Harry Potter The Boy Who Won't Stay Dead

Shadowbakasama

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#1
The Boy-Who-Won't-Stay-Dead



The wards on the rental house that James and Lily Potter were living at in Godric's Hollow were very strong. The were close to a Ley Line for the wards to draw magic from and Godric's Hollow has had wizards and witches living there for centuries further increasing the amounts of ambient magic. But with Lord Voldemort after you the Potters wanted even more protection, so the large Rune Stones that provided the power sump for the wards was augmented by Blood Wards binding the magical cores of all 3 Potters into the wards. Then on top of this they were hidden by a Fidelis Charm.

They should have been very safe, and the were until Halloween when their secret keeper brought the Dark Lord to the house and opened the front door for him. James Potter met his end in the living room when he rushed the evil bastard, James's magic was bound into the wards, so using magic to fight was useless, and so he was cut down by a green bolt of death only half across the room.

Lily Potter met her end in the nursery standing between her son and the vile abomination after the toddler's life when she wouldn't stand aside.

Harry Potter lived a while longer as Voldemort made preparations for making another horcrux. This one was going to be made from Griffendor's Signet Ring that he had just take from James Potter's hand.

However the Dark Lord had a problem, his soul had already been fractured four times making horcruxes and was getting a little thin and ragged. So in his research into other soul magics he discovered that a Soul Bond also anchored the soul to this plane of existence until all the other partners are ready to pass over into final death. Often this caused a widow or widower to be haunted by the soul of their spouse until they died, or even ghost couples, as one can not pass over without the other.

But Voldemort wasn't counting on finding that perfect match and making a Soul Bond. No, he was going to force the bond by stripping a soul of it's protections and using legilimency to rape and imprint the soul to make the connection. Then killing his Soul Mate and forcing their soul into a horcrux, instead of a fragment of his own soul.

So Voldemort mentally tortured and raped Harry's soul over his mother's dead body and then cast the Killing Curse on the boy, ready to put the soul into the signet ring.

Which was a big mistake, for Voldemort had bypassed the powerful wards on the house, rather than breaking them down, thinking correctly that breaking a set of wards of that power would take a team of Curse-Breakers a few hours and give the Potter's plenty of time to escape. But the wards had a trap built into them with the Blood Wards.

Thus when Harry Potter, the last surviving Potter bound into the Blood Wards died all the wards on the house targeted his killer and went into a cascading failure, dumping all the power stored in the Rune Stones into Tom Riddle's body causing him to spontainiusly combust, blowing out the roof over that part of the house as the ward failure kept going until à Harry Potter drew another breath and started to cry as the magics prepared to bind his soul into a horcrux and make the horcrux nigh indestructible and self repairing were applied to his body.

The cascading failure of the wards stopped as the Potter child lived again, and the Flame Freezing protections kicked in just in time to stop the fire from spreading from the ceiling into the nursery.

Peter Petegrew, coward that he was, ran away after hearing his master screaming in pain and then going silent as the roof exploded outwards. The sound of a large motorcycle coming from overhead had nothing to do with it really, his job was just to open the door for his master only, he wasn't there as his back up or anything like that. That had been made clear in front of the other Death Eaters, this was a solo mission for the Dark Lord, Peter was just the door opener. Yep, he was in the clear so he'd be fine if he showed up without Lord Voldemort, right?

Not! Peter couldn't even fool himself on this issue, if he was found by any of the Inner Circle they would turn him over to that crazy bint Bellatrix to find out what had happened to their Lord. Nope, it would be better to be caught by The Grim called Padfoot than go back to the Death Eaters.



Sirius Black had been worried about something happen on the All Hallow's Eve so he had gone to check up on Peter, after finding out the rat was not hiding out in this week's safe house like he had agreed upon, Sirius became seriously worried, and Sirius hated to be serious, seriously. And so the black sheep of the Black family, (or would he be the white sheep?) jumped on his big flying chopper when he felt his amulet crack.

Pulling the chain out from his shirt he saw that the charm that he had monitoring the wards at the Potter's hideout was broken, meaning that all the Potters were dead. So after screaming in rage and grief for the loss of his best friends James and Lily, and his godson Harry, he took off into the sky headed towards their house at full speed. Sirius had some serious wrathful smiting to do on a filthy rat.

