Thinker than Water

clockworkchaos

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Thicker than water

Chapter 1: Never Look back


The firebender sent a burst of flame near the doorway, blocking KataraÆs exit. She fell back, awkwardly half-running, half-stumbling into her motherÆs arms. Her mother shrieked, but was cut off by the man.

ôHow stupid do you think I am, woman? A chieftain searching for a Waterbending master for his wife? A thirty year old woman? No, you would have been captured with the other barbarians had you had any talent. And had you not, you would still be smart enough to keep it hidden. But searching for a master for his daughter. That sounds much more plausible, donÆt you think?ö

Mommy was scared. Katara was scared because mommy was scared, and held onto her closely. She closed her eyes, hoping that if she just held on tight enough this would just end. That the nightmare would be over and she would wake up. But she didnÆt wake up, and it didnÆt end.

ôLeave her alone!ö her mother shouted. But the man didnÆt listen, and ordered her to get out of his way. Mom got very quiet and held Katara close and whispered to her. ôI want you to run, run to your father and donÆt look back.ö Katara nodded.

Katara was pushed out of her motherÆs arms as her mother lunged at the man. Katara tried to run in the confusion, she tried to get out of the tent, she really did. But she wasnÆt fast enough. Her mother shrieked.

She didnÆt obey her mother. She looked back.

She saw the fire coming from the manÆs hands. She saw her mother burning, screaming, dying. She saw it and heard it and smelled it; it smelled like burnt hair, and clothes, and meat.

Katara ran. She ran toward her mother. Her motherÆs body was still hot, but she had to stop it, she had to put out the burning. Tapping into the push and pull she barely understood, she called the snow to come to her mother to stop the burning. She called the water. The burning stopped, but it wasnÆt over. She could feel another burning, not from outside, but from the inside. Mommy was wrong on the inside. She was wrong, but Katara could fix it, the water was showing her how. She pushed and pulled at the light to make mommy right.

But nothing seemed to help. No matter how hard Katara tried, the burning wasnÆt stopping, and the lights inside were fading.

Katara found herself roughly turned around. She had forgotten about the firebender. He crouched down, and regarded her with an ugly, cold look. Katara tried to struggle, but she just couldnÆt find the will. Finally he smiled the most horrible smile Katara had ever seen, and spoke. ôFire Lord Azulon is old, and anyone who could give him something to help extend his life would be greatly rewarded. Congratulations, barbarian, you get to live.ö

He grabbed her and roughly lifted her up. Katara screamed and grasped for something anything, her clutching finger touching her motherÆs necklace. She held onto it like a precious diamond as she was lifted up. The man ran out of the tent, carrying Katara under his arms. As he ran, she found new strength and will. She kicked, she pounded, and yelled and screamed and hollered and raged and panicked. And so did the water with her.

The ground rumbled. Burst of snow and ice shot up from it responding to her anger. The man yelled at her to stop but Katara didnÆt. She raged, not even specifically at the man, for she was far past the point of coherent thought. She just raged, with the ice, with the snow, with the blizzard-

A hard punch to the face brought her back to earth. It wasnÆt the gentle smack of her mother keeping her away from the fire, nor the punch of her brother when they brawled, but the full force punch of a trained solider. KataraÆs nose broke and blood streamed down her face. She clutched it and began to cry as loud as she could.

The man made it another few steps before picking her up and holding her to his face. ôSHUT UP!ö he roared. Katara continued to cry. ôSHUT up. Shut up or IÆll kill you. Do you want to die!?ö He shook her violently as he continued to yell and she continued to cry.

But whether by her cries or his yells, hope had come. Though her eyes were half-blocked with blood and tears, Katara could discern the faint outline of the Water Tribe Warriors, first one, then many, yelling and running towards her. The man cursed and threw her back over his shoulder.

But her hope was stillborn, for other soldiers came as well, stopping the warriors, and driving them back. They were yelling, at her, at him, Katara didnÆt know. She couldnÆt make out the words over her own screams for her father. Some of the other soldiers ran towards them, flanking her on each side.

With an almighty shout her father broke through the line, charging at them like a spirit. The man carrying her yelled at two of the other Fire Nation soldiers to stop him. Her dad cut them down like they were nothing, but the delay was enough. More and more of the soldiers came, delaying her dad, and Katara found herself carried further and further away. She stretched out her arms, ignoring the stinging pain in her face, as if somehow she could stretch enough to touch her father, to rush into his arms, but it was futile.

As if it was one last howl of defiance from a defeated tribe, her father hurled his spear with all his might and managed to strike one of the soldiers on the arm, but that was it.

Katara screamed when they tried to drag her into the metal ship, no ship like that could float. But screaming had long proved useless, and she was rewarded with another slap to her bloody face and thrown in a small, lightless room. Outside there was shouting and yelling. It was all the soldiers seemed to speak in. Then a horrible whistle, like some great beast roaring over the arguments. The ship jerked like an angry sea monster. That was what it was, some sort of horrible, angry evil sea monster; maybe they wanted to use her as food.

Katara huddled into a corner, and cried herself into exhaustion and sleep.

She awoke when the door was opened by the firebender. The pain in her face was almost gone. She couldnÆt tell most of the soldiers apart, they all had skull like masks, but she could tell which one was him; she would never be able to forget him.

