Ranma ½ Void 5

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Matdeception

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inverted helix said:
Matdeception said:
To further explain, the fic I'm talking about where only 1 knows about him being immune is unreleased. Just to put that out that, so don't expect one of my released stories to be that fic in question.

The one I'm talking about was the one I original started to opposite Void, only I originally decided not to make him a mutant. Given that the idea has seen no work at all, I reworked it entirely. It's less 'angry' in general, Ranma is living/working for the Brotherhood, and it's more a friendship of those guys that evolves the angry kids there into something slightly similar to the Nabiki-hood in TUA, only it'll obviously become the Ranma-hood.
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You have so many Ranma/Evo crossovers I have no idea how you can keep all the stories straight and separate.
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Eh, keeping them separate is easy. Never had problems with mixing or matching. I write a lot of them as a means to exercise the muse on other fics. For instance, Running the Shadows (Unreleased) got my muse working for Nova and even Void recently. Contracts (unreleased) got my muse working for Void and Letters (Unreleased) got my muse going on certain characters, letting me play with their potential reactions and see how things spiraled out of control from there.

I'm not saying I'll ever release those fics either. Maybe when I'm heavily into them, like 7 -10 chapters done, or even finished.

Not a proponent of the sentient Jusenkyo theory, but if it is it's not evil. As mentioned above the change didn't kill Ryoga, and you never see Ranma change back but one time during the cat's tongue arc. And that one time he was fighting above a hot bath so falling in was a likely result.

The actuality of this is simply that the story is a comedy, so seeing things like a decapitated Ryoga or Ranma rolling around on the floor screaming in agony aren't going to happen. The changes just happened at the right moment and manner to be funny.
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Eh, fine. Ranma is a special case when it comes to Jusenkyo, and how the magic of Jusendo interacts with him. Ryoga, when he shows up, wouldn't cause the same problems for Storm because he quite simply is missing something that is a pivotal plot point for later. Ryoga, btw, couldn't be happier to be 'missing' that special something, well... when he finds out what it is.
 
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CatOnFire

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Matdeception said:
Not a proponent of the sentient Jusenkyo theory, but if it is it's not evil. As mentioned above the change didn't kill Ryoga, and you never see Ranma change back but one time during the cat's tongue arc. And that one time he was fighting above a hot bath so falling in was a likely result.

The actuality of this is simply that the story is a comedy, so seeing things like a decapitated Ryoga or Ranma rolling around on the floor screaming in agony aren't going to happen. The changes just happened at the right moment and manner to be funny.
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Eh, fine. Ranma is a special case when it comes to Jusenkyo, and how the magic of Jusendo interacts with him. Ryoga, when he shows up, wouldn't cause the same problems for Storm because he quite simply is missing something that is a pivotal plot point for later. Ryoga, btw, couldn't be happier to be 'missing' that special something, well... when he finds out what it is.
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Well Ranma did destroy Jusenkyo and probably made himself known to Jusendo by bathing in it's waters when he revived Akane.
 
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Drawde

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Sorry, I wasn't commenting on the story there. Just the general part of the discussion. I have a habit of forgetting just what a thread is about when I enter a discussion.
 
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Matdeception

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Drawde said:
Sorry, I wasn't commenting on the story there.á Just the general part of the discussion.á I have a habit of forgetting just what a thread is about when I enter a discussion.
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Eh, no reason to apologize. It's just hard to find a defense against some rather justified concerns, like Jusenkyo and sentience, with out revealing later plot points and thus ruining the surprise/experience for the readers.
 
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Matdeception

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First, forgive the double post.

Second: Finished revision.

Added the following: The obligatory 'Mouse the Cat Overlord' disclaimer has been added.

Foreshadowing has been added.

Credits have been added.

Several spelling/grammar issues have been seen too.

Altered Taryn's 'body armor' description to make a little more sense.

Several notes at the bottom concerning the foreshadowing segments and written Dialogue and what it means in regard to truth.

Added a line or two of thought description near the end concerning how Ranma comes to his conclusion.

That's it, if no one else can point out a mistake I'll add this to my Wednesday update. Thanks again folks.
 
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foesjoe

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Do you want me to go over it again and correct any mistakes I find?
 
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foesjoe

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You have mail. :p

Also, what idea I gave you are you talking about in the OP?
 
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Matdeception

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foesjoe said:
You have mail. :p

Also, what idea I gave you are you talking about in the OP?
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That would be telling :p

Holy crap Joe! I had to correct a mistake you made when altering/fixing the chapter.

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Foesjoe 29018349823

I'm catching up!
 
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