Akamatsuverse Tsukimi

Ryogas_BF

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This is an idea that kinda popped up in coversation with Windfalcon (as most of my ideas do). Timeline wise it takes place shortly after the kyoto field trip but instead of the training arc (getting eva and Ku fei as his masters and such) he is almost immediately shipped out on a new mission. The Main cast mebers at work through this fic are negi, Mana, and later on Kaede. The other partners and a few others will have side roles and may show up but for much of it they will be staying in the Mahora area.

Warning... this is a crossover ( but so is 80% of my stuff)

Tsukimi
By RyogaÆs best friend

The countryside crawled past the window while the light rhythm of the tracks beat steadily from below. It was the second train ride is so many weeks for child teacher known as Negi Springfield, though this mission was to be a bit more subdued... Hopefully. Kyoto was still clear in his mind, a little bodyguarding and a simple package delivery had turned into a desperate fight for the lives of both his precious students and himself... and if not for the timely intervention of Evangeline, he'd have lost. To a mage his own age no less. So many of his students got wrapped up in the madness, a fact that weighed heavily on him. Luckily, things turned out well enough and it seemed several members of his class were not as normal as they appeared. He didn't want to be ungrateful, and knowing he had such people to rely on was reassuring in a way... 'But I should be the one to protect them.' It was a hard pill to swallow, but he still had a lot of work left to do. He had intended on doing intense training, to be more prepared for next time.... So the last thing he was expecting was another mission.

"Sensei?"

"Hm what?" Negi was brought out of his musing as he was joined in his booth.

"I picked up some snacks, best keep your energy up. We're to be on duty soon." His companion was Mana Tatsumiya, student 18 in his class registry. One of the quieter members of his class, but apparently quiet didn't mean one was what they appeared to be.

"Thank you Tatsumiya-san." he said as he gladly accepted the small snack. Mana took a relaxed position across from him and took slow, small bites out of a protein bar. Negi had been a little surprised to see her arrival alongside Kaede and Ku Fei at the Konoe estate, but he hadn't had all that much time to think about it at the time. It seemed it was beyond the fact she was just a strong fighter because this was not the first time the headmaster had hired Mana. Hired. Though after Ninjas and Vampires, a mercenary really didn't hold the same amount of shock. But the quiet aspect did not disappear with her cover, his student seemed content to watch the scenery rather then make small talk. His earlier attempts were shot down with ruthless precision. The only time she seemed up for any kind of talk was if it was mission related, but the crowded train was hardly the best place to speak of such issues.

The Mission. It was pretty straight forward. There had been some strange emanations of ancient magic in the Tokyo area. Mana and Himself were sent to observe the situation and report on any findings. The headmaster decided that this would make for another test of the young mage, as well as giving him some more field experience in an area that is less magically inclined. 'It should only last a week, maybe two... At least that's what the headmaster said. Until then Takamichi will be subbing in my place... hopefully the girls will behave.'

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"Eh?!" A cry of shock and surprise rang through the halls of Mahora Junior High.

"Now now everyone calm down." Takahata said chuckling lightly. "Negi is still learning his craft, it'll just be for a few weeks of training as a teacher's assistant in Juuban. He'll be back before you know it." The explanation seemed to calm the room a little bit. Overall the feeling of the class was one of disappointment, it would be strange without their cute little homeroom teacher around to fluster.

Sensei... Nodoka drooped noticeably at the news, after all the craziness in Kyoto she had so many questions. The diary weighed heavy on her mind. But maybe... maybe I can use it to make contact. the temptation was great, but reading Negi's mind seemed like such an invasion of privacy. Her face reddened at the possible discoveries that could be made... Maybe just a little peek.

Yue frowned, Negi had much to answer for. It was magic, I'm sure of it... not that I'd ever seen anything like it before but it was the only explanation. It had been the baka ranger's intention to corner the boy and get the answers straight away but that wouldn't be an option any longer... Of course there were others that seemed to be mixed up in this mess.

Haruna blinked at a clatter to her side, her desk mate Zazie seemed to have dropped the eraser and pencil box she was juggling. Though her face was as blank as ever she seemed oddly tense. Curious...

Settled in the back of the class Evangeline snorted, a farce of a cover story. If the boy had still needed training they wouldnÆt have instated him as a teacher, but it was flimsy enough to deal with these idiots. it was at least enough that no connection was made to the mercenary's 'family reunion' excuse. Admittedly it's going to be a bit more dull without the boya around. Not that she'd ever admit that aloud. This news had already started having an effect, Chachamaru had been going about her duties at a noticeably slower pace since she had heard the day before. You better come back soon kid.

Asuna sighed softly, she of all people knew what was coming. As soon as class was over Konoka and herself were going to be mobbed with people looking for information. Even when the brat wasn't around he would cause trouble. But at least Negi wasnÆt going to Juuban alone, if that battle in Kyoto showed anything it was that Negi was in good hands. And we have Takahata-sensei teaching again! That warmed things up considerably. He was a REAL man...

Among those few that were more relaxed was Kaede Nagase. Not that the laid back baka ranger was one for exclamations and overreactions but she had another reason. That being as one fo the few who had gotten te real story of this turn of events. From what could be gathered negi was trying to keep most in the dark, but the boy's familiar had came on his own out of concern. The mission was recon but with ancient magic in play it was safe to have some insurance. Just a few days buffer so her own time away won't look so suspicious. Perhaps Sessha should try an keep my own watching hidden as well, With Mana involved it could make for good training-de gozaru an easy smile slid into place on the ninja's face.

