Bleach Veiled Moon Chapter 01

[Wheeljack]

Not many people will respond well to an OC, but even OC's can be well written.

And with so many sekirei out there, (the few we've seen though), can still be winged by Ichigo.

Around the time where this story starts, about 87% of the Sekirei were winged, I say this on the basis that a short week after Tsukiumi was winged bringing the total to 90%, so it may be a little difficult to have Ichigo wing already established characters

Well, fortunately or unfortunately, many of the sekirei that had screen time that weren't Minato's, Seo's, the Discipline Squad or Uzume (and some of Higa's and Mikogami's to a point) never lasted long enough to get a complete read, if any at all. So, due to that, we are open to do with what we want should we go for one of those.

As for who we have chosen for Ichigo, all were seen in the manga at least once and were shown in the anime.

As for those who we chose, and because we don't know when they were winged, if they were winged, we can fudge their timing to what we want, or maybe have a reason why their original winging was put off. :evil3:

Kazehana and Kagari would be prime examples of candidates if Ghostface and Wheeljack say so.

You may consider them candidates, due to that they are not winged, but then again, just because they are open does not mean Ichigo will get them. <a href='http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7g9WjcGdxuM' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>Or will he?</a>

 

[Seed00]

Well, Kazehana and Uzume always had an interesting dynamic between them, so her being nudged in another direction to be winged by Ichigo would be believable.

He would be reminded of Matsumoto considering how much she drinks. Not much from me to add this time around. I'll just wait and see.

Edit: I do have something to add. Ichigo will need partners that will have to be able to hold their own. Whether he likes it or not, he will be attacked.

 

[zeebee1]

So I guess this means that Rukia and Orihime won't be part of the harem. Really, keeping out those with massive spiritual powers will be hard enough.

 

[Seed00]

Let's see...

A week without comments, so I'm not necroing anything. Good.

Wild Mass Guessing on my part, here we go:

Ichigo will not be comfortable with the idea of simply being support. Apparently, ashikabi are support all the love they can for their sekirei and trust in them.

There's plenty of the latter seeing as it's been three, but love is something Ichigo will have an issue. Again, he's not the typical harem lead, so the one eyebrow raise might be a given on his part.

Uzume is already driving him crazy. Two sekirei will give him trouble.

Isshin will invite all of Ichigo's friends to their meeting with Uzume, or those friends will just simply show. Whether Isshin does this because he wants to see Ichigo squirm or because he wants no secrets to be present is up in the air.


Tatsuki will step up her matchmaking. We already know she's protective and supportive of Orihime. What will she do in the face of a woman who knows what her feelings for Ichigo are for, has no fear about acting on them, is terrified at the idea of being away from Ichigo.


Next guess: after graduation, some of the Bleach crew will show up at Maison Izumo and get there once the Sekirei plan is active, further complicating his life.
Poor guy, he was enjoying the tranquility, now the ridiculous will set in in a bit.

That's about it. Smarter heads can think of something else.

 

[zeebee1]

If the shinigami get involved it's all over.

*Evil rich guy is beheaded by invisible sword wielded by invisible shinigami.*

 

[biomonkey]

Why would the shinigami even get involved ? Does the sekirei plan involve the well-being of soul society in any way? :huh:
This isn't me being a sarcastic ass, I literally do not remember what the point of the game was, outside of Hiroto being an eccentric lunatic.

 

[zeebee1]

Ichigo has friends among the shinigami. Including one friend who decided to take some unauthorized time off so she could shut up the gossips. Luckily Ichigo isn't the type to complain about his problems to the people who could solve them.

You know, like Rukia freezing the MBI headquarters while Renji collapses the house on the mean rich guy.

 

[Tsuki_CB]

MIB? I thought their jurisdiction was in America only.

 

[Wheeljack]

MIB? I thought their jurisdiction was in America only.

I'dve figured it'd be the entire planet, due to the possibility of aliens landing wherever they want.

