So in all of the time that I've been reading fan fics I've seen the ones that have made me impatiently wait for an update, the ones that I could read if I'm in the mood and the ones that make me go 'What the Hell is this?' I'm now looking for something new to read and was wondering if there were any out there where Bruce Wayne raises Peter Parker that were written well?
I myself have written one and if I might say so...it sucked so bad. I think that I had a decent idea, but I am unable to write something that I think is good. This is it below.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6120489/1/Brotherhood
Please feel free to share thoughts on how I could have made it better or where I could have changed something. I'm in the mood to write for it again, but I don't want to leave it as it is due to there being something off about it in my mind.
Thank you in advance TFF.
I myself have written one and if I might say so...it sucked so bad. I think that I had a decent idea, but I am unable to write something that I think is good. This is it below.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6120489/1/Brotherhood
Please feel free to share thoughts on how I could have made it better or where I could have changed something. I'm in the mood to write for it again, but I don't want to leave it as it is due to there being something off about it in my mind.
Thank you in advance TFF.