haired girlÆs name.

ôWhat?ö Rose didnÆt only played dumb. She worsened the thing by putting æin her faceÆ her second sword too. ôThis?ö

She didnÆt expect it. Well, not that soon. Cassie backhanded her with her left fist, sending her flying on the ground, her lower lip now injured. EddieÆs mouth opened in shock and surprise, before hurrying to RoseÆs side, helping her back on her feet, while glaring at Cassie. ôWhatÆd you do that for? She wasnÆt gonna touch you.ö

ôI was thinking about itàö Rose admitted while recovering. Amazon indeed. The girl sure could pack a punch.

ôStay away from me, Popeye.ö Cassie said, mocking the injured girl about her missing eye.

ôThe Brotherhood of Evil has been attacking some of the most advanced labs in the country. WeÆve both been trying to hunt them down. LetÆs do it together.ö Tim continued, hoping to distract her and at the same time to persuade her. ôWe need you, Cassie. I need you.ö

ôWhat did you do after Superboy died?ö Cassie turned to Tim, her glare now settled on him. Robin turned his head, not liking how strong that glare was.

ôI got better. I trained.ö

ôYou ran away. You went on a trip around the world with Batman.ö She continued, forcing him to turn around, shouting in his face. ôYou left me all alone. And now IÆm supposed to come back to the titans because you æneedÆ me?ö Her glare settled down a bit, but she still was deadly serious. ôIÆve spent the last year learning how to not need anyone.ö She finished.

ôUm, Wonder Girl?ö The girl turned to Eddieà Just to raise an eyebrow in confusion. He was looking at the sky. ôDo you summon meteors, by any chances?ö

ôWhaàö The girl raised her head, following Kid DevilÆs stareà And her eyes widened. No, she couldnÆt summon meteorsà But something in flames was indeed falling towards them. ôEveryone! Get away!ö

No Titan needed to be told twice. Everyone got away from the spot they were all standing around as soon as possible in the few seconds before the flaming object impacted the ground, sending piece of concrete, asphalt and everything else for tens of meters. Then there was the wave of hot air.

ôNgghàö Victor shielded Tim while Eddie and Cassie, much to her reluctance, shielded Ravager from the blast. In a few seconds, everything was over, a few debris still falling to the ground, but the big part of it was over. They slowly turned around and got back on his feet. Tim made a gesture with his hands, signalling to them to stop. ôVic?ö

ôOn it.ö Cyborg was the more æresilientÆ one of the group. Also, he had a lot of devices in his body. Including some that he could use to analyze whatever he found himself in front of. He walked to the crater created by the falling objectà His cybernetic eye went into full throttle, going through the clearing smoke, till it fixed his gaze on the figure of the æobjectÆà No. It wasnÆt an object. It wasà A person. ôà ItÆs a person.ö

ôA personàö Robin reflected about it. A person? ôIs he alive?ö

ôYes. HeÆs probably a meta.ö He had already managed to indentify the boy as a male. But when the smoke clearedà His eyes widened. The figure was wrapped in something. His clothes had managed to resist the falling? The flames meant that he had fallen at least from the stratosphere. ôà HeÆsà HeÆs wrapped in some kind of red cloakà Or cape.ö

ôWhat?ö TimÆs eyes widened at that. A meta-human who could survive falling all the way through the stratosphere that wore a red cape? The people who fitted that descriptionà Cassie run past him and Victor in a flash, and flew into the crater herself. ôCassie! Wait!ö

ôàö Couldà Could heà Cassie in that past year had held onto hope as strongly as she could. Anything, anyone that could prove to her that her boyfriend was still alive or that he could be brought back to life. She dove into the crater and to the figure on the bottom of the crater. She could see something big and red enveloping his body. ôConner!ö

She landed and turned the unconscious figure aroundà Just for her eyes to widen, in disappointment. The figure at her feet wasnÆt as tall as Conner. It wasnÆt a cape, but a ruined coat. And most of all, the figure had blonde hair. She didnÆt need to take in everything to understand. ôà ItÆs not him.ö

ôCassie? Are you alright?ö

ôEhmà That freak she caught got away.ö

ôà IÆm not alright.ö She said, before flying back up out of the crater, going for her rope and then disappearing into the sky.

ôWhat was all that about?ö Asked Eddie.

ôLong story.ö Replied Tim, before diving after Cyborg into the crater. They took in the unconscious fallen person too. He seemed to be around their age. His clothes were pretty strange by their standards, and they noticed they were very dirtyà Mostly with dried blood. He seemed to be around their age. ôà What do you make of him?ö

ôNever seen him before.ö Victor kneeled down and touched the person with his robotic hand, to check him up better. ôHeÆs not radioactiveà But heÆs heavily injured. Not from the landing.ö

ôàö Robin sighed. His first extraterrestrial landing. ôWell, I guess we have no choice but to bring him in. And then contact someone, I guess.ö

ôSounds like a good plan to me.ö Victor picked the boy up, being careful to not use any of his human parts, since the boy was still as hot as melted iron.
 

