This is where Fosfor resides.
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Granted, he hardly ever posts there, but he hardly ever posts anywhere.
As for the fic, the destruction of Konoha should have been the point when Naruto gained belief that he could bring peace, not when he started burning out. He showed his power, surpassed his mentor, and Konoha had no casualties. His defeat of Pein required no murder on naruto's part. Pein committed suicide.
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Granted, he hardly ever posts there, but he hardly ever posts anywhere.
As for the fic, the destruction of Konoha should have been the point when Naruto gained belief that he could bring peace, not when he started burning out. He showed his power, surpassed his mentor, and Konoha had no casualties. His defeat of Pein required no murder on naruto's part. Pein committed suicide.