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Next stop Juuban

"This is it." Mana's sudden voice almost made the boy Jump, he must have been zoning out. With hardly a word between them that began to get their luggage together. Light muffled grumbles could be heard from Chamo, the trip had not been easy on the ermine.

"Just a little further Chamo-kun." negi whispered as the train screeched to a stop. "Tatsumiya-san?"

"Yes?"

"Is the apartment far from the train station?"

"Hm, if I recall correctly it's a bit of a walk but not much that can be done."

"Well I mean we could always hail a cab?"

"No." Mana's voice snapped like a whip. "We have a stipend to last use two weeks, not need to spend frivolously. There nothing wrong with walking." her voice was firm and gaze intense, melting away any objections.

"R-Right..." Negi sighed softly, it looked like Chamo was going to have to tough it out a little longer. The train pulled to stop, much of the assembled passengers heading out into the station. Shifting his backpack he followed along behind the steady strides of his student blinking as they came out and onto the street. "Whoa..." the city was huge, the streets and side walks were a great amount of hustle and bustle.

"This is your first time in Tokyo?" He managed to shake off some of the awe to turn his attention up to Mana. The stoic girl bore a faint smile, first he'd seen the whole trip. Best not pass this opportunity up.

"Uh yes, I haven't gotten to travel as much as I would have liked."

"Well you're a very busy with your work."

"Ha ha, yeah. So do you come here often?"

"Hm... not as often as in the past. My work keeps me busy coupled with school of course." Mana kept her answer somewhat vague. The pair began to move through the streets.

"Oh right, so are you going to be going to school with me?"

"No, I believe I can trust you with monitoring that area."

"eh?" Negi frowned. "Then what are you doing for classes?"

"I'm not."

"You're still in school."

"It's only for a short time, I can keep my grades up well enough." Mana was a little taken aback at the boy's sudden firmness, though hindsight she really should have expected this. "This isn't the first time I've taken a mission like this."

"That doesn't excuse it. I'll have to arrange some one on one lessons." at this point the boy seemed to be making notes to himself, his tutoring skills had grown with all the work he had put in helping the bakas.

"With all due respect Negi-sensei." She said with a small strain in her tone. "We are here on business, we must keep alert and observant."

"Well there will be down time between watches and I don't see why a simple study session or two will throw things off." Negi may be intimidated by Mana's fierce nature but on an issue related to schooling he would not budge. Mana repressed the urge to sigh and let the matter drop, hopefully with the work involved in the mission and the boys cover this 'study session' nonsense would get lost in the confusion.

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EDIT - SMWhat fix

I'm sure most of you know by now what the crossover is and as to my MO I will do my damndest to keep things fresh and outside the norm for such crosses. This story crossess in quite early in the Sailor Moon timeline so you can expect many changes with parital showers of madness :)
 

holyknight

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Hmm.....the Sailors shall fall to the allure of the Shota?? :evil2: :evil2:
 

nairit

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#4
It's almost a fact, every school-girl that Negi meets turns Shota for him.
 

zeebee1

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#5
That's interesting. I always thought your username meant Ryoga's Boy Friend.
 

Ryogas_BF

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zeebee1 said:
That's interesting. I always thought your username meant Ryoga's Boy Friend.
-_- sigh... I really need to fix that...
 

SMWhat

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#7
Your
You're

There is a difference. The first is possessive. The second is a contraction, short for "you are". See?
 

Ryogas_BF

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New snippet woo!

"Eh?!" A cry of shock and surprise rang through the halls of Mahora Junior High.

"Now now everyone, calm down." Takahata said, chuckling lightly. "Since Negi is still learning his craft, the Headmaster decided to give Negi-kun a bit more experience in teaching. It's only temporary, but we wanted to give him the chance to teach in a mixed gender setting." The explanation seemed to calm the room a little bit. Overall the feeling of the class was one of disappointment, it would be strange without their cute little homeroom teacher around to fluster.

Sensei... Nodoka drooped noticeably at the news, after all the craziness in Kyoto she had so many questions. The diary weighed heavy on her mind. But maybe... maybe I can use it to make contact. the temptation was great, but reading Negi's mind seemed like such an invasion of privacy. Her face reddened at the possible discoveries that could be made... Maybe just a little peek.

Yue frowned, Negi had much to answer for from Kyoto. It was magic, I'm sure of it... not that I'd ever seen anything like it before but it's the only explanation. It had been the Baka Leader's intention to corner the boy and get answers straight away but that wouldn't be an option now... Of course there were others that seemed to be mixed up in this mess.

"Sensei?" a few eyes turned to Makie as she raised her hand, her eyes tearing up slightly from the fact that Negi was gone. "Where was Negi-kun sent? Will he be ok away from us?"

Looking up at Makie, Takahata seemed to think on the question, before giving a slight shrug. "He was sent to a public middle school in Tokyo. The Juuban District I think, if I recall correctly. The Headmaster is friends with their Principal it seems, so it was the best place to send him." Chuckling a bit at the worried faces a few of the gathered students had, Takahata made a calming gesture with his hands. "There there... Don't worry too much everyone. He'll be perfectly fine there, and in his absence, I'll be taking over as your substitute."

Haruna blinked at a clatter to her side, her desk mate Zazie seemed to have dropped the eraser and pencil box she was juggling when Takahata mentioned 'Juuban'. Though her face was blank as ever she seemed oddly tense. Curious... of course, before she could think of it further, the Class Rep, Ayaka, slammed her hand against the table, an angry look on her face. "Sensei! How can you be so calm?! Haven't you heard the rumors?! Tokyo is the WORST place you could have sent my poor Negi-sensei! What if there's gangsters?! Or car accidents?! Or evil women?!" This of course got some of the class started on the kinds of 'bad' things that could happen to Negi in humorous ways.