ôGet up,ö he snapped. Katara huddled against the wall.

ôI said get up.ö This time his snap was punctuated with a spark from his fingers. Katara slowly rose, her trembling legs barely able to hold her. ôCome on.ö

They walked past rows of metal corridors until they reached a room. Inside Katara could see more men. She stopped, she didnÆtÆ want to go in. But this only made the firebender mad, and he grabbed her by the scruff of her coat, half-choking her as he dragged her in.

The men inside looked over her. Katara wanted to hide, but there was nowhere to run. Finally, one spoke up. ôSo this is our little miracle meal ticket, eh? CanÆt say she looks any different from any other savage.ö

Another man spoke up. ôThatÆs because she isnÆt. We should just kill her and be done with it. Finally eliminating the waterbenders should be more than enough. ö

The man who had taken her angrily spoke up. ôJioh, youÆre an idiot. The waterbenders were the only threat these savages ever had against our ships, without them they donÆt matter and that means we donÆt matter. Already half our ships have been transferred away in the last few years, and the only reason more werenÆt was because of evidence there was at least one more. Unless we find a way to please the Fire Lord, we are going to be stuck with no hope of advancement or promotion or action.ö

ôAnd this is your plan,ö a tall, thin man disdainfully stated. ôWell, we should at least make sure the goods work.ö He walked towards Katara with a bucket of water in his left hand. He set the bucket down next to them, then held out his right hand and unwrapped the bandages covering it. The wound was fresh. ôOne of your savage little friends nicked me, heal this.ö

Katara stood open mouthed. She didnÆt understand what he was talking about.

The tall man smiled. ôI think sheÆs defective.ö Around the room the other men laughed.

The firebender wasnÆt amused, and yelled at Katara. ôDo you want to join your mother? Heal him or else.ö Flames appeared in his hand and he held them an inch from KataraÆs face.

Katara ran to pick up the discarded bandages and clumsily attempted to rewrap the manÆs hand. He smacked her with his good hand. ôDefiantly defective.ö The other men roared with laughter.


ôI saw her heal. She tried to heal her dead mother,ö the Firebender insisted.

ôHealing a woman who ended up dead. A stunning recommendation. IÆm sure the Fire Lord would want that.ö

The firebender gritted his teeth with frustration and angrily bent down to face Katara. ôAre you trying to humiliate me?ö

Katara desperately tried to say, no, that she wasnÆt, she just didnÆt know what he wanted. But the words wouldnÆt come, her voice died in her throat, and she had to settle for a terrified shaking of her head.

ôThen heal him. Or do you want to face my fire?ö

She continued to try to say no, that she didnÆt want to face his fire. Tears streamed down her face, but the word simply couldnÆt come.

This only made the man angrier. ôAnswer me! Are you going to heal him?ö

The word finally came, only now it was the wrong one. ôNo.ö After it left her lips Katara realized it was, but by then it was far too late.

The man grabbed the wrist of her left arm and set it on fire. Katara screamed as the burning, biting, continuous pain. It was worse than anything she had ever felt before. She struggled to get away, but the man didnÆt let go. Around her she heard laughter.

Finally, after an eternity of pain, the man let her go. She ran screaming towards the bucket of water, plunging her arm into it. The fire was put out but Katara kept her arm in the water, letting its coolness entrap her arm. She stood there, closing her eyes [and] just letting the water soak her arm, oblivious to the outside world for a few glorious seconds before the tall manÆs voice echoed across the room.

ôWell, it seems sheÆs not defective after all. Congratulations.ö

Katara looked down, her arm was glowing. She yelled and pulled it out of the water, but the pain returned. Quickly she tried to put it back in, to replicate the earlier coolness, but now it was hard; the unconscious rhythm didnÆt come as easily, and the cooling healing didnÆt happen.

ôOr not. Put her back, IÆd rather not risk my hand to an amateur with a half-burnt arm.ö

The firebender gave a grunt of acknowledgement and lifted the bucket of water while KataraÆs arm was still in it, Katara winced as it hit the sides of her arm as he lifted it. ôFollow.ö He order and they walked back down the hallways, until they arrived back at the room she had been previously locked in. He set the bucket down inside the room. ôHeal up. You had better be ready in the morning.ö

Katara nodded silently and walked back into the room. She plunged her arm into the water trying to find the healing coolness of before. The door shut, and all was darkness again.

Katara woke up soaked. She had fallen asleep still trying to heal her arm, and the bucket had fallen over when her arm dragged it down. She picked it up, feeling around its bottom. Katara could feel a little water in it. She knew that water wasnÆt good, her arm had been in, and it didnÆtÆ smell right, but she was so thirsty.

Katara felt the bucket, finally she tried to will the water to come via bending, but none made it to her lips. In the darkness she couldnÆt tell if any was coming. Finally she settled for putting her hands in and creating a makeshift cup with them. She brought the water up to her lips but immediately spit it out. It was seawaterà even nastier than normal seawater.

Katara squinted as the door opened. The Firebender had come back. He looked down at her still-soaked clothes and gave a sneer of disgust. Then he motioned for her to follow. Again they walked along the metal corridors. Katara couldnÆt tell if they were going to the same room, but she thought they were. She struggled to keep up with the Firebender, her mouth felt so dry. She tried to work up the courage to talk.