Guess they missed Kamikura. h43r:

 

[holyknight]

Not many people will respond well to an OC, but even OC's can be well written.

And with so many sekirei out there, (the few we've seen though), can still be winged by Ichigo.

Around the time where this story starts, about 87% of the Sekirei were winged, I say this on the basis that a short week after Tsukiumi was winged bringing the total to 90%, so it may be a little difficult to have Ichigo wing already established characters

Well, fortunately or unfortunately, many of the sekirei that had screen time that weren't Minato's, Seo's, the Discipline Squad or Uzume (and some of Higa's and Mikogami's to a point) never lasted long enough to get a complete read, if any at all. So, due to that, we are open to do with what we want should we go for one of those.

As for who we have chosen for Ichigo, all were seen in the manga at least once and were shown in the anime.

As for those who we chose, and because we don't know when they were winged, if they were winged, we can fudge their timing to what we want, or maybe have a reason why their original winging was put off. :evil3:

Kazehana and Kagari would be prime examples of candidates if Ghostface and Wheeljack say so.

You may consider them candidates, due to that they are not winged, but then again, just because they are open does not mean Ichigo will get them. <a href='http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7g9WjcGdxuM' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>Or will he?</a>

A good suggestion as a Sekirei for Ichigo its specifically <a href='http://sekirei.wikia.com/wiki/Akitsu' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>Akitsu</a>.

As we know Ichigo's mentality, if he finds her accidentally before <a href='http://sekirei.wikia.com/wiki/Hayato_Mikogami' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>Hayato Mikogami</a>, you can imagine his reaction to hear that a Sekirei was deliberately "scrapped", thrown away, and stripped of her "raison d'etre". Ichigo would take her immediately under his wing, as his own code wouldn't allow anything less.

It would be also a potential indicator that Ichigo ain't exactly a normal <a href='http://sekirei.wikia.com/wiki/Ashikabi' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>Ashikabi</a>, if Ichigo somehow against all knowledge and belief, manages to "wing" Akitsu, something supposedly impossible given her specific situation. It would also point to Ichigo that there its another element, specifically an SPIRITUAL element to the "Winging" process.


PS: Who bets that once Ichigo hears Mikogami's crap, he's going to JUST go outta his way to beat him black and blue for being an idiot?

 

[zeebee1]

Everyone who uses alternate Sekirei uses her. Absolutely everyone.

 

[marthf1]

Because she is designed to gain pity? Or that the fact she can't be winged is like a 'please prove me wrong' to authors who want a quick extra or show off how they 'change' things??

 

[MTing]

Because she is designed to gain pity? Or that the fact she can't be winged is like a 'please prove me wrong' to authors who want a quick extra or show off how they 'change' things??

It's more to show off the protagonist they have from the crossover. It becomes a "holy crap, "insert name" just puled off the impossible! That's amazing!" kinda thing.

 

[Seed00]

Everyone who uses alternate Sekirei uses her. Absolutely everyone.

No kidding. No joke. No exaggeration. At first, I didn't see where the love for Akitsu came from, but she's funny in a way. However, most sekirei I've read, she was the extra for Minato though, and not the crossover character.

Lord of the land of fire used Karasuba though.

 

[Mechatrill]

I suppose people use Akitsu because there really aren't that many other options available. Besides the Sekirei of Izumo, the only Sekirei that had enough appearances for authors to use and characterize with any degree of accuracy are Akitsu, Shiina, Hikari and Hibiki, and the Disciplinary Squad. Let's take a look at these options shall we.

Shiina: Is male, and given that for most stories, the "main character" is also male, the author is unlikely to use Shiina.

Hikari and Hibiki: In canon, they got winged by Seo the moment they left MBI, so it's rather unlikely that someone would be able to preempt it. Tossing Seo is also generally not an option if the story's going to follow the canon storyline with any accuracy.

Disciplinary Squad: It's pretty much a given that, as MBI's enforcers, they'd have to be attached to someone from MBI. Whatever "main character" of any story tend not to qualify in this regard.