When Sirius got to the house he saw that it was in ruins, with the roof blown out, windows broken outwards, and parts of the outer walls scorched from the wards failing. He was surprised the house itself wasn't burning. After parking his motorcycle, Sirius changed into Padfoot and started sniffing out a rat.

A giant of a man portkeyed into the yard after the big black dog was gone and went into the house and after a few minutes came out with a blanket wrapped baby while talking into a hand mirror and decided to steal the big flying chopper.



----- Time Skip -------------


A stern looking tabby cat was watching an Auto-Addressing Quill writing on the student letters going out today and swiping the top letter off the stack into a mail bag when the quill was finished with the address. The cat didn't pay too much attention to the oddly very exact addresses that they needed because of their rather untalented mail owls, not like some mail owls that could track down the postal recipient with just the name and would show up when you had mail for them. When that stack of letter was finished the tabby pushed another stack of letters under the quill, this stack was all for one boy that they were having trouble getting to receive the letters. They were even using the Spammer charm on the letters so each letter became 100 when delivered, if not for the boy living with Muggles they would have already been sending Howlers.

When the quill finished the first letter of the new stack swiped the letter onto the table and looked at the address and let out a horrible caterwauling howl and jumped off the table turning into an old Scottish witch that snatched that letter and ran for the fireplace. Stopping only to grab some powder from the bowl and call out ôAuror Department Emergency Floo!ö before striding into the green fire and being swept away.


It was late afternoon and the dayshift Aurors were looking forward to going home when the emergency fireplace flared and a witch that they all recognized as Professor McGonagall stormed into the ready room in such a mood that it scared every last one of them, and then she took charge.

ôI need a tracking and rescue team, an emergency medi-witch team, Madam Bones, and Mad-Eye Moody as fast as you can get them here!ö McGonagall rasped at the highest ranking Auror in view as strode towards him slapping a green envelope into his hand.

Mr. H Potter
The Unmarked Shallow Grave
Woods West of Felday Glade
Holmbury St. Mary
Surrey

Auror Dawlish looked at the address and swore ôQueen Mab's frozen heart!ö turning to the other Aurors he commanded ôStebbins get Madam Bones! Jones, Cross, and Marshal get Mad-Eye! Jenson use the floo and get a Seer from the list to drop everything and Get Them Here Now! Rawling grab someone from the portkey office! Rook get Orion from the owlery! Dwight start calling in the night shift. Ross grab that scrying bowl and come here.ö he finished heading over to the wall map.

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I'm using the type of blood wards mentioned in DerLaCriox's Rocking the Boat, and the soul bond from my own Type O- Soul. There will be some additions to the blood wards such as slow regeneration that works as preservation on dead bodies, and resusitation of an ensouled healthy corpse.

Don't worry about Harry to much, he's just taking a dirt nap, this will be just one of many times the Dursleys kill Harry.
 

Oni_kawaii

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#2
Oh bugger did I get killed again? :p

looks like a fun Idea. much crack will ensue
 

Ninsaneja

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#3
Zerg rush: The only strategy for the immortal respawning man.
 

snthsnth

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#4
I like the idea, you could use a good beta though.
But Voldemort wasn't counting on finding that perfect match and making a Soul Bond. No, he was going to force the bond by stripping a soul of it's protections and basically raping it to make the connection.
I suggest using a word like 'dominating' instead of 'basically raping' unless actual rape is part of it; and if it is, use 'rape' instead of 'basically rape'.
So Voldemort tortured and raped Harry's soul of his mother's dead body
You may mean 'over' but I'm not sure. 'Tortured and imprinted' sounds more technical, like something complex is occurring.

Just a few suggestions.
 

Shadowbakasama

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#5
OK, did a couple edits and it looks little better.

With the imprinting idea, I'm wondering how this will impact Harry's personality. Of course Harry being murdered a few times by the Dursley's will also be very traumatic.