Finally they arrived at the room. There were two other people in it. The first was the tall man who was standing up, the other was another soldier, seated on one of the benches, Katara didnÆt recognize him. The tall man held out his hand. ôI believe you know the drill.ö

Katara stared at the hand. She was so thirsty, she didnÆt think she had the energy to heal it. And she still didnÆt understand how she did it in the first place. ôWater.ö

The tall man smiled a rather thin smile pointed to a bucket besides him. Katara ran over, to sniff it but it was the same type of water as before. ôNo, this is wrong.ö

The Firebender snapped his fingers again. ôWrong, wrong? WhatÆs wrong with it? You healed your arm with water exactly like it, are you trying to defy me again?ö

ôNo!ö Katara shouted, huddling defensively.

ôI believe the little mite is asking for drinking water.ö The tall man tsked tsked. ôHave you been feeding her, Yoh? You should know you have to water her crops if you want to sell them at market.ö

The Firebender gritted his teeth, ôHeal him, then a drink.ö

Katara nodded gratefully, and then turned to the tall man. The promise of water gave her new energy. She motioned towards the bucket, but the tall man simply stood there.

The tall man frowned. ôWhat is it? Use your words. Unlike your people, not all of us speak in grunts and pointing.ö

ôPlease, you need to be in the water.ö

The man rolled his eyes. ôJust bend the water up.ö

ôIà I canÆt.ö

He gave an amused chuckle. ôI suppose that is what we get for taking her because sheÆs untrained and not dangerous. We are going to have to work on that, I doubt the Fire Lord would want to have to take a full bath for every healing application.ö The man sat down on the floor and put his hand in the bucket.


Katara gently put her hands in with him. She still wasnÆt sure how she did it before, but she had some idea. When she helped herself she had felt a flow. She had let something that was like the water but not water flow around her hands. The flow, the lights were wrong, but she set the pieces right. She wasnÆt sure she could find the energy in someone else, but she had to try, she didnÆt want to be burned again.

She grasped the hand and began to search for the energy. Finally she found it, a mass of energy that wasnÆt flowing across his wound. She began healing. The man gave a contented sigh and spoke up. ôYes, it appears she can heal others. Yoh, while sheÆs working could you be a gentleman and get the girl some water.ö

The Firebender spoke with barely contained fury, ôI am your commanding officer. Not your fetch boy.ö

The tall man spoke dismissively. ôYes, yes. But IÆm being healed and canÆt move, and poor Juro over here has his leg injured. So itÆs not like either of us can do it.ö

ôYou should watch your tongue. It might get burned,ö the Firebender stated before stomping out.

ôOnly as long as youÆre in charge, you old has been,ö muttered the tall man so softly only Katara could hear.

Katara concentrated on healing the hand. It was nice, she could close her eyes and just focus on the energy on setting things right. Forget where she was, forget this horrible ship, with its horrible men and all that had happened to her.

All too soon the healing was complete and the man fished his hand out of the water and stood up. He teasingly flexed it. ôGood, good. I think that will do nicely. You are quite a natural, arenÆt you? Ah Yoh, youÆre back.ö

The Firebender set down a mug of water, and Katara greedily picked it up. It was a relief, but not enough; she was still thirsty, but fear overruled asking for more.

ôNow, heal Juro,ö ordered the Firebender. Katara turned to the man on the bench, who had been so quiet the entire time Katara had almost forgotten he was there. She went over to him, and frowned. The wound was on the upper calf of his right leg, it wasnÆt very big, there was no way he could fit it into the water. Katara looked from the bucket to the man awkwardly.

ôIdiot, bend the water to him.ö

Katara knew about bending, it was what happened when she made water move. But she didnÆt quite know how. Slowly she tried to remember how she had moved the water when she was back home to splash her brother-

Katara stopped, tears welling up as she remember her home. She began to stand there and cry, but this only angered the other men.

ôWhat are you blubbering about?ö demanded the Firebender. When she didnÆt respond, he continued to shout at her.

Finally the tall man spoke up, ôWhat is the saying, Yoh? The burned hand learns best?ö The Firebender nodded, and Katara screamed as she realized what was going to happen. ôTry to not damage her too much, if she has to spend a day healing every time she messes up the Fire Lord will be long dead before we can present her.ö The Firebender grabbed her hand and Katara shrieked as it burned.

The rest of the day quickly evolved into a pattern. Every time she messed up, letting the water drop, or not getting it up right, her hand would be burnt. It wasnÆt as bad as the first time, nothing was as bad as then, but it was still bad. It only took few minutes to heal her own hand before she was to try again.

The worst part was trying to hold the water up to the leg and healing at the same time, but eventually she began to get it and was burned less and less. However, as her expertise grew, so did her exhaustion. Finally, the tall man spoke up.

ôThatÆs five times in a row she failed, we wonÆt be getting anything out of her tonight.ö The Firebender nodded, and Katara was escorted back to her room. As soon as she was back she fell onto the floor.

