The war of the kings

Meinos Kaen

Well-Known Member
#1
Alright, soà Final Fantasy Tactics is a masterpiece, especially his story and characters. The best thing? There are some characters who influence the story heavily and yet make little appearances or they do not appear at all. So, going through the gameÆs encyclopaedia, an alternative plot for the story came to my mind. The major point of divergence is the survival of a single character. From there, much came to my mind.

My thanks also go to SerialRavist and his story æThe IcemanÆ. ItÆs not for all tastes, but there are many good ideas, and it inspired an aspect of this story. So, what can I say if notà Enjoy!

Prologue

Cancer 13th, Middle Ages, 709

ôNo! I wonÆt go! Release me!ö

ôBe quick about it!ö The hit and run tactic had failed. They had tried to assassinate the de-facto leader of House Beoulve, but they had failed. Badly. The only thing they could do was taking an hostage, the weaker pieces.

ôY-YouÆre hurting me! Let go! Zalbaag!ö One of the two daughters of house Beoulve had already been tied up and hoisted over his own Chocobo. The blonde one was struggling in the grip of his companion, and that let the second-born of the house to reach the man, who fell lifeless under one swift blow.

ôHmph. Time to cut losses.ö The Corpse Brigade member steered his Chocobo to the right, ready to make his escape. One Beoulve was better than naught. His run was cut short by lightning, though, or at least what he could only describe as lightning. A bolt of yellow light that slammed right in front of his Chocobo, scaring the animal to the point of unceremoniously dropping captive and kidnapper alike to the ground. Gragoroth Levigne was at this point scared out of his mind, his head snapping from side to side to search for his attacker.

ôYou come to my manse uninvitedàö He suddenly tensed, and turned around in a flash, still in a sitting position on the ground, unable to get up. He had never seen the man that was now stepping through the mansionÆs doorway, but he had heard the stories. Read the chronicles. Knew the name. ôYou harm my eldest son, and dare lay your hands on my daughtersàö

Each step made the Corpse Brigade knight sweat and tremble more, the figure now old, his whole body ill because of an illness that had almost taken his life. Even surviving it had left the man with a body unable to live as he once did, to fight as he once did, as the Knight Gallant. And yet, his figure, sword in hand as he slowly approached his figure, was the most terrible sight in the world, for him. He almost jumped out of his skin as he stopped in front of him. ôAre ye prepared to face the consequences of your misdeeds?ö

ôà N-Noà I am not, my lordàö The knight replied truthfully as the older man raised his sword and pointed it at his head.

ôà So be it.ö The sword was put back in its scabbard, and the knight visibly relaxed at this, before a boot landed on his face with enough force to send him to the ground, his vision blurry and his chin hurting. ôTill then, you shalt be a guest of the OrderÆs cellars.ö As two knights appeared and brought away the stunned knight, the old man got on one knee and started to undo the ropes tied around TietraÆs body. ôAre you unhurt, Tietra?ö

ôY-Yesàö The girl was still visibly shaken, as the tears building up in her eyes proved. ôI-I am well, Lord Barbanethàö

ôStop.ö The man suddenly put his hands on the girlÆs shoulders, halting her speech in mid-sentence, much to the girlÆs confusion. ôWhen I took you as my daughter, Tietra, thou received the right to address me in a different fashion than Lord Barbaneth.ö

ôIàö The girl stared at the man in front of him for a few seconds, before she hiccupped and began to sob softly, burying her head in the manÆs shoulder. ôF-Father! I wasà I was so scared!ö

ôAll is well, now.ö Lord Barbaneth Beoulve embraced his adopted daughter, soothing her with soft words.

ôà Fatheràö Zalbaag chose silence and to head back inside to check on their eldest brother. Alma was visibly moved by the scene, and many other people would have been confused, pleasantly surprised, but many others would have been disgusted. That a noble would adopt and come to love a peasant-born girl as his own daughter was almost blasphemy, in their eyes.

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Cancer 17th

ôAre they well?!ö

ôRamza, Delita, be calm! They are well! No harm has come upon them, thanks to me and Lord Father!ö The fraternal friends had heard this from ZalbaagÆs mouth, but it seemed that their minds would not be put to rest unless they saw their sisters with their own eyes. They opened the door to the main room of the mansion in a hurry, rudely, much to ZalbaagÆs growing headache.

ôAh, Ramza. Delita.ö They were welcomed with the sight of Barbaneth and their sisters sitting at the main table, drinking tea. Completely unharmed, and almost relaxed. ôWhatÆs with the rush? Missed us that much?ö

ôà Always, father. Always.ö Ramza finally let go of the breath he didnÆt know he had been holding in, while Delita just rushed to his sister and wrapped her in a fierce hug.

ôWhen I heard about what had happenedà What would I have done if something happened to you?ö Delita whispered in TietraÆs ear, and the girl just chuckled and returned the hug, tightly. Alma stared at them and then pouted in RamzaÆs direction.

ôThatÆs all the worry you had about my wellbeing, brother dear? No hug for me?ö Alma joked, much to RamzaÆs embarrassment.

ôEhmà I mean, I was worried, indeedà But I see that you are well, soàö If possible, Alma pouted even more. The youngest of house Beoulve groaned and complied, walking slowly to his sister and giving her a hug. ôBetter, sister?ö

ôHmmà Much better.ö The girl dropped the pout and smiled, hugging her brother back for a few seconds. Once the embrace was broken, Ramza bowed to his father, respectfully, much to the manÆs amusement.

ôBoy, pleaseà I receive enough of these antics from the knights of the Order. I have no need for my own flesh and blood to remind myself that I am a noble as well.ö He chuckled as Ramza shook his head.

ôNoà This is just in sign of thanks, lord father. I heard from Zalbaag that you personally intervened.ö He lowered his head even more. ôEven in your conditionàö

ôBoy, you offend me. I may be not be in my prime anymore, but I can handle one or two kidnappers.ö BarbanethÆs voice became very serious for an instant along with his facial expression. ôButà I do appreciate your concern.ö

ôà Yes, lord father.ö Ramza got back into a straightened standing position, a smile on his face.

ôSo, about fightingà I heard that thine unit has made quick work of another group from the Corpse Brigade.ö At those words, the father immediately noticed his youngest son tense. He immediately understood that something was bothering him. ôà Something happened? A comrade lost, maybe?ö

ôNaught of the sort, fatherà But IÆd like to have your word of guidance.ö Barbaneth nodded in acknowledgment and slowly got up from his seat.

ôSo be it. Zalbaag, make so that no one comes to my study.ö The second born nodded and bowed, while he made sign to Ramza to follow him to his study, where they could talk in private. The last battleÆs events weighted heavily on the young BeoulveÆs heart.