Skelethin

Well-Known Member
#20
ok, this is starting to make some sense.

Though only barely.
 

Lanceavalon

Well-Known Member
#22
Naruto never really had a problem with killing in the heat of battle beside the that fact letting him get along real well with Ravager. :drool:
How will you have the rest of the Titans deal with Naruto willing to take that extra step?
 

Meinos Kaen

Well-Known Member
#23
Next snippet. I hope it makes sense. :p XD Enjoy.


ôà Mhhhàö It kinda hurt to open his eyes. Not because they were injured, but mostly because ofà Soreness, he could call it, he guessed. He slowly blinked them a few times till he could finally open them completely. But he still couldnÆt tell much of what it was in front of him. Just unclean spots of various colours. He had to rely on his other sense. Tact was the one working better, at the moment. His head was upon a soft cushion, it seemed. His handsà Soft fabric. Sheets. ôA bed?ö

He slowly got in a sitting position, finding that, although sore, his body didnÆt hurt muchà No, it didnÆt hurt at all. He guessed his personal furball had done overtime. He brought his hands to his eyes and rubbed them, trying to clear them. Once finished, his eyes were able to see clearly again. He was in a room that he didnÆt recognize. The furniture was much better than any he had ever seen, and moreà Modern. It was full of lightà He turned to his left side.

Basically the whole wall was a window. He could see everything outsideà And he blinked in confusion at what he was seeing. He got out of the bed, throwing the sheets almost off the bed and ran to the window. He was very high, he first notice. On some kind of very tall tower or buildingà The point was what he was seeing. They were near the see, he could tell. And he could see a very big bridge made out of metal connecting two pieces of landà The real problem was what he saw on top of the dry land.

The sunset was illuminating a city of the likes he had never seen before. He didnÆt recognize the city nor the style in which it had been built. It was completely different from Konoha. It was a breath-taking sight, especially from his privileged observation pointà But still, so different. So unfamiliarà ôà I guessà IÆm not in Konoha anymore.ö

ôAh, you woke up?ö Naruto turned around, hearing a voice coming from behind himà He raised an eyebrow. The guy in front of him wasà Strange, to say the least. And it wasnÆt the fact that he was wearing just a pair of jeans that was bothering him. But the other things. Red skin, hornsà Well, he had seen weirder things in his life, but stillà ôDamn, right. Alienà Ehm, can. You. Understand. Me?ö

ôàö Naruto raised an eyebrow. What was all that about? ôI can understand you just fine.ö

ôAh. Ehmà Sorry.ö The red boy rubbed the back of his head in embarrassment. Robin and Victor had told him there was the probability he wouldnÆt understand English, but it seemed like that wasnÆt the case. ôSo, what were you doing before you fell from the sky?ö

ôàö Naruto stared, even more confused. He scratched the back of his head too. ôà What the hell are you talking about?ö

ôDonÆt know. Thought you could tell me.ö The red-skinned boy replied, confusing Naruto even more. He just frowned a littleà Before noticing that it was a little bit cold. His eyes travelled down his own bodyà They widened and then sent out a sharp glare. He raised his head and directed it at kid devil.

ôà Why am I in my boxers only?ö He said. Kid Devil blinked and then laughed. The laugh meaning æyou noticed just now?Æ.

ôAhahah, sorry, sorryàö Eddie settled down, noticing that the blonde wasnÆt laughing. ôWell, they were all cut up, ruined and full of blood, so we took them off.ö

ôCutà Ah.ö Naruto remembered. Yes, they would have to. After all, he had been fighting for his life till he passed out. Madaraà He had won. A grin of satisfaction made its way to his lips. He had defeated historyÆs strongest ninja. That meant that the title was now his to take. ôUnderstoodà By the way, where the hell am I?ö Naruto said, moving his hand to point at the scenery outside. ôThis isnÆt Konoha or anywhere near it, right?ö

ôKonoha? Where is that? Japan?ö

ôEh? WhatÆs Japan?ö A question got another question as an answer. Naruto was even more confused. He shook his head. ôKonohagakure? In the fire country? Hidden village in the leaf? Got destroyed a couple months ago?ö

ôà Dude, you must have come from a really far, far away planetàö Kid Devil replied, crossing his arms. Naruto got confused. He what? ôListen, IÆll call Robin and Cyborg. They will surely be better at this than me, andà They will bring you clean clothes. Alright?ö

ôà Alright.ö Naruto nodded and Kid Devil then excused himself and walked out of the room. Naruto was left alone with his thoughts, to scratch his head. He turned to the scenery againà Before remembering that he was cold. He went for the bed and picked the sheets, draping them around himself. He then tried to recollect his thoughts.