A few minutes later the door was opened again. Katara shrank back, but all the Firebender did was set down a plate of food and another cup of water. Katara hadnÆt realized how hungry she was until now, but fear kept her away from the man. He rolled his eyes and walked away.

Katara crawled over to the plate. She didnÆt recognize anything but she was too hungry to care. With a dropping heart, she also realized that he hadnÆt left any utensils, but again she was too hungry to care. She began eating with her hands.

Yoh Rah looked at her with disgust. ôBarbarian,ö he muttered before closing the door.
 

Prince Charon

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clockworkchaos said:
Katara crawled over to the plate. She didnÆt recognize anything but she was too hungry to care. With a dropping heart, she also realized that he hadnÆt left any utensils, but again she was too hungry to care. She began eating with her hands.

Yoh Rah looked at her with disgust. ôBarbarian,ö he muttered before closing the door.
Speak for yourself, Yoh.

Well written.
 

zerohour

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I'm interested to see how Aang gets free without an angry Katara to break the iceberg. It might not happen until after Ozai conquers the world.

Of course, that doesn't seem to be the focus of this story. I'm interested to see where this goes.
 

SotF

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zerohour said:
I'm interested to see how Aang gets free without an angry Katara to break the iceberg. It might not happen until after Ozai conquers the world.

Of course, that doesn't seem to be the focus of this story. I'm interested to see where this goes.
Well, this is before Ozai takes over, so things might be extremely different by that point, especially if Azulon smacks him down in a different way than making a comment that convinced Ursa to kill him in order to protect Zuko...
 

clockworkchaos

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Thicker than water

Chapter Two

Revelations of Fire and Water


The second time (for Katara could no longer count the days, having not seen the sun since arriving on the ship) was not as bad as the first. They had her heal a few more of the soldiers, some with wounds on their arms, some with wounds on their chests and legs. She didnÆt fail as often, and her hand wasnÆt burnt as much. She was even led back when she healed the fourth one rather than having them wait until she continuously failed due to exhaustion. They even fed her halfway through.

She returned to her room without incident. For the first time, she noticed how hard the floor was, how cold the metal. Before sheÆd been too tired to even notice, let alone care. Now, for the first time she found she wasnÆt doing anything, Katara had time to think. It wasnÆt like she could do much else. The only other thing in the room was a bucket of water, and her arm was fully healed.

Katara thought. She thought about her family. She thought about her older brother, who thought he knew everything, and her grandmother, who really did. She thought about her father, who was so wise and strong and brave. Katara wished he would come, she wished anyone would come. She missed them all so much. And finally, worst of all, her thoughts turned to her mother; her caring, wonderful mother. Who would sing her lullabies to help her go to sleep, help her when she fell, tell her stories.

And now she was gone, dead. Burnt, burnt by the Firebender, and even now Katara could see her burning, dying, could hear her screams.

She was going to die here, alone in this ship. Someday they would get tired of her, and she would be burnt just like mommy.

KataraÆs eyes shot up as the door opened. Was it time to wake up? She hadnÆt even fallen asleep, she wasnÆt ready. She was too tired; there was no way she could heal now. She was going to fail, they were going to burn her. She began to hyperventilate.

ôShut up.ö The man who spoke wasnÆt the Firebender, just one of the solders.He was carrying a lantern in his left hand and something unidentifiable in his right. Katara calmed down. ôThatÆs better. Captain's decided to be generous. HereÆs a blanket brat. Probably better than anything you had back home.ö The man tossed the thing in his right hand, which did indeed prove to be blanket, wrapped up and tied into a bundle with a few knots of rope. ôAnd hereÆs a light.ö The man set down the lantern. ôDonÆt stay up too late.ö

As he closed the door Katara began to panic. There was fire; there was fire in her room! She desperately tore at the knots holding the blanket and pulled it out. She wrapped it around herself, trying to hide from the fire, from the light. Even as she hid beneath the blanket she could see the fire in her mindÆs eye, trying to get her, trying to burn her.

She wrapped the covers over herself as tight as she could and tried to think about something, anything else. But the fire didnÆt end; she couldnÆt get it out of her head. She could hear the flame sizzling, cracking. There was nothing else in the room but the snapping, biting flame, barely contained in its lantern.

Finally Katara could take it no longer. She had to stop it. She had to put it out, somehow. She lifted the covers from over her head and grabbed the bucket. It was heavy and she strained to lift it up. Slowly she walked toward the lantern. She got a few steps before the flame leaped out at her, like a rabid polar bear dog. Katara fell back, spilling the water over the floor. Quickly she scooted back until she hit the opposite wall.

Slowly she began to breath. How could she deal with this? She had to put the fire out! She had to do something before it got her. Smother it with the blanketà no, might just burn it. She couldà she couldà Waterbend. The water on the floor, she could waterbend it. She wasnÆt able to do it beforeà but sheÆd gotten a lot better, maybe she could bring it up to the fire.

She walked to the spilt water and began to circle her arms, gathering the water towards her. Once she had enough she stretched out her arms, trying to send the tendril of water towards the fire. She didnÆt dare get too close to it, not after it had tried to get her, but slowly, agonizingly slowly, the water stretched further and further out. But the further it stretched the harder it got to maintain and, finally, as it was mere inches from the fire, Katara could no longer hold it. The water fell to the ground.