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ôà And I could not bring myself to end her lifeà It just felt wrong.ö

ôHmmàö Barbaneth had kept his silence as his youngest son told him of the last battle he had fought, and how he couldnÆt bring himself to kill the last remaining standing of his foes, sitting in his armchair. A woman whose words spoken during their clash had touched his very soul, he saw. ôI can see why this hast shaken you.ö

ôLord Fatherà What shall I do? What if I chance upon her again?ö Ramza spoke while observing the green scenery outside.

ôà For starters, you must knowà That theyÆre in the right, in this scuffle.ö Those words made Ramza turn around with such speed that he almost lost his footing. ôIndeed, the noble houses havenÆt paid the Dead Men their due, afraid that it would empty their coffers.ö

ôB-But thenàö Ramza was too confused to avoid stuttering, but Barbaneth cut him off before he could make a fool out of himself.

ôThey are in the rightà But their reaction isnÆt just, and not even intelligent. You have to ask yourself, why they couldnÆt be paid?ö That stopped the blonde haired teen from speaking further. ôOne of the warÆs effects hath been the disarray of our economy. Money that that should have been used for their pay has been used for other, vital purposes. I can not vouch for the other nobles, but House Beoulve has donated a fair amount of money for the rebuilt of Ivalice.ö

Barbaneth got up from his seat and walked to RamzaÆs side, letting him glance to the outside, and particularly, to the far away camps where men and women alike were working the earth. ôEarth left unattended needs double the care to go back to what it was. Ports, hospitals, have become old and decadent. Yet, they were denied their pay. This made them blind to the needs of their country as a whole, their hate for the one who orchestrated such a meaningless war further fomented. They do not want justice, they want to spill the blood of those noble-born.ö

ôBut not all nobles areàö Ramza was about to say æLike ArgathÆ, but he decided against this. After fighting by his side, he owed at least a bit of loyalty to his friend. ôI meanà Not all nobles are as bad as they fear.ö

ôAnd yet, they do not see this. They refuse to see this because they would be left with naught, if they did.ö The gray haired knight continued, much to RamzaÆs confusion.

ôà Father, I now understand the why and the howà But it doesnÆt present me with an answer.ö The young knight sighed, holding his head low.

ôIt is not an easy problem to solve, son. On one hand, youÆd prefer not to fight against such an enemy again, but if the chance shows itself, you canÆt just let her take your life, can you?ö Ramza shook his head in reply. ôà Do you remember what I told you before you started the academy, Ramza?ö

ôOf course.ö The blonde nodded fiercely, remembering clearly the words his father had gifted him with before his departure for Gariland. ôôFor generations, we Beoulves have stood foremost of those who serve the Crown. Ours is the soul of the knight. Become a knight worthy of your name. Tolerate no injustice. Stray not from the true path. You will know the path you must walk.öö

ôThe last part.ö Barbaneth interrupted him, a satisfied smile on his face. ôI cannot show you the path you must follow, Ramzaà All I can do is trust that you will find it on your own, and I do.ö

ôà I do not know if I have that trust myself, father.ö RamzaÆs gaze returned to the floor, his eyes lost in a circle he was instinctively drawing on the ground.

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ôRamza, art thou well?ö

ôI am, Delitaà Just confused. I fear talking with my father has done me more harm than good.ö The young cadet let out a long sigh as he walked out in the courtyard of his home, where his best friend and his newest one waited for him.

ôI still cannot see what eats you, Ramza. Did that wenchÆs words bother you this much?ö Argath immediately rebutted, much to DelitaÆs annoyance.

ôDamn, Argath! Is it that difficult for you to accept an outcome without bloodshed?!ö The bronze skinned man roared in the direction of their comrade-in-arms. He didnÆt feel like calling him friend. Not after the last fightÆs events.

ôI donÆt see the need, if itÆs peasantÆs blood.ö Delita frowned even more at this.

ôStay your tongue, Argath. Or IÆll make it so that you cannot make it lash ever again.ö He threatened the fellow squire, who just shook his head.

ôShall I speak clearly, then? Alright. Had I been lord Barbaneth, I would have felled down the kidnapper where he stood along with thy sister!ö That earned DelitaÆs ire, but thankfully for Argath, Ramza was there to stay his punch.

ôArgath, you go too far. Remember that technically, both Delita and Tietra are members of house Beoulve. My father took them in as his own children.ö At his words, ArgathÆs face contorted in visible disgust.

ôWhy he did such a thing is beyond myselfà They donÆt belong here, in our world! Especially with a house such as house Beoulve!ö Argath continued his argument, much to DelitaÆs rage. ôYouÆre high born among the high born! Surrounding yourself with such ill companyàö

ôIll company?! Because Delita wasnÆt born rich?! Because he wasnÆt born a noble?! Argath, do you realize what madness youÆre spouting?!ö Ramza rages at his comrade, who just shakes his head.

ôMadness? It is simply the truth.ö He replied, causally, and Delita saw a chance. He smirked.

ôRight. So, I guess Ramza should make himself clear of your presence too, Argathà We cannot risk you stabbing us in the back to save your hide.ö That irked the blonde elitist alright, if the fact that he threw himself at Delita was any indication. Ramza stepped between the two.

ôStop this nonsense, the both of you!ö

ôI would stab your back with pleasure, given the chance, chattelà Hear my words.ö Ramza shook his head, and pushed both of them in different directions.

ôà Argath, IÆd like you to ask my brother to be assigned to a different unit.ö The BeoulveÆs words visibly shocked the young knight. ôI am sorry, but I canÆt allow to be inner fighting in our unit.ö

ôAnd you choose the company of this peasant over mine?!ö Argath raged, outraged just by the thought. Ramza narrowed his eyes.

ôDelita is my friend, and a dear one. WeÆve been as brothers all our lives, but mostly, I can trust him to keep a level head on the battlefield, unlike thyself.ö Ramza finished, much to ArgathÆs rage. He ætsk-edÆ and spat on the ground.

ôFineà At least, IÆll make myself useful. You have been confined to guard duty again, I believe.ö Argath turned around and entered the mansion again, probably in search of Zalbaag, since Dycedarg was injured and as since, bedridden.

ôà On that, he had a point.ö

ôThen we shall break the law once more.ö That made Delita confused, as he instinctively blinked. ôLord father has given me permission to head out with my unit once more. It seems that all that remains of the Corpse Brigade is gathering at their hideout, Ziekden Fortress. My brother plans to strike at them there and wipe them outà Before that happens, we must get to Wiegraf.ö

ôWiegraf?ö Delita spoke the name like it was a foreign word which sense was unknown to him. ôRamza, what goes through your mind?ö

ôWiegraf is their leader. He has led these men and women ever since the war.ö Ramza turned in the direction of Ziekden Fortress, or at least the direction he knew the fortification to be. ôIf we persuade him into surrendering, we persuade the whole army.ö

ôWhat if he doth not want to surrender, Ramza?ö Delita voices his concern with RamzaÆs plan. ôWhat then?ö

ôà Then we take him prisoner.ö Orà We kill him. Ramza kept the last option to himself, fearing that just speaking it would make it come true.

