Naruto Accidental World Tour

Antimatter

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#26
fenixzero said:
The Hiraishin working similiar to the way 'jumping' works (from Jumper), would be awesome.

For one that movie/book provides, what I think to be, an awesome counter for the Hiraishin. Tangle him up in an electrified cable, and then anchor the cable to the ground. He won't be able to 'jump' the whole world, so hes stuck.

For the person that asked about Naruto jumping into a river and then out?

In the movie Jumper, when you jumped out of water, you bring some of it back with you. the amount depends on the amount of power you put in your jump.
I'm not sure I'd want it to work just like jumper, however, the way the jumper foght would be neat.

Oddly, Jumper is one of those causes were the movie is next to nothing like the books it was based on.
 
#27
That's not necessarily a bad thing as people tend to set up unreal expectations of a movie when they read the book and then are disappointed.

Case-in-point:

Goblet of Fire was my favorite of the entire HP Series, but the movie kind of blew...
 

Antimatter

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#28
mandalorianjedi said:
That's not necessarily a bad thing as people tend to set up unreal expectations of a movie when they read the book and then are disappointed.

Case-in-point:

Goblet of Fire was my favorite of the entire HP Series, but the movie kind of blew...
It's worse than that.

In the book there is no jumper vs palladin war, heck, the main character is the only known jumper period. His childhood friend/girlfriend in the movies doesn't even know him till they meet as adults in the book, and instead of being some sort of richboy theft/playboy, the guy is a secret agent of sorts, recruited once the government finds out he can jump.

The movie might as well be considered an original story which barrowed the books characters.
 

Sect

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#29
Antimatter said:
mandalorianjedi said:
That's not necessarily a bad thing as people tend to set up unreal expectations of a movie when they read the book and then are disappointed.

Case-in-point:

Goblet of Fire was my favorite of the entire HP Series, but the movie kind of blew...
It's worse than that.

In the book there is no jumper vs palladin war, heck, the main character is the only known jumper period. His childhood friend/girlfriend in the movies doesn't even know him till they meet as adults in the book, and instead of being some sort of richboy theft/playboy, the guy is a secret agent of sorts, recruited once the government finds out he can jump.

The movie might as well be considered an original story which barrowed the books characters.
From what I hear, the author is actually going to incorporate some of the things from the movie into his next book, so... :huh.:

EDITED TO MAKE MORE SENSE
 

Luthorne

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#30
Legendary Legacy said:
@rianifitria:? Not familiar with Make a Wish.
'Make a Wish' is a Harry Potter fanfic where Harry takes off on vacation, utilizing a spell to make it hard for people to identify him, and goes by the name Mr. Black. Due to a huge series of unlikely coincidences, combined with getting the right spells/objects at the right time, making the right contacts, and misunderstood comments, he winds up having the reputation of 'Mr. Black' spiral out of control, people believing him to be a brutally efficient secret agent, a former dark lord, an ancient force of destruction, and eventually Death himself, as he goes around the worlds and solves problems, often by accident...

It's pretty good. :sisi:

At any rate, I look forward to seeing the snippets.

Also, I know nothing about Jumpers in either book or movie format, and had not actually heard of it prior to now, so. I shall not comment on it.
 

Sect

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#31
Hn...

'Well, I think that's enough for today,' Rin decided, wiping the sweat off of her brow with the handerchief she had been wearing. She then looked around the common room of her small apartment, located in the southern part of Fire, and sighed. "Mou, I didn't realize how much I've collected over the years!" she exclaimed, walking around boxes of nicknacks, carrying cleaning supplies to the broom closet. As she placed the cleaners back on the shelves, she paused as her hand ran across a strange object. Frowning, she reached for the item, and pulled out a strange three pronged kunai, with a seal on the hilt. Instantly, her mood went south.

"Sensei..." she muttered quietly, running her thumb across the edge of the weapon. She remembered how, nearly fifteen years ago, the newly christened Yondaime Hokage had given her one of his famous kunai as a parting gift, when she had withdrawn from the life of a ninja. Not even a year later, the Kyuubi had attacked, resulting in the final member of Team Minato losing his life. Sure, she and (at least as far as she knows) Kakashi were still alive, but Kakashi was no longer the same after gaining the Uchiha eye, and the war against Iwa had broken Rin's will.

Lost in memory lane, the former medic nin blinked when she found herself in her bathroom, still holding the kunai. "Oh well," she said aloud, "while I'm here, I might as well freshen up." Undressing, she caught her reflection in the mirror. Smiling, she posed in front of the mirror: she cut a damn good figure despite nearing her thirties, and being inactive as a ninja for a decade and a half. Giggling, she began filling her small furo, and rinsed and washed herself outside of it. After that, she gingerly stepped into the steaming tub, and lowered herself so that the water came above her breasts.

Still holding the kunai, she twirled it in her fingers, marveling at the design and purpose of the unconventional looking weapon. The key to her sensei's greatest technique, and twenty years later, no one else had been able to perform it. "I wonder... will anyone be able to use the Hiraishin, or is it just lost forever...?" Rin wondered. Shrugging, she sat the kunai down, and sank lower into the tub, intent on relaxing.

