Hmm...looking back over this fic, it looks pretty rubbish, doesn't it? In retrospect I should try coming up with a plot before slamming randomly on a keyboard. But in the intrest of giving lord raa's idea it's due, I'd like to take another stab at this from the top.
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Konno Mitsune barely contained her screams of frustration as she set the phone receiver down. Her parents had demanded that she attend yet another omiai. Even before she had arrived at Hinata-sou and granny HinaÆs intervention several years ago, her parents had repeatedly dropped hints that they were interested in seeing their daughter finally ôsettle down.ö Her family eased on their needling ever-so-slightly after she moved to the dorms, but recently they had been dropping constant hints about ôher future,ö and ôcontinuing the Konno Household.ö
Kitsune didnÆt hate her parents. Heck, in a weird way she could kind of understand them. Both her mother and father had married each other over business arrangements, and while neither of them were unhappy in the strictest sense of the word, their relationship had always been plagued by ômaybes,ö and ôwhat ifs.ö Determined that their children not end up wallowing in doubt, they tried to marry off their children to people that they thought they would love.
Unfortunately love is blind and so were KisuneÆs parents. Rather than setting their only daughter up with-say- a slightly older, rich, deep, and attractive man; they paired her up with young, impressionable artsy types who had the emotional depth of dishwater and a net worth that compared unfavorably with that of a beggar.
To be fair, there had been one exception. Unfortunately thatàcandidate had other less surmountable issues. She was almost grateful of the suggestion in a weird way, as it allowed her to move into the dorms and start her life again. While she would never tell anyone at Hinata about her reason for coming to stay at the dorms she realized that she might have to start explaining very soon.
ôKitsune, is something wrong?ö came the only masculine-sounding voice (well, other than MotokoÆs at times) in the dorms.
ôYeah, you sounded really frustrated just now.ö added her oldest friend. Mitsune tensed up as she realized she might have to start explaining things sooner than anticipated.
ôIt wasnÆt very important. I have to get ready though.ö Kitsune responded as curtly as possible. All the while she inched slowly towards the hallway as she tried to break away from the conversation.
ôFor your omiai?ö Keitaro blurted out before any sort of internal censor could stop him.
MitsuneÆs eye twitched slightly. ôExactly how much of that did you guys hear?ö her voice squeaked. Cracks began appearing in the foxÆs normally inscrutable demeanor.
ôAlmost all of it.ö Naru mumbled nervously. Despite living together for several years, the younger girl had only found out bits and pieces of her friends life before coming to the dorms. She knew that her friend guarded her past tenaciously, and seeing it dragged out into the open like this must be excruciating.
ôIs there anything that we can do?ö Keitaro offered, not entirely sure of what he could do. ôWeÆre here to help!ö
ôHeÆs right, Kitsune. Besides, how bad could it be?ö Naru added.
At that moment, Kitsune wished that she could introduce her friend to some of her previous partners, perhaps one of the many self-styled ôartisteÆsö that wanted her to model for a completely tasteful nude portrait?
ôNaru, youÆve probably scraped things off your shoe that would make better husbands than those section-eights.ö
ôOff my shoe huh? You mean like Keitaro?ö Naru chuckled, pointing at her fellow ronin.
ôHey!ö
ôYou were thinking it too! Admit it!ö
ôThat has nothing to- Kitsune?ö the bespectacled boyÆs body froze as he met his friendÆs gaze.
The part-timer rested her head on her chin, staring straight into his eyes. Slowly her gaze shifted as she analyzed every inch of the young man like a butcher sizing up a slab of meat. Satisfied with the front, she walked around him, studying him from every angle. After walking in a full circle around her prey, she licked her lips and grinned.
ôThatÆs not a bad idea, actually.ö
Snaking an arm around KeitaroÆs she began pulling the ronin towards her room.
ôCome to think of it, there is something you can do for me.ö She cooed in as sultry a voice as possible.
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And that's all I've got at the moment. I figure I should spend some time hammering out the plot before I try to go any further.