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Cancer 18th

ôIÆm so sorry, your highnessàö

ôHold your tongue. I didnÆt ask for your sympathyà Hnnàö She had already birthed two sons, but that one had been the longest and hardest one to bring to this worldà All for nothing. Queen Louveria Atkascha had given birth to a dead child, a dead heir, leaving the only heir to the throne King Ondoria Atkascha IIIÆs only half-sister, princess Ovelia Atkascha. The maid who had assisted the birth promptly shut her mouth. The queen was exhausted, but still lively, it seemed. Suddenly, there was a knock on the door. ôà Come in.ö

ôSisteràö The door opened, revealing who the queen expected to see. Her older brother, duke Larg. The man slowly made his way to the side of her bed, and he slowly lowered his head. ôI am sorry.ö

ôAgain, I didnÆt ask for sympathy, Largàö The queen was breathing heavily, but she managed to let out a bitter laugh. ôI ought have knownà In his condition, that he managed to leave me with child a third time twas a miracle itself.ö

ôà Please, leave us.ö Larg said to the maiden, who just bowed deeply and hurried out of the room, leaving brother and sister alone. ôThis leaves Ovelia as the sole heir to the throne.ö

ôYou think I donÆt know?ö The blonde woman gritted her teeth, reminding herself that she was supposed to rest, at the moment. ôà But IÆll be damned if I let them strip me of the crown to give it to that little wenchà Damn this country and your male pride. Do they really think that fool is the one who has been governing this kingdom for decades? This kingdom would have fell apart years ago, hadnÆt it been for meàö

ôIÆm well aware of that, sisterà Tis why I suggest we change our plan, sister.ö The queen slowly raised herself in a sitting position on her bed, her golden hair messily sticking to her face and forehead because of the sweat. ôYou ought realize that it will be impossible for the king to father another hair. His life is coming to an endàö

ôAnd his manhood met its own one a long time ago, believe me.ö The duke made a disgusted face at his sisterÆs choice of words, but he let it slide.

ôSo, itÆs now certain that Ovelia will be the heir to the throne. For now, you should persuade the king to make you her guardian.ö That earned a snort of laughter from the bedridden queen.

ôReallyà And you do not think Goltanna will have anything to say about it? I swear, the chauvinism of this country has no end. Also, IÆve been antagonizing that girl from the first day we met. SheÆs not that stupid.ö

ôIn that case we will let Goltanna be his guardian. Tis not important, but do try to be nicer to her. I know that she has come to see you. Go from there.ö The queen stared at Larg like his head had just fallen from its resting place on his shoulders. Her gaze told him everything of her surprise and shock. ôThe law states that in case of a missing or underage male heir, the heirÆs guardian takes regencyàö There was a knock on the door, and Larg stopped talking. ôDo come in.ö

ôà Your highness?ö The door opened with a creak, and a fourteen years old girl with long platinum gold hair arranged in a braid, her face the mask of uneasiness. The two occupants of the room stared at her as she slowly walked inside and closed the door behind her. ôI-I came as soon as I was notifiedà I am truly sorry for your loss, your highness.ö

ôà Oveliaàö Louveria glanced in the direction of his brother as the young girl bowed deeply. The man only replied with a small nod of his head. The woman returned her gaze to Ovelia and thenà Her eyes began to water, and her frame was shaken by a small sob. Panicked, the young girl hurried to the queenÆs bedside. ôOh, Oveliaà Thou art such a sweet girlàö

ôM-My queenàö Ovelia tentatively put her hands on the queenÆs bigger right one, gently grasping it. The older woman just grasped them back, softly.

ôAfter everythingà The cold way I treated youà Thou art hereà By my sideàö Tears began to fall down the queenÆs cheek, and she slowly turned her now grief-stricken visage to the girl. ôMy sons diedà My beloved husband is ill, oh so illà My sweet girl, you are everything I will have left to remind me of him once the lord calls him to himselfàö

ôà Q-Queen Motheràö Ovelia bows her head and leans her forehead on top of the back of LouveriaÆs hand, as the latter keeps on sobbing softly. Duke Larg silently sighed and shook his head, an amused smile on his face. If anything, his sister had always been a magnificent actress.

The war of the kings
Chapter I-I: A foolÆs errand



AU Changes:
1. Lord Barbaneth survived Dycedarg's poisoning, but all the same, Dycedarg got actual control of House Beoulve and took his father's place as Larg's advisor, having managed to at least highly deteriorate his health.

2. Queen Louveria has a much more prominent role, here. According to the encyclopedia, it was her who really governed Ivalice during a good part of the fifty years war in the place of the naive Ondoria III. I always found strange that she didn't make some kind of appearance. Real one.

3. Of course, not having been kidnapped, Tietra still lives.

4. Orinus has never been born, and as such, Ovelia never left Lesalia for the monastery where she met Alma Beoulve and consequently, Orbonne. According to the data, while both Alma and Ovelia have been in Orbonne at a certain point, they met in a different one than Orbonne. Just a note. :p

The rest will be shown as we go, of course. These are just the most obvious changes that I felt like pointing out.
 

Croaker

Well-Known Member
#2
The names... :(

It was interesting. The random middle English was pretty painful to read.
Two things I spotted:
House Beoulve has donated a fair amount of money for the rebuilt of Ivalice.
Not sure if "rebuilt" is the right conjugation there.
You ought realize that it will be impossible for the king to father another hair.
"hair" should be "heir".
 

Muramasa

Well-Known Member
#3
Yeah. Much prefer the old translation over the new middle english hodgepodge.



Defeat Dycedarg's elder brother FTW. :p




Anyway... FUCK YEAH! Balbanes. :yay:



Too bad you're using the newer name.


ôArgath, you go too far. Remember that technically, both Delita and Tietra are members of house Beoulve. My father took them in as his own children.ö At his words, ArgathÆs face contorted in visible disgust.
Technically is probably too modern a word to be used here. Could be corrected with...

"Hold your tongue Argath!á I won't say it again.á Remember that both Delita and Tietra are still members of house Beoulve.á My father took them in as his own children."
Not sure it that's any better but it removes the more modern words.
 

Meinos Kaen

Well-Known Member
#4
Thanks for the corrections, and, in your opinion, should I get rid of the middle english completely? I mean, I think that the PSP dialogues and names better suit the medieval setting... Even if, ability names-wise, I so prefer the PS1 version. From 'Repeating Fist' to 'Pummel'? WTF?
 
#5
Ditch the old English in regular dialogue. Keep it for conversations between more stuffy upper crust types, though.
 