Settled in the back of the class Evangeline snorted, a farce of a cover story. If the boy had still needed training they wouldnÆt have instated him as a teacher, but it was flimsy enough to deal with these idiots. it was at least enough that no connection was made to the mercenary's 'family reunion' excuse. Admittedly it's going to be a bit more dull without the boya around. Not that she'd ever admit that aloud. This news had already started having an effect, Chachamaru had been going about her duties at a noticeably slower pace since she had heard the day before. You better come back soon kid. At Ayaka's list, Evangeline could only snort and shake her head. 'If the boya could be taken down by such mundane things... he wouldn't be interesting at all.'

Asuna sighed softly, she of all people knew what was coming. As soon as class was over Konoka and herself were going to be mobbed with people looking for information. Even when the brat wasn't around he would cause trouble. But at least Negi wasnÆt going to Juuban alone, if that battle in Kyoto showed anything it was that Negi was in good hands. And we have Takahata-sensei teaching again! That warmed things up considerably. He was a REAL man... And the school wouldn't have sent Negi to a dangerous place. It was only Tokyo. If it was important, she would have gone too.

... of course, only Konoka knows that she had repeated the last part to herself so many times it became her personal mantra...

Among those few that were more relaxed was Kaede Nagase. She barely looked phased at the mention of Negi's reassignment, or the supposed 'dangers' in Juuban. Instead, she just smiled her lazy smile and paid attention in class. Soon...

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Next stop Juuban

"This is it." Mana's sudden voice almost made the boy jump. He must have been zoning out. With hardly a word between them they began to get their luggage together. Light muffled grumbles could be heard from Chamo, the trip had not been easy on the ermine.

"Just a little further Chamo-kun." Negi whispered as the train screeched to a stop. "Tatsumiya-san?"

"Yes?"

"Is the apartment far from the train station?"

"Hm, if I recall correctly it's a bit of a walk but not so much that it can't be done."

"Well I mean could we hail a cab?"

"No." Mana's voice snapped like a whip. "We have a stipend to last us two weeks, no need to spend frivolously. There is nothing wrong with walking." her voice was firm and gaze intense, melting away any objections.

"R-Right..." Negi sighed softly, it looked like Chamo was going to have to tough it out a little longer. The train pulled to a stop, much of the assembled passengers heading out into the station. Shifting his backpack, he followed along behind the steady strides of his student, blinking as they came out and onto the street. "Whoa..." the city was huge, the streets and side walks were packed with a great amount of hustle and bustle.

"This is your first time in Tokyo?" He managed to shake off some of the awe to turn his attention up to Mana. The stoic girl bore a faint smile, the first he'd seen the whole trip. Best not pass this opportunity up.

"Uh yes, I haven't gotten to travel as much as I would have liked."

"Well, you ARE very busy with your work."

"Ha ha, yeah. So do you come here often?"

"Hm... not as often as in the past. My work keeps me busy, coupled with school of course." Mana kept her answer somewhat vague. With that the pair began to move through the streets.

"Oh right, so are you going to be going to school with me?"

"No, I believe I can trust you with monitoring that area."

"Huh?" Negi frowned. "Then what are you doing for classes?"

"I'm not."

"You're still in school."

"It's only for a short time, I can keep my grades up well enough." Mana was a little taken aback at the boy's sudden firmness, though hindsight told her she really should have expected this. "This isn't the first time I've taken a mission like this."

"That doesn't excuse it. I'll have to arrange some one on one lessons." at this point the boy seemed to be making notes to himself, his tutoring skills had grown with all the work he had put in helping the Bakas.

"With all due respect Negi-sensei." She said with a small strain in her tone. "We are here on business, we must keep alert and observant."

"Well there will be down time between watches and I don't see why a simple study session or two will throw things off." Negi may have been intimidated by Mana's fierce nature, but on an issue related to teaching his students he would not budge. Mana repressed the urge to sigh and let the matter drop. Hopefully with the work involved in the mission and the boy's cover, this 'study session' nonsense will get lost in the confusion.

Conversation quieted from there on, the pair working their way through the city. Occasionally Negi would need to stop and take in a sight or if something new caught the boy's eye. Mana gave some leniancey in the mini tourism baring a ghost of a smile. Eventually the pair made it to an apartment building and proceeded up to the topmost floor. All the arrangements had been made ahead of time, it was just a matter of using the key that came along with the directions.

"So this is one of Takamichi's places?" Negi questioned, mostly for conversation.

"Apparently. He must use this when he is on mission in Tokyo." Mana replied opening up. It was a nice apartment, lightly furnished with the basics that would be needed. There was a small bookcase with a choice of books and a few small plants hung by the windows. On the coffee table an envelope sat. The mercenary made a b-line for the sofa while Negi took a moment to undo his pack.

"There, it's safe to come out now."

"Keh, it's about damn time." Chamo popped his head out with a sigh or relief.

"Sorry Chamo-kun but you didn't want to go in a carrier in the baggage car, right?"

"Hmph fair enough." The ermine slid free of his canvas prison and stretched. "I'm so stiff."

"Negi-sensei, it seems Takahata-sensei left us more detailed instructions."

"Oh?" Negi stood, Chamo retaking his usual perch on the boys shoulders mid way. Taking a seat next to his student, a map spread out over the coffer table marked with the locations of supernatural activity... it seemed there was two kinds of unkown magic at work. An underground battle. The Dark alligned magic would set up shop somewhere in the city, and then within a few days the other magic would flare up and snuff out the first.