My concept for the Blood Wards. The wards themselves are carved into a key rune stone that draws and stores ambient and ley line mana in addition to tapping Harry's magical core for magic power. There are also cornerstones that define the property protected and blood runes etched into the keystone that define the people protected. When the rune stones were moved to Privet Drive they lost contact with any ley lines and had only Harry to provide ambient magic, so all the power is coming from the blood ward tap on Harry.

Unlike in DerLaCriox's Rocking the Boat the blood wards don't draw power unless Harry is within the ward lines of the cornerstones, thus he must live at #4 Privet Drive to recharge the rune stones, or the rune stones would have to be moved to his new home. This makes any magic at home more difficult for Harry, especially once he starts school, since the wards will be pulling more of his power to recharge after he has been away for 10 months.

The original wards at Godric's Hallow were much more powerful and drew loads of power since they hadn't yet reached full charge and were maintaining the fidelis, fire protection, travel wards, structural armor wards, and anti-intruder wards, thus the Potters were at squib levels when Voldemort showed up.
 

Obfuscated

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#6
Shadowbakasama said:
OK, did a couple edits and it looks little better.

With the imprinting idea, I'm wondering how this will impact Harry's personality. Of course Harry being murdered a few times by the Dursley's will also be very traumatic.

My concept for the Blood Wards. The wards themselves are carved into a key rune stone that draws and stores ambient and ley line mana in addition to tapping Harry's magical core for magic power. There are also cornerstones that define the property protected and blood runes etched into the keystone that define the people protected. When the rune stones were moved to Privet Drive they lost contact with any ley lines and had only Harry to provide ambient magic, so all the power is coming from the blood ward tap on Harry.

Unlike in DerLaCriox's Rocking the Boat the blood wards don't draw power unless Harry is within the ward lines of the cornerstones, thus he must live at #4 Privet Drive to recharge the rune stones, or the rune stones would have to be moved to his new home. This makes any magic at home more difficult for Harry, especially once he starts school, since the wards will be pulling more of his power to recharge after he has been away for 10 months.

The original wards at Godric's Hallow were much more powerful and drew loads of power since they hadn't yet reached full charge and were maintaining the fidelis, fire protection, travel wards, structural armor wards, and anti-intruder wards, thus the Potters were at squib levels when Voldemort showed up.
Well that explanation makes Dumbledore either very, very stupid - far safer to move the Dursley's to a mansion where the wards can draw power from something besides the tiny infant - or vindicates the "Dumbledore is out trying to kill Harry"/"Evildore" crowd because it suits Dumbeldore just fine to weaken Harry magically.

Alternativly Dumbledore knows diddly squat about the ward scheme employed by the Potters (Or warding in general) and just realized that he'd have move the ward stones to Harry's new residence without knowing that something like a ley line ot other sources of magic were kinda required.

Honestly even without "Fate's little special" for Harry in this story Dumbledore will be hard pressed to come up with a reason for doing what what he did - or what he convinced his parents to do either.

If you do feel the need to have Dumbledore launch his "Wollt ihr den' Greater Good" spiel at least have his audience tear him a new one or or at least not think him noble and good for it.

*should be 'das', I know. But 'den' flows better with the original quote.
 

Shadowbakasama

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#7
Well that explanation makes Dumbledore either very, very stupid - far safer to move the Dursley's to a mansion where the wards can draw power from something besides the tiny infant - or vindicates the "Dumbledore is out trying to kill Harry"/"Evildore" crowd because it suits Dumbeldore just fine to weaken Harry magically.

Alternativly Dumbledore knows diddly squat about the ward scheme employed by the Potters (Or warding in general) and just realized that he'd have move the ward stones to Harry's new residence without knowing that something like a ley line ot other sources of magic were kinda required.
Dumbledore didn't trust any wizarding families to protect Harry for 10 years, and living on a ley line would make the Dursleys easy to find, since ley lines are like wizarding highways and power lines. So living off the ley lines is like being out in the boonies without power or water.