FinalMax

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#6
Actually, the middle English names look more like bad Engrish translations to me. I'm waiting for one of them to say "All your base are belong to us." Argath does not sound like a name that ever existed, and Balbanes sounds a hell of a lot better than Barbaneth. A lot of those revised names are really just the result of trying to make the original Final Fantasy Tactics more compliant to the Ivalice of FFXII, which makes the poor translation of the original look good in comparison.
 

Meinos Kaen

Well-Known Member
#7
FinalMax said:
Actually, the middle English names look more like bad Engrish translations to me. I'm waiting for one of them to say "All your base are belong to us." Argath does not sound like a name that ever existed, and Balbanes sounds a hell of a lot better than Barbaneth. A lot of those revised names are really just the result of trying to make the original Final Fantasy Tactics more compliant to the Ivalice of FFXII, which makes the poor translation of the original look good in comparison.
Hmm... You make a good point there... I guess I will use the original translation, then. It will just be a matter of using Microsof Word. lol
 

Meinos Kaen

Well-Known Member
#8
Alright, edited the first pages and added a few pages. I'm back to the original translation too. Let me know if there's still something wrong.


Prologue

Cancer 13th, Middle Ages, 709

ôNo! I wonÆt go! Release me!ö

ôBe quick about it!ö The hit and run tactic had failed. They had tried to assassinate the de-facto leader of House Beoulve, but they had failed. Badly. The only thing they could do was taking an hostage, the weaker pieces.

ôY-YouÆre hurting me! Let go! Zalbag!ö One of the two daughters of house Beoulve had already been tied up and hoisted over his own Chocobo. The blonde one was struggling in the grip of his companion, and that let the second-born of the house to reach the man, who fell lifeless under one swift blow.

ôHmph. Time to cut losses.ö The Corpse Brigade member steered his Chocobo to the right, ready to make his escape. One Beoulve was better than naught. His run was cut short by lightning, though, or at least what he could only describe as lightning. A bolt of yellow light that slammed right in front of his Chocobo, scaring the animal to the point of unceremoniously dropping captive and kidnapper alike to the ground. Gragoroth Levigne was at this point scared out of his mind, his head snapping from side to side to search for his attacker.

ôYou come to my manse uninvitedàö He suddenly tensed, and turned around in a flash, still in a sitting position on the ground, unable to get up. He had never seen the man that was now stepping through the mansionÆs doorway, but he had heard the stories. Read the chronicles. Knew the name. ôYou harm my eldest son, and dare lay your hands on my daughtersàö

Each step made the Corpse Brigade knight sweat and tremble more, the figure now old, his whole body ill because of an illness that had almost taken his life. Even surviving it had left the man with a body unable to live as he once did, to fight as he once did, as the Knight Gallant. And yet, his figure, sword in hand as he slowly approached his figure, was the most terrible sight in the world, for him. He almost jumped out of his skin as he stopped in front of him. ôAre you prepared to face the consequences of your misdeeds?ö

ôà N-Noà I am not, my lordàö The knight replied truthfully as the older man raised his sword and pointed it at his head.

ôà So be it.ö The sword was put back in its scabbard, and the knight visibly relaxed at this, before a boot landed on his face with enough force to send him to the ground, his vision blurry and his chin hurting. ôTill then, you shall be a guest of the OrderÆs cellars.ö As two knights appeared and brought away the stunned knight, the old man got on one knee and started to undo the ropes tied around TetaÆs body. ôAre you unhurt, Teta?ö

ôY-Yesàö The girl was still visibly shaken, as the tears building up in her eyes proved. ôI-I am well, Lord Balbanesàö

ôStop.ö The man suddenly put his hands on the girlÆs shoulders, halting her speech in mid-sentence, much to the girlÆs confusion. ôWhen I took you as my daughter, Teta, you received the right to address me in a different fashion than Lord Balbanes.ö

ôIàö The girl stared at the man in front of him for a few seconds, before she hiccupped and began to sob softly, burying her head in the manÆs shoulder. ôF-Father! I wasà I was so scared!ö

ôAll is well, now.ö Lord Balbanes Beoulve embraced his adopted daughter, soothing her with soft words.

ôà Fatheràö Zalbag chose silence and to head back inside to check on their eldest brother. Alma was visibly moved by the scene, and many other people would have been confused, pleasantly surprised, but many others would have been disgusted. That a noble would adopt and come to love a peasant-born girl as his own daughter was almost blasphemy, in their eyes.

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Cancer 17th

ôAre they well?!ö

ôRamza, Delita, be calm! No harm has come upon them, thanks to me and Lord Father!ö The fraternal friends had heard this from ZalbagÆs mouth, but it seemed that their minds would not be put to rest unless they saw their sisters with their own eyes. They opened the door to the main room of the mansion in a hurry, rudely, much to ZalbagÆs growing headache.

ôAh, Ramza. Delita.ö They were welcomed with the sight of Balbanes and their sisters sitting at the main table, drinking tea. Completely unharmed, and almost relaxed. ôWhatÆs with the rush? Missed us that much?ö

ôà Always, father. Always.ö Ramza finally let go of the breath he didnÆt know he had been holding in, while Delita just rushed to his sister and wrapped her in a fierce hug.

ôWhen I heard about what had happenedà What would I have done if something happened to you?ö Delita whispered in TetaÆs ear, and the girl just chuckled and returned the hug, tightly. Alma stared at them and then pouted in RamzaÆs direction.

ôThatÆs all the worry you had about my wellbeing, brother dear? No hug for me?ö Alma joked, much to RamzaÆs embarrassment.

ôEhmà I mean, I was worried, indeedà But I see that you are well, soàö If possible, Alma pouted even more. The youngest of house Beoulve groaned and complied, walking slowly to his sister and giving her a hug. ôBetter, sister?ö

ôHmmà Much better.ö The girl dropped the pout and smiled, hugging her brother back for a few seconds. Once the embrace was broken, Ramza bowed to his father, respectfully, much to the manÆs amusement.

ôBoy, pleaseà I receive enough of these antics from the knights of the Order. I have no need for my own flesh and blood to remind myself that I am a noble as well.ö He chuckled as Ramza shook his head.

ôNoà This is just in sign of thanks, lord father. I heard from Zalbag that you personally intervened.ö He lowered his head even more. ôEven in your conditionàö

ôBoy, you offend me. I may be not be in my prime anymore, but I can handle one or two kidnappers.ö BalbanesÆ voice became very serious for an instant along with his facial expression. ôButà I do appreciate your concern.ö

ôà Yes, lord father.ö Ramza got back into a straightened standing position, a smile on his face.

ôSo, about fightingà I heard that your unit has made quick work of another group from the Corpse Brigade.ö At those words, the father immediately noticed his youngest son tense. He immediately understood that something was bothering him. ôà Something happened? A comrade lost, maybe?ö

ôNothing of the sort, fatherà But IÆd like to have your word of guidance.ö Balbanes nodded in acknowledgment and slowly got up from his seat.