"Hm, wow, some of these readings are quite high." Negi muttered, looking over one of the associated information sheets.

"Indeed... and there is little pattern where the dark energy begins to show itself."

"Well not a pattern for placement exactly but where ever it sets up people began to flock there." Negi pointed out, feeling Mana lean over to look at that information.

"Interesting... I guess until some manner of placement pattern opens then the best lead is to follow 'fads'." Mana frowned slightly. "Trying to find and trace a fad in Tokyo is hardly as straight forward as it sounds. But it's not like theres much else to go on." she turned back to the map eying the marks. A jewelry store, a gym, a radio station and a theater... aside from the radio station they were all stationary set ups which seemed to imply that it took time to set these collections of dark energy up and they had to have some manner of attracting the necessary victims. "Hm..."

"Oi Aniki, don't you have to stop by that school today?"

"Oh right." The child teacher glanced to clock, he still had plenty of time to prepare but he had to include travel and potential issues of directions.

"True, though you don't need to interview it's best to make a good first impression." Mana didn't look up from her work. "You'd best clean yourself up."

"But Tatsumiya-san... I bathed this morning." Negi muttered in a rare moment of childishness. He flinched under the even glance of his companion, the girl had a look that could pierce granite. "Okay." he conceded slinking off to the bathroom after fishing out his supplies.

"I will be checking your work." she could barely make out a muffled groan on the otherside of the door. it was easy to forget sometimes he was still a child when he so rarely let it through. But some of us are forced to grow up fast. "Konoe-san warned me well it seems"

As Mana kept her focus on the paper work, Chamo returned to Negi's backpack, fishing out a seperately packed bundle. The ermine stumbled as he pulled the weighty sack free, a barely repressed grin on his face. "Heh, let's see if Takamichi kept up on his side." The familiar shifted the weight to a more comfortable position and scampered off to the bedroom.

Negi exited the bathroom a few minutes later, towel wrapped around his waist as he sped quickly to the bedroom with a slight blush. Mana gained a slight smirk at the antics. In the dorm, baths were hardly safe for him after all, so a little paranoia was understandable. Not that he has anything to worry about here, I'm not into kids. Placing the information packet down, she tuned into the muffled conversation between Mage and Familiar. She held some doubts on Negi's part of the plan, there were many distinctive features to the boy that made him poor for undercover work. A ten year old teaching middle school is not exactly great for going unnoticed... but the headmaster insisted so there was no doubt arrangements had already been made.

"Hm...Looks like I will end up doing the bulk of the patrolling, though I can't say I wasn't expecting it." The mercenary began to crunch numbers, figuring out how to set up her time properly. It wouldn't be easy but with so little to go on there was little choice in the matter.

"Oi Aneki." Mana glanced over to Chamo's furry head peeking over the armrest. "We need a woman's opinion, make sure we've got it right."

"Very well." She stood and followed the ermine along, curiosity growing. Perhaps if the boy was trying something more out of the norm for him, maybe there was some hope. She swung open the door and blinked, spotting an unfamiliar boy her hand immediately sped for her shoulder holster.

"Oh hello Tastumiya-san."

"No! Don't shoot, it's Aniki!" Chamo panicked, he was hoping to give the stoic girl a little surprise, but such reflexes could be dangerous. Her hand rested on the grip but she never drew the gun, Negi sweating as her gaze traveled steadily up and down. The once Child teacher was about even with her own height, perhaps an inch or so taller. A slim frame was dressed in a nice, if somewhat old, suit. His expression nervous but his face had matured, loosing much of the baby fat going from cute to a more handsome face.

"Age deceiving pills..." she finally said, relaxing her grip and allowing the now teen Negi to let go of the breath he was holding.

"Um yes, Chamo-kun picked them up for me. Both the headmaster and Takamichi believed my cover at the school would work better with an older body."

"I see." Mana crossed her arms, "You'd do well to keep me informed next time Sensei, Chamo... I don't take well to surprises." Her tone was collected and dead serious. "Am I Understood?"

"Yes ma'am!" Mage and familiar said in unison.

"Good." Mana regained her usual neutral look as she gave Negi another once over. "That's a good look, I venture that that is one of Takahata's older outfits?"

"Ha ha, yeah. He wanted to get my sizes before the mission and, though these are a little big, they are comfortable," Negi replied. He reached for his staff only to see a shake of his companions head. "Huh?"

"You shouldn't carry that around with you in that form, it's too conspicuous." Mana's serious tone gained a slight hint of amusement. "Besides it doesn't go with that outfit at all."

"It doesn't?" Negi frowned looking to his suit. It is Father's staff. It should go with anything. "What should I do about casting then?"

"The simple answer would be don't, having a wand with you would make you more tempted to use it should things go south, but it would break your cover. Unlike Mahora, there aren't any elder mages around to take care of any mess-ups." Mana started out firm but softened toward the end. "But considering we have little idea what we're dealing with, it would be best to be armed... try to pick a small wand, something easy to conceal."

"Right." He looked to his familiar, "Please keep an eye on my staff well I'm gone."

"No problem." The ermine replied with an enthusiastic thumbs up.

"I'll be back later this afternoon after the orientation, Tatsumiya-san."

"Right, I'll be doing a little patrolling myself, I'll be back before dark." Her gaze followed the teen as he headed back into the living room to look for a suitable replacement. Maybe Kakizaki has something to that "reverse Hikaru Genji" plan... she turned her gaze away before it lingered too long, focusing on her other roommate of sorts. "Chamo... what kind of supply of those pills did you secure?"