A sudden flux of chakra, noticable even to those without Rin's acute sensory abilities, caused her to sit upright in the bath, just in time to see a orange blur hurtle out of the air into her bath. Water exploded everywhere, and Rin gasped in surprise as the blur landed on top of her. Blinking the water out of her eyes, the woman stared as the blonde head that pressed firmly into her breasts. Then, slowly, two orange clad arms drew out of the water to find purchase on a stable surface, so that the head could lean back to reveal two large, expressive blue eyes, tanned skin, and thin whisker lines.

Unfortunately, the aforementioned hands had found their purchase on the very same breasts the head was smashed up against, thus, it was unsurprising what Rin's first response was.

"PERVERT!" and the sharp crack of skin hitting skin reverberated through the bathroom.
 
#32
WIN!

You know... That could be a common theme through out the fic. Naruto goes out and meets all these girls on his "Lost in the Elemental Countries because I haven't Master Hiraishin Yet" trip, and upon each first encounter he gets slapped because he was groping them.

Of course that also merits a trip to the Hokage Tower for the Holy Grail of female busts... That's right! The Godaime Hokage, Tsunade. Jiraiya would have no choice but to :hail: !
 
#34
Uzumaki Naruto, the Groper Nin.

A pervert reputation that surpasses Jiraiya, mixed with the fact that he can use Hiraishin (note I said use not use effectively), brings a whole new meaning to "Flash Bang". :snigger:

Uzumaki Naruto, the "Perv of Pervs"
 

Darmani

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#35
I'm really curious how other parts of the world are envisioned.

Fire Country as a whole

The Stone lands, the Cloud lands and moreon


Like writing an rpg adventure section.

In Stone Country
*There is a man who walks over the earth always barefoot with feet so hard at the sole that resist being cut like tough leather. He bares on his back the ferocious visage of a shrine guardian over a cylindrical case, though with his other traveller's gear and slightly fuzzy head and a layer of dirt distract people. He is of the legends of the stone country with talents at awareness, with senses sharp. He sees through the earth, can smell a person's history, hear thier moods, and tastes. He was once the personal guardian and chief of the Lord of his domain with a talent at spotting poisons. And now he walks to survey and study and know all there is.
*Earth based ninja have bloodlines based off the mole with some of them fearing sunlight. The clan is becoming marginalized as mobile and individualized military is used rather than mere fortifications.
*The protectors of the Earth Daimyo are chosen from the topmost of the ninja and others talented schools and arts. Iwao hasn't been taken over in a single invasion and the line remains, in their people's line the purest.
My ideas on Cloud Country (scroll down)
Out at a cove,
*Naruto finds the rotted remenants of a box, some strange candles and a next of rats at some hanging peices of cloth before a rack. The box a clock, the candles foreign and perfurmed, and the cloth the last of an expensive dress, the Fourth used this cove often but was preparing it to be the site of his anniversary. Its fallen into disrepair in the last decade and so
*Is a den of pirates harriers and protectors of the empire. And wouldn't you know it one of the leaders, a guy with many years grizzled as Sam Elliot with one arm seems to find something funny about Naruto's appearance
*is empty, there has to be something, but little does Naruto note the sinking sun and the approach of the tide, One swept out he will join the "secreted to safety" individuals pulled out onto the reefes who's bones are at the base
 

Meinos Kaen

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#36
Hmmm...

Sorry, but I have to disapprove of the last snippet because of the amount of Naru. :sisi:
 
#37
A thought that came to me as I was falling asleep.

What if the Fourth in his travels met some shinobi and kunoichi and started training them or was trained by them, giving them the old Hirashin seal or kunai so he could return quickly and continue their education. What if we have Naruto start meeting these people and actually getting some real training in instead of Kishimoron's bastardized time skip version.
 
#38
I'm sure that could be worked in, but if that happened everywhere it would get old fast. That is a great idea. Training in some places, mischievioius hijinks in others, and a growing reputation as a Mega Perv that would put Jiraiya to shame and it's not even on purpose! Not to mention he's bound to eventually gain some love struck fangirls. Could you imagine his reception once he returns to Konoha after FINALLY meeting back up with Jiraiya?
 

DhampyrX2

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#39
I'm just thinking of Rin's reaction when Naruto finally gets home. Something along the lines of "Jiraiya no hentai! You made sensei's son a pervert and he didn't even have the decency to finish the job!"
 
#40
DhampyrX2 said:
I'm just thinking of Rin's reaction when Naruto finally gets home. Something along the lines of "Jiraiya no hentai! You made sensei's son a pervert and he didn't even have the decency to finish the job!"
:blink: :snigger: :rofl:
 

Darmani

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#41
Meinos Kaen said:
Hmmm...

Sorry, but I have to disapprove of the last snippet because of the amount of Naru. :sisi:
What do you mean?
 

BakaNeko

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#42
Meinos Kaen said:
Hmmm...

Sorry, but I have to disapprove of the last snippet because of the amount of Naru. :sisi:
I don't think thats called for, a "Naru" would have jumped to an assumption; plauged with doubts and what not. Don't forget the irrational anger and the lack of a "measured response".

There's barely enough of Sect's snippet to make such a damning character sterotype.

@Darmani: Meinos, I assume is referring to the Tsundere type of anime character. More specifically Naru Narusegawa from Love Hina, who is an example of Ken Akamatsu's take on a tsundere. One of the more "extreme" examples in recent anime. Her blasting-off her love-interest; a comedic effect, is most oft-used device in fanfiction to justify a change of character.

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