ôSo be it. Zalbag, make so that no one comes to my study.ö The second born nodded and bowed, while he made sign to Ramza to follow him to his study, where they could talk in private. The last battleÆs events weighted heavily on the young BeoulveÆs heart.

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ôà And I could not bring myself to end her lifeà It just felt wrong.ö

ôHmmàö Balbanes had kept his silence as his youngest son told him of the last battle he had fought, and how he couldnÆt bring himself to kill the last remaining standing of his foes, sitting in his armchair. A woman whose words spoken during their clash had touched his very soul, he saw. ôI can see why this bothered you.ö

ôLord Fatherà What shall I do? What if I chance upon her again?ö Ramza spoke while observing the green scenery outside.

ôà For starters, you must knowà That theyÆre in the right, in this scuffle.ö Those words made Ramza turn around with such speed that he almost lost his footing. ôIndeed, the noble houses havenÆt paid the Dead Men their due, afraid that it would empty their coffers.ö

ôB-But thenàö Ramza was too confused to avoid stuttering, but Balbanes cut him off before he could make a fool out of himself.

ôThey are in the rightà But their reaction isnÆt just, and not even intelligent. You have to ask yourself, why they couldnÆt be paid?ö That stopped the blonde haired teen from speaking further. ôOne of the warÆs effects has been the disarray of our economy. Money that should have been used for their pay has been used for other, vital purposes. I can not vouch for the other nobles, but House Beoulve has donated a fair amount of money for the rebuilt of Ivalice.ö

Balbanes got up from his seat and walked to RamzaÆs side, letting him glance to the outside, and particularly, to the far away camps where men and women alike were working the earth. ôEarth left unattended needs double the care to go back to what it was. Ports, hospitals, have become old and decadent. Yet, they were denied their pay. This made them blind to the needs of their country as a whole, their hate for the ones who orchestrated such a meaningless war further fomented and poisoning their minds. They do not want justice, they just want to spill the blood of those noble-born.ö

ôBut not all nobles areàö Ramza was about to say æLike AlgusÆ, but he decided against this. After fighting by his side, he owed at least a bit of loyalty to his friend. ôI meanà Not all nobles are as bad as they fear.ö

ôAnd yet, they do not see this. They refuse to see this because they would be left with nothing, if they did. Such miserable soulsà Their hate is all they have left.ö The gray haired knight continued, much to RamzaÆs confusion.

ôà Father, I now understand the why and the howà But it doesnÆt present me with an answer.ö The young knight sighed, holding his head low.

ôIt is not an easy problem to solve, son. On one hand, youÆd prefer not to fight against such an enemy again, but if the chance shows itself, you canÆt just let her take your life, can you?ö Ramza shook his head in reply. ôà Do you remember what I told you before you started the academy, Ramza?ö

ôOf course.ö The blonde nodded fiercely, remembering clearly the words his father had gifted him with before his departure for Gariland. ôôFor generations, we Beoulves have stood foremost of those who serve the Crown. Ours is the soul of the knight. Become a knight worthy of your name. Tolerate no injustice. Stray not from the true path. You will know the path you must walk.öö

ôThe last part.ö Balbanes interrupted him, a satisfied smile on his face. ôI cannot show you the path you must follow, Ramzaà All I can do is trust that you will find it on your own, and I do.ö

ôà I do not know if I have that trust myself, father.ö RamzaÆs gaze returned to the floor, his eyes lost in a circle he was instinctively drawing on the ground.

--

ôRamza, are you well?ö

ôI am, Delitaà Just confused. I fear talking with my father has done me more harm than good.ö The young cadet let out a long sigh as he walked out in the courtyard of his home, where his best friend and his newest one waited for him.

ôI still cannot see what eats you, Ramza. Did that wenchÆs words bother you this much?ö Algus immediately rebutted, much to DelitaÆs annoyance.

ôDamn, Algus! Is it that difficult for you to accept an outcome without bloodshed?!ö The bronze skinned man roared in the direction of their comrade-in-arms. He didnÆt feel like calling him friend. Not after the last fightÆs events.

ôI donÆt see the need, if itÆs peasantÆs blood.ö Delita frowned even more at this.

ôStay your tongue, Algus. Or IÆll make it so that you cannot make it lash ever again.ö He threatened the fellow squire, who just shook his head.

ôShall I speak clearly, then? Alright. Had I been lord Balbanes, I would have felled down the kidnapper where he stood along with your sister!ö That earned DelitaÆs ire, but thankfully for Algus, Ramza was there to stay his punch.

ôAlgus, you go too far, and do remember that both Delita and Teta are members of house Beoulve. My father took them in as his own children.ö At his words, AlgusÆ face contorted in visible disgust.

ôWhy he did such a thing is beyond myselfà They donÆt belong here, in our world! Especially with a house such as house Beoulve!ö Algus continued his argument, much to DelitaÆs rage. ôYouÆre high born among the high born! Surrounding yourself with such ill companyàö

ôIll company?! Because Delita wasnÆt born rich?! Because he wasnÆt born a noble?! Algus, do you realize what madness youÆre spouting?!ö Ramza rages at his comrade, who just shakes his head.

ôMadness? It is simply the truth.ö He replied, causally, and Delita saw a chance. He smirked.

ôRight. So, I guess Ramza should make himself clear of your presence too, Algusà We cannot risk you stabbing us in the back to save your hide.ö That irked the blonde elitist alright, if the fact that he threw himself at Delita was any indication. Ramza stepped between the two.

ôStop this nonsense, the both of you!ö

ôI would stab your back with pleasure, given the chance, chattelà Hear my words.ö Ramza shook his head, and pushed both of them in different directions.

ôà Algus, IÆd like you to ask my brother to be assigned to a different unit.ö The BeoulveÆs words visibly shocked the young knight. ôI am sorry, but I canÆt allow to be inner fighting in our unit.ö

ôAnd you choose the company of this peasant over mine?!ö Algus raged, outraged just by the thought. Ramza narrowed his eyes.

ôDelita is my friend, and a dear one. WeÆve been as brothers all our lives, but mostly, I can trust him to keep a level head on the battlefield, unlike yourself.ö Ramza finished, much to AlgusÆ rage. He ætsk-edÆ and spat on the ground.

ôFineà At least, IÆll make myself useful. You have been confined to guard duty again, I believe.ö Algus turned around and entered the mansion again, probably in search of Zalbag, since Dycedarg was injured and as since, bedridden.