"Heh," the ermine smirked as he hoped up to a bureau top pulling out a large jar of red and blue pills. "I picked up the Jumbo Assorted Jar. These babies have all sorts of use."

"So many." The frugal mercenary blinked in surprise, "That must have cost a fortune."

"Nah, not when you know the right people." Chamo pulled out a cigarette and lit it with a proud grin. "It's all about who you know Aneki." he exhaled a small puff of smoke which didn't seem to bother the girl one bit. The corners of her mouth twitched up ever so slightly.

"That it is..." perhaps there could be a little unexpected bonus in this mission after all.

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I love age decieving pills... so much fun. So yes 'Nagi' will be doing the teaching at Juuban middle school. Mana's cover is a bit different but will keep her well into the thick of things.

God all of the odd ideas that have come up for this cross... it's dangerous for me to chat with Windfalcon 6-_-

For referance

Aniki - Big Brother
Aneki - Big Sister (more respectful then his usual nicknames for the girls since Mana is tougher. Chamo has sort of a yakuza mindset...)
 

SoftRogue

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#9
Ok; you said that this is fairly early in the SM continuity so I'm assuming that we're in the Dark Kingdom arc (unless it's the Black Moon arc and everyone's been mindwiped and forgot about the Dark Kingdom).

Also, since neither a school or a temple were flagged as 'hot-spots'; I'm assuming that Sailor Moon is currently soloing at this time.

Hum...why do I think that Usagi is going to assume that Tuxedo Mask is her new teacher; Nagi Springfield? :snigger:
 

Ryogas_BF

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#10
Softrogue gets a cookie for nailing the timeline correctly!

Yes Mana and Negi have arrived about a day or so before Ami is awakened as Mercury mostly because I wanted Negi and mana to be around for the clock based nega-attack because that was so over the top and citywide effecting.

Heh it's possible. He is quite the gentleman after all :) But I have been scemeing...
 

holyknight

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#11
Oh shiiit.......this barely it's starting and it has all the landmarks of a SNAFU.... :snigger: :evil2:
 

ryushi

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#12
When I started reading the first snippet, I was happy.

'Whee! New story!' Said my inner muse.

But then...Juuban. And my mind screeched to a halt.

'Oh no. Oh no no no.'

I couldn't believe it.

'I can't believe it.'

But I got over that phase and kept reading.

'Who cares?! New story! W00T!'

So far, you have much excellence.

'And ePic WiN.'

Though one question did pop up.

'and what a question!'

Is Zazie Rainyday a youma undercover?

'The world wonders...'
 

mickl3

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#13
Not that he has anything to worry about here, I'm not into kids
oh, how those thoughts will most likely come back to bite her in the ass... :evil2:
 

windfalcon

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#14
mickl3 said:
Not that he has anything to worry about here, I'm not into kids
oh, how those thoughts will most likely come back to bite her in the ass... :evil2:
Especially since Mana seems to be looking at Negi's *snerks*
 

wingthesword

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#15
I've been checking out your stories nice!
Zazie story
Mana story

Next I'm thinking would be Ku cause you seem to be focusing on the dark skinned foreigners

However I hope it's Kaede
 
#17
Spotted a continuity error:

"Right, I'll be doing a little patrolling myself, I'll be back before dark." Her gaze followed the teen as he headed back into the living room to look for a suitable replacement. Maybe Kakizaki has something to that "reverse Hikaru Genji" plan... she turned her gaze away before it lingered too long, focusing on her other roommate of sorts. "Chamo... what kind of supply of those pills did you secure?"
The reverse Hikaru Genji comment wasn't spoken by Kakizaki until after the Budokai tournament.

Has anyone scene the picture of mana's battle dress in the Chao arc? I'd like to see the look of Usagi and Ami if they it. :D
 

Mev852

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#18
Why can I totally see Mana taking advantage of the older Negi?
 

Ryogas_BF

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#19
long time coming, this has been on my mind but it was slow going with my real life issues. the writing is pretty rough as I kinda knew what I wanted to say but couldn't get it to come out smoothly... I hope it isn't too rough to read. anyway here you go :sweat2:

Tentative start of chapter 2

ôI really do thank you for coming Mr. Springfield. Though you are younger then I expected I donÆt doubt Konoe-sanÆs judgment. To be a middle school teacher at your age in a prestigious school like Mahora you must be quite well learned.ö The principal of Juuban middle school had been laying praise thick since the mageÆs arrival. It was getting quite embarrassing.

ôNot at all Yamoto-san. IÆm just glad I can help.ö

ôTo that I am thankful for... The situation with Sakurada-san was really growing complicated, we couldnÆt find anyone able to fill in for her leave. But it needed to be done considering her poor condition as of late.ö The older man nodded solemnly.

ôI hope itÆs not too serious?ö

ôWell no one is quite sure exactly, she has fainted and been hospitalized with alarming frequency as of late. The doctors say itÆs due to exhaustion, they believe a bug of some sort might be going around as many people have come in feeling tired.ö NegiÆs eyes widened slightly but he made no comment, setting that information aside for later. ôShe has soldiered on but we insisted she take some time off to recover.ö They stopped next to the faculty room. ôSakurada-san should be waiting for you inside. She just finished her last class. She will give you a run down on the lesson plan as well as her students. I wish you luck Springfield-san.ö

ôRight, I wonÆt let you down.ö With a firm shake of hands the principal headed back to his office. The mage had to admit the set up was working quite well, considering how surprised people had been thus far with his false age. It looked like it was for the best he didnÆt come in his natural form. Negi took a breath and headed inside. It wasnÆt all that different than the teacherÆs office back at Mahora, all of the teachersÆ desks spaced at small intervals in various states of organization. Over in the break area a young woman stood, a look of excitement morphed slowly into confusion as she stared at him. ôUm... Haruna Sakurada-san?ö he ventured with a smile, but it seemed to give little comfort. She gave a somewhat dazed nod.