I'm tempted to have the Death Eaters put out a contract on Harry, and a Hit Wizard collected the bounty when Harry entered the public school system when he was 5 or 6 years old, so all the imperious DE crowd already think Harry is dead and are shocked when he is seen after getting his Hogwarts letter. They even have a snuff film taken with omnioculars, Snape brought a copy to Dumbles and he thinks its a well done fake since Harry is still living at home by his silver gizmos monitoring the wards, but takes steps to file a death certificate and hide all public records of Harry from wizards after that point.
 

Obfuscated

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#8
Shadowbakasama said:
Well that explanation makes Dumbledore either very, very stupid - far safer to move the Dursley's to a mansion where the wards can draw power from something besides the tiny infant - or vindicates the "Dumbledore is out trying to kill Harry"/"Evildore" crowd because it suits Dumbeldore just fine to weaken Harry magically.

Alternativly Dumbledore knows diddly squat about the ward scheme employed by the Potters (Or warding in general) and just realized that he'd have move the ward stones to Harry's new residence without knowing that something like a ley line ot other sources of magic were kinda required.
Dumbledore didn't trust any wizarding families to protect Harry for 10 years, and living on a ley line would make the Dursleys easy to find, since ley lines are like wizarding highways and power lines. So living off the ley lines is like being out in the boonies without power or water.

I'm tempted to have the Death Eaters put out a contract on Harry, and a Hit Wizard collected the bounty when Harry entered the public school system when he was 5 or 6 years old, so all the imperious DE crowd already think Harry is dead and are shocked when he is seen after getting his Hogwarts letter. They even have a snuff film taken with omnioculars, Snape brought a copy to Dumbles and he thinks its a well done fake since Harry is still living at home by his silver gizmos monitoring the wards, but takes steps to file a death certificate and hide all public records of Harry from wizards after that point.
From what you told us about Dumbledore's understanding of the wards - and why can't he cast an Fidelus again (A general sort of question really) - the wards are supposed to be a ultimate defense against any magical threat.

As long as the wards have (sufficient) power Dumbledore should think he could take out full page adverts* in Daily Prophet wrt. "The Location of the Boy who Lived". And then laugh as the DE's or their hired help waste themselves against the wards.

So why would he risk the wards not having such power by relying on a single infant magical as a power source ?
Is Harry that powerful that young ?
Does Dumbledore simply not know how the blood wards work beyond the basic use ("Ward stones at edges, anchor in the center.") ?


*IIRC Dumbledore does want Harry to get spoiled by his fame which was the reason he didn't choose a wizarding family. Much more so than protect him, the wards are supposed to be able to take care of that.

I really like the concept but explaining how Dumbledore thought having a (powerful) ward being powered by a single infant could a be anything but a disaster in the making ('Squib!Harry' due to core drainage from infancy comes to mind) won'T easy to make believable. More challenging to come up with an explanation that satisfies both the reader and the in-universe people listening to it.
 

Shadowbakasama

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#9
From what you told us about Dumbledore's understanding of the wards - and why can't he cast an Fidelus again (A general sort of question really) - the wards are supposed to be a ultimate defense against any magical threat.
The wards at Privet Drive are a very stripped down version of what was at Godric's Hallow. No Fidelus, no fire protection, no structural reinforcement. It's probably just anti-scrying and the blood wards on Harry.

As long as the wards have (sufficient) power Dumbledore should think he could take out full page adverts* in Daily Prophet wrt. "The Location of the Boy who Lived". And then laugh as the DE's or their hired help waste themselves against the wards.
At Godric's Hallow the wards the wards were expected to last long enough to get away or for Auror's to arrive. A team of cursebreaker's could tear down the wards, but it would take time and couldn't be down by stealth.

The wards at Privet Drive are not meant to withstand an assault, they are to hide the house from scrying and keep the blood protections intact. There must be a filtering mail ward, since letters to Harry don't get through except from friends, school, and the ministry.



So why would he risk the wards not having such power by relying on a single infant magical as a power source ?
Is Harry that powerful that young ?
Does Dumbledore simply not know how the blood wards work beyond the basic use ("Ward stones at edges, anchor in the center.") ?
Dumbledore thinks that the Blood Wards saved Harry somehow, but doesn't really understand how they work so he moved the whole ward set to #4 Privet Drive after removing the house wards for Godric's Hallow from them and then setting up some very limited wards for the Dursley's house.