ôà On that, he had a point.ö

ôThen we shall go against orders once more.ö That made Delita confused, as he instinctively blinked. ôLord father has given me permission to head out once more. It seems that all that remains of the Corpse Brigade is gathering at their hideout, Ziekden Fortress. My brother plans to strike at them there and wipe them outà Before that happens, we must get to Wiegraf.ö

ôWiegraf?ö Delita spoke the name like it was a foreign word which sense was unknown to him. ôRamza, what goes through your mind?ö

ôWiegraf is their leader. He has led these men and women ever since the war.ö Ramza turned in the direction of Ziekden Fortress, or at least the direction he knew the fortification to be. ôIf we persuade him into surrendering, we persuade the whole army.ö

ôWhat if he does not want to surrender, Ramza?ö Delita voices his concern with RamzaÆs plan. ôWhat then?ö

ôà Then we take him prisoner.ö Orà We kill him. Ramza kept the last option to himself, fearing that just speaking it would make it come true.

--

Cancer 18th

ôIÆm so sorry, your highnessàö

ôI didnÆt ask for your sympathyà Hnnàö She had already birthed two sons, but that one had been the longest and hardest one to bring to this worldà All for nothing. Queen Ruvelia Atkascha had given birth to a dead child, a dead heir, leaving the only heir to the throne King Ondoria Atkascha IIIÆs only half-sister, princess Ovelia Atkascha. The maid who had assisted the birth promptly shut her mouth. The queen was exhausted, but still lively, it seemed. Suddenly, there was a knock on the door. ôà Come in.ö

ôSisteràö The door opened, revealing who the queen expected to see. Her older brother, duke Larg. The man slowly made his way to the side of her bed, and he slowly lowered his head. ôI am sorry.ö

ôAgain, I didnÆt ask for sympathy, Largàö The queen was breathing heavily, but she managed to let out a bitter laugh. ôI ought have knownà In his condition, that he managed to leave me with child a third time was a miracle itself.ö

ôà Please, leave us.ö Larg said to the maiden, who just bowed deeply and hurried out of the room, leaving brother and sister alone. ôThis leaves Ovelia as the sole heir to the throne.ö

ôYou think I donÆt know?ö The blonde woman gritted her teeth, reminding herself that she was supposed to rest, at the moment. ôà But IÆll be damned if I let them strip me of the crown to give it to that little wenchà Damn this country and your male pride. Do they really think that fool is the one who has been governing this kingdom for decades? This godforsaken land would have fell apart years ago, hadnÆt it been for meàö

ôIÆm well aware of that, sisterà Tis why I suggest we change our plan, sister.ö The queen slowly raised herself in a sitting position on her bed, her golden hair messily sticking to her face and forehead because of the sweat. ôYou ought realize that it will be impossible for the king to father another hair. His life is coming to an endàö

ôAnd his manhood met its own one a long time ago, believe me.ö The duke made a disgusted face at his sisterÆs choice of words, but he let it slide.

ôSo, itÆs now certain that Ovelia will be the heir to the throne. For now, you should persuade the king to make you her guardian.ö That earned a snort of laughter from the bedridden queen.

ôReallyà And you do not think Goltanna will have anything to say about it? I swear, the chauvinism of this country has no end. Also, IÆve been antagonizing that girl from the first day we met. SheÆs not that stupid.ö

ôIn that case we will let Goltanna be his guardian. Tis not important, but do try to be nicer to her. I know that she has come to see you. Go from there.ö The queen stared at Larg like his head had just fallen from its resting place on his shoulders. Her gaze told him everything of her surprise and shock. ôThe law states that in case of a missing or underage male heir, the heirÆs guardian takes regencyàö There was a knock on the door, and Larg stopped talking. ôDo come in.ö

ôà Your highness?ö The door opened with a creak, and a fourteen years old girl with long platinum gold hair arranged in a braid, her face the mask of uneasiness. The two occupants of the room stared at her as she slowly walked inside and closed the door behind her. ôI-I came as soon as I was notifiedà I am truly sorry for your loss, your highness.ö

ôà Oveliaàö Ruvelia glanced in the direction of his brother as the young girl bowed deeply. The man only replied with a small nod of his head. The woman returned her gaze to Ovelia and thenà Her eyes began to water, and her frame was shaken by a small sob. Panicked, the young girl hurried to the queenÆs bedside. ôOh, Oveliaà Thou art such a sweet girlàö

ôM-My queenàö Ovelia tentatively put her hands on the queenÆs bigger right one, gently grasping it. The older woman just grasped them back, softly.

ôAfter everythingà The cold way I treated youà Thou art hereà By my sideàö Tears began to fall down the queenÆs cheek, and she slowly turned her now grief-stricken visage to the girl. ôMy sons diedà My beloved husband is so hillà My sweet girl, you are everything I will have left to remind me of him once the Father calls him to his presenceàö

ôà Q-Queen Motheràö Ovelia bows her head and leans her forehead on top of the back of RuveliaÆs hand, as the latter keeps on sobbing softly. Duke Larg silently sighed and shook his head, an amused smile on his face. If anything, his sister had always been a magnificent actress.

The war of the kings
Chapter I-I: A foolÆs errand


Cancer 19th

ôAilda, howÆs the situation?ö Ramza asked as one of the members of his unit came back from scouting ahead.

ôI see people coming this way, Ramza.ö The young archer girl used his first name to refer to him by. After all, even if he had been nominated their commandeer, they had been training together for more than two years at the academy of Gariland. ThatÆs a long time to get acquainted, even if Ailda was the only one who knew the Beoulve personally. The other four members had been assigned to their team the very day they had been asked to support the Order of the Northern Sky. ôAmong themà The woman we fought a week ago.ö

ôà Are you certain of it?ö Ailda just nodded again, much to RamzaÆs chagrin. ôThenà TheyÆre in our path.ö

ôWe could always let them go past us.ö Radoth, the knight of the group, voiced his thoughts, his mouth suddenly shaping in a cocky grin. ôIÆm sure that they will be grateful, considering the beating we gave them last timeàö Ramza replied with a shake of his head.

ôIf we let them go, another patrol of the order will find themà And they will not be as lenient as us.ö Ramza got up on his feet and fingered the hilt of his sword, trying to find some sense of security in it.

ôSo, we go andà Fight?ö Cheelmy, the priest of the group, didnÆt like fighting that much. Not ever since she had been covered with the gory remains of an enemy squire, courtesy of Algus.

ôSeems like it. Stay behind us and all will go well, Cheelmyà Ah, Tannis.ö Delita turned to the last member of their small unit, their resident black-mage who seemed to have a knack for making ice statues out of their enemies. He called them his æartÆ. ôCould you please limit yourself to one ice spell for enemy, this time?ö

ôà Hmph. DonÆt come crying to me when they are not as shiny as the other ones, hmmm.ö The shadowed figure replied, turning around and starting to mutter something about skin imperfections and hair follicles, much to everyoneÆs uneasiness.

ôLetÆsà LetÆs just go.ö Their leader said with a shake of his head. The less they dwelled on TannisÆ antics the better.

--

ôCaptainà Why are we not rendezvousing with sir Wiegraf at Ziekden?ö Miluda shook his head, in sign of æThatÆs a really bad ideaÆ.