ôAnd you... are Nagi springfield?ö

ôYes, Pleased to meet you Sakurada-san.ö

ôI was expecting you to be older... I mean I heard you were young but...ö she sighed a little much to the confusion of the mage.

ôUm, are you feeling okay?ö

ôOh yes, sorry. DonÆt mind me.ö she gave a forced smile. ôWell... shall we go?ö she asked as she made to leave the Lounge.

æIt must be the after effects of that dark magic...ö Negi thought to himself as he followed after.

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Mana scanned the landscape from a rooftop perch, the citizens milled about below going about their daily lives. Unaware of the apparent secret war going on under their noses. Missions in major population centers, where so much of the populace was non magical, were always the most bothersome. There we so many factors one had to keep in mind at all times, especially with when your back up was less experienced. The mercenary sighed a bit pausing that train of thought before it became counterproductive. ôHow is the progress?ö she had to wait a moment before the reply came in through her headset.

ôLooking good Aneki, with this node our detection range should be boosted a good deal.ö The ermineÆs voice wasnÆt nearly as grating once you got used to it. The usefulness of his contacts in the ermine network as well as his diverse skill set were becoming a pleasant surprise. ôI donÆt know why they donÆt keep these active though, ya think the council would wanna know when stuff was going down in a major city.ö

ôEfficiency is often at odds with politics.ö Mana replied if only to let her mind focus on a different topic. ôKonoe-san doesnÆt have the pull to keep the full grid on at all times, the other organization have a enough to fuss about as it is. But in a situation like this, things get simplified.ö

ôTrue enough I guess,ö ChamoÆs reply was accompanied by some muttering on his side that she couldnÆt pick up. Even if she knew the reasons she also didnÆt see the reason for all the tip toeing. Though Mana had always been one for more direct resolutions. ôAlmost done...huh? What the hell?ö

ôChamo? Is something coming up?ö she tensed in anticipation, as the ermine went silent for a moment.

ôI got something coming up, but itÆs pretty vague, itÆs not zeroing in enough to get a clear reading.ö

ôPass on the general area and IÆll do a sweep, IÆll be able to get a better feel when IÆm closer.ö Her voice held a commanding tone that got Chamo jumping to action. The area wasnÆt far and gathering up her duffel bag she began to take the rooftop route cutting the distance to her target.

ôIÆll contact Aniki so he can meet you on rou-ö

ôDonÆt bother, I only plan to observe. IÆll only engage if I absolutely have to.ö

ô...If you say so.ö he sounded anxious but complied. Mana remained focused on her goal stretching her senses as she began to approach the area.

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A bit more sailor moon is going to start getting sprinkled in as the mission truly begins.
 

Megaolix

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#20
I seriously didn't expect an update on this.

And as rough as it is, it's a nice start.
 

Ryogas_BF

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#21
Been working on many things in my off time but only recently came back to this idea... even now it still really interests me, enough that I was able to put this next part of things together before I conked out for the night... Hopefully the rest of the chapter will come this easily.

Snippet

The blip appeared to be coming from one of Tokyo's many business districts. From her rooftop perch she could hardly Identify the purposes of the nearby builds much less what was inside them at a glance. Fortunately she had more then just her eyes to help her. She took a moment to focus her gift, the demon's eye. She extended her senses out in all directions filtering out the mundane life force of the civilian populace... it made the unusual energy stand out like a signal flare. "Found it." she turned and hopped to an adjacent roof, "The energy is coming from a building slightly south of my location... Crystal Seminar, some kind of cram school." she continued to report as she settled on the edge of the roof.

"Realigning the node... got it. That's it alright." Chamo affirmed, no doubt already recording any kind of information the node could pick up.

"This energy... it's vile." It was a distinctive feeling to be sure, it felt darker then any necromantic or demon magic she'd ever felt. "I feel unclean." she muttered as she pulled out her binoculars and began to scan up from the bottom trying to pinpoint the exact location among the general miasma. Another energy surged as some lights flickering on the third floor caught her eye.

"Wait, I'm getting another blip... It's the other energy!"

"Yeah, I feel it too." she relayed, still pushing out with her senses. This one was different, just as hard to place but felt much the opposite of the dark energy. "Getting a visual." She scanned across the third floor as a counter surge of dark magic hit. This time she had it narrowed down to a classroom. "There's a red humanoid, could be demonfolk in nature but I'm not sure. It has a hostage, the room is full of civilians but they aren't reacting to the monster."

"Some kind of spell?"

"Likely. There is one other girl that doesn't seem effected, dressed in some kind of cosplay. I think she's... posing." Even as the words left her mouth she could hardly believe it herself.

"What?" Chamo didn't sound much less puzzled.

"Your guess is as good as mine." The monster was apparently not impressed and began shooting some kind of projectiles at the girl. The looked like paper but the way they embedded into the walls they may as well have been knives. "Blondie is going to get herself killed, I'm engaging." with practiced ease she put away her binoculars and swung the shoulder bag to easy reach, negating her demon eye so she could focus clearer on the task at hand.