*IIRC Dumbledore does want Harry to get spoiled by his fame which was the reason he didn't choose a wizarding family. Much more so than protect him, the wards are supposed to be able to take care of that.

I really like the concept but explaining how Dumbledore thought having a (powerful) ward being powered by a single infant could a be anything but a disaster in the making ('Squib!Harry' due to core drainage from infancy comes to mind) won'T easy to make believable. More challenging to come up with an explanation that satisfies both the reader and the in-universe people listening to it.
Dumbledore doesn't understand the Blood Wards. He doesn't understand that they tap the magical power of Harry's core when he is at home. He thinks they are powered by 'love', as if there was any love between Aunt Petunia and Harry, he just knows that they are recharged when Harry is at home.

The Wards don't use that much power unless they are assaulted, are the rune stones work as batteries, so it is only when Harry comes home and they start recharging that they draw much power, and to this point he is only away from home on school days. The draw from the wards has prevented a lot of accidental magic since Harry never levitates toys or food to himself, he has to get emotional for him to do any accidental magic.
 

Obfuscated

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#10
Well, Dumbeldore better hopes he remains the most knowledgable source on blood wards in the story then.

Because holy hell, if he can't bullshit his audience because they actually know how blood wards work (and don't go 'Surely that isn't the whole story. He's Dumbledore, a plan within a plan.'), his 'understanding' is going to cost him.

Hm, what exactly is his excuse for not having these other wards ?
 
#11
Well, Dumbeldore better hopes he remains the most knowledgable source on blood wards in the story then.

Because holy hell, if he can't bullshit his audience because they actually know how blood wards work (and don't go 'Surely that isn't the whole story. He's Dumbledore, a plan within a plan.'), his 'understanding' is going to cost him.

Hm, what exactly is his excuse for not having these other wards ?
Dumbledore couldn't put up any powerful wards because there was no ley line or ambient magic to power them. The whole purpose of putting him with the Dursleys was to hide him in the muggle world, where wizards couldn't find him. Lily Evans was a muggle born, so there is little wizarding information on her family. Also her parents had died already, and her sister was married, thus changing her name. Would Snape even know Petunia's married name? Her husband's name and where he lives?

Dumbledore sealed the Potter's will, and the Dursley's never adopted Harry, so no paper trail at all until Harry enters primary school.

Then the Dursley's live in a purely muggle area and have nothing to do with any magicals except for the squib cat lady down the road. About the only things that they didn't do to hide him were changing his name and face.
 

Pirazy

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#12
So.. do you have an explanation for why the neighbours don't get suspicious when Harry gets 'disappeared' the first time? Or why Harry doesn't say anything about his relatives routinely murdering and burying him?

A child walking around covered in dirt and with blood on his clothes is gonna raise red motherfucking flags when he goes around saying "my uncle buried me in that field over there :(".
 

Prince Charon

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#13
Pirazy said:
So.. do you have an explanation for why the neighbours don't get suspicious when Harry gets 'disappeared' the first time? Or why Harry doesn't say anything about his relatives routinely murdering and burying him?

A child walking around covered in dirt and with blood on his clothes is gonna raise red motherfucking flags when he goes around saying "my uncle buried me in that field over there :(".
Well, yes. Most people would call the police for far less than that, and 'Dumbledore obliviates the police all the time' stories get a lot of complaints from people who don't think there's something seriously wrong with Dumbledore.

Mind you, maybe its the wards that obliviate the police.
 
#14
So.. do you have an explanation for why the neighbours don't get suspicious when Harry gets 'disappeared' the first time? Or why Harry doesn't say anything about his relatives routinely murdering and burying him?

A child walking around covered in dirt and with blood on his clothes is gonna raise red motherfucking flags when he goes around saying "my uncle buried me in that field over there sad.gif".
Well, for one Harry is not allowed outside much except for chores and school, and the Dursley's have spread all those rumors about Harry being a hooligan and compulsive liar. Second, this is probably the 1st time they have gone to the trouble of burying him (And they buried him tied up). He has probably starved and bleed out in his cupboard and gone all Revenant and broken out to get food, water, and bandages to help himself recover.