ôBecause my brother doesnÆt want to regroupà He wants a last stand.ö The auburn haired woman kept on walking straight ahead, the last remaining members of her unit following her closely behind. ôWe gather at Ziekden. Then what? We donÆt have the numbers to oppose the norths anymore. It would be a slaughteràö

ôSoà We run?ö One of the two female knights following her said, earning her ire.

ôYes, we run. Or would you prefer to obey my brother and follow him to your useless deaths? I repeat, useless.ö MiludaÆs next step was a bit harsher than the previous ones. ôRight now our death wouldnÆt be glorious, wouldnÆt be heroic, they would serve no purpose apart covering these plains in red.ö

ôIÆm happy to hear you say that.ö The whole unit froze at the sound of a foreign voice. Foreign, and yet familiar, at least to Miluda. She had been the only one there who had already heard it up close. They raised their heads to find the young figure of Ramza Beoulve staring down at them from on top of the rock walls surrounding their path. Then, shuffling of feet, signalling that the rest of his unit had followed him and was now coming in plain sight. ôYou realize that your death will be useless. So, surrender!ö

ôà You misunderstand my words, Beoulve.ö Miluda immediately unsheathed her blade, her eyes glaring at the blonde cadet looking at her from above. ôWhile I believe a fight right now to be useless, I gladly choose a death by the sword than by torture.ö

ôWe have no intention of doing so! I swear that no harm will come to you if you surrender!ö RamzaÆs plea was met with a snort and a booming laughter.

ôAhahahah! Priceless, boy! Really priceless! To think that youÆd be so stupid to try to trick me with such a blatant lie! To arms!ö Miluda shouted, and Ramza cursed as the knights accompanying her raised their swords and the wizards began their castings, much to his chagrin.

ôAilda! Tannis! The casters!ö Ramza ordered as the archer let loose an arrow against one of the two black mages, striking him in the right shoulder, putting a halt on his casting, and Tannis began to chant a spell, after a dark chuckle escaped his lips. ôDelita, Radoth! With me!ö He purposely left Cheelmy out of his orders as he and his companions jumped down to land in the middle of the path, because the young girl already knew what to do with her white magic.

ôOw!ö Well, and some reminiscences from her days as a squire and a chemist, if the rock that struck the other black mage in the face was any indication.

ôRaaah!ö Ramza almost didnÆt raise his sword in time, culprit the spell the female mage with the absurdly tall hat had cast on Miluda, which had enveloped her in a green light. Also, her ferocity. She really seemed determined to not die without a fight, and bring him with her. The blade of his sword shook from the force of the impact.

He instinctively took a step back and unstrapped his shield from his shoulders. Miluda raised her eyebrow at that. ôA shieldà In seven days you learned to fight like a knight?ö

ôà Why wonÆt you listen to me?ö Ramza muttered, as he began to attack as well, diving with his blade for her right shoulder. Her speed though seemed to have doubled thanks to the spell of the female wizard. He would have to ask someone about it, later on. Point, she dodged by sidestepping and she pulled out her shield as well, before slamming it into his face. ôNgh!ö

ôLies have a history of not being listened to, once they are exposed!ö She then brought her sword down in a vertical slash, which Ramza stopped with his own shield while getting up back on his feet, effectively pushing it away and diving for a horizontal slash, which went to nip a piece of green cloth from MiludaÆs armor.

ôIÆm offering you a chance of saving your life!ö Ramza raised his voice as he dove towards Miluda shield first, which was met by her own one in a loud clash of metal. ôI know that the other knights of the order will not offer you an opportunity of surrendering! So, why not take mine?! Why donÆt you believe me?!ö

ôWhy should I?! After everything you nobles have taken from us! After all that youÆve wrought! WeÆve left with nothing but rage and desire of vengeance!ö MiludaÆs attack sped up, taking full advantage of the spell cast on her. She raised her sword arm and brought it down on RamzaÆs head, or at least tried to as the teen stepped back, but a gash opened in his clothes and his skin all the same. ôYou may have done nothing wrong yourselfàö

ôGh!ö Ramza held up his shield as Miluda, slammed into it with her sword again and again, demonstrating an impressive amount of physical strength for a woman, as he felt his arm beginning to go numb from the sheer vibration caused by her sword connecting again and again with his shield.

ôIt is your place in the world that drives my hatred on. You bear the name Beoulveàö Miluda let down another blow, only to stop the sword in mid swing as Ramza came to intercept it with his own blade to gain some terrain, and kicked him hard under the chin with the heel of her right boot.

ôArgh!ö Ramza was lifted from the ground and he landed on his back a couple of meters away, and Miluda was soon above him. That magic had definitely doubled her speed, as he barely avoided her from stabbing him in the chest, but he still got away with a large cut on his right arm. ôAckàö

ôAnd that name is my enemy!ö She unstuck her sword from the ground and turned back to Ramza, who had to drop his shield because of the large cut in his arm. Luckily, a blue light signalled to him that Cheelmy was already healing him, leaving him time to stare at his opponent.

In particular, he focused on her eyes. Never had he seen such hatred, such disgust, suchà Fanaticism. There was no other way to call it but with its true name. No one had ever showed himà à No one? His eyes widened in realization. There had been another person who had that light in his eyes who he had met in person, but he had never thought that he would find that same one in the woman standing in front of him at the moment. ôà So be it.ö

The moment those words came out of his mouth, all the members of his unit turned to him for a brief seconds before returning to their own battles. In RadothÆs case, fortunately so, since he avoided a downward slash from behind from one of the two female knights thanks to the sudden move of his head as he was busy with one of the two black mages. Delita was the more worried one, since he could see that Ramza had gotten angry. He shook his head as he parried a blow from the remaining knight with his own weapon. So much for a peaceful solutionà But, did you really give up on this, Ramza?

ôWords seem to have no effect on you, soàö Ramza picked up his shield again, and lowered his stance a little, staring straight ahead at Miluda. ôWe fight. As you wish.ö
 
#9
Nice, though I think Miluda won't appreciate it if Ramza starts giving her a "Not so different" speech comparing her to Algus/Argath. Also:

Meinos Kaen said:
Opening argument: why do you see Miluda as Tsundere?
I'm going to go ahead and suggest it's the assault with a deadly weapon, though at least it's not a mallet this time.
 

Meinos Kaen

Well-Known Member
#10
Dark Knight Gafgar said:
Nice, though I think Miluda won't appreciate it if Ramza starts giving her a "Not so different" speech comparing her to Algus/Argath. Also:

Meinos Kaen said:
Opening argument: why do you see Miluda as Tsundere?
I'm going to go ahead and suggest it's the assault with a deadly weapon, though at least it's not a mallet this time.
Sadly, it's true. While Algus was fanatical in his hate of 'chattle', Miluda is fanatical almost in the same way against nobles.

