Harry Potter The HP/SMT idea.

FH_Meta

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#1
Like I said in the idea section, I'm trying my hand at a version of the SMT/HP fusion that popped up, only my little take on it. Here is about the first fourth to half of the prologue.

Naoki, or The Hitoshura as he was known in some circles, rarely was seen in the ôUnder the Roseö CafÚ. The clientele was mostly demons and summoners, with the rare demiko or personist gracing its doors. Then there was him. Unique in all the worlds. So that meant that he couldnÆt get any group discounts. Dammit, shouldnÆt summoning some of the Jack Frosts that kept the freezer cold or some of the Pyro Jacks that kept the lanterns lit count for something?

Well, at least he got to hold meetings there, for the same almost free price that anyone could get. At least he was able to get the other guy to buy the food there. Usually. Well more like 7 times out of 10.

ôAre you quite done with your narrative internal monologue, or shall I come back in later?ö It was Lucifer, the Fallen One. ôYou should be less predictable, Naoki, it makes you more interesting.ö Yep, it was the red haired, silver-tongued head honcho of Chaos. No one else could sneak up on Naoki so effortlessly, and avoid the temptation to try and kill him.

ôSo what causes the Great Lord Lucifer to call upon the aid of one such as I; surely Armageddon is not nigh.ö Just as only Lucifer was able to sneak up on Naoki effortlessly, so was Naoki able to spew utter shit and sound believable. Lucifer knew that Naoki was spewing shit, so the end result was negligible.

ôI have a pair ofàBusiness propositions for you to consider. Both will take you out of the nation for a while, but I believe that the combined recompense will be more than sufficient.ö

Small curious noise, motion to go on, Lucifer was certain that he had Naoki hooked. ô The first one is a small bit of, shall we say, behavioral modification. I want you to drop three à persons, three of your favorite type of persons, into the Amala Network. æHelpÆ them, keep them alive, and most of all, let them get out on their own.ö Lucifer often wondered if his experiment knew just how much he loved seeing that predatory glimmer in the eyes, or how much he was hurt by the refusal to go those last few steps and become a full demon; most likely, indeed almost certainly, he thought with some small amount of mirth.

ôPay?ö It was said leaning forward, with just a hint of aggression, which meant that he had his little experiment hooked. Small, sincere smile, lean forward, hands clasped in front of his face, all just to real him in a little more before the kill. ôWell, I know that if you knew more about them that you would gladly accept their suffering as payment, but because you donÆt, yet, you will get four-hundred-thousand yen, an equal amount of Makkah, and any power expended in the process will be replaced.ö
 

Israfel

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#2
Hmm, wow, so somebody's actually taking a crack at this idea, and it seems that you're going with the 'insert HP characters into SMT-verse' instead of the other way around, a bit too short to comment on right now but seems like a fairly interesting start, if for nothing else than that the Hitoshura is on speaking terms with Lucifer.
 

FH_Meta

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#3
And here is the rescued part two of the introduction.

The look on the not-quite-a-demon's face told Lucifer that now was the perfect time for the waitress to come and take their orders, because it would be absoultely infuriating. Sadly, the universe was not so acommodating. Ah, well, the Morningstar had been forced to improvise because of far greater inconviences. "Now, I feel that the second task will require some explaination. Now, how to properly approach this?" The other participant in the conversation gave a sarcastic reply, "Perhaps it would be best to start with the beginning?" Lucifer's smirk said that response was a mistake. "Well, in the beginning He created the Heavens and the Earth..." Small growl from Naoki, "Not that beginning."

"Ah yes, well, tea with some mint in it." Lucifer found the few seconds of total bewilderment on his most powerful experiment's face to be so endearing, in the same way one would find a pet's antics endearing. "Water and the vegettarian sandwich."

"Do you know of Harry Potter?" Blank look, ah the joys of small manipulations. "Some of the more occulted rags I keep around might have mentioned him, and I think the Raidou site had something bout him and his godfather. I could be totally wrong though; why is this going to be a Seeker job?"

"I wqas thinking about creating another hitoshura." It took Naoki several seconds to fully process that statement and come to the obvious conclusion; he even hanaged to growl out a demand, "Explain." Small smile here and then start " The logic goes as thus; Voldemort wins, then he publicly attacks the mundane world, he attacks and the Messians form and develop faster, the Messians go from small cult to major Christian sect to supplanting Christianity any faster and they screw over all my plans. Therefore, to prevent the total dominace of Law, I am going to empower the hero of the Light with dark powers."

And as if to make up for its earlier impertinence, the universe had the waitress come back with the tea and sandwich just as Naoki looked like he was about o respond. Lucifer's greatest failed (?) experiment was barely able to say his response in a normal voice, "If that didn't make so much sense, I'd call you a delusional fool." A few seconds passed before the Hitoshura came to his full senses.

He had a bit of a small, weak smile on his face as he said "Well, I was a bit of a pawn in recreating the world, and I hate the Messians just enough to be your informed pawn in this plan. I'll leave at once."

With that Naoki once again left Lucifer with the bill at the "Under the Rose."

Also I have two different titles and visions for this fic.

Vision one is "A Voice in the Darkness" and it takes place as Prisoner is starting.

Vision two is "Flames of the Candlelabra" and it takes place in Goblet.

I'll post some of the openings of both later to get others opinion on which looks better.
 

Mighty Bob

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#4
Just zippin by the forum really quick since I have some time to kill. Just wanted to say I'm extremely happy to see this story's still in the works. That and it reminded me that I never did finish Nocturne. Hmmm...I shall have to remedy that shortly.
 
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