I have plans for Harry dieing several times at Hogwarts and going Revenant and then recovering. Fighting a troll in a bathroom, getting sacrificed by Ron on the big chessboard, being strangled by Quirrel, staring at the Basalisk when Fawkes is late, getting bitten by the same, fighting with Tom, snogging a dementor on the train (He didn't actually die on this one, just wished he did, they didn't want to share a compartment with Remus), falling from his broom and again getting snogged (He insists on be obliviated of these), drowning in the lake when the Gillyweed expires and still swimming or bottom walking out, getting killed fighting with V in the graveyard then walking away, fighting with DEs in the ministry, same, same, fighting V in ministry.

Harry will also be a bit meaner than normal, and a bit of a pyromaniac. Voldemort took more care hiding some of his horcruxs, can we say Marianna's Trench, and NASA.

Part of the story is how they try and keep this a secret, while Harry insists he is not the Boy-Who-Lived, and that no one has ever survived the killing curse, even though he will admit to being hit with it an increasing member of times as the story goes on.
 

Pirazy

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#15
This is supposed to be crack, right? It'd be pretty hard to take it seriously with Harry dying in amusing ways and freaking people out all the time..

Heh, I just imagined Harry getting torn to shreds by Lupin and hours later Lupin coming to his senses, tasting blood and finding pieces of flesh between his teeth, following the trail of blood and finding a disemboweled Harry in a pool of blood.

Hilarious. :D
 

sinewyk

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#16
You guys are sick.

...

I love it :hail:
 
#17
Pirazy said:
This is supposed to be crack, right? It'd be pretty hard to take it seriously with Harry dying in amusing ways and freaking people out all the time..

Heh, I just imagined Harry getting torn to shreds by Lupin and hours later Lupin coming to his senses, tasting blood and finding pieces of flesh between his teeth, following the trail of blood and finding a disemboweled Harry in a pool of blood.

Hilarious. :D
It's not going to be a total crack fic, but some of it will be morbidly silly.

Later in the story I'm going to introduce a parody of a Soul Bond romance. I sort of set it up in Type O- Soul, Harry is going to soul bond with every girl he kisses and not realize it until 5th or 6th year, I'm planning on Romilda Vain kissing him under a misletoe and going "Oh I knew we were meant to be together." and going on about how they just soul bonded and she wants to find a room and have him right now and 10 or so girls have already kissed Harry under the misletoe and realize that they felt the same thing.

Maybe they will develope some Empathy with the soul bond and be like "ZOMG! Harry's dead! ... No he's back up. Nope, there he goes being dead again." during the might at the ministry. Sort of shows how AK doesn't work well on someone whose soul can't leave their body and has mastered the trick of going Revenant and reviving by that point.

Maybe some Omake like:

"Get out here Freak!" Uncle Vernon yells. "Some bloke in black robes gave me 1,000 pounds to kill you and record it on these binoculars. So how do you want to die?"

"I'd like to try carbon monoxide poisoning. It sounds painless and non-messy sir."

"Hmm, good point. Alright I'll put the car in the garage running for you, but no putting it into gear or revving the engine or no dinner."
 

zeebee1

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#19
The important question is how you can live with being so inconsiderate.
 

snthsnth

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#20
That is a very good question, ZB.

Luna, don't post in very old threads. PM the author.
 
#22
I've got more, but it's on a crashed SSD right now. I burned a motherboard and the replacement doesn't recognize the SSD as a drive. I have a USB to SATA device on the way to try and get it back.
 

sinewyk

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#23
Shadowbakasama said:
I've got more, but it's on a crashed SSD right now. I burned a motherboard and the replacement doesn't recognize the SSD as a drive. I have a USB to SATA device on the way to try and get it back.
How the fuck does that always happen to people ... Half the people on FF.net must have had problems like that :rofl:
 

Ninsaneja

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#24
Just rewrite it from memory half as good and with no adjectives. I done that one before.
 

ragnarok1337

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#25
Despite my thoughts are on necroing threads, I'm actually kind of glad someone necroed this one. I had no idea about it until now. Plus, this might encourage the author to start working on it again.
 
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