She sank to her knees and began to cry. What was she going to do now? She couldnÆt do it, it wasnÆt fair. Why were they doing this? SheÆd healed them, it wasnÆt fair. It wasnÆt fair! Katara yelled in rage, and the water whipped out around her. The room fell into darkness and Katara looked up in confusion. She could hear the sizzling of the freshly put out flame. Then she smiled in understanding. She had done it, her water had put out the flame.

Katara happily gathered up her blanket and went to sleep.

In the morning the Firebender was angry, but all he did was give her a kick, no burning. And there were no more lanterns brought in. She had won.

By the fourth time they brought her out, it was routine. They would bring her another injured solider and she would heal it. She had already healed two of them that day, and only been burned once. Then the third man sat down and lifted the sleeve of his left arm.

Katara examined the wound; it was deep, deeper than anything sheÆd done before, but that was no surprise. Each of the wounds sheÆd healed had been worked on had been worse than the last. Even though she was much more skilled, this would take hours, perhaps the rest of the ôdayö.

The Firebender cleared his throat. Katara quickly set to work lest her hesitation make him decide she needed another burn. As she brought the water up, she continued to examine the wound. It wasnÆt exactly like a gash, it wasnÆt a piercing wound either, more likeà both. Like someone had stuck a spear in the arm and then dragged it down.

Or thrown it, and it had gashed across as the man continued to run.

Katara stopped and starred at the wound.

The more she looked at it, the more she was sure this was right. She couldnÆt exactly remember what the man had looked like, but he looked right. And the wound was on the arm in the right place.

The Firebender cleared his throat again. Katara didnÆt care.

This was it. The wound had been made by her father, her fatherÆs spear. It was his last act of defending herà. The only thing of his she had.

The Firebender got up from the bench and grabbed her hand. Katara screamed as her hand burned once again. The Firebender let go and walked back to his chair. Katara quickly stuck it in the water to heal it. Once she was done the Firebender stopped his foot impatiently. She began to move the water up, but stopped.

Sheà. She couldnÆt do this. It was a betrayal. Her father had made this wound trying to protect her, trying to stop them from taking her. This man had helped keep her from her father she wasnÆt going to help him; she wasnÆt going to help them.


"No," she said.

The FirebenderÆs eyes opened wide in shock and anger. ôWhat did you say?ö

ôNo.ö

He wordlessly held up a fire in his hand and began advancing towards her. He was going to burn her, again. Katara didnÆt want to be burned, she wasnÆt going too burned!

ôNO!ö Katara screamed in defiance. Before she even knew what was happening, she used waterbending to lash out at the Firebender with the water in the bucket, slapping him across the face.

The room was silent.

Then several things happened at once. Katara desperately huddled against the wall, as she saw the look of sheer rage on the FirebenderÆs face. The water had done nothing. Slowly he advanced on her, his fire practically leaping out of his hand.

ôNever. Attack. Your betters. Again. Do you understand?ö Katara desperately nodded. ôThen let me help you remember.ö The time the Firebender didnÆt grab her hand, instead he grabbed her right leg, and began to burn.

Katara thought what he had done before was burning but now she knew that had been nothing, a trifling, merciful burn. This was different. White hot pain shot through her leg. Katara screamed at the top of her lungs until finally, mercifully, she passed out.


Katara awoke to pain and darkness. She was back in her room, or at least she thought she was; it was metal, and dark. But where she was didnÆt matter, all that mattered is the pain in her leg. It was like having a wind across an exposed body part during the long nights. Except it wasnÆt. She wished it was cold, but this, this heat was much, much worse.

She wasnÆt sure what happened. The room was completely dark and she was so feverish. Hot, burning, like she was on fire the entire time. The only reason she knew she wasnÆt was that her leg hurt worse than the rest, so she couldnÆt be on fire. But as she drifted in and out of sleep, she saw things, some she was sure were real, some she hoped werenÆt.

The Firebender came, demanded that she heal the soldier. She refused. Or at least said nothing, she didnÆt have the strength to do more. She expected him to finally kill her, to end it all, but he didnÆt. He simply told her that she would receive no food or water until she did.

Occasionally she tried to heal herself, or at least she thought she did. It might have been another dream, but she didnÆt think so. Dreams didnÆt usually hurt this much. There was no water, first she tried to simply bring the light in her body together, but that didnÆt work, Tgere was no medium to redirect the light, only air.

The Firebender came a second time. Or was he really here? The door wasnÆt openà but there was light. Maybe it opened and she didnÆt hear it? The part where he breathed fire from his mouth and swallowed her was defiantly unrealà unless she was already dead, and this was the Spirit Realm.

The second time Katara tries to heal her leg, she tried to redirect the light through other parts her body. That was a bad idea. The lights fought with each other, and the pain was made even worse.

Katara didnÆt try that again.

The worst timesà the worst times were when she wasnÆt alone. Sometimes she saw her family. She knew they were dreams, and yetà in the fever and darkness and loneness, what was real? Sometimes she wasnÆt sure. She saw her mother, burning, asking if she was going to join her, her father charging for her, but only managing to grow more and more distant.