"W-Woah, this is an observation mission!" the ermine had clear panic in his voice. "At least let me call Aniki and get you some back up."

"We don't have that kind of time Chamo." She put her rifle together with expert precision and was in a crouched shooting position before most soldiers would have gotten half way. The view from her scope cemented her decision. The once passive civilians were shambling toward the blond while the red monster had armed itself with an ax. "I'm taking the shot." she said lightly fingering the trigger... but it was jammed. "What the," she pulled her head back to see a rose embedded in the trigger mechanism. Looking for it's source she saw a man on the adjacent rooftop dressed in a tuxedo, face half concealed with a domino mask.

"Another agent? You don't quite feel like the others..." the man said clearly, "But there's definitely a dark energy coming from you. With that in mind I can't let you interfere." a trio of roses appeared between his fingers. "State your business."

"Sorry, that's classified." Mana replied calmly pulling her pistols free from their shoulder holsters.

"Mana?! What's going on?" Chamo squawked in her ear-piece but she could hardly spare much thought to reply as she eyed her opponent.

"Sorry, looks like I'm going to be busy..."

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The first of many misunderstandings begins. had to rewatch the anime battle to remember how it went heh. Not sure how much of a duel I want tuxy and Mana to have just yet but we'll see where it takes me...
 

zeebee1

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#22
Don't bring a gun to a nuclear rocket launcher battle.
 

ragnarok1337

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#23
Do me a favor and not have the Senshi fall for Negi. That gag is so overdone, it's not funny. He already has nearly an entire class going for him right now, not including other fans he will get in the future. Don't add the Senshi to it. If you do, I will be severely tempted to add this to my IGNORE list.
 

Ryogas_BF

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#24
Zeebee1 - Not sure if your talking about Mana or Tux boy there...

ragnarok1337 - Well romance is not really the focus of this particular fic. Will the senshi join Negi's "harem"? Likely not... Will a few crush on teenage teacher Negi cause he's handsome? Likely, I plan on making some 'clues' that Negi could be tuxedo mask (he's not of course but girls can jump to conclusions.) But Negima is a romantic comedy (with shonen action to spic eit up) so there will be situations played for laughed but I have no plans of serious romance with the senshi...

After having Windfalcon look over the earlier part I changed it a bit and added the next snippet so I'll just uploaded them in one post.

Snippet

The blip appeared to be coming from one of Tokyo's many business districts. From her rooftop perch she could hardly Identify the purposes of the nearby builds much less what was inside them at a glance. Fortunately she had more then just her eyes to help her. She took a moment to focus her gift, the demon's eye. She extended her senses out in all directions filtering out the mundane life force of the civilian populace... it made the unusual energy stand out like a signal flare. "Found it." she turned and hopped to an adjacent roof, "The energy is coming from a building slightly south of my location... Crystal Seminar, some kind of cram school." she continued to report as she settled on the edge of the roof.

"Realigning the node... got it. That's it alright." Chamo affirmed, no doubt already recording any kind of information the node could pick up.

"This energy... it's vile." It was a distinctive feeling to be sure, it felt darker then any necromantic or demon magic she'd ever felt. "I feel unclean." she muttered as she pulled out her binoculars and began to scan up from the bottom trying to pinpoint the exact location among the general miasma. Another energy surged as some lights flickering on the third floor caught her eye.

"Wait, I'm getting another blip... It's the other energy!"

"Yeah, I feel it too." she relayed, still pushing out with her senses. This one was different, just as hard to place but felt much the opposite of the dark energy. "Getting a visual." She scanned across the third floor as a counter surge of dark magic hit. This time she had it narrowed down to a classroom. "There's a red humanoid, could be demonfolk in nature but I'm not sure. It has a hostage, the room is full of civilians but they aren't reacting to the monster."

"Some kind of spell?"

"Likely. There is one other girl that doesn't seem effected, dressed in some kind of cosplay. I think she's... posing." Even as the words left her mouth she could hardly believe it herself.

"What?" Chamo didn't sound much less puzzled.

"Your guess is as good as mine." The monster was apparently not impressed and began shooting some kind of projectiles at the girl. The looked like paper but the way they embedded into the walls they may as well have been knives. "Blondie is going to get herself killed, I'm engaging." with practiced ease she put away her binoculars and swung the shoulder bag to easy reach, negating her demon eyes so she could focus clearer on the task at hand.

"W-Woah, this is an observation mission!" the ermine had clear panic in his voice. "At least let me call Aniki and get you some back up."

"We don't have that kind of time Chamo." She put her rifle together with expert precision and was in a crouched shooting position before most soldiers would have gotten half way. The view from her scope cemented her decision. The once passive civilians were shambling toward the blond while the red monster had armed itself with an ax. "I'm taking the shot." she said lightly fingering the trigger... But instead jumped back as a several projectiles struck where she had set up her firing position. Looking for it's source she saw a man on the adjacent rooftop dressed in a tuxedo, face half concealed with a domino mask.

"Another agent? You don't quite feel like the others..." the man said clearly, "But there's definitely a dark energy coming from you. With that in mind I can't let you interfere." a trio of roses appeared between his fingers. "State your business."

"Sorry, that's classified." Mana replied calmly placing the long range rifle down in favor of pulling her pistols free from their shoulder holsters.

"Mana?! What's going on?" Chamo squawked in her earpiece but she could hardly spare much thought to reply.

"Sorry, looks like I'm going to be busy..."

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"How much further?"