Akitsu: The only thing required for any "main character" to get her is simply find and take her in before Mikogami has the chance to. Thus, getting her in plot wise is fairly simple.

So you can see, unless an author wants to come up with OC's for Sekirei (which I believe a few stories have done) or to use one of the give away character who might as well be OC's for much screen time they had, there really aren't too many options. Among those options shown above, Akitsu just happens to be the easiest to use by far.

Oh, yes, I almost forgot, Kuno's also an option, but most don't bother tearing her from Shigi for whatever reasons... Maybe it's because of her relatively low combat capability?

 

[Seed00]

Oh, yes, I almost forgot, Kuno's also an option, but most don't bother tearing her from Shigi for whatever reasons... Maybe it's because of her relatively low combat capability?

The girl has power over sound. The many broken things you can do with sound is ridiculous. All it would take is a dedicated ashikabi and some training from hell to turn her into a miniature version of either Banshee or Canary.

Too bad no one will.

 

[Wheeljack]

Akitsu:? The only thing required for any "main character" to get her is simply find and take her in before Mikogami has the chance to.? Thus, getting her in plot wise is fairly simple.?

Well, unfortunately for Akitsu, Mikogami already picked her up and she worked alongside Yomi in trying to for Kuu. And as we've seen both Ichigo and Uzume are out of town at this time.

So you can see, unless an author wants to come up with OC's for Sekirei (which I believe a few stories have done) or to use one of the give away character who might as well be OC's for much screen time they had, there really aren't too many options.? Among those options shown above, Akitsu just happens to be the easiest to use by far.

This is true, and part of what I mentioned in an earlier post, in that "some will say 'who'?". The sekirei who will be part of Ichigo's flock have been seen at least once in the manga and anime. We also looked at the videogame as well for more characters to show up. We also want to be a bit varied in his future sekirei, so we knew from the onset that creating these girls' personalities from the ground up (those who weren't in there long) was going to be a part of it along with who is already established.

Oh, yes, I almost forgot, Kuno's also an option, but most don't bother tearing her from Shigi for whatever reasons...? Maybe it's because of her relatively low combat capability?

Haruka was a good ashikabi for her, so for some authors it's probably a reason not to break that up.

 

[kitsuneb]

Other than that, Which I leave alone because I see no reason to use barely known sekirei, anu ideas when Chapter two comes out.

 

[Coelacanth]

Why does all of this sound so much like Seikon no Qwaser?

 

[Wheeljack]

Other than that, Which I leave alone because I see no reason to use barely known sekirei, anu ideas when Chapter two comes out.

We have chapter two completely outlined and are in the process of filling it in. I'd say we're about 40-50% done. As to a timetable, I'd like to think relatively sometime sooner or later, though the holidays and getting things ready for RL stuff does put a damper on that.

 

[Seed00]

Why does all of this sound so much like Seikon no Qwaser?

Dude, if this was Seikon no Qwaser, Minato would be taking names and grabbing the boobies of every sekirei he came across regardless of Miya smacking him on the head for indecency. He'd also have all the soma (that liquidy thing Sasha takes from the women's boobs he sucks on).

Heck, the sekirei would do it willingly for Sasha if he was an ashikabi,

 

[Tsuki_CB]

Relatively sooner or later? Isn't that like saying you'll get there eventually.

 

[Wheeljack]

Relatively sooner or later? Isn't that like saying you'll get there eventually.

I'm personally hoping for after Christmas or around New Years, as I'll have time off and not be hampered by Christmas shopping, some birthdays and then Christmas and the aftermath as well. This also depends on Ghostface's schedule too.

 

[Ghostface]

Who sadly has quite a few people bugging the shit outta him.

I miss sleep, but that money is more important at the moment.

Oh well, here's hoping to a finish by Christmas.

 

[Tsuki_CB]

Oh sorry I wasn't bugging you about the update time I was just pointing out how silly using a phrase like relatively sooner or later was.