She got desperate enough to try to use her own spit as a medium, but there wasnÆt enough and her mouth was too dry. What little she had couldnÆt even form one proper pathway for the light, let alone the multitude she would need.

As she lay alone, she had far too much time to think.

Why did this happen? Why had they attacked? Why had they come?

Then she (or was it the visions?) started to understand. Katara didnÆt like the answers.

They had come to destroy the last waterbender. Her mother had died claiming to be it. If had just run, she could have made it. She hadn't. It was all her own fault she had been kidnapped. Said the ghostly, burning vision of her mother, or was it her own thoughts, both? She couldnÆt tell.

They came because they knew the waterbender was here. Because her father had gone in search of a waterbending master. Because sheÆd wanted to learn. It was all her fault they attacked. Her father gravely informed her.

And now she had healed them. They had killed her mother, attacked her tribe, taken her, and she had helped them, thinking only of avoiding her own pain. So what if she had refused to heal one wound her father made? SheÆd already spit on the work the other warriors had done, made it as nothing. It was pointless, hopeless, she was a worthless traitor.

She could feel the hatred of her entire tribe, and she knew she deserved it.

When the Firebender next came, she didnÆt have any more defiance. She just nodded weakly.

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AN: The ambiguity, at the end where it first appears that the answers Katara didn't like were coming from her own reflections, and then itÆs a ghostly vision, that intentional. SheÆs completely feverish at the time.

Edit. Holy shit, I just realized I titled the topic "thinker than water" that has got to be one of the most embarrassing mistakes I've ever made.
 

zeebee1

Well-Known Member
#6
I'm not sure what the point is. I understand the basic concept, but not the idea itself.
 

clockworkchaos

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#8
Thicker than Water

Chapter 3

Misery loves Company


They gave her water, and her fever broke soon after. It was a small mercy that they didnÆt make her heal until she was coherent. Or maybe they had tried once and it hadnÆt worked? She wasnÆt sure. Katara wasnÆt sure about anything that had happened after the burn, except that she knew she had betrayed her father, betrayed everyone.

Because she couldnÆt move her leg, the rest of the solders simply came to her. For the first time since the burn she was able to examine leg. It was bad, nothing like the burns she had been given on her hand. Those had been red, with occasional blisters. Thisà this was a mixture of colors; white, red and yellow pus. When she touched it, it felt almost leathery.

There were a few more soldiers she had to heal, but they mostly left her alone now. She used the free time to try to heal her leg. It didnÆt work, no matter how many times she tried. She could redirect some of the outer parts, but the centerà it was like the light was gone, there was nothing there to redirect. She could impose some water on it and push the light into the water, but it didnÆt go into the body. Still, she tried. It was soothing, and better to focus on this than to simply lay awake at night, and focus onà. other things. Now she knew what was a dream and what was real, she thought that should have made it better. It didnÆt.

The door opened. In walked the Firebender, as well as several other soldiers. Katara looked at them but didnÆt see any wounds. There were too many. Katara kept calm. She didnÆt panic. Panic was bad. It might make them angry. The Firebender tossed a broken spear shaft about her height towards her. She looked at it in confusion.

The tall man rolled his eyes. ôUse it like a walking stick.ö

Katara nodded. That meant they were leaving; she wasnÆt sure how she felt about that. Anywhere had to be better than this horrible ship, but a land where such monsters could come from? The last thing she wanted to do was go there. But, she had learned[,] her feelings on anything were unimportant. The only choice was between either doing it, or being punished and then doing it.

Slowly she struggled to stand up, climbing the shaft while balancing on her right foot. It was difficult, and Katara fell down. Most of the men laughed, but the Firebender began to simmer. Katara quickly tried again.

On the third try she managed to stand up and tentatively take a step forward. She quickly lost her balance and crashed face first into the metal floor.

Around her the men roared with laughter. Katara desperately fought back tears. She shouldnÆt cry over the stinging in her face. It wasnÆt that bad, not compared to the fire. She needed to get up, get up and move.

The tall man sighed. ôThis isnÆt working,ö he said, observing KataraÆs inching progress.

ôMaybe Yoh could give her some motivation.ö One of the others suggested. Katara tried to quicken her pace.

ôI doubt that would work,ö said the tall man as Katara fell down once again. ôIt would just panic her, and it takes her forever to get up. LetÆs just rent the wagon.ö

ôShe doesnÆt need a wagon, the brat can walk,ö the Firebender insisted.

ôNeed she may not, but unless you want to spend forever waiting for her to walk a snailÆs pace in that forsaken weather outside, we should spring for one anyways.ö

The Firebender sighed. ôFine. Lee, pick her up and letÆs go.ö

One of the solders picker her up in his arms. At first she recoiled from his touch, but a warning glance was enough to make her as still as possible.

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The weather was exactly what she had imagined the Fire Nation would have. It was the most horrible storm she had ever witnessed. They sky was so dark she couldnÆt tell if it was night or day, the snow was unnatural, coming down as water and the wind was howling so fiercely she gripped the cart with one hand to avoid being blown out. It was like something out of Gran-GranÆs scariest stories. She couldnÆt see much of the land in the darkness, but the port they had been in was filled with more people, all as cruel and evil looking as the solders. Once they exited it, the land was just as dark and foreboding as the people.