"Three blocks over from your current position." Chamo had wasted little time in alerting Negi to the situation. He managed to excuse himself from the remainder of the orientation without too much trouble, fortunately the confrontation wasn't too far from the campus. At least to a wind mage who could passively increase his speed.

"So Mana is fighting one of the darkness monsters?" Negi Turned into an alley to cut off a few more precious seconds.

"I think so, she mentioned some kind of big red demon thing..." Suddenly the Compact wand in his wand seemed all the more puny, he missed his staff already. "Just ahead Aniki, across the street."

"Right," he reached to take hold of the wand but stopped as her saw someone crossing the end of the alley he was about to exit. Eye's widening he canceled his speed spell, the focused air dispersing in all directions. Unfortunately he wasn't able to stop all his momentum. Negi exited the alley with a rush of wind colliding with someone, but he managed to catch both them and himself from falling into traffic. The wind died down after a moment and he stepped back. "Sorry about that, wasn't watching where I was going. He said with a small bow.

"I..It's okay." The victim was a girl with short cropped blue hair. She spoke softly a little red in the face, understandably so as she was likely quite surprised.

"Ami!" another girl came from behind him, blond with long streaming tails they made him think of back home. Most odd was a black cat of all things trailing at the girl's heels.

"I'm fine, really." she assured he friend.

"Mana's on the move Aniki! She's heading further east across the rooftops!" Chamo's urgent tone brought the matter at hand back into focus.

"Pardon me girls But I'm still in a hurry." Negi said politely as he could giving another quick bow before taking off once again. He eyed the traffic and cross quickly before jumping into the nearest alley...

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He's good Mana noted as she was forced to hop backward and put some distance between herself and the masked man. He appeared to be human but was definitely using some kind of magic to augment himself. His strength, speed and agility were definitely beyond human. From what she could see he was most dangerous up close when fighting with his cane. She was confident with her CQC but bruise on her abdomen told her to keep things at her strengths. He was accurate with his roses and they flew like daggers but he seemed to use them more for distraction. They had some manner of purification effect on them similar to shinto seals, so they were likely more dangerous to the darkness beings. Though even to her diluted demon ancestry they stung like hell.

He was made another pass at her but she deterred him with a flurry of shots from her pistols, she knew a few of those shots landed but he showed little reaction to the impacts. The may have been rubber bullets but they were enchanted, one a solid shot should be enough to drop you average adult male... non magical of course.

"These bullets aren't cheap, you know?" she stated conversationally, keeping a close eye on her opponent.

"You're firing them freely enough." he replied in a similar measured tone.

"It's not like you've been giving me much choice in the matter." they were at a stalemate. He was far enough away to dodge most of her shots and she wouldn't let him get into close combat.

"Ras tel Ma Scir Magister," was all the warning either fighter got as streams of white shot out from the gap between two buildings behind Mana. "7 arrows of wind, bind my enemy!" The masked man hesitated a moment before backpedaling rapidly battling the projectiles with his cane to disperse them, Barely escaping the surprise assault.

"So reinforcements have arrived, I guess this is where I bow out. I suggest you don't mettle in the affairs of the sailor scouts again. Good day." With a bow and a cascade of rose petals the masked man vanished. Mana lowered her guns, clicking her tongue in annoyance. He likely could have escaped at any time.

"Tatsumiya-san, are you okay?" she turned to see Negi pulling himself up onto the roof, concern first and foremost on his mind.

"I'm fine, Just a few scratches and bruises." she holstered her pistols and offered him a hand up. She gave her sensei an appraising look, noting his now disheveled appearance. "You didn't have to rush out here, I was handling things."

"But-"

"But thank you," her words cut off his argument leaving him puzzled. She left him that way as she moved through the dueling field plucking one of the discarded roses from where it had embedded itself. Not a moment after it was free it dissolved into petals that disappeared into the ether shortly after. "Magic constructs. Makes sense." she ignored the others and made her way back to her discarded rifle and set to disassembling it for travel once more. She gave a look to Negi who was knelt by a small cluster of the roses carefully plucking one and watching it's disintegration process closely. Eventual led her curiosity got the better of her. "Sensei what are you doing?"

"Testing a theory." he said in a distracted tone muttering a spell, a white arrow of wind appeared but he somehow manged to hold it from launching. He reached for another, this time as his started to dissolved the arrow began to circle the falling petals as if trying to coral them. they petals all vanished but this time took notably longer. "Close... looks like I'd need more. Ras tel Ma Scir Magister..." Mana raised an eyebrow, using one of the most common mage attack spells for such a use. it spoke volumes for his control. It took two more attempts but with five arrows of wind Negi had managed to 'bind' the energy to keep it from dissipating, the magic petals swirling about the orb of wind like a snow globe. "Now, we have some evidence." he announced proudly.

"So it would seem." She muttered allowing a note of praise into her voice as she watched the swirling petals. "I don't suppose you could store that more permanently?" His earlier confidence fell into a sheepish grin.

"Ah, I'm not sure... not without know how this energy behaves on containment. It could be volatile." he cautioned. "But I should be able to keep this going until we get back to the apartment."

"A little conspicuous." Mana said with a frown, "But it will have to do." she stowed the pieces of her rifle carefully into they places and zipped the bag up. Shouldering the bag she meandered over to the edge of the roof looking to the Crystal Seminar building. The last of the confused and exhausted students were shambling out. "But one stop first."

"Hm?"

"More evidence."

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I've always found Sailor moon gets the shaft when crossed with other more action oriented shows (Tuxedo mask more so then anyone). So I have made the decision to make both the scouts and the negaverse credible threats/worthy allies.
 
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