A Sailor Moon fic idea...

Fatuous One

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#27
No, no... There is never enough length in chapters when you run across a good fic. However, what there IS too much of is endless details. It's like Tolken honestly, while I love Lord of the Rings, I DON'T want to spend two and half pages reading about how a specific part of some stupid forest areas looks like.
 

Israfel

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#28
No, no... There is never enough length in chapters when you run across a good fic. However, what there IS too much of is endless details. It's like Tolken honestly, while I love Lord of the Rings, I DON'T want to spend two and half pages reading about how a specific part of some stupid forest areas looks like.
Hey if there's a chapter to be posted then I'm not gonna complain about how long it is, the longer the better to me, the only fic I can remember thinking that the chapters were just too damn long was this one Eva one I read, I forget the title but I've got the link if you want it, it had some crazy amount like 100,000 words per chapter, and there were a lot of chapters, but of cours ethe longest fic I've ever seen period has probably got to be that infamous Ah My Goddess fic 'Trial By Tenderness' which was the second fic I had ever read.

Find the fic I mentioned here.
 

GenocideHeart

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#29
Israfel said:
No, no... There is never enough length in chapters when you run across a good fic. However, what there IS too much of is endless details. It's like Tolken honestly, while I love Lord of the Rings, I DON'T want to spend two and half pages reading about how a specific part of some stupid forest areas looks like.
Hey if there's a chapter to be posted then I'm not gonna complain about how long it is, the longer the better to me, the only fic I can remember thinking that the chapters were just too damn long was this one Eva one I read, I forget the title but I've got the link if you want it, it had some crazy amount like 100,000 words per chapter, and there were a lot of chapters, but of cours ethe longest fic I've ever seen period has probably got to be that infamous Ah My Goddess fic 'Trial By Tenderness' which was the second fic I had ever read.

Find the fic I mentioned here.
One of the chapters from the fic Fatuous linked me to looked to be about 200,000 words long. That's 'too fucking long' for me. <_<
 

Israfel

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#30
Ahh...ouch. Ya that is pretty damn long, especially for a lemon, I just find it hard to read through something like that because I mean I've got pretty good stamina but even I can't stay aroused for long enough to slog my through that entire thing. And after the arousals gone then I usually lose any flare I have for reading lemons for awhile, it just gets boring then.
 

GenocideHeart

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#31
Israfel said:
Ahh...ouch. Ya that is pretty damn long, especially for a lemon, I just find it hard to read through something like that because I mean I've got pretty good stamina but even I can't stay aroused for long enough to slog my through that entire thing. And after the arousals gone then I usually lose any flare I have for reading lemons for awhile, it just gets boring then.
There was too little lemon and too much tedious text, though. I don't mind lemon with actual story to present it, but the story has to be relatively short, or it's just going to feel like a Wall Of Text ?.
 

Israfel

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#32
Yah then it becomes about as much of a lemon as the original Mezzo Forte was a hentai, as in it had some hentai/lemon scenes but it was mostly just normal story.
 

GenocideHeart

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#33
Israfel said:
Yah then it becomes about as much of a lemon as the original Mezzo Forte was a hentai, as in it had some hentai/lemon scenes but it was mostly just normal story.
Mezzo Forte at least wasn't overly boring by being too descriptive. -_-
 

Israfel

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#34
Kind of hard for a show to be too descriptive considering they technically don't have to describe anything because you can see it all for yourself.
 

GenocideHeart

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#35
Israfel said:
Kind of hard for a show to be too descriptive considering they technically don't have to describe anything because you can see it all for yourself.
Heh. Point conceded.
 

GenocideHeart

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#36
Sooo... is anyone considering writing the fic idea in my topic starter message? :rolleyes:
 

Fatuous One

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#37
We could only hope... it's an extra bit of pity since good SM fanfiction (that isn't crossed over) is extremely lacking...

Now, what we need to do is think of some really good writer that has knowledge of Sailor Moon and relentlessly badger them. ^_^;;
 
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