For the most part Katara tried not to think about the journey. Instead she concentrated on healing her leg with her free hand. By now didnÆt think it would ever heal, but the attempts still soothed it, and that was better than nothing.

Lightning flashed across the sky and Katara thought she could see a shadowed outlined amongst the trees. She let out a quick yell of fright.

ôIt appears someoneÆs afraid of lightning,ö said one of the soldiers while the rest chuckled. Katara wanted to say that she wasnÆt afraid of lighting, but knew better than to talk. The lightning flashed again but this time she saw nothing. Maybe it had just been her imagination.

ôGuys, gimmie a moment,ö said another one. ôI need to ætake care of businessÆ.ö There were a couple of grumbles among the others, but the caravan halted, while the solider walked into the forest. They waited.

And continued to wait.

And continued to wait.

Finally, after several minutes, the Firebender pointed at one of the others. ôShen, go check on him.ö The solider grumbled and began to march into the woods[,] quickly disappearing out of sight. A few moments later he yelled back, ôBlast it! I think he fell into the river and- Ahyeee!ö

The Firebender gave a sound of frustration. ôIdiot. Lee, Ju, get out there and fish those two out. Watch the river bank, I donÆt want anyone else falling in.ö Two more solders quickly ran off. A few moments later more screams rang out, but this time they were punctuated with a barely visible burst of fire from the area.

Katara shivered, were there other firebenders out there? The Firebender was bad enough, but more?

The Firebender yelled for the soldiers to get into order and they quickly formed a box formation. For a while there was no sound except for the failing rain.

ôARRGH!ö the Firebender gave a yell of pain, as a lightning bolt illuminated a flash of steel. One of the other men had stabbed him. ôYou traitor!ö

ôWhat? But I-ö Katara couldnÆt make out his body, much less face, but the voice was the tall manÆs, and it soundedà confused. A second later he was screaming in pain, and another second he wasnÆt even doing that. The other soldiers turned inward and were muttering in surprise.

ôWhat the-ô

ôKnew he hated the captain but-ö

ôNow, in front of everyone?ö

The Firebender called for order once again, but any attempt as was cut short as twin sound of thumps of armored men falling to the ground came from one side of the formation ôItÆs an ambush! He must have helped them, BURN THEM OUT!ö the Firebender yelled at the top of his lungs.

Instantly several soldiers shot flame out of their hands. KataraÆs eyes widened. There had been other firebenders? She had been touching, healing more Firebenders! Katara started breathing heavily as solid walls of flame fought against the rain to devour the trees.

Suddenly, one of the flames twisted to the right, burning the man in its path. More confusion followed, and the firebender who had done it was burned by the Firebender. This bewilder was enough to distract some of them, and two more flames stopped. Katara couldnÆt see or hear well between the rain and the shouting, but she thought they had fallen. More shouting followed; by now there was no wall of flame, only isolate bursts, and each of those went out one by one, often followed by the sound of men fighting.

Katara looked around on the cart for a place to hide. She didnÆt know what was going on-- they were in the Fire Nation, why were they being attacked? Maybe they were just so violent they had to fight each other if no one else was around? Unfortunately, there wasnÆt anything in the cart to hide in, just a few jugs of water and some rations.

The Firebender let out a roar of pain, and then the noises stopped. Katara turned back around. She could just barely make out a single figure against the rain. Slowly, menacingly,the figure moved towards the cart. Katara tried to back away, but without being able to run she had barely moved a foot before the figure, a woman, was in view. The woman was old, maybe as old as Gran Gran, but she excluded an aura of menace and cold hatred. Slowly, she raised her arms.

Thoughts raced in KataraÆs mind. This woman was unarmed, that meant she was a firebender. She was going to be burned again! She was going to be burned!

Katara panicked. The rain whipped around her, fleeing in all directions and hitting the woman in the face.

Oh, no. She had done it again, she had hit another firebender. She was dead, or worse. The burn everything and leave her barely alive, she would be a mass of scars and---

Katara, who had closed her eyes and began to cry, found arms wrapping around her in a hug. She stopped crying out of surprise. ôItÆs all right, child, theyÆre gone.ö

Theyà were gone? KataraÆs tears redoubled, but with a note of relief. The Firebender was gone. She didnÆt know how, or why, or anything, but if this woman was really speaking the truth-!

KataraÆs arms seemed to move on their own, returning the hug.

Slowly she found herself lifted off the ground. Back home, Katara had always claimed she was big enough not to be carried, but now she didnÆt care. She didnÆt remember the rest of the night, just crying as the woman carried her away.

The first thing Katara felt when she woke up was a feeling of softness - it wasnÆt like the fur skin back home, but in some ways it was softer, like - wait, where was she? Katara bolted upright and looked around.

The place was weird; it looked like the inside of a ship, not the monstrous Fire Nation ship, but a real ship, made of proper wood. Then again, the room was far too big to be on a real ship. Other than that it looked surprisingly unsinister. There were a few pieces of wooden furniture, and a set of clothes hung on the side with a light behind them, but that was it.