That said, alright. Let's put the FFT girls in anime canonizations.

Miluda: Tsundere
Agrias: ???
Ovelia: ??? (Yandere, maybe? ^^')
Alma: Imouto-chan
Meladioul: ???
Teta: ???

Did I miss anyone?
 
#11
I think you missed Beowulf's wife, what was her name agai-

Meinos Kaen said:
Ovelia: Yandere
OH GOD I CAN SEE FOREVER
 

Aensland

Well-Known Member
#12
Rafa?

Edit: Bah, can't remember the dragon woman's name.
 

Meinos Kaen

Well-Known Member
#13
Dark Knight Gafgar said:
I think you missed Beowulf's wife, what was her name agai-

Meinos Kaen said:
Ovelia: Yandere
OH GOD I CAN SEE FOREVER
Ah, right. Reis. ^^

Ehm... What happened? O_O

So...

Miluda: Tsundere
Ovelia: Ojou going on Yandere... OMG! KOTONOHA! O_O
Alma: Imouto-chan
Teta: Girl Next Door
Meladioul: ???
Agrias: ???

Edit: Right, Rafa too. Rafa would be a Genki Girl, I think.
 
#14
Meinos Kaen said:
So...

Miluda: Tsundere
Ovelia: Ojou going on Yandere... OMG! KOTONOHA! O_O
Alma: Imouto-chan
Teta: Girl Next Door
Meladioul: ???
Agrias: ???
Agrias is clearly a Lady of War, ala Signum from MGLN. Meladioul... for hilarity's sake, Dojikko. I have no idea what Rafa or Reis would be.
 

Meinos Kaen

Well-Known Member
#15
Dark Knight Gafgar said:
Meinos Kaen said:
So...

Miluda: Tsundere
Ovelia: Ojou going on Yandere... OMG! KOTONOHA! O_O
Alma: Imouto-chan
Teta: Girl Next Door
Meladioul: ???
Agrias: ???
Agrias is clearly a Lady of War, ala Signum from MGLN. Meladioul... for hilarity's sake, Dojikko. I have no idea what Rafa or Reis would be.
Meladioul a Dojikko? Nah... Wait. If we make them both lady of wars, they would have yet another reason to be rivals. lol

Agrias: NOT ONLY YOU WANT TO STEAL HIM, YOU ACTUALLY STOLE MY TROPE!

Also... I always saw Meladioul as flat chested. Don't know why... Oh, well. Here it goes, till now.

Miluda: Tsundere
Ovelia: Ojou/Yandere
Alma: Ojou/Imouto-chan
Teta: Girl Next Door, maybe Unlucky Childhood Friend
Meladioul: Lady of War
Agrias: Lady of War
Reis: The Ditz Seems like most fanart (especially Hentai one) pictures her like that
Rafa: Moe Out of battle, I wouldn't be surprised. With her past...

Edit: Hmm... Found some nice fuel for the Yandere!Ovelia idea...


Even if it's more a Kuroikko thing... I had found one where she was with a lantern and a knife... But this is more cool. :p
 

FinalMax

Well-Known Member
#16
Note that some would consider Agrias to have subclassed in Kuudere, despite the redundancy and frequent mislabeling of that particular trope. Thawing Ice Maiden would be more accurate for common fanfic depictions of her. Reis seems more the seductive tease type but not necessarily a ditz. Compare more to Yoruichi, but ultimately devoted to Beowulf.

Don't forget the two canon generics of Alicia and Lavian. Could make one the shy knowledgeable type, with the other a genki girl.
 

Meinos Kaen

Well-Known Member
#17
FinalMax said:
Note that some would consider Agrias to have subclassed in Kuudere, despite the redundancy and frequent mislabeling of that particular trope. Thawing Ice Maiden would be more accurate for common fanfic depictions of her. Reis seems more the seductive tease type but not necessarily a ditz. Compare more to Yoruichi, but ultimately devoted to Beowulf.

Don't forget the two canon generics of Alicia and Lavian. Could make one the shy knowledgeable type, with the other a genki girl.
Kudeere, hm? I guess that leaves Meladioul as the tomboy. She does have short hair, after all.

Reis as Yoruichi? Well, the cheerful seductress. I mean, she doesn't strike me as being that 'dangerous' type of vibe, as long as she doesn't breath out fire... Well, I mostly have everything about their personalities down.

And thanks for the kudos on Lavian and Alicia.
 

Muramasa

Well-Known Member
#18
This is going to be tremendously AU isn't it?


No tragedy at Fort Ziekden means Ramza isn't disillusioned with his family and Delita isn't driven off the deep end. That would also mean Ramza probably doesn't join up with Gafgarion... which means that he doesn't encounter Agrias the same way either...

It looks like your implying that Miluda is going to survive which also has the side effect of Wiegraf not joining the Shrine Knights with an oppurtunity for revenge against Ramza. And then there's Delita and Teta...

Well... I'm interested to see where you go with this at any rate.
 

Meinos Kaen

Well-Known Member
#19
Muramasa said:
This is going to be tremendously AU isn't it?


No tragedy at Fort Ziekden means Ramza isn't disillusioned with his family and Delita isn't driven off the deep end. That would also mean Ramza probably doesn't join up with Gafgarion... which means that he doesn't encounter Agrias the same way either...

It looks like your implying that Miluda is going to survive which also has the side effect of Wiegraf not joining the Shrine Knights with an oppurtunity for revenge against Ramza. And then there's Delita and Teta...

Well... I'm interested to see where you go with this at any rate.
You have no idea. Actually, Wiegraf will still want revenge against Ramza, but for something else. After all, I guess he was more fanatical than his sister, if he believed that all of his men and himself dieing was going to do any good if they spilled 'even a drop of noble blood'. What I have in mind will be satisfying, I guess...

Yeah, Ramza will have to wait a long time before being disilluded with his family... Or better, with his brothers. Balbanes and Alma are okay in my book. Agrias... Well, for them to meet, I made up something completely original, basically. Just wait and see.
 
#20
A thought: what about Celia and Lede? Or the Byblos?

Meinos Kaen said:
I mean, (Reis) doesn't strike me as being that 'dangerous' type of vibe
She is a Goddamn dragon.
 

Meinos Kaen

Well-Known Member
#21
Dark Knight Gafgar said:
A thought: what about Celia and Lede? Or the Byblos?

Meinos Kaen said:
I mean, (Reis) doesn't strike me as being that 'dangerous' type of vibe
She is a Goddamn dragon.
I did say 'until she starts breathing fire'. lol

Celia and Lede too? LoL Ugly Ultima Demons transforming into hot assassin kuuderes, I guess...

Edit: Just read the small words. -_-'' You sick, sick bastard.
 
#22
You realized I haven't even suggested Altima yet, right?
 
#24
I am aware.

She was also in Alma's body at one point, though.
 
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