Alright. I was fighting Madara. Then? à Ah. NarutoÆs mind suddenly began to recall what had happened after he had passed out. That strange place, the azure boy who talked to himà Instinctively, he looked at his right hand. His eyes widened. There wasà A scar? Now, it looked like some kind of tattooà A scar tattoo? Where had he seen that symbol beforeà

ôYou woke up already. I guess that regeneration factor was a lot better than what Victor thought.ö Naruto turned to the door again. More red. Only, this one was more normal, and it had for companion black. All over a black haired boy around his age with a mask covering his eyes, and a long black cape falling from his shoulders all the way to its ankles. He began to walk towards him. ôSorry, but you were injured and so we had to take a sample of your blood for analysis. We were surprised to see that you healed at that speed.ö

ôAhà Yes, I heal pretty fast.ö Naruto replied, still a bit surprised from how silent the boy was. His steps werenÆt making any noise. He had rarely seen something like this, even among ninjas. He blinked when he found a hand in his face, so entrances he was in observing the boyÆs feet.

ôIÆm Robin. Leader of the Teen Titans. You almost fell on us.ö Naruto extended his own hand and shook RobinÆs one eagerly.

ôIÆm Narutoà And whatÆs with this æfalling downÆ thing? The red boy said something like that too.ö Naruto scratched the back of his head, thinking about it. ôHe said I fell from the skyàö

ôThatÆs exactly what happened.ö NarutoÆs face showed clear confusion. Robin took the chair from the nearby desk and sat on it. He guessed they would have to talk for a bit. ôYou fell from the sky, from a big altitude too, considering the crater you dug while landing.ö

ôIà What?!ö NarutoÆs face and voice showed disbelief, now. Robin just kept his cool and picked something out of his right pocket. A series of pictures. He handed them to Naruto. The blonde picked them and observed the first. It was a pictureà Of the sky? Noà He noticed a red something in the middle of ità He moved the picture away and put it behind all the others. In the second the object got bigger and clearerà He squinted his eyesà And then they widened again. ôWhat the?!ö

ôThese photos basically show your landing in sequence. A friend of mine took them.ö Robin kept on observing coolly Naruto as the blonde got more and more surprised picture by picture, showing his landing, the explosion, and finally his unconscious figure in the crater, with still his old clothes on. Cut, battered, bloodiedà But they were his clothes. And that was him in the crater alright. ôI was kind of curious as to what had happened to you, for falling through the stratosphere like thatàö

ôStà No, what the hellà I mean, seriously, what the hell?!ö Naruto said, going through the pictures one more time, all the set. He stared at the last one, the one where he had been turned on his back, for a few seconds before basically slamming them on the bed he was still sitting on. ôI mean, last thing I remember I fell unconscious in a destroyed cavern on my back! Well, and then that dreamàö

ôWhat did you see in that dream?ö Naruto scratched his right cheek, in thought. Maybe it hadnÆt been a dream?

ôWell, I thought that I woke upà Somewhere else. It was like I was walking into the sky at nightà Then, I talked with someone enveloped in an azure light and I passed out againàö The description had been very brief, but to Robin it had been enoughà And to Naruto too. ôItà It wasnÆt a dream, hn?ö

ôà No. I donÆt think it wasà Naruto.ö His name had a strange tone to it, in RobinÆs mouth. He shrugged it off right after. ôI suspect that after passing you somehow travelled through space and arrived on our planet.ö

ôTravelled throughàö Naruto became even more confused. Robin had foreseen something like that. Not every alien race had the technology to travel through space. And not every alien travelled willingly.

ôYouÆre on another world that the one you were born onto.ö Robin picked something else from his pocket while Naruto became more shocked by the second. He showed him a folded paper. Naruto took it and unfolded it in a hurry. It wasà A world map. ôThis is a map of our planet. Our world. Do you recognize your home country or city anywhere?ö

ôàö Naruto was starting to shiver. He couldnÆt find Konoha, nor the Fire Country, nor the Elemental Countries anywhere on the map he was holding in his hands. He looked at it for a few minutes, all while Robin kept on being silentà Then, when he was finally satisfied he handed the map back to the Boy Wonder while holding his face with one hand. ôNoà I donÆt.ö

ôThat was what I feared.ö Robin put the map with the pictures on the bed. Naruto was now currently holding his face with both his hands. ôI guess youÆre kind ofà Surprised, right?ö

ôYou think?ö Naruto groaned. He couldnÆt believe something like that had happened to him. He couldnÆt believe he was even understanding it. ôHow the hell did this happen?ö

ôThat we canÆt know. But do not worry. On our planet, we arenÆt unused to people coming from outer space. I believe that we can help you.ö NarutoÆs face shot up at that. First it had seemed like a big deal and now, a solution was already surfacing? ôIt will take maybe sometime, thoughà Till that moment, though, youÆre welcome to stay here. Actually, it would be preferableà Because of a couple other things.ö

ôàö Naruto blinked and then turned to the transparent window, observing the city outside, the sun almost completely settled. ôAnd where exactly is here?ö

ôPlanet Earth.ö Robin opened up the map again, showing it to Naruto. The blonde turned around again. Robin began to point at certain point of the maps. ôUnited States of America. California. San Francisco.ö

ôà And?ö Naruto was referring to the building they were in.

ôTitans Tower. T-Tower, in short. Headquarters of the Teen Titans.ö Robin replied. Naruto repeated the words softly. æTeen TitansÆ.

ôAndà What are the Teen Titans?ö Robin got up from the chair and put it back near the desk of the room.

ôA group of young crime-fighters. LetÆs leave it at that, for now. We will talk more at dinner.ö He said, before picking up the folded clothes that Naruto hadnÆt even noticed him place on the desk, before handing them to the blonde. ôHere are some spare clothes. ThereÆs something to wear at night too. They should fit your sizeà Well, more or less.ö

ôAhà Thanks.ö Naruto nodded and Robin gave him a little smile.

ôYou can look around the tower, but please do not leave its premises. WeÆll have dinner around 8 PM.ö Robin said, and with that he walked out of the room, leaving a bewildered Naruto sitting on his newest bed. Out of the door, Victor was waiting for Tim.

ôSo?ö Victor said, since they had agreed on something.

ôI donÆt think heÆs lying. At least from what I can tell.ö Tim replied. Victor nodded.

ôMy biological scanner didnÆt detect any change in his bodily functions that indicate lies eitherà But there are ways to hide them, though.ö Tim nodded back.

ôYes. But I donÆt think itÆs the case. Rationality apart, I get that feeling from him.ö The two began to walk away, towards the lab. Cyborg scanned to make sure that no one was in ear-shot. It was time to talk about other things. ôThese arenÆt the Teen Titans, Tim.ö

ôTheyÆre the best I could get right now.ö Tim immediately shot back. Cyborg sighed in exasperation.

ôDeathstrokeÆs daughter and Trigon Junior are the best you could get?ö He said, putting a hand behind his head.

ôEddieÆs not really a devil.ö Cybor shook his head while opening the door of the lab. He immediately walked to the videophone.

ôRavager should be locked up. SheÆs a killer.ö He began to press some buttons.

ôWhat are you doing?ö Tim asked. Cyborg finished typing before answering.

ôIÆm calling the Doom Patrol. IÆm getting Gar. And the three of us are going to get the real Titans together.ö He waited those few seconds needed for the call to go in. Robin knew that his friend was in for yet another surprise.

ôHello. YouÆve reached the Dayton Manor in Prague. Headquarters of the Doom Patrol.ö Indeed, he was surprised to see yet another familiar faceà Where it shouldnÆt have been. ôBumblebee?ö Karen Beecher. Another Titanà Ex-Titan, now. ôWeÆre unavailable right now. Please leave a message and weÆll return your call as soon as possible.ö ôKarenÆs a member of the Doom Patrol?ö

ôThis yearÆs changed everyone.ö Tim said, before beginning to walk towards the door of the lab, CyborgÆs gaze on his back. ôGar. Bart. Cassie.ö

ôYou?ö He suddenly asked, but Tim answered almost immediately.

ôI have my share of problems, but theyÆre nothing I canÆt handle.ö Cyborg didnÆt get a chance to see if it was a lie, or maybe he just respected his friendÆs wordsà But he doubted he could have found out even if he did.

ôYou sure youÆre all right?ö He asked again. Tim stopped walking and turned to him, showing Victor his profile.

ôIÆm fine.ö

--

ôDamn, this place is pretty bigà It took me five minutes just to find the elevator.ö Naruto said to no one in particular while wandering through the first floor of the tower. He had been allowed to look around, but it would have been better if he had been given some kind of map. He had gotten completely and utterly lost. ôMhhhàö

He stopped in front of a big door. A really big one, made out ofà Marble? He didnÆt really get it. He already was lost, he might as well look inside. He put both of his hands on the door and pushed it open, and peeked inside. ôThere are lightsàö He entered the room silently, noticing that it was kinda different from the others. Bigger, first, andà ôà Statues?ö

Naruto had found himself in a big all, with rows of statues on both sidesà And one broken one in front of him. He looked around and found that they had all something in common. Some kind ofà Costume, he guessed. All strange clothes. He began to read the names at the bases of the statues. The broken one wasà ôà Donna Troyà Strange name.ö He then went and read all the other ones. Aquagirl. Hawk. Dove. He scratched the top of his head. The list went onà ôHmmà Are they likeàö

ôHere you are. Thought you had left the nest.ö Naruto blinked and turned around. There was a girlà With long grey hair and an eyepatch standing in the doorway, looking at him with aà Malicious smile on her face, her arms crossed. ôYouÆve found the hall of the fallen Titans, I see.ö

ôFallen Titans? As inàö Naruto turned his head to one of the statues for a brief second, and then back to the girl. ôThey all died?ö

ôYes. Once or twice. Bunch of pushovers, if you ask me.ö Naruto got confused at the æonce or twiceÆ thing. How could someone die twice? Then he remembered about Kakuzu and that other freak, Hidan. The girl walked to him and stopped right in front, and she began to basically check him out from head to toe. ôYou look a pretty human-like alien, to me.ö

ôEhmà We called ourselves human too, you know.ö That made Rose æhmmmÆ. Naruto then understood that she didnÆt know the girl. ôBy the way, IÆm Naruto. What about you?ö

ôRose. Super-alias: Ravager.ö Naruto whistled.

ôOne hell of an aliasàö Then he noticed the æsuperÆ part. And then he remembered what Robin had said about the Teen Titans. æA group of young crime-fightersÆ. ôSoà What exactly are you guys?ö

ôWell, donÆt know how it was on your planet, but here we have a lot of super-powered people or just people with some kinda of ability that puts them above other people. But there are bad guys and good guys. We are a group of good guys. We protect freedom and weak people and bring bad guys to justice and things like that.ö Rose replied with a smirk. Naruto nodded crossing his arms. Said like that, it made enough sense to him.

ôUnderstoodà Well, thatÆs basically what I did myself, more or lessà Most of the time.ö She rolled her yes.

ôGo figure. Seems that every alien that comes crashing down from the skies on this planet turns out to be a superhero.ö Rose said, giving a less than amused sigh. ôDinnerÆs ready, before I forget why I came to look for you.ö

ôAh. Alright.ö

--

ôFound the runaway, guys.ö

ôHey! I didnÆt run away!ö Naruto said, a little ticked off. Robin had clearly told him no to do something like that. This earned a chuckle from Eddie.

ôIt seems that youÆve met Ravager.ö Robin said. He was sitting alone on one of the shorter sides of the table. Fitting of the leader, he guessed. ôOther introductions are in order, I suppose. HeÆs Kid Devil.ö

ôHey. WeÆve already met when you were pantless.ö The red-skinned meta joked. Naruto just sweatdropped and waved his hand weakly.

ôIÆm Cyborg.ö Victor said. Naruto nodded in acknowledgement. ôYour name wasà Naruto, right?ö

ôYes. Thanks forà Inviting me to dinner, I guess.ö Naruto said, scratching the back of his head, before slowly taking a seat next to Eddie, between him and Ravager. Robin just smiled.

ôCouldnÆt leave you on an empty stomach, could we?ö The boy wonder replied. Naruto noticed that he hadnÆt taken off his costume even if they were having dinner. He shrugged it off as non important. ôSo, want to tell us about yourself a bit, Naruto?ö

ôWhy not. I was already talking a bit withà Ravager, right.ö Naruto didnÆt have that much memory for faces and names if he didnÆt put a nickname along it. Ravager suited his needs, he guessed. ôWell, she told me that youÆre some kind ofà Heroes.ö Suddenly his trademark grin made his way back to his face. ôIÆm kinda like that too. Just won one hell of a battle before I passed out and ended up here.ö

ôSoà You got anyà Peculiar powers?ö Robin asked, while Victor was recording everything in his mainframe. Naruto nodded.

ôYep. IÆm a ninja.ö He then pointed at his own chest with his right thumb. ôStrongest one ever existed in my world, they say.ö

ôA ninja? Like, an assassin?ö Eddie said, clearly unimpressed. Naruto blinked. DidnÆt he sayà Wait, they knew what a ninja was? ôLike, hide in the shadows, strike from the back?ö

ôThatÆs what ninja do too, yesà You have ninjas here?ö

ôMore or less.ö Robin replied. He seemed to remember that Batman had told him about fighting a group of people that basically acted like ninjas.

ôFrom how he talked about, they donÆt sound like anything special.ö Naruto said, scratching the back of his head. He guessed they had a different kind of ninja on that world. ôI mean, ninjas on my planets are really cool.ö

ôLike? What can you do?ö Eddie asked.

ôWell, for exampleàö Naruto put his hands in a handseal, trying to gather enough chakra to use his trademark techniqueà And suddenly, a sharp pain shot up from his back all the way up to his head. He let out a small scream. ôWhat the?!ö

ôHey! You alright?!ö Eddie said, putting a hand on his shoulder while Naruto held his head.

ôWhatà à Oh, hell.ö Naruto suddenly palmed his forehead. He remembered that kind of pain. It had happened once. When he first started to learn the Rasengan at twelve. Overused chakra pathways. ôItÆs nothingà ItÆs just that it will be a while before I can use my full power, it seems. Used it too much too long.ö

ôàö Victor kept on recording everything and he had been analyzing NarutoÆs body constantly too. When he had made that strange sign with his hands a surge of energy had build up into his bodyà Just to disperse almost immediately. He had equipped his body with every scanning device he had for the occasion.

ôHmmmàö Naruto scratched his hair, and then did a handseal one more time. He began to build his chakra little by little, to measure and test exactly which amount started to hurt. He winced after a few seconds. ôWell, I can do this, for a starter.ö Suddenly, a æpoofÆ and his body became enveloped in smoke. Eddie coughed since he got enveloped in it directly. Robin and the others just kept on observing. ôWhat do you think?ö

ôà Eh?ö Eddie was the one to voice everyoneÆs confusion at hearing his voice coming not from the red-skinned boy. Then the smoke cleared and EddieÆs eyes went wide, and Rose raised an eyebrow in amusement. Naruto had just transformed into a perfect copy of Eddie, voice included from what they had heard. ôShapeshifting? Wow.ö

ôNah. ItÆs the transformation technique.ö Naruto dispelled it and Eddie coughed up because of the smoke again. Naruto laughed nervously. ôSorry about thatà Well, ninjas in my world basically are masters of these kind of techniques. There are different kind of techniques. Like this one and there are techniques that make you able to carve hole open into rocks.ö

ôà Sounds interesting.ö Robin said while glancing in VictorÆs direction. The Cyborg shook his head slowly, so that it could go unnoticed. Not even Cyborg could see through it, hn? Not unusual, butà Impressive.

ôWell, I hope I heal soon! So I can show you the rest!ö Naruto said, grinning widely at Robin just as the twins came in with the dinner. Further talking would have to wait, he guessed. Whatever it was, it smelled good.

--

ôHe didnÆt seem that suspicious to me. I have a feeling heÆs honest, butà We have a precedent, right?ö

ôKara.ö The voice on the other end of the intercom replied. Robin knew better than to take care of something like an unknown alien suddenly ending up on earth on his own. It was better to call the ægrown upsÆ. In his particular case, his own grown up. His mentor. ôYou did the right think in telling me before the others. Even if it was in this eveningÆs news.ö

ôYouÆre going to tell anyone else?ö Tim said.

ôJust him. CanÆt keep anything that obvious from him, after all. You can probably expect a visit tomorrow.ö

ôUnderstood. Then, IÆll go and download VictorÆs registration and send it to you as soon as possible. They need to be defragmented.ö Tim continued, getting up from his seat. ôRobin here, over.ö The figure in the videophone simply nodded, very slightly, and the communication closed. Then Tim started to walk down to the lower level of the tower. Basically, its basement. He stopped once he arrived in front of a bare wall. He removed one of his gloves and leaned his naked palm on the stone.

ôAccess requested.ö He said. The point where he had leaned his palm then suddenly flashed red, and an electronic voice suddenly echoed in the air. ôAccess granted. Welcome back, Robin.ö The female voice said and a door shaped hole opened right in front of him, revealing a set of steps leading down, excavated in the rock. ôComputer report.ö He said while descending them.

Robin had told him that he had his share of problems that he managed to get through. The problem was exactly how, though. His way of dealing with the events of one year before, mainly the death of his best friend, had lead him to two things. First, to basically build his own version of the batcave under Titans Tower. Metal ledges and hi-tech computers and machineries around. Artificial lights. And bats flying around scared when he turned them on. ôAttempt ninety-six complete. Protein link failure at forty-one hours three minutes thirteen seconds. Full genetic breakdown at forty-two hours zero minutes two seconds. Attempt ninety-six unsuccessful.ö

ôSuggestions?ö He asked while walking further down the cave, his stare glancing for a few seconds to a vat full of green liquid, that held in it a set of clothes. Much like Batman did in his own cave. This set of clothes was just a pair of jeans and black T-Shirt with a red symbol. A polygon with a æSÆ in the middle.

ôStabilizer needed. Specifics unknown.ö The computer replied. Robin walked past the clothes and to the main computer, in front of which was the vat inside of which the main purpose of that place took place.

ôInitiate next attempt.ö He said. The vat got filled with bubbling green liquid and suddenly a red light flashed from within. On two screens on the computer behind it displayed two faces and two almost identical sentences. One said: 50% Genetic Material, Human DNA, Source Lex Luthor; the second one said: 50% Genetic Material, Kryptonian DNA, Source Superman.

ôSuperboy cloning attempt ninety-seven initiated.ö
 

Lanceavalon

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#24
You can NOT update this fast enough.
The whole future self and the shit they gave Rose for what her father did to her was bullshit.
 

Meinos Kaen

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#25
Last snippet. Chapter's complete. :p Enjoy!


ôàö After dinner, Naruto had retired to his room. He had a lot on his mind. Also, he needed to verify a couple of things. Mainly, about his body. It seemed that the battle with Madara had taken quite the tool on his body. First of all, his chakra pathways were highly damaged. They could not sustain much chakra nor particular twists of it. So that meant, no Rasengan and max fifty clones. Also that meant no sage mode, since he had to balance natural chakra with his own chakra, and at the moment he didnÆt have enough to do so.

Second thing, he didnÆt know why, but he had been captivated by the sight of the city he had landed in at nightà San Francisco, he seemed to remember. He had always liked staring at Konoha from the top of his fatherÆs head. Maybe he had a liking for sights from high places? Whatever was the case, the sight of that city at night was breathtaking. He was just standing there, admiring the lights and everything else from above. The reflection in the sea water were particularly hypnotic. ôà Damn, how long have I been standing here like this?ö

ôA lot of time. IÆve been watching you for like, ten minutes and youÆve been doing nothing but standing there and staring outside.ö Naruto almost got scared, so focused he was on the scenery outside when someone talked from behind his back. He turned around in a flash and sighed in relief. It was just Rose. ôScared you?ö

ôGeez, you shouldnÆt sneak up on someone whoÆs completely focused on somethingàö He said, scratching the back of his headà And he barely caught something that she had launched to him. It jumped around in his hands and he barely managed to catch it before it ended on the ground. He stared at it still crouched over. It was a bottle. ôA beer?ö

ôAlways better to drink in groups of two or more people.ö She said, smiling maliciously and sitting on his bed. Naruto stared at the alcoholic beverage for a little bit. He didnÆt see much sense in drinking, mostly because the furball prevented him from getting jolly, figures drunk, but he guessed it would be rude.

ôEhm, how do I open it?ö Naruto suddenly noticed that he had no way of opening it without hurting himself or crushing the bottle in the process. Rose just held out her left hand and made sign with her index finger of coming closer. The blonde blinked but just obeyedà And he paled as the girl picked out a sword. ôH-Hey! What are youàö

ôJust hold still.ö Without giving him time to retort anymore the girl swung her sword horizontally in a flash and then put the sword back in a scabbard on her back, before starting to un-strap it. Naruto had let out a small scream, but after that he got confused. What did she do? Suddenly, she let out a soft breath against the bottle, and the tip of the bottle along with the cap fell to the ground. To say that the shinobi was impressed was an understatement. He just stared at the girl and at the now opened beer with wide eyes. ôGoing to drink it or wait for it to become vinegar?ö

ôAh! Y-Yes, sorry.ö Naruto immediately felt compelled to take a large sip of the beverage, if nothing else to honour her display of skill. He drank a quarter of the bottle all in one breath, letting out a æPaaahÆ right after. ôBitterà But, wow.ö He returned his gaze to Rose, who was drinking a bit herself, her bottle already opened before she came in the room. ôThat was some swordmanship.ö

ôAnd you should see me when IÆm serious.ö Rose said, smirking. Naruto nodded and sat beside her on the bed.

ôSoà YouÆre a superhero.ö That earned a snort from the grey-haired girl.

ôI try. But since IÆm the daughter of one of the worst criminals and assassins in the world and me myself did my share of the work, itÆs going to be kinda difficult.ö She said, taking another sip from her beverage right after. Naruto blinked at that.

ôGeezà I can understand how that canà Impair your heroic career.ö The blonde scratched the back of his head, feeling a bit uncomfortable all of a sudden. Rose in the meanwhile, though, wasà Surprised.

ôSo? No æHelp, murdererÆ?ö It was NarutoÆs time to snort. He gave her an amused look.

ôBelieve me, Ravager. Among all the murderers IÆve met in my life, youÆre the less dangerous lookingà And probably less dangerous altogether. And itÆs not like taking lives makes you a bad person. There are always circumstances.ö Naruto took another sip of his beer while Rose stared at him still a bit surprised, but a smile of amusement and interest made its way on her lips. She leaned back on the bed and basically threw her legs on his lap, while holding her head with one hand.

ôWell, letÆs seeà Make an example.ö Naruto blushed a little from the sudden gesture and closeness. He brought his right index finger to his nose and scratched the bridge.

ôHmmmà There was this guyà The older brother of my best friend. He killed his entire clan but himself and his brother. Every single living relative and more.ö Even Rose was surprised by that. She hadnÆt done something asà Massive as that. ôAll that because his clan was going to stage a coup dÆÚtat that would basically throw the village they lived in into chaos, so corrupted it had become. He loved peace and his villageà And for the sake of peace and his younger brother, he became a murderer.ö

ôàö Rose listened to every word, nodding slightly. Quite the story. That took some guts andà Some nobility. ôWell, thatÆs someone with a noble soul if IÆve ever heard about oneà I guess.ö

ôYou guess.ö Naruto said, turning to her with a confused face. She just shrugged her shoulders.

ôIÆm not an expert about nobility. You should ask Robinà Well, maybe not.ö She finished her beer in one last swipe, before letting it fall to the ground.

ôHey, it will get dirty!ö He leaned forward and pulled the empty bottle off the floor, settling it in a vertical positionà Before Rose used her legs to make him lean back on his bad, a bit harder than necessary. ôOw.ö

ôArenÆt you going to tell me to get my legs off you?ö Naruto rolled his eyes.

ôTheyÆre not that heavy and as long as you donÆt kick me in the chest anymore, I donÆt see the problem.ö Naruto said, before turning his head to Rose. ôNo, seriously. No more hits in the chest. IÆve got enough beating from a girl for no reasons to last me three lifetimes.ö

ôSo, IÆve got to have a reason, hm? Wellàö She suddenly removed her legs from him and crawled to him and put herself above him on all fours, standing on her knees and hands. ôIt was to get you in the right position.ö

ôàö Naruto blushed but rolled his eyes nonetheless. ôWell, there are two reasons for this too. Either youÆre a really bad drunk since youÆve drunk just one beer, or youÆre teasing the hell out of me because you like seeing me all flustered and mushy.ö

ôNot enough, though. I canÆt hear you stuttering.ö Naruto chuckled, focusing his thoughts on TsunadeÆs figure.

ôGirl, youÆve three cups too early to try and get me flustered.ö Rose frowned at that. Naruto then remembered that her swords were still near there. ôI meanà IÆm pretty used to being around pretty girls. ThatÆs all.ö

ôHmmmàö Rose stared at his face for a bit before somersaulting over him and out of the bed using her hands. Naruto sighed in relief and picked up her swords, handing the back to her. ôYouÆre no fun, like thisà But it has been a nice chat.ö

ôSame here.ö Naruto got up from the bed and smiled at her. Nice girl. Funny to talk to. Rose waved at him while getting out of his room, closing the door behind her. Naruto found himself still smiling, crossing his arms behind his head and falling back on his bed. ôHmmà Well, they all seem pretty nice people. Apart the half robot one. He was awfully silent. WhatÆs eating him?ö

--

A few hours passed in the night. And while most people were enjoying a much needed rest, someone was still awake at 3:35 AM.

ôCloning attempt ninety-seven unsuccessful.ö The computer said. Tim suddenly felt the tiredness of the night all on his shoulders.

ôAgain, computer. Try again.ö

ôCloning attempt ninety-eight initiated.ö Tim slowly made his way out of the cave and back to his room, removing his cape and sitting on his bed, holding his head with one hand. Ever since he had built his own batcave, his every free moment had been dedicated to that single task. Trying to clone his deceased best friend. He seemed okay to the others but the fact was that he missed him so much thatà

ôWhere have you been?ö So tired he was that he had failed to notice the lump on his bed under his sheets that suddenly came alive and grabbed him by the neck, throwing him on his back on his bed, before throwing itself over him. ôIÆve been waiting all night.ö

The lump said, revealing itself to be Rose. Robin got shocked for a few seconds when he realized she was butt naked. That allowed her to lower her head for a kiss. That gave him back some reason. He pushed her away but she grabbed his hands and æfought backÆ. ôRose?! What are you doing?!ö

ôHaving fun.ö She replied, like what she was doing was the most normal thing in the world.

ôWhat are you doing in my bed?ö He asked, going calmer by the minuteà Wow, where was she hiding all that stuff?

ôTrying to take off your utility belt.ö He groaned.

ôHave you been drinking, again?ö He said. She smiled a little maliciously.

ôMaybe.ö Robin suddenly felt like palming his face. But that would give that octopus with silver hair more ways to immobilize him.

--

ôHmmàö Naruto turned around in his sleep. He felt strangeà Like someone was observing him while he was sleeping. But that couldnÆt be, could it? Then, he felt a small noise. He shot up in his bed and turned to his door. It was slightly opened. But he was pretty sure it was closed before he fell asleep. ôàö What the? Maybe itÆs that creepy robot guy?

Naruto got up from his bed and silently went for his door, opening it all the way. He turned to right and left. The corridor was dark and no one was in sight. ôàö He closed his eyes and focusedà He could hear very light footsteps coming from his right. He silently turned in that direction and began to walk down the corridor.

In a few minutes, something else began to let itself heard. Electrical noises and a couple of voices. One of those was electrical too. ôAccess terrorist groups. Subfile: brotherhood of evil.ö

ôPassword requested.ö The electrical voice replied. Naruto turned the angle and saw a clearly female silhouette, with long blonde hair, manipulating something on a console.

ôPasswordà Jericho.ö She said after thinking about it for a few seconds.

ôPassword out of date. Security activated.ö The girl let out a whispered curse as some kind of alarm went off, a noise filling the air along with the voice now shouting æWarning. Intruder in war room.Æ. Naruto thought that it was time to let himself be known.

ôWhat the hell are you doing?ö He said, stepping out from behind the angle, surprising the girl, who turned around in a flash. ôWho are you?ö

ôàö CassieÆs attention was on something else, though. Mainly, what Naruto was wearing. A pyjamas, butà She had already seen those pyjamas before. And not on the boy currently in front of her. She kept on staring at him, much to NarutoÆs confusion. ôTake it off.ö

ôWhaà?!ö Before Naruto could get a chance to understand what had been asked of him the girl suddenly lunged at him, a fist pulled back, ready to strike.

ôTake it off!ö

Continueà
In the next chapter...

During an eventful evening and night, Naruto gets to know more about the world he lives in and the Teen Titansà Including how theyÆre not a real team, at the moment. Stay tuned.
 
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