Katara turned back to her bed, pushing her hand against it. It was weird. On the surface it was thinner than what she was used to, fabric and not fur, and underneath the thin fabric was something else, something softà Unlike her bed back home it wasnÆt on the ground. Instead, it rested on what looked like a large wooden table. Only it wasnÆt wood, or at least it wasnÆt all wood. There was a raised part near her head that was defiantly wood.

Katara began to maneuver out of the bed, which wasnÆt easy with her limp leg. He pain in it was almost gone, replaced by a constant, low ache. She peered over the edge. The floor below her was mostly bare except for the mattress. Giving up, she sank back into the bed, with her leg like it was she couldnÆt walk, and even if she could she didnÆt know where she was. Better to just enjoy the rest while it lasted and not think too much about the future.

She lay in the bed for quite a while. What had happened last night? The Firebenderà and the rest, she wasnÆt sorry to see them go, but it had been so scary. Were they really gone? Even her father hadnÆt been able to stop themà maybe they were already back up, and sheÆd be forced to heal them all over again. But the woman had said they were goneà Katara really hoped she was right.

And the old woman, who was she? Katara they were in the Fire Nation, and with no weapons she had to have been a firebender. But she had hugged her, acted almost niceà.

It was all very confusing. Katara drifted off to sleep as she tried to make sense of it all.

OoOoOo

Katara jolted upright at the sound of footsteps. Where was she?!

The Bed. Right. She was in the bed and not the ship. In this strange building made of wood. And she could see the woman entering the room, not the Firebender. The woman-who-might-be-a-firebender, but defiantly wasnÆt the Firebender.

The old woman smiled. A real smile, not the nasty ones the tall man had given. ôI see youÆre already up. IÆm so sorry about taking so long, but these old bones donÆt do so well, and I was up late last night, so breakfast wonÆt be finished cooking for a bit. But that gives us some time to talk. My name is Hama, whatÆs yours?ö

Katara blinked. Silent for a few moments as she processed what the woman had said. ôKa-Katara.ö

ôKatara? ThatÆs a nice name.ö Hama pulled one of the wooden chairs up to the bed and sat down. ôYour leg was injured. May I see it?ö

Katara nodded and folded back the blankets to reveal her burnt leg. Hama reached down and grabbed it. Katara tried not to flinch; filching would only make things worse andà Katara breathed an inward sigh of relief as no pain came. Hama was just holding the leg to better examine the wound. She wasnÆt going toà. She was nice, or at least seemed nice.

ôThose monsters," Hama said with disgust as she examined it. ôHow did you get this?ö

ôIà I hit one with water, and refused to heal them,ö Katara offered.

ôMonsters. But IÆm very impressed with you, healing at such a young age. YouÆre quite an impressive waterbender and IÆm so glad you didnÆt give in.ö

Katara looked down, but was spared from any further conversation when Hama went out of the room. She returned a few minutes later with bowl of soup. It looked just like the sea prunes Mom made back home. All of a sudden Katara felt ravenously hungry, and she reached in to pluck one out.

Hama chuckled. ôWe do have spoons if youÆd wait a second.ö Katara shrank back, ashamed she just reached in. Had the ship made her forget all about manners so soon?

The two of them ate the soup in silence. Katara finished hers faster and sat in silence while Hama continued to eat. As Katara waited, her mind came back to the same question over and over again, she had to know. ôAre youà are you a firebender?ö

ôWhat!ö Hama dropped her spoon and turned toward Katara, a furious expression on her face. ôWhy would you think I was one of them?ö

DonÆt panic, answer quickly, if you wait, it only gets worse. ôIÆm sorry. IÆm sorry!ö Katara cried out. ôIàIà last night, you didnÆt have weapons, I thought you were a bender.ö

Hama leaned back and smiled. She put a hand on KataraÆs head and patted her. ôOh, IÆm sorry, I didnÆt think. You must have been so scared, thinking I was a firebender. DonÆt worry, IÆm not one of those monsters. But you are right, I am a bender.ö Hama waved her hand around the soup bowl, and slowly drew the liquid out of the bowl.

Katara gasped. ôBut how?!ö

ôThe Fire Nation has been abducting waterbenders since before you were born-ô

Hama told her story. Of how she was kidnapped, kept chained up and prevented from so much as moving. She told Katara she learned a secret technique to escape. How she was left here, with no one to help her.

Katara in turn told her story. How she was taken, her mother killed, and the awful journey on the shipà Or almost all of her story, she left out the parts where she healed the fire soldiers.

Afterwards, they shared an embrace. She was still stuck in the Fire Nation, but Katara had found someone like her, someone who had been taken as well. And Hama promised to help her with her waterbending, to make sure she would never be threatened again.

KataraÆs sleep should have been easy, it should have been the best one since she was taken while. But instead it wasnÆt. She had a nightmare, of the spirits of her parents coming and telling Hama of her betrayal. Hama left her alone in disgust, alone for the Firebender to get.

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So I'm assuming the title makes a bit more sense now, eh?

So this is going to be it for a while. The fics on hold while I work on other projects, I was posting these three chapters because they are just enough to get to the fics central premise "what if Katara was raised by Hama"? I'd really, really love peoples thought on the premise and characterization so far.
 

zeebee1

Well-Known Member
#9
It might have been kinder if the fire benders broke her. Because Hama will not